hoLysoup wrote:

i like this song !
gogo!

Muya wrote:

;_;

• 00:33:246 (2) - It's slightly closer to (1) rather than to (3). Not a big problem though
  00:40:169 (4) - imo it's better to curve this encircling (3):
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:47:422 (7) - Use normal hitsound here on this note?
  01:06:543 (5) - New combo here perhaps?
  01:50:718 (5) - Slightly curve it like this better imo:
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:42:641 (5) - Add clap on slider's end?
  02:43:466 (6) - Move the clap to slider's end if you did above suggestion

• 00:21:707 (1) - Slider wave here perhaps?
  00:28:301 (3) - Make this encircle (2) like this perhaps:
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:07:861 (3) - Move 1 grid right and up perhaps? So the slidertick is in the center
  01:10:499 (3,1) - I personally dislike how these two note touches each other... This is my suggestion (can't think of any other pattern duh >_<)
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:37:532 (5) - Press SHIFT while placing this circle, so it's located in the same x-axis with (4)'s end?
  01:45:444 (4) - The first linear (red) waypoint definitely needs to be moved ~1-2 grids up :3
  02:05:718 (3) - Finish on slider's start?
  02:27:642 (3,4) - Add whistle in these two?
  02:40:828 (3,4) - Moving these two few grids up and right (so it will create a wider curve along with (1) and (2)) flows better imo:
  
  SPOILER

  

• 00:08:026 (2) - The clap in the slider's end sounds out of place orz. Finish better imo
  00:30:609 (1,2) - I found this spacing increase is quite sudden... Easy to catch though
  00:34:235 (2,3,4,5,6) - Arrange like this plays better imo:
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:46:598 (4) - Remove the clap on slider's end sounds better for me
  01:05:059 (6) - ...Make this slider 1/2 longer? And delete (7) if you do this
  01:18:576 (6) - I think, the clap is not needed here orz
  02:41:817 (4) - ...new combo here because of the anti-jump? orz
  02:46:927 (2,5) - Move (2) 1 grid up and (5) 1 grid down? So they won't touch 02:48:081 (1)

• 00:51:872 (6) - Add finish at start?
  01:01:103 (1) - The rhythm here is actually 6/4 + 4/4 (not 5/4 + 5/4 lol), but plays fine though~
  01:03:246 (1,2) - Add whistle on these two?
  01:54:015 (1) - ...okay I personally find you curve this weirdly >_< Standard "?"-shaped slider better imo
  02:04:565 (4) - Add finish at start?
  02:27:641 (1,2) - Add whistle on these two?

Ritaka wrote:

I was just about to sleep, and then I heard this song. First thing that came to mind? "I *REALLY* need to mod this map."
Anyway, here's your requested mod.

[Normal]
01:00:609 (5) - Add a new combo here. Nah.
01:01:103 (1) - If you did ^, remove this new combo. ^
02:25:005 (5) - New combo. ^
02:25:499 (1) - Remove new combo if you did ^. ^

[Insane]
Couldn't see anything wrong here.

Love the song and map. Star'd.

Niva wrote:

Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

Hi again, Suzully :3 Hi Niva again :3

[Normal]

• 00:21:707 (1) - Slider wave here perhaps? Nah.
  00:28:301 (3) - Make this encircle (2) like this perhaps: Fixed.
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:07:861 (3) - Move 1 grid right and up perhaps? So the slidertick is in the center Fixed.
  01:10:499 (3,1) - I personally dislike how these two note touches each other... This is my suggestion (can't think of any other pattern duh >_<) Fixed.
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:37:532 (5) - Press SHIFT while placing this circle, so it's located in the same x-axis with (4)'s end? Fixed.
  01:45:444 (4) - The first linear (red) waypoint definitely needs to be moved ~1-2 grids up :3 Fixed.
  02:05:718 (3) - Finish on slider's start? Nah.
  02:27:642 (3,4) - Add whistle in these two? Nah.
  02:40:828 (3,4) - Moving these two few grids up and right (so it will create a wider curve along with (1) and (2)) flows better imo: Moved them a bit.
  
  SPOILER

  

[Insane]

• 00:51:872 (6) - Add finish at start? Nah.
  01:01:103 (1) - The rhythm here is actually 6/4 + 4/4 (not 5/4 + 5/4 lol), but plays fine though~ To tell the truth, I have understood it though Keep it for now.
  01:03:246 (1,2) - Add whistle on these two? Nah.
  01:54:015 (1) - ...okay I personally find you curve this weirdly >_< Standard "?"-shaped slider better imo Changed like something.
  02:04:565 (4) - Add finish at start? Added.
  02:27:641 (1,2) - Add whistle on these two? Nah.

Insane @_@
Great map once again xD

Good luck again Suzully :3

Ritaka wrote:

[wring's Hard]
00:26:488 (1) - Remove this new combo?ok
00:26:652 (5) - Add a new combo.^

Niva wrote:

[wring's Hard]

• 00:08:026 (2) - The clap in the slider's end sounds out of place orz. Finish better imook
  00:30:609 (1,2) - I found this spacing increase is quite sudden... Easy to catch thoughno change
  00:34:235 (2,3,4,5,6) - Arrange like this plays better imo:ok:3
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:46:598 (4) - Remove the clap on slider's end sounds better for meno change
  01:05:059 (6) - ...Make this slider 1/2 longer? And delete (7) if you do thisno change
  01:18:576 (6) - I think, the clap is not needed here orz ok
  02:41:817 (4) - ...new combo here because of the anti-jump? orz ok
  02:46:927 (2,5) - Move (2) 1 grid up and (5) 1 grid down? So they won't touch 02:48:081 (1) ok

kissfly wrote:

Normal
00:07:037(3) - one grid up.Look your circle(2)'s Y:36 Fixed.
01:13:136(2) - one grid down Fixed.
01:44:619(3) - one grid left Fixed.

