nanobii - HYPERDRIVE [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Ascendance

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Topic Starter

Ascendance 2017-07-14T17:57:08+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, August 20, 2017 at 6:27:54 AM

Artist: nanobii
Title: HYPERDRIVE
Source: osu!
Tags: happycore happy hardcore hyper drive alienflybot afb monthly beatmapping competition #14 mbc J-NERATION 3 JNCD-0003
BPM: 174
Filesize: 4926kb
Play Time: 03:14
Difficulties Available:

Overdose (5.39 stars, 620 notes)
Platter (3.07 stars, 393 notes)
Rain (4.18 stars, 516 notes)
Salad (2.03 stars, 408 notes)

Download: nanobii - HYPERDRIVE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#116 Mapset / Ranked #23
nanobii - HYPERDRIVE
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Pending on July 14, 2017

Bubbled on August 15, 2017 by ZiRoX

Qualified on August 19, 2017 by F D Flourite

Disqualified on August 19, 2017 by JBHyperion

Bubbled on August 20, 2017 by - Magic Bomb -

Qualified on August 21, 2017 by ZiRoX

Salad : By alienflybot

Platter : By Ascendance

Rain : By Ascendance

Overdose : By Ascendance

Hitsounds : By alienflybot

Banner : By Sing

Last edited by Ascendance 2017-08-22T01:54:20+00:00, edited 29 times in total.

Sanyi

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Sanyi 2017-07-14T18:04:58+00:00

congrats on winning

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

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Ascendance 2017-07-15T08:39:07+00:00

Sanyi wrote:
congrats on winning

Thank you

Affirmation

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Affirmation 2017-07-15T10:12:15+00:00

Gratz, Winner!

tasuke912

Former osu!taiko Champion: 2018

1,347 posts

Joined June 2013

tasuke912 2017-07-15T10:15:57+00:00

Congraz!

Sanyi

236 posts

Joined November 2015

Sanyi 2017-07-15T10:29:36+00:00

Shouldn't the Salad be named AFB's Salad?

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

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autofanboy 2017-07-15T13:01:59+00:00

Sanyi wrote:
Shouldn't the Salad be named AFB's Salad?

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

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Ascendance 2017-07-15T16:20:18+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
Gratz, Winner!

Thanks!

tasuke912 wrote:
Congraz!

Thank youuuuu

Sanyi wrote:
Shouldn't the Salad be named AFB's Salad?

In most MBC entries, prefixes are entirely removed as they are designed to be bundled with the game and also accessible to new players. Because of this, I decided to leave AFB's prefix out, but if he really doesn't like that I have no issues readding it.

Moeruattack

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Moeruattack 2017-07-15T16:57:14+00:00

Gratz

Ascendance

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Ascendance 2017-07-15T17:00:52+00:00

murutattack wrote:
Gratz

Thanks!

Fawx

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Fawx 2017-07-15T20:33:18+00:00

Coolio

Grats and all uwu

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

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Ascendance 2017-07-15T21:27:26+00:00

Fawx wrote:
Coolio

Grats and all uwu

Thanks desu

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-07-26T10:01:15+00:00

helo

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[

General]

Combo Colors

Add custom ones in. You may copy the following code into the corresponding spaces in the .osu files:
```
Combo1 : 30,205,223
Combo2 : 253,193,128
Combo3 : 202,131,202
Combo4 : 69,177,158
```
Metadata
With regard to the song name, which one is correct: HYPERDRIVE, HYPER DRIVE or HYPER*DRIVE? Maybe we need to confirm it (or actually osu! has something to say?)
For the tags, add: J-NERATION 3 , JNCD-0003

Design
Remove Countdown and disable Widescreen Support in all of the difficulties.

[

Salad]

the best diff in the entire universe

[

Platter]

Gameplay

00:10:689 (8,1) - Maybe a HDash here? To state the stanza change.
00:32:586 (3,1) - ^, to fix this: Firstly, move 00:33:103 (1,2,3,4) - to x:304 ; Secondly, change the pattern to something like *this so the HDash can be implemented.
00:37:931 (4,1) - At least increase the distance here so a dash is required. The current one can be caught by walking, which doesn't emphasize the Finish hitsound at (1).
00:41:379 (1,2) - Slant them more, the current ones are too straight in gameplay.
00:47:931 (3,4) - Reduce the distance here slightly.
02:38:793 (4,5) - Add HDash here to stay consistent with 01:05:344 (5,6) - . You can do this by first moving 02:37:242 (1,2,3,4) - to x:184 ; then move 02:39:310 (5) - to x:252, for aesthetic you can also use the same slider of (6) ; and 02:39:655 (6) - to x:392. Like *this.

[

Rain]

Gameplay

00:49:310 (3,1) - Missed a HDash, as there are HDashes at 00:43:793 (5,1) - , 00:54:827 (5,1) - and 01:00:344 (3,1) - , which are also the same part of the rhythm. You can fix this by first deleting the note at 00:49:655 - , then copy 00:50:000 (2) - and Ctrl+H, finally move the new slider to x:120 to replace the original slider.
01:03:103 (4,1) - Add a HDash here. Maybe use the slider shape of 01:02:068 (1) - for the note 01:03:103 (4) - , like *this?
01:09:655 (2,3,4) - This pattern is a bit tricky thus far in a Rain. Try to use other patterns here.
01:53:103 (1,2) - Same thing as the one mentioned in Platter, slant the sliders more.
02:05:517 (2,3,4) - ^, this pattern is also very weird so I recommend using other movements after slanting the sliders.
02:23:103 (3,1) - Yup, add a HDash.
02:36:896 (4,1) - ^
02:50:689 (6) - Slant this like 01:16:896 (6) - , the current one is not inclined enough.
03:01:724 (3,1) - HDash to close up?

[

Overdose]

Gameplay

00:33:793 (2) - To be more aesthetic, maybe use the same slider shape of 00:33:103 (1) - here?
00:37:241 (1) - Remove NC.
00:39:310 (6) - , 00:40:689 (7) - ^
01:51:379 (4,1) - Add a dash here. Generally because 01:50:689 - 01:52:931 - this whole part can be FC'ed without dashing, which is too easy as an Overdose.
01:53:103 (1,2,1) - Slant them a bit slightly, so they don't look that straight in gameplay.

Ascendance

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4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ascendance 2017-07-26T18:32:05+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
helo

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable
[ General]

Combo Colors
Add custom ones in. You may copy the following code into the corresponding spaces in the .osu files: done.
Combo1 : 30,205,223
Combo2 : 253,193,128
Combo3 : 202,131,202
Combo4 : 69,177,158
Metadata
With regard to the song name, which one is correct: HYPERDRIVE, HYPER DRIVE or HYPER*DRIVE? Maybe we need to confirm it (or actually osu! has something to say?) I took the one directly from the contest metadata, so I guess this would be correct but I'll have someone double check.
For the tags, add: J-NERATION 3 , JNCD-0003 yeet

Design
Remove Countdown and disable Widescreen Support in all of the difficulties. done
[ Platter]

Gameplay
00:10:689 (8,1) - Maybe a HDash here? To state the stanza change. I increased the dash distance, but it was my intention to have the beginning here with no hdashes.
00:32:586 (3,1) - ^, to fix this: Firstly, move 00:33:103 (1,2,3,4) - to x:304 ; Secondly, change the pattern to something like *this so the HDash can be implemented. I changed it but I tried to keep it closer to my original pattern
00:37:931 (4,1) - At least increase the distance here so a dash is required. The current one can be caught by walking, which doesn't emphasize the Finish hitsound at (1). Sure
00:41:379 (1,2) - Slant them more, the current ones are too straight in gameplay. Done
00:47:931 (3,4) - Reduce the distance here slightly. Yep, fixed the slant on the slider as well
02:38:793 (4,5) - Add HDash here to stay consistent with 01:05:344 (5,6) - . You can do this by first moving 02:37:242 (1,2,3,4) - to x:184 ; then move 02:39:310 (5) - to x:252, for aesthetic you can also use the same slider of (6) ; and 02:39:655 (6) - to x:392. Like *this. Fixed

