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Ohtsuki Kenji - Kuusou Rumba (TV Size)

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Backfire
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Zelos
Rough Timing: might be like a teeny bit off

This is certainly a LOT better then what was set.

BPM: 176.02
Offset:10617
Topic Starter
Backfire
Well I wasnt that far off. Anywho, gonna finish the taiko and insane tommorow. :3
B r e e z e_old
can i make a diff(easy/normal ;)
SPOILER
wowowowowowowow I want
-Soba-
いいマップだよ!
Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.
Topic Starter
Backfire

B r e e z e wrote:

can i make a diff(easy/normal ;)
SPOILER
wowowowowowowow I want
Hell yeah!

-Soba- wrote:

いいマップだよ
But its not done yet? ;w;
UnderminE
-standard-
Lower the volume of hitsounds a little bit (that clap especially).
00:30:557 (6) - move it to x:236 y:128
00:39:249 (5) - too close compare to 00:37:886 (1,2,3,4) - looks not good. x:200 y: 168 maybe?
00:47:430 (3,4) - y:24 or y:32?
00:57:997 (7) - x:144 y:104
00:58:338 (9) - x:208 y:120
00:58:508 (10) - x:208 y:256
00:58:849 (1) - drag this spinner to 00:58:679 - and end here 00:59:361 - ?
01:02:428 - I love this part <3
01:21:687 (2) - I dont like its position.
01:24:585 (1,1,1,1,2) - 3 grid up?
01:26:971 (1) - silence end of this spinner.

this is tottally a suggestion:
00:32:602 (1) - x:352 y:312
00:32:773 (2) - x:256 y:360
00:32:943 (3) - x:280 y:256
00:33:114 (4) - x:180 y:296
00:33:284 (5) - x:204 y:192
00:33:455 (6) - x:104 y:232

Also bit-rate is unrankable <_< It must be between 128 and 192 kbps. Yours is 320 o: I changed the bit-rate, so use this: http://puu.sh/5o0b
Source: Zoku Sayonara Zetsubou Sensei
Tags: ZSZS? o.o

I have no kudosu available so /me kisses backfire on cheek.
LukaXD
Oh boy I'm not good at modding but I'll give it a go ~
These are only suggestions, use them if you want :P (i'm a beginner so some things might seem odd, if you don't like em discard them)

[Rumba~]

0:14:281 and 0:14:366 decrease the space between the 2 the jump seems insane here :P
same goes for the next 2 notes
0:25:103 move the note 2 grids down and one left for alignment
0:26:126 move one grid to the left
0:26:296 ^
0:40:613 , 0:41:124 and 0:41:806 (and rotate this a bit, clockwise) 2 grids left 1 up for alignment
0:44:021 1 grid up 3 left
0:47:941 move this note to the center, it looks nice because the spinner comes afterwards :D
0:50:668 and 0:50:839 decrease space
1:23:903 one grid down

[Taiko Despair]
<3 perfect
Topic Starter
Backfire

LukaXD wrote:

[Taiko Despair]
<3 perfect
Its not done ;w;

I'll take a look at the mods later when im at home.

Thanks for actually modding it. ;w;

As for bit rate, I knew that >< And I was gonna fix the tags and stuff when I moved it to pending. Its in work in progress for a reason~

Right, applied some mods. I love both of you ;w;
Aleks719
Well, well...

