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[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin

D arc wrote:

ez 1.32
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Momota
270 posts
Joined February 2014
Momota
Resep Rendang
http://puu.sh/wNt45/8b2a9c6867.osu
[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin

Momota wrote:

Resep Rendang
http://puu.sh/wNt45/8b2a9c6867.osu
maklo resep rendang :"VVVV
siap bosq
VINXIS
Featured Artist
3,161 posts
Joined April 2014
VINXIS
jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin

VINXIS wrote:

jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
omg omg ;___;
Mamat
424 posts
Joined July 2013
Mamat

Kiai Time


  1. Kiai 1: dari 00:16:604- sampai 00:31:358-
  2. Kiai 2: dari 01:03:080- sampai 01:15:375-
  3. Kiai 3: dari 01:19:555- sampai 01:35:047-

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  1. Tambahkan tags dari diff catch the beat ke diff mania
[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin

Pyrozen wrote:

Kiai Time


  1. Kiai 1: dari 00:16:604- sampai 00:31:358-
  2. Kiai 2: dari 01:03:080- sampai 01:15:375-
  3. Kiai 3: dari 01:19:555- sampai 01:35:047-

Metadata


  1. Tambahkan tags dari diff catch the beat ke diff mania
okay, thanks Pyrozen!
Kimitakari
Beatmap Nominator
1,533 posts
Joined August 2014
Kimitakari
From my Modding Queue

  • Cup
  1. 01:49:309 (3,4,5,6) - Huge distance for Cup. x:272
  • Shiawase
  1. 00:10:703 (6) - Guess the distance should be reduced a bit. Move this note to x:112
  2. 00:15:498 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think for Platter this part plays weird. (1,2,3) notes move them to x:336, (4) to x:96 and for (5) use Ctrl+G and move it to x:336 also.
  3. 00:20:047 (7) - Make a curve slider and move it a bit to the right at x:368
  4. 00:23:981 (7,8) - I guess you need to move (7) note to x:400 and (8) - x:272
  5. 00:27:916 (7,8,1,2,3) - Same thing with 00:20:047 and move it to x:352
  6. 00:30:621 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
  7. 00:36:522 (6) - Why can't this repeated slider go to the left?
  8. 00:43:899 (5,6,7) - I honestly don't like this pattern. Feels weird to play it. Make it something like this.
  9. 00:44:883 (8) - x:200
  10. 00:45:867 (2) - x:320
  11. 00:47:834 (6) - Same suggestion on 00:36:522.
  12. 01:10:457 (1,2) - Long distance. x:240
  13. 01:15:375 (4) - No movement here. x:424
  14. 01:25:703 (4) - Long distance. x:192
  15. 01:35:047 (1) - Reverse it.
  16. 01:42:670 (2) - Maybe like this?
  17. 01:51:522 (4) - Remove finish hitsound at the end of a slider.
Your map really need improvement to your Cup. Basically your diff is filled with uncomfortable spacing and ask for more mods if you really want to get your map ranked so these problems wouldn't show in Qualified page.

Good luck with ranking!
[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin

Nelly wrote:

From my Modding Queue

  • Cup
  1. 01:49:309 (3,4,5,6) - Huge distance for Cup. x:272 applied
  • Shiawase
  1. 00:10:703 (6) - Guess the distance should be reduced a bit. Move this note to x:112 applied
  2. 00:15:498 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think for Platter this part plays weird. (1,2,3) notes move them to x:336, (4) to x:96 and for (5) use Ctrl+G and move it to x:336 also. i should changes that pattern, yea look weird in dt. thanks nelly
  3. 00:20:047 (7) - Make a curve slider and move it a bit to the right at x:368 applied what you said
  4. 00:23:981 (7,8) - I guess you need to move (7) note to x:400 and (8) - x:272 look nice! applied
  5. 00:27:916 (7,8,1,2,3) - Same thing with 00:20:047 and move it to x:352
  6. 00:30:621 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^ applied
  7. 00:36:522 (6) - Why can't this repeated slider go to the left? applied
  8. 00:43:899 (5,6,7) - I honestly don't like this pattern. Feels weird to play it. Make it something like this applied.
  9. 00:44:883 (8) - x:200 ^
  10. 00:45:867 (2) - x:320 ^
  11. 00:47:834 (6) - Same suggestion on 00:36:522. ^
  12. 01:10:457 (1,2) - Long distance. x:240 ^
  13. 01:15:375 (4) - No movement here. x:424 ^
  14. 01:25:703 (4) - Long distance. x:192
  15. 01:35:047 (1) - Reverse it.
  16. 01:42:670 (2) - Maybe like this? okay~
  17. 01:51:522 (4) - Remove finish hitsound at the end of a slider. done, thanks!
Your map really need improvement to your Cup. Basically your diff is filled with uncomfortable spacing and ask for more mods if you really want to get your map ranked so these problems wouldn't show in Qualified page.

Good luck with ranking!
-Hex-
362 posts
Joined June 2016
-Hex-
Mod as Requested.

[General]
  1. Uncheck Countdown dan Widescreen support, kalau ga mau buat Storyboard.
[Cup]
  1. Pastikan buat NC kan notenya setiap 8 buah (karena ini Cup) dan ane lihat banyak timeline yg buahnya melebihi 8, silahkan dicek lagi. Ane kasih contoh.
  2. 00:02:834 (5) - Bisa diletakkan NC disini biar buahnya gak melebihi 8
  3. 00:08:244 (5) - NC
  4. 00:12:178 (5) - NC
  5. 00:16:604 (6) - NC
  6. 00:19:555 (4) - NC
  7. 00:20:785 (1) - NC
  8. 00:23:489 (1) - NC
  9. 00:24:719 (1) - NC
  10. 00:27:424 (1) - NC
    Sebenarnya lebih banyak sih, mungkin bisa dicari sendiri. NC juga bisa dipake kalau ada pergantian ritme.
Dan ane setuju sama Nelly kalau banyak spacing yg terlalu lebar buat diff Cup yg mungkin new Cup player bisa ngedash tuh pattern.
Ane kasih contoh :
  1. 00:05:785 (2) - Bisa dipindahkan ke x:112 karena spacingnya lebar banget buat Cup Diff.
  2. 00:11:440 (3,4) - Spacingnya juga kejauhan . Bisa di Ctrl + H buat flow yg lebih bagus atau turunkan spacingnya.
  3. 00:14:391 (3) - Pindahkan ke x:208 atau di Ctrl + H
  4. 00:15:129 (4) - Pindahkan ke x:336
  5. 00:19:063 (3) - Pindahkan 1 grid ke kiri (x:272)
  6. 00:29:883 (1) - xD . Lebar sangat. Pindahkan ke x:320 biar gampang.

    Dan seterusnya, mungkin bisa dicek sendiri.
    Reminder : Tidak ada Dash di diff Cup (kecuali untuk spinner)
[Momot's Salad]
:thinking:
  1. HP 5 for better spread ?

    Ane bisa FC nih map tanpa dash, kecuali spinner (ya, ini ane serius). Bisa dinaikkan spacingnya dinada yang tinggi, ane kasih contoh.
  2. 00:02:834 (7,8,9) - Ini bisa dibuat dash, pindahkan aja ke x:0 atau x:16.
  3. 00:06:768 (7,8,9) - Sama seperti diatas, bisa dipindahkan ke x:512 atau x:496
  4. 00:10:703 (7,8,9) - Sama, bisa dipndahkan ke x:368
  5. 00:18:326 (5) - Pindahkan ke x:400 atau x:416 karena suaranya meninggi.
  6. 00:22:261 (5) - Sama seperti diatas ^ . Pindahkan ke x : 80 atau x:96
  7. 00:26:194 (5) - Bisa diletakkan di x:0 atau letak note ini disebelah kanan terus dire-arrange biar pas patternnya.

    Dan sebagainya, mungkin bisa dicek dan diubah sendiri.

    Sekarang buat masalah NC, sama seperti Cup banyak buah yang melebihi 10. Ane kasih contoh :
  8. 00:02:588 (6) - Letak NC disini biar easy fix nih problem.
  9. 00:06:522 (6) - ^
  10. 00:10:457 (6) - ^
  11. 00:13:899 (3) - ^
  12. 00:18:326 (5) - ^ buat juga di 00:22:261 (5) - ini 00:26:194 (5) - dan ini 00:30:129 (5) -
  13. 00:51:030 (5) - NC disini

    Dan sebagainya, bisa dicek sendiri.
Oke deh itu aja dulu. Good luck .
Last edited by -Hex- , edited 2 times in total.
[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin

-Hex- wrote:

Mod as Requested.