[ Rain]

Gameplay
00:49:310 (3,1) - Missed a HDash, as there are HDashes at 00:43:793 (5,1) - , 00:54:827 (5,1) - and 01:00:344 (3,1) - , which are also the same part of the rhythm. You can fix this by first deleting the note at 00:49:655 - , then copy 00:50:000 (2) - and Ctrl+H, finally move the new slider to x:120 to replace the original slider. Did something a bit differently here.
01:03:103 (4,1) - Add a HDash here. Maybe use the slider shape of 01:02:068 (1) - for the note 01:03:103 (4) - , like *this? Sure, done.
01:09:655 (2,3,4) - This pattern is a bit tricky thus far in a Rain. Try to use other patterns here. Personally, I don't think it's too challenging, but if someone else points it out, I'll change it for sure
01:53:103 (1,2) - Same thing as the one mentioned in Platter, slant the sliders more. Done
02:05:517 (2,3,4) - ^, this pattern is also very weird so I recommend using other movements after slanting the sliders. Yup
02:23:103 (3,1) - Yup, add a HDash. Added
02:36:896 (4,1) - ^ Done
02:50:689 (6) - Slant this like 01:16:896 (6) - , the current one is not inclined enough. Syre
03:01:724 (3,1) - HDash to close up? Yep

[ Overdose]

Gameplay
00:33:793 (2) - To be more aesthetic, maybe use the same slider shape of 00:33:103 (1) - here? aes
00:37:241 (1) - Remove NC. ye
00:39:310 (6) - , 00:40:689 (7) - ^
01:51:379 (4,1) - Add a dash here. Generally because 01:50:689 - 01:52:931 - this whole part can be FC'ed without dashing, which is too easy as an Overdose. added some dashes
01:53:103 (1,2,1) - Slant them a bit slightly, so they don't look that straight in gameplay. yes

Thanks for modding~

DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-07-29T19:24:08+00:00

NM request from Discord (afb sniped me)

General

Hitsound this beast of a map, duh.

Try a color pallette for combo colors:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 121,255,255
Combo2 : 89,89,255
Combo3 : 255,159,64
Combo4 : 255,128,255

Salad

Your ½ dashes are a bit edgedashy because they can be read as a walk if you're not careful. Raise them to 2.5x instead to gurantee it reads as a dash.

Good Salad

Platter

Your ½ dashes seem a little small to me where some I could easily confuse for walks. Try 2.6x to 2.7x instead.

I don't get why you insist on using hypers that are 1.5x the trigger distance in every Platter you do (or at least the ones in the maps you've given me). Hyperdashes trigger at 3x so your largest hyperdashes should be 3.4x and no higher otherwise it starts to feel like a Rain with the lower AR. Example: Your introductary hyper feels large for a new player to hypers 00:21:724 (3,1) – and should be the basis for emphasis instead of the skill base for the player. 00:31:378 (4,1) – Like here, is where the 3.4x would be appropriate since the sound needs extra emphasis. (I will give credit that your hyperdensity is something I strive for in my Platters, so good job on that)

01:16:896 (6,7,8) – Try .80x spacing to make this a little more comfortable to walk.

01:32:068 (1) – Start this at 01:32:241 – to follow the sound there instead.

01:55:172 (3,4) – Specifically pointing this out when it follows my general comment about hypers because I'm extra triggered by 4x and 5x hypers in a platter. That stuff is for Rains and Overdoses.

02:50:690 (6,7,8) – try .80x spacing

Rain

Personally, I'd tilt the 1/1 sliders a bit because the slider velocity is a little fast just to provide some leniacy when walking. Example, 00:23:275 (1) – is a bit hard because you need to be constant in your movements to catch and even then it feels like you're on the edge of your catcher the entire time.

00:13:103 (4,1) – I don't like this is repeated antiflow three times in a row. I'd CTRL+G (4) and then the reverse slider to accomedate it. A tip one how to do this, you're going to need to make 00:16:551 (1) – flipped to do so from how I did it when playing around with it.

Overdose

Looks good structurely, but some dashes seems a little large to me such as at 00:48:793 (3,4) – and make this distance a little shorter because the note snaps to the larger value on the grid at 02:32:413 (3,4) -

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-08-01T16:31:27+00:00

Made some minor changes in my own difficulty based on Roseus's mod and my own fine tuning.
Thanks for mod!

Fix

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44051
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 83448,88275,194482
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:HYPERDRIVE
TitleUnicode:HYPER★DRIVE
Artist:nanobii
ArtistUnicode:nanobii
Creator:Ascendance
Version:Salad
Source:osu!
Tags:happycore happy hardcore hyper drive alienflybot afb monthly beatmapping competition #14 mbc J-NERATION 3 JNCD-0003
BeatmapID:1357224
BeatmapSetID:639991

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.36
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ascendance 2017-08-02T04:58:46+00:00

Updated!

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2017-08-08T15:09:33+00:00

inb4 the slowest ranking process of a MBC winning entry

You haven't reply to Roseus' mod. Please reply to it before we can do anything.

[General]

Further metadata confirmation is needed?

[Salad]

01:15:172 (2,3) - Kinda confused about it being whether a jump or a walk
01:37:241 (2,3) - want to see a jump here, just like how you did on 03:05:517 (2,3,4) -
01:47:241 (5,1) - I think this movement needs a jump to emphasize, but 01:46:034 (3,4) - doesn't
03:10:345 (1,2,3) - Same ^. The jump point seems kinda weird. I'd like to emphasize 03:11:034 (3) - instead of 03:10:689 (2) - .

[Platter]

00:01:379 (2,1) - Why not make it a jump?
00:27:413 - jump from here to 00:27:586 - is a better option imo. The more emphasized sound is on the stanza
01:31:896 (3) - Probably remove it? I don't understand what to express with this circle.

[Rain]

01:31:034 (1,2) - Suggestion. Your current design makes the jump at a weird timing spot

[Overdose]

01:06:551 (2) - Make this slider slightly turn to the left instead to make the flow on 01:06:551 (2,3) - better? (Just like 01:06:206 (1) - )

I feel like modding a bunch of copypaste things zzz
call me back (for 2nd mod because I'm really tired)

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ascendance 2017-08-08T17:25:50+00:00

RoseusJaeger wrote:
NM request from Discord (afb sniped me)

General

Hitsound this beast of a map, duh. it has hitsounds :0

Try a color pallette for combo colors: It has combo colors also xD
[Colours]
Combo1 : 121,255,255
Combo2 : 89,89,255
Combo3 : 255,159,64
Combo4 : 255,128,255
Platter

Your ½ dashes seem a little small to me where some I could easily confuse for walks. Try 2.6x to 2.7x instead.

I don't get why you insist on using hypers that are 1.5x the trigger distance in every Platter you do (or at least the ones in the maps you've given me). Hyperdashes trigger at 3x so your largest hyperdashes should be 3.4x and no higher otherwise it starts to feel like a Rain with the lower AR. Example: Your introductary hyper feels large for a new player to hypers 00:21:724 (3,1) – and should be the basis for emphasis instead of the skill base for the player. 00:31:378 (4,1) – Like here, is where the 3.4x would be appropriate since the sound needs extra emphasis. (I will give credit that your hyperdensity is something I strive for in my Platters, so good job on that) I'm getting better at less hyper spam B)

01:16:896 (6,7,8) – Try .80x spacing to make this a little more comfortable to walk. reduced a tiny bit

01:32:068 (1) – Start this at 01:32:241 – to follow the sound there instead. sure

01:55:172 (3,4) – Specifically pointing this out when it follows my general comment about hypers because I'm extra triggered by 4x and 5x hypers in a platter. That stuff is for Rains and Overdoses. sorrynasai for this one, these have big noises so I gotta keep em b i g

02:50:690 (6,7,8) – try .80x spacing did something similar to the previous

Rain

Personally, I'd tilt the 1/1 sliders a bit because the slider velocity is a little fast just to provide some leniacy when walking. Example, 00:23:275 (1) – is a bit hard because you need to be constant in your movements to catch and even then it feels like you're on the edge of your catcher the entire time. fixed some specific offenders

00:13:103 (4,1) – I don't like this is repeated antiflow three times in a row. I'd CTRL+G (4) and then the reverse slider to accomedate it. A tip one how to do this, you're going to need to make 00:16:551 (1) – flipped to do so from how I did it when playing around with it. okay

Overdose

Looks good structurely, but some dashes seems a little large to me such as at 00:48:793 (3,4) – and make this distance a little shorter because the note snaps to the larger value on the grid at 02:32:413 (3,4) - ok desu

F D Flourite wrote:
inb4 the slowest ranking process of a MBC winning entry T_T send more BNs

You haven't reply to Roseus' mod. Please reply to it before we can do anything.

