1. A Very Pink Insane (3,52 stars, 527 notes)
2. Hard (2,82 stars, 449 notes)
3. Normal (1,61 stars, 266 notes)

Pulse wrote:

(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧



rip choa

- AzRaeL - wrote:

NM from here.

Red: Unrankable.
Blue: Important.
Black: Advice.

Normal

02:30:123 (2,3) - Change here to this. I'm following the vocals here.

Hard

02:28:456 (1) - move this to x:185 y:276 Okay
02:28:932 (3,4,5) - move these to x:127 y:161 I would like to keep them as a triangle
03:09:170 (5,6,1) - make them a triangle ('1' to x:387 y:210). fixed

A Very Pink Insane

02:07:742 (1,2) - Swap their positions(or reverse '1'). I think the way it fits well in the gameplay
02:58:694 (1) - Why NC? aaa my bad, fixed

You are good at mapping .
There are no big mistake in it, Great .

02:28:456 (1) - move this to x:185 y:276
02:28:932 (3,4,5) - move these to x:127 y:161

xJ1 wrote:

Hey, from my mod queue

A Very Pink Insane:

01:28:694 (1,2) - Maybe reverse selection for symmetry I'm following the vocal flow

02:12:980 (1) - No nc? Fixed

In general, very clean, nothing much else to say, other than GL!

MyAngelMeinter wrote:

Hi

Normal

nothing ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Hard

01:17:146 (5) - this is unnecessary Okay
02:06:313 (4) - this slider half beat longer I'm following the vocals in this slider

A Very Pink Insane

I think better name for this diff is "A Very Pink Light Insane"
Why AR 8.4? Get AR9 AR9 is too much for a light insane xD
03:09:646 (1) - hafb beat shorter and with arrow

[lucky:1337]Good Luck [/lucky:1337]

Reynolduh wrote:

hihi from my q

normal

SPOILER

03:07:742 (1,2,3,1) - change to spinner? i dont think it will be good

hard

SPOILER

add circle here?00:28:575 - This would not be good for map consistency
change to 1/4 slider with 1 repeat？00:29:646 (1) - ^
00:30:004 - add circle here? Okay
00:41:075 (1) - extend by 1 tick,delete 00:41:551 (2) - and ad circle on 00:41:789 -
same for the parts after that you copy and pasted imo (if u want) I'm following vocals here
03:07:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - change to spinner? same as normal diff

insane

SPOILER

03:01:075 (1,2,1,2) - the pretender hhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
nothing else lol

nice map

Crypthesis wrote:

Hi!

From my modding queue:

Sorry for getting to you this late.

Red: Unrankable

Global

Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768:
Right now your image is 1200x1200 (a square). You're going to need to crop it. ill fix that

Your Normal doesn't end at the same time as the others. fixed

Why do all kpop songs put the names of their groups in their songs? >.> idk xd

Normal

00:20:123 (1,2) - Place this further away? I think my way it's better and more readable.

01:31:551 (2) - I think you should make this a 1/1 slider as you mapped the main vocal right before. 01:33:456 (2,3) - consistency

01:33:456 (2,3) - Space this more? this is a normal diff, i cant change the DS

Hard

00:36:789 (1) - What are you mapping here? I slow down the vel to highlight the background vocall

02:27:742 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - This is unreadable for a Hard player. this looks preety simple

A Very Pink Insane

00:04:885 - No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. fixed

01:12:504 (3) - Shouldn't this be curved? It's the same sound as the previous two. I do not want to be too repetitive about sliders

01:37:980 (5) - NC? lol why?

03:01:075 (1,2,1,2) - Diff spike?

Sorry for short mod :/

Tbh you should get a BN to check it.

Reynolduh wrote:

Hey would you look at that!

It's a STAARRRRRRRRRRRRRR

Gabe wrote:

short ircmod c:

20:01 Marianna: Babe, can you help me? ;-;
20:01 Gabe: sure?
20:02 Marianna: Can you mod this if you're free? I need mores mods after call one BN
20:02 *Marianna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1359113 AOA - Heart Attack [A Very Pink Insane]]
20:02 Marianna: before* xp
20:02 Gabe: okay xd
20:03 Marianna: Thanks <3
20:05 Gabe: time for irc mod?
20:05 Marianna: ofc :3
20:06 Gabe: oki xD
20:06 Gabe: I don't have much to say
20:06 *Gabe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1359113 AOA - Heart Attack [A Very Pink Insane]]
20:06 Gabe: 01:35:361 (4,6) - the clap is misplaced
20:06 Gabe: the clap from the slider (4) should be on the slider (6)
20:07 Marianna: Fixed :3
20:07 Gabe: 02:09:170 (2) - I'd move this slider to x:244 y:40 to make a better circular flow
20:07 Gabe: (02:09:170 (2,4) - make sure to stack them when you change it)
20:09 Marianna: i think its better keep this because of the consistence with the others 02:12:504 (1,2,3) - 02:16:313 (1,2,3) -
20:10 Gabe: I've seen it and not really, because if you look closely, 02:08:694 (1,2) - these have an angle
20:10 Gabe: while the other two does not
20:11 Marianna: oh you're right, fixed :3
20:11 Gabe: 02:35:837 (3) - is there supposed to be a drum-clap here? o.o
20:12 Gabe: 02:53:694 (1) - The new combo seems unnecessary, I'd suggest to delete it :3c
20:13 Marianna: fixed and fixed :3
20:14 Gabe: 00:14:408 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm trying to understand something here..
20:15 Gabe: 00:14:408 (1,2) - and 00:15:123 (3,4) - are technically the same, right?
20:15 Gabe: (vocal-wise, I mean)
20:16 Marianna: well i tryed to follow the vocal, should i try again? xd
20:16 Gabe: well no, your idea is great
20:16 Gabe: but
20:16 Gabe: it's not consistent
20:17 Gabe: look at the spacing and the jumps
20:17 Gabe: 00:14:884 (2,3) - there is a jump here
20:17 Gabe: 00:15:599 (4,5) - but no jump here
20:18 Marianna: i'll ajust this
20:19 Marianna: fixed
20:19 Gabe: great
20:20 Gabe: the rest is okay
20:20 Marianna: Okay :3
20:21 Gabe: I just gotta recheck a mapset quick
20:22 Marianna: Have something in the others diffs?
20:22 Gabe: brb
20:22 Marianna: Okay '3'
20:36 *Gabe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1359365 AOA - Heart Attack [Hard]]
20:36 Gabe: 01:45:360 (5) - Would need a drum-addition whistle
20:37 Marianna: fixed
20:40 *Gabe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1360096 AOA - Heart Attack [Normal]]
20:40 Gabe: 01:24:884 (1,2) - Blanket?
20:41 Marianna: fixed
20:42 Gabe: all good

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1. 00:24:170 (2) - Whistle imo é melhor que finish. Sei que é pra enfatizar o hey e tal masssssssssssss eu considero incômodo esse finish pra esse propósito. Um whistle com vol. maior seems enough. Isso rola em outras partes do mapa também (acho que pra todos os heys?), então o mesmo vale pra esses casos
2. 00:27:742 (1) - ^
3. 00:30:361 (2) - Drum whistle me soa mais apropriado também
4. 00:35:361 (1,2) - Mesma coisa, eu acho que whistles fazem o trabalho melhor que finishes
5. 00:36:789 (3) - Podia ter um whistle junto com o clap pra abranger o novo verso. Mesmo seguindo o instrumental, você consegue juntar os dois em um aqui, tirando quaisquer "problemas"
6. 00:37:265 (1) - Aqui que eu acho que combina o finish (que já tem)
7. 00:40:599 (3) - Eu acho que se o soft whistle estivesse na head e o drum no tail, soaria melhor
8. 00:50:599 (1) - Testa um whistle na head também
9. 00:57:742 (4) - Whistle nos dois extremos enfatiza essa parte juntando o instrumento e o vocal
10. 01:13:932 (2) - Acho que devia ter um whistle igual o slider anterior
11. 01:33:456 (2,3) - Sei que isso implica em arrumar o resto do mapa e é nazi/gay af, mas isso não podia estar um pixel pra direita e ficar mais bonitinho?
12. 02:01:075 (1,2) - Podia ter whistles junto com os claps também, mas ai creio que precisariam ter um whistles logo a frente também, antes do kiai

1. 00:04:884 (1) - Berro a primeira nota não devia ter algum hitsound?
2. 01:00:123 (1,2) - O primeiro podia ter whistles, o segundo podia ter whistle (além do clap) na head e clap na tail
3. 01:06:075 (1,2) - Aqui você usou whistles pro vocal, então, justificando o ^
4. 01:53:456 (1,2) - ^^
5. 02:01:075 (1,2) - parapara

