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01:46:861 (8,1) - confusing spacing, increase ds
01:51:136 (2,3,4) - all sliders prefer
01:51:661 (7,1) - confusing spacing
01:57:961 (1,2,3,4) - not pretty, do not overlap
01:00:811 - end slider here, including 01:05:611 - 01:20:011 - 02:09:211 - and more
03:57:361 (1,2,3,1) - too much overlap, might even end up with unrankable
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Shad0w1and wrote:

01:46:861 (8,1) - confusing spacing, increase ds Fixed
01:51:136 (2,3,4) - all sliders prefer Fixed
01:51:661 (7,1) - confusing spacing Fixed
01:57:961 (1,2,3,4) - not pretty, do not overlap Keep
01:00:811 - end slider here, including 01:05:611 - 01:20:011 - 02:09:211 - and more Fixed
03:57:361 (1,2,3,1) - too much overlap, might even end up with unrankable Fixed
Thank you for your mod!
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m4m

  1. Your song is only 4:53 drain and doesn't meet the requirements to be a marathon.
  2. 00:59:091 - complete stream
  3. 01:09:966 (9) - make this a little more creative, at least 4 1/2 sliders, it's a bit jarring for the map's flow and speed :p
  4. 01:12:366 (9) - ^
  5. 01:17:091 - complete stream
  6. 01:29:166 (9) - same as above
  7. 01:31:566 (9) - ^
  8. 01:36:291 - complete stream
  9. 01:38:766 (14) - swamp new combos to here instead of 01:39:066 (1) - (and same for anything like that thereafter)
  10. 01:42:216 - definitely map a triple here and increase the spacing of 01:42:366 (1) - , it's super slow and unexpected as it is
  11. 01:44:766 (5) - nc
  12. 01:47:016 - put another kickslider here or something for the guitar, again the spacing here is too low
  13. 01:51:816 - ^
  14. 01:58:566 (1) - i think these sliders deserve much higher SV since you're ignoring the streams here (and same for the other sliders)
  15. 02:18:366 (9) - same for all these thingys
  16. 02:26:766 - lots of the same suggestions from before also apply in this kiai time too so look out for em
  17. 02:27:216 (7) - im not that familiar with streams but im pretty sure this overlap isnt gonna be good
  18. 03:41:766 (3) - missing a big stream
  19. 04:14:841 (2) - another big overlap
  20. 05:23:511 (2,3) - this seems a bit mean and confusing lol

I'm not that great at modding streams so i hope that will do
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Fizz wrote:

m4m

  1. Your song is only 4:53 drain and doesn't meet the requirements to be a marathon. Oh oops, adding circles in the beginning
  2. 00:59:091 - complete stream Fixed
  3. 01:09:966 (9) - make this a little more creative, at least 4 1/2 sliders, it's a bit jarring for the map's flow and speed :p Fixed
  4. 01:12:366 (9) - ^ Fixed
  5. 01:17:091 - complete stream Fixed
  6. 01:29:166 (9) - same as above Fixed
  7. 01:31:566 (9) - ^ Fixed
  8. 01:36:291 - complete stream Fixed
  9. 01:38:766 (14) - swamp new combos to here instead of 01:39:066 (1) - (and same for anything like that thereafter) Fixed
  10. 01:42:216 - definitely map a triple here and increase the spacing of 01:42:366 (1) - , it's super slow and unexpected as it is Didn't map a triple, but changed spacing and created a repeat slider
  11. 01:44:766 (5) - nc Oops fixed
  12. 01:47:016 - put another kickslider here or something for the guitar, again the spacing here is too low Added repeat slider and increased spacing
  13. 01:51:816 - ^ ^
  14. 01:58:566 (1) - i think these sliders deserve much higher SV since you're ignoring the streams here (and same for the other sliders) Increased SV on the second pair of sliders
  15. 02:18:366 (9) - same for all these thingys Fixed
  16. 02:26:766 - lots of the same suggestions from before also apply in this kiai time too so look out for em Fixed
  17. 02:27:216 (7) - im not that familiar with streams but im pretty sure this overlap isnt gonna be good Fixed
  18. 03:41:766 (3) - missing a big stream Put triples with a kickslider instead
  19. 04:14:841 (2) - another big overlap Fixed
  20. 05:23:511 (2,3) - this seems a bit mean and confusing lol Keep, it goes with music

I'm not that great at modding streams so i hope that will do
Thanks for modding~
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Hello *v*

