This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, September 18, 2011 at 9:04:13 PM

Artist: yoshiki*lisa
Title: Destin Histoire (TV size)
Source: Gosick
BPM: 166.05
Filesize: 13148kb
Play Time: 01:21
Difficulties Available:

1. Bobo's Easy (0.63 stars, 52 notes)
2. Hard (4.72 stars, 194 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 272 notes)
4. Normal (4.14 stars, 146 notes)
5. lepidon! - Taiko Oni (4.94 stars, 380 notes)

Download: yoshiki*lisa - Destin Histoire (TV size)
Download: yoshiki*lisa - Destin Histoire (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Remapping like a boss.
Thank u to lepi and Bobo for their diffs and for the taiko BG

Ah cool you uploaded this. \:D/
I fixed the text on the taiko bg a little~
Star~!

Hey I was bored so I threw together an Easy diff.
I don't care what you do with it. x3

Edit: Fixed the lool fail heart slider... kinda...

Download: yoshikilisa - Destin Histoire ~TV size~ (Copter-kun) [Bobo's Easy].osu

Taiko diff finished. Oni lvl. 7, I guess. It wouldn't be that hard if I didn't put 1/3 stream in very last part, lol.

Download: yoshikilisa - Destin Histoire ~TV size~ (Copter-kun) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu

Use (TV Size) instead of ~TV size~

lepidopodus wrote:

Taiko diff finished. Oni lvl. 7, I guess. It wouldn't be that hard if I didn't put 1/3 stream in very last part, lol.

thnx lepi for ur diff

kanpakyin wrote:

Use (TV Size) instead of ~TV size~

SPOILER

You massage is too long @_@ and no kuds please.

I guess it will be alright to leave it.
Maybe for now.

General:
Yeah. Do (TV Size) for consistency. Read this just in case you don't know how http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
Bitrate 320kpbs. You know what to do :3
Your BG is over 1024x768. ^
I suggest all your kiai to end at 01:15:410 instead.
Add Bobo, bobopatcher (bobo's previous name), and Lepidopodus to tags.
Use tickrate 2 for all diffs. I wonder why only easy/normal has this. Add it to hard/insane also.
Easy:
Remove combo color 5 for consistency?
AR +3 at least...Low AR is harder to read.
00:04:586 (1) - Spinner is too short for beginners. I suggest to just removing it.
00:14:704 (1) - Make this look better please. Read this if you don't how. I think Copter could help you too.
00:17:595 (1) - ^
00:33:494 (2) - Can you like do a rotate 90 degree clockwise so it doesn't have an ugly overlap to the previous slider? Space the next few combos correctly if you do.
01:15:410 (1) - End your kiai here. Looks ugly to see kiai when there is no notes. Actually.... I'll add it to general.
01:21:191 (1) - I guess someone did read the slider guide.
01:18:301 (1,2) - Can you put the volume for these to at 50%? It's almost hard to hear.
01:21:191 (1) - And change this to 20% I suppose and end it on the big white tick. Just do like a small SV change like 1.10x and adjust slider a bit to make it end there.

Normal:
Oh dear. Remove the + please. It's an ugly name. Either you rename it hard or make it slightly easier for a normal.
+1 or 2 AR and I guess +1 OD/HP too.
00:13:981 (3) - Looks ugly to see it overlap with 00:11:813 (1)
00:17:595 (6) - NC?
00:23:375 (8) - NC
00:24:821 (1) - Remove this NC
00:46:141 (3,1) - I would say this would be too hard for a normal.
00:48:128 (1) - Consider moving this slider to 00:47:767 and extending it to 00:48:490
00:57:704 (4,5,1) - Move these please. I can see it overlapping 3.
00:58:065 (1) - Why NC?
01:00:052 (2) - Unstack these? You stacked 1/2 earlier and now you stack 1/1
01:22:637 (1) - Spinner seems short on normal. Maybe make a slider i suppose.

Hard:
00:19:582 (7,8) - Overlap with 6. Move it somewhere else?
00:28:977 (6) - Add two notes here instead and NC on the second note?
00:40:721 (9) - NC
01:04:389 (2) - Overlap :/
01:08:725 (5) - Now this one is just a silly overlap.
01:17:036 (6) - Move this to 01:16:855 instead? Space your next few patterns if you do.

Insane:
00:02:960 (3,4) - Curious. Why is this spacing different from 4,5,6?
00:40:721 (5,6) - Pretty sure these could be made better.
00:54:090 (6) - This slider is completely hidden by the previous slider. Move it.

