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EnakoRin
看在你-5 KDS的份上再给你俩KDS STAR还有我回学校了来MOD一下这个图
嗯就这样 :lol:
wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested.

00:03:946 - D:
00:07:696 - k---K d....
00:25:508 - d d k, you can find that the melody repeats as 2 beats before so putting it k k k would be odd.
00:29:258 - d


Very good for me EXCEPT that stream. Listen carefully and you will only find the k-like drum sound on the red tick only. So follow the music and you should make the stream in a regular manner, especially like 4 in a group. Here you may consider a ddkdddkd... or a spinner.

I agree with ozzy in the sense that we need more k in the 1/2 patterns in the kiai time to show the high melody in kiai than in non-kiai part.

And in general, kiai is far toooooo long and not suitable to be ranked. Start kiai at 00:52:696 or 01:00:196. Also the 1.35x in taiko is highly recommended to be started there because I don't see the climax elements from 0:36 to 0:52 so putting a 1.35x there is inappropiate. D:

6.5/10
EnakoRin
General
  • offset = 175
Easy
  • 00:00:196 (1) - 第一个圈加normal-finish
    00:13:321 (4) - 去掉最后一个圈上的clap,这里不适合
    00:33:946 (1) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish
Normal
  • 00:00:196 (1) - 加normal-finish
    00:07:461 (3) - new combo
    00:34:883 (3) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish
Hard
  • HP Drain Rate, Overall Diffculty + 3,AR + 1
    00:00:196 (1) - 第一个圈加normal-finish
    00:35:586 (4) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish
    00:45:196 - 不加个circle么少女
    01:01:367 - 不加个circle么少女
    01:03:242 - 不加个circle么少女
Insane
  • 00:00:196 (1) - 加normal-finish
    说实话这难度感觉排列有点乱,花样有点单一,不过这样也没啥问题
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Weiren wrote:

General
  • offset = 175
Easy
  • 00:00:196 (1) - 第一个圈加normal-finish
    00:13:321 (4) - 去掉最后一个圈上的clap,这里不适合
    00:33:946 (1) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish
Normal
  • 00:00:196 (1) - 加normal-finish
    00:07:461 (3) - new combo
    00:34:883 (3) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish
Hard
  • HP Drain Rate, Overall Diffculty + 3,AR + 1
    00:00:196 (1) - 第一个圈加normal-finish
    00:35:586 (4) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish
    00:45:196 - 不加个circle么少女
    01:01:367 - 不加个circle么少女
    01:03:242 - 不加个circle么少女
Insane
  • 00:00:196 (1) - 加normal-finish
    说实话这难度感觉排列有点乱,花样有点单一,不过这样也没啥问题
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren

同学你那个off还是太快了OTL....我改成了off190.....够了
谢谢mod~阿里嘎多~
zsr123

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested.

00:03:946 - D:
00:07:696 - k---K d....
00:25:508 - d d k, you can find that the melody repeats as 2 beats before so putting it k k k would be odd.
00:29:258 - d


Very good for me EXCEPT that stream. Listen carefully and you will only find the k-like drum sound on the red tick only. So follow the music and you should make the stream in a regular manner, especially like 4 in a group. Here you may consider a ddkdddkd... or a spinner.

I agree with ozzy in the sense that we need more k in the 1/2 patterns in the kiai time to show the high melody in kiai than in non-kiai part.

