Let's Do this!Bit concerned about the white/black combo colours and the slider border colour since they are really really close to what the background / video is.
All difficulties: 02:37:890 - / 02:38:290 - I really do not see the point stopping here. The male vocalist goes on for nearly another beat and the other sounds before 02:39:490 - are just as significant as the ones in any other part. So i'd highly recommend map those two beats one way or another since there isn't really anything to gain from stopping the mapping into a brick wall, on top of that what is the reason 01:21:890 - is mapped for example? It's pretty much exactly same part as 02:38:690 - except the first half of the chorus doesn't have similar aspects to the other choruses but that should not be something that would impact on your choice between these 02:37:890 - 02:39:490 - points
Normal
From aimod: 03:02:690 (6,7) - DS
It would be really nice to have some kind of whitles for this difficulty aswell, preferrably on the pianos such as 00:18:690 - 00:21:890 - 00:52:290 - 01:59:490 - ect. so there won't be too much going on but the hitsounding would still feel somewhat "exotic"
01:35:490 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern is quite different from anything else you have used pattern wise. Firstly the 4 is completely disconnected from the other objects and secondly 01:35:490 (1,2,3) - this is extremely unusual movement so yeah
02:35:890 (5,2) - Structurally would be better to have either these stacked or not overlapping
03:05:090 - If you are deciding the combo colour based on the video, i don't think you should use green colour in this section at all
Hard
00:19:490 (3,4) - These are reaaally different from what you are usually using. Most of the time you have flow style or kinda flowing style while having pretty lenient spacing between the objects instead of tight back and forth movement
00:31:490 - This kind of beats are the strong beats that start the new section which will be one of the most notable aspect of the song. Even though you are prioritizing the vocals this would be something you should not skip, consider
this for example as it would highlight the important sound while keeping the vocals relevant. You'd might want to change the less notable ones aswell such as 00:34:490 (1) - for the sake of the consistency but it's not necessary
00:53:290 - Why do the whistles just stop here? Doesn't really make sense
01:16:290 (1,2,3,4) - 02:06:490 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ect. Well idk if there is really anything necessarily wrong this kind of patterning but you break flow so many times that the pattern starts to look like you didn't put too much thought into them as the objects feel like they all try to form something by themselves while most of the time disregarding the other objects around them
Insane
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CS5AR8 is really dope and fits the way this has been mapped (also the 8 fits to the slow song nicely)00:22:490 (3,5) - Imo structure wise these could be closer to each other (nearly stacked) or even stacked
00:30:690 (5,6,7,1) - I have two issues with this. Firstly i feel like 00:31:290 (7,1) - would be better as a triple since there is a beat on the yellow tick between them. Secondly i think you should either reduce the spacing for the 7 and 1 to what you are using here 00:33:090 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - or do the other way around (i'd suggest increasing it for the second pattern) since it doesn't make sense to map the two similar parts so differently in that aspect
00:59:290 (3,4,7,1,2,4) - Atleast in the future maps of yours, you should consider structure little bit more atleast so it would not leave this kind of overlapping (this happens throughout the map many many times), i don't know if you have it off or on but disabling hit animations could help you form better kind of structure that is somewhat hidden from the player but makes the placement feel much more logical (as you would be planning the structure considering both what has happened and what will happen)
01:03:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't feel like this is the best way to map this. Firstly on the first half of the stream ( 01:03:490 (1,2,3) - ) the vocals do not land on the 1/6s but rather to 1/8s and 1/12s and secondly slapping 1/6 streams when the default streams are 1/8 is kinda a pain for the players, especially the longer streams (the triples are sorta doable but still can be a bit awkward).
- It would be better to use sliders so the 1/6s don't really break too much of what the players get used prior to them, but take a closer look at all of the 1/6s and decide by yourself if they really fit the 1/6 BSD and deal with them accordingly if there are beats on the 1/8s 01:03:590 - 01:03:690 - or if you could spice it up with 1/12s to more accurately follow the song while making the pattern less of a pain to play 02:08:090 -
01:58:290 (3,4,5,6) - I feel like it'd be better to have this
https://puu.sh/xqEST/e3c098b8b4.png kind of rhythm (alternatively the reverse slider would be a single 1/4 slider) as it would support the vocals because, atleast imo, 01:58:290 (3,4) - feels like to be one vocal while 01:58:590 (5,6) - is the next one already
01:58:890 (7,8,9) - I don't think the pattern choice is really supported by the vocals, considering the significant tone change happens between the 7 and 8 rather than 6 and 7. So my suggestion would be to simply have 01:58:690 (6,7) - and 01:59:090 (8,9) - grouped so the pattern would change on the 7
02:02:890 (2,3) - I feel like this should be bit bigger because that is really really close to what you use for 1/4 gaps, like something closer to 02:06:090 (2,3) -
03:01:890 (1,2,3) - I feel like this is sorta similar thing regarding the flow breaking in the middle of the patterns i talked about in suggestions to hard
03:23:090 (2,3) - This just does not feel correct. Firstly there is a notable beat on 03:23:190 - which could be represented as a slidertail if you want to keep the clicking on the vocals. Secondly imo this 03:23:490 - should be a clickable or a 1/8 slider to follow the vocals more accurately
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I think some of the spacing/emphasis in the insane might be questionable since it's not really consistent nor does it really follow anything specific, atleast that is how it feels to me. For example 02:09:090 (1,2,3,4,5) - I really can't understand why is the spacing low like that when this 02:04:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - pattern has that much spacing even though they have nearly identical intensity both vocal and melody wise
Anyway that should be about it, good luck fam