[General]
Further metadata confirmation is needed? Not sure, I just used the direct metadata from the contest .osz file.
[Platter]
00:01:379 (2,1) - Why not make it a jump? Sure, done
00:27:413 - jump from here to 00:27:586 - is a better option imo. The more emphasized sound is on the stanza That makes sense if I was following the percussion, but to me the strong downbeat in the synth noises is on 00:27:413 - , making it an acceptable dash
01:31:896 (3) - Probably remove it? I don't understand what to express with this circle. If you delete it, the final sound is there

[Rain]
01:31:034 (1,2) - Suggestion. Your current design makes the jump at a weird timing spot did something a bit differently
[Overdose]
01:06:551 (2) - Make this slider slightly turn to the left instead to make the flow on 01:06:551 (2,3) - better? (Just like 01:06:206 (1) - ) Sure
I feel like modding a bunch of copypaste things zzz
call me back (for 2nd mod because I'm really tired)

Thank you both for modding!

-Sh1n1-

3,404 posts

Joined September 2012

-Sh1n1- 2017-08-08T23:07:12+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
inb4 the slowest ranking process of a MBC winning entry T_T send more BNs

yo!

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-08-09T03:19:18+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
[Salad]
01:15:172 (2,3) - Kinda confused about it being whether a jump or a walk - Moved (3) slightly to the right.
01:37:241 (2,3) - want to see a jump here, just like how you did on 03:05:517 (2,3,4) - Added.
01:47:241 (5,1) - I think this movement needs a jump to emphasize, but 01:46:034 (3,4) - doesn't - Done.
03:10:345 (1,2,3) - Same ^. The jump point seems kinda weird. I'd like to emphasize 03:11:034 (3) - instead of 03:10:689 (2) - . - The dash between (1) and (2) is to emphasize the start of the combo, which is 03:10:345 (1) - . Not making it a 1/2 dash because it would be a bit dense here after such amendment.

Thanks for mod!

Fix

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44051
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:HYPERDRIVE
TitleUnicode:HYPER★DRIVE
Artist:nanobii
ArtistUnicode:nanobii
Creator:Ascendance
Version:Salad
Source:osu!
Tags:happycore happy hardcore hyper drive alienflybot afb monthly beatmapping competition #14 mbc J-NERATION 3 JNCD-0003
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[Difficulty]
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F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2017-08-12T15:33:00+00:00

I still don't see the update of Salad by Ascendance. But I have to be absent for about 3~5 days from tomorrow. So if there's any other BN trying to move it forward, please go ahead.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ascendance 2017-08-12T17:08:31+00:00

Whoops, updated

Also Metadata confirmation:

Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Nelly 2017-08-13T07:50:03+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
inb4 the slowest ranking process of a MBC winning entry

Perfect example of why osu!catch maps are rarely seen in Ranked Status. I may mod your map for an extra support.

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-08-13T16:32:15+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
inb4 the slowest ranking process of a MBC winning entry

Does CBC yuki. contest count? XDDD

I am more than happy to give some quick input on this tomorrow if required.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ascendance 2017-08-13T16:38:43+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
F D Flourite wrote:
inb4 the slowest ranking process of a MBC winning entry
Does CBC yuki. contest count? XDDD

I am more than happy to give some quick input on this tomorrow if required.

Anything helps!

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-08-14T15:15:42+00:00

Some suggestions as promised

General

Hitsounds in the first section 00:00:000 - 00:05:517 - feel a little too quiet for me, perhaps you could buff them 5% or so

Salad

00:02:758 (5) - NC here please, this is 12 fruits without it and your following combos are only 4 beats long instead of 8 here
00:04:137 (7,1) - Unexpectedly high spacing for a walk in the calmest part of the map. Suggest reducing this slightly
00:07:931 (5,1) - Can your first introduction to dash not be a borderline walk with antiflow please? Really confusing for the player considering it's visually similar to the above spacing and requires precision to avoid an overshoot. Ctrl+H the slider and move it slightly closer
00:12:758 (4,1) - 00:15:172 (3,1) - 00:18:965 (6,1) - etc. - Are these intended to be walks? If so, they suffer the same problems I mentioned above, since you increased the SV the spacing is larger than it appears and new players will struggle to walk this. If these are intended dashes, please increase the spacing for better contrast
00:31:379 (3,4) - Unexpected 1/2 dash with antiflow, though this is walkable without too much trouble. A smaller walk with the same direction, or a jump with the antiflow removed like 00:32:586 (7,1) - would work better as this section is still not that intense
00:55:862 (2,3,4,5) - Curve size could be increased for a nicer aesthetic, looks a bit squashed at present
00:58:620 (2,3) - Antiflow dash after a wiggle will really punish new players, even if the kiai is intense this is not expected at all. Ctrl+H (3) would be much more accessible
01:50:000 (3,1) - Even though this is a downbeat, the sound is very weak here and this jump is not expected given your previous emphasis. Giving 01:50:689 (2) - or 01:51:034 (3,4) - 01:52:758 (6,1) - more spacing would fit much better in my opinion
03:05:862 (3,4) - Same as 00:31:379 (3,4) - in the intro
03:12:931 (8,1) - You'll need to leave at least 1 whole beat between the last object and the spinner start to ensure rankability. Suggest starting the spinner at 03:13:275 - or removing 03:12:758 (7) - and starting it at 03:12:931 -

Platter

00:03:792 (3,1) - Appears walkable, but will be quite difficult at this level. Consider increasing the distance here and at 00:05:171 (3,1) - which certainly deserves a dash if 00:00:000 (1,2) - had one due to the increased intensity at the start of the new stanza
00:07:931 (4,1) - Distance could also be increased slightly here for a clearer dash on the high pitch sound
00:42:758 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slightly uncomfortable to walk if you're a little slow on the direction change. I'd reduce these distances a tiny bit, since you're still building up to the kiai here
01:16:982 (7) - Triplet feels forced here, there's no strong sound to support the 1/4 and you didn't do it anywhere previously where it actually was noticeable like 00:43:620 (6) - or where it could have provided more worthwhile emphasis like 00:54:310 (5,6) -
01:31:379 (2) - Feels weird to me that you mapped the slider head to a weak sound with a dash, but the strong sound is on the tail. Then at 01:31:896 (3) - you just skipped the strong sound altogether, presumably to give some more leniency on the spinner. I feel something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8842436 would work better for consistency
02:02:068 (2,3,4) - Kinda weird spacing because they are similar in size and the direction changes can make these much harder than necessary to walk if the player is a little slow to react. Reducing (2,3) and increasing (3,4) would be easier to read imo
02:50:776 (7) - Same as 01:16:982 (7) -
03:06:034 (3,4) - Spacing could be increased on these for a smoother walk, stop-start pattern looks a bit squashed atm

Rain

00:07:931 (4,1) - Maybe personal preference, but I'd have expected a hyper here given how strong this sound is relative to the surrounding ones and certainly compared to your next hyper which is at 00:10:862 (4,1) -
00:21:896 (6,1) - Music is still not that intense here, so given (1) is almost total antiflow, a slightly weaker hyper would be nice to minimise the risk of overshooting and allow the player to get accustomed to the spacing and dash strength

Nothing much to say here, it's pretty solid.