To Replace: 00:39:108 (1,1) -
Slider Velocity: 1,26
Copy the code and paste in your file Osu!.txt (Timing Points):
265,153,39108,2,0,B|345:170|412:126|412:126|450:130|471:158|471:158|540:275|324:310|257:285|257:285|284:257|288:225|288:225|360:229|421:199|421:199|496:311|496:311|371:380|247:354|247:354|211:343|194:323|190:293|190:293|169:289|144:277|144:277|201:256|220:220|220:220|160:220|110:200|110:200|157:182|198:153|198:153|137:139|77:93|77:93|163:110|225:68|225:68|274:79|295:102|313:102|384:83|428:76|391:37|364:16|335:17|316:23|309:43|316:64|329:66|329:66,1,2129.40000812302
Demo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8650237
General

I like it !!! Good Spacing and Cool Patterns!!! I only found important problems in the final part of the map (Maybe....to reach the +5 minutes of mapping xD?), in the rest they are only small details
Have you thought about adding custom hitsounds? I think so your map would be much better!!!

Specifically:

00:10:308 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I think you should make more patterns with overlaps in this section (So, the map is more fun when you play it)
Basic Examples: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8650672 l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8650688 l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8650723

00:47:166 (1) - to 00:57:816 (12) - why hitfinish? You can add more soft-hitclaps from custom sounds c: (Hitfinish are to highlight the end of each section)

01:42:666 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I think if you change it to sliders 1/3 (and adjust the flow accordingly), your map will be more varied in playable aspects

01:52:266 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same Here

01:57:966 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8650839

01:59:391 (4,5,8,9,13,16) - Why everyone can make those flow patterns and I do not ;_;

02:00:966 (1) - Disables the grid and adjusts the slider manually between the edges (Is more aesthetic)

02:06:216 (7) - I think you should change it for a kickslider (to make it more intuitive)

02:06:366 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I like that pattern!!! but.... you repeat it a lot >.<, maybe....ctrl+H or crtl +J?

02:31:866 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:42:666 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -

04:44:766 (1) - I think this way is more aesthetic: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8650969

Well, now, the most important things:

05:32:761 (1) - I would recommend that you finish your mapping here (and cut the song if are necessary), you have done +5 minutes of mapping and already count as a marathon map, or....

05:33:761 (1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,1) - Remap all this section, because you skip many sounds and the section does not support long sliders, considering how sensitive the ranking criteria is, this section can be very bad for the map

So, please, Consider one of the two options >.<

Well, that's all I found, I hope this can help you c:

Good Luck!!!
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Miutrex wrote:

Hello *v*

To Replace: 00:39:108 (1,1) -
Slider Velocity: 1,26
Copy the code and paste in your file Osu!.txt (Timing Points):
265,153,39108,2,0,B|345:170|412:126|412:126|450:130|471:158|471:158|540:275|324:310|257:285|257:285|284:257|288:225|288:225|360:229|421:199|421:199|496:311|496:311|371:380|247:354|247:354|211:343|194:323|190:293|190:293|169:289|144:277|144:277|201:256|220:220|220:220|160:220|110:200|110:200|157:182|198:153|198:153|137:139|77:93|77:93|163:110|225:68|225:68|274:79|295:102|313:102|384:83|428:76|391:37|364:16|335:17|316:23|309:43|316:64|329:66|329:66,1,2129.40000812302
I appreciate the fact you took your time and effort to make this slider for me, but I think a spinner really fits this part better
Demo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8650237
General

I like it !!! Good Spacing and Cool Patterns!!! I only found important problems in the final part of the map (Maybe....to reach the +5 minutes of mapping xD?), in the rest they are only small details
Have you thought about adding custom hitsounds? I think so your map would be much better!!! Yeah I'm gonna completely redo hitsounds with custom ones.

Specifically:

00:10:308 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I think you should make more patterns with overlaps in this section (So, the map is more fun when you play it) Redid some of the parts in this section
Basic Examples: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8650672 l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8650688 l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8650723

00:47:166 (1) - to 00:57:816 (12) - why hitfinish? You can add more soft-hitclaps from custom sounds c: (Hitfinish are to highlight the end of each section)
Gonna redo hitsounds

01:42:666 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I think if you change it to sliders 1/3 (and adjust the flow accordingly), your map will be more varied in playable aspects Changed all these sections

01:52:266 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same Here

01:57:966 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8650839 Fixed

01:59:391 (4,5,8,9,13,16) - Why everyone can make those flow patterns and I do not ;_; :3

02:00:966 (1) - Disables the grid and adjusts the slider manually between the edges (Is more aesthetic) Fixed

02:06:216 (7) - I think you should change it for a kickslider (to make it more intuitive) Fixed

02:06:366 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I like that pattern!!! but.... you repeat it a lot >.<, maybe....ctrl+H or crtl +J? I don't think this would be necessary,
since keeping this pattern gives momentum for the next group of 3 circles that has higher spacing.