And in general, kiai is far toooooo long and not suitable to be ranked. Start kiai at 00:52:696 or 01:00:196. Also the 1.35x in taiko is highly recommended to be started there because I don't see the climax elements from 0:36 to 0:52 so putting a 1.35x there is inappropiate. D:

6.5/10
thanks for modding :)

Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (tutuhaha) [zsr123's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
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Backfire
Taiko-
00:08:627 - You have lots of spaces like this. Fill them in with stuff like kkd or ddk or even ddd. It sounds nice without the random pauses.
00:10:502 - ^
00:21:986 - to 00:22:455 - maybe either make it kdkdk or kkkkk.
00:23:158 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) - This whole section is too easy when there's lots of room to put some more notes.
00:30:658 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - ^

Other than that, its preety good. I like the chorus. But before that, its not as good.
zsr123

Backfire wrote:

Taiko-
00:08:627 - You have lots of spaces like this. Fill them in with stuff like kkd or ddk or even ddd. It sounds nice without the random pauses.
00:10:502 - ^
00:21:986 - to 00:22:455 - maybe either make it kdkdk or kkkkk.
00:23:158 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) - This whole section is too easy when there's lots of room to put some more notes.
00:30:658 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - ^

Other than that, its preety good. I like the chorus. But before that, its not as good.
thanks for modding :)

Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (tutuhaha) [zsr123's Taiko].osu
Behon
All difficulties:
- Could use some whistles, unless you really feel that they don't fit.

No notable issues otherwise. This is very solid.
Ekaru
Insane:

-That dark purple combo color blends with the BG on my monitor. Can you please make that color a tad lighter?

00:27:143 (1,2) - This blanket could be done better. Use (1)'s approach circle when adjust (2); this way you'll get a much better arc.

But really, I love this map. Not much I can point out that isn't just nitpicking, aside from that one combo color that I seriously can't see well. Good job! I'll probably mod the rest some other time, and will star this whenever I get some more kudosu.
Kiiwa
Hi~

General
Awesome song *_*
I think you could start Kiai at 00:37:455 - if you really wanted to o.o?
For tags you could put the main characters' name~
Just an idea... maybe remove every second finish during Kiai? It makes it sound more effective..

Insane
00:17:885 (6) - delete
01:24:096 - end spinner here with vocal

Hard
Really easy.. OD+1
00:22:690 (4) - add clap
01:03:471 (4) - move down 3 grids to make a pretty square :3

Normal
Fine

LOL cant find anything ;_;
Good luck~
Zelos
Random Question, are you a beginner mapper?

Folder:
All clean here.

General:
Your kiai time is realllllllllllly long. I know the entire part fits but its over 50% of the song is kiai, So I suggest you shorten it maybe

Easy:
00:17:065 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:23:627 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:33:940 (1) - turn on gridsnap 4 and move this to the left a little bit so that the slider tick is centered at least a little?
01:20:815 (1,2,3,4,1) - move notes 4 and 1 (the last note 1) to the left 1 grid point so your 1,2,3,4 pattern becomes symmetrically balanced.

Normal:
00:13:315 (3) - move this to the left 1 grid point so it becomes centered on the y-axis much more evenly?
00:49:643 (2,1) - im not exactly sure if a Normal player can read this or not but I'm not a normal player so I dunno :)! I somewhat suggest you change this.

Hard:
00:33:940 (1) - grab the 2nd slider point for this slider and move it to the right 1 grid point to it becomes more symmetrical.
00:37:924 (1) - new combo? I only think so because it starts after the kiai.
01:02:065 (1,2,3,4) - this square shape it looks like you were trying to form is a bit mis-shapened. Try to reshape it to more square like features?

zsr123's taiko:
Note: DON and/or KAT = the big don/kat notes.
00:14:252 (63,64,65) - don don kat?
00:16:596 (73) - DON?
00:18:940 (82) - kat?
00:33:940 (136) - DON?
01:22:690 (386) - KAT?

Insane:
00:25:268 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:26:674 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:29:018 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:31:361 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:35:346 (1) - remove new combo here?
basically consider removing any new combo here that is in the pattern I listed because this would be a long list of the same stuff.

And well that is it!
Very very nice mapset you have here.
Star!
Weez
General
- Add "blue" to the tags because the english title is Blue Exorcist
- Like Mr. Zelos said, kiai time is long._.

Easy
00:36:283 (1,2) - Fix the spacing for this.