01:17:036 (4,5,6,7) - These anti jumps look ugly. Just space it?

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
Yeah. Do (TV Size) for consistency. Read this just in case you don't know how http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
Bitrate 320kpbs. You know what to do :3 Forgot to check with Audicity. Fixed
Your BG is over 1024x768. ^ ok
I suggest all your kiai to end at 01:15:410 instead. nah they seem fine
Add Bobo, bobopatcher (bobo's previous name), and Lepidopodus to tags. I was quite careless. Let me fix that
Use tickrate 2 for all diffs. I wonder why only easy/normal has this. Add it to hard/insane also.
Easy:
Remove combo color 5 for consistency?
AR +3 at least...Low AR is harder to read.
00:04:586 (1) - Spinner is too short for beginners. I suggest to just removing it.
00:14:704 (1) - Make this look better please. Read this if you don't how. I think Copter could help you too.
00:17:595 (1) - ^
00:33:494 (2) - Can you like do a rotate 90 degree clockwise so it doesn't have an ugly overlap to the previous slider? Space the next few combos correctly if you do.
01:15:410 (1) - End your kiai here. Looks ugly to see kiai when there is no notes. Actually.... I'll add it to general.
01:21:191 (1) - I guess someone did read the slider guide.
01:18:301 (1,2) - Can you put the volume for these to at 50%? It's almost hard to hear.
01:21:191 (1) - And change this to 20% I suppose and end it on the big white tick. Just do like a small SV change like 1.10x and adjust slider a bit to make it end there.

Normal:
Oh dear. Remove the + please. It's an ugly name. Either you rename it hard or make it slightly easier for a normal. I'll maybe change some things later. For now, I'll keep it like this
+1 or 2 AR and I guess +1 OD/HP too. added +1 AR instead of +2 AR
00:13:981 (3) - Looks ugly to see it overlap with 00:11:813 (1) Yea ok
00:17:595 (6) - NC? k
00:23:375 (8) - NC ^
00:24:821 (1) - Remove this NC ^
00:46:141 (3,1) - I would say this would be too hard for a normal. Yea changed
00:48:128 (1) - Consider moving this slider to 00:47:767 and extending it to 00:48:490 Ok
00:57:704 (4,5,1) - Move these please. I can see it overlapping 3. yeap
00:58:065 (1) - Why NC? Wrong place for NC. Fixed
01:00:052 (2) - Unstack these? You stacked 1/2 earlier and now you stack 1/1 Ok
01:22:637 (1) - Spinner seems short on normal. Maybe make a slider i suppose. Made it into a long slider. Hope you like it.

Hard:
00:19:582 (7,8) - Overlap with 6. Move it somewhere else? ok
00:28:977 (6) - Add two notes here instead and NC on the second note? k
00:40:721 (9) - NC ok
01:04:389 (2) - Overlap :/ fixed
01:08:725 (5) - Now this one is just a silly overlap. fixed
01:17:036 (6) - Move this to 01:16:855 instead? Space your next few patterns if you do. Keeping this. it fits the rhythm.

Insane:
00:02:960 (3,4) - Curious. Why is this spacing different from 4,5,6? Just fortehlulz. Well now it's fixed though
00:40:721 (5,6) - Pretty sure these could be made better. how about now? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/142033 (inb4 still ugly)
00:54:090 (6) - This slider is completely hidden by the previous slider. Move it.
yea fixed
01:17:036 (4,5,6,7) - These anti jumps look ugly. Just space it? Decided to stack them instead.

Most of them were fixed. Thnx for the mod btw!

Raging Bull wrote:

Easy:
Remove combo color 5 for consistency? Aww, done~! :3
AR +3 at least...Low AR is harder to read. Changed to AR 4~!
00:04:586 (1) - Spinner is too short for beginners. I suggest to just removing it. Fixed... kinda... :o
00:14:704 (1) - Make this look better please. Read this if you don't how. I think Copter could help you too. Fixed... kinda... :o
00:17:595 (1) - ^^
00:33:494 (2) - Can you like do a rotate 90 degree clockwise so it doesn't have an ugly overlap to the previous slider? Space the next few combos correctly if you do. Done~!
01:15:410 (1) - End your kiai here. Looks ugly to see kiai when there is no notes. Actually.... I'll add it to general. Done~!
01:21:191 (1) - I guess someone did read the slider guide. Copter told me about it, you should've seen that slider before. @_@
01:18:301 (1,2) - Can you put the volume for these to at 50%? It's almost hard to hear. Done~!
01:21:191 (1) - And change this to 20% I suppose and end it on the big white tick. Just do like a small SV change like 1.10x and adjust slider a bit to make it end there. Done~!

