paydayzcool wrote:

Hi, M4M from your queue: t/615001/start=15

Huh, I'm going to assume that this is an old map gimmick Yes. Pursuing an iNiS style, to be exact.
Also, is that a picture of Singapore? I'm not sure... I just searched for a picture of city at night since the main theme of this song is about the 'lost one in the city'.

Generally, I believe that this map should have more complex sliders including waves (~) and if you really want, more sliders with red ticks. OK...., I'll try while checking out the map.

Breezin'

Seriously, well done with the slider curves here. Thanks! I always put an extra effort when making a slider.
00:49:010 - Don't leave a break here, just put more notes. As I said above, this map pursues an iNiS style. I intentionally left a break here to make this map have at least 3 break times in total.

Crusin'

00:37:582 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I reckon this should be flipped upside down so that it makes repetition a bit less evident. If you noticed the repetition, that's exactly what I intended for.
00:49:010 - Just like in the Breezin' diff, don't leave a break here. Just like in the Breezin' diff.

Sweatin'

00:40:439 (8) - This curve is a bit off. I suggest fixing this. I think it looks fine...
00:49:010 - You guessed it. Yep.
02:04:725 (3,4) - Blanket is a bit off, but I guess you can get away with it... Couldn't come up with better changes. So, yeah. Just letting it be.
02:07:583 (3,4) - ^ Made some changes.
02:34:725 (3) - Why not push the middle point upwards? I tried to made this slider as symmetrical as possible. Moving the middle point upwards might destroy this symmetry imo.

HardROCK

00:33:832 (8) - Missing NC I intentionally left it not to have NC so that the overall shape looks similar to that in Sweatin' diff. I'll consider putting another NC if other people give me the same suggestions, though.
00:45:260 (8) - ^ Same here.
00:49:010 - *sigh* um...
02:34:725 (4) - Push the middle point downwards Same with Sweatin'

This map imo reflects this song (nearly 90s Kpop) really nicely. actually 2002 Well done! Thank you very much!

Pok0555 wrote:

Crusin'

00:34:546 (6) - NC Respect to iNiS Style requested...
01:17:225 (7) - ^ Same goes here.
01:21:868 (7) - Try making this slider more creative if possible changed a little bit.

Sweatin'

00:27:582 (2,3) - Blanket I tried to make the slider look like this so that the slider looks like it's on the same arch with 00:29:010 (6) .
01:17:225 (2,3) - ^ If I create a blanket of these notes then I may have to redesign the entire part....
00:34:010 (7) - NC iNiS Style... but I'm gonna NC these if other people suggests me to do it, too.
00:45:439 (7) - ^ This one, too.

HardROCK

00:33:832 (8) - NC Same reason with Sweatin'
00:45:260 (8) - ^ ^
01:05:796 (2,3) - Blanket This one, too.
Also, tags conflicted with Breezin' diff Didn't notice this.... Thanks!

That's all I can do, good luck!

Milar001 wrote:

Hi, from my queue Hi, there!

I'll start saying that the whole mapset look like from 2010. This symetrical designe is not intresting and makes maps harder to read. Considering about adding another diff that could make ppl become more interested.

[Breezin']
If you concentrate on music don't change it suddenly on vocals I think it's fine as long as it's readable.
00:34:725 (4) - If the gap is so big like here put nc Gonna change if other people comments on the same issue.
01:06:689 (3,4,5) and 01:18:118 (3,4,5) - First 2 of a combo focus on music, but this 3 focus on vocals, move this on white ticks Actually all of the combos focus on vocals.
01:09:546 (3,4) - I see you are trying to make beat more complex, but don't do it at a push. 3 and slider's beginning should be at white ticks. Generally on easy diffs you focus on white ticks I'm afraid doing this might make the entire diff very simple and boring.
01:20:975 (3,4) - The same ^
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[Hardrock]
00:33:832 (8) - Nc here Reference to Sweatin' diff.
00:40:439 (8) - Decrease the lenght to 1 beat and add 2 stack circles 00:41:510 here and 00:41:868 here Sounds awkward....
00:45:260 (8) - Nc Reference to Sweatin' diff.
00:49:010 - I don't see any reasons behind this breaks I think I may have to add info on the map description; this map follows a traditional iNiS Style.
01:01:868 (3) - Decrease the lenght to 1 beat and put a circle 01:02:939 here Added 2 circles instead of one.
01:43:832 (8) - Nc Well... I'll leave it for this time.
01:50:439 (9) - There are sounds on every white tick, don't omit them ....excuse me...?!
02:11:868 (5) - Decrease the lenght to 1 beat and put a slider from 02:12:760 to 02:12:939 Sounds like bad idea...
02:34:725 (4) - There are sounds on every white tick, don't omit them huh....
02:42:760 (7) - Nc I think it's fine
02:57:582 (3) - Decrease the lenght to 1 beat and put a circle 02:58:653 Couldn't come up with the best place to put a circle, so letting it be.
03:12:582 (1) - This spinner is a bad movement, map this part normally Reference to Sweatin' diff.
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Hope it will be helpful