Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

You should convert spinner-background into a png file.
fixed

[Easy]

00:01:050 (1) - The opening was a bit hard to catch for someone that knows the song, imo. The approach circles are easy enough to read though.
I think it is fine , cuz it is a long slider , and it follow the vocal
00:25:524 (1) - This is not recommended, and the map is full of it. Don't put a strong beat on a slider-tick, especially when the tick is only 1/2 away from the actual note, since it makes people feel like, oh, the slider's over, and then they let go, and miss the tail. I had a bunch of these pointed out, but there're so many that I'll just leave it to you. If it's 1/1, it's not as bad, but I'd still not recommend it.
I think 3/4 beats make map not boring , it sound changeable and fun to play , and slider tick hitsounds are following the drums

[Normal]

00:01:208 (1,2) - What are these following?
they are following vocal
00:03:734 (1,2) - ^ They don't seem to have anything going with them...
^
00:06:261 (1,2) - ^ They're also really soft...
^
00:10:050 (3) - ^
this is following the vocal , and I use different combo row to remind people
00:11:629 (1,1) - Too short a spinner with no recovery time for Normal.
uh.. I do know it is kinda too hard for a Normal , but it really sound good and fit the song ;_; ok , I'll change this if more people complain about this
00:26:787 (4,5) - I'd recommend removing a repeat from 4 and instead making a slider with its tail on 5, because the lyric falls off the beat here.
sorry , I think it is hard to read
00:41:313 (3,4) - Two identical sliders with different number of repeats is hard to predict.
fixed

[Hard]

00:32:787 (1) - These don't look too good.
uh.. I think it is fun to play , and fit the vocal well here
00:48:261 (1,2) - Can you turn this a bit so that it doesn't look like 1 has 2 repeats and continues onto 2?
if I separate them , it is hard to play. if I add 1 more reqpest on (2) , then there is a back arrow be hidden .. so I keep this

[Yuru YurI]

Too hard, dunno what to think of this. It's structurally okay. Can you find a more experienced player to mod this? Also, you should try to make it so that this isn't above Sumisola's Insane on the listings.
it really hard to play , but I think people can tell which diff is the hardest by seeing the score

[Sumisola's Insane]

Looked okay overall, some parts were a bit messy, but that might just be because I'm not warmed up.

[Taiko]

Heh, it was fun, but I failed.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Skin:
   
   1. If you still have the editable file of the "Hits", it would be great if you place the "stars" behind the numbers. Right now, the "stars" are covering the numbers and it looks really bad.
      oh , I had missed the editable files .. anyway , I think it is fine ..
   2. "Lighting" shouldn't exceed the "192x192" size, crop some of those transparent pixels. (That shouldn't affect how it looks in-game)
      fixed
   3. You should add "spinner-osu", "spinner-spin" and "spinner-clear" too, otherwise
      fixed
2. Combo Colours: Make "Pink" a bit darker please, it blends with some parts of the video.
   uh.. I really like this pink color.. at least , someone can hlod the no-video mod when play

[Easy]

1. Seems a bit harder than the usual easiest diffs, it's alright tho.
2. 00:31:839 (3) - Definitely not a good idea, with the current BPM placing 1/2 objects would be too hard for rookies. I strongly suggest to re-arrange this pattern.
   sorry , I really want to keep this , it follow the vocal well , and startings of the sliders are all on the beats , so I think it is not too hard for newbies

[Normal]

1. 00:26:787 (4) - Due to the current BPM, I wouldn't suggest to use kick-sliders with more than 1 repeat, they would be too disorienting. Perhaps, remove some repeats and a circle instead?
   uh.. I really think a circle after a short repeat slider is more hard to play .. cuz if you hold a repeat slider for longer time , you can see the next circle's approach-circle more clearly imo
2. 00:31:839 (3) - Exactly the same here, here's an example.
   it is same suggestions , yes it is same rhyme here. so I think if I keep ^ , this is more easy to play , player may think "oh , a same slider is coming!" and I think it follow the music well , if change to a circle after slider , sounds not good as this..
3. 00:41:945 (4) - Same as before.
   sorry , I really think they fit the song very well , and not as hard as you think to play..
4. 00:52:050 (3) - The repeat sounds really odd, it should land either 1/2 beat before or later. Right now, it's not following the music properly.
   this is for some difference rhyme in this diff , I think all 1/2 beat is tooooo boring. and the music here is quiet and soft , so I think a long slider here is good
5. 01:00:261 (3) - Same issue as before, this time you could simple remove 1 repeat.
   oh , I don't know why this is issue , it follow the song well... and I promise no one would complain about this if they can easily pass this diff..
6. 01:04:682 (4) - Same here, this one could slide tho...
7. 01:07:839 (5) - This one could be fixed the same way as: 01:00:261 (3) -
8. 01:09:734 (5) - This one could slide too, the rhythm is quite intuitive here so there's no problem.
   