Thnx for the mod! :D

Download: yoshikilisa - Destin Histoire ~TV size~ (Copter-kun) [Bobo's Easy].osu

It should be (TV Size) not (TV size) You should capitalise the "S"
Oh,don't forget to corrext the title on Thread.

Decided to do tonite because if I dont, it will be 2 days before I would be able to mod this.

Folder:
Clean clean and clean.

General:
Use the same tick rate for all difficulties (Guests and all besides lepi diff) please.

Bobo's Easy:
00:03:321 (4,5) - easy players tend to have a hard time seeing notes like 5 hidden under the end of slider 4, you should really change this.
00:06:031 (1) - sweet jesus, you should really fix this slider to be symmetrical. its so obviously unsymmetrical.
00:08:200 (2) - same situation as above.
00:10:187 (3,1) - move both of these up 1 grid point so its centered on the x-axis. *well at least it will be a little bit more centered this way*
00:17:595 (1) - remove new combo.
00:23:376 (2,3) - stack the end of slider 2 with the beginning of slider 3 better please.
00:50:838 (3) - you shouldnt really use this close together of a slider on an easy diff.
00:53:729 (6) - you shouldnt really use this close together of a slider on an easy diff.
01:03:847 (1) - remove new combo.
01:19:746 (2,1) - why do these 2 notes have the same combo color? this NEEDS to be changed.
01:21:191 (1) - this heart is slightly un-symmetrical. (look at this http://puu.sh/5MjT ) that may help.

Normal+
Dont use + in difficulty names. You will get flamed by certain modders. rename to Normal
00:01:153 (4) - give this slider some more curveeeeeeveeeeee
00:05:309 (1,2) - move down 1 grid point so it lands on (0,0 graph wise?)
00:13:439 (1,2) - umm i wouldnt really say anything is wrong but I wouldnt suggest this pattern on a Normal.
00:15:968 (2,4,3) - This is highly unrankable. you have a note that hits while the slider is running. fix this now.
00:20:485 (2,3) - im not sure if normal players can red the note below the slider end but if you keep it, then at least stack them better please.
00:21:931 (5,6) - im not sure if normal players can red the note below the slider end but if you keep it, then at least stack them better please.
00:45:057 (1) - give this some slider more curve also too.
00:46:502 (1) - remove new combo.
00:55:536 (2,3) - if you were trying to make these sliders curve with each other, it didnt work. they are touching. adjust them so they arent touching.
00:58:969 (1) - remove new combo here.
01:09:990 (1) - remove new combo here too.
01:12:519 (1,2,3) - this overlaps it kind of an ugly way. you should adjust so they arent overlapping as much at least.
01:22:637 (3) - this slider is noticeably unsymmetrical, please fix this.

Hard:
00:08:200 (9) - remove clap from beginning of slider and add the clap to the end of the slider.
00:11:090 (6) - remove clap from beginning of slider and add the clap to the end of the slider.
00:55:175 (1,2) - some ugly overlapping that you should change around.
01:01:317 (5) - new combo.

Lepi taiko is fine. (as always)

Insane:
00:00:792 (4,2) - you should really give your sliders some curve to them instead of a quick fold.
00:09:645 (3,4,5) - this pattern is just no. please do something different than adding 1/2s below the beginning and end of a slider and corrupting the spacing badly.
00:12:355 (2,3,4) - the spacing is inconsistent. fix this.
00:13:439 (5,6,7) - the spacing is inconsistent. fix this.

That would be it!
Good luck.

Zelos wrote:

Decided to do tonite because if I dont, it will be 2 days before I would be able to mod this.

Folder:
Clean clean and clean.

General:
Use the same tick rate for all difficulties (Guests and all besides lepi diff) please.