Overdose

00:07:931 (4,1) - Same comment regarding hyper as in Rain
01:37:241 (2,3) - Another place that could really benefit from a hyper, especially if you added a white tick note. Would provide some nice contrast in the otherwise calm section to give it real emphasis it deserves. Could also be applied to 01:40:172 (3,4) - 01:41:551 (6,1) - 01:51:379 (4,1) - since at present, this interlude part feels a little flat to me
02:16:551 (1) - How come you only used a circle here but then followed the last synth note at 02:17:413 (2) - ? Seems weirdly inconsistent when you could have just mapped this part out with a couple more sliders
03:02:931 (4) - Tail here maps such a strong sound, would benefit more from splitting this up and adding a jump imo
03:06:034 (3) - 03:08:793 (4) - NC these for maintaining your 4-beat pattern

Call me back if necessary. Hope these suggestions helped! (:

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

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Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-08-14T17:09:18+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Some suggestions as promised

General
Hitsounds in the first section 00:00:000 - 00:05:517 - feel a little too quiet for me, perhaps you could buff them 5% or so - Increased volume

Salad
00:02:758 (5) - NC here please, this is 12 fruits without it and your following combos are only 4 beats long instead of 8 here - Done
00:04:137 (7,1) - Unexpectedly high spacing for a walk in the calmest part of the map. Suggest reducing this slightly - Not really a difficult part in my opinion. It is simple to follow and the slider velocity is actually reduced to a suitable amount.
As a good finisher before entering the next stanza, this would be fit.
00:07:931 (5,1) - Can your first introduction to dash not be a borderline walk with antiflow please? Really confusing for the player considering it's visually similar to the above spacing and requires precision to avoid an overshoot. Ctrl+H the slider and move it slightly closer - Moved (5) closer to (4) so the movement of (4,5) is actually a walk, giving more time for players to react.
00:12:758 (4,1) - 00:15:172 (3,1) - 00:18:965 (6,1) - etc. - Are these intended to be walks? If so, they suffer the same problems I mentioned above, since you increased the SV the spacing is larger than it appears and new players will struggle to walk this. If these are intended dashes, please increase the spacing for better contrast - Basically these are not difficult to catch, most of them are having simple paths and are made for Slider Tick Rate 1 (but Ascendance decided to use Slider Tick Rate 2 to stay consistent with other difficulties. I actually prefer using Tick 1 so changing to that would be a lot easier, while not lacking of rhythmical movements.
00:31:379 (3,4) - Unexpected 1/2 dash with antiflow, though this is walkable without too much trouble. A smaller walk with the same direction, or a jump with the antiflow removed like 00:32:586 (7,1) - would work better as this section is still not that intense - Reduced the distance of (2,3) to make it easier, though not changing the pattern, it is still easy to follow.
00:55:862 (2,3,4,5) - Curve size could be increased for a nicer aesthetic, looks a bit squashed at present - Fine
00:58:620 (2,3) - Antiflow dash after a wiggle will really punish new players, even if the kiai is intense this is not expected at all. Ctrl+H (3) would be much more accessible - Doesn't that makes it even harder? The current one is not really that hard to follow... I will just slant 00:58:620 (2) - a bit so it doesn't provide that many movements.
01:50:000 (3,1) - Even though this is a downbeat, the sound is very weak here and this jump is not expected given your previous emphasis. Giving 01:50:689 (2) - or 01:51:034 (3,4) - 01:52:758 (6,1) - more spacing would fit much better in my opinion - Changed this pattern.
03:05:862 (3,4) - Same as 00:31:379 (3,4) - in the intro - Done
03:12:931 (8,1) - You'll need to leave at least 1 whole beat between the last object and the spinner start to ensure rankability. Suggest starting the spinner at 03:13:275 - or removing 03:12:758 (7) - and starting it at 03:12:931 - Seems fair.

Thanks for mod!

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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ascendance 2017-08-14T18:34:09+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Some suggestions as promised

General
Hitsounds in the first section 00:00:000 - 00:05:517 - feel a little too quiet for me, perhaps you could buff them 5% or so

Platter
00:03:792 (3,1) - Appears walkable, but will be quite difficult at this level. Consider increasing the distance here and at 00:05:171 (3,1) - which certainly deserves a dash if 00:00:000 (1,2) - had one due to the increased intensity at the start of the new stanza Yup, did both
00:07:931 (4,1) - Distance could also be increased slightly here for a clearer dash on the high pitch sound Increased a bit!
00:42:758 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slightly uncomfortable to walk if you're a little slow on the direction change. I'd reduce these distances a tiny bit, since you're still building up to the kiai here reduced them just a little bit since I don't feel it's too bad rn
01:16:982 (7) - Triplet feels forced here, there's no strong sound to support the 1/4 and you didn't do it anywhere previously where it actually was noticeable like 00:43:620 (6) - or where it could have provided more worthwhile emphasis like 00:54:310 (5,6) - Yeah, you're right. I mapped this after the rain so I was probably in the groove of it
01:31:379 (2) - Feels weird to me that you mapped the slider head to a weak sound with a dash, but the strong sound is on the tail. Then at 01:31:896 (3) - you just skipped the strong sound altogether, presumably to give some more leniency on the spinner. I feel something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8842436 would work better for consistency Even though it's a weaker sound in that string of notes, it does act as a downbeat and it gives a better lead-in to the spinner rather than just a walk. For me, this dash acts as the "end" of this section of music.
02:02:068 (2,3,4) - Kinda weird spacing because they are similar in size and the direction changes can make these much harder than necessary to walk if the player is a little slow to react. Reducing (2,3) and increasing (3,4) would be easier to read imo Agreed, fixed!
02:50:776 (7) - Same as 01:16:982 (7) - dab
03:06:034 (3,4) - Spacing could be increased on these for a smoother walk, stop-start pattern looks a bit squashed atm right, done!

Rain
00:07:931 (4,1) - Maybe personal preference, but I'd have expected a hyper here given how strong this sound is relative to the surrounding ones and certainly compared to your next hyper which is at 00:10:862 (4,1) - wanna discuss with you later
00:21:896 (6,1) - Music is still not that intense here, so given (1) is almost total antiflow, a slightly weaker hyper would be nice to minimise the risk of overshooting and allow the player to get accustomed to the spacing and dash strength Reduced a bit
Nothing much to say here, it's pretty solid.

Overdose
00:07:931 (4,1) - Same comment regarding hyper as in Rain Same
01:37:241 (2,3) - Another place that could really benefit from a hyper, especially if you added a white tick note. Would provide some nice contrast in the otherwise calm section to give it real emphasis it deserves. Could also be applied to 01:40:172 (3,4) - 01:41:551 (6,1) - 01:51:379 (4,1) - since at present, this interlude part feels a little flat to me Sure, added them
02:16:551 (1) - How come you only used a circle here but then followed the last synth note at 02:17:413 (2) - ? Seems weirdly inconsistent when you could have just mapped this part out with a couple more sliders slidered it up
03:02:931 (4) - Tail here maps such a strong sound, would benefit more from splitting this up and adding a jump imo sure, did it to the rest too
03:06:034 (3) - 03:08:793 (4) - NC these for maintaining your 4-beat pattern donedone!
Call me back if necessary. Hope these suggestions helped! (:

Thanks a lot!

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,052 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2017-08-14T23:08:57+00:00

Checking this.

[Salad]

00:22:068 (1,2) - If you intended this (and all the similar patterns to be dashed), they would benefit from a couple grid spaces more of distance, to make it even clearer.
00:31:034 (2,3,1) - I don't consider this the best pattern to introduce the first 1/2 dash in this diff, as it requires 2 direction changes. I would either delete (3) and rearrange stuff, or Ctrl+H 00:31:551 (1,2,3) - and move it towards the center to keep the 1/2 dash.
00:42:758 (1,2,1) - Although I understand that you placed the circle on the red tick because the higher pitched sound is there, to me it sounds way better on the white tick. Also, the pattern requires 2 direction changes, which feels a bit too uncomfortable to play. So I suggest you move (2) to the white tick, have it follow the movement of the slider, and then you can Ctrl+H 00:44:137 (1) - and play with the following notes around a bit.
00:58:620 (2) - I'd slant this slider a bit more, so that it does look like you can stay still on it to catch it. With the current angle, some players might try to wiggle it which will make the following dash a bit hard to do.
01:11:724 (1,2) - I'd prefer if you had the slider first, as it adds some leniency to the 1/2 dash, and it also follows the music a bit as there's a held sound in the downbeat. Also applies for similar parts, such as 01:25:517 (1,2) - .
01:23:448 (2,3) - and 01:25:862 (2,3) - This part of the song is calm, so the dashes aren't really fitting here.
01:54:137 (3,1) - (1) isn't that intense to require a dash on this, so I'd remove it.
02:13:792 (1,2) - This is a rather ambiguous distance, and the sound at (2) is rather weak, so I'd reduce the distance to make the walk clearer.
02:57:241 (2,3) - and 02:59:655 (2,3) - same as previously mentioned.
03:07:413 (7,1) - This looks rather weird, and it's inconsistent with a previous similar pattern that had no dash at all (01:34:482 (2,3) - ), so I'd make it walkable.