   I really want to keep most of those 1/2 repeat sliders , I think it fit the song very well... maybe I should fixed a few of them , but I didn't decide to do on which one.. cuz I don't think they must be all fixed ;_;

[Hard]

1. 00:21:734 (X) - Even if it's not following the vocals, you should add a circle here. Without that circle the next pattern feels quite disorienting, adding the circle would increase the flow and how smoothly the pattern runs.
   yes , fixed
2. 00:39:734 (4) - This stack killed the flow, completely. Definitely not a good spot to place a stack, I strongly suggest to unstack this and re-arrange the pattern.
   uh.. I notise that vocal here is a big stop , so I stack here to feel it , kinda broke flow.. but I think it is not confusing 0.0
3. 01:00:261 (5) - Hm you better unstack this slider, otherwise this could be considered as technically unrankable. (The arrows are covered by the previous hit-burst; this should be easily fixed)
   no , this is clearly with either custom skin or default skin http://puu.sh/6rZB
4. A bit harder than most of the "Hards" but really fun and creative, good job!

[Yuru YurI]

1. Hm, I wouldn't suggest to use AR9; 2 important reasons: The map is not enjoyable with this AR and the approach-circles are nearly invisible if you play with video on.
   ok , changed AR to 8
2. 01:02:155 (1,2) - This part doesn't play very well, the flow breaks completely here. Try [url]this[/url], it just reverses the sliders.
   kinda break the flow.. but it is fine I think
3. Everything else seems to be alright.

[Sumisola's Insane]

1. 00:54:261 (3) - This stack breaks the flow, I strongly suggest to unstack this circle.
   seems he want to keep this..
2. 01:09:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - Whoa these circles... To be honest, I find these quite disorienting and not intuitive at all. You should try to make a shape so the jumps are intuitive, try with a "star".
3. 01:14:787 (1,2,3,4) - ^
4. 01:19:839 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
   he like triangle jumps..

[Kanpayakin's Taiko Oni]

1. Kiai is not snapped
   fixed

Overall, the mapset is well constructed and it's really fun, good luck!

Gonzvlo wrote:

wcx19911123 wrote:

General
[*]Combo Colours: Make "Pink" a bit darker please, it blends with some parts of the video.
uh.. I really like this pink color.. at least , someone can hlod the no-video mod when play[/list]
That's not a good excuse... I really mean it, that "pink" blends too much with the vid, try to make it sliiiightly darker, please.
ok , seems it is really too blend with the vid if using the custom skins. I had choosed the combo colors before the skin was finished.. anyway , I turn it darker now

Easy
[*]00:31:839 (3) - Definitely not a good idea, with the current BPM placing 1/2 objects would be too hard for rookies. I strongly suggest to re-arrange this pattern.
sorry , I really want to keep this , it follow the vocal well , and startings of the sliders are all on the beats , so I think it is not too hard for newbies
I'd like to re-mark this again, it would be too hard, really. Consider it again, please.
I had found some newbies to test this diff , just a few of them point out this , not complain but noticed this.. so , ok I changed this

Hard
[*]01:00:261 (5) - Hm you better unstack this slider, otherwise this could be considered as technically unrankable. (The arrows are covered by the previous hit-burst; this should be easily fixed)
no , this is clearly with either custom skin or default skin http://puu.sh/6rZB
I was talking about the 2nd repeat-arrow :3
uh.. you mean the arrows after the first one.. yes it is hidden by the circles before , but I think people would hold this slider to see what will happen later. and I also found some people that they can just pass this diff to test it , no one miss a combo here.. for the same reason , they didn't miss at here 00:47:629 (6) , too. it also follow the more and more intensive drums well.. so I really want to keep this .. at least , I add a newcombo here , hope it is helpful..

Leaving another star here!

