Snowy Dream wrote:

;) Star 一个先
毕竟是小⑨ >w<
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[General]
Storyboarding 去掉letterbox

[⑨]
00:37:379 (2,3) - 上2 右2
02:40:063 (2,3) - 這裡spacing感覺有點大了 (1.0x 或 1.1x就可以了吧@.@)
03:24:905 (1) - spacing 0.0? (應該是2.0x 吧..)
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wwww 沒有其他好說的了
倒是感覺想做個GD

1. Unify the color 1 and 2 in both diff.
2. Strongly suggest to make a Taiko BG for Taiko diff.
3. Tag:mikami shiori ootsubo yuka tsuda minami ookubo rumi, these are the singer of Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu.You should add them to tag.

1. 01:21:116 (2) - The slider reverse was totally covered by the hitbrust.(01:20:326 (2) - this hitbrust)
   
   ..

   
2. 02:04:379 (6,7,1,1,1) - Don't do this please...This spacing is really sudden and it was totally broken the flow.High BPM song is really hard fit this arrangement.
3. 02:18:905 (1) - Same with previous,some hidden slider reverse here,you must fix it.
   
   ..

   

1. 00:23:326 (9) - Probably add a new combo here?Just going to make it fit the music.Since this is the beginning of this part.
2. 00:27:274 (1,2,3,4) - This is a unprefect square.Would you make it more better?
3. 00:37:537 (3) - This note is unnecessary because it doesn't have any drum/vocal to support it.Remove it please.
4. 00:42:432 (1,2,3,4) - This jump is not the comfortable during gameplay,it's probably the spacing between (2.3)- have a big different between (1.2) and (3.4)
5. 00:47:326 (1,2,3,4) - ..Still unperfect shape...
6. 01:30:905 (1) - This slowed down was a little bit sudden,I prefer using x0.6 instead of 0.5.However this was depend on you.
7. 02:59:958 (x) - I suggest using 0.75 here,because you did a x0.5 previous,the player is a little bit hard to adapt it and back to x1.0 03:02:484 - .

1. 00:00:589 (x) - This part is a bit quiet.However the spinner spun is really loud,I suggest turn down the volume to 10% here.
2. 00:04:695 (5) - Remove the finish please,I assume finish are only placed on accent point.
3. 00:06:747 - 00:08:484 (6) - ^Same.
4. 00:22:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Be honest,the C2 hitsound doesn't fit the music really well.
5. 03:08:800 (1) - Probably add a finish here because it's a strong downbeat.

1. 02:39:747 - 02:44:168 (1066) - No please,this part is much difficult than overall!Its plays really bad and sudden.
2. 02:47:326 - 02:52:379 (1137) - ^Same.

1. 00:01:379 (1~57) – I suggest you remove the finish in this part,don is really enough,big don is a bit strong and didn’t fit the music.
2. 00:25:379 (136,137,138) – dkk didn’t fit the music very well,I suggested using ddk instead.
3. 00:27:984 (154) – Probably change this to d?
4. 00:33:195 (190) - This note seems unnecessary,a bit weird during gameplay and no any vocal/drum to suppot this.
5. 00:43:142 (251) - Same as 00:27:984.
6. 01:00:590 (352,353,354,355,356,357,358) - kkddddd?
7. 01:10:063 (428,429,430,431,432) - IMO,big kat is much appropriate than big don.
8. 01:20:168 (504,505,506,507,508) - ^Same.
9. 01:36:353 (596) - Remove this note because it didn't have any vocal/drum/music to support it.
10. 02:27:116 (949,950,951,952,953,954) - This xx-xxxx pattern is really awkward!And it doesn't fit the music.
11. 02:31:537 (975) - Change this to k and then change (976)- to don.
12. 02:36:589 (1001,1002) - ^Same.
13. You better to check some 2-4 rhythm(xx-xxxx)in Kiai,something are really stand out.

kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request:

[General]

1. Unify the color 1 and 2 in both diff.
2. Strongly suggest to make a Taiko BG for Taiko diff.
3. Tag:mikami shiori ootsubo yuka tsuda minami ookubo rumi, these are the singer of Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu.You should add them to tag.

[Yuri]
Issue/unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)

1. 01:21:116 (2) - The slider reverse was totally covered by the hitbrust.(01:20:326 (2) - this hitbrust)
   
   ..