[General]
  1. Uncheck Countdown dan Widescreen support, kalau ga mau buat Storyboard.
[Cup]
  1. Pastikan buat NC kan notenya setiap 8 buah (karena ini Cup) dan ane lihat banyak timeline yg buahnya melebihi 8, silahkan dicek lagi. Ane kasih contoh.
  2. 00:02:834 (5) - Bisa diletakkan NC disini biar buahnya gak melebihi 8
  3. 00:08:244 (5) - NC
  4. 00:12:178 (5) - NC
  5. 00:16:604 (6) - NC
  6. 00:19:555 (4) - NC
  7. 00:20:785 (1) - NC
  8. 00:23:489 (1) - NC
  9. 00:24:719 (1) - NC
  10. 00:27:424 (1) - NC
    Sebenarnya lebih banyak sih, mungkin bisa dicari sendiri. NC juga bisa dipake kalau ada pergantian ritme.
Dan ane setuju sama Nelly kalau banyak spacing yg terlalu lebar buat diff Cup yg mungkin new Cup player bisa ngedash tuh pattern.
Ane kasih contoh :
  1. 00:05:785 (2) - Bisa dipindahkan ke x:112 karena spacingnya lebar banget buat Cup Diff.
  2. 00:11:440 (3,4) - Spacingnya juga kejauhan . Bisa di Ctrl + H buat flow yg lebih bagus atau turunkan spacingnya.
  3. 00:14:391 (3) - Pindahkan ke x:208 atau di Ctrl + H
  4. 00:15:129 (4) - Pindahkan ke x:336
  5. 00:19:063 (3) - Pindahkan 1 grid ke kiri (x:272)
  6. 00:29:883 (1) - xD . Lebar sangat. Pindahkan ke x:320 biar gampang.

    Dan seterusnya, mungkin bisa dicek sendiri.
    Reminder : Tidak ada Dash di diff Cup (kecuali untuk spinner)
[Momot's Salad]
:thinking:
  1. HP 5 for better spread ?

    Ane bisa FC nih map tanpa dash, kecuali spinner (ya, ini ane serius). Bisa dinaikkan spacingnya dinada yang tinggi, ane kasih contoh.
  2. 00:02:834 (7,8,9) - Ini bisa dibuat dash, pindahkan aja ke x:0 atau x:16.
  3. 00:06:768 (7,8,9) - Sama seperti diatas, bisa dipindahkan ke x:512 atau x:496
  4. 00:10:703 (7,8,9) - Sama, bisa dipndahkan ke x:368
  5. 00:18:326 (5) - Pindahkan ke x:400 atau x:416 karena suaranya meninggi.
  6. 00:22:261 (5) - Sama seperti diatas ^ . Pindahkan ke x : 80 atau x:96
  7. 00:26:194 (5) - Bisa diletakkan di x:0 atau letak note ini disebelah kiri terus dire-arrange biar pas patternnya.

    Dan sebagainya, mungkin bisa dicek dan diubah sendiri.

    Sekarang buat masalah NC, sama seperti Cup banyak buah yang melebihi 10. Ane kasih contoh :
  8. 00:02:588 (6) - Letak NC disini biar easy fix nih problem.
  9. 00:06:522 (6) - ^
  10. 00:10:457 (6) - ^
  11. 00:13:899 (3) - ^
  12. 00:18:326 (1) - ^ buat juga di 00:22:261 (5) - ini 00:26:194 (5) - dan ini 00:30:129 (5) -
  13. 00:51:030 (5) - NC disini

    Dan sebagainya, bisa dicek sendiri.
Oke deh itu aja dulu. Good luck .

applied semua ;w;
thanks btw XD
Dapulezatos
317 posts
Joined March 2016
Dapulezatos
[Platter]
  1. 00:15:744 (3,4,5) - Hdash 2x berturut - turut. Please 1 Hdash only. Karena platter dimainkan oleh orang yang ingin belajar Hdash.
  2. 00:15:498 (1,2,3) - PIndah ke x:400 gan
  3. 00:15:867 (4) - x : 208
  4. 00:16:112 (5) - x : 32 dan buat slidernya miring kaya gini?? Click
  5. 00:16:604 (6) - Reversed slider gan? Better Imo Click
  6. 00:24:965 (1) - x : 96 . Kasih movement biar gak terlalu boring xdd
  7. 00:32:588 (8) - x : 256 , terus Ctrl + G
  8. 01:00:867 (6) - x : 64. Kasih jump gan. Platter butuh dash biasa juga :3
  9. 01:10:703 (2,3) - Dibuat kaya gini sadja ? Click
  10. 01:11:440 (4) - x : 0 dan 01:11:686 (5) - di Ctrl + H terus dipindah ke x : 304. Nadanya di 01:11:686 (5) - Agak tinggi pas suara "Neee~"
  11. 01:12:916 (6,7,8) - Kalau mau dipindah ke x : 176 Click
  12. 01:13:653 (1) - Pindah ke x : 80
  13. 01:35:539 (2) - x : 96 dan 01:35:785 (3) - ke x : 400 . Jadinya kan punya Hdash :3 Gameplay
  14. 01:51:399 (2,3,4) - Dibuat gini boleh gan? Jangan Hdash. Ntar yg baru main pada kaget :o Click
Saya masih modder newbie gan xd. Sip platternya sudah saya mod :D
Only give kudosu if it was helpful
Good Luck, semoga ranked. Lagunya enak :3 Saya bukan lolicon :thonk:
( >.<)/ A star for you :3
[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin

Skycreeper- wrote:

[Platter]
  1. 00:15:744 (3,4,5) - Hdash 2x berturut - turut. Please 1 Hdash only. Karena platter dimainkan oleh orang yang ingin belajar Hdash.
  2. 00:15:498 (1,2,3) - PIndah ke x:400 gan
  3. 00:15:867 (4) - x : 208
  4. 00:16:112 (5) - x : 32 dan buat slidernya miring kaya gini?? Click
  5. 00:16:604 (6) - Reversed slider gan? Better Imo Click
  6. 00:24:965 (1) - x : 96 . Kasih
    movement biar gak terlalu boring xdd
  7. 00:32:588 (8) - x : 256 , terus Ctrl + G
  8. 01:00:867 (6) - x : 64. Kasih jump gan. Platter butuh dash biasa juga :3
  9. 01:10:703 (2,3) - Dibuat kaya gini sadja ? Click
  10. 01:11:440 (4) - x : 0 dan 01:11:686 (5) - di Ctrl + H terus dipindah ke x : 304. Nadanya di 01:11:686 (5) - Agak tinggi pas suara "Neee~"
  11. 01:12:916 (6,7,8) - Kalau mau dipindah ke x : 176 Click
  12. 01:13:653 (1) - Pindah ke x : 80
  13. 01:35:539 (2) - x : 96 dan 01:35:785 (3) - ke x : 400 . Jadinya kan punya Hdash :3 Gameplay
  14. 01:51:399 (2,3,4) - Dibuat gini boleh gan? Jangan Hdash. Ntar yg baru main pada kaget :o Click
Saya masih modder newbie gan xd. Sip platternya sudah saya mod :D
Only give kudosu if it was helpful
Good Luck, semoga ranked. Lagunya enak :3 Saya bukan lolicon :thonk:
( >.<)/ A star for you :3
aww thanks!
di ceknya nanti ya pas udah nyampe rumah ;_;
DustMoon
430 posts
Joined June 2016
DustMoon
hello,my manai GD
DM's HD
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63203
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 375,45621,95293,114965
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.900001

[Metadata]
Title:Shiawase Iro
TitleUnicode:しあわせ色
Artist:Hiiragi Mayuki(CV:Ogura Yui)/Hagino Chiaki(CV:Toujou Hisako)
ArtistUnicode:柊真雪(CV.小倉唯)、萩野千秋(CV.東城日沙子)
Creator:Yukarin-
Version:DM's HD
Source:ひなこのーと
Tags:Hinako note Gekidan Hitotose Yururu GSculerlor D_Arc Momota
BeatmapID:1357128
BeatmapSetID:639294

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:8
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Momota
270 posts
Joined February 2014
Momota

-Hex- wrote:

Mod as Requested.