Lizbeth wrote:

yo~

Maybe use slider tick 2 for all diffs?
oh , I think 1 is enough , cuz the song is fast :p
I can understand that Sumisola’s diff have lower slider velocity than Yuru Yuri since is a guest diff, but slider velocity in normal lower than easy? Why?
cuz timing sections using 2.00x speed in Normal diff so I reduced the SV in it
I know song is short, but not even a tiny break for easier difficulties?? >:
I think this Easy it soft enough.. sliders are long and sliders are much more than circles , so it is not too tired to play for newbies imo
Maybe you could set preferred skin as default so elements from different skin’s themes doesn’t mix.
this skin is come from another Yuru Yuri map with a little changing , I really love this skin ;_;

Sumisola's Insane
I don’t see problem with the layout, just a few jumps pattern that threw me off while playing
01:09:734 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:19:839 (1,2,3,4,5) -
Are a bit messy in my opinion, and I didn’t know where to go while playing.
umm.. seems Sumisola want to keep this.. for me , I think it is also fine , the AR is 8 and jump is not so big.

Yuru YurI
All those jumps right at the beginning of the map? I think is a bit too shocking…
Many of the beats on blueticks in this map I think are overmapped like for example:
00:46:287 (3) -
01:04:918 (3) -
01:06:813 (5) -
There are more, but I wont point them all, you ll be able to find them.
There isn’t a sound that indicates to add a note there, and sounds and plays weird to me.. you decide if you keep it or not.
oh , this , I think a few of 1/4 beats are fun to play.. and not that boring..

00:55:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - feels overmapped, especially when you leave this space without note: 00:57:418 -
I’d suggest to remove: 00:56:155 (2,3), 00:56:787 (5,6) and 00:57:576 (2), but that is just my opinion.
oh , this part is following both drums and vocal , so it is empty in 00:57:418 - , in fact this part is not hard play :3

Normal is fine

hard
00:21:892 - useless timing section
oh , thanks to point out , removed

Easy
00:11:787 (1) - threw me off, kinda awkward to play for me, imagine for noobs … consider to readjust this please to something else.
uh.. this is following vocal clearly and not using cunfusing spacing.. just start at a red tick but I think it is fine , cuz it is a slider , not as 2 circles to play
00:25:524 (1) - I don’t like this 1 ½ length slider, why not just make it 1 or 2 beats length? Goes with the flow, and you wouldn’t have to use the slider tick as a normal hit... mmm but this is just my opinion… Same goes to all like this: 00:40:682 (1) - 00:48:261 (1,2) - 00:53:313 (1,2) - and etc ~_~
I really think all 1/2 beats are too boring to play ;_; and I'm not using the 1.5 length sliders randomly , they all follow the vocal or the drums , so I think they are fine..

That's all for now~

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi!
When you reply to my mod, I'd preciate if you explain why you didn't apply something, as that's always good to grow as a modder. And because I hate getting "no"s with no real reasons xD

[General]

1. Your pink still blends with the video at some points. You'll need something even darker.
   a bit more darker now , oh I really don't want it become more darker ;_;

[Easy]

1. 00:12:892 (2) - I'd say that the music suggest a new combo here, and I think you should after wards remove the next new combo. I know this would kind of break the symmetry in the pattern, but it works better, believe me. And you did the same at 00:33:103 (1,2,3,4), so this would be consistent.
   yeah , fixed
   Also, the change of direction to the next circle is pretty sharp. Try something like this:
   uh.. spacing now is fine I think , if changed like this , seems too hard for newbies with the big spacing
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:55:839 (1) - I think you should delete this and make 4 circles. Why? Becuase the music stops drastically there, on those beats, and it's a better way to translate those stops to the map if the circles are not connected. Keep hitsounds as they are.
   I kept this for now , I think 4 circles is a bit hard to an Easy diff.. and a slider sound nearly same as 4 circles , I think it is ok
3. Good, I'm not a big fan of sliders with 4 repetition on Easy difficulties, they can be a confusing... But I guess it's just ok.

[Normal]

