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DystopiaGround - True Theory of Inheritance

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Suzully
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月23日 at 0:13:00

Artist: DystopiaGround
Title: True Theory of Inheritance
Tags: nao Demetori Uketsugareru Shinsetsu wring kanpakyin Muya
BPM: 182
Filesize: 6698kb
Play Time: 02:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 569 notes)
  2. Kanpakyin's Taiko (4.89 stars, 950 notes)
  3. Muya's Easy (2.64 stars, 152 notes)
  4. Normal (4.22 stars, 232 notes)
  5. wring's Hard (4.97 stars, 486 notes)
Download: DystopiaGround - True Theory of Inheritance
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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DystopiaGround #001
受け継がれる真説


Easy - 100% by Muya
Normal - 100%
Hard - 100% by wring
Insane - 100%
Taiko - 100% by kanpakyin

My 19th beatmap.
Please advise me.
K i R a
Oh shit, good map and song!! I think it needs a hard so I can make it. I made a little bit (1 min of the song) if you want to considere it :D

Good luck in your map and rank it :D

Download: DystopiaGround - True Theory of Inheritance (Suzully) [K i R a's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Suzully
@K i R a
Sorry I can't accept your diff :|
Thanks.

Edit:First, my own diff is still WIP.
Second, your mapping style doesn't suit mine.
Of course your diff is not bad.
K i R a

Suzully wrote:

@K i R a
Sorry I can't accept your diff :|
Thanks.       
Ah... yeAH... but... Why not?
Hinacle
(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)
(⌒,_ゝ⌒)

期待してます= =+
Topic Starter
Suzully

Hinacle wrote:

(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)(⌒,_ゝ⌒)
(⌒,_ゝ⌒)

期待してます= =+
(⌒,_ゝ⌒)アリガトウ
kanpakyin
I want to map a Taiko diff for this! (´・ω・`) !

SPOILER
Your message is too short.
Topic Starter
Suzully

kanpakyin wrote:

I want to map a Taiko diff for this! (´・ω・`) !

SPOILER
Your message is too short.
Yes! Of course you can make it! :D
Nyan

kanpakyin wrote:

I want to map a Taiko diff for this! (´・ω・`) !

SPOILER
Your message is too short.
yooooooooooooooo
kanpakyin
Finally I done this!
Taiko Oni 6~7*

Your BG can't cut as Taiko BG :< I hope you can provide a bg for specfic Taiko diff.However I'll hand it the diff now.

Download: DystopiaGround - True Theory of Inheritance (Suzully) [Kanpakyin's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Suzully

kanpakyin wrote:

Finally I done this!
Taiko Oni 6~7*

Your BG can't cut as Taiko BG :< I hope you can provide a bg for specfic Taiko diff.However I'll hand it the diff now.
Thanks Taiko diff and star :D
OK. I'll provide it~
But just uploaded .osu for now.
wring
ものすごく遅れてごめんなさい
難度名は気にしてないので、勝手に変えてもらって大丈夫です!

Download: DystopiaGround - True Theory of Inheritance (Suzully) [Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Suzully

wring wrote:

ものすごく遅れてごめんなさい
難度名は気にしてないので、勝手に変えてもらって大丈夫です!
素晴らしいdiffをありがとうございます :)
Uploaded!
hoLysoup
i like this song :D!
gogo!
Topic Starter
Suzully

hoLysoup wrote:

i like this song :D!
gogo!
Thanks for star<33
Muya
Topic Starter
Suzully

Muya wrote:

;_;
どうもです!
Topic Starter
Suzully
Moved to pending!

- Added taiko BG.
- Added SB to eash standard osu files, and removed osb file.
imRitaka
I was just about to sleep, and then I heard this song. First thing that came to mind? "I *REALLY* need to mod this map."
Anyway, here's your requested mod.

[Muya's Easy]
00:46:598 (6) - Add a finish to the beginning of this slider?
00:47:422 (7) - Add a finish here?
00:54:510 (3) - Add a finish to the beginning of this slider? (Keeping it as a soft finish.)
01:18:246 (7) - Add a clap to the end of this slider?
02:38:521 (7) - New combo?
02:38:850 (1) - If you did ^, remove this new combo.
02:42:312 (4) - Add a clap here?
02:42:641 (5) - Clap at the beginning of this slider?
02:43:466 (7) - New combo.
02:44:125 (1) - If you did ^, remove this new combo.