Insane
- Change the circle size to 4. Plays and looks sooo much better.

Thats all, great map here!!
DerekMcD
Hey, here's my beatmap.

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24043

  • Blue: You must fix this.
    Red: You better fix it!
    Orange: Screenshot ahead.
    Black: Just suggestions though.

    ~Easy~
    Have nothing to say...

    ~Normal~
  1. 00:47:121 (4): Move this to x:332 y:190.

    ~Hard~
    Have nothing to say...

    ~Insane~
    Have nothing to say...

    Nice map, thank you and good luck
zsr123
Touche_old
[GENERAL]

Change the purple color to (68,191,187) (RGB)

[EASY]

01:23:158 : Put the end of the spinner in 01:26:440

[NORMAL]

00:07:455 : Delete the slider and put a circle in 00:07:690
00:54:330 : Delete the new combo
01:01:830 : ^
01:10:033 : Change the slider into a circle
01:17:065 : Delete the new combo
01:23:158 : Put the end of the spinner in 01:26:440

[HARD]

Slider tick rate: 2
01:23:158 : Put the end of the spinner in 01:26:440

[INSANE]

00:03:354 : The circles (7) and (8) put in other place :>
00:26:674 : Delete the new combo
00:35:346 : ^
00:36:283 : ^
01:23:158 : Put the end of the spinner in 01:26:440

Ready all! If i have a kd i'll give u a star ;_; sry
B r e e z e_old
Nice map
go ranked~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

B r e e z e wrote:

Nice map
go ranked~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OTL I go find mod
mochi
[Hard]
Fine

[Insane]
Fine, but kind of repetitive.

Can't find anything wrong.
Gamu
hi- :)

All suggestions

[General]

●Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in 2 → 3

[Easy]

●00:10:502 (5) - ctrl+J

●00:22:690 (3) - new combo add
●00:23:627 (1) - new combo remove
●00:53:627 (3) - 1 grid upper left

[Normal]

●AR+1. CS+1. OD+1

[Hard]

●HP+1

[Insane]

●fine~


Good map!!!!!!!
S h i o n
尼桑~
SPOILER
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merchat7
As requested

[General]

Don't see a problem

[Easy]

00:03:940 (1.2) - Slider work much better http://puu.sh/66nG
00:06:752 (2) - Remove this, isn't really follow anything and the stacking with (1) in next combo doesn't feel that nice. If you don't want to remove it, place it somewhere else.
00:11:440 (1.2) - Why stack this? So much nicer if you space it out http://puu.sh/66o7.

Pretty solid.

[Normal]

00:04:877 (2.3.4) - Repeating slider instead. Sliders work better for this part than hit circle.

Couldn't find much.

[Hard]

00:06:283 (2.3.4) - http://puu.sh/66pI I like this much more, don't worry about the slight jump, this is a Hard and you can have jumps.
00:37:924 (1.2.3.4) - Can you make this smoother? This pattern feel a bit "rough" and doesn't flow very well.

I feel the note placement isn't very smooth, but map is technically fine.

[Insane]

00:09:799 (1.2.3 1.2.3) - Would be nice if you curve this two patterns a bit. Flow better than straight streams.
00:12:260 (6.7) - Similarly here, curve it a bit.
00:26:205 (1,2,3 1,2,3) - Same as 00:09:799
00:30:893 (4,5,6 1,2,3) - ^ New combo (4)?
00:33:236 (6,7,8) - Curve this pattern or try zig zaging it.
00:34:877 (1.2.3 1,2,3) - Same as 00:09:799
00:35:815 (1,2 1,2 1,2,3) - Make this accelerated spacing more gradual, you suddenly increase space by 2x then 1.5x. Doesn't flow well. Also try to not stack (3) with (1). Hard to read.

As some people had mentioned, a bit repetitive since you reused patterns, try to be a bit more creative. This difficulty would be a whole better if you curve your patterns rather than leaving it straight. This song doesn't feel "straight" at all to me.