Folder
  1. BG is 777x768, it's not 800x600, not 1024x768, not 4:3 size. Try to find this image in another resolution.
  2. Video file contains audio. It would be better if you remove this audio
  3. also :
    *.osb file
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
    Sprite,Background,Centre,"96b555fd6d7037fc73c24506143cbc3f.jpg",320,240
    M,1,2250,,362,197
    //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
    Sprite,Fail,Centre,"96b555fd6d7037fc73c24506143cbc3f.jpg",320,240
    M,0,2250,,320,248
    //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
    //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"96b555fd6d7037fc73c24506143cbc3f.jpg",320,240
    M,0,-439,,318,242
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"9580f428d7a6d65b9be69237d4eb5868.png",320,240
    M,0,0,,320,240
    M,0,1324,1371,551,369,597,486
    M,0,1371,1463,597,486,759,357
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"96b555fd6d7037fc73c24506143cbc3f.jpg",320,240
    M,0,0,,320,240
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"96b555fd6d7037fc73c24506143cbc3f.jpg",320,240
    M,0,0,,387,220
    //Storyboard Sound Samples
    ^ lol wut. this code totally useless. Remove *.osb from your folder.
  4. mp3 is 320kbps, unrankable, recompress it into 192kbps
General
  1. Hum, meta data of your mp3 said that Artist is :
    Nonaka Ai & Inoue Marina & Kobayashi Yuu & Sawashiro Miyuki & Shintani Ryoko
    i strongly recommend to check your artist. And make it twice at least :3
  2. About tags... add "opening" or "ending", I don't know what is it :D
  3. Where is preview time in your diffs?
  4. Taiko Despair doesn't have source and tags as in Rumba~
  5. Your offset is 10617, but you have notes before offset.It's incorrect. your offset must be 1072. Change it in all diffs.
  6. Your bpm must be 176, set it for all diffs. not 176.021 in one diff and 176.02 in other diff. Fix bpm, resnap all notes, resnap kiai sections too.
Well, now you are having some stuff for fixing :3
Oh yes, and Rumba is ###king of impossible.
Topic Starter
Backfire
Lol shit, I forgot about tht stuff. Yeah the artist isnt that. That sb code was an accident too. I need to clean this fucking thing up.

Rumba is passable by me and I am god damn terrible at stanard XD
B r e e z e_old
OK.
My diff finish
:o It's Not very good because it's my first time made :Guest Diff"

Download: Ohtsuki Kenji - Kuusou Rumba (TV Size) (Backfire) [Easy Patch].osu
B r e e z e_old
:? Try tIHIS BG? :DYour message is too short.Your message is too short.Your message is too short.Your message is too short.Your message is too short.Your message is too short.Your message is too short.

Topic Starter
Backfire
The one I have now fits what I want to convey. No thank you? ;w;
UnderminE
edit: resized bg not needed.

star~

my message is not short.
Topic Starter
Backfire
Wait...I added a new bg though. I dont want that fucking bg. :I
What the hell...how do you put a new bg in? :l
UnderminE

Backfire wrote:

Wait...I added a new bg though. I dont want that fucking bg. :I
What the hell...how do you put a new bg in? :l
Yeah sorry it just needs re-download. I didn't see the updates sorry. And the new bg is totally better than the old one. If you didn't change it, I would show this to you: http://puu.sh/5rwz
Topic Starter
Backfire
Well I can use that one for Tenshi's map, the one Breeze posted for his, and the one I picked for mine. Then make a taiko bg. And probally use the same one I'll use on Breeze's for my normal. Yeahhhh
Tenshi
Alright, done. o/

And now for the modding.

General
As Aleks719 said, your osb file is useless, so delete and full submit.
You really don't need OP in the source; just the anime itself is fine.
Make the BPM for each map 176, just so it's even, then Resnap All Notes.

Easy Patch
00:35:500 (1) - Overlapped slider.
00:48:794 (1) - Too close to previous note.
00:59:701 - There's two timing sections here that aren't snapped; I'm assuming it's supposed to change it to Normal hitsounds, so delete the two and make one on this time.
01:04:814 - Unnecessary timing section; delete.
01:21:517 - ^

Insane
00:14:195 (3~8) - Make jumps more obvious and equivalent because space between 4-5 = 3-4. Maybe symmetrical jumps?
00:20:160 (1,2) - Kinda close.
00:35:159 (red) - I like. =w=b
00:39:249 (5) - Too close to the previous note.
00:43:339~00:56:122 - You might wanna consider remapping this section; lots of inconsistent jumps.
01:01:576 (8) - Reverse Selection.

Taiko
Only thing in Taiko was the last timing section; I'm assuming it's supposed to do what the other difficulties did by silencing the end of the slider, but it's at 100% volume.

Star~.

Download: Ohtsuki Kenji - Kuusou Rumba (TV Size) (Backfire) [Ten's Rumba].osu
Topic Starter
Backfire
Nom nom, this is coming out sexy. ;w; Added tenshi's hard.

Now all I need is a normal, and this will go into pending like a boss =w=
OzzyOzrock
Add Tenshi and Breeze to tags on all diffs. You seem to only have it on some of them.
Topic Starter
Backfire

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Add Tenshi and Breeze to tags on all diffs. You seem to only have it on some of them.
Fff. I just forgot is all.
B r e e z e_old
Thanks! I will fixed~!Your message is too short.Your message is too short.
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