Hi~ :3
Not sure yet that you're accepted my request on your queue or not.
Even that, I like this song on my purpose.
[ General]
00:04:139 - A finisher here is inexpedient. Just emphasize 00:04:548 (7) is enough. In my opinion, Kantan should use finisher in the point which it's noticeably only.
00:06:730 (9,10) - Same as above, I suggest to remove the finisher.
00:33:185 / 00:33:730 - Add a note here , both of vocal and drum pitch are faster than previous part.
00:43:548 moves to 00:43:275 - To follow the drum pitch.
[ Ayyri's Futsuu]
00:03:866 - Delete might be good to let the player concentrate on 00:04:139 (10,11)
00:43:821 - This spinner should be end on 00:45:185 , which the pitch end here.
01:36:457 - I don't know that this suggestion is acceptable on Futsuu or not , but I feel like to move this note to 01:36:389 seems more accurate.
01:48:730 - I'm afraid that this note is doesn't fit to the finisher due to the pitch here is not strong enough.
[ Ayyri's Muzukashii]
00:05:639 - Delete? , to follow the main melody only.
00:49:821 / 00:58:548 - Change to d , similar pitch to 00:49:548 (22)
01:16:275 - A finisher here seems don't fit enough imo. This note have been emphasized already by the difference of the note's color around this note.
01:20:230 - Delete? , to follow the pitch only. Not the vocal.
[ Oni]
00:22:957 - Delete , for the consistency of 00:18:594
00:29:503 - Delete , since after the vocal on 00:29:366 (136) , you've always blanked the note. Delete for the consistency.
01:23:366 - Add a note here would be nice , still have a pitch here.
[ Inner Oni]
00:05:775 moves to 00:05:366 - Seems like the pitch on 00:05:775 is not strong like 00:05:366. To give a rest on 00:05:775 which the pitch is softer would be better.
00:41:503 - Delete , not have a main melody , just like 00:42:594 - 00:43:685 , and not like 00:40:412 which it still have a main melody.
00:43:003 - How about make this as 5plets? Seems good to make a consistency to the previous 5plets there like 00:39:730 (241,242,243,244,245)
01:23:366 - Like I've suggest on Oni difficulty , add a note here would be nice , still have a pitch here.
01:38:366 - This part , how about we rearrange the note like this one?
[ Ayyri's Outer Oni]
00:06:525 / 00:06:662 - Delete , let the stream part start on 00:06:730 would be better. Start with the strong pitch would make a great feeling to the player.
01:38:025 (569,570) - Ctrl+G ? , seems better imo.
01:38:162 - Delete , the main melody ends on 01:38:094. So the stream should be end on 01:38:094 too.
That's all from me. This map is very good!!
Good luck!!
Not sure yet that you're accepted my request on your queue or not.
Even that, I like this song on my purpose.
[ General]
- "Widescreen support" should be disable on Oni difficulty.
00:04:139 - A finisher here is inexpedient. Just emphasize 00:04:548 (7) is enough. In my opinion, Kantan should use finisher in the point which it's noticeably only.
00:06:730 (9,10) - Same as above, I suggest to remove the finisher.
00:33:185 / 00:33:730 - Add a note here , both of vocal and drum pitch are faster than previous part.
00:43:548 moves to 00:43:275 - To follow the drum pitch.
[ Ayyri's Futsuu]
00:03:866 - Delete might be good to let the player concentrate on 00:04:139 (10,11)
00:43:821 - This spinner should be end on 00:45:185 , which the pitch end here.
01:36:457 - I don't know that this suggestion is acceptable on Futsuu or not , but I feel like to move this note to 01:36:389 seems more accurate.
01:48:730 - I'm afraid that this note is doesn't fit to the finisher due to the pitch here is not strong enough.
[ Ayyri's Muzukashii]
00:05:639 - Delete? , to follow the main melody only.
00:49:821 / 00:58:548 - Change to d , similar pitch to 00:49:548 (22)
01:16:275 - A finisher here seems don't fit enough imo. This note have been emphasized already by the difference of the note's color around this note.
01:20:230 - Delete? , to follow the pitch only. Not the vocal.
[ Oni]
00:22:957 - Delete , for the consistency of 00:18:594
00:29:503 - Delete , since after the vocal on 00:29:366 (136) , you've always blanked the note. Delete for the consistency.
01:23:366 - Add a note here would be nice , still have a pitch here.
[ Inner Oni]
00:05:775 moves to 00:05:366 - Seems like the pitch on 00:05:775 is not strong like 00:05:366. To give a rest on 00:05:775 which the pitch is softer would be better.
00:41:503 - Delete , not have a main melody , just like 00:42:594 - 00:43:685 , and not like 00:40:412 which it still have a main melody.
00:43:003 - How about make this as 5plets? Seems good to make a consistency to the previous 5plets there like 00:39:730 (241,242,243,244,245)
01:23:366 - Like I've suggest on Oni difficulty , add a note here would be nice , still have a pitch here.
01:38:366 - This part , how about we rearrange the note like this one?
[ Ayyri's Outer Oni]
00:06:525 / 00:06:662 - Delete , let the stream part start on 00:06:730 would be better. Start with the strong pitch would make a great feeling to the player.
01:38:025 (569,570) - Ctrl+G ? , seems better imo.
01:38:162 - Delete , the main melody ends on 01:38:094. So the stream should be end on 01:38:094 too.
That's all from me. This map is very good!!
Good luck!!