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Dualtrax - 2003 Orion Keygen tune

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Shinsekai yuri
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Jonis221
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BPM: 187,5
Offset: 976
Octoling
hello, random mod!
red = you really have to fix it
blue = suggestion
black = not really sure

normal

- ar6 seems kinda high compared to the OD, CS and HP, you should lower it to 5 or 4.5
- you should add more tags, like "Akarin" "Yuri Yuri" because of the bg
- it seems you have trouble with spacing, consider using the distance snap option next time, it's really useful for easier diffs
- the first kiai 00:06:100 to 00:16:340 seems out of place, it's the beginning of the song and when the kiai ends, the song intensity is still high
- 00:06:740 to 00:08:340 you didnt map this, even though there are clearly sounds


insane

- 00:04:740 (5) - this note shouldn't be here, remove it
- 00:06:580 (3) - this slider doesn't look really good, make it a square
- 00:37:460 (11) - ugly slider here too
- 00:39:380 (1) - same ^
- 00:47:700 (11) - ^ same
- 00:49:620 (1) - same ^
wait a minute, just realised that your map is just copy paste and rotate.. that's not how it works, sorry
copy pasting is allowed, lots of mappers do it but here you the whole map is just rotated, it is especially boring because of the spacing problems you have and because i can kind of see a start of a good map, there's a bit of geometry but then you ruin it
i see some kind of potential to this map but you still didn't get acquainted with the mapping tools, i recommend you to watch pishifat's videos if you can fully understand english
here's a link to one of his videos in which he explains how to use the editor's tools or how they work https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2k8s0gBg9yU

i hope my mod was useful, if you fix everything above, pm me, i'll come back to mod your map ;)
Topic Starter
Shinsekai yuri

9Tag wrote:

hello, random mod!
red = you really have to fix it
blue = suggestion
black = not really sure

normal

- ar6 seems kinda high compared to the OD, CS and HP, you should lower it to 5 or 4.5
- you should add more tags, like "Akarin" "Yuri Yuri" because of the bg
- it seems you have trouble with spacing, consider using the distance snap option next time, it's really useful for easier diffs
- the first kiai 00:06:100 to 00:16:340 seems out of place, it's the beginning of the song and when the kiai ends, the song intensity is still high
- 00:06:740 to 00:08:340 you didnt map this, even though there are clearly sounds


insane

- 00:04:740 (5) - this note shouldn't be here, remove it
- 00:06:580 (3) - this slider doesn't look really good, make it a square
- 00:37:460 (11) - ugly slider here too
- 00:39:380 (1) - same ^
- 00:47:700 (11) - ^ same
- 00:49:620 (1) - same ^
wait a minute, just realised that your map is just copy paste and rotate.. that's not how it works, sorry
copy pasting is allowed, lots of mappers do it but here you the whole map is just rotated, it is especially boring because of the spacing problems you have and because i can kind of see a start of a good map, there's a bit of geometry but then you ruin it
i see some kind of potential to this map but you still didn't get acquainted with the mapping tools, i recommend you to watch pishifat's videos if you can fully understand english
here's a link to one of his videos in which he explains how to use the editor's tools or how they work https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2k8s0gBg9yU

i hope my mod was useful, if you fix everything above, pm me, i'll come back to mod your map ;)
thanks for the feedback <3 , i'll try to make it better and will ask for your opinion again
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