1. Ehm... I don't understand why you used 0,4 as sliderspeed and duplicated it, you could just use 0,8, and change the snap divisor. It works exactly the same~
   I'm worry about the slider length will has some problem.. in fact I fixed it before but there are some unsnaped sldiers.. so I keep this for now
2. 00:03:576 - Something doesn't feel right here... I'm missing a circle somehow - if not, this feels soo blank...
   You could move (1) from it's current position to here, I think that would be more accurate in this case.
   uh.. this is following the vocal clearly.. I don't think it is odd
3. 00:06:103 - (^) ^
4. 00:10:050 (3) - This, too, would make more sense if it was at 00:09:892. I recommend not only moving it, but also turning it into a slider that finishes at 00:10:366 (where (1) is atm).
   also follow the vocal here .. I think start at 00:09:892 is more confusing..
5. 00:13:208 (1) - This is too soon after the spinner. I suggest deleting this, and to make the next pattern easier to understand so that the player can catch up (remember this is a Normal, it should be easy to catch up again), try removing 00:14:155 (3). That should work fine.
   in fact 1/1 beat after a spinner is not too hard for newbies to play as you thought , cuz the rhyme here is clearly and the note is not far away from the spinner , take it easy
6. 00:26:787 (4) - Can you remove two repetitions from this slider, and add a circle at 00:27:418? Five repetitions here can get reeeaally confusing for a relatively unexperienced player, and I mean it.
   it is a bit hard to play.. but it follow the drums very well , if change like ^ , it sound empty between the slider and circle :/
7. 00:31:839 (3) - (^) same as ^ , and I think if I keep ^ , this is not too suddenly to play , players may think "oh , the same slider comes again" , and play well here
8. 00:41:945 (4) - (^) ^
9. 01:00:261 (3) - (^) But just remove one repetition, and maybe point this upwards so it flows nicely:
   also follow the drums here , I think it is not too confusing to play
   
   SPOILER

   
10. You may keep the rest of the kick sliders, I guess some challenge isn't bad, either

[Hard]

1. Same advise for the future about slider speed!
   uh.. is it reall necessary to be fixed? the sliders may have some problem after change..
2. 00:10:050 (3) - You might want to unstack this slider so that the pattern is equal to the previous ones in this sense (circle - stacked circle - unstacked slider)
   this is a omen for 00:10:997 (1,2,3,4) , and not the same pattern is more fun to play
3. 00:27:734 (1) - Ah, can you please make this slider so that the start and end don't touch? It looks pretty ugly if they touch...
   oops , I think this slider shape is well with the vocal.. at least it is readble at all , I think it is ok
4. 00:32:787 (1) - (^) ^
5. 00:42:892 (1) - (^) ^
6. 00:47:629 (6) - What this is totally excessive. Totally. You don't need to have such a hold slider HERE in your Hard (there's one later but I totally liked that one). Make it 1/2 long, please, and remove some repetitions.
   sorry , but I really want to keep this. if use a 1/2 hold slider , it is sound empty , cuz the drums here are 1/4 beats. now it is clearly readble , not hard to play , and fit the song very well , so I don't know why it need to be changed :/
7. 01:08:471 (1) - A finish sounds good here!
   I don't like to add too many finish in this song.. if I fixed here , then there are many other objects need to add a finish , that feel kinda noisy
8. 01:18:576 (1) - And here too. ^
9. 01:26:945 (7,8,9) - A little suggestion here, you could unstack these here to give the ending of the song some more of strength, Like this:
   umm.. I afraid if someone miss combo at the end of song and get annoying.. I'd like keep this for now 0.0
   
   SPOILER

   

[Yuru YurI]