02:31:866 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:42:666 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -

04:44:766 (1) - I think this way is more aesthetic: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8650969 Fixed

Well, now, the most important things:

05:32:761 (1) - I would recommend that you finish your mapping here (and cut the song if are necessary), you have done +5 minutes of mapping and already count as a marathon map, or.... Did that

05:33:761 (1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,1) - Remap all this section, because you skip many sounds and the section does not support long sliders, considering how sensitive the ranking criteria is, this section can be very bad for the map

So, please, Consider one of the two options >.<

Well, that's all I found, I hope this can help you c:

Good Luck!!! Thanks!
Thanks for modding~
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Q

[Exile]
00:56:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - finish HS spamming looks not so good.
00:58:416 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - make it circular, looks weird now.
01:12:366 (1,2,3) - why you reduced DS suddenly.
01:17:766 (1,2,3) - ctrl G
01:19:866 (3,4) - check DS
01:59:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - why you made stream jump?
02:01:566 (1,2,3,4) - making jump can be better for playing
02:31:866 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - you followed vocal only in here, looks strange. other parts, you followed drums.
05:14:136 - vocal is in here...

GL
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Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Exile]
00:56:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - finish HS spamming looks not so good. Fixed
00:58:416 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - make it circular, looks weird now. Fixed
01:12:366 (1,2,3) - why you reduced DS suddenly. Fixed
01:17:766 (1,2,3) - ctrl G Fixed
01:19:866 (3,4) - check DS Ok
01:59:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - why you made stream jump? Decreased spaced by a lot
02:01:566 (1,2,3,4) - making jump can be better for playing Increase the spacing and removed overlaps
02:31:866 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - you followed vocal only in here, looks strange. other parts, you followed drums. It's to switch from the intense streaming part from before
05:14:136 - vocal is in here... Following drums

GL
Thanks for modding~
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Hello, m4m here

diffname:
  1. 01:35:916 (11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - i wouldn't make it straight, maybe curve it a little bit (like this)
  2. 01:42:966 (5,6) - these too look visually too close, make gap between them a little bit bigger
  3. 02:25:041 (1) - i think would be more interesting if you mapped those sounds
  4. 03:07:566 (1) - i'm pretty sure you should add click before this spinner to show more emphasize
  5. 03:11:166 (1,2,3,4) - you are undermapping drums here, they are on 1/6 ticks, i think you can map them
  6. 03:25:866 (9) - i don't really think it fits there
  7. 05:07:761 (3,4) - too close
  8. 05:33:761 (1) - you are planning on finishing mapping, right?


Hope I helped. Good luck!
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h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Hello, m4m here

diffname:
  1. 01:35:916 (11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - i wouldn't make it straight, maybe curve it a little bit (like this) Made it a wave
  2. 01:42:966 (5,6) - these too look visually too close, make gap between them a little bit bigger Fixed
  3. 02:25:041 (1) - i think would be more interesting if you mapped those sounds I tried everything, but I just couldn't get something good,
    I'll keep it a spinner for now and see what I can do.
  4. 03:07:566 (1) - i'm pretty sure you should add click before this spinner to show more emphasize Fixed
  5. 03:11:166 (1,2,3,4) - you are undermapping drums here, they are on 1/6 ticks, i think you can map them Fixed
  6. 03:25:866 (9) - i don't really think it fits there Fixed
  7. 05:07:761 (3,4) - too close Fixed
  8. 05:33:761 (1) - you are planning on finishing mapping, right? I was thinking of just ending it there, but I guess it could go further


Hope I helped. Good luck!
Thanks for modding~
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(I'm not good with 6* modding but heres my shot)

00:39:108 (1,1) - this could work with just the spinner
01:22:566 (1,2,3,4) - you change the spacing but the song doesn't change
01:36:966 (1,2,3) - same again here
02:06:366 (1,2,3) - also here
02:06:966 (1,2,3) - and here also
02:25:041 (1) - spinner doesn't realy work or follow the song
03:07:566 (1,1) - spinner and circle isn't reallt nessecary
04:42:141 (6,7,8,1,2) - there isn't really a point in the song where you could highlight with that type of stream here

again this is my first 6* mod so not sure how accurate it would be
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mc2save wrote:

(I'm not good with 6* modding but heres my shot)

00:39:108 (1,1) - this could work with just the spinner I put the circle to emphasize the drum sound at the beginning
01:22:566 (1,2,3,4) - you change the spacing but the song doesn't change Fixed
01:36:966 (1,2,3) - same again here Fixed
02:06:366 (1,2,3) - also here Fixed
02:06:966 (1,2,3) - and here also Fixed
02:25:041 (1) - spinner doesn't realy work or follow the song Fixed
03:07:566 (1,1) - spinner and circle isn't reallt nessecary Same as above
04:42:141 (6,7,8,1,2) - there isn't really a point in the song where you could highlight with that type of stream here It's to emphasize the change in intensity of the song

again this is my first 6* mod so not sure how accurate it would be
Thanks for modding~
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I hope my mods helped :)

Maybe we could M4M?
posted
Hi, from my queue :D

First why didn't you took normal Dragonforce BG??? ;)

00:49:791 (4,5,6) - Not a big thing, but try to make this angle bigger than 90 degrees (comment to whole part)
01:16:716 (11) - I see no reason why stream changes direction here
01:18:966 (5,6) - Isn't it too close?
01:33:966 (1,2,3,4) - Also here, snap it more like you did in 01:32:766 (1,2,3,4)
01:36:966 (1,2,3) - Snap it more to be like 01:17:766 (1,2,3)
02:06:966 (1,2,3) - ^
02:36:216 - This gap is little confusing (I guess you mapped like this to surprise players, but time gap in middle of stream breaks flow)
03:28:116 (1,2) - Also confiusing
03:32:316 (3) - Don't stack it (not cause it harder to read, but the sound isn't the same)
03:52:716 (2) - I wouldn't stack it but it's not a big thing
04:19:566 (1) - I don't like this stream, it's based on some idea, but I think you could do it better

Sooo, I need to say that really great map and I hope some of my comments may be helpful :D
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free mod cuzynot

Exile

01:35:916 (11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - This part of the stream looks really weird to me. I would recommend either making it fully curve, or just straight.

01:58:566 (1) - This slider feels too slow to match the intensity of this section. You did it much better here: 02:00:366 (1) -

02:49:566 (1) - Same as above, but not nearly as important here. Honestly, I could go either way with this.

02:50:166 (3) - Same as above

03:34:716 (1,2,3) - No overlap here

03:35:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Spacing this stream out more would fit the intensity of the guitars much better

03:54:366 (1) - Same thing I said about the previous sliders

03:56:766 (1) - Same as above

03:58:566 (3) - Same as above

04:08:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as the previous stream

04:39:366 (1) - I would recommend moving this slider to better fit with the flow of the stream

04:40:491 (8,1,2) - This section between the combo colors looks really awkward to me

04:41:016 (7,8,1) - Same as above, but much more so

I would also recommend putting some kind of spinner or long slider at the end of the map, mostly because of how abruptly it cuts off


Overall, pretty solid map, good luck with ranking this! :)
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Milar001 wrote:

Hi, from my queue :D

First why didn't you took normal Dragonforce BG??? ;)We revolutionize cuz it's 2017

00:49:791 (4,5,6) - Not a big thing, but try to make this angle bigger than 90 degrees (comment to whole part) Eh
01:16:716 (11) - I see no reason why stream changes direction here Fixed
01:18:966 (5,6) - Isn't it too close? Fixed
01:33:966 (1,2,3,4) - Also here, snap it more like you did in 01:32:766 (1,2,3,4) Keep
01:36:966 (1,2,3) - Snap it more to be like 01:17:766 (1,2,3) Fixed
02:06:966 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
02:36:216 - This gap is little confusing (I guess you mapped like this to surprise players, but time gap in iddle of stream breaks flow) Oops that's fixed. wasn't intended >.<
03:28:116 (1,2) - Also confiusing Eh
03:32:316 (3) - Don't stack it (not cause it harder to read, but the sound isn't the same) Fixed
03:52:716 (2) - I wouldn't stack it but it's not a big thing
04:19:566 (1) - I don't like this stream, it's based on some idea, but I think you could do it better

Sooo, I need to say that really great map and I hope some of my comments may be helpful :D
Thanks!


sYreNn wrote:

free mod cuzynot

Exile

01:35:916 (11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - This part of the stream looks really weird to me. I would recommend either making it fully curve, or just straight. Fixed

01:58:566 (1) - This slider feels too slow to match the intensity of this section. You did it much better here: 02:00:366 (1) - I'll agree with this one, since it's in the middle of an intense section, but the other sliders you mentioned, I'll hold back one those.