[Normal]
01:00:609 (5) - Add a new combo here.
01:01:103 (1) - If you did ^, remove this new combo.
02:25:005 (5) - New combo.
02:25:499 (1) - Remove new combo if you did ^.

[wring's Hard]
00:26:488 (1) - Remove this new combo?
00:26:652 (5) - Add a new combo.

[Insane]
Couldn't see anything wrong here.

Love the song and map. Star'd.
Niva
Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

Hi again, Suzully :3

[Muya's Easy]
  • 00:33:246 (2) - It's slightly closer to (1) rather than to (3). Not a big problem though
    00:40:169 (4) - imo it's better to curve this encircling (3):
    00:47:422 (7) - Use normal hitsound here on this note?
    01:06:543 (5) - New combo here perhaps?
    01:50:718 (5) - Slightly curve it like this better imo:
    02:42:641 (5) - Add clap on slider's end?
    02:43:466 (6) - Move the clap to slider's end if you did above suggestion
[Normal]
  • 00:21:707 (1) - Slider wave here perhaps?
    00:28:301 (3) - Make this encircle (2) like this perhaps:
    01:07:861 (3) - Move 1 grid right and up perhaps? So the slidertick is in the center
    01:10:499 (3,1) - I personally dislike how these two note touches each other... This is my suggestion (can't think of any other pattern duh >_<)
    01:37:532 (5) - Press SHIFT while placing this circle, so it's located in the same x-axis with (4)'s end?
    01:45:444 (4) - The first linear (red) waypoint definitely needs to be moved ~1-2 grids up :3
    02:05:718 (3) - Finish on slider's start?
    02:27:642 (3,4) - Add whistle in these two?
    02:40:828 (3,4) - Moving these two few grids up and right (so it will create a wider curve along with (1) and (2)) flows better imo:
[wring's Hard]
  • 00:08:026 (2) - The clap in the slider's end sounds out of place orz. Finish better imo
    00:30:609 (1,2) - I found this spacing increase is quite sudden... Easy to catch though
    00:34:235 (2,3,4,5,6) - Arrange like this plays better imo:
    00:46:598 (4) - Remove the clap on slider's end sounds better for me
    01:05:059 (6) - ...Make this slider 1/2 longer? And delete (7) if you do this
    01:18:576 (6) - I think, the clap is not needed here orz
    02:41:817 (4) - ...new combo here because of the anti-jump? orz
    02:46:927 (2,5) - Move (2) 1 grid up and (5) 1 grid down? So they won't touch 02:48:081 (1)
[Insane]
  • 00:51:872 (6) - Add finish at start?
    01:01:103 (1) - The rhythm here is actually 6/4 + 4/4 (not 5/4 + 5/4 lol), but plays fine though~
    01:03:246 (1,2) - Add whistle on these two?
    01:54:015 (1) - ...okay I personally find you curve this weirdly >_< Standard "?"-shaped slider better imo
    02:04:565 (4) - Add finish at start?
    02:27:641 (1,2) - Add whistle on these two?
Insane @_@
Great map once again xD

Good luck again Suzully :3
Topic Starter
Suzully

Ritaka wrote:

I was just about to sleep, and then I heard this song. First thing that came to mind? "I *REALLY* need to mod this map."
Anyway, here's your requested mod.

[Normal]
01:00:609 (5) - Add a new combo here. Nah.
01:01:103 (1) - If you did ^, remove this new combo. ^
02:25:005 (5) - New combo. ^
02:25:499 (1) - Remove new combo if you did ^. ^

[Insane]
Couldn't see anything wrong here.

Love the song and map. Star'd.