1. Why the capital I in "YurI"? Is there a reason for that?
   sure , it is an Insane diff , so I change the "i" to "I" in diff name
2. 00:02:629 (3,4) - Talking about overmapping... I actually think that you should invert these two, that is, make (3) be where (4) is and viceversa. The jump feels more natural that way, or at least that's how I felt it.
   uh.. jump here with good flow , I think it is not that hard to play 0.0
3. 00:05:155 (3,4) - (^) ^
4. 00:07:524 (3) - This jump is too sudden, and even more considering the great jump just before this between 00:07:050 (5,1). Please, try some other pattern where spacing isn't so jumpy. It would feel much better here.
   umm.. jump a little big here , but it is a slider , in fact it is not too hard to play imo
5. 00:08:787 (3,1) - The direction in which (3) points is like... Opposite to where (1) is. That doesn't play nice at all. Consider making (3) so that the structure of this pattern makes it flow better. Like pointing it to the left.
   I think flow is no problem here.. just a little odd between 00:09:418 (6,1) imo , but the whole pattern is fine
6. 00:09:418 (3) - (^) You might have to rearrange some circles after this. I had to do it in order to avoid an overlap.
   uh.. just a little jump.. it is not too hard to play as you thought :/
7. 00:13:129 (2) - This is totally unnecessary after a spinner. Please delete this circle.
   I think 1/4 beat is fun here , even if it follow nothing , anyway it is stacked and not far from the spinner , that's very easy to read and play
8. 00:13:524 (4) - This jump here is too big, and pretty senseless, too. You should give the player some reposition time after the spinner, and such jumps won't help.Try flipping vertically 00:13:524 (4,5,6,7), and see if you can place it without this jump.
   don't you think it is too boring without jumps.. I increase the spacing cuz it is after a slider , in fact it is easier to play than 00:13:524 (4,5,6,7,1) , so don't worry about this slider-circle jump
9. 00:14:392 (3) - To be consistent here, remove this too, please.
   just for fun here :/ I do know this is overmapping , but if change all 1/4 beats into 1/2 , it is boring and break the diff spread..
10. 00:16:050 (3,4) - I was soo expecting these to be in other order... (3) should be where (4) is and viceversa. Again, it's much more intuitive, I believe.
    just a little jump here 0.0 don't you feel boring if changed this..?
11. 00:16:682 (5) - If you did that last thing I mentioned, you can probably a little something to make everything flow better, and to avoid a jump:
    yes , good idea here , fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:19:839 (5,6,7) - Ok this difficulty has a problem, and it is that it doesn't flow well. Jumps cut the flow all the time, like here! I tried to press (6) before (5) because it is the most intuitive thing, and that is what you whould aim to do! Maps don't have to have weird jumps just because "fuck it, I can do it!".
    uh.. you really think here is jump? the spacing is just the same here , I think this is not jump .. orz
    Ok please rearrange this pattern. And all the unnecessary jumps out there. I won't point any of the remeining ones, just please find them by yourself.
13. 00:27:734 (6) - Please, can you make it so that the start and end don't touch (again)? I have said before how this looks ugly :/
    oh , don't you feel they looks cute , why ugly ;_;
14. 00:32:787 (6) - (^) ;_;
15. 00:42:892 (6) - (^) ;_;
16. 00:44:471 (1) - You totally should invert this slider to improve flow.
    uh.. just a little jump to follow the vocal here
17. 01:05:471 (6) - Maybe you can add a new combo here to make this more readable.
    I think it is readble easily enough..
18. The reason why ziin and me too think that this is overmapped is because you used a lot of truly unnecessary triplets, and because most of your jumps were exaggerated. Very exaggerated.
    All I can say right now is that you should recheck all this difficuly, and see what you can do to make it more pleasant to play - a good map (or insane, shall I say) is not exactly meant to be something where you "have to press zx like a freak and move your mouse as if you were a robot". As long as it is fun to play and has some difficulty, it can be a good insane.
    I don't want this diff to be easy to play..anyway this is for expert players. that's why there are many triplets and jumps , I don't know why you always complain about the last diff is too hard to play , and why not enjoy the other diffs...
    I think this map's diff spread is fine , just one annoying thing is the last diff is too hard to play because overmapping , but I don't think this is a stain.
    for normal players , this map can be an enjoyable map. for expert players , this map can be a challenge. so I don't understand why this is a bad thing..

The two other diffs are fine, perhaps it would be a good idea to fet some more taiko modders to check your taiko.

Good luck!

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi!
When you reply to my mod, I'd preciate if you explain why you didn't apply something, as that's always good to grow as a modder. And because I hate getting "no"s with no real reasons xD

[General]

1. Your pink still blends with the video at some points. You'll need something even darker.
   a bit more darker now , oh I really don't want it become more darker ;_;

[Easy]

1. 00:12:892 (2) - I'd say that the music suggest a new combo here, and I think you should after wards remove the next new combo. I know this would kind of break the symmetry in the pattern, but it works better, believe me. And you did the same at 00:33:103 (1,2,3,4), so this would be consistent.
   yeah , fixed
   Also, the change of direction to the next circle is pretty sharp. Try something like this:
   uh.. spacing now is fine I think , if changed like this , seems too hard for newbies with the big spacing
   Actually, spacing didn't change in what I suggested. Please check twice before answering something invalid.
   I don't know why it need to be changed to ↓ , any different? ok if I changed , then how about the spacing between 00:15:103 (4,1) ?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:55:839 (1) - I think you should delete this and make 4 circles. Why? Becuase the music stops drastically there, on those beats, and it's a better way to translate those stops to the map if the circles are not connected. Keep hitsounds as they are.
   I kept this for now , I think 4 circles is a bit hard to an Easy diff.. and a slider sound nearly same as 4 circles , I think it is ok
   Four circles is not Hard AT ALL, even more if they are separated by two beats. And also, it's not about how it sounds, but how it feels while playing it.
   I mean , a slider is much more easier than 4 circles to play.. and I think this slider is the same feeling as 4 circles , maybe just different for you ?
3. Good, I'm not a big fan of sliders with 4 repetition on Easy difficulties, they can be a confusing... But I guess it's just ok.

