1. Easy (1,87 stars, 77 notes)
2. Hard (4,65 stars, 155 notes)
3. Insane (4,86 stars, 180 notes)
4. Normal (3,89 stars, 122 notes)
5. Taiko (4,83 stars, 367 notes)

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  Is your video's dimensions 848*480?
  According to Current Draft of the Rules/Guidelines
  

  [Video]
  
  •The video's dimensions must not exceed 800x600. This is so video files keep a decent filesize and do not increase the beatmap's size by too much.

  but I'm not sure it's issue or not now.

• 
  Fine.

1. 00:24:594 (T) - This green line isn't snapped.
2. 00:30:094 (3) - Use finish instead of whistle at the end of slider?
3. 01:04:094 (1) - ^

1. 01:08:469 (2) - Add finish?
2. 01:15:094 (5) - Add whistle at the start of slider?

1. 00:06:344 (6) - How about adding a repeat?
2. 00:08:344 (4) - ^
3. 00:14:344 (6) - ^
4. 00:25:594 (4) - Try to use normal-hitsound at the start.
5. 01:12:344 (8) - Add finish at the end of slider?

1. Orz...the video cannot exceed 800x600 as Ranking Submission Criteria said it.

1. None~

1. 00:22:594 (3) - Probably Use n1 hitosund here?because the sliderslide is too noisy.
2. 00:26:594 (2) -^ Same!
3. 00:30:594 (3) - ^Same (won't note this again)
   

1. 01:02:594 (3,4) - I totally not suggest put this kind of beat/spacing in Easy diff,it might make confused to newbie,oh,well,let you decide it.

1. nope!

1. 00:11:594 (4) - I guess you better remove a whistle at the beginning of the slider.
2. 01:01:844 (2,3,4,5) - Sorry for a bit nazi here,would you make this square more better,I mean the end of the slider(2)- (3.4)- and the beginning of the slider(5)-

1. Nope

1. First I want to say..Could have added more whistle,this song can have more whistle.
2. 00:54:969 (4) - The rhythm sounds weird for me,I think this slider should stop on blue tick and you can hear nothing support(drum/vocal)it,so place on red tick is much better.
3. 01:16:094 (2,3,4,5,6) - wat?The only stream in this difficulty?You should consistent the whole difficulty,so use a slider instead of it.

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1. Nope

1. 00:19:094 (x) - Probably add a note here and stack on (1)-?
2. 00:59:469 (9,10) - I think you can put sone whistle on these slider and decrease the volume.that's looks good to me.

qinche wrote:

Normal:
00:55:094 (2,3,4) - why no perfect triangle? I wanted to make (3) more clear, making it a perfect triangle would make it half hidden by a hitburst. Not a huge deal I guess, I actually like it slightly crooked like this hehe.
01:18:594 (1,2,3) - ^

Suzully wrote:

The video's dimensions must not exceed 800x600. This is so video files keep a decent filesize and do not increase the beatmap's size by too much. Just a comment as I provided the video, for 16:9 format, maximum allowed dimensions are 848x480. The video uses those dimensions. Besides, even with video the map doesn't even come close to 10MB.
[Normal]

1. 00:24:594 (T) - This green line isn't snapped. Intentional. If I snap it, it will affect the slider start, and if I move it further away it will trigger the normal whistle on the slider path.
2. 00:30:094 (3) - Use finish instead of whistle at the end of slider? No, because every finish follows the percussion in the music, whistle emphasizes the voice.
3. 01:04:094 (1) - ^

pieguy1372 wrote:

Normal:

-tick rate 1? I think 2 works better, sorry.

00:24:594 (1) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? No, because there is such a sound in the music and I wanted to emphasize that.
01:04:094 (1) - clap on start? Hmm, nah, haven't used a single clap in the map, not gonna do it here.

Zelos wrote:

Normal:
00:45:844 (1) - perhaps extend this to the next white tick? it sounded better to me and its still quite easy to hit. Yeah it does sound a little better, but it doesn't sound bad as it is now. Usually people complain that if you have a spinner end a full 1/1 before the next note that it's too hard, so I will keep it as it is now, sorry.
01:18:594 (1) - remove new combo here. I wanted to keep my basic rule to have a new combo every 2 stanza (if possible and if it fits) with new combo when I change the instrument I follow. I think this new combo works here so I won't remove it, a good suggestion though.

