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nanobii - Neverland

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, June 21, 2017 at 8:46:31 PM

Artist: nanobii
Title: Neverland
BPM: 174
Filesize: 4453kb
Play Time: 00:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extra (5.63 stars, 204 notes)
Download: nanobii - Neverland
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Ok. I need some feedback here ;-;
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NM from modreq
ok, so here is some feedback


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00:00:000 (1,2) - and 00:01:034 (1,2) - if you stack objects than I would make sure that if they are in the same section of the music they also have the same timing gap, can get confusing otherwise

00:03:793 (1,2) - blanket is off, you can use the approach circle to make it perfect

00:06:896 (2) - red slideranchor for a sharp corner would look nicer and less forced than this curve

00:12:413 (2) - I know you are mapping a different sound with 00:12:068 (1,2) - but the sounds on this slider feel to important to ignore imo

missing a sound on 00:14:482 that should be mapped imo

00:19:310 (1,2,3,4) - too sudden of a spacing increase if you map them with low spacing otherwise

00:20:344 (1,2,3) - same timing gap but different spacing, would play better and look nicer if you had equal spacing here

00:23:103 (1,2) - this feels misleading baecause you implied a 1/1 gap before with 00:21:724 (1,2) -

00:25:862 (1,2) - ^

00:27:586 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - jumps feel without reasoning, they feel like they are placed like this beacause it flows nicely

00:30:344 (1) - speedup into 1/4 rhythm starts here

00:32:240 (3,4) - sharp angle doesn't play and look nice

00:34:137 (6,1) - not a fan of this spacing decrease without reasoning, Nc is also not really needed

00:35:862 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this spacing is way too big, nerf please.
even in the buildup was the spacing like a ton lower

00:37:931 (1,2,3) - this pattern only appears once in the kiai, and it feels like a huge speed increase without the music getting much intenser

00:41:379 (1) - starting here, it's just jumps for the sake of keeping up the intensity I feel, try mapping actual sliders into this part as right now it's like a 1/2 metronome

00:52:413 (1) - just map the music and don't place this long reverse

00:53:793 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this is some 1/4 rhythm

00:54:999 (4) - delete this note for more emphasis on 00:55:172 (1) -

So, here are some points to improve on, but there are more things so I suggest to get more mods
If you want, then you can call me back after you have finished the maps and gotten a couple more mods so I can do a better check. (look for atleast like 3-5)
Just message me the map through forum pm as I really like the song
Gl with the map :)
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