[General]
  1. Uncheck Countdown dan Widescreen support, kalau ga mau buat Storyboard.

[Momot's Salad]
:thinking:
  1. HP 5 for better spread ?

    Ane bisa FC nih map tanpa dash, kecuali spinner (ya, ini ane serius)ente FC karena ente udah bisa pak, ini diff kan diperuntukkan buat new player yang minimal udah paham movement. Bisa dinaikkan spacingnya dinada yang tinggi, ane kasih contoh.
  2. 00:02:834 (7,8,9) - Ini bisa dibuat dash, pindahkan aja ke x:0 atau x:16. utk skrg keep dlu pak, nada yang mau di buat dash kurang tinggi utk diff salad
  3. 00:06:768 (7,8,9) - Sama seperti diatas, bisa dipindahkan ke x:512 atau x:496
  4. 00:10:703 (7,8,9) - Sama, bisa dipndahkan ke x:368
  5. 00:18:326 (5) - Pindahkan ke x:400 atau x:416 karena suaranya meninggi. apply
  6. 00:22:261 (5) - Sama seperti diatas ^ . Pindahkan ke x : 80 atau x:96
  7. 00:26:194 (5) - Bisa diletakkan di x:0 atau letak note ini disebelah kanan terus dire-arrange biar pas patternnya.

    Dan sebagainya, mungkin bisa dicek dan diubah sendiri. seumur umur gw kalo ngemod ga pernah setengah setengah hanya karna pattern yang sama di menit selanjutnya, gak tau lagi gw

    Sekarang buat masalah NC, sama seperti Cup banyak buah yang melebihi 10. Ane kasih contoh :
  8. 00:02:588 (6) - Letak NC disini biar easy fix nih problem.
  9. 00:06:522 (6) - ^
  10. 00:10:457 (6) - ^
  11. 00:13:899 (3) - ^
  12. 00:18:326 (5) - ^ buat juga di 00:22:261 (5) - ini 00:26:194 (5) - dan ini 00:30:129 (5) -
  13. 00:51:030 (5) - NC disini
    apply all
    Dan sebagainya, bisa dicek sendiri.
Oke deh itu aja dulu. Good luck .
thanks buat modnya, arigato gozaimash
sep
diff
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63203
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Shiawase Iro
TitleUnicode:しあわせ色
Artist:Hiiragi Mayuki(CV:Ogura Yui)/Hagino Chiaki(CV:Toujou Hisako)
ArtistUnicode:柊真雪(CV.小倉唯)、萩野千秋(CV.東城日沙子)
Creator:Yukarin-
Version:Momota's Salad
Source:ひなこのーと
Tags:Hinako note Gekidan Hitotose Yururu GSculerlor D_Arc Momota
BeatmapID:1355930
BeatmapSetID:639294

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112,96,97015,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,128,99228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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80,192,102178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,80,110416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,110785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111522,12,0,114965,0:0:0:0:
-Hex-
362 posts
Joined June 2016
-Hex-

Momota wrote:

seumur umur gw kalo ngemod ga pernah setengah setengah hanya karna pattern yang sama di menit selanjutnya, gak tau lagi gw
Ya, ane tau kok. Kan ane cuman kasih contoh doang (kebanyakan modder yg lain hanya kasih sebagian contoh biar dikembangkan sendiri) tapi itu balik ke orangnya. Dan satu poin yg penting, ane belum Ngemod diff terakhir "Shiawase" , mungkin bakalan ane lanjutin modnya kalau ada waktu.

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[Shiawase]
  1. 01:10:703 (2,3) - 1/4 Hyperdash BPM diatas 120 di Platter itu Unrankable . Ubah jadi normal dash aja
  2. 00:15:498 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sama seperti diatas. Ubah aja jadi normal dash, pindahkan (4) ke x:240

    Overall bagus sih.
[Momot's Salad]
  1. 01:05:785 (7,8,9) - Naikkan spacingnya kira2 2 atau 3 grid ke kanan, karena spacingnya ambigu jadi pusing buat salad player yg baru
  2. 01:09:719 (7,8,9) - ^
  3. 01:13:653 (7,8,9) - ^
  4. 01:21:522 (7,8,9) - ^
  5. 01:25:457 (7,8,9) - ^
  6. 01:29:391 (7,8,9) - ^
  7. 01:36:523 (4,5) - Bisa geser 3 atau 4 grid ke kiri buat lebih jelas spacingnya.
  8. 01:40:457 (4,5) - Geser 3 atau 4 grid ke kanan
  9. 01:44:391 (4,5) - ^
Good luck again.
[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin

-Hex- wrote:

Momota wrote:

seumur umur gw kalo ngemod ga pernah setengah setengah hanya karna pattern yang sama di menit selanjutnya, gak tau lagi gw
Ya, ane tau kok. Kan ane cuman kasih contoh doang (kebanyakan modder yg lain hanya kasih sebagian contoh biar dikembangkan sendiri) tapi itu balik ke orangnya. Dan satu poin yg penting, ane belum Ngemod diff terakhir "Shiawase" , mungkin bakalan ane lanjutin modnya kalau ada waktu.

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
[Shiawase]
  1. 01:10:703 (2,3) - 1/4 Hyperdash BPM diatas 120 di Platter itu Unrankable . Ubah jadi normal dash aja Applied
  2. 00:15:498 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sama seperti diatas. Ubah aja jadi normal dash, pindahkan (4) ke x:240 ^

    Overall bagus sih.
[Momot's Salad]
  1. 01:05:785 (7,8,9) - Naikkan spacingnya kira2 2 atau 3 grid ke kanan, karena spacingnya ambigu jadi pusing buat salad player yg baru
  2. 01:09:719 (7,8,9) - ^
  3. 01:13:653 (7,8,9) - ^
  4. 01:21:522 (7,8,9) - ^
  5. 01:25:457 (7,8,9) - ^
  6. 01:29:391 (7,8,9) - ^
  7. 01:36:523 (4,5) - Bisa geser 3 atau 4 grid ke kiri buat lebih jelas spacingnya.
  8. 01:40:457 (4,5) - Geser 3 atau 4 grid ke kanan
  9. 01:44:391 (4,5) - ^
Good luck again.
[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin
applied some mods from -Hex- and Momota
thanks.
wwwww
Beatmap Nominator
103 posts
Joined May 2016
wwwww
Here is my mod!
Cup
Man this song is great! The way you timed it and the background all fits in really well! however there are a few things i would like to point out.
00:30:621 (3) - This right here looks a bit stale to me why not have it curve or rotate the slider. Examples https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675040 or this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675042
this right here just needs to be moved a little bit closer so it does not come across as out of place like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675050
01:05:047 (4,5,6,7) - this slider right here is off the grid so it forces it to be straight like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675063 and that does NOT look good. So i say you move the other hit circles a little bit away from the slider and move the slider upwards like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675094 but also move this slider to the right so it looks better and the circle before it so it all fits https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675102
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675102 this here is fine but you could also end it with a nice little curved stream (this is just a recommendation) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675140 something like this
Momota's Salad
Your style and the way you work with small CS is really cool and i love what you have done with this. There are a few things that i would like to point out
00:15:621 (1,1) - This is against ranking Criteria because there is a item to soon after the spinner. Because of the maps bpm there has to be one bar of space in between the 2 items
Adequate time must be left between objects and the start and end of spinners to ensure readability. Depending on the BPM of the song, this time must conform to the following:

BPM < 120 - 1/2 bar
BPM < 240 - 1 bar
BPM ≥ 240 - 2 bars
so i think you should just put in a slider that matches the time like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675213 im not saying it needs to look exactly like that im just saying you should do a slider that fits the timing and this one does
00:18:325 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - these are the circles during that little gap and it comes across as awkword to me. why dont you make some of the circles sliders so it does not come across that way like this! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675264 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675266 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675268 and maybe move 00:23:981 (7) - (the slider that replaced 7 and 8 as circles) and the slider after it to make it look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675281 Your timing was not wrong and i hope all of these do not come across as rude. I only want to make the map look better. I tried to make the slider's straight in my example to fit the unique style you have and i hope it makes your map look better!
00:26:932 (2,3,4) - You can just make this a slider with a reverse arrow like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675310
00:30:129 (1,2) - connect these two as a slider (you dont have to it just looks better) and make 00:29:637 (4) - face the other direction its kind of like its leading up to it you know? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675334
00:34:063 (5,6) - Connect these 2 as a slider and make the slider longer to fit the time. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675351
00:37:998 (5,6) - same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675354
00:41:932 (5,6) - same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675392
00:44:145 (1,2) - and finally same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675411
01:37:015 (5,6) - replace 5 and 6 with a slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675430
01:40:949 (5,6) - do the same thing here and replace these with a slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675447
01:44:882 (5,6) - my final edit is to combine these two and make it a slider like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675458
now i understand what you are doing. Your timing is matching the vocals and the piano and that is great! My only problem with that is during those breaks you choose to put circles so the catcher has like a little bit of time where he doesn't need to do anything and we dont want that. That is why i gave you so many recommendations for sliders. This does not mean your map is bad by any means i love the style and the way you did things! i just want to make it look better for you! (P.S i love how well you timed the spinner at the end that is great so good job m8!)
Shiawase
This is great! Your style seems to have a bit of everything and i love it! I do want to give you a few recommendations though
00:15:498 (1,2,3,4,5) - This would look a lot better if it was all a connected stream instead of splitting it up at 4 try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675498 now
this is more of an idea because i can see how this looks bad to you or the timing seems off but i thought it was worth a shot bringing it up to you.
00:27:916 (1,2,3,4,5) - the first and last note need to be moved a little closer to the other notes try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675552
00:30:621 (1,2,3,4,5) - the notes in this steam are not all spaced out evenly. Make it look more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675531
00:43:899 (1,2) - make this just a short little slider ya know? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675556
01:34:309 (7,8) - tilt these to either the right or the left you can choose https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675572
01:42:670 (2) - make this out of hit circles instead of a short slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675586 just like a cut little stream ya know!? xD
01:49:432 (3,4,5,6) - add a few more circles to this stream like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675625 that may not look good to you. Just something like that.
01:51:461 (3) - move that a bit to the left because that is a pretty fast hyper dash for the rest of the song being laid back and chill or remove the hyper dash entirely. Whatever its your call https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675636
Wow this map is great! The timing fits really well i have not seen a ctb map like this one before! it has a very unique style that i love! I hope this map becomes ranked and great job!!! 8-)
-Deleck-
41 posts
Joined August 2013
-Deleck-
Hello :D

In-game modding
23:52 -Deleck-: Hi! :D
23:52 -Deleck-: hmm.. I can mod your map?
23:53 Yukarin-: yes, you can! :D
23:53 *-Deleck- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1355969 Hiiragi Mayuki(CV:Ogura Yui)/Hagino Chiaki(CV:Toujou Hisako) - Shiawase Iro]
23:53 -Deleck-: :D
23:53 Yukarin-: :D
23:53 Yukarin-: thanks
23:55 -Deleck-: your map need be adjusted in the New Combos :o
23:56 Yukarin-: whoa :o
23:57 *-Deleck- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1361472 Hiiragi Mayuki(CV:Ogura Yui)/Hagino Chiaki(CV:Toujou Hisako) - Shiawase Iro [Shiawase]]
23:57 -Deleck-: 00:02:834 (6) - Add NC
23:57 Yukarin-: ah irc mods?
23:57 Yukarin-: okay
23:57 Yukarin-: wait
23:58 -Deleck-: :o sorry, forget to warn XD
23:58 Yukarin-: XD
23:58 Yukarin-: its okay~
23:59 -Deleck-: ready? owo
23:59 Yukarin-: yeah owo
00:00 *Yukarin- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1361472 Hiiragi Mayuki(CV:Ogura Yui)/Hagino Chiaki(CV:Toujou Hisako) - Shiawase Iro [Shiawase]]
00:00 -Deleck-: okay uwu
00:00 -Deleck-: 00:06:768 (6) - add NC
00:01 Yukarin-: done
00:01 -Deleck-: 00:10:703 (6) - add
00:01 -Deleck-: 00:16:604 (6) - add
00:02 Yukarin-: every 6 combo needs to NC-ed?
00:03 -Deleck-: No, every strong beat of the song must be to NC
00:03 Yukarin-: ah okay
00:05 -Deleck-: 00:17:342 (1) - here remove NC
00:05 -Deleck-: 00:18:326 (7) - here add
00:06 Yukarin-: done
00:06 -Deleck-: 00:22:260 (4) - add
00:08 -Deleck-: 00:26:194 (4) - add
00:08 -Deleck-: 00:28:162 (1) - remove
00:08 Yukarin-: applied owo
00:08 -Deleck-: 00:28:407 (3) - add
00:11 -Deleck-: 00:27:916 (4) - add
00:11 -Deleck-: 00:29:883 (5) - add
00:13 -Deleck-: 00:31:358 (6) - add
00:13 Yukarin-: :o
00:14 -Deleck-: all good?
00:14 Yukarin-: yep
00:14 -Deleck-: okay uwu
00:15 Yukarin-: thats all? owo
00:15 -Deleck-: 00:34:063 (4) - add
00:15 Yukarin-: okay, applied
00:15 -Deleck-: nop 30% of map xD
00:15 Yukarin-: XDD okay~
00:15 -Deleck-: 00:37:998 (4) - add
00:17 -Deleck-: 00:40:457 (5) - add, and the next circle remove NC
00:17 -Deleck-: 00:41:932 (6) - add nc
00:17 Yukarin-: okay
00:18 -Deleck-: 00:45:129 (5) - add
00:19 -Deleck-: 00:49:063 (6) - add
00:19 Yukarin-: applied
00:19 -Deleck-: 00:50:293 (1,2) - remove and the next add
00:20 -Deleck-: 00:52:014 (4) - add
00:20 -Deleck-: 00:56:194 (7) - add
00:21 -Deleck-: 00:57:178 (1) - remove
00:21 -Deleck-: 00:59:883 (4) - add
00:21 Yukarin-: all done
00:24 -Deleck-: 00:59:883 (4) - is very necesary the slider? me considered make two notes separated to create the new combo in the second
00:25 Yukarin-: ah, i will keep that slider
00:25 -Deleck-: okay :D
00:26 Yukarin-: sorry :'D
00:26 -Deleck-: not problem :D
00:26 -Deleck-: 01:05:785 (7) - add
00:26 Yukarin-: done
00:27 -Deleck-: 01:08:981 (5) - add
00:27 -Deleck-: 01:11:686 (5) - add nc
00:27 -Deleck-: 01:15:621 (5) - add
00:27 Yukarin-: yep, all applied
00:27 -Deleck-: 01:19:555 (7) - add nc
00:28 -Deleck-: 01:21:031 (1) - remove
00:28 -Deleck-: 01:21:522 (5) - add
00:29 -Deleck-: 01:23:489 (5) - add nc
00:29 Yukarin-: okay done
00:29 -Deleck-: 01:24:965 (1) - remove
00:29 -Deleck-: 01:25:457 (3) - add
00:30 -Deleck-: 01:27:424 (5) - add
00:30 -Deleck-: 01:28:899 (1) - remove
00:30 -Deleck-: 01:29:391 (3) - add
00:30 Yukarin-: yep
00:30 -Deleck-: 01:31:358 (5) - add
00:31 Yukarin-: ah, i forget this
00:31 Yukarin-: dont forget to savelog this and put it in my maps forum
00:31 Yukarin-: i will give you some kudos hahah
00:31 -Deleck-: ohh okay hahaha :D
00:32 -Deleck-: 01:33:326 (3) - add
00:32 -Deleck-: 01:34:309 (5) - add
00:33 -Deleck-: 01:37:014 (6) - add
00:33 -Deleck-: 01:38:735 (1,2) - remove and add in the next
00:33 Yukarin-: done~
00:34 -Deleck-: 01:40:948 (6) - add
00:34 -Deleck-: 01:42:178 (1) - remove
00:34 -Deleck-: 01:43:162 (5) - add
00:35 -Deleck-: 01:47:342 (5) - add
00:35 -Deleck-: 01:48:326 (1,2) - remove and add
00:36 -Deleck-: 01:50:047 (6) - add
00:36 Yukarin-: yep
00:36 -Deleck-: and finish :D
00:37 Yukarin-: aaaaaa, thanks <3
00:39 -Deleck-: you're welcome :D
00:40 Yukarin-: :D
Momota
270 posts
Joined February 2014
Momota

xXShockwaveXx wrote:

Here is my mod!