Niva wrote:

Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

Hi again, Suzully :3 Hi Niva again :3

[Normal]
  • 00:21:707 (1) - Slider wave here perhaps? Nah.
    00:28:301 (3) - Make this encircle (2) like this perhaps: Fixed.
    01:07:861 (3) - Move 1 grid right and up perhaps? So the slidertick is in the center Fixed.
    01:10:499 (3,1) - I personally dislike how these two note touches each other... This is my suggestion (can't think of any other pattern duh >_<) Fixed.
    01:37:532 (5) - Press SHIFT while placing this circle, so it's located in the same x-axis with (4)'s end? Fixed.
    01:45:444 (4) - The first linear (red) waypoint definitely needs to be moved ~1-2 grids up :3 Fixed.
    02:05:718 (3) - Finish on slider's start? Nah.
    02:27:642 (3,4) - Add whistle in these two? Nah.
    02:40:828 (3,4) - Moving these two few grids up and right (so it will create a wider curve along with (1) and (2)) flows better imo: Moved them a bit.
[Insane]
  • 00:51:872 (6) - Add finish at start? Nah.
    01:01:103 (1) - The rhythm here is actually 6/4 + 4/4 (not 5/4 + 5/4 lol), but plays fine though~ To tell the truth, I have understood it though :P Keep it for now.
    01:03:246 (1,2) - Add whistle on these two? Nah.
    01:54:015 (1) - ...okay I personally find you curve this weirdly >_< Standard "?"-shaped slider better imo Changed like something.
    02:04:565 (4) - Add finish at start? Added.
    02:27:641 (1,2) - Add whistle on these two? Nah.
Insane @_@
Great map once again xD

Good luck again Suzully :3
Thank you so much for modding, Ritaka and Niva :)
Muya
wring

Ritaka wrote:

[wring's Hard]
00:26:488 (1) - Remove this new combo?ok
00:26:652 (5) - Add a new combo.^

Niva wrote:

[wring's Hard]
  • 00:08:026 (2) - The clap in the slider's end sounds out of place orz. Finish better imook
    00:30:609 (1,2) - I found this spacing increase is quite sudden... Easy to catch thoughno change
    00:34:235 (2,3,4,5,6) - Arrange like this plays better imo:ok:3
    00:46:598 (4) - Remove the clap on slider's end sounds better for meno change
    01:05:059 (6) - ...Make this slider 1/2 longer? And delete (7) if you do thisno change
    01:18:576 (6) - I think, the clap is not needed here orz ok
    02:41:817 (4) - ...new combo here because of the anti-jump? orz ok
    02:46:927 (2,5) - Move (2) 1 grid up and (5) 1 grid down? So they won't touch 02:48:081 (1) ok
Thanks mod :)

Download: DystopiaGround - True Theory of Inheritance (Suzully) [wring's Hard].osu
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
Guest dif easy
01:06:872~01:07:367 - make like this http://puu.sh/8qni .your parttern have strange rythem.

Normal
00:07:037(3) - one grid up.Look your circle(2)'s Y:36
01:13:136(2) - one grid down
01:44:619(3) - one grid left

Guest dif hard
01:45:691(1) - unsnapped

Insane
01:14:125(4) - suddenly change distance close is no problem?

Your map always looks fine,it's very hard to point out obviously problem.
Good luck with star :)
Topic Starter
Suzully

kissfly wrote:

Normal
00:07:037(3) - one grid up.Look your circle(2)'s Y:36 Fixed.
01:13:136(2) - one grid down Fixed.
01:44:619(3) - one grid left Fixed.

Guest dif hard
01:45:691(1) - unsnapped It's on 1/3 beat so fine~

Insane
01:14:125(4) - suddenly change distance close is no problem? I think it's enough playable~

Your map always looks fine,it's very hard to point out obviously problem.
Good luck with star :)
Thanks for star and mod kissfly!
AoiX
Request from Queue

(○¯ω¯○)Aoi's Mod

General
  1. resize bg_0.png to 640x480,it's enough for SB using.
Insane
  1. 00:04:400 (1) - finish at start.because there a sound in music
  2. 00:54:510 (4) - ^
  3. 00:57:147 (6) - ^
  4. 01:25:004 (x) - add circle
  5. 01:39:345 (1) - finish at start
  6. 02:16:268 (1) - ^
Hard
  1. 00:08:026 (2) - out of border
  2. 01:42:971 (2) - finish at 3rd circle(01:43:301)
  3. 02:11:982 (2) - finish at 2nd circle(02:12:312)
Normal
  1. 00:04:400 (5) - finish at start
  2. 00:26:982 (1) - reduce the volume of finish hitsound here
  3. 01:01:103 (1) - out of border
Easy
  1. 00:59:290 (2,3,4) - make them like this?
Topic Starter
Suzully