No star since your map has quite a few stars already. Hard feel a bit jerky for me and Insane feel a bit repetitive. Your map is rankable quality through.

Good luck!
lovhin456
here's my mod

general;
- nothing

easy;
- 00:37:690 >> start kiai here
- 00:40:502 >> just put notes here and at 00:40:971
- 01:17:065 >> remove combo
- you have quite a few stacks...not sure, this is an easy and so using stacks isn't recommended

normal;
- 00:04:643 >> move (2) here and move (3) to 00:04:877

hard;
- 00:16:830 >> add a note
- 00:18:705 >> delete
- 00:21:986 >> add a note

insane;
- 00:03:354 (7,8) >> not well stacked
- 00:02:650 (4,5) >> move (4) here and (5) to 00:02:768
- 00:07:338 (7,8) >> move (7) here and (8) to 00:07:455
- 00:22:338 >> add a note

* star
Raging Bull
So.....I thought I'll try my best to improve modding: These are all suggestions. If you don't want to use them, please explain why instead of just no :(

General:
Perhaps preview time would be a lot better at 01:07:690 instead.
I don't think the first kiai is needed. To me, I don't think that's the epic part of the song, the ending is :3 BUT if you want to keep it, please make kiai start at 00:37:690 instead because right now the kiai starts on red tick. The downbeat is where kiai should start. This is for all diffs

Easy:
00:05:815 (4) - NC here for consistency with your NC pattern.
00:22:690 (3) - NC here.
00:23:627 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:815 (1) - Remove NC
00:54:096 (1) - A bad slider unfortuantely. The slider ends where NC would fit. Perhaps put 1/2 slider then add a note? Add NC like the image.
01:06:752 (2) - Same suggestion. Perhaps remove repeat on slider and add a note?

Normal:
00:23:158 (2) - Perhaps unstack 2? I think flow would be better since you have that same moving feeling after this slider 00:20:815 (4).
00:44:721 (6) - Take out one reverse and add note and NC on note?
00:50:580 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:07:690 (1) - Forgot finish at the slider start?
01:10:502 (3) - Minus one reverse and add note at 01:11:440? NC on note too and remove NC on 01:11:908 (1)
01:21:518 (2) - Slider plays weird to me because there is no vocal on red tick. Perhaps delete slider and add note at 01:21:752?

Hard:
00:03:002 (2) - Minus 1 reverse and add note at 00:03:940 (x) and NC for consistency.
00:07:221 (1) - Remove this NC please.
00:07:690 (3) - Add NC here instead.
00:08:158 (1) - And remove this NC
00:18:471 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
00:18:940 (3) - Add NC here instead.
00:20:815 (1) - Remove this NC
00:22:690 (8) - Add NC here.
00:23:158 (1) - And remove this NC
00:29:252 (1) - Unfortunate slider as it ends where NC should take place. Minus one reverse and add note at 00:30:190 (x) with NC?
00:37:221 (3) - Ahh same slider :/ Perhaps remove one reverse and add note at 00:37:690 (x) and NC?
00:37:924 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:096 (1) - Remove NC as this is the same verse.
00:40:971 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:440 (3) - And NC here instead?
00:45:190 (x) - Add note? I'm surprised you didn't put a note here o.o
00:54:330 (5) - Bad slider :( Remove and add note here and 00:54:565 (x) then NC 00:54:565 (x)
00:55:033 (1) - Remove this NC
00:58:315 (5) - NC here
01:20:346 (5) - Remove one reverse and add a note at 01:20:815 (x). Add NC
01:21:283 (1) - Remove NC