Momota's Salad
Your style and the way you work with small CS is really cool and i love what you have done with this. There are a few things that i would like to point out
00:15:621 (1,1) - This is against ranking Criteria because there is a item to soon after the spinner. Because of the maps bpm there has to be one bar of space in between the 2 items
Adequate time must be left between objects and the start and end of spinners to ensure readability. Depending on the BPM of the song, this time must conform to the following:

BPM < 120 - 1/2 bar
BPM < 240 - 1 bar
BPM ≥ 240 - 2 bars
so i think you should just put in a slider that matches the time like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675213 im not saying it needs to look exactly like that im just saying you should do a slider that fits the timing and this one doesapplied
00:18:325 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - these are the circles during that little gap and it comes across as awkword to me. why dont you make some of the circles sliders so it does not come across that way like this! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675264 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675266 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675268 and maybe move 00:23:981 (7) - (the slider that replaced 7 and 8 as circles) and the slider after it to make it look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675281 Your timing was not wrong and i hope all of these do not come across as rude. I only want to make the map look better. I tried to make the slider's straight in my example to fit the unique style you have and i hope it makes your map look better! its okay! im little confused on this part btw,and u come mod this part! thanks for help, this so helpfull thanks!
00:26:932 (2,3,4) - You can just make this a slider with a reverse arrow like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675310 keep pattern like 00:18:325 to keep pattern
00:30:129 (1,2) - connect these two as a slider (you dont have to it just looks better) and make 00:29:637 (4) - face the other direction its kind of like its leading up to it you know? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675334
00:34:063 (5,6) - Connect these 2 as a slider and make the slider longer to fit the time. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675351
00:37:998 (5,6) - same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675354
00:41:932 (5,6) - same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675392
00:44:145 (1,2) - and finally same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675411
01:37:015 (5,6) - replace 5 and 6 with a slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675430
01:40:949 (5,6) - do the same thing here and replace these with a slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675447
01:44:882 (5,6) - my final edit is to combine these two and make it a slider like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675458 apply all
now i understand what you are doing. Your timing is matching the vocals and the piano and that is great! My only problem with that is during those breaks you choose to put circles so the catcher has like a little bit of time where he doesn't need to do anything and we dont want that. That is why i gave you so many recommendations for sliders. This does not mean your map is bad by any means i love the style and the way you did things! i just want to make it look better for you! (P.S i love how well you timed the spinner at the end that is great so good job m8!)thanks for detailed mod with screen shot, very appreciated !

Wow this map is great! The timing fits really well i have not seen a ctb map like this one before! it has a very unique style that i love! I hope this map becomes ranked and great job!!! 8-)
thanks for mod -Hex- and xXShockwaveXx !
yohanes rio
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ArtistUnicode:柊真雪(CV.小倉唯)、萩野千秋(CV.東城日沙子)
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Momota
270 posts
Joined February 2014
Momota

Yukarin- wrote:

[Momot's Salad]
  1. 01:05:785 (7,8,9) - Naikkan spacingnya kira2 2 atau 3 grid ke kanan, karena spacingnya ambigu jadi pusing buat salad player yg baru
  2. 01:09:719 (7,8,9) - ^
  3. 01:13:653 (7,8,9) - ^
  4. 01:21:522 (7,8,9) - ^
  5. 01:25:457 (7,8,9) - ^
  6. 01:29:391 (7,8,9) - ^. done all
  7. 01:36:523 (4,5) - Bisa geser 3 atau 4 grid ke kiri buat lebih jelas spacingnya.
  8. 01:40:457 (4,5) - Geser 3 atau 4 grid ke kanan. lah bukannya yang ginian aing ngikutin mod anda sebelumnya ??
  9. 01:44:391 (4,5) - ^
[/notice]
Good luck again.
[/quote]

xXShockwaveXx wrote:

Here is my mod!

Momota's Salad
Your style and the way you work with small CS is really cool and i love what you have done with this. There are a few things that i would like to point out
00:15:621 (1,1) - This is against ranking Criteria because there is a item to soon after the spinner. Because of the maps bpm there has to be one bar of space in between the 2 items
Adequate time must be left between objects and the start and end of spinners to ensure readability. Depending on the BPM of the song, this time must conform to the following:

BPM < 120 - 1/2 bar
BPM < 240 - 1 bar
BPM ≥ 240 - 2 bars
so i think you should just put in a slider that matches the time like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675213 im not saying it needs to look exactly like that im just saying you should do a slider that fits the timing and this one doesapplied
00:18:325 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - these are the circles during that little gap and it comes across as awkword to me. why dont you make some of the circles sliders so it does not come across that way like this! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675264 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675266 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675268 and maybe move 00:23:981 (7) - (the slider that replaced 7 and 8 as circles) and the slider after it to make it look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675281 Your timing was not wrong and i hope all of these do not come across as rude. I only want to make the map look better. I tried to make the slider's straight in my example to fit the unique style you have and i hope it makes your map look better! its okay! im little confused on this part btw,and u come mod this part! thanks for help, this so helpfull thanks!
00:26:932 (2,3,4) - You can just make this a slider with a reverse arrow like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675310 keep pattern like 00:18:325 to keep pattern
00:30:129 (1,2) - connect these two as a slider (you dont have to it just looks better) and make 00:29:637 (4) - face the other direction its kind of like its leading up to it you know? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675334
00:34:063 (5,6) - Connect these 2 as a slider and make the slider longer to fit the time. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675351
00:37:998 (5,6) - same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675354
00:41:932 (5,6) - same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675392
00:44:145 (1,2) - and finally same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675411
01:37:015 (5,6) - replace 5 and 6 with a slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675430
01:40:949 (5,6) - do the same thing here and replace these with a slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675447
01:44:882 (5,6) - my final edit is to combine these two and make it a slider like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675458 apply all
now i understand what you are doing. Your timing is matching the vocals and the piano and that is great! My only problem with that is during those breaks you choose to put circles so the catcher has like a little bit of time where he doesn't need to do anything and we dont want that. That is why i gave you so many recommendations for sliders. This does not mean your map is bad by any means i love the style and the way you did things! i just want to make it look better for you! (P.S i love how well you timed the spinner at the end that is great so good job m8!)thanks for detailed mod with screen shot, very appreciated !

Wow this map is great! The timing fits really well i have not seen a ctb map like this one before! it has a very unique style that i love! I hope this map becomes ranked and great job!!! 8-)
thanks for mod -Hex- and xXShockwaveXx !
yohanes rio
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64,192,77096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,77342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,77588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,78080,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,78080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,78326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,78571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,78694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,78694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,79063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,79063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,79309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,79309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,79432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,79432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,79555,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,79555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,79801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80047,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,80047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,80539,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,81030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,81030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,81276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,81276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,81522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,81522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,81768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,81768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82014,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,82260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82506,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,82998,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,83244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,83489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,83489,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,83735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,83981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,84473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,84965,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,85211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,85211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,85457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,85703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,85703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,85948,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,86194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,86194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,86440,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,86440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,86563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,86563,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,86932,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,86932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,87178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,87424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,87424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,87670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,87916,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,87916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,88162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,88407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,88407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,88653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,88653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,88899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,88899,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,89145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,89145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,89391,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,89391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,89637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,89637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,89883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,89883,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,90129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,90129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,90375,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,90375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,90621,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,90867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,90867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,91112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,91358,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,91358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,91604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,91850,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,91850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,92096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,92342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,92342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,92588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,92588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,92834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,92834,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,93080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,93080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,93326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,93326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,93571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,93571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,93817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,93817,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,94063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,94063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,94309,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,94309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,94432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,94555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,94678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,94801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,94801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,94924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,95047,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,95047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,95170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,95293,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,95293,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,95539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,95785,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,95785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,96030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,96276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,96276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,96522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,96768,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,96768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97014,128,0,97752:0:0:0:0:
192,192,97260,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,97752,128,0,98244:0:0:0:0:
448,192,97752,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97752,128,0,97813:0:0:0:0:
192,192,98244,128,0,98735:0:0:0:0:
448,192,98244,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,98735,128,0,99227:0:0:0:0:
64,192,98735,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,98735,128,0,98797:0:0:0:0:
192,192,99227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,99473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,99719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,99719,128,0,99780:0:0:0:0:
320,192,99965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,100211,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,100457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,100703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,100703,128,0,100764:0:0:0:0:
64,192,100948,128,0,101686:0:0:0:0:
448,192,101194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,101686,128,0,102178:0:0:0:0:
448,192,101686,128,0,101748:0:0:0:0:
192,192,101686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,102178,128,0,102670:0:0:0:0:
64,192,102178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,102670,128,0,103162:0:0:0:0:
320,192,102670,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,102670,128,0,102731:0:0:0:0:
448,192,103162,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,103407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103653,128,0,103715:0:0:0:0:
448,192,103653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,103899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,104145,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,104391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,104637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,104637,128,0,104698:0:0:0:0:
320,192,104883,128,0,105621:0:0:0:0:
64,192,105129,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,105621,128,0,106112:0:0:0:0:
448,192,105621,128,0,105682:0:0:0:0:
192,192,105621,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,106112,128,0,106604:0:0:0:0:
448,192,106112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,106604,128,0,107096:0:0:0:0:
64,192,106604,128,0,106666:0:0:0:0:
192,192,106604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,107096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,107342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,107588,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,107588,128,0,107649:0:0:0:0:
192,192,107834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,108080,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,108326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,108571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,108571,128,0,108633:0:0:0:0:
64,192,108817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,109063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,109063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,109309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,109432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,109555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,109555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,109678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,109801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,109924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,109924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,110047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,110047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,110416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,110416,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,110785,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,110785,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,111461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,111522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,111584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,111645,128,0,114965:0:0:0:0:
320,192,114965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
uhh, sorry but the HD diff is already taken by my friend ;w;
[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin

xXShockwaveXx wrote:

Here is my mod!
Cup
Man this song is great! The way you timed it and the background all fits in really well! however there are a few things i would like to point out.
00:30:621 (3) - This right here looks a bit stale to me why not have it curve or rotate the slider. Examples https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675040 or this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675042 i prefer this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675042 applied, thanks!
this right here just needs to be moved a little bit closer so it does not come across as out of place like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675050 applied!
01:05:047 (4,5,6,7) - this slider right here is off the grid so it forces it to be straight like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675063 and that does NOT look good. So i say you move the other hit circles a little bit away from the slider and move the slider upwards like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675094 but also move this slider to the right so it looks better and the circle before it so it all fits https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675102
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675102 this here is fine but you could also end it with a nice little curved stream (this is just a recommendation) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675140 something like this applied all! >w< but sorry, i will keep this ;w; https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675140

Shiawase
This is great! Your style seems to have a bit of everything and i love it! I do want to give you a few recommendations though
00:15:498 (1,2,3,4,5) - This would look a lot better if it was all a connected stream instead of splitting it up at 4 try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675498sorry, but i will keep this ;w; now
this is more of an idea because i can see how this looks bad to you or the timing seems off but i thought it was worth a shot bringing it up to you.
00:27:916 (1,2,3,4,5) - the first and last note need to be moved a little closer to the other notes try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675552 applied
00:30:621 (1,2,3,4,5) - the notes in this steam are not all spaced out evenly. Make it look more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675531 applied
00:43:899 (1,2) - make this just a short little slider ya know? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675556 applied!
01:34:309 (7,8) - tilt these to either the right or the left you can choose https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675572 sure! applied
01:42:670 (2) - make this out of hit circles instead of a short slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675586 just like a cut little stream ya know!? xD sure XDD
01:49:432 (3,4,5,6) - add a few more circles to this stream like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675625 that may not look good to you. Just something like that. sorry i will keep this ;w;
01:51:461 (3) - move that a bit to the left because that is a pretty fast hyper dash for the rest of the song being laid back and chill or remove the hyper dash entirely. Whatever its your call https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675636 sure XD
Wow this map is great! The timing fits really well i have not seen a ctb map like this one before! it has a very unique style that i love! I hope this map becomes ranked and great job!!! 8-) thanks!
[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin

Surono wrote:

we,bos.
HAhaha momotas masih mengedalami osas KWKWKW gila gan hahh hhhhhhhhh ahah hhhhhhh

cacatas
hadheeee =_=
Spectator
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,780 posts
Joined February 2011
Spectator
General
  1. Consider adding Combo Colors for CtB diffs as they seem to be default ones
  2. Countdown is disabled only in Salad diff currently so please make all diffs have same option
Cup
  1. Disable Widescreen Support which is only turned on in cup diff
  2. 00:30:621 (3) - I'd never use 1/4 in the cup diff honestly
  3. 00:32:342 - NC here? They're placed pretty randomly so please polish them
  4. 00:32:588 (2,1) - The distance for those two reversed sliders is pretty harsh for the players playing Cup diff. Please reduce it
  5. 01:48:572 (1,2,3) - No dashes are allowed in Cup, so the distances here makes no sense at all as they're pretty hard to get without dashing, please fix the part
  6. 01:49:309 (3) - Also there should be no 1/4 here. Even the Salad has no 1/4 in the whole diff so putting them in the Cup diff makes no sense
Momota's Salad
  1. 01:00:375 (1) - Please add NC here, too many fruits getting stacked lol
  2. Due to Ranking Criteria, Adequate time must be left between objects and the start and end of spinners to ensure readability. That means spinner on 01:34:310 (1) - is unrankable. Maybe replacing it with a slider would be a good choice
Shiawase
  1. 00:15:744 (3,4,5) - The stream here feels harsh to me as they requires edge dash which wouldn't be on Platter diff. I'd fix like this
  2. 00:27:916 (4,5,6,7,1) - Isn't this supposed to be curve? Please move 6 to a bit right
  3. 00:32:342 (2,3,1) - The part is lack of movement as they're at exactly the same position so try some transition here
  4. 00:35:785 (5) - I'd move this to the left slightly. They feel too close to me
  5. 00:39:227 (4,1) - HDash here feels large imo
  6. 00:43:899 (5,6) - As BPM is higher than 120, following the Ranking Criteria using 1/4 in Platter diff isn't allowed. Please re-design the part
  7. 01:01:850 (4) - I expect a jump here actually, How about replacing the current slider with notes?
  8. 01:03:080 (1,2) - As I've written above, there should be no 1/4
  9. 01:48:817 (1,2) - Remove the HDash here
  10. 01:50:785 (1) - I'd remove the NC here and add one on 01:51:399 -
  11. 01:51:399 (4,5,6) - The jump for 5 and 6 will make players choke at the last part, also the 1/8 jump shouldn't be on Platter. Please reduce the distance between them
Good luck!
Surono
7,195 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
gilas dapet mengmodar si sefuh ini menggege, momotas pero dikids modasnya

ge el ge el ~
[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin

Spectator wrote:

General
  1. Consider adding Combo Colors for CtB diffs as they seem to be default ones
  2. Countdown is disabled only in Salad diff currently so please make all diffs have same option
Cup
  1. Disable Widescreen Support which is only turned on in cup diff fixed
  2. 00:30:621 (3) - I'd never use 1/4 in the cup diff honestly changed~
  3. 00:32:342 - NC here? They're placed pretty randomly so please polish them applied
  4. 00:32:588 (2,1) - The distance for those two reversed sliders is pretty harsh for the players playing Cup diff. Please reduce it changed to this Pattern
  5. 01:48:572 (1,2,3) - No dashes are allowed in Cup, so the distances here makes no sense at all as they're pretty hard to get without dashing, please fix the part fixed
  6. 01:49:309 (3) - Also there should be no 1/4 here. Even the Salad has no 1/4 in the whole diff so putting them in the Cup diff makes no sense fixed ;w;
Shiawase
  1. 00:15:744 (3,4,5) - The stream here feels harsh to me as they requires edge dash which wouldn't be on Platter diff. I'd fix like this
  2. 00:27:916 (4,5,6,7,1) - Isn't this supposed to be curve? Please move 6 to a bit right
  3. 00:32:342 (2,3,1) - The part is lack of movement as they're at exactly the same position so try some transition here
  4. 00:35:785 (5) - I'd move this to the left slightly. They feel too close to me
  5. 00:39:227 (4,1) - HDash here feels large imo
  6. 00:43:899 (5,6) - As BPM is higher than 120, following the Ranking Criteria using 1/4 in Platter diff isn't allowed. Please re-design the part
  7. 01:01:850 (4) - I expect a jump here actually, How about replacing the current slider with notes?
  8. 01:03:080 (1,2) - As I've written above, there should be no 1/4
  9. 01:48:817 (1,2) - Remove the HDash here
  10. 01:50:785 (1) - I'd remove the NC here and add one on 01:51:399 -
  11. 01:51:399 (4,5,6) - The jump for 5 and 6 will make players choke at the last part, also the 1/8 jump shouldn't be on Platter. Please reduce the distance between them
    applied all ;w; , thanks Spec!
Good luck!
[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin

Surono wrote:

gilas dapet mengmodar si sefuh ini menggege, momotas pero dikids modasnya

ge el ge el ~
makasih mas sur XDDD
Mamat
424 posts
Joined July 2013
Mamat

Surono wrote:

gilas dapet mengmodar si sefuh ini menggege, momotas pero dikids modasnya

ge el ge el ~
B e r g e t a r
-Keitaro
1,013 posts
Joined October 2013
-Keitaro
w masih noob mod mania, but lets try.