Hinacle wrote:

＜Normal＞

1. HP+1? Nah, I know that HP drain is already quite lenient, but increasing it won't really add to difficulty (tested it) and it will affect score/star rating too much.
2. 01:02:594 (5) - add whistle at end? Done, sounds good.
3. 01:04:094 (1) - Remove whistle and add finish at end? Nah, there is no similar percussion sound in the music, whistle is enough.

Index-San wrote:

normal:
01:02:594 (5,6) - i just . . .well . . .try this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136543 or flip it vertically Well, i like them as circles, gives more of a "precise" feel because the voice does as well. Sliding at this point would be unfitting for my taste. Sorry.
01:10:594 (1,2,3,4) - about this.... you followed vocal before this . . .maybe follow the vocal too (long slider or spinner) Actually, if you look at the long section before this one, you will notice they are identical which instrument they follow. Originally I was following the voice here, but it was hard to do it accurately and was forced to map a blue tick, which made this slightly too hard for a normal.
00:24:610 - unsnapped timing section This is on purpose, considering how I still want a normal sound at the slider start and a soft finish on the slider slide without triggering a normal finish there.

qinche wrote:

could have added more whistle
Prefer not.

Suzully wrote:

01:08:469 (2) - Add finish?
Don't think it really fits.
01:15:094 (5) - Add whistle at the start of slider?
Probably a bit over the top.

kanpakyin wrote:

First I want to say..Could have added more whistle,this song can have more whistle.
I think it's alright.
00:54:969 (4) - The rhythm sounds weird for me,I think this slider should stop on blue tick and you can hear nothing support(drum/vocal)it,so place on red tick is much better.
Changed it to something else.
01:16:094 (2,3,4,5,6) - wat?The only stream in this difficulty?You should consistent the whole difficulty,so use a slider instead of it.
No.

pieguy1372 wrote:

00:48:594 (1) - this? http://puu.sh/4KXf
Agreed, it plays a little nicer.
00:52:844 - add a note?
Following the vocals, so no.
00:57:844 - ^
^

Zelos wrote:

00:09:094 (1,2) - (nazi alert) these are just barely barely unstacked. stack them?
Distance snap of 0 says they're already stacked.
00:10:094 (3,4) - (nazi alert) these are just barely barely unstacked. stack them?
You're right about this one though.
00:18:344 (1) - turn in grid snap 4 and center on the y-axis?
Ok.
00:54:969 (4) - this slider doesnt sound right ending on a 1/4th. make a new slider and end it on the next 1/2?
Changed this in kanpakyin's mod.

Hinacle wrote:

look fine>w<b
<3

1. I really disliked the red combo color. Already told you that hehe, I don't think it fits with the video at all, and while it is on the pinwheel I still think it's just a nice touch to the BG, rather than the important color. Still, up to you if you wanna change this (in my diff there is no red hehe).

1. 00:59:969 (10) - To follow the music better, I suggest that you map a circle at this timeline and just move the slider to 01:00:094. If you listen to the background melody, it's following it much more accurately.
2. 01:19:094 (1,2,3) - Maybe reduce the spacing between 1 and 2 a little? Or make a perfect triangle out of these 3? Like this.
3. 01:20:094 (3) - Consider moving this finish to 01:20:594 (4) instead and use a whistle instead. I think this sounds better as the percussion only starts building up at that spot. Just a suggestion.

1. 01:12:469 - Maybe add a note here to follow the voice more accurately?

1. 01:19:094 (4) - Maybe use a new combo here just to make the combo shorter? It's the longest combo on the map currently.

Kytoxid wrote:

[Normal]

Only map with tick rate 2, intentional? Yep.

00:22:594 (4) - Add a repeat? Fills in the space a bit, and there's something in the background that follows it. Nah, those stuff in the background are not something you should map imo, atleast not for a normal diff. I can see the reason you suggested it, but I like this better. :3

lolcubes wrote:

[Easy]:

1. 01:19:094 (4) - Maybe use a new combo here just to make the combo shorter? It's the longest combo on the map currently.

About the all mods only I change this and the NormalCustomSlider1 \:D/

Kytoxid wrote:

00:24:594 (2,3) - Can this be unstacked? All your other sliderend stacks up to here are 1/4, and there's a very natural-sounding spot to put a note at 00:25:094... Alternatively, adding a note 00:25:094 works just as well.