   
2. 02:04:379 (6,7,1,1,1) - Don't do this please...This spacing is really sudden and it was totally broken the flow.High BPM song is really hard fit this arrangement.
3. 02:18:905 (1) - Same with previous,some hidden slider reverse here,you must fix it.
   
   ..

   

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:23:326 (9) - Probably add a new combo here?Just going to make it fit the music.Since this is the beginning of this part.
2. 00:27:274 (1,2,3,4) - This is a unprefect square.Would you make it more better?
3. 00:37:537 (3) - This note is unnecessary because it doesn't have any drum/vocal to support it.Remove it please.
4. 00:42:432 (1,2,3,4) - This jump is not the comfortable during gameplay,it's probably the spacing between (2.3)- have a big different between (1.2) and (3.4)
5. 00:47:326 (1,2,3,4) - ..Still unperfect shape...
6. 01:30:905 (1) - This slowed down was a little bit sudden,I prefer using x0.6 instead of 0.5.However this was depend on you.
7. 02:59:958 (x) - I suggest using 0.75 here,because you did a x0.5 previous,the player is a little bit hard to adapt it and back to x1.0 03:02:484 - .

Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)

1. 00:00:589 (x) - This part is a bit quiet.However the spinner spun is really loud,I suggest turn down the volume to 10% here.
2. 00:04:695 (5) - Remove the finish please,I assume finish are only placed on accent point.
3. 00:06:747 - 00:08:484 (6) - ^Same.
4. 00:22:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Be honest,the C2 hitsound doesn't fit the music really well.
5. 03:08:800 (1) - Probably add a finish here because it's a strong downbeat.

[ Car's Taiko]
Issue/unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)

1. 02:39:747 - 02:44:168 (1066) - No please,this part is much difficult than overall!Its plays really bad and sudden.
2. 02:47:326 - 02:52:379 (1137) - ^Same.

Pattern/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:01:379 (1~57) – I suggest you remove the finish in this part,don is really enough,big don is a bit strong and didn’t fit the music.
2. 00:25:379 (136,137,138) – dkk didn’t fit the music very well,I suggested using ddk instead.
3. 00:27:984 (154) – Probably change this to d?
4. 00:33:195 (190) - This note seems unnecessary,a bit weird during gameplay and no any vocal/drum to suppot this.
5. 00:43:142 (251) - Same as 00:27:984.
6. 01:00:590 (352,353,354,355,356,357,358) - kkddddd?
7. 01:10:063 (428,429,430,431,432) - IMO,big kat is much appropriate than big don.
8. 01:20:168 (504,505,506,507,508) - ^Same.
9. 01:36:353 (596) - Remove this note because it didn't have any vocal/drum/music to support it.
10. 02:27:116 (949,950,951,952,953,954) - This xx-xxxx pattern is really awkward!And it doesn't fit the music.
11. 02:31:537 (975) - Change this to k and then change (976)- to don.
12. 02:36:589 (1001,1002) - ^Same.
13. You better to check some 2-4 rhythm(xx-xxxx)in Kiai,something are really stand out.

That's it!Good luck.

karenying wrote:

Hi baka

General
既然Yuri去掉了letterbox,Taiko也去掉吧
Taiko 的tag缺了
Taiko不來個Taiko bg嗎?可以找我要>_>
Taiko 和 Yuri 的combo colour不一樣,統一下吧

Yuri
一堆circle和slider飛來飛去我什麼也看不出了lol
其實我本來有件事想說的可是忘了orz
總之就是很好玩

對了禮物

SPOILER

1. 01:00:590 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 这里用soft-hitnormal就行了... 这个C2的一个太响 二是太闷 （其实背景音里鼓点只到01:00:905这里
2. 01:21:116 (2) - 有点挡了 reverse arrow
3. 01:23:326 (3) - 抖得有点太厉害... 考虑一下把抖得幅度降一点 当然视觉长度会变长 不过左边空地方还多 应该没问题
4. 01:30:905 (1) - 减速去了加个折返吧
5. 03:34:695 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 1和2之间的间距做成逐渐变大?

Colin Hou wrote:

[Yuri]:

1. 01:00:590 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 这里用soft-hitnormal就行了... 这个C2的一个太响 二是太闷 （其实背景音里鼓点只到01:00:905这里
2. 01:21:116 (2) - 有点挡了 reverse arrow
3. 01:23:326 (3) - 抖得有点太厉害... 考虑一下把抖得幅度降一点 当然视觉长度会变长 不过左边空地方还多 应该没问题
4. 01:30:905 (1) - 减速去了加个折返吧
5. 03:34:695 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 1和2之间的间距做成逐渐变大?