02:49:566 (1) - Same as above, but not nearly as important here. Honestly, I could go either way with this. Fixed

02:50:166 (3) - Same as above Fixed

03:34:716 (1,2,3) - No overlap here Changed so only one overlapped

03:35:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Spacing this stream out more would fit the intensity of the guitars much better Fixed

03:54:366 (1) - Same thing I said about the previous sliders Same thing as I said earlier

03:56:766 (1) - Same as above

03:58:566 (3) - Same as above

04:08:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as the previous stream Keep, it's sort of hold back/buildup for the intensity of the next stream

04:39:366 (1) - I would recommend moving this slider to better fit with the flow of the stream Removed one repeat tick for better playability

04:40:491 (8,1,2) - This section between the combo colors looks really awkward to me Fixed

04:41:016 (7,8,1) - Same as above, but much more so Fixed

I would also recommend putting some kind of spinner or long slider at the end of the map, mostly because of how abruptly it cuts off
Added a spinner


Overall, pretty solid map, good luck with ranking this! :)
Thanks!

Thanks for both of your mods~
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from my NM queue

00:00:708 (1) - 9 second spinner at the start of the map is very annoying if you're retrying the map. consider starting it 00:05:508 - for for better playability
01:10:566 (3) - why are these repeat sliders? applies to all of them
01:17:166 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing difference is too big, make first triangle bigger or the second smaller, applies to all of these
01:55:116 (5) - why not make this into kicksliders mapped to the vocals?
01:56:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - you have change in direction on 4,5 and then on 10,11 and 14,15. It should be 4,5 9,10 and 13,14
02:24:666 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - pretty sure it's overmapped
02:26:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - again the changes in direction should be one note earlier
02:29:466 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - same
02:36:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this one and the rest in the kiai are correct
02:44:316 (5) - same suggestion as before
02:50:166 (3,1) - pls no, looks like 1/4 when it's 1/2
02:50:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - same other streams except the on on NC that is correct
02:55:266 (1,2,3,1) - increas spacing between these
03:11:166 (1,2) - these are 1/6 i think
03:26:166 (2,2) - fix stack
03:33:066 (5) - remove this and put circle on red tick
03:38:766 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - first off. the intensity doesn't increase that much. Secondly, 03:41:016 - this should be mapped if it's to the drums. also don't think triangles represent this well. New combo every 6 circles along with different pattern would be better imo
03:42:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/3
03:44:766 (1,2,3,4) - overmap
03:46:566 (5) - could make the slider more interesting, straight doesn't really express the guitar sound
03:48:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe lower spacing so there is more emphasis on the change here 03:49:566 (1) -
03:51:966 (5,2) - again slider and fix blanket
03:53:316 (2,3,4) - possibly 1/6? i hear 4 notes
03:54:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kinda boring patter for how intense the solo is here
03:58:266 (1,2,3) - 1/3 snap fits better here
04:00:591 (4,5,6) - the stream corner is too early here
04:00:591 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why is it suddenly straight
04:01:866 (4) - consider kicksliders for these
04:04:866 (5) - bigger SV since the stream is more spaced?
04:07:416 (5,1) - change spacing to indicate 1/1 rhythm
04:15:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - lower spacing slightly, this stream is less intense than the last one
04:24:366 (5,1) - again could indicate rhythm with spacing change or put a triple on the slider
04:28:716 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spacing makes no sense here, 04:29:766 (1,2,3,4) - should be bigger than the rest not smaller while 04:29:166 (1,2,3,4) - could be the same
04:39:366 (1) - the stream should continue, repeat 04:39:666 - is ok but this is too long
04:42:291 (8,1,2) - not a fan of 180 turns
05:07:761 (3,4) - maybe circles here because of drums
05:23:511 (2,3) - stack it