[Platter]

00:00:000 (1,2,1) - The distances between these objects are so different, yet the sounds are exactly the same. The first one feels way to large, and it can really throw players off being the first jump of the map, while the second one falls a bit short. I'd move 00:00:000 (1,2) - around so the distances are ~x1.9 between each object.
00:06:379 (3) - Why is there a dash to this? The song isn't really calling it and it's inconsistent with all your previous patterning. I'd Ctrl+G it.
00:10:517 (7,8) - This dash feels slightly off on its own, since it's on an upbeat. If anything, I would have expected a dash between 00:10:172 (5,6) - .
00:12:413 (5,6) - Rather ambiguous distance, I'd reduce it a bit to make it more walkable, since having two dashes in a row doesn't fit your patterning for this section.
00:27:068 (5,1) - This patterns feels odd because the jump emphasizes the synth, while the slider end focuses on the drums. I'd suggest either extending the (1) slider to the red tick, so it follows the synth and keeps the focus on it, or even extend it to the white tick where (2) starts and map a circle on 00:28:275 - (or a slider covering both that note and (3)).
00:50:862 (3,4) - The dash between these notes is really unfitting, as the sound on the red tick is really weak. Not to mention, the whole movement is unexpected because for a similar sound you had a slider covering it (00:45:344 (3) - ). So I'd go for consistency here and keep the slider.
00:57:931 (1,2) - Again, the direction change here is really uncalled for. I'd just go for the pattern that you used previously in 00:46:896 (1,2,3) - .
01:16:379 (5,6,7) - I'd reduce the distance between these objects to add some leniency to the pattern, since it's two direction changes leading to a HDash.
01:22:758 (1,2) - I'd go for slider and then circle instead, to add leniency and consistency to the pattern.
01:31:379 (2,3) - This dash is really uncalled, and I think the circle sounds way better on the following white tick.
01:40:517 (3,4) - Either a repeat slider or going for slider > circle fits better.
01:52:241 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I find it rather weird that you changed the focus from the synth to the stuff in the back. I would replace 01:52:931 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - with two 3/2 sliders like 01:51:551 (1,2) - , and then switch the focus at 01:54:482 (1,2,3,4) -.
02:32:586 (8,1,2) - Same suggestion as in 00:58:793 (2,3).
02:50:173 (5,6,7) - Similar stuff as mentioned for 01:16:379 (5,6,7) -.
02:56:551 (1,2) - And same stuff as in 01:22:758 (1,2) -.
03:04:827 (1,2) - This distance is a bit ambiguous to me. I'd move (2) to the right a a bit to make it walkable, while making a larger jump to (3) which probably deserves it due to its higher pitch.

[Rain]

00:21:379 (5,6) - I'd put the circle first and then the repeat slider, it fits the music better. Try this:
SPOILER
00:26:034 (1) - Since some people wish death to things or persons they don't agree with, death to extended sliders!
00:31:551 (1) - ^
00:39:827 (1) - This feels so off, considering you've used C-shaped sliders for all the sounds like this, even throughout the Kiai. And the antiflow makes it harsher than it should be.
00:56:379 (1) - ^Same.
01:22:758 (1,2) - Replace with a single 1/1 slider for consistency please.
01:33:620 (5,1) - This could use a larger distance, to emphasize the change in the song.
01:28:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - To me the strongest sounds land on (4) and (5)'s tail (kinda like you did on 01:29:655 (1,2,3) - ), so moving the repeat slider 1/2 earlier and taking one repeat off follows the music more closely (and, of course, re-adding the circle on 01:29:310 - ). The same applies for 01:31:034 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:32:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - , although in this last one the sounds are weaker, but the player would expect it for consistency.
01:35:000 (3) - One could expect a larger distance to this, based on its pitch. Maybe Ctrl+G it?
01:38:275 (2,3) - I think this sounds slightly better if you take the circle away and move the slider 1/2 earlier. If you do this, you should move both sliders a bit to the right.
01:40:517 (1,2) - Slider first follows the music in a better way, and it's more consistent with the rest of your patterns.
01:50:344 (1) - I would remove this note, as it takes emphasis away from the synth, which you have been following throughout this section.
01:53:103 (1,2) - Same comment as done for the Platter.
02:37:241 (1,2,3,4) - Place (4) closer to the triplet, as it can be easy to miss considering the antiflow movement.

[Overdose]

00:06:551 (4,1) - This should have a larger distance for consistency with the previous ones. It currently feels a bit underwhelming.
00:22:413 (2,3) - This should be slider first and circle after it, to follow the music better. You're missing a relatively strong sound at 00:22:758 - the way it is now.
00:25:172 (2,3) - Similar stuff here. Two 1/2 sliders could do.
00:26:034 (1) - and 00:31:551 (1) - :^)
00:38:620 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Really weird that you have an HDash between (1,2) and not between (5,1), considering (1) is stronger (and is emphasized that way with your afb's hitsounding
00:48:275 (1,2) - This plays and sounds really weird to me, without being overmapped. I would have gone for a 1/2 repeat or something like you did on 00:46:896 (1,2) - . Also applies for the same pattern in the second half of the Kiai.
01:07:586 (1,2,3) - It's weird that the distances are so similar when (3) is stronger. You could even have an HDash to it.
01:18:448 (5,1) - This is way too harsh for what the section is. I'd go for normal flow here.
01:29:655 (1,2,3,4) - The change in spacing from the previous pattern feels a bit sudden, so I'd reduce the distance here.
01:50:344 (1) - Same comment as in Rain.
01:55:517 (3) - In this case I'm not against the extended slider, but having a x7.4 1/4 HDash is way overdoing it. Maybe you can curve the slider a bit more so the strenght of the HDash isn't that much. Also, it's easy to overshoot considering the next section has lower SV.
02:22:068 (1,2,3) - Same comment as in the previous Kiai.
02:33:103 (1,2,3,4) - ^Same stuff. Also, it doesn't make sense that (1,2) is larger than (4,5) since (5) is stronger.
02:41:206 (5,1) - Again, the harsh antiflow doesn't fit the section.
02:51:034 (1) - ^

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-08-15T04:26:53+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Checking this.