Taiko我叒爆了/

Colin Hou wrote:

seems for app, so

Bubble~ #1

Garven wrote:

[Car Taiko]
00:43:142 (250) - what. Strange spot for a grace note.
01:51:353 (689) - ^
01:56:000 (726) - Unsanpped
02:34:063 (985,986,987,988,989) - Yo sho! Wait. 5 hits? For that? -_-
03:04:379 (1176,1177,1178,1179,1180,1181,1182) - This just sounds bad.

[Yuri]
That BG...

Did some IRC modding on this.

SPOILER

06:58 <bakabaka> : :OO
07:08 <Garven> : Wait what
07:08 <Garven> : Cirno as bg?
07:09 <bakabaka> : lol
07:10 <bakabaka> : http://video1b.webshare.cc/bce70081173935-2.jpg
07:11 <Garven> : Heh
07:11 <bakabaka> : 大丈夫　 :3
07:12 <Garven> : Aaaaaaaa
07:12 <Garven> : I suck at AR 9
07:12 <bakabaka> : > <
07:12 <Garven> : 01:20:800 (1) - This repeat arrow is mostly covered by a hitburst
07:13 <bakabaka> : :O
07:14 <Garven> : 01:23:326 (3) - The end of this slider feels so much better as a normal circle instead of a repeated slider
07:15 <Garven> : 01:55:537 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really don't like the spacing here
07:15 <Garven> : 1 -> 2 is vastly different form 2 -> 3 -> 4 -> 5
07:15 <Garven> : And it's the same emphasis in the music
07:15 <Garven> : 01:57:747 (2) - Please no
07:16 <Garven> : 02:18:905 (1) - Repeat is fairly covered here too
07:16 <Garven> : not as bad, but it can be easily rearranged to avoid it
07:18 <Garven> : Holy crap I suck at this map ;_;
07:18 <Garven> : Anyway, that's the stuff that stood out to me

Garven wrote:

[Car Taiko]
00:43:142 (250) - what. Strange spot for a grace note.
01:51:353 (689) - ^
01:56:000 (726) - Unsanpped
02:34:063 (985,986,987,988,989) - Yo sho! Wait. 5 hits? For that? -_-
03:04:379 (1176,1177,1178,1179,1180,1181,1182) - This just sounds bad.

[Yuri]
That BG...

Did some IRC modding on this.

SPOILER

06:58 <bakabaka> : :OO
07:08 <Garven> : Wait what
07:08 <Garven> : Cirno as bg?
07:09 <bakabaka> : lol
07:10 <bakabaka> : http://video1b.webshare.cc/bce70081173935-2.jpg
07:11 <Garven> : Heh
07:11 <bakabaka> : 大丈夫　 :3
07:12 <Garven> : Aaaaaaaa
07:12 <Garven> : I suck at AR 9
07:12 <bakabaka> : > <
07:12 <Garven> : 01:20:800 (1) - This repeat arrow is mostly covered by a hitburst
07:13 <bakabaka> : :O
07:14 <Garven> : 01:23:326 (3) - The end of this slider feels so much better as a normal circle instead of a repeated slider
07:15 <Garven> : 01:55:537 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really don't like the spacing here
07:15 <Garven> : 1 -> 2 is vastly different form 2 -> 3 -> 4 -> 5
07:15 <Garven> : And it's the same emphasis in the music
07:15 <Garven> : 01:57:747 (2) - Please no
07:16 <Garven> : 02:18:905 (1) - Repeat is fairly covered here too
07:16 <Garven> : not as bad, but it can be easily rearranged to avoid it
07:18 <Garven> : Holy crap I suck at this map ;_;
07:18 <Garven> : Anyway, that's the stuff that stood out to me

Garven wrote:

Taiko: 01:56:000 (724) - Still unsnapped

[Yuri]
00:06:747 (2) - Kinda covered by the hitburst from 00:05:800 (5) - Think you can rearrange a little?
00:10:695 (1) - ^ from 00:09:747 (5,6) -
01:26:484 (3,5) - You might want to remake these without curving into themselves. Especially looks weird with mm sliders.

SPOILER

02:43:537 (1) - Now the BG makes much more sense beyond the parody.

Garven wrote:

Bub #1

:U

Colin Hou wrote:

bubble #2 is here.

on a vocation *_*