[Normal]

1. Ehm... I don't understand why you used 0,4 as sliderspeed and duplicated it, you could just use 0,8, and change the snap divisor. It works exactly the same~
   I'm worry about the slider length will has some problem.. in fact I fixed it before but there are some unsnaped sldiers.. so I keep this for now
   Ehm... I didn't mean that you have to change i, I'm just stating that you don't have to do it this way in the future.
   I know , I'll pay attention to this and won't do it again
2. 00:03:576 - Something doesn't feel right here... I'm missing a circle somehow - if not, this feels soo blank...
   You could move (1) from it's current position to here, I think that would be more accurate in this case.
   uh.. this is following the vocal clearly.. I don't think it is odd
   So sorry, but the vocals start at 00:03:576..... The "ITSUmo" starts there...
   this circle is following the "tsu" not "i"
3. 00:06:103 - (^) ^ .....^ ^
4. 00:10:050 (3) - This, too, would make more sense if it was at 00:09:892. I recommend not only moving it, but also turning it into a slider that finishes at 00:10:366 (where (1) is atm).
   also follow the vocal here .. I think start at 00:09:892 is more confusing..
   Well, this one is ok. You may keep it.
5. 00:13:208 (1) - This is too soon after the spinner. I suggest deleting this, and to make the next pattern easier to understand so that the player can catch up (remember this is a Normal, it should be easy to catch up again), try removing 00:14:155 (3). That should work fine.
   in fact 1/1 beat after a spinner is not too hard for newbies to play as you thought , cuz the rhyme here is clearly and the note is not far away from the spinner , take it easy
   Fine! Also, "take it easy" is not used in this cases
6. 00:26:787 (4) - Can you remove two repetitions from this slider, and add a circle at 00:27:418? Five repetitions here can get reeeaally confusing for a relatively unexperienced player, and I mean it.
   it is a bit hard to play.. but it follow the drums very well , if change like ^ , it sound empty between the slider and circle :/ What the...? It's a Normal, it isn't so important to "fill" everything, but to make the map playable. You just said it's a bit hard to play, so change it.
7. 00:31:839 (3) - (^) same as ^ , and I think if I keep ^ , this is not too suddenly to play , players may think "oh , the same slider comes again" , and play well here (^)
8. 00:41:945 (4) - (^) ^ (^)
9. 01:00:261 (3) - (^) But just remove one repetition, and maybe point this upwards so it flows nicely:
   also follow the drums here , I think it is not too confusing to play
   How can I put this... It's not about what you follow, cause I get what you followed. It's not as if I wouldn't get that. The point is that it is a little too hard to play, and that is enough reason to change it. Also, if I said "keep the next kick sliders to give it some challenge", it would be good if the map was easier in the beginning.
   And you would be keeping some surprises for the kiai.
   Are those enough reasons for you to change these kick sliders? xD
   can't have some little challenges in Normal? ;_; I'm not sure which one must be changed , the rhyme are the same with the kick sliders ;_; if change one , seems that they all need to be changed.. that's why I want to keep all of them ;_;
   
   SPOILER

   
10. You may keep the rest of the kick sliders, I guess some challenge isn't bad, either

[Hard]

