i'm getting vietnam flashbacks
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i'm so tired of hearing this song god have mercy on my soul
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General
add 8 onto the offset of all diffs: Checked in arrowvortex and also by comparing it to another ranked brogamer set which i had the same argument with.
Or1gin's Beginner
Nothing to mod here!
Normal
00:15:812 (15812|1,16102|1) - I don't think a stack here is necessary. You can move 00:16:102 (16102|1) - to column 1 and have a similar effect without a leading jack from the percussions into the "GG-NOOB". This would link the vocals and not link the percussion in patterning.
00:22:189 (22189|0) - I think this should be moved to 3 to avoid the stack since it isn't called for by the music or your previous pattern.
00:57:624 (57624|1) - I'd move this back onto the white tick. If you listen to the melody at 25% the predominant sound is on the white tick there. Alternatively you could add a note on the white tick and retain this note but that would probably be too hard for a normal.
01:40:450 (100450|1) - Move this to column 1 so that column 1 isn't so empty!
00:22:189 (22189|0) - I think this should be moved to 3 to avoid the stack since it isn't called for by the music or your previous pattern.
00:57:624 (57624|1) - I'd move this back onto the white tick. If you listen to the melody at 25% the predominant sound is on the white tick there. Alternatively you could add a note on the white tick and retain this note but that would probably be too hard for a normal.
01:40:450 (100450|1) - Move this to column 1 so that column 1 isn't so empty!
Hyper
00:08:856 (8856|3) - Move this to 4 to vary up the jumps in this jumpstream.
00:13:638 (13638|2,13783|3,13783|0,13783|1) - Why is this one not a jack when all of the others are?
00:17:696 (17696|1,17841|3,17841|2,17841|0) - Same thing here ^
00:27:551 (27551|1,27841|1,28131|1,28421|1) - Edit this stack out please!
00:35:088 (35088|3) - Move this to 1 so that there isn't a minijack leading into the LN on 4.
00:55:522 (55522|0) - Move this to 2 -> This section isn't layered consistently.
01:23:928 (83928|0,83928|1,84218|1,84218|0,84508|0,84508|1,84798|1,84798|0,85088|1,85088|0) - Please edit this stack out for player comfortability
01:24:943 (84943|2,85233|2,85522|2,85812|2,86102|2,86392|2) - This stack is also massive for no real reason. I think this section should be repatterned into a dense 1/2 jumpstream.
01:28:131 (88131|1) - Delete this note; The song does not really call for an emphasised sound on this section and with this note you have an awkward minijack.
01:29:435 (89435|0,89725|2,90015|0,90305|2) - These LNs should be varied to fit all 4 columns in my opinion as the 'HEAD-SHOT GG-NOOB' are all distinctly different sounds and therefore should be on different columns.
01:59:725 (119725|2,119725|1,119870|3,119870|0) - These hitsounds are wrong.
02:03:928 (123928|3,124146|0,124146|2,124363|1,124363|3,124580|0,124580|2,124798|1) - Same here.
^ It's playing a light hi-hat when every other hitsounded section to this melody is a kick-drum
02:07:624 (127624|3) - Pretty sure this hitsound is on the wrong note aswell. 02:07:696 (127696|0,127696|2,127696|1) - There's no hitsound here when its the last note in the chart (with a kick) but there is on the one note before it and it just seems odd.
00:13:638 (13638|2,13783|3,13783|0,13783|1) - Why is this one not a jack when all of the others are?
00:17:696 (17696|1,17841|3,17841|2,17841|0) - Same thing here ^
00:27:551 (27551|1,27841|1,28131|1,28421|1) - Edit this stack out please!
00:35:088 (35088|3) - Move this to 1 so that there isn't a minijack leading into the LN on 4.
00:55:522 (55522|0) - Move this to 2 -> This section isn't layered consistently.
01:23:928 (83928|0,83928|1,84218|1,84218|0,84508|0,84508|1,84798|1,84798|0,85088|1,85088|0) - Please edit this stack out for player comfortability
01:24:943 (84943|2,85233|2,85522|2,85812|2,86102|2,86392|2) - This stack is also massive for no real reason. I think this section should be repatterned into a dense 1/2 jumpstream.
01:28:131 (88131|1) - Delete this note; The song does not really call for an emphasised sound on this section and with this note you have an awkward minijack.
