Trynna wrote:

eu recomendaria separar o combo 5 do 6, eles são extramamente parecidos e é bem difícil de perceber a diferença, quando é usado pra mostrar que "algo mudou" nos seus ritmos principalmente, isso pega de surpresa - sim sim, eu vou padronizar o mapa inteiro pra ter ele só na parte calma depois do kiai, vou só esperar o mapa ficar mais polido pra fazer isso c:

sobre o offset eu vou deixar como tá, mas qualquer reclamação futura eu ajusto ^^

tags: seria bom adicionar ペルソナ5 e short/cut version -
talvez alguma menção a megami tensei, mas pelo que pesquisei persona 5 não usou megami tensei para marketing em nenhum aspecto, apesar de fazer parte da série - boa, eu vou botar porque ele é spin off então faz sentido

[hard]

1. o ar me parece extramamente alto pra dificuldade imposta, sem contar que deixa o spread meio estranho 4>5>8.5. Eu abaixaria por 1 pelo menos - não manjo muito disso então vou ajustar
2. 00:05:435 - apesar de estar num reverse não fazer isso ser uma preocupação tão grande, o som aqui é fortasso, provavelmente colocar como clicável seja melhor imo - adjusted c:
3. 00:24:383 (6,7) - você vinha usando um spacing um tanto quanto constante e de vez em quando alternando nas transições, por isso essa pattern parece too stronk pra esse hard. o mesmo pra 00:34:488 (6,7) - eu concordo, mas eu realmente quero deixar como tá pois sinto que tá jogável e bacana no feel :3 - qualquer coisa futuramente eu ajeito c:
4. 01:05:751 (3,4,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8655607 provavelmente algo assim faria mais sentido, evitando um flick do player em 01:05:751 (3,4) - ajustei de uma forma similar só que mudei um pouco os cliques

[insane]

1. 00:11:751 (2,3,4) - eu achei um ritmo como 00:17:120 (2,3,4) - mais apropriado pra dar ênfase na guitarra - eu também, adjusted
2. 00:21:225 (1,5) - idk, eu stackaria, já que 00:21:856 (5,5,4) - atuam no mesmo lugar, só essa nota ficar de fora é meio estranho - whoopsie
3. 00:30:856 (6) - meu deus tira whistle do body - credo que horrivel eu nem tinha visto q
4. 00:41:751 (1) - você ta seguindo o mesmo ritmo mas suddenly deu uma simplificada monstra, por que exatamente? me parece off, tanto que na outra parte você optou por seguir os drums, que eu achei muito melhor e eles também estão aqui - concordo...eu vou deixar assim mas se alguem mais apontar eu adapto
   nice

[last]

1. 00:09:856 (7,1) - esse overlap entre a tail do 7 e a head do 1 é meio feinho pra estética, não sei se era a intenção tho - era a intenção,
   mas eu concordo que poderia ser bem melhor ou até mesmo diferente...eu vou tentar mais umas coisas e pegar mais opiniões, provavelmente mudarei
2. 00:13:488 (2) - provavelmente seria mais legal dar um ctrl+g aqui, não faz tanta diferença ingame e parece que o flow fica mais legal visualmente hmmm okay
3. 00:15:383 (1) - você não usou esse tipo de NC depois pra dar split no instrumental, eu recomendaria remover - sure
4. 00:46:330 (1,1) - não entendi bem o conceito desses NCs pra ser sincero, você mantinha um combo alto, e essa lógica foi usada tipo uma vez - foi erro dhauosdhsauod nem tinha visto, valeu
5. 00:52:172 - você errou o sv aqui? em todas as partes parecidas com essa você optou por 0.75 mas aqui você usou 0.65 e mudou numa parte meio nada a ver que afetou um slider (00:55:330 -) - na real eu errei em todos os outros, ele era o único correto. HADEUOHDEAUO eu fixei tudo já,
   boa
6. 01:09:856 (3) - clap na head foi proposital? - sim

spinner é coisa de viado - sim, rodar spinner é igual rodar bolsinha, coisa de viado