Insane:
00:07:690 (9) - NC this.
00:08:158 (1) - And remove NC on this.
00:10:268 (1) - Remove NC
00:10:971 (1) - Remove NC
00:11:440 (9) - NC here.
00:13:080 (1) - Remove NC
00:13:315 (10) - NC here.
00:16:830 (1) - Remove NC
00:17:065 (3) - NC here
00:20:580 (1) - Remove NC
00:20:815 (2) - NC here.
00:22:221 (1) - Remove NC
00:22:690 (4) - NC here.
00:23:393 (1) - Remove NC. I think it's better to NC at every stanza to keep it the same in all diffs. You are currently NCing every triple instead :(
00:24:330 (1) - Remove NC
00:24:565 (3) - NC here.
00:25:268 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:205 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:440 (3) - NC
00:26:674 (1) - Remove NC
00:27:143 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:080 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:315 (9) - NC
00:29:018 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:955 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:190 (6) - NC

orz too much for me. Your NC pattern in insane is different from hard/normal/easy. I think I'll stop here ._. You can pm me in game if you want some NC help. I don't do NC often but I like to try and improve on it.

Edit: I tried taiko, I suck at it orz. Perhaps you should remove the speed up in taiko and only speed up at the last kiai?
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Raging Bull wrote:

So.....I thought I'll try my best to improve modding: These are all suggestions. If you don't want to use them, please explain why instead of just no :(

General:
Perhaps preview time would be a lot better at 01:07:690 instead.
I don't think the first kiai is needed. To me, I don't think that's the epic part of the song, the ending is :3 BUT if you want to keep it, please make kiai start at 00:37:690 instead because right now the kiai starts on red tick. The downbeat is where kiai should start. This is for all diffs

Easy:
00:05:815 (4) - NC here for consistency with your NC pattern.
00:22:690 (3) - NC here.
00:23:627 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:815 (1) - Remove NC
00:54:096 (1) - A bad slider unfortuantely. The slider ends where NC would fit. Perhaps put 1/2 slider then add a note? Add NC like the image.maybe too hard in easy :| ~
01:06:752 (2) - Same suggestion. Perhaps remove repeat on slider and add a note?

Normal:
00:23:158 (2) - Perhaps unstack 2? I think flow would be better since you have that same moving feeling after this slider 00:20:815 (4).
00:44:721 (6) - Take out one reverse and add note and NC on note? maybe too hard in normal :oops: ~
00:50:580 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:07:690 (1) - Forgot finish at the slider start?
01:10:502 (3) - Minus one reverse and add note at 01:11:440? NC on note too and remove NC on 01:11:908 (1)
01:21:518 (2) - Slider plays weird to me because there is no vocal on red tick. Perhaps delete slider and add note at 01:21:752?

Hard:
00:03:002 (2) - Minus 1 reverse and add note at 00:03:940 (x) and NC for consistency.
00:07:221 (1) - Remove this NC please.
00:07:690 (3) - Add NC here instead.
00:08:158 (1) - And remove this NC
00:18:471 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
00:18:940 (3) - Add NC here instead.
00:20:815 (1) - Remove this NC
00:22:690 (8) - Add NC here.
00:23:158 (1) - And remove this NC
00:29:252 (1) - Unfortunate slider as it ends where NC should take place. Minus one reverse and add note at 00:30:190 (x) with NC?
00:37:221 (3) - Ahh same slider :/ Perhaps remove one reverse and add note at 00:37:690 (x) and NC?
00:37:924 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:096 (1) - Remove NC as this is the same verse.
00:40:971 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:440 (3) - And NC here instead?
00:45:190 (x) - Add note? I'm surprised you didn't put a note here o.o
00:54:330 (5) - Bad slider :( Remove and add note here and 00:54:565 (x) then NC 00:54:565 (x)
00:55:033 (1) - Remove this NC
00:58:315 (5) - NC here
01:20:346 (5) - Remove one reverse and add a note at 01:20:815 (x). Add NC
01:21:283 (1) - Remove NC