1. 01:32:980 (2) - ERRRRRRRRRRRRRROU (stack)
2. 01:40:599 (2) - 1 pixel pra direita fica pica
3. 01:52:504 (3) - O apropriado seria seguir o movimento atual do cursor, então move um pixel pra direita
4. 02:07:980 (2) - Ctrl+G não deixaria o movimento bem mais simples, ajudando os jogadores?
5. 02:15:242 (3,4) - Eu acho que dá pra melhorar esse blanket se desligar o grid

Pulse wrote:

01:52:504 (3) - O apropriado seria seguir o movimento atual do cursor, então move um pixel pra direita

Marianna wrote:

Obg pelo mod @Pulse, arrumei muitas coisas, mas na mesma medida não, há muitas coisas que são questão de gosto e há algo que eu não entendi:

Pulse wrote:

01:52:504 (3) - O apropriado seria seguir o movimento atual do cursor, então move um pixel pra direita

Obg pela star também <3

Pulse wrote:

É extra minor suggestion, mas esse arrombadinho 1 pixel pro lado faz uma mudança sutil (mas agradável pra mim) em como você movimenta o cursor. Como você tende a continuar o movimento mas o ds é baixo, você pode acabar ficando próximo de errar o click no sliderstart, e se você movesse o slider, você teria 0 preocupação com esse possível acaso.

Movimento com o slider atual, note onde está o cursor:

Considerando que muitos tem o click atrasado, seu cursor estaria geralmente ali. É BEM difícil passar demais e errar a nota, mas a nossa tendência de prosseguir com o movimento já nos inclina a uma aim propícia a erros. Se você jogar ele um pixel pra direita, você tem uma margem de erro bem mais confortável, note:

Irreversible wrote:

Could you provide me a full reply? Most of the things don't seem to be remained!

Irreversible wrote:

[Insane]

00:00:361 - This sounds rly fun to map tbh XD
00:06:313 (4,1) - blanket fixed (sorry, i'm really bad with blankets)
00:14:408 (1,2) - Lower the spacing a bit here to make 00:14:408 (1,2) - and 00:15:123 (3,4) - more consistent? fixed
00:16:313 (1) - I suggest that you enhance the wave a bit more, itll look better. fixed
00:19:527 (5) - visible spacing error fixed
00:22:027 (1,2) - If you compare this to 00:22:980 (3,4) - you can see 3 and 4 have a bigger visual spacing. Consistency should be better here, unless you had something in mind but I doubt it fixed (i copy pasted they and make some ajusts
00:25:837 (1,2) - blanket fixed
00:27:146 (4) - Looks slightly off, you should bring them into a curvy line fixed
00:37:265 (1,2,3,4) - I like this spacing, it seems interesting but 00:39:170 (1,2) - seem veeery underspaced and might be misread. Please go over that again fixed the way i understanded
00:40:123 (3,4,5,6,7) - I feel like that is very overmapped... try to place the rhythm again, i can assist if needed
00:42:980 (1,2) - Same as above
00:43:932 (3,4,5,6,7) - same
01:05:361 - I suggest a circle here and a longer slider 01:05:599 - here. It will suit the vocals perfeclty! fixed
01:14:408 (3) - Don't you wanna follow the vocals a bit more here and move this back by 1/4? Adjust the spacing if you do. I like that part
01:17:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This also doesn't reaaally follow the song that well.. something is just missing 01:18:099 - , and then the overmap is a bit heavy imo! like i've sayied before, i get some testplays and, y'know xD
01:22:027 (3) - same as above
02:35:837 (3) - double clap intended? fixed
02:39:170 (1,2) - I knowww you don't have to follow the vocals but somehow i feel like there's so much lost potential XD I'd really like to keep this soft part
02:57:265 (1,2,3) - cooool thanks <3

The map itself is okay, buuuut you have to do some polishing homework, and please check out the rhythm issues! Sometimes it repeats and i didn't list it, so pelase go over the map yourself.

Hard and normal were good :p call me

Bakari wrote:

o, Irre ninja'd me. I'll koalify, then

Irreversible wrote:

short irc, let's go!

1. 00:19:170 (4,5,6) - a single 3/4 slider with a reverse would actually fit better with the context of slow part and low-density rhythm.
2. 02:27:742 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ♥

1. I still can't see how the difficulty name relates to the song. Probably would expect some explanation on that.
2. 00:43:932 (3,4,5) - the 1/4 jump is a little confusing and can be hard to read? I was thinking of something a little easier to read, maybe like this?
   note: I'd also lower spacing for 00:49:646 (3,4) - to ease players into more intense jumps later in the kiais
3. 02:57:265 (1,2,3) - yesss ♥

M a r v o l l o wrote:

Grats