1/2/3/4

[Ruru's NM]
00:05:785 (5785|0,5785|3,6030|1,6030|2) - well, ini dua notes kenapa? kalo dibanding dengan 00:00:867 (867|0,867|3) - 00:08:244 (8244|1,8244|3) - 00:12:670 (12670|3,12670|0) - , dll, itu ngikutin suara piano(?) atau sejenisnya di background, probaly just change this into two notes and add notes 00:02:834 - 00:04:801 - 00:06:768 - 00:07:260 - 00:07:752 - 00:08:735 - 00:10:703 - this also to match with EZ, yang dimana dua notesnya ini berada di 4/4.
add a note on 00:18:571 - jadinya ada dua notes biar match dengan 00:19:063 (19063|1,19063|3) - dan 00:19:555 (19555|2,19555|0) - 00:20:047 (20047|1,20047|3) -
00:18:571 (18571|0) - ^
00:22:506 (22506|2) - ^
00:26:440 (26440|0) - ^
00:30:375 - add a note in 3 to match the sound.
00:44:883 - missing piano sound :3
01:00:867 - suaranya kencang, kok cuma 1 note? :/
01:02:711 (62711|3,62772|2,62834|1,62834|0) - I dont really sure 1/8 will work on Normal diff, this might couse confusion for new players
01:34:432 - missing drum sound
01:35:293 - many missing sounds from this part, karena cma ngulang dari yang awal, cba cek lagi dari bagian 00:16:604 - for consistency.
01:37:260 (97260|1) - sama dengan yang atas
01:41:194 (101194|3) - ^
01:45:129 (105129|3) - ^
01:51:399 (111399|0,111522|1,111645|2) - offbeat
01:54:965 (114965|3) - delet dis no sound

GL.

no std ccds >:(
[490]Yukarin
Topic Starter
[490]Yukarin
Shiawase diff changed to 1/4
changed the last slider to spinner (a long spinner i guess XD)
Momota
270 posts
Joined February 2014
Momota

Spectator wrote:

General


  • Momota's Salad
  1. 01:00:375 (1) - Please add NC here, too many fruits getting stacked lol added combo on this part 00:59:637
  2. Due to Ranking Criteria, Adequate time must be left between objects and the start and end of spinners to ensure readability. That means spinner on 01:34:310 (1) - is unrankable. Maybe replacing it with a slider would be a good choice applied

Good luck!
thanks for mod spectator !

ayam tegax
osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 63203
Countdown: 0
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Title:Shiawase Iro
TitleUnicode:しあわせ色
Artist:Hiiragi Mayuki(CV:Ogura Yui)/Hagino Chiaki(CV:Toujou Hisako)
ArtistUnicode:柊真雪(CV.小倉唯)、萩野千秋(CV.東城日沙子)
Creator:Yukarin-
Version:Momota's Salad
Source:ひなこのーと
Tags:Hinako note Gekidan Hitotose Yururu GSculerlor D_Arc Momota
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Surono: kunglaw
Surono
7,195 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
ewewewewewee :liukang:, momotas