[Salad]
00:22:068 (1,2) - If you intended this (and all the similar patterns to be dashed), they would benefit from a couple grid spaces more of distance, to make it even clearer. - Fine
00:31:034 (2,3,1) - I don't consider this the best pattern to introduce the first 1/2 dash in this diff, as it requires 2 direction changes. I would either delete (3) and rearrange stuff, or Ctrl+H 00:31:551 (1,2,3) - and move it towards the center to keep the 1/2 dash. - Changed in another way.
00:42:758 (1,2,1) - Although I understand that you placed the circle on the red tick because the higher pitched sound is there, to me it sounds way better on the white tick. Also, the pattern requires 2 direction changes, which feels a bit too uncomfortable to play. So I suggest you move (2) to the white tick, have it follow the movement of the slider, and then you can Ctrl+H 00:44:137 (1) - and play with the following notes around a bit. - Changed in another way.
00:58:620 (2) - I'd slant this slider a bit more, so that it does look like you can stay still on it to catch it. With the current angle, some players might try to wiggle it which will make the following dash a bit hard to do. - Not going to change, I have made small changes in the previous mod stating that the movements here are too large. Now I think this is the state that can satisfy both difficulty and the flow here.
01:11:724 (1,2) - I'd prefer if you had the slider first, as it adds some leniency to the 1/2 dash, and it also follows the music a bit as there's a held sound in the downbeat. Also applies for similar parts, such as 01:25:517 (1,2) - . - Done for the first one, but I am not going to change for the second part, as I want to keep the curve pattern: 01:24:137 (3,4,5,6,1) - , also the current state is clearer to read.
01:23:448 (2,3) - and 01:25:862 (2,3) - This part of the song is calm, so the dashes aren't really fitting here. - Reduced both distance and made small changes to associated patterns.
01:54:137 (3,1) - (1) isn't that intense to require a dash on this, so I'd remove it. - I will keep this one, too hard to make changes as it will probably ruin the whole pattern. Besides the current one can act as a build-up.
02:13:792 (1,2) - This is a rather ambiguous distance, and the sound at (2) is rather weak, so I'd reduce the distance to make the walk clearer. - Increased distance instead to a sure-dash. Removing dash seems weird here as I am trying to create a rhythm here, dashing between every stanzas starting from 02:12:413 - .
02:57:241 (2,3) - and 02:59:655 (2,3) - same as previously mentioned. - Done
03:07:413 (7,1) - This looks rather weird, and it's inconsistent with a previous similar pattern that had no dash at all (01:34:482 (2,3) - ), so I'd make it walkable. - I still think that a dash fits here. The sound at 03:07:931 - is louder than the one you cited. Also I think it works as a good build-up at the end.

Thanks for mod!

Update

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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

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Joined July 2013

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Ascendance 2017-08-15T20:01:57+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Checking this.

[Platter]
00:00:000 (1,2,1) - The distances between these objects are so different, yet the sounds are exactly the same. The first one feels way to large, and it can really throw players off being the first jump of the map, while the second one falls a bit short. I'd move 00:00:000 (1,2) - around so the distances are ~x1.9 between each object. Fixed
00:06:379 (3) - Why is there a dash to this? The song isn't really calling it and it's inconsistent with all your previous patterning. I'd Ctrl+G it. Didn't ctrl+g, but removed the dash to make a different shape
00:10:517 (7,8) - This dash feels slightly off on its own, since it's on an upbeat. If anything, I would have expected a dash between 00:10:172 (5,6) - . Dash is there because it's the strongest note in that sequence, and I'd like to create a small lead-in to 00:10:689 (8,1) - .
00:12:413 (5,6) - Rather ambiguous distance, I'd reduce it a bit to make it more walkable, since having two dashes in a row doesn't fit your patterning for this section. Fixed!
00:27:068 (5,1) - This patterns feels odd because the jump emphasizes the synth, while the slider end focuses on the drums. I'd suggest either extending the (1) slider to the red tick, so it follows the synth and keeps the focus on it, or even extend it to the white tick where (2) starts and map a circle on 00:28:275 - (or a slider covering both that note and (3)). Took the first option
00:50:862 (3,4) - The dash between these notes is really unfitting, as the sound on the red tick is really weak. Not to mention, the whole movement is unexpected because for a similar sound you had a slider covering it (00:45:344 (3) - ). So I'd go for consistency here and keep the slider. Yeah, reduced the distance and changed the shape a bit
00:57:931 (1,2) - Again, the direction change here is really uncalled for. I'd just go for the pattern that you used previously in 00:46:896 (1,2,3) - . Consistency!
01:16:379 (5,6,7) - I'd reduce the distance between these objects to add some leniency to the pattern, since it's two direction changes leading to a HDash.It's a pretty high intensity section so I wanna keep that aspect of it, but I reduced it a little
01:22:758 (1,2) - I'd go for slider and then circle instead, to add leniency and consistency to the pattern. Gonna keep this since I want the hdash to be easier (01:22:413 (6,1) -) and have 01:23:103 (2) - emphasize that increase in pitch.
01:31:379 (2,3) - This dash is really uncalled, and I think the circle sounds way better on the following white tick. fixed the dash but kept the timeline placement, I'm emphasizing the foreground stuff rather than the bg
01:40:517 (3,4) - Either a repeat slider or going for slider > circle fits better. repeat slider it is
01:52:241 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I find it rather weird that you changed the focus from the synth to the stuff in the back. I would replace 01:52:931 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - with two 3/2 sliders like 01:51:551 (1,2) - , and then switch the focus at 01:54:482 (1,2,3,4) -. I do this in all diffs mainly because the introduction of the gradually increasing pitch of the synth is something to emphasize and bring out here. This increase also gives a significant buildup into the next section of music at 01:55:862 (1) - , so it feels really nice to play and not super abrupt.
02:32:586 (8,1,2) - Same suggestion as in 00:58:793 (2,3). done
02:50:173 (5,6,7) - Similar stuff as mentioned for 01:16:379 (5,6,7) -. same deal
02:56:551 (1,2) - And same stuff as in 01:22:758 (1,2) -. same thing
03:04:827 (1,2) - This distance is a bit ambiguous to me. I'd move (2) to the right a a bit to make it walkable, while making a larger jump to (3) which probably deserves it due to its higher pitch. Agreed
[Rain]
00:21:379 (5,6) - I'd put the circle first and then the repeat slider, it fits the music better. Try this: switched the timeline and did something slightly different for placement
SPOILER
00:26:034 (1) - Since some people wish death to things or persons they don't agree with, death to extended sliders! Normally I'd agree with you, but this extended slider is representing a held sound, which is why I'll keep it. There's no extended slider abuse in this mapset besides for rhythms that already exist in the song!
00:31:551 (1) - ^ beep boop
00:39:827 (1) - This feels so off, considering you've used C-shaped sliders for all the sounds like this, even throughout the Kiai. And the antiflow makes it harsher than it should be. I've given it some curve so that way it isn't as harsh
00:56:379 (1) - ^Same. same!
01:22:758 (1,2) - Replace with a single 1/1 slider for consistency please. I want it like this because 01:23:103 (2,3,4) - captures the high pitched notes really well, rather than having the start of it land on a sliderend
01:33:620 (5,1) - This could use a larger distance, to emphasize the change in the song. agree!
01:28:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - To me the strongest sounds land on (4) and (5)'s tail (kinda like you did on 01:29:655 (1,2,3) - ), so moving the repeat slider 1/2 earlier and taking one repeat off follows the music more closely (and, of course, re-adding the circle on 01:29:310 - ). The same applies for 01:31:034 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:32:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - , although in this last one the sounds are weaker, but the player would expect it for consistency. Mainly this part of the song was emphasized in the back and forth sounds (i.e. 01:28:965 (5) - ) because I couldn't really understand what to follow here.
I didn't do much about moving around things on the timeline, but I did change some distances more appropriately
01:35:000 (3) - One could expect a larger distance to this, based on its pitch. Maybe Ctrl+G it? Yup
01:38:275 (2,3) - I think this sounds slightly better if you take the circle away and move the slider 1/2 earlier. If you do this, you should move both sliders a bit to the right. yeeeeeeep
01:40:517 (1,2) - Slider first follows the music in a better way, and it's more consistent with the rest of your patterns. Slider is there for the held note though, keeping this one!
01:50:344 (1) - I would remove this note, as it takes emphasis away from the synth, which you have been following throughout this section. Important downbeat though, and also it has a small crescendo here in pitch
01:53:103 (1,2) - Same comment as done for the Platter. same as there
02:37:241 (1,2,3,4) - Place (4) closer to the triplet, as it can be easy to miss considering the antiflow movement. fixed

