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Shimoji Shino - God Save The Girls ~TV size~

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, October 24, 2017 at 12:49:56 PM

Artist: Shimoji Shino
Title: God Save The Girls ~TV size~
Source: Stella no Mahou
Tags: stella no mahou god save the girls shimoji shino opening
BPM: 171
Filesize: 3570kb
Play Time: 00:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.77 stars, 36 notes)
  2. Magic (4.62 stars, 311 notes)
Download: Shimoji Shino - God Save The Girls ~TV size~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kami North
M4M

Basic/General
  1. I suggest CS4 instead of CS4.3.
  2. Everything seems unsnapped or into 1/16 snaps.
  3. Try to portion things based on rhythm intensity, I find jumps varying in size even when no change in music
  4. There are a lot of circles compared to sliders.
  5. Very often with new mappers, lacks flow. Objects seem just, placed and not thought out.
Pre-Break
  1. 00:00:156 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unbalanced jumps, Object 2 out of bounds
  2. 00:02:437 (8,1) - Breaks rhythm, slider 1/4 too long
  3. 00:02:963 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unbalanced jumps, Object 2 out of bounds
  4. 00:04:542 (7) - Out of Bounds
  5. 00:05:098 (1) - Unproperly timed, too late
  6. 00:07:905 (3,4) - Breaks flow, unnatural motion
  7. 00:08:431 (2) - Place 1/12 earlier
  8. 00:09:484 (2) - Out of Bounds
  9. 00:10:888 (6) - Breaks flow, can catch player by surprise
  10. 00:12:284 (8,1) - Provides rough timing window for circle. Push spinner tiny bit back.
  11. 00:12:284 (1) - Suggestion -- Extend slider to the measure end
Bookmark 1
  1. 00:29:048 (1,2) - Unexpected/Unreasonable slider placement, put a burst instead
  2. 00:29:578 (1) - Object out of bounds
  3. 00:31:872 (1,2) - Same slider issue, burst here
Bookmark 2
  1. 00:38:401 (2,3) - Out of bounds
  2. 00:39:283 (6,7,8) - ^
  3. 00:40:342 (1,2) - Slider issue
  4. 00:43:166 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:47:401 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Improperly represents song, held note.
Bookmark 3
  1. 00:58:166 (1,2,3,4) - The famous, the one, the only, slider issue
  2. 00:59:931 (3) - Out of bounds
  3. 01:00:107 (4,1) - Easily mistakable for 1/4 immediately, remove overlap with stream
Bookmark 5 because 4's pretty gud
  1. 01:05:048 (7) - I lied here's an error in bm4, out of bounds
  2. 01:09:107 (2) - out of bounds
  3. 01:13:519 (1,4) - ^
  4. 01:16:342 (7) - ^
  5. 01:18:945 (2,3,4) - Doesn't fit well, also object 3 out of bounds xd
  6. 01:21:460 (5) - ^
  7. 01:25:695 (1,1) - Same spinner issue, try pushing spinner back a bit, and lengthing it a very tiny bit.
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