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291,339,33698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,339,33856,2,0,B|199:337|199:337|150:326,1,90,0|2,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
38,292,34172,5,6,0:3:0:0:
174,226,34330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
38,160,34488,1,0,1:0:0:0:
174,94,34646,1,2,0:3:0:0:
0,225,34804,70,0,P|34:238|85:222,1,90,6|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
174,94,35119,1,4,1:3:0:0:
336,226,35277,2,0,P|298:219|262:180,1,90,2|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
404,295,35593,1,2,0:3:0:0:
340,69,35751,2,0,P|378:76|414:115,1,90,4|0,1:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
405,235,36067,1,6,0:3:0:0:
340,69,36225,5,0,0:0:0:0:
473,136,36383,1,4,1:3:0:0:
337,202,36541,1,2,0:3:0:0:
473,268,36699,1,6,1:3:0:0:
337,334,36857,1,2,0:3:0:0:
337,202,37015,1,6,1:3:0:0:
473,268,37172,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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216,150,37646,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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254,338,38277,6,0,P|222:307|201:268,1,90,4|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,150,38593,1,2,0:3:0:0:
96,181,38751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,301,38909,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,181,39067,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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178,311,39856,6,2,L|274:279,1,90,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,271,40093,2,2,P|318:315|298:367,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,380,40330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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267,98,40725,2,2,P|311:86|363:106,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,138,40961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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133,30,41593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,185,41751,6,0,B|213:241|213:241|191:216|178:172,1,180,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,41,42225,1,2,0:3:0:0:
210,186,42383,6,0,P|256:228|290:248,1,90,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,282,42856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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322,333,43962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,333,44120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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162,208,44593,70,0,P|181:267|200:302,1,90
322,333,45225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,333,45383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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322,333,45856,2,0,L|361:365,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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136,102,47908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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190,51,50277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,51,50435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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318,92,51067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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80,48,52014,1,8,3:2:0:0:
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225,215,53593,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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225,215,55646,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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289,114,58172,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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392,156,63541,1,8,0:3:0:0:
268,331,63699,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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134,109,65751,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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50,98,68909,54,0,P|83:177|169:182,1,180,6|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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244,196,71435,1,2,0:3:0:0:
252,157,71752,1,2,0:3:0:0:
353,317,72067,6,0,P|416:322|401:261,1,144,6|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

pacsu wrote:

hi , my mod

Ruin

00:03:462 (2) - stack the 2 whis the 00:02:909 (7) - to emphasis the sound
00:08:830 (2) - same here - I like the 2 ideas, i've also adjusted the blankets
00:11:435 (1) - fix the blanket - reworked this moment
00:29:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - the hitsounds are weird -
00:39:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same - it's ok
01:12:067 (1,2) - maybe make a long jump here ? - nah

insane
00:28:409 (6) - kinda weird and hard to play - I don't think so, but I adjusted the pattern
00:30:383 (4) - NC
00:31:014 (7) - NC
00:40:488 (4) - NC
00:41:120 (7) - NC - okay
00:43:330 - a strong sound like this should not be at the end of a slider
00:48:383 - same - it's fine, but i'll consider with more opinions
00:59:751 (3) - ctrl g ? okay

not all diff sorry i cant
hope this will help anyways - It did, thanks a lot ^^

Sakurauchi Riko wrote:

Hey, my end of M4M

ruin
00:01:646 (1,3) - fix this blanket here - adjusted
00:02:751 (6,1) - maybe you can somwhow manage to blanket them aswell since you blanket 00:02:909 (7,1) - this. it would give you a lot of additional structure - indeed is a lot better, also improved a few of the next patterns, much more cleaner and polished now
00:04:962 (2,3,4) - not a fan of this wide angled placement here (plays awfully if not used behind a good concept) since you also used sharp angles (and actual jumps) for 00:02:120 (2,3) - which is basically the same sound/pattern. - yes, me neither....Adjusted
00:08:909 (3) - these 2 red anchors seem really random to me, like almost you ran out of ideas for a good slidershape (since you used a lot good sldierhshapes before). you could so something like https://puu.sh/wTBQ7/0974ccc6c4.png eventually, looks way more intended than the current one imo - that's exactly what happened HAHAHA and yeah, opted for yours
00:24:383 (3,4) - how about 2 1/4 sliders hear instead to emphasize the background noise that shows up here? i think it's wasted if you just ignore this noise. you would have to do that on similar spots aswell to be consistent, so idk if you really wanna do that - ..I liked your idea, i'll put some tests on that, I think i know how to handle that without changing ''too much'' of the overall structure and rythm...if it doesn't work i'll leave as it is
00:26:356 - 00:26:514 - 00:26:672 - and so on .. these sounds: i think you should somewhat try to represent them, i mean you map a lot this basic 1/2 sounds so why not choose a different rhythm the song provides to create more variety. i tihnk its a bit wasted potential here. also this appears in the music quite often e.g. in 00:28:488 - this measure too. especially you should consider this because you map a similar sound 00:29:120 (1) - here
00:29:988 - i dont hear any sound - but there is, although a bit lower, it's the same rythm from 00:29:120 (1) -
00:31:251 - ^ the sound that was on the blue tick before is actually on the white tick along with the really noisy sound now
yea.. i tihnk for 00:29:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this whole thing you should listen to the song really carefully and map only specific sounds (since you obviously cant map all sounds) because you map different sounds and skip sounds you mapped before. - yup, that's why I teach the player the new rythm with 00:29:120 (1) - so he gets ready for it
00:32:593 (3,4) - 00:33:225 (3,4) - and similar ones deserve more spacing for a better emphasis imo hmm, i think it's good enough compared to the whole map o:
00:44:277 (6) - 00:45:541 (3) - 00:48:067 (2) - 00:49:330 (6) - add more spacing towards those, you do this at 00:43:804 (4) - 00:46:330 (1) - 00:46:804 (3) - and so on.. aswell, so you should be consistent here - indeed, adjusted section
some blankets here and there could also be improved, for example 00:02:909 (7,3) - 00:04:488 (1,3) - 00:07:804 (4,1) - and so on.. there are a lot more

some things appear on similar spots that got repeated, i guess you are aware of that


insane
00:01:488 (4,1) - this spacing should be higher than 00:01:172 (2,3,4) - for DS emphasis towards the strong and special sound at 00:01:646 -
00:04:330 (4,1) - same thing here, you actually do it better at 00:05:909 (6,1) - or 00:06:856 (4,1) - which makes a lot more sense indeed,
reworked a bit few notes and now it's more consistent
00:19:172 (4,5,1) - yeah you get it - here actually I think it's fine because of the whole pattern

similar blue tick thing here aswell as i mentioned it top diff, it does not make sense if you map 00:29:120 (1) - this blue tick rhythm but ignore the other blue ticks before, at least for me it doesnt. - it's because the blue tick rythm gets more important only after this note for this section, and well,
I did map the blue tick ? xD00:29:751 (1,2,3,4) - it's the exact same sounds as the reverse arrow

00:37:330 (1,3) - this is kinda hard to read, too hard for insane if you ask me - i would easily think that 00:37:804 (3) - is not a 1/1 slider - indeed, even because I didn't do that in the last diff, reworked pattern
00:46:330 - dont think its a good idea to hide this sound behind the sliderend since it is the only one, better to be consistent here and make this clickable - indeed, fixed
00:58:646 (4,1) - deserves more spacing, looks visually almost the same as 00:58:172 (3,4) - . basically another ds emphasis issue - re-arranged angles, DS is similar but angles now are better giving proper emphasiz
01:03:225 (3,4,1) - same here, 01:03:699 (4) - is not important at all but it has a spacing of 3.2x towards itself and 01:03:856 (1) - which is objectively stronger only 2.1x ds towards it. - indeed, reworked angles, but DS is slightly similar because the sudden change of flow from 01:03:699 (4,1,2) - gives enough intensity imo

hard
00:05:435 (7,1) - im not quite sure but this may be too hard to read for this difficulty. the player has barely time to notice the stacked sliderhead - re-made section
00:10:804 (1) - you should make a much different shape for this to be seperated from the other sliders (because it has very slow sv) - done
00:24:383 (6,7) - why you have here a jump but a bit later at 00:28:488 (1,2,3,4) - it is spaced equally? you should do this consistent, i'd rather not suggest you to do such huge and sudden jump in a hard - because i've placed the intensity at 00:28:488 (1,2) - which makes the whole 00:28:488 (1,2,3,4,1) - have enough intensity imo, and those 5 single taps give an awesome momentum for 00:29:120 (1,1) -
00:34:172 (4,5,6,7) - this and the patterns after are more consistent in terms of jumps/slight ds emphasises - indeed
00:39:856 (1,2) - same spacing between those like you did for 00:40:488 (3,4) - and so on to be consistent - indeed, fixed
01:08:751 (3,1) - stack maybe for better structure - stacked

