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Calm down boi, you aren't wrong but you're going about modding the wrong way. Yes you're pointing out things that should be obvious, but you're attitude is incredibly negative and the lack of effort at parts could really put off a mapper.Reynolduh wrote:
hihi from my q
GenaralSPOILEREasyI recommend 1/4 beat snap divider cause 1/6 or 1/3 is really not a good idea in my opinion
Also, you should change your kiai time to 00:45:005 -
Next, some of your difficulties have extra timing points(red) this is not alowed. if you want to change anything, use the inherited timing points(green)
instead. AND MAKE SURE YOUR TIMING POINTS(red) ARE AT THE SAME POSITION.
i also see your a VERY VERY new mapper. so i'm not really gonna talk about flow nowSPOILERFirst of all, A TON OF YOUR OBJECTS AREN'T SNAPPED. FLAPPING FIX THIS
Second, NEVER use sliders like 01:02:862 (1,3) - in easy / normal mode. Beginners may not have yet understand fully of how sliders work.
NormalSPOILERAGAIN, OBJECTS ARE NOT SNAPPED
again dont use sliders like 00:05:171 (3) - in easy and normal blah blah blah
in fact, 00:43:178 (6) - is even worse. use spinner instead
HardSPOILERi see MOST of your objects are snapped, but not all. go find it yourself k
Insane AND ExtraSPOILERYou know, for higher difficulties, a map would really sync better. BUT NO. A LOT of parts DO NOT sync with the music. you should DEFINATELY remap it
Overall, i really REALLY think you should remap it, check your sync and when it is better you should look out for flow
00:00:786 - 不要な緑線です。消しましょう Fixed
00:04:016 (4,2) - スタックさせましょう、見栄えが良くないので Fixed
00:13:478 (1) - easyでこのスピナーはダメです。RCのガイドライン参照 https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria/osu! Fixed
00:16:939 (2,4) - overlapped easyにおいては許されません。 Fixed
00:46:016 (2,3) - ds error Fixed
I fixed all about NormalKanpanRin wrote:
Hi from my queue.
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I fixed all about NormalBotan wrote:
started: 11:05amNormal 00:02:632 (5,6) - Pattern doesn't look very nice, make them symmetrical.
- I think you should increase the distance snap. Either have it so the notes overlap a bit or give them their own space, barely touching doesn't look good.
00:06:324 (1,2) - If you're going to do symmetry at least make both sliders the same shape.
00:07:247 (2,3) - Doesn't flow well, push the slider-3 to the left a bit.
00:12:324 (3,4,5) - Why the rhythm change here? The 3 should be a slider.
00:23:170 (1,2,3,4) - Avoid stacks if you can, they're hard to read at this difficulty and if you do stack try to limit it to just 2 notes. Also this isn't consistent with what you've mapped so far.
00:24:555 (5) - Why overlap if you haven't done it in any of the other patterns?
00:36:555 (5,1,2,3) - Spacing inconsistency here due to SV change. Avoid SV changes if you can as they are difficult. Only use them when the tempo of the song actually changes. As far as I can tell, the tempo does not change here so there shouldn't be an SV change here.
00:40:478 (4,1,2,3,4) - Pattern is very messy.
00:43:016 - SV change is too abrupt. There should be an SV changes in this map...
00:49:593 (5) - Avoid starting objects on blue ticks. They are hard to read and this particular slider isn't even mapped to anything.
00:51:093 (3,4,1,2,3) - Unstack these.
>> I would remap this difficulty to take out a large number of the circles. Many places where you could map sliders instead of long strings of circles, you can never have enough sliders. Map also looks unorganized.Hard I am not going to mod the Hard. The distance snap is WAY too high. Hard should more or less look like the normal with a slightly higher distance snap and you are allowed to unlock it every now and then in small amounts. I wouldn't even use this distance snap for Insane... Coupled with the questionable pattern choices (long strems, unstacked triples), I don't believe this difficulty is ready for modding.Insane Just like the other difficulties, there are number of issues with this as well.
00:06:324 (1,2,3) -
00:08:170 (1,2,3) -
00:09:324 (7,8,9) - All of these, and more, are overmapped triples. There's nothing in the music to support the triples here.
I also think you should start on the downbeat 00:15:555. The players playing at this level will be expecting much more complex patterns.
00:16:478 (4) - Doesn't this feel like a slider?
00:16:939 (6) - Why the slider here?
00:27:555 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - Overmapped stream.
>> There's plenty more but there's no point in beating a dead horse. I can see the effort put into these but what's lacking is understanding of the basics that come with each difficulty. I think once you study up on those basics a bit more, the mapping quality will come with it. Good luck.
finished: 11:32am
I fixed everything. Thank you in advice.Technica wrote:
hello! M4M fron your queue ^^
Insane mod:
00:00:324 (1) - 00:00:555 (2) - these two circles are different sounds/intensities from the next circles to come. spacing should be different?
00:02:862 (5) - i think if you bend this slider up more it could flow a little better and look more visually appealing (like so: http://prntscr.com/g9twi3).
00:10:709 (3) - this triple is synced to nothing unlike the next 3 triples. i dont think this should be here.
00:16:478 (5) - this could be changed again to flow better like so: http://prntscr.com/g9tx1x
00:25:939 (5) - this slider could be bend upwards instead to also flow better.
00:26:401 (6) - this circle goes out of the map lul.
00:32:401 (3) - 00:33:093 (1) - 00:33:786 (5) - 00:34:709 (1) - 00:36:555 (4) - these triples are synced to nothing in the music, along with the last two being out of place. i would say the same about all the triples in the kiai part, but a lot of mappers do that for overmapping purposes lol.
00:57:785 (1) - this isnt synced to anything?