1. Same advise for the future about slider speed!
   uh.. is it reall necessary to be fixed? the sliders may have some problem after change..
   No no, "for the future" means you don't need to do it now.
2. 00:10:050 (3) - You might want to unstack this slider so that the pattern is equal to the previous ones in this sense (circle - stacked circle - unstacked slider)
   this is a omen for 00:10:997 (1,2,3,4) , and not the same pattern is more fun to play
   No, in fact, I didn't talk about more fun. I just said it's more consistent. But I've grown to like it. The only thing I can say is that the approach circles are a bit hard to distinguish somehow... Perhaps you can move these around a bit, keeping the stack
   uh.. is it really must to be fixed? seems there's no different stack or not stack..
3. 00:27:734 (1) - Ah, can you please make this slider so that the start and end don't touch? It looks pretty ugly if they touch...
   oops , I think this slider shape is well with the vocal.. at least it is readble at all , I think it is ok
   Yes but man... Are you reading what I said? I think it doesn't look good if the start and end touch, but I didn't say IT DOESN?T PLAY WELL. it's just about separating some sliderpoints =.=. This is what I mean:
   I don't know why the starting and the ending of the sldier are touched is ugly , I think ugly or beautiful is just your subjective idea
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:32:787 (1) - (^) ^ (^)
5. 00:42:892 (1) - (^) ^ (^)
6. 00:47:629 (6) - What this is totally excessive. Totally. You don't need to have such a hold slider HERE in your Hard (there's one later but I totally liked that one). Make it 1/2 long, please, and remove some repetitions.
   sorry , but I really want to keep this. if use a 1/2 hold slider , it is sound empty , cuz the drums here are 1/4 beats. now it is clearly readble , not hard to play , and fit the song very well , so I don't know why it need to be changed :/
   Fine, but it can get very tricky. Just saying, in case some more people say the same thing
7. 01:08:471 (1) - A finish sounds good here!
   I don't like to add too many finish in this song.. if I fixed here , then there are many other objects need to add a finish , that feel kinda noisy
8. 01:18:576 (1) - And here too. ^
9. 01:26:945 (7,8,9) - A little suggestion here, you could unstack these here to give the ending of the song some more of strength, Like this:
   umm.. I afraid if someone miss combo at the end of song and get annoying.. I'd like keep this for now 0.0
   What... An average player shouldn't miss that, and you should know that... You seem a little stubborn, sorry to say that :/
   in fact , this were triangle circles at first.. but someone missed here , so I change them to stack circles
   
   SPOILER

   

[Yuru YurI]

1. Why the capital I in "YurI"? Is there a reason for that?
   sure , it is an Insane diff , so I change the "i" to "I" in diff name
   Oh, I see
2. 00:02:629 (3,4) - Talking about overmapping... I actually think that you should invert these two, that is, make (3) be where (4) is and viceversa. The jump feels more natural that way, or at least that's how I felt it.
   uh.. jump here with good flow , I think it is not that hard to play 0.0
3. 00:05:155 (3,4) - (^) ^
4. 00:07:524 (3) - This jump is too sudden, and even more considering the great jump just before this between 00:07:050 (5,1). Please, try some other pattern where spacing isn't so jumpy. It would feel much better here.
   umm.. jump a little big here , but it is a slider , in fact it is not too hard to play imo
5. 00:08:787 (3,1) - The direction in which (3) points is like... Opposite to where (1) is. That doesn't play nice at all. Consider making (3) so that the structure of this pattern makes it flow better. Like pointing it to the left.
   I think flow is no problem here.. just a little odd between 00:09:418 (6,1) imo , but the whole pattern is fine
6. 00:09:418 (3) - (^) You might have to rearrange some circles after this. I had to do it in order to avoid an overlap.
   uh.. just a little jump.. it is not too hard to play as you thought :/
7. 00:13:129 (2) - This is totally unnecessary after a spinner. Please delete this circle.
   I think 1/4 beat is fun here , even if it follow nothing , anyway it is stacked and not far from the spinner , that's very easy to read and play
8. 00:13:524 (4) - This jump here is too big, and pretty senseless, too. You should give the player some reposition time after the spinner, and such jumps won't help.Try flipping vertically 00:13:524 (4,5,6,7), and see if you can place it without this jump.
   don't you think it is too boring without jumps.. I increase the spacing cuz it is after a slider , in fact it is easier to play than 00:13:524 (4,5,6,7,1) , so don't worry about this slider-circle jump
9. 00:14:392 (3) - To be consistent here, remove this too, please.
   just for fun here :/ I do know this is overmapping , but if change all 1/4 beats into 1/2 , it is boring and break the diff spread..
10. 00:16:050 (3,4) - I was soo expecting these to be in other order... (3) should be where (4) is and viceversa. Again, it's much more intuitive, I believe.
    just a little jump here 0.0 don't you feel boring if changed this..?
11. 00:16:682 (5) - If you did that last thing I mentioned, you can probably a little something to make everything flow better, and to avoid a jump:
    yes , good idea here , fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:19:839 (5,6,7) - Ok this difficulty has a problem, and it is that it doesn't flow well. Jumps cut the flow all the time, like here! I tried to press (6) before (5) because it is the most intuitive thing, and that is what you whould aim to do! Maps don't have to have weird jumps just because "fuck it, I can do it!".
    uh.. you really think here is jump? the spacing is just the same here , I think this is not jump .. orz
    Ok please rearrange this pattern. And all the unnecessary jumps out there. I won't point any of the remeining ones, just please find them by yourself.
13. 00:27:734 (6) - Please, can you make it so that the start and end don't touch (again)? I have said before how this looks ugly :/
    oh , don't you feel they looks cute , why ugly ;_;
14. 00:32:787 (6) - (^) ;_;
15. 00:42:892 (6) - (^) ;_;
16. 00:44:471 (1) - You totally should invert this slider to improve flow.
    uh.. just a little jump to follow the vocal here
17. 01:05:471 (6) - Maybe you can add a new combo here to make this more readable.
    I think it is readble easily enough..
18. The reason why ziin and me too think that this is overmapped is because you used a lot of truly unnecessary triplets, and because most of your jumps were exaggerated. Very exaggerated.
    All I can say right now is that you should recheck all this difficuly, and see what you can do to make it more pleasant to play - a good map (or insane, shall I say) is not exactly meant to be something where you "have to press zx like a freak and move your mouse as if you were a robot". As long as it is fun to play and has some difficulty, it can be a good insane.
    I don't want this diff to be easy to play..anyway this is for expert players. that's why there are many triplets and jumps , I don't know why you always complain about the last diff is too hard to play , and why not enjoy the other diffs...
    I think this map's diff spread is fine , just one annoying thing is the last diff is too hard to play because overmapping , but I don't think this is a stain.
    for normal players , this map can be an enjoyable map. for expert players , this map can be a challenge. so I don't understand why this is a bad thing..