[Overdose]
00:06:551 (4,1) - This should have a larger distance for consistency with the previous ones. It currently feels a bit underwhelming. Fixed I hope
00:22:413 (2,3) - This should be slider first and circle after it, to follow the music better. You're missing a relatively strong sound at 00:22:758 - the way it is now. sure, fixed
00:25:172 (2,3) - Similar stuff here. Two 1/2 sliders could do. personally believe this one is fine
00:26:034 (1) - and 00:31:551 (1) - :^) same explanation as in rain
00:38:620 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Really weird that you have an HDash between (1,2) and not between (5,1), considering (1) is stronger (and is emphasized that way with your afb's hitsounding Everyone gets an hdash now
00:48:275 (1,2) - This plays and sounds really weird to me, without being overmapped. I would have gone for a 1/2 repeat or something like you did on 00:46:896 (1,2) - . Also applies for the same pattern in the second half of the Kiai. changed the way it plays but I kept the triplet because improvising rhythms (imo) is necessary when the song is repetitive. It adds flair and uniqueness!
01:07:586 (1,2,3) - It's weird that the distances are so similar when (3) is stronger. You could even have an HDash to it. No hdash, but I increased the distance!
01:18:448 (5,1) - This is way too harsh for what the section is. I'd go for normal flow here. fixfix
01:29:655 (1,2,3,4) - The change in spacing from the previous pattern feels a bit sudden, so I'd reduce the distance here. reduced a bit
01:50:344 (1) - Same comment as in Rain. same!
01:55:517 (3) - In this case I'm not against the extended slider, but having a x7.4 1/4 HDash is way overdoing it. Maybe you can curve the slider a bit more so the strenght of the HDash isn't that much. Also, it's easy to overshoot considering the next section has lower SV. changed it up a bit
02:22:068 (1,2,3) - Same comment as in the previous Kiai. same as before
02:33:103 (1,2,3,4) - ^Same stuff. Also, it doesn't make sense that (1,2) is larger than (4,5) since (5) is stronger. fixed the distances
02:41:206 (5,1) - Again, the harsh antiflow doesn't fit the section. fix
02:51:034 (1) - ^ this one is okay imo cause strong cymbal and this is the finale of the map pmuch

Thanks for modding!

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,052 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2017-08-16T01:49:25+00:00

Get this to 12 SP lul

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ascendance 2017-08-16T01:50:33+00:00

Speedrank

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,052 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2017-08-16T01:51:08+00:00

Discussed a few last changes with Ascendance. I don't agree with one particular response from alienflybot, something being too hard to apply - which, actually, it isn't because I tried a solution that worked IMO - isn't a reason to deny a suggestion. However, the issue is not that big as to prevent this from being ranked, so I'm still moving it forward.

Bubbled!

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ascendance 2017-08-16T01:54:45+00:00

Good day Elite Mapper :_>

Soul Evans

Elite Mapper

425 posts

Joined June 2014

Soul Evans 2017-08-16T14:57:02+00:00

Goodluck for speedrank

was pretty hard ranking mine

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ascendance 2017-08-17T01:07:15+00:00

Just letting you know the update is due to a bg change, which I confirmed does not need a rebubble:

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2017-08-18T16:06:30+00:00

I'm back Asc boi

NO KD

[Salad]

01:39:137 (6,1) - Swap NC? The strong sound is on the sliderhead of 01:39:137 (6) -
01:54:482 (1) - NC is not needed imo. This place is a build-up. So a fountain for NC would kinda ruin the feeling of build-up: it pours before it accumulates.
01:56:724 - add a circle here or 01:57:068 - here? This section sounds a little bit blank even if it has more rhythm than following sections. (For example, you just self-made a sound at 01:59:827 - where there's probably nothing to express)
02:02:241 - or 02:02:586 - same ^
03:11:034 (3,1) - could've been a jump here
00:42:068 (3,1) - A little bit ambiguous distance actually. It can be larger.
01:42:413 (6) - Ctrl+G? A direction change may be needed.

TBC~ sleep zzz

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-08-19T04:10:51+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
I'm back Asc boi

NO KD

[Salad]
01:39:137 (6,1) - Swap NC? The strong sound is on the sliderhead of 01:39:137 (6) - I think 01:39:655 - is the point where transition occurs so I am not changing this.
01:54:482 (1) - NC is not needed imo. This place is a build-up. So a fountain for NC would kinda ruin the feeling of build-up: it pours before it accumulates. - Pretty much become unrankable if I removed the NC, as the ranking criteria mentioned that 10 objects in a combo is maximum for Salad. In fact I remapped the build-up section here and omitted the dash at the start. Should be relatively better now.
01:56:724 - add a circle here or 01:57:068 - here? This section sounds a little bit blank even if it has more rhythm than following sections. (For example, you just self-made a sound at 01:59:827 - where there's probably nothing to express) - Added slider to map 01:57:068 - .
02:02:241 - or 02:02:586 - same ^ - Not changing this one because there is an additional rhythm at 02:03:103 (5) - which I find it suitable enough.
03:11:034 (3,1) - could've been a jump here - Added and remapped the last section.
00:42:068 (3,1) - A little bit ambiguous distance actually. It can be larger. - Not supposed to be a dash, it has the same distance as 00:41:380 (1,2) - so I think it is good to go.
01:42:413 (6) - Ctrl+G? A direction change may be needed. - Did similar change.
TBC~ sleep zzz

Thanks for mod!

GOGOGOGOGOGO

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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ascendance 2017-08-19T05:47:09+00:00

Please re-dl if you haven't already. With F D Flourite, I compressed the bg image to a much smaller size, and we went through some things in all the difficulties.

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2017-08-19T06:05:51+00:00

HYPPERRANK

Did irc with Ascendance on some small placement issues. Should be good to go now~

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ascendance 2017-08-19T06:11:17+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
HYPPERRANK

Did irc with Ascendance on some small placement issues. Should be good to go now~

Thank you so much

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2017-08-19T07:45:01+00:00

Elite Mapper where?

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ascendance 2017-08-19T08:25:40+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Elite Mapper where?

They said they might not give it T_T I hope they do, I worked hard for it!

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-08-19T09:37:15+00:00

Elite Salad Mapper where

Soul Evans

Elite Mapper

425 posts

Joined June 2014

Soul Evans 2017-08-19T11:35:46+00:00

Elite (congrats mango)

MBomb

MBomb 2017-08-19T12:11:20+00:00

Was modding this as I was the planned qualify icon, but there are severe quality issues in the salad which really need to be addressed, which is why I was taking time, and then saw someone else already qualified, so posting my mod as it was now.

[Salad]

Firstly, this difficulty is near FCable without dashing. Not only are the dashes small enough distances to the fact where they're possible without dashing, they're so low to the point where they could easily be misread by a salad player.some of these "dashes" are possible to hit without dashing by over 32 pixels, which is over 1/16th of the screen, which may seem like a small amount, but keep in mind that this is meant for lower players, who the readability of the map would greatly suffer due to this, as supposedly distances intended to be dashes have moderately small distances, however for most salad players, these distances would be too big to not dash. Whilst I admit, maybe they don't need to be entirely impossible without dashing, such a huge difference should not be allowed.

00:05:517 (1) - Dash here suffers from that exact problem, x:496 would be a lot better, still possible without dashing but greatly increases readability here.
00:08:275 (1) - Not sure if this is intended to be a dash to this or not, if it is, the distance is far too low, this would definitely get misread as a non-dash, considering this is over 32 pixels off being a dash, however if it's not intended to be a dash, the distance is far too strong for an average salad player. Either way, the emphasis on this slider is super weird anyway, as you have a dash to the head, and then the strongest note in the slider is on the repeat, both in terms of pitch and volume, and that just seems very strange.
00:10:344 (3,4,5) - Also really not a fan of how the flow on that feels for a salad, may be a bit too awkward to play, but this is a minor issue here.
00:11:034 (1) - Another one of those cases where it's either a really strong non-dash or a dash which can be avoided by around 32 pixels. x:376 would be a lot of a safer move here if the dash is intended, as I assume by the change in music, but I'm really not sure.
00:13:793 (1) - Considering the really strong distance to this, I assume it might be intended to be a dash, however, this is not only weaker than your previous dashes in terms of distance, but the sound in the song isn't even that strong. There's a possibility this wasn't intended to be a dash, but the distance is still ridiculously strong considering that.
00:15:172 (3) - Why would you not have a dash to this, considering you've had a dash to much weaker sounds throughout this? Emphasis on here is really strange.

