neonat wrote:

Shifted the spacing of 00:30:790 (3,4,5) -

1. i don't quite like the way you use whistles (speaking of advanced hard and insane) it seems like you're using them to complement claps so it's like your hitsounding had no whistles actually, something like kisses did is way better (you can merge your current clap and whistle in just one file so that whistles would actually had some purpose
2. the diff naming is kinda weird, normal should be renamed to easy and advanced to normal, there's no reason to keep the current naming as the diffs fit perfectly within the usual labeling

1. something i don't like about this diff is that your visual design is sometimes too inconsistent, with that i mean the objects look sometimes too close from each other and sometimes too far despite music being quite consistent in that regard, some examples would be
2. 01:03:886 (1,2,3) - i don't really get why 01:04:273 (2) - is so close to 01:03:886 (1) - , since you're following vocals, you would notice that all of these three beats are quite equal in terms of intensity so i would expect them to be more equally spaced (visually speaking) it's kinda problematic when you compare it with stuff like 01:06:983 (1,2,3) - which is representing the same thing
3. 00:39:112 (2,3,4) - compared to 00:37:564 (1,2,3) - the spacing on the first one looks forced, just look how 00:37:564 (1,2,3) - groups all of these three objects in just one pattern whereas on 00:39:112 (2,3,4) - circles are divided from the slider, also shouldn't the nc be on 00:39:112 - instead?
4. the diff looks decent but i feel it could be easily improved by simply paying more attention to the way you arrange your objects, i think you shouldn't rely that much on blankets because they sometimes make the placements too forced in my opinion

1. 00:16:661 (3) - 00:30:209 (2) - these kind of shapes could look better if you move red anchors more to the center and make the lines from white to red anchors parallel
2. 00:37:951 (3) - 00:39:499 (3) - 00:44:144 (3) - 00:45:693 (3) - even though this is a calm section, i would recommend to unstack these so it emphasizes the guitar

1. 00:56:532 (2) - 00:58:080 (5) - could really use more dense rhythms, 1/2 would work just fine

Kagetsu wrote:

[General]

1. i don't quite like the way you use whistles (speaking of advanced hard and insane) it seems like you're using them to complement claps so it's like your hitsounding had no whistles actually, something like kisses did is way better (you can merge your current clap and whistle in just one file so that whistles would actually had some purpose
   
   I think that it is a matter of each person's taste.If you ask me,I find it cool because it's suitable with the clap and they combine a nice audible impact.Some, like you and others, may find it useless or as you say, just ''to complement claps'' but in the end of the day, whistle doesn't exist just for variety?So yeah, I won't go into this whole procedure that you suggested when there's isn't any serious reason to actually change something, it's just pointless.
   
   
2. the diff naming is kinda weird, normal should be renamed to easy and advanced to normal, there's no reason to keep the current naming as the diffs fit perfectly within the usual labeling

I hope that we can finally close this subject definitively about the difficulty names, half of the mods had this type of opinion and the others the opposite.I mean like, wtf people.

[Fondness]

1. something i don't like about this diff is that your visual design is sometimes too inconsistent, with that i mean the objects look sometimes too close from each other and sometimes too far despite music being quite consistent in that regard, some examples would be
2. 01:03:886 (1,2,3) - i don't really get why 01:04:273 (2) - is so close to 01:03:886 (1) - , since you're following vocals, you would notice that all of these three beats are quite equal in terms of intensity so i would expect them to be more equally spaced (visually speaking) it's kinda problematic when you compare it with stuff like 01:06:983 (1,2,3) - which is representing the same thing
   
   I don't want to map consistent spacings on these patterns simply because each vocal syllable has its own different impact in these parts of the song.True, they may have the same intensity but I want to emphasize the vowels on every third slider, which they are always more lively and stronger than the others.I don't care about the beats or the snares on these parts simply because my intention is to map only the vocals.Both of our opinions are acceptable so yeah, end of story. Btw i readjusted the spacing of these better, they were too close 01:06:983 (1,2,3) - .
   
   
   
3. 00:39:112 (2,3,4) - compared to 00:37:564 (1,2,3) - the spacing on the first one looks forced, just look how 00:37:564 (1,2,3) - groups all of these three objects in just one pattern whereas on 00:39:112 (2,3,4) - circles are divided from the slider, also shouldn't the nc be on 00:39:112 - instead?
   