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

(○¯ω¯○)Aoi's Mod

General
  1. resize bg_0.png to 640x480,it's enough for SB using. Not a big deal~
Insane
  1. 00:04:400 (1) - finish at start.because there a sound in music Added. also some notes.
  2. 00:54:510 (4) - ^ I see your point but finish sound doesn't fit here and a bit noisy imo.
  3. 00:57:147 (6) - ^ ^
  4. 01:25:004 (x) - add circle Nah.
  5. 01:39:345 (1) - finish at start Added.
  6. 02:16:268 (1) - ^ Nah.
Normal
  1. 00:04:400 (5) - finish at start Added.
  2. 00:26:982 (1) - reduce the volume of finish hitsound here Nah.
  3. 01:01:103 (1) - out of border Not a big deal.
Thank you for mod Aoi~ :)
wring

AoiX wrote:

[notice]

(○¯ω¯○)Aoi's Mod

Hard
  1. 00:08:026 (2) - out of border umm...ok
  2. 01:42:971 (2) - finish at 3rd circle(01:43:301) ok
  3. 02:11:982 (2) - finish at 2nd circle(02:12:312) no
Thanks mod :)

Download: DystopiaGround - True Theory of Inheritance (Suzully) [wring's Hard].osu
No_Gu
All suggestions and please don't mind my poor English

Insane
00:51:872 (6) - add finish at the begining
01:00:279 - 01:02:422 why not change to this. and add clap at the begining of 1.2.3
01:22:367 (7) - NC?
01:24:180 (6) - ^

Hard
00:36:707 (4) - whistle instead of clap or remove clap
01:35:141 (x) - remove the redundant green line
01:53:685 (1) - 3 repeats aren't easy to understand
02:07:861 (1) - remove nc
02:27:559 (1) - turn down the volume

Normal
00:37:532 (1,2,1,2) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/180919
364,36,37532,6,0,B|436:40|468:188|404:232,1,240,4|0
324,144,38521,1,8
204,144,38850,6,0,B|140:187|172:335|244:339,1,240,0|0
364,340,39839,1,8
01:14:455 (1) - overlap 3



Good map.Really hard to find problems.Good luck. 0u0
Breeze
Nice BG
If I remembered right, この絵師のなまえは確かにlin+? (′・ω・`)

General


Skin


Timing

  1. I've got a offset : 604 (-5),if you agree with this, then use this one

(Mod blow is based on the timing I've post)

Muya's Easy

  1. 00:54:505 (3) - Consider adding a finish here
  2. Map itself is fine, just too many red line notes and sliders maybe a bit hard to newbie, that's not a problem, they fit music well

Normal

  1. 00:40:164 (1) - Consider adding finish sound here
  2. 00:45:274 (1) - ^
  3. 00:54:505 (3) - ^

[notic]

Kanpakyin's Taiko[heading]

  1. 01:17:087 (450,451,452,453,454) - DKDDD like you used to 02:41:483 (85,86,87,88,89)?
[/notice]

[heading]wring's Hard
  1. 01:45:663 (1) - Unsnapped slider end, and this slider looked awkward, you must wrong to it here
  2. 00:52:691 (4) - Slider path kinda hidden by previous note, might be confusing while playing

Insane

  1. 00:41:323 (5) - Consider adding a finish sound
  2. 01:45:444 (1,2,3) - Nothing wrong, just...1/3 beat hard to hit ;w; Consider use a reverse slider instead?

nice map
Call me back for a recheck when you have any reply, please
Topic Starter
Suzully

No_Gu wrote:

All suggestions and please don't mind my poor English

Insane
00:51:872 (6) - add finish at the begining Added.
01:00:279 - 01:02:422 why not change to this[attachment=0:39d4f]01.png[/attachment:39d4f]. and add clap at the begining of 1.2.3 Sorry it's just because I like~
01:22:367 (7) - NC? Hmm...nah. One combo per one symmetry-formation.
01:24:180 (6) - ^ ^

Normal
00:37:532 (1,2,1,2) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/180919 Good formation! Fixed.
364,36,37532,6,0,B|436:40|468:188|404:232,1,240,4|0
324,144,38521,1,8
204,144,38850,6,0,B|140:187|172:335|244:339,1,240,0|0
364,340,39839,1,8
01:14:455 (1) - overlap 3 Fixed.