apart from the few inconsistencies a really good hard diff - c:


advanced
00:05:277 (2,3) - is there a reason to not stack them? since you usually stack circle on top of next sliderhead if it has 1/1 gap before - going to explain below
00:16:014 (5,6) - here aswell, i see that this inconsistency is consistent but you'd rather wanna keep everything as a whole consistent to be as straightforward as possible in low diff - explaining below
00:17:593 (3,4) - you get it, because then at 00:19:488 (7,1) - you get back to stacking. there are more spots in the diff - yeah, there's actually a reason xD lemme try to explain: So, the song gets a lot of rythm breaks with the ''BZZZ'' sound (example: 00:04:488 (1) - ) that makes the rythm have a lot of inconstant logic, the difference between stacked and not stacked, is that stacked notes imo feel more ''harsh''. You take ''STOP''.''GO AGAIN''. on your aim and flow...that's why I only stack notes when the transitional reverse slider happens, because the song's rythm ''resets'' 00:02:435 (2,3,1) - 00:07:804 (2,3,1) - 00:13:172 (5,6,1) - 00:18:541 (6,7,1) - etc etc....and I do the unstacked notes for moments of the song where it's either hapenning a kind of transition or simply common continuous rythm 00:05:277 (2,3,4,1) - 00:16:014 (5,6,7,1) - etc etc ^^. I know that these low star diffs should be as consistent as possible, but some loyalty to the song is appreciated i think hehe. that's my way of putting feeling and variety in these diffs o:
00:21:541 (6) - you rather wanna put this slider a little bit up so the movement towards it isnt that harsh - makes sense, adjusted
00:36:699 (6,7,1) - same idea here, the movement is really harsh and awkward for newbies, they rather tend to follow the slidershape until its end, so they have to move back to the next object - indeed, I didn't think about that, fixed and going to pay atention to future times
00:31:014 (1,2,3,1) - maybe line those up for straight flow instead of curved flow to make it different from 00:28:172 (3,4,5,6) - 00:26:277 (5,6,7,1) - being curved and they have a different sound than 00:31:014 (1,2,3,1) - . dont have to do that since nobody gives a shit anyways in low diffs but would be cool - oh nice one, didn't thought about that, adjusted
00:52:014 (3) - this circle is unneccessary imo since the sound is really weak (and 2 1/2 circles in a row is hard for a 2.3* diff), same for the others ofc - Agree, adjusted all the moments



alright thats it for me, I hope my mod was useful in any way ! really solid set, GDs look nice aswell (although i didnt mod 'em) - yeah, thank you very much <3
Best of Luck

ShogunMoon wrote:

heyo~

m4m from q

• General

1. are you sure that the title is Yaldabaoth because in the album the song is called Jaldabaoth - I don't really know anymore lol,
   but I'll change to J
2. Artist should be 目黒 将司 and romanised artist is Meguro Shoji - seems right
3. Source should be 女神异闻录5- I think Persona 5 is more direct and also relatable

• Advanced

1. open aimod - fix
2. 00:36:067 (4) - should be at x:354 y:335 for a better fluidity when you play - actually it's ok, it's arbitrary
3. 00:50:593 (2,1) - overlap doesn't look nice, stack them? - fixed
4. 00:24:541 - make this sound clickable, strong sound on a slider tail sound off, something like this fit better imo - dude, there was a strong drum sound on the white tick lols xD the other tick is a support rythm, a.k.a. slider tail
5. 00:30:225 (2,3,4,1,2) - sound off because at this moment these notes should be to 1/6 so maybe put some sliders renverse - what
6. 00:40:330 (2,3,4,1,2) - ^

• Hard

1. 00:07:646 (6,7,8) - hitsounds should be similar as 00:02:277 (6,7,8) - ohh indeed, fixed, bugs
2. 00:17:909 (4,6) - there are not very symmetricals maybe decrease a little the slider 6 - fixed by adjusting 4 and 5
3. 00:26:909 (5) - should be 2 notes with a jump like you did at 00:24:383 (6,7) - for emphasis these sounds 00:26:909 - and 00:27:067 - too much overkill for the whole structure, it's ok as it is
4. 00:37:014 (5) - ^
5. 00:42:383 (5) - nc then remove nc here 00:42:856 (1) - for be consistent with 00:47:435 (1,2,3) - fixed
6. 00:53:751 (1,3) - they should be identical that would make a better appearance - hmm...i like it that way because of the flow choices

• Insane

1. 01:12:067 (1,2) - unstack them and make a little jump for emphasis drums - nah

Nice mapset~ - sankyu c:

gl!~

Andrea wrote:

M4M as requested from my queue.