I stopped talking about it on the last kiai but some streams also don't turn where they should, Check if the corner is on white tick. A few of them work because of the solo being weird but most are more playable with turns on white ticks
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hohol454 wrote:

from my NM queue

00:00:708 (1) - 9 second spinner at the start of the map is very annoying if you're retrying the map. consider starting it 00:05:508 - for for better playability Fixed
01:10:566 (3) - why are these repeat sliders? applies to all of them Fixed
01:17:166 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing difference is too big, make first triangle bigger or the second smaller, applies to all of these Fixed
01:55:116 (5) - why not make this into kicksliders mapped to the vocals? Added circles
01:56:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - you have change in direction on 4,5 and then on 10,11 and 14,15. It should be 4,5 9,10 and 13,14 Fixed
02:24:666 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - pretty sure it's overmapped Fixed
02:26:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - again the changes in direction should be one note earlier Fixed
02:29:466 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - same Fixed
02:36:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this one and the rest in the kiai are correct
02:44:316 (5) - same suggestion as before Fixed
02:50:166 (3,1) - pls no, looks like 1/4 when it's 1/2 Fixed
02:50:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - same other streams except the on on NC that is correct Fixed
02:55:266 (1,2,3,1) - increas spacing between these Fixed
03:11:166 (1,2) - these are 1/6 i think Fixed
03:26:166 (2,2) - fix stack Fixed
03:33:066 (5) - remove this and put circle on red tick Fixed
03:38:766 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - first off. the intensity doesn't increase that much. Secondly, 03:41:016 - this should be mapped if it's to the drums. also don't think triangles represent this well. New combo every 6 circles along with different pattern would be better imo Fixed
03:42:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/3 Fixed
03:44:766 (1,2,3,4) - overmap Here, I overmapped it since the guitar solo has a complicated rhythm so a stream would fit much better.
03:46:566 (5) - could make the slider more interesting, straight doesn't really express the guitar sound Fixed
03:48:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe lower spacing so there is more emphasis on the change here 03:49:566 (1) - Fixed
03:51:966 (5,2) - again slider and fix blanket Fixed
03:53:316 (2,3,4) - possibly 1/6? i hear 4 notes Fixed
03:54:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kinda boring patter for how intense the solo is here Increased the spacing
03:58:266 (1,2,3) - 1/3 snap fits better here Fixed
04:00:591 (4,5,6) - the stream corner is too early here Fixed
04:00:591 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why is it suddenly straight Fixed
04:01:866 (4) - consider kicksliders for these Fixed
04:04:866 (5) - bigger SV since the stream is more spaced? Fixed
04:07:416 (5,1) - change spacing to indicate 1/1 rhythm Fixed
04:15:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - lower spacing slightly, this stream is less intense than the last one Fixed
04:24:366 (5,1) - again could indicate rhythm with spacing change or put a triple on the slider Fixed
04:28:716 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spacing makes no sense here, 04:29:766 (1,2,3,4) - should be bigger than the rest not smaller while 04:29:166 (1,2,3,4) - could be the same Fixed
04:39:366 (1) - the stream should continue, repeat 04:39:666 - is ok but this is too long Fixed
04:42:291 (8,1,2) - not a fan of 180 turns Eh
05:07:761 (3,4) - maybe circles here because of drums Fixed
05:23:511 (2,3) - stack it Fixed

I stopped talking about it on the last kiai but some streams also don't turn where they should, Check if the corner is on white tick. A few of them work because of the solo being weird but most are more playable with turns on white ticks Fixed all of em
Thank you very much for this very helpful mod!
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recheck

01:32:166 (3) - overlap here looks weird. might just be me tho
01:35:766 (9) - NC(?)
01:35:991 (12,13,14,15,16,1) - This part of the stream looks really weird. It would probably look better if you curved it a bit more(or something like that)
01:57:066 (5) - NC, definitely
01:59:466 (5) - ^
01:59:766 (9) - ^
02:00:066 (13) - ^
02:03:066 (5) - ^
02:03:366 (9) - ^
02:03:666 (13) - ^
02:29:466 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This just looks awkward. I can see what you were going for, and it should still work if you just clean this up a bit
02:39:516 (8,9,10) - Too straight for what it looks like you were going for
02:48:741 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - This section of the stream should be more of a smooth curve
02:52:641 (10,11,12,13,14) - ^
03:37:266 (5) - Change up this slider a bit, right now it looks too compact
04:02:016 (5) - NC
04:02:916 (5) - ^
04:13:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Also looks pretty weird, probably because of the abrupt change from a curved stream to a vertical one
04:16:341 (6,7,8) - Smooth out this corner
04:34:491 (8,1,2) - ^
04:42:516 (3,4,5,6) - ^
04:44:091 (8,1,2) - ^


I think one issue you really need to focus on is the streams. In theory they're fine, but they just look really weird when you constantly change from curved to straight streams, and switch directions like that. Take a look at some of Mazzerin's maps if you want to get a better idea of how to handle this sort of stuff(they do a much better job explaining it than I ever could).

That's about it, good luck! :)
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