01:29:435 (89435|0,89725|2,90015|0,90305|2) - These LNs should be varied to fit all 4 columns in my opinion as the 'HEAD-SHOT GG-NOOB' are all distinctly different sounds and therefore should be on different columns.
01:59:725 (119725|2,119725|1,119870|3,119870|0) - These hitsounds are wrong.
02:03:928 (123928|3,124146|0,124146|2,124363|1,124363|3,124580|0,124580|2,124798|1) - Same here.
^ It's playing a light hi-hat when every other hitsounded section to this melody is a kick-drum
02:07:624 (127624|3) - Pretty sure this hitsound is on the wrong note aswell. 02:07:696 (127696|0,127696|2,127696|1) - There's no hitsound here when its the last note in the chart (with a kick) but there is on the one note before it and it just seems odd.
Another
Change OD TO 8 (it makes the HP/OD scale for this mapset linear)
This difficulty has massively different klai times to the other charts in this mapset.
01:12:334 (72334|3) - Move to 2 to stop a minijack on column 4
01:15:377 (75377|0,75522|1,75667|3,75812|0,75812|2) - no LN on this bit?
01:45:957 (105957|3) - Move this to 3 to stop a minijack on column 4
01:50:740 (110740|1,110885|0,110885|2) - Edit this so that it isn't the same pattern as the previous one. This helps vary up the mapset and make it more interesting for players to play.
This difficulty has massively different klai times to the other charts in this mapset.
01:12:334 (72334|3) - Move to 2 to stop a minijack on column 4
01:15:377 (75377|0,75522|1,75667|3,75812|0,75812|2) - no LN on this bit?
01:45:957 (105957|3) - Move this to 3 to stop a minijack on column 4
01:50:740 (110740|1,110885|0,110885|2) - Edit this so that it isn't the same pattern as the previous one. This helps vary up the mapset and make it more interesting for players to play.
NonBinaryGamer
00:14:363 (14363|3,14508|3,14653|3,14798|3,14943|3) - I think this stack/anchor should be patterned out as it doesn't seem intentional and a stack this long isn't used again to the same sounds afterwards.
00:19:725 (19725|3,19870|3,20015|3,20160|3) - ^
00:40:305 (40305|2) - Move this to 1 for hand balance. It's hard to make an ln transition on the same hand that you're entering a minitrill so by moving it to one you even out the usage of the hands making the right hand deal with 2LNS + 1 note and the left hand deal with a 200bpm 1/4 minitrill.
00:46:537 (46537|3) - Move this to 1 to stop a 3 note anchor in this koreajack burst
00:53:493 (53493|2,53493|3,53493|1) - I think this chord should also have the kick-hitsound on it.
00:57:551 (57551|3,57551|2,57551|0,57624|3,57624|1,57696|2,57769|1,57769|0,57841|3,57841|0,57841|2) - This pattern is a massive spike; I think you should pattern it more comfortably. -> In my opinion; you should delete 00:57:624 (57624|3,57769|0).
01:01:754 (61754|0,61972|3) - Delete these two notes. This pattern is just mash.
01:56:827 (116827|2,116972|2,117117|2,117262|2,117406|2,117551|2,117696|2) - i think you should attempt to pattern this stack out.
02:02:551 (122551|0,122696|3) - Delete these to make this pattern more fluid.
00:19:725 (19725|3,19870|3,20015|3,20160|3) - ^
00:40:305 (40305|2) - Move this to 1 for hand balance. It's hard to make an ln transition on the same hand that you're entering a minitrill so by moving it to one you even out the usage of the hands making the right hand deal with 2LNS + 1 note and the left hand deal with a 200bpm 1/4 minitrill.
00:46:537 (46537|3) - Move this to 1 to stop a 3 note anchor in this koreajack burst
00:53:493 (53493|2,53493|3,53493|1) - I think this chord should also have the kick-hitsound on it.
00:57:551 (57551|3,57551|2,57551|0,57624|3,57624|1,57696|2,57769|1,57769|0,57841|3,57841|0,57841|2) - This pattern is a massive spike; I think you should pattern it more comfortably. -> In my opinion; you should delete 00:57:624 (57624|3,57769|0).
01:01:754 (61754|0,61972|3) - Delete these two notes. This pattern is just mash.
01:56:827 (116827|2,116972|2,117117|2,117262|2,117406|2,117551|2,117696|2) - i think you should attempt to pattern this stack out.
02:02:551 (122551|0,122696|3) - Delete these to make this pattern more fluid.
i'm so tired of hearing this song god have mercy on my soul