~General~

1. Combo 5 and Combo 6 are way too dark and their approach circle is hard to see, I suggest you to remove them. - yeah, some similar complaints were given...I won't remove them because at the calm part after kiai I'll use only ''dead'' colors, but I'll change them for better tones ^^

~Advanced~

1. 00:31:646 (2,3,1) - Spacing is inconsistent here, make sure to always enable distance snap on Easy/Normal difficulties. - oh damn,
   i must've made this mistake after previous mod by accident
2. 00:57:224 (1) - This slider seems to be unsnapped, resnap it properly. - fixed

~Hard~

1. 00:31:014 (1) - I would remove the NC from here and add it on 00:31:646 (3) - would fit with the music way better. - indeed, fixed

~Insane~

1. 00:04:962 (2,3,4) - Spacing inconsistency, move (3) a bit more to the left to fix this. - righty, fixed

~Ruin~

1. 00:51:699 (2) - This slider is really confusing because you can't really understand from which direction you should go, I would suggest you to change the shape of it a bit. - agreed, now it's better to understand

Interesting map, good luck with this! - thanks!

Ataraxia wrote:

to correndo atras das responsabilitops, entao e um mod que eu devo ta devendo entao vamo la

advénced

00:48:699 (3,4,5,6,7) - testa isso fica melhor eu deveria explicar mas quero morrer dormir, confie no meu instinto por favor - não, desculpa KOPDKSAOD isso vai quebrar a consistência fudida, vai ficar mt random pq n fiz isso em nenhum outro lugar nem de forma parecida

hérd

00:04:962 (6,8,1) - ai tem um bolo de stack que da pra fixa SO FIXA ESSA PORRA - tentei ;w;

00:16:804 (1) - ai q bengalona - tu gosta né safada

00:29:120 (5) - deus do NC, tira ele - whoopsie

00:40:488 (3) - stack tstack tsak - stack

nossa seto seu Ruin

00:01:172 (2,3) - seriao, esse slider ele ta muito forte pra essa "guitarra" q tem ai,tanto q é um som de finalizada q ela da, entao eu acho que vc deveria fazer um classico curvado ou aquele ponto vermelho no meio fazendo um penis (acho que vc entendeu) . vai por min , eu achei estressasante e ainda irritante de jogar, e ainda se repete aqui 00:02:435 (4) - e aqui 00:05:277 (4) - , nao quero forçar remap e tals, tanto q ta rankeavel e etc, mas tenha em mente q isso ta mto repentino de jogar q - ele é ritmo da bateria, não dá guitarra, foi mal vai ficar assim e nem que deus acuda eu mudo qq

so isso

boa sorte com o mapa owo - obg fofo

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Artist:Meguro Shoji
ArtistUnicode:目黒 将司
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Smokeman wrote:

m4m from your q

some metadata things: http://media.vgm.io/albums/47/59374/593 ... 320765.jpg Artist name should be Shoji Meguro. (cant find a proper example where its romanized w/o all caps so ask around metadata geeks :> ) - changed from shoji meguro to meguro 2 times already .__.''
http://media.vgm.io/albums/35/63053/630 ... 603248.jpg name is correct - okie, gonna ask the gods of metadata

too loud drum-hitfinish imo
the volume is quite high. Reduce it by like 10% each D: (why 91% lol) - i'm a bit deaf ._.
The timing signature at 00:00:699 - kinda confuses me. It doesnt sound like a 4/4 and the only thing really fitting is 17/4 which is kinda wierd and overkill in itself lol - the timing is correct, the problem is that on this song in specific shoji meguro used an inconsistent structure, it's actually quite commong in OSTs of video games, and he also did that for other works like Nocturne and stuff, the timing is right, but he keeps ''resetting the timing'' from time to time a bit before the real transition, but in the end after the 4 transitions it always fit on the timing, which proves that this is correct
Would be nice to have less saturated colours in 00:42:383 - 00:50:593 - and intenser colours in the kiai or something. You have a lot of colours already so colour haxing would be pretty cool B^) - yeah! I actually plan on doing this (that's why i have strong colours and those greys) but I'll wait for the mapset to be more polished and a bit more ready for ranking to actually fix that ^^