Insane:
00:07:690 (9) - NC this.
00:08:158 (1) - And remove NC on this.
00:10:268 (1) - Remove NC
00:10:971 (1) - Remove NC
00:11:440 (9) - NC here.
00:13:080 (1) - Remove NC
00:13:315 (10) - NC here.
00:16:830 (1) - Remove NC
00:17:065 (3) - NC here
00:20:580 (1) - Remove NC
00:20:815 (2) - NC here.
00:22:221 (1) - Remove NC
00:22:690 (4) - NC here.
00:23:393 (1) - Remove NC. I think it's better to NC at every stanza to keep it the same in all diffs. You are currently NCing every triple instead :(
00:24:330 (1) - Remove NC
00:24:565 (3) - NC here.
00:25:268 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:205 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:440 (3) - NC
00:26:674 (1) - Remove NC
00:27:143 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:080 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:315 (9) - NC
00:29:018 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:955 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:190 (6) - NC
:? cool...........

orz too much for me. Your NC pattern in insane is different from hard/normal/easy. I think I'll stop here ._. You can pm me in game if you want some NC help. I don't do NC often but I like to try and improve on it.

Edit: I tried taiko, I suck at it orz. Perhaps you should remove the speed up in taiko and only speed up at the last kiai?
something change like KIAI time or......many many NC OTL..I don't really like one NC number more than 9 so just change something..But i change XD!(slap),very thank you for you help XD!
Raging Bull
Wow you understand orz. It was so confusing with so many NC ._.

Easy:
00:36:752 (3) - Forgot finish at slider end?

Taiko:
Kiai still starts on red tick! Move it to 00:37:690 (153). I would say you don't have to ask the guest mapper because Kiai affects score in taiko. But up to you to change it or not without his permission

Insane:
00:37:455 (1) - Slider end not snapped!

Edit:
Since you have to study.
Hard:
00:45:190 (1) - Add a note here with finish. It seems empty
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Raging Bull wrote:

Wow you understand orz. It was so confusing with so many NC ._.

Easy:
00:36:752 (3) - Forgot finish at slider end?

Taiko:
Kiai still starts on red tick! Move it to 00:37:690 (153). I would say you don't have to ask the guest mapper because Kiai affects score in taiko. But up to you to change it or not without his permission

Insane:
00:37:455 (1) - Slider end not snapped!
I!FORGET!TO!CHANGE!IT!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you for you recheck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
>口<///////////////
Shiirn
General
ok

Easy
00:05:815 (1) - whistle?
Your combos tended to be very short. You can get rid of every other new combo and have a very clear map.

Normal
Nada

Hard
nada

Insane
00:03:705 (9) - Spaced awkwardly, suggest moving it so that the jump is cleaner (more even distance)
00:21:752 (6,1) - You tend to use unneeded 1/4 streams all over and then ignore one of the few actual 1/4 sections? Put a stream here.
the entire thing was disappointingly overmapped, but that's your decision as a mapper.
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Shiirn wrote:

General
ok

Easy
00:05:815 (1) - whistle?
Your combos tended to be very short. You can get rid of every other new combo and have a very clear map.

Normal
Nada

Hard
nada

Insane
00:03:705 (9) - Spaced awkwardly, suggest moving it so that the jump is cleaner (more even distance)
00:21:752 (6,1) - You tend to use unneeded 1/4 streams all over and then ignore one of the few actual 1/4 sections? Put a stream here.
the entire thing was disappointingly overmapped, but that's your decision as a mapper.
my friend have a suggestion for me is easy and normal NC no more than 5 so ╮(╯_╰)╭...........but i change some, thank you for you mod XD!
Megurine Luka
都三个月了怎么还没泡TOT
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Megurine Luka wrote:

都三个月了怎么还没泡TOT
你这个问题简直太好了OTL........
IceBeam
hello~

folder and map setting are fine

[Easy]
00:33:940 (1) - looks a bit untidy,as it's supposed to be symmetrical,fix the shape please - the middle tick should cross the "y" axis line perfectly
00:36:752 (3) - ^
01:23:158 (1) - a bit short for the easiest difficulty,honestly..try to avoid it in your future maps