   I space them out like this for the strong vocals , is spacing variety so weird? But true, NCing was weird in this part of the song, reworked
   
   
4. the diff looks decent but i feel it could be easily improved by simply paying more attention to the way you arrange your objects, i think you shouldn't rely that much on blankets because they sometimes make the placements too forced in my opinion It's my style

[Ky's Advanced]

1. 00:56:532 (2) - 00:58:080 (5) - could really use more dense rhythms, 1/2 would work just fine
   This is subjective, it's already fine in the way it is.The player will need some breaks to rest a bit from the previous continuous rhythm.

good luck

Kagetsu wrote:

[General]

1. i don't quite like the way you use whistles (speaking of advanced hard and insane) it seems like you're using them to complement claps so it's like your hitsounding had no whistles actually, something like kisses did is way better (you can merge your current clap and whistle in just one file so that whistles would actually had some purpose
   if you listen closely to the music, the whistle hitsound is present. for example, especially here 00:17:822. sure they dont really add emphasis or whatever, but its nice to have some variety. on the other hand, Kisses's diff uses whistles for vocals without claps or finishes, which is completely different from the type of hitsounding used in the other diffs (or at least mine xd).
   
   [Yahuri's Hard]
   
   1. 00:16:661 (3) - 00:30:209 (2) - these kind of shapes could look better if you move red anchors more to the center and make the lines from white to red anchors parallel if you rotate these shapes -5 and -10 degrees, you will see that the white-red anchor lines are parallel (though there are minor pixel differences, which i have fixed now)
   2. 00:37:951 (3) - 00:39:499 (3) - 00:44:144 (3) - 00:45:693 (3) - even though this is a calm section, i would recommend to unstack these so it emphasizes the guitar applied, here as well 00:42:209 (1)

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neonat wrote:

Fondness

01:04:661 (3) - try to give it a relatively similar distance from the 2nd slider like what you did at 00:55:370 (3) and 01:07:757 (3) - it's currently just 1.48x but could be somewhere around 1.9x like those 2 others, something like:

Uta wrote:

grats! hope will qualified soon

Kyle Y wrote:

oh..... I suddenly saw this song being bubbled. congrat Nikakis and happy new year.

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Edit:
When I saw my diff once, I just know 00:43:757 - has been changed into a weird way, which is totally different from my mapping style.
So, could I make a change for it without rhythm change? I think kyle's style should looks like:

Ssorry for sudden come back.

this

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I remember Kyle hates ugly overlapping.

1. 00:15:693 (6) - 6 not being in line with 4 and 5 triggers me a lot
2. 00:25:951 (3,4) - the blanket can be better than the current one
3. 00:35:435 (4,5,6) - the strong beat 5 has little spacing while the weak beat 6 has a big jump, that doesn't represent the song well

1. 00:37:177 (5,1) - try 1,60 spacing like in 00:25:177 (1) - etc
2. 00:43:370 (4,1) - the stack leniency breaks your spacing a bit

1. 00:24:790 (1,2) - I didn't understand your NCs, In the part before 00:24:790 (1,2) - you're following the vocals at every nc, but in 00:24:790 (1,2) - I don't get it
2. 00:43:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you forgot a nc here right? nvm why all the part after that is following 2 stanzas instead of 1 as before?
   

1. OD3 is more balanced with the rest, also normal is only od 4 lol

Natsu wrote:

top

1. 00:15:693 (6) - 6 not being in line with 4 and 5 triggers me a lot It triggered me too.
2. 00:25:951 (3,4) - the blanket can be better than the current one Ok, I spaced it out a bit.
3. 00:35:435 (4,5,6) - the strong beat 5 has little spacing while the weak beat 6 has a big jump, that doesn't represent the song well Ok,
   I hope it's better now

Normal

1. 00:24:790 (1,2) - I didn't understand your NCs, In the part before 00:24:790 (1,2) - you're following the vocals at every nc, but in 00:24:790 (1,2) - I don't get it Fixed
2. 00:43:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you forgot a nc here right? nvm why all the part after that is following 2 stanzas instead of 1 as before? Fixed

easy

1. OD3 is more balanced with the rest, also normal is only od 4 lol Fixed

appleeaterx wrote:

gratz!!!!

Kyle Y wrote:

I am a poor mapper
I can rank a guest diff
Poor mapper can rank a guest diff, valid.

congratulations, Nikakis.
thanks you for allowing me to join this mapset.