Advanced

00:48:699 (3,4,5) - this looks really messy when you play it (guitar note on the repeat of the slider is kinda wierd aswell) - [/color]

I really like what you did with the hitsounds in the second half! - <3


Hard

From this diff on the drum-hitfinish hitsound you use becomes a bit too loud imo.
00:37:804 - you didnt use a drumfinish on red tick ever. Just pointing out cause it might not have been intended - yeah it was, there's an unique change in the song here, so it fits
00:51:620 - 00:56:672 - 01:01:725 - 01:06:777 - mute the ends a bit (since you already use high volume settings) - fixed

Insane

00:00:699 - 00:10:804 - would be cool if you followed the guitar to some extend like you did later on
Since you added passive hitsounds through drums it is not very clear how the song does the drumming. - hmm...not changing anything because I didn't quite get your point haha sorry
00:02:120 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Playing this rythm i was following your hitsounding and not the song which was kinda wierd :s - I kinda agree with you, but can't come up with a change that doesn't conflicts with the rest of this section requiring too much changes, i'll leave it like this for now but will ask for more feedback
00:09:856 (5) - you could add bit of a gimmick hear and increase the sv to 1.1-1.2 just for this slider since its quite intenser than the rest of the chords played prior. - I agree with your point, but I did a different change, I emphasized here a bit more with rythm, but no changes for the slider
00:17:751 (5) - this slider looks kinda out of place imo. move the second white node a bit to the right https://puu.sh/x4Lzd/f14120b726.png ? kinda irrelevant change but yeah, sure haha
00:19:646 (1) - clap ? - nope, in ''theory'' it should be a clap, but the song is irregular, the rythm keeps adapting, so there's no clap here in reality
00:21:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - reusing the same placement for these 00:22:488 (2,3,5,6,2,3) - made the transition less gradifying to play :< - you're right, remade the first jumps before kiai and adjusted the flow of the second pattern to make sense on gameplay
00:29:988 (2) - the violin starts doing this pattern here 00:30:383 - . Imo its quite noticeable of a difference since you can hear the pitch changes and all - actually he starts way back there...here 00:28:488 (1) - hahaha, so i mad the transition more intuitive by introducing with 00:29:120 (1) -
00:34:172 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - i would've love some more intensity on this one since the build-up by the violins/synths is on an even higher pitch this time.I didn't do this in the previous one, but i'll change to have one here....i don't want this diff to be too stressfull since the Ruin diff is already heavily tense
00:40:093 (2) - same thing - same answer
00:56:751 (2,1,2,3) - you could put these in a much cleaner pattern - I didn't get it...how? o:
00:59:277 (2,3) - It feels like these should get distorted sliderbodies aswell cause they are on such Kraygasmic guitar notes O: - slight adjustments for both consistency and flow...it's not a heavily distorted, but it was emphasized :3
01:10:488 (2,3) - imo stacking these would be better. You spend such a long time w/o any sign of these and it felt kinda unexpected to hit this kind of rythm all of a sudden. ( Although 3 technicly overmapped but stacking them kinda fits better with the identical sound of the hitsounds) - hmmm,
will leave like this, if more people point out i'll change