Honestly, I think it's better for me to just list all the places where it seems dashes were intended, and tell you how to add distance to at least make them more readable for a salad player, so here you go:

List of dashes

00:16:551 (1) - x:24 would make this one still possible without dashing, but would make the readability greatly improved.
00:22:068 (1,2) - There is a dash distance that is ridiculously small and possible without dashing here, but the bigger problem is the obvious emphasis to the weaker sound rather than to the stronger sound here which makes very little sense from a playing standpoint, and even caused misses from me whilst playing this due to the rhythm sounding very off. I would recommend putting 1 on x:208.
00:24:827 (1,2) - Same emphasis problem here as well as the really low distancing. x:232 on 1 is possible without dashing but I think that's strong enough for a salad player to view it as a dash.
00:27:586 (1,2) - And again. 1 on x:240 would be nice.
00:33:103 (1) - Definitely too weak for a dash as it is now, could confuse players, x:384 would be better.
00:38:620 (1) - Far too weak and overly confusing distance as it is now, try x:192.
00:44:137 (1) - x:232 would still make it possible without dashing, but would definitely make it more visable as a dash to a salad player.
00:46:896 (1) - x:448 would make it more visable as a dash, this distance could definitely confuse a salad player.

00:19:310 (1) - Why such a strong distance to this? Not only is it very difficult to hit without dashing for a salad player, but there's near no note strong enough to emphasise this anywhere near this much here. Moving 00:18:965 (6) - to x:304 solves this problem, however you might want a different way to fix it, if you don't like the idea of holding right here.
00:30:344 (1) - Major consistency error here. You've used a dash to the 1/1 on almost all of these (Which I've specifically said you shouldn't, but if you deny those points then that makes this stand out even more), yet you use a slider end on the same sound here. I'd really recommend adding the dash to the slider head here, with consistency with my previous dash recommendations.
00:31:551 (1) - I think a dash to this sound would be really fitting for the pitch change, however that might be difficult to achieve due to the wall being so close. However, the current distance is definitely too strong for an average salad player to hit and so should probably be reduced slightly.
00:35:862 (1) - Kinda difficult movement into this for a salad, especially considering the direction change in the slider, maybe try x:400?
00:42:758 (1) - Feels kinda strong to play right now, very difficult to hit for a salad player without dashing, however I think this one wasn't intended to be a dash as it is an even lower distance than most of the other ones. x:272 would feel nicer to play.

This mod is unfinished, but just want to post now to bring up a few of the issues in this map which show it being not ready for qualified, so we can slow this down a bit, giving more time to look over the set.

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-08-19T14:29:47+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Was modding this as I was the planned qualify icon, but there are severe quality issues in the salad which really need to be addressed, which is why I was taking time, and then saw someone else already qualified, so posting my mod as it was now.

[Salad]

Firstly, this difficulty is near FCable without dashing. Not only are the dashes small enough distances to the fact where they're possible without dashing, they're so low to the point where they could easily be misread by a salad player.some of these "dashes" are possible to hit without dashing by over 32 pixels, which is over 1/16th of the screen, which may seem like a small amount, but keep in mind that this is meant for lower players, who the readability of the map would greatly suffer due to this, as supposedly distances intended to be dashes have moderately small distances, however for most salad players, these distances would be too big to not dash. Whilst I admit, maybe they don't need to be entirely impossible without dashing, such a huge difference should not be allowed. - Increased most of the distances for dashing. Yet these jumps do give a sense to dash, so I think the amendment now should help slightly.

00:05:517 (1) - Dash here suffers from that exact problem, x:496 would be a lot better, still possible without dashing but greatly increases readability here.
00:08:275 (1) - Not sure if this is intended to be a dash to this or not, if it is, the distance is far too low, this would definitely get misread as a non-dash, considering this is over 32 pixels off being a dash, however if it's not intended to be a dash, the distance is far too strong for an average salad player. Either way, the emphasis on this slider is super weird anyway, as you have a dash to the head, and then the strongest note in the slider is on the repeat, both in terms of pitch and volume, and that just seems very strange.
00:10:344 (3,4,5) - Also really not a fan of how the flow on that feels for a salad, may be a bit too awkward to play, but this is a minor issue here. - I think this pattern is fine as it is simple to read for beginners. Changing this to patterns like curved circle paths or horizontal paths may be too strange or too difficult here, respectively.
00:11:034 (1) - Another one of those cases where it's either a really strong non-dash or a dash which can be avoided by around 32 pixels. x:376 would be a lot of a safer move here if the dash is intended, as I assume by the change in music, but I'm really not sure.
00:13:793 (1) - Considering the really strong distance to this, I assume it might be intended to be a dash, however, this is not only weaker than your previous dashes in terms of distance, but the sound in the song isn't even that strong. There's a possibility this wasn't intended to be a dash, but the distance is still ridiculously strong considering that.
00:15:172 (3) - Why would you not have a dash to this, considering you've had a dash to much weaker sounds throughout this? Emphasis on here is really strange. - Focusing on 00:15:172 (3,1) - instead, otherwise there will be too many HDashes here (only Kiai Time parts are supposed to be a bit denser)

Honestly, I think it's better for me to just list all the places where it seems dashes were intended, and tell you how to add distance to at least make them more readable for a salad player, so here you go:

List of dashes
00:16:551 (1) - x:24 would make this one still possible without dashing, but would make the readability greatly improved.
00:22:068 (1,2) - There is a dash distance that is ridiculously small and possible without dashing here, but the bigger problem is the obvious emphasis to the weaker sound rather than to the stronger sound here which makes very little sense from a playing standpoint, and even caused misses from me whilst playing this due to the rhythm sounding very off. I would recommend putting 1 on x:208.
00:24:827 (1,2) - Same emphasis problem here as well as the really low distancing. x:232 on 1 is possible without dashing but I think that's strong enough for a salad player to view it as a dash.
00:27:586 (1,2) - And again. 1 on x:240 would be nice.
00:33:103 (1) - Definitely too weak for a dash as it is now, could confuse players, x:384 would be better.
00:38:620 (1) - Far too weak and overly confusing distance as it is now, try x:192.
00:44:137 (1) - x:232 would still make it possible without dashing, but would definitely make it more visable as a dash to a salad player.
00:46:896 (1) - x:448 would make it more visable as a dash, this distance could definitely confuse a salad player.

00:19:310 (1) - Why such a strong distance to this? Not only is it very difficult to hit without dashing for a salad player, but there's near no note strong enough to emphasise this anywhere near this much here. Moving 00:18:965 (6) - to x:304 solves this problem, however you might want a different way to fix it, if you don't like the idea of holding right here. - Changed in another way.
00:30:344 (1) - Major consistency error here. You've used a dash to the 1/1 on almost all of these (Which I've specifically said you shouldn't, but if you deny those points then that makes this stand out even more), yet you use a slider end on the same sound here. I'd really recommend adding the dash to the slider head here, with consistency with my previous dash recommendations. - Making this part slightly easier so the dash at 00:31:206 (3,1) - can be accentuated well. Also I think it still follows the rhythm with different types of patterns, so is fine to go in my opinion.
00:31:551 (1) - I think a dash to this sound would be really fitting for the pitch change, however that might be difficult to achieve due to the wall being so close. However, the current distance is definitely too strong for an average salad player to hit and so should probably be reduced slightly.
00:35:862 (1) - Kinda difficult movement into this for a salad, especially considering the direction change in the slider, maybe try x:400? - That's a dash.
00:42:758 (1) - Feels kinda strong to play right now, very difficult to hit for a salad player without dashing, however I think this one wasn't intended to be a dash as it is an even lower distance than most of the other ones. x:272 would feel nicer to play. - ^

This mod is unfinished, but just want to post now to bring up a few of the issues in this map which show it being not ready for qualified, so we can slow this down a bit, giving more time to look over the set.

Thanks for the check!

Revised most of the parts throughout the whole difficulty. Most of the problems are related to the sense of dashing, where I have responded above (honestly dashing is needed for most of the cases if the players are standing straightly below each fruit, not at the edge). Please disqualify and update:

Update

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