01:02:400 (7) - move this note as there is no pattern like this, and the music isnt any different so the patterns shouldnt be different.
01:10:939 (1) - this is synced to nothing, there isnt a 1/6 sound here.
01:14:631 (1) - use a normal circle here.
01:27:670 (1) - i think you should end this slider earlier as the last sound is out of place
HOPE THE MOD HELPS
you dont need to return another mod on my mapset, but if youd like to you can, and ill ofc mod your map once again.
good luck for the mapset
I fixed the map based on this.DJ Lucky wrote:
Insane
00:01:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
This whole entire part the spacing is quite unnecessarily wide - it's pretty slow on this part but ur spacing is pretty much the same like it is in this section 00:15:555 - for this part - I suggest using a different slider velocity as well as reducing the spacing overall here so it wouldn't just feel the same as the upcoming section
Ok coming around this way... starting from here 00:15:555 - Everything has the same spacing - although I admit ur kiai has slightly different spacing but still it loses the emphasis that it needs due to everything feeling much the same.
there is also another problem with this - strong notes or vocals is having less emphasis since everything is basically same spacing as well - ya need to put variety here...
- ok Enough about spacing since I probably won't explain it in a way to actually help (Sorry...) so let move on to other stuff -
00:14:862 (6,7,8) - Instead of a triple stack - have a repeating slider in 1/8 and that way it match all the sounds I'm hearing
- same for here 00:22:247 (1,2,3) -
00:29:632 (1,2) - you ignore a sound here 00:29:978 - and it would be better if was a repeating slider like I suggested before
don't hear a sound hear 00:32:401 (3,4,5) - maybe try turning 00:32:170 (2) - into a slider and extend if need to.
there isn't a sound here as far as I see to warrant this note 00:33:209 (2) - just remove 00:33:209 (2,3) - and turn 00:33:093 (1) - into a slider
No sound here 00:33:901 (6) - remove note
00:34:709 (1,2,3) - same as I said here 00:33:209 (2)
00:51:554 - There is a sound that should have some note and same for these 01:02:631 - 01:10:708 - 01:11:631 -
Tbh I got lazy at the end since I felt I modding every single second for a min there...
-- There too many problems I have to point out in Hard so I decided to just mod 1 difficulty - If ya however do want me to mod the Hard just pm another time
MoonKat wrote:
Posted that before I saw your latest post. Some of the stuff I talked about may have already been fixed, sorry.
1. この二人のpostはmodではありません kudosを取り下げてもらうようにしてくださいAsrielDr33murr wrote:
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324,288,69324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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I fixed the Map based on your advice.timemon wrote:
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[Insane]You seem to be new, and I decided giving you mods won't just help much so I'm gonna leave some advice for you.
- Please check your AI mod (press ctrl+shift+A) http://i.imgur.com/l8J2xNG.jpg Your objects aren't snapped properly to kinda help this issue please look up on the toolbar on top Timing > Resnap All Notes
- Your diff has timing conflict.
[Note Emphasis/Rhythm]
Always try to focus on thing at a time, either it be vocal (the girl singing) or the instruments (the drum and stuff). FOCUSING BOTH (vocal and instrument) at the same time will leave your map feels like it's not properly following the music. For example at
00:04:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is what you have
it's just all 1/2 notes and seem to be following both the vocal and instrument which is not good. you end up emphasizing nothing if you do that
this is one way of mapping this one beat
00:48:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is what you have
this is a vocal focused way
^ this is basically following every words the vocal sings (you can map differently, this is just one way of doing it)
[Intensity and Object Density]
Simply put, you know Kiais right? they're all the flashy and climax of the song which in your map is at 00:45:093 -
You will want your climax/Kiai to standout from the rest of the map (hardest parts of the map for example)
Basically, climax/kiai/louder parts = bigger spaicng and more NOTES in the field (higher density)
calm/intro/outro parts = lower spacing and less NOTES in the field (lower density)
look at this, it is in your kiai (the climax part)
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8876221
then look at this, it's in the calmest part of the map
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8876224
BOTH have almost the same note density (the amount of circles) and pretty much same spacing. If I muted the music and not looking at the timeline, I wouldn't know which part was the climax.
You can fix this issue by making the calmer sections easier to play, lower amount of objects by using reverse arrows and sliders, and lower spacing distance.
[Clickable Objects and Sliders]
this
is more intense than
this
The first picture you have to click 2 times because it's two circles while the other you have to only click and hold a slider.
First picture, both circles are given same emphasis because you click them both.
Second picture, the slider head (click) is given a stronger emphasis than the slider tail (hold)
Simple, if you want to highlight a sound over another you can simply use slider head to catch that sound then use the tail to catch weaker sound.
It's also a good idea to never let your slider tail ends on a stronger sound than the slider head
in your map for example 00:45:092 (6) -
You used this slider on the downbeat to catch the cymbal sound (a really strong sound) at 00:45:093 - then the slider tail catches a much weaker sound at 00:45:323 - That is a good use of a slider and clickable object.
However at 00:59:861 (6) - you put down a circle on a downbeat and there is another circle at 01:00:092 (1) - this is quite bad because the 00:59:861 (6) - circle is much stronger than 01:00:092 (1) - because it is on the downbeat. By doing this you steal the emphasis from cymbal toward the circle that's less important. Using slider like you did before would be a better idea.
I'm sorry that I spawned a wall of texts for you and did not actually mod your mapset.
If I sound rude or cocky (or whatever the adjective is) then I apologize. I'm also a new mapper like you, getting help or mods as a new mapper is tough.
That's why I decided to help fellow new mappers out. If you have any question feel free to pm me in-game or through forum. I'm always willing to help.
Good luck!