Ruin

Ar9.5 feels like way to much for a difficulty like this. Ar 9.2-9.3 seems fine - good point, leaving at 9.3
00:14:277 (1,2,3,4) - You should keep some visual spacing between objects so its more clear whats going on on a sight read : ) - yeah,
fixed
00:14:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this combo is way too long. nah, it's fine since there was no break in rythm by the song at this point
TBH your NCing patterns confuse me a bit.. - the song has a confusing tempo
00:03:462 (2,3) - Nc should go on either of these instea dof 00:03:067 (1) - since 1 is still part of 00:01:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - indeed
00:08:435 (1) - same
00:09:856 (7) - NC
00:10:804 (4) - Doesnt really need an NC imo - brusque change of SV, i'd rather leave it >3<
00:29:988 (2) - 00:40:093 (2) - same thing like in insane - same answer
00:58:172 (3,4) - Putting 3 this far away to the op left corner of the playfield creates unnecessary straign. (cause its harder to move your curser so far away from the middle of the playfield) Putting it a tiny bit closer would make wonders! - yeah, that's the point of these 1/1 gaps on this diff hehe
01:02:909 (2,3,4) - thsi is actually easier to play lol -same DS, and same intensity, it's comfortable but the other one still has it's own purposes
01:07:962 (2,3,4) - this one is even worse cause for most right-handed players this is the worst position on the playfield (try moving your tablet pen or mouse to that part of the screen UGH D: ) - as a former #387 player...too much bambling about nothing xD just aim the note right
01:10:488 (4,5) - same thing like in insane - yah, leaving for a while


ok this got pretty long. Playing all diffs prior of modding i had better feeling about this. I guess Net0's diff fired me up a little bit - it's k xD

Slips wrote:

Ruin

First thing I noticed was your use of perfectly horizontal sliders - personally I think they look better when tilted a small amount (between 4° and 9°), but if you like them as they are, then keep them. Also really like your hitsounding and slider shapes - thanks! and yeah, I might keep the sliders haha xD

00:17:751 (5,7) - not really keen on this overlap. You could move 00:17:909 (6,7,8) - over to the left a bit so 7 perfectly overlaps 5 like this. Looks cleaner imo - I do agree with you to some extent, but that would leave some DS inconsistent, so I'll have to keep it for now, gonna ask for more opinions tho!
00:19:488 (4) - i feel like this would be better if it were more directly under 00:19:172 (3), or just not at such a harsh angle. I think this works better - yeah, the angle was indeed to harsh...Adjusted to something like your picture and fixed the next notes DS to keep it consistent
00:20:751 (6,7) - very minor, but i think it would be better if 7 was perfectly inline with the slider, since the slider is completely straight. Offsetting the circle after the slider looks best on sliders that are shaped more, like 00:12:541 (6,7), and doesn't really work on straight sliders imo. However its not really that important and just something to consider - I usually do that so the player has some kind of ''leniency'' on his aim because the map already has a lot of strain...gonna keep an eye out in case more people give this same suggestion
00:22:172 (1) - personally i'd space the jumps in this section a little bit more, just to differentiate them from the sections before a bit more. The song is more intense here so higher spacing makes sense - indeed, I liked this suggestion, increased a bit the jump distance (Rip, 5.55 stars tho :c)
00:36:699 (1,2,3,4) - i like this - I really like this moment aswell!
00:42:383 (1) - this section especially would look a lot better with a 5° angle to all the sliders. Maybe curve some too - having them all perfectly straight is quite bland, even tho the song is calm here - I figured really strait sliders with constant DS is ''simple to play'', but also has a lot of strain, which I think represents perfectly this section, because this song is from a really important and tense moment in the game, and even tho it's calm, it also has a really huge weight
01:12:067 (1,2) - there's no harm in spacing these out a bit, considering the two beats are quite strong. This would work nicely - okay, I didn't want to change it but as promised, since more people pointed out, gonna adjust it c:

Insane

00:14:120 (4,1) - i think these should be spaced more - indeed they should
00:19:488 (5,1) - same as above. For how strong the sound is i think theyre a little too closely spaced but it prolly doesnt matter much - they overall DS is a bit on tight here, but I increased a bit and moved it to the side a little so there's more emphasiz
00:46:172 (5,6) - id swap these two circles for a slider to compliment the guitar, same at 00:46:804 (1) - aw, but i like this motion so much ;w; gonna keep it srry hehe
00:58:804 (1) - any reason as to why this curves upwards? Imo it looks better going downwards https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10628915 - not really a ''reason'', I just think that this way it has a better motion to 00:58:804 (1,2) -
01:07:962 (2,5) - i like how you stacked the heads and tails of these, looks nice - c:

Marianna's Normal

The sv throughout the map feels a tiny tiny bit too high, lower the base sv to 1.1 or 1.0 flat and it might be better - maybe im wrong though, Im not very good at modding lower diffs

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Not really anything else to say modding wise. Really nice map overall, good luck with ranking it! - thanks a lot for your mod!