[Normal]
I had some symmetry issues,but they're really minor,so just fine

[Hard]
00:02:065 (1) - just a suggestion,you don't have to follow it,but I'd remove this repeat and make a slider: (00:02:533 - 00:02:768) instead
just sounds/plays more catchy to me
00:35:580 (4,1,2) - spacing looks a little wrong,could you place (1) somewhere between (4) and (2)? :/ it'd be better

[Insane]
00:14:486 (7,8,1) - in case of previous jump,distance between them looks similar..even though the last note marked with new combo,it's not right,so..at the very least,reduce (7) & (8) jump or clear up the distance between (8) & (1) to show the correct 1/1 spacing,please
00:36:752 (1,2,3) - a bit odd as the previous jumps were (1,2,1,2)..but I'm fine with them,if you don't want to change these jumps in the different way

this is a really good mapset,I didn't find much problems here,so I have intention to bubble it
call me back if you want to change anything
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

IceBeam wrote:

hello~

folder and map setting are fine

[Easy]
00:33:940 (1) - looks a bit untidy,as it's supposed to be symmetrical,fix the shape please - the middle tick should cross the "y" axis line perfectly :) I try to do my best XD
00:36:752 (3) - ^
01:23:158 (1) - a bit short for the easiest difficulty,honestly..try to avoid it in your future maps

[Normal]
I had some symmetry issues,but they're really minor,so just fine

[Hard]
00:02:065 (1) - just a suggestion,you don't have to follow it,but I'd remove this repeat and make a slider: (00:02:533 - 00:02:768) instead
just sounds/plays more catchy to me
00:35:580 (4,1,2) - spacing looks a little wrong,could you place (1) somewhere between (4) and (2)? :/ it'd be better

[Insane]
00:14:486 (7,8,1) - in case of previous jump,distance between them looks similar..even though the last note marked with new combo,it's not right,so..at the very least,reduce (7) & (8) jump or clear up the distance between (8) & (1) to show the correct 1/1 spacing,please
00:36:752 (1,2,3) - a bit odd as the previous jumps were (1,2,1,2)..but I'm fine with them,if you don't want to change these jumps in the different wayXD i find some player and they said this jump is fun XD~

this is a really good mapset,I didn't find much problems here,so I have intention to bubble it
call me back if you want to change anything

FIXIFIXFIX!!
Thank you XD!
IceBeam
alright,as all spacing issues were fixed,it shoud be fine for ranking then

bubbled
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
Thank you very much !!!!!
XD :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
whymeman
Hmm...... loooking good with nothing broken or needs to be fixed. Good job and i'll go ahead with ranking this map then.
cmn_891127
恭喜,幸福的孩子。。。神mapper求rank鬼图
spboxer3
what the!!!
求MAT阿...
S h i o n
尼桑~!!!!!
Kawayi Rika
兔兔 恭喜Rank ~ :)
IceBeam
gz tutuhaha ;)
Megurine Luka

cmn_891127 wrote:

恭喜,幸福的孩子。。。神mapper求rank鬼图
你们都是幸福的孩子

苦比的孩子在这里
Haseo_old
Holy crap, someone actually found a MP3 for this song.
[-Meiton-]
Nice map, grat tutu :)
Nymph

Megurine Luka wrote:

cmn_891127 wrote:

恭喜,幸福的孩子。。。神mapper求rank鬼图
你们都是幸福的孩子

苦比的孩子在这里
在这里在这里
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
娘的又是我最后一个知道orz.........
my map go rank and i'm a last one know it orz...............
whymeman thank you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IceBeam thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!!
PsychoSkill
Ao no Exorcist *-*

graaatz :)
djown
^w^ nice map :D
Haruhi_sama
Last edited by Garven on over 3 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
No.



but ranked....baka Garven
zsr123
哎哟rank了 恭喜 :D
ShiraSanda
Song is good and mapping is excellent. Nice job :)
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