Yales wrote:
[Easy][Normal]
- 02:12:348 (1) - You could actually make it start on the next white tick for the guitar (and 1/1 gap for an easy might not be too slow considering the BPM). 1/2 gap is pretty sure enough for the guitar lol
- 03:29:148 (1) - ^
- 02:45:348 (2,3) - flow is good, but might be a bit misleading for newbies? Try to ctrl+J 02:45:348 (2) - maybe. k
- 04:42:048 (1) - All other diff finish on the red tick by the way oops
[Hard]
- 00:33:648 (3) - NC e.e no lol 00:38:448 (1) - remove this instead so the nc system will not look that stupid
- 02:12:198 (1) - same thing than easy, there's a really audible last guitar sound here 02:12:348 - saem
- 03:28:848 (1) - I'd do a similar rhythm than the easy diff by adding a note here 03:28:848 - and put spinner here 03:29:148 - (or on the red tick if you don't want to change it for some reason~) added a circle there but the same reason goes for the spinner
[Insane]
- 03:28:998 (1) - I know I'm being loud but I maintain this should be on the next white tick xd uhh but why lol
By the way, I didn't point this out cause I don't know if you care or not, but sometimes (it came a few times) the spacing is uneven, it wouldn't be a problem at all if it wasn't visually blatant because of the followpoints. For example 00:27:348 (1,2,3) - you can see the followpoint from 1 to 2 but not from 2 to 3. But ye... not rly an issue by itself honestly cant do much because thats just how i map lel[Ex]
- 00:19:698 (8) - Not saying to make it perfectly centered but it might look better to move it 2 grid right in a way it doesn't semi-overlap with the tail of 00:20:148 (9) - fixed
- 03:29:148 (1) - same tbh same what
- 04:07:248 (2) - whistle actually sounds pretty good here for the melody good
- 04:42:198 (1) - considering this is an insane you could maybe make it start on the previous blue tick? same
Really cool set! >.<
- 00:43:398 (4,5,6) - I'd personally put the same spacing than 00:43:698 (7,8,9) - , looks cool. uhh mine looks kinda better
- 02:56:148 (4) - I like how it plays, although I wonder if something like this https://puu.sh/zvalO/5bf986dc61.png wouldn't sound more accurate? like if u listen to the guitar from 02:56:298 - theres 4 guitars between the red tick and the blue tick
- 02:31:548 (1) - Make it start on previous blue tick?
- 03:28:998 (1) - same tbh
- 04:37:398 (1) - previous blue tick?
- 04:42:198 (1) - ^ i dont like having spinners start at the blue tick lol (it just looks kinda gross and it sucks on mania mode)
thx 4 modsassassincread wrote:
so u finally decide to rank this ?
前奏詐欺の人 ? The Rhythm Lier ? lol
[Easy]
00:33:648 (2) - adjust it a bit ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10345743 why lol
02:43:248 (3,1) - desigh more new shape for quite different sounds here like you did for 02:40:848 (1) - would fit its hard to do so with that short length
03:58:848 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10345807 what
04:42:048 (1) - now that you NCed this slider with no SV change, why don't you give it a different style instead of a simple curved shape for the special long sound ? ew no need to be that strict with all sounds, i simply prefer this as it is
[Normal]
00:07:998 (4,5) - the overlap looks not really good. Also happened at 00:09:648 (3) - 00:15:198 (5) - idk fixed
04:27:648 - There is less clickable feeling so it plays kinda boring tbh. 04:27:648 (1) - and 04:30:048 (1) - etc should be all clickable to match the sound much better and plays enjoyable imo thats intentional to have a chill part after almost 5 minutes of gameplay lol
nice rhythm choice
[Hard]
01:07:548 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10345424 You don't need to fix every blankets but at least fix here. It looks obvious no because i dont mean to blanket it
02:03:348 (4) - I'm curious what the single whistle is going for ? Is it really necessary ? so is 02:13:698 (2) - sounds ramdon imo its just copied from the top diff lol seems nothing wrong with it
02:10:098 (3) - If you wanna make the jump for the sound I would move it more further since the spacing now looks like inconsistent thing happened so it looks not good at all it didn't even mean to be jump after all lol
03:28:848 (7) - it's a good timing to make a jump to support the finish sounds and have a nice end i dont like having a single jump
03:38:448 - This part. I think it would be much better to keep the same whistle usage as 03:43:248 - no
[Insane]
00:12:798 (6) - looks not good when the circle somewhat touches the slider its not that noticeable
00:15:798 (1) - nazi thing but I'm wondering why you didn't make it the same spacing between 00:15:348 (7) - and 00:15:948 (2) - because i don't use distance snap at all???
01:40:848 (1) - I would be rather stack it to the end of the slider than make meh stack on the start how is that meh rofl mine is definitely better
01:54:498 (2) - well yea I know. I know you really don't fuckin care this shit but please blanket here looool looks ugly imo ;w; no thank
02:31:398 (6) - the spacing shouldn't be this kind of small. Have it a jump like your EX gogo no
03:13:248 (9) - NC here ? I know you are following the same things but I think it would look better if you make the distinction between the stream and the sliders. It also supports your jump pattern though this will just work out fine as is
04:15:798 (1) - it doesn't really need the NC since the sounds are the same as 04:15:498 (2,3,4) - it's for the followpoints to vanish out l ol
[Ex]
00:53:148 (2,1) - Does the spacing need this kind of large ? Comparing with 00:45:648 (1,3) - , 00:48:048 (1,3) - , 00:50:448 (1,3) - or so. And it is even larger than the intense part like 01:01:398 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ive changed pattern itself but keeping the spacing because it represents the music good
01:00:348 (2) - re-consider to unstack it ? the stack breaks the flow imo no its cool to have a small pause
01:27:948 (2,3,4) - I know you wanna make rhythm change for this part but 1/2 sounds are still strong. The music doesn't really support the rhythm you made though i know but plain 1/2 patterns for the entire section is underwhelming right?
01:31:698 (5) - Could you consider the spacing of it again ? I think it's very sudden and it's a really huge spacing change compared with what you previous made it's just same as the other jumps as long as it doesn't jump to a 1/4 slider from it which the spacing cant be an issue
04:36:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the pattern should not be combined together since 04:36:498 (1,2,3) - and 04:36:798 (4,5,6) - are different. I would make 04:36:798 (4,5,6) - a triangle and add NC to 04:36:798 (4) - instead ye
04:39:348 (1,2) - How about making it a slider to follow the long sound ? might have it a bit SV change to match the sound better imo circles do better job
04:41:748 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10344961 what
btw hit me once you need more stars from me