Normal+
Dont use + in difficulty names. You will get flamed by certain modders. rename to Normal
00:01:153 (4) - give this slider some more curveeeeeeveeeeee
00:05:309 (1,2) - move down 1 grid point so it lands on (0,0 graph wise?)
00:13:439 (1,2) - umm i wouldnt really say anything is wrong but I wouldnt suggest this pattern on a Normal.
00:15:968 (2,4,3) - This is highly unrankable. you have a note that hits while the slider is running. fix this now.
00:20:485 (2,3) - im not sure if normal players can red the note below the slider end but if you keep it, then at least stack them better please.
00:21:931 (5,6) - im not sure if normal players can red the note below the slider end but if you keep it, then at least stack them better please.
00:45:057 (1) - give this some slider more curve also too.
00:46:502 (1) - remove new combo.
00:55:536 (2,3) - if you were trying to make these sliders curve with each other, it didnt work. they are touching. adjust them so they arent touching.
00:58:969 (1) - remove new combo here.
01:09:990 (1) - remove new combo here too.
01:12:519 (1,2,3) - this overlaps it kind of an ugly way. you should adjust so they arent overlapping as much at least.
01:22:637 (3) - this slider is noticeably unsymmetrical, please fix this.

Hard:
00:08:200 (9) - remove clap from beginning of slider and add the clap to the end of the slider.
00:11:090 (6) - remove clap from beginning of slider and add the clap to the end of the slider.
00:55:175 (1,2) - some ugly overlapping that you should change around.
01:01:317 (5) - new combo.

Lepi taiko is fine. (as always)

Insane:
00:00:792 (4,2) - you should really give your sliders some curve to them instead of a quick fold.
00:09:645 (3,4,5) - this pattern is just no. please do something different than adding 1/2s below the beginning and end of a slider and corrupting the spacing badly.
00:12:355 (2,3,4) - the spacing is inconsistent. fix this.
00:13:439 (5,6,7) - the spacing is inconsistent. fix this.

That would be it!
Good luck.

Pretty much fixed everything. Thank you for your mod!

Zelos wrote:

Decided to do tonite because if I dont, it will be 2 days before I would be able to mod this.

Bobo's Easy:
00:03:321 (4,5) - easy players tend to have a hard time seeing notes like 5 hidden under the end of slider 4, you should really change this.
00:06:031 (1) - sweet jesus, you should really fix this slider to be symmetrical. its so obviously unsymmetrical.
00:08:200 (2) - same situation as above.
00:10:187 (3,1) - move both of these up 1 grid point so its centered on the x-axis. *well at least it will be a little bit more centered this way*
00:17:595 (1) - remove new combo.
00:23:376 (2,3) - stack the end of slider 2 with the beginning of slider 3 better please.
00:50:838 (3) - you shouldnt really use this close together of a slider on an easy diff.
00:53:729 (6) - you shouldnt really use this close together of a slider on an easy diff.
01:03:847 (1) - remove new combo.
01:19:746 (2,1) - why do these 2 notes have the same combo color? this NEEDS to be changed.
01:21:191 (1) - this heart is slightly un-symmetrical. (look at this http://puu.sh/5MjT ) that may help.

That would be it!
Good luck.

[color=#FF0000Thnx 4 the nice mod~ ][/color]

Download: yoshikilisa - Destin Histoire (TV size) (Copter-kun) [Bobo's Easy].osu

General
ok

Bobo's
i am bad at modding absurdlyeasy

Normal
00:17:595 (1) - would be better if the slider twitch happened in the center
00:57:704 (4,5,6) - awkward and hard to play as a normal level, make them a line.

Hard
Awkward double 1/2s....

Insane


I'll talk to you in-game about this, hit me up.

[General]

Mp3 Bitrate : 192kbps (Okay)

Video (frame size) : Frame size is 640x480 (Okay) but the video still have audio . here video with no audio (Click here to download)

Skin : No skin

Background : 1024x768 (fine)

Kiai time : All same (Okay)

Snapping : No problem here

Preview Point : No problem here too

Diffs : 1 easy , 1 normal [gonna remap], 1 hard [gonna remap] , 1 taiko , 1 insane (fine)

Audio Lead-in : 3000 (Okay)

Artist : yoshiki*lisa (Okay)

Title : Destin Histoire (Okay)

source : Gosick (Okay)

Tags : Add "bobo" to all diffs?





[Insane]

1. 00:03:321 (5) - Don't you think it would be smoother if you make like this ? http://puu.sh/6stN , you can reject it if you want to stay x)
2. 00:12:355 (2) - you can make this look better
3. 00:13:529 (6) - delete this note ?
4. 00:21:208 (5) - do you really want this to hit the other slider ?
5. 00:47:044 (x) - add a note ? since there's " taa "
6. 00:47:767 (x) - add a note ? since there's " ooo "
7. 00:48:490 (x) - for me add a note here sounds better.
8. 00:53:548 (4) - remove this from getting block by the other slider ?

Its a nice diff but there's something that I didn't like x) There's kinda random slider shape. Its kinda look weird,if you can try to fix some ?

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