wcx... There has been a lot of talking in the past about most of the arguments you gave, that are totally invalid. osu! is not meant to be a game to make song ultra impossible, it's meant to follow well the song, to make the map adjust to it's mood, etc.
You can't answer with "this song is for experts and that's why I added nonsensical things everywhere". Am I clear with that?
I don't want to sound rough, but you have to understand this and map accordingly. I'm serious here.
umm.. I don't know how to do with this diff.. I do know most people hate this , but a few pro like this diff. cuz the diff brings 7 million scores to them.. I really don't want to reduse the difficulty , cuz there is another Insane diff. how about thinking it as an Extra diff?

The two other diffs are fine, perhaps it would be a good idea to fet some more taiko modders to check your taiko.

Good luck!

SapphireGhost wrote:

HAI HAI HAI

[General]
- I believe you need to add a reverse arrow as part of the hitcircle set of skinning elements.
fixed
- You'll need to add a custom Slider Border of 255,255,255 to prevent your custom hitcircle from clashing with another skin.
fixed
- Convert pause-overlay and fail-background to .jpg, maybe? I don't know. Perhaps, perhaps not.
sorry , I think it is fine. I see many ranked maps using png files

[Sumisola's Insane]
00:02:945 (3) - This note overlaps with the HP bar a bit, try to rework the pattern so it doesn't and it'll look a bit nicer.
fixed

[Yuru YurI]
- I don't think the overmapping was really that bad, even though it's good only map things you can hear in the song. Still, I'll accept this.
thanks
00:27:734 (6) - I agree with narakucrimson here, it would look better if the start and end didn't overlap. It'd make it a bit more readable and cute and stuff. This also applies for 00:32:787 (6) and 00:42:892 (6).
uh.. I really like this kind of sliders.. also , the start and end are not completely overlap , I think it is easy to read enough :/

[Hard]
00:03:576 (1,2,3) - (1) and (3) are a bit too close, try to space them out slightly to avoid any overlap.
I didn't see where they overlapped 0.0
00:27:734 (1) - Same thing about these sliders, it really would be nice to have a non-overlapping start and end point. They're in the same spots so I won't list them here.
to be honest , I never think a bit overlap can make it hard to read..
00:45:103 (8) - I'm not sure about having a kickslider here. It's alright, but I think it would play more intuitively to split it into two sliders.
I think a kickslider here is good , looks fine , fit the vocal and play well..
01:12:261 (5,6,7) - Here you've got a similar thing with a kickslider that doesn't play very well. I'd suggest something like this.
thanks for suggestion , but I played well here :/

[Normal]
- You should still be using Tick Rate 2 here for consistency with the other difficulties. It doesn't cause any ticks to disappear.
tick rate 2 is too high.. the song's BPM is 190 , if I hold the tick rate to 2 , it is too noisy :/

[Easy]
- About the kicksliders on this difficulty, I agree with naraku in that it's confusing for new players to have multiple repeats on a slider. 4 circles in a row seems a bit too much, though, so I'd advise making it two sliders. There, stuff is all good.
I'm sure all the kicksliders are easy to read , even for newbies , I already find many newbies to test this diff :3

I think that's it. At least, that should be it. So yeah. Forum PM after fixes as usual.