buru di HD ini mapsetnya biar mengeiqe, q malez pdhl pgn ngepainos. :"v

tuutt tutttt modas gratis

>EZ D'Arc ksatria kaleng putih
* cacatas kok apix mengiqhe iki :"VVvv

>NM Yururu
* 00:03:817 - ini ke kolom ke 2 terus 00:04:063 - ini ke 3 gimana? 00:03:571 - 00:03:817 - karna ada dua suara yg similar disini jadi menurutku ya notesnya harus sama biar konsisten penekanannya. snapnya 1/2 masih aman lah
* 00:08:244 (8244|1,8244|3) - dan 00:08:735 (8735|3,8735|1) - sama polanya, coba 00:08:735 (8735|3,8735|1) - ubah ini jadi pola 12 buat neken piano downnya terus 00:08:981 - ini ke kolom 4, kliatan ga monotone.
* 00:11:686 - ke kolom 2 terus supaya dapet emphasize 00:12:178 - note kolom 2 ini itu dicoba dgn 00:11:932 - mindahin ini ke kolom 4. 4 ngejump ke 2 kerasa banget emphasizenya
* 00:14:883 - yah menurutku ga ada alasan kuat kenapa ini jadi double notes, apus kolom 4.
* 00:30:375 - dari sini coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8724253 ini biar balance sama suara drum2nya
* 00:46:112 - kenapa gak 1 aja notesnya? fokus buat melodi dulu. mulai ikut drumnya juga kliatan dari spot2 macem 00:47:834 (47834|1,47834|0,47957|2,48080|0,48080|3) - begini kan
* 00:51:030 - tiba2 ini jadi double, jadiin satu. 00:51:276 - 00:51:522 - suara2 macem ini kan harusnya.
* 00:54:965 - sama kek di atas, tapi buat 00:52:014 - 00:55:948 - ini okelah karna buat neken suara synth yg turun itu
* kalau kiai ga banyak mau dipoint tapi masih ada concern buat akunya, mending jangan berlebihan buat jack di beberapa tempat.. mungkin boleh digituin misalnya kalau ada suara snare beruntun macem 01:19:063 (79063|0,79063|1,79309|3,79309|2,79432|1,79432|0,79555|2,79555|3) - ini etc. coba tetep fokus buat ikut suara kick sama snare buat jack2nya atau yang menurutmu cocok buat beruntun jack gitu tapi jgn berlebihan soalnya increasing di kiai ini terlalu dense menurutku tapi gpplah, coba buat check balancenya kalau dah ngerasa oke ya gpplah.
Cera-
300 posts
Joined October 2012
Cera-
irc Mods
2017-07-31 10:25 Yukarin-: cer
2017-07-31 10:25 Cera-: iya syad?
2017-07-31 10:26 Yukarin-: tadinya mau minta mods cer, kalau bisa
2017-07-31 10:26 Cera-: mods? boleh
2017-07-31 10:26 Cera-: map apa?
2017-07-31 10:26 Cera-: baru lagi? :o
2017-07-31 10:27 Yukarin-: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1361472 Hiiragi Mayuki(CV:Ogura Yui)/Hagino Chiaki(CV:Toujou Hisako) - Shiawase Iro]
2017-07-31 10:27 Yukarin-: engga
2017-07-31 10:27 Yukarin-: yang lama kok
2017-07-31 10:27 Cera-: oooh
2017-07-31 10:28 Cera-: update lagi
2017-07-31 10:28 Cera-: wait update
2017-07-31 10:28 Yukarin-: iya
2017-07-31 10:28 Cera-: yang shiawase aja?
2017-07-31 10:28 Yukarin-: okay~ thanks
2017-07-31 10:28 Yukarin-: terserah cer
2017-07-31 10:28 Yukarin-: :D
2017-07-31 10:28 Cera-: >terserah
2017-07-31 10:28 Yukarin-: KWKWKW
2017-07-31 10:29 Yukarin-: maksudnya bebas
2017-07-31 10:29 Cera-: ya udah ane mod yang mania aja
2017-07-31 10:29 Cera-: xd
2017-07-31 10:29 Yukarin-: okeoke XD
2017-07-31 10:31 Cera-: mantap syad
2017-07-31 10:31 Yukarin-: apane
2017-07-31 10:32 Cera-: timing
2017-07-31 10:32 Cera-: sekarang baru cek pattern :''0
2017-07-31 10:33 Yukarin-: :o
2017-07-31 10:33 Yukarin-: jadi malu gw
2017-07-31 10:33 Yukarin-: ;w;
2017-07-31 10:34 Cera-: hmmm
2017-07-31 10:35 Cera-: bener dugaan ane, tinggal pattern ajaj
2017-07-31 10:35 Yukarin-: bener kan
2017-07-31 10:35 Yukarin-: :^)
2017-07-31 10:35 Yukarin-: masih dasar bgt ngemap platter
2017-07-31 10:35 Cera-: sebenernya ada 1 bagian timing yang salah
2017-07-31 10:35 Cera-: bukan salah sih
2017-07-31 10:36 Cera-: eerrmmm
2017-07-31 10:37 Cera-: kurang penuh
2017-07-31 10:37 Cera-: itu maksud ane
2017-07-31 10:38 Yukarin-: bagian mana cer?
2017-07-31 10:38 Cera-: udah gitu aja kan?
2017-07-31 10:38 Cera-: lho katanya gak perlu ngasih tau bagian yang salah/kurang
2017-07-31 10:38 Yukarin-: gitu gimana?
2017-07-31 10:38 Yukarin-: :^(
2017-07-31 10:38 Cera-: gitu=penjelasan ane
2017-07-31 10:39 Cera-: jadi ini beneran dibikin platter ye
2017-07-31 10:39 Yukarin-: iye
2017-07-31 10:39 Yukarin-: rain ga mungkin 2*
2017-07-31 10:39 Cera-: hmmm ane gak tau soal platter sih, jadi gak terlalu yakin ;w;
2017-07-31 10:39 Cera-: ya juga sih
2017-07-31 10:40 Cera-: oke ane ulang hasil mod ane ye
2017-07-31 10:40 Yukarin-: okee
2017-07-31 10:42 Cera-: timing overall udah aman, mungking sv nya terlalu kecil (?)
2017-07-31 10:42 Cera-: 01:18:571 (5) -  dijadiin stream kalau bisa
2017-07-31 10:42 Cera-: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8724397 contoh]
2017-07-31 10:43 Yukarin-: bentar
2017-07-31 10:44 Cera-: untuk pattern, slidernya terlalu vertikal (kurang kanan kiri tapi gak tau juga sih karena dibikin platter)
2017-07-31 10:44 Cera-: 01:10:703 (2,3) -  posisinya kurang pas
2017-07-31 10:45 Yukarin-: yang stream gw apply ye
2017-07-31 10:45 Cera-: maaf gak ada saran untuk yang diatas (buntu ide)
2017-07-31 10:45 Cera-: oke
2017-07-31 10:45 Yukarin-: gapapa
2017-07-31 10:45 Cera-: terserah situ syad, kan situ mappernya :0
2017-07-31 10:45 Cera-: ane cuma nyampein hasil mod aja
2017-07-31 10:45 Yukarin-: ;w;
2017-07-31 10:45 Yukarin-: iyasih
2017-07-31 10:46 Yukarin-: btw 01:10:703 (2,3) - udah enak, jadi gw keep aja :"0
2017-07-31 10:47 Cera-: :o
2017-07-31 10:47 Cera-: gak dibikin stream?
2017-07-31 10:47 Cera-: imo
2017-07-31 10:47 Yukarin-: engga :(
2017-07-31 10:48 Cera-: oke
2017-07-31 10:48 Yukarin-: oh bentar
2017-07-31 10:48 Yukarin-: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8724419 gini]
2017-07-31 10:48 Cera-: 2 bagian yang ane kasih ternyata butuh sream :''v
2017-07-31 10:48 Yukarin-: wkwk
2017-07-31 10:48 Cera-: boleh2
2017-07-31 10:48 Cera-: sip dah
2017-07-31 10:49 Yukarin-: gitu aja cer?
2017-07-31 10:49 Yukarin-: :'0
2017-07-31 10:50 Cera-: oke last (mungkin), patternnya terlalu sering kanan kiri (jump kecil per note) imo
2017-07-31 10:50 Cera-: mungkin butuh " lurus " ke kanan/kiri
2017-07-31 10:50 Cera-: gak tau juga sih :''v
2017-07-31 10:50 Cera-: udah itu aja

GL Syad, situ pasti bisa :)
Mamat
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Mamat

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YukaRei
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Joined May 2014
YukaRei
Hello c: here for the requested mod

Cup

Okay, first of all, I think to make this Cup more simple will be a nice idea (reduce the number of notes in some patterns). Is only my personal opinion, subjective, so feel free to ignore some suggestions.

- 00:02:096 (4) - ctrl+H? I think following the direction here looks better. Then, if you did that, apply crtl+H to this too 00:02:834 (1) -
- 00:06:030 (3) - ctrl+H and x:208, same reason, follow the direction (in my opinion) fits better.
- 00:11:440 (3) - x:80 and 00:11:686 (4) - x:32? As you can see, same reason as prev, follow the direction of those sliders looks better.
- 00:13:162 (2,3,4,1,2) - How about change these fo a slider like this? Image
- 00:14:391 (3) - crtl+H and x:240?
- 00:15:129 (4) - New combo here.
- 00:17:342 (3) - Change this for a circle in x:448.
- 00:19:063 (3) - Same, try a circle here, x:256.
- 00:19:555 (1) - And this one too, turn it into a circle in x:112.
- 00:21:276 (3) - Move this to x:240, I felt it a bit far.
- 00:22:998 (3,1) - Move these 3 points to the left, x:352.
- 00:30:129 (2,3) - How about something like this? Image
- 00:32:342 (1) - Try a slider here, like this Image
- 00:33:326 (2,3,4) - How about a reverse slider here? Image
- I think this 00:34:801 (4) - and this 00:38:735 (1) - are better like a simple slider or two circles. In first case something like this looks good Image, and in second case something like this Image
- 00:36:276 (7) - New combo
- 00:40:211 (3) - ctrl+H and x:192
- 00:41:440 (6) - ctrl+H and x:480
- 00:41:932 (7) - 00:42:916 (1) - 00:44:145 (4) - New combo
- 00:48:326 (5) - New combo, ctrl+H and x:208
- 00:50:047 (1) - ctrl+H and x:80
- 00:51:522 (5) - Change this for a circle and try something like this Image, move both 00:51:276 (4,5) - , 4 and 5 to x:400
- Try this slider 00:52:998 (2) - here 00:52:014 like this Image
- 00:54:473 (1) - 00:56:194 (1) - 01:00:867 (5) - New combo
- 01:37:752 (3,4) - x:240
- 01:42:178 (4) - x:224

That's all on Cup, some patterns are more of the same. My suggestion is to try to make it more simple.

Salad

My suggestion to Salad is to take a look to combos.

- 01:34:310 (1) - I'm not sure at all, but I tried something like this in a salad too and it's unrankeable. I'll leave you here a pattern Image
- 01:37:752 (6) - I'm not sure what happened here but be careful, remove that note.

Platter

- 01:02:711 here you can improve more, 01:02:834 (7) - delete this nothe and add a reversal slider here 01:02:711 like this Image, looks good in my opinion. Is only a suggestion, feel free to try something similar lyou think will fits better.
- Try to increase the distance between these notes 01:03:326 (3,1) - to stand out the sound in 01:03:817 (1) - . An HDash there will be amazing, but be careful with this 01:05:047 (2) - . If you will move 01:03:817 (1) - I recommend you to move all this pattern 01:05:047 (2,3,4) - too
- 01:19:432 how about adding a note here? The idea is to create an HDash to 01:19:555 (1) - for the same reason as prev, to stand out the sound in 01:19:555 (1) -
- Same in this 01:35:047 (1) - , try to stand out the sound at the end of the slider, my suggestion is to add a circle there and move it in direction to 01:35:539 (2) -

That's all, I hope this help you c:
Pretty cute song and map, have success ranking it
Leonita
488 posts
Joined December 2012
Leonita
Rame bener modnya ;w;
Jejak duyu
Mamat
424 posts
Joined July 2013
Mamat

Leonita wrote:

Rame bener modnya ;w;
Jejak duyu
Hitsound gw hilang semua sejak update terbaru :(
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