Good map.Really hard to find problems.Good luck. 0u0
Thank you for mod No_Gu! :)
Topic Starter
Suzully

Breeze wrote:

Nice BG
If I remembered right, この絵師のなまえは確かにlin+? (′・ω・`) Yup! You know well :D

General


Skin


Timing

  1. I've got a offset : 604 (-5),if you agree with this, then use this one I agree with you. Changed~

(Mod blow is based on the timing I've post)

Normal

  1. 00:40:164 (1) - Consider adding finish sound here Added.
  2. 00:45:274 (1) - ^ ^
  3. 00:54:505 (3) - ^ ^

Insane

  1. 00:41:323 (5) - Consider adding a finish sound Added.
  2. 01:45:444 (1,2,3) - Nothing wrong, just...1/3 beat hard to hit ;w; Consider use a reverse slider instead? OK changed the pattern~

nice map
Call me back for a recheck when you have any reply, please
Thank you for mod Breeze! :)
I'll let you know after fix about all diffs~
Muya
kanpakyin
>Breeze
我就不改了,因為後面那段是最後的Kiai part所以我才用大圓的.
No change.
wring

No_Gu wrote:

Hard
00:36:707 (4) - whistle instead of clap or remove clap no
01:35:141 (x) - remove the redundant green line oops, thx
01:53:685 (1) - 3 repeats aren't easy to understand no
02:07:861 (1) - remove nc no
02:27:559 (1) - turn down the volume ok

Breeze wrote:

wring's Hard

  1. 01:45:663 (1) - Unsnapped slider end, and this slider looked awkward, you must wrong to it here oh,,ok, end snapped, but only changed that
  2. 00:52:691 (4) - Slider path kinda hidden by previous note, might be confusing while playing ok, changed
Download: DystopiaGround - True Theory of Inheritance (Suzully) [wring's Hard].osu
Breeze
Since [wring's Hard] is a guest diff., I'm fine with using different combo color to this diff.
bubbled
Topic Starter
Suzully

Breeze wrote:

Since [wring's Hard] is a guest diff., I'm fine with using different combo color to this diff.
bubbled
Thank you very much Breeze-sensei! :)
Ryafuka
go go ranked~! :D
Topic Starter
Suzully

Ryafuka wrote:

go go ranked~! :D
あざす! :D
Gonzvlo
Oh god, 1 month! Let's fix that.

[General]
  1. Source: Album Title is not supposed to be used as Source. Remove it, please.
[Normal]
  1. Due to the high BPM, the current AR is kinda fast for this difficulty level. Reduce it 1 tick, please.
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:131 (1,2,3) - This jump doesn't flow very well and it feels rather "forced". You should tweak this pattern, perhaps stack (1) & (2)?
  2. 01:48:735 (1,2,3,1) - Same problem here, these jumps are not intuitive at all and they play rather bad. Try to re-arrange the pattern, here's a suggestion.
  3. Overall this diff is quite nice, just a couple of iffy patterns.
Overall, really nice, good job!
Topic Starter
Suzully

Gonzvlo wrote:

Oh god, 1 month! Let's fix that.

[General]
  1. Source: Album Title is not supposed to be used as Source. Remove it, please. Removed~
[Normal]
  1. Due to the high BPM, the current AR is kinda fast for this difficulty level. Reduce it 1 tick, please. OK
Overall, really nice, good job! >w<
Thanks for modding! :)
I'll let you know when Hard will be fixed.
wring

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:13:131 (1,2,3) - This jump doesn't flow very well and it feels rather "forced". You should tweak this pattern, perhaps stack (1) & (2)? good, thanks
  2. 01:48:735 (1,2,3,1) - Same problem here, these jumps are not intuitive at all and they play rather bad. Try to re-arrange the pattern, here's a suggestion. ok, I fixed
  3. Overall this diff is quite nice, just a couple of iffy patterns.
Thank you Gonzvlo<33

And sorry I'm late :(

Download: DystopiaGround - True Theory of Inheritance (Suzully) [wring's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Suzully
Updated!
Gonzvlo
The mapset looks great now, congratulations Suzully.

Ranked.
MiLu
おめですすすすすす :)
Topic Starter
Suzully
Thank you very much Gonzvlo! >w<
hoLysoup
oh~ Congrats! :D
terametis
おめでとうございます!
biwako
grats :D
Natteke
Suzuzuzuzuzuzuzuzuzuzuzuzuzully !
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