Guest dif hard
01:45:691(1) - unsnapped It's on 1/3 beat so fine~

Insane
01:14:125(4) - suddenly change distance close is no problem? I think it's enough playable~

Your map always looks fine,it's very hard to point out obviously problem.
Good luck with star

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

(○¯ω¯○)Aoi's Mod

General

1. resize bg_0.png to 640x480,it's enough for SB using. Not a big deal~

Insane

1. 00:04:400 (1) - finish at start.because there a sound in music Added. also some notes.
2. 00:54:510 (4) - ^ I see your point but finish sound doesn't fit here and a bit noisy imo.
3. 00:57:147 (6) - ^ ^
4. 01:25:004 (x) - add circle Nah.
5. 01:39:345 (1) - finish at start Added.
6. 02:16:268 (1) - ^ Nah.

Normal

1. 00:04:400 (5) - finish at start Added.
2. 00:26:982 (1) - reduce the volume of finish hitsound here Nah.
3. 01:01:103 (1) - out of border Not a big deal.

AoiX wrote:

[notice]

(○¯ω¯○)Aoi's Mod

Hard

1. 00:08:026 (2) - out of border umm...ok
2. 01:42:971 (2) - finish at 3rd circle(01:43:301) ok
3. 02:11:982 (2) - finish at 2nd circle(02:12:312) no

364,36,37532,6,0,B|436:40|468:188|404:232,1,240,4|0
324,144,38521,1,8
204,144,38850,6,0,B|140:187|172:335|244:339,1,240,0|0
364,340,39839,1,8

Kanpakyin's Taiko[heading]

1. 01:17:087 (450,451,452,453,454) - DKDDD like you used to 02:41:483 (85,86,87,88,89)?

No_Gu wrote:

All suggestions and please don't mind my poor English

Insane
00:51:872 (6) - add finish at the begining Added.
01:00:279 - 01:02:422 why not change to this[attachment=0:39d4f]01.png[/attachment:39d4f]. and add clap at the begining of 1.2.3 Sorry it's just because I like~
01:22:367 (7) - NC? Hmm...nah. One combo per one symmetry-formation.
01:24:180 (6) - ^ ^

Normal
00:37:532 (1,2,1,2) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/180919 Good formation! Fixed.

364,36,37532,6,0,B|436:40|468:188|404:232,1,240,4|0
324,144,38521,1,8
204,144,38850,6,0,B|140:187|172:335|244:339,1,240,0|0
364,340,39839,1,8

01:14:455 (1) - overlap 3 Fixed.



Good map.Really hard to find problems.Good luck. 0u0

Breeze wrote:

Nice BG
If I remembered right, この絵師のなまえは確かにlin+? (′・ω・`) Yup! You know well

General

Skin

Timing

1. I've got a offset : 604 (-5),if you agree with this, then use this one I agree with you. Changed~

(Mod blow is based on the timing I've post)

Normal

1. 00:40:164 (1) - Consider adding finish sound here Added.
2. 00:45:274 (1) - ^ ^
3. 00:54:505 (3) - ^ ^

Insane

1. 00:41:323 (5) - Consider adding a finish sound Added.
2. 01:45:444 (1,2,3) - Nothing wrong, just...1/3 beat hard to hit ;w; Consider use a reverse slider instead? OK changed the pattern~

nice map
Call me back for a recheck when you have any reply, please

No_Gu wrote:

Hard
00:36:707 (4) - whistle instead of clap or remove clap no
01:35:141 (x) - remove the redundant green line oops, thx
01:53:685 (1) - 3 repeats aren't easy to understand no
02:07:861 (1) - remove nc no
02:27:559 (1) - turn down the volume ok

Breeze wrote:

wring's Hard

1. 01:45:663 (1) - Unsnapped slider end, and this slider looked awkward, you must wrong to it here oh,,ok, end snapped, but only changed that
2. 00:52:691 (4) - Slider path kinda hidden by previous note, might be confusing while playing ok, changed

Breeze wrote:

Since [wring's Hard] is a guest diff., I'm fine with using different combo color to this diff.
bubbled

Ryafuka wrote:

go go ranked~!

1. Source: Album Title is not supposed to be used as Source. Remove it, please.

1. Due to the high BPM, the current AR is kinda fast for this difficulty level. Reduce it 1 tick, please.

1. 00:13:131 (1,2,3) - This jump doesn't flow very well and it feels rather "forced". You should tweak this pattern, perhaps stack (1) & (2)?
2. 01:48:735 (1,2,3,1) - Same problem here, these jumps are not intuitive at all and they play rather bad. Try to re-arrange the pattern, here's a suggestion.
3. Overall this diff is quite nice, just a couple of iffy patterns.

Gonzvlo wrote:

Oh god, 1 month! Let's fix that.

[General]

1. Source: Album Title is not supposed to be used as Source. Remove it, please. Removed~

[Normal]

1. Due to the high BPM, the current AR is kinda fast for this difficulty level. Reduce it 1 tick, please. OK

Overall, really nice, good job! >w<

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:13:131 (1,2,3) - This jump doesn't flow very well and it feels rather "forced". You should tweak this pattern, perhaps stack (1) & (2)? good, thanks
2. 01:48:735 (1,2,3,1) - Same problem here, these jumps are not intuitive at all and they play rather bad. Try to re-arrange the pattern, here's a suggestion. ok, I fixed
3. Overall this diff is quite nice, just a couple of iffy patterns.

Faust wrote:

Congratulations !