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Topic Starter
Kanon

UnderminE wrote:

I know it's not done yet but I should say something:

Change the tittle:
Artist: 07th Expansion, not 07-expansion.
Put "Selee" "When They Cry" "nymph_" or something like that to the tags.
Source is "Umineko no Naku Koro Ni" nice! saves my strength to do it by my own :P
Normal
00:19:613 (3) - sounds not that good. Fix this like here 00:20:758 (2) - I see your point
00:23:163 (3) - Streamie things in normal? lol Turn this to a slider or something more playable for normal players see what i wrote below
00:46:865 (2) - I've seen many things something like this in your diff. This diff should be "Hard" then, not normal. Yes, i decide to change it to hard after yesterday's mapping :P So it may still have lots changed on laylout

Kiai time is different from other diff. End your kiai at here 00:29:575 hmm when i done this diff, i'll check greenline, kial carefully,but anyway
no need to have same kiai with guest diff XD


anyways, star~ good luck
;)

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Nice map~!
star~! 8-)

Thank you~ :)
fanzhen0019
以后再也不做Easy了 ;_;


EDIT:
The file is too big, maximum allowed size is 512 KB.

wocao
http://puu.sh/4kCR
Topic Starter
Kanon

fanzhen0019 wrote:

以后再也不做Easy了 ;_;


EDIT:
The file is too big, maximum allowed size is 512 KB.

wocao
http://puu.sh/4kCR
OMG, so nice. you win
lkp
Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.

lol

Download: 07th Expansion - Hane (Kanon) [369].osu
LKs
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Nymph
:P 这次真是酱油了
Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon.

Download: 07th Expansion - Hane (Kanon) [Nymph].osu
Sandpig
改了一下finish

http://puu.sh/4rYu

音效上我建议参考一下selee的diff,节奏方面也是。像00:19:728 (4,5,6,7) - 这种地方明明跟曲子就很好结果弄出一个重音三连非常难听。还有这个00:23:163 (5,6,7,8) - 二连的位置是错的。还有总体音量减小。其实selee的diff感觉音量也有点大了。

00:42:857 开始finish给我感觉完全是乱加,同样参考selee的DIFF

总而言之这张还是没有成型的map

最后的建议是如果是刚开始作图,节奏尽量从简,不要太花哨。
Topic Starter
Kanon

Sandpig wrote:

改了一下finish

http://puu.sh/4rYu

音效上我建议参考一下selee的diff,节奏方面也是。像00:19:728 (4,5,6,7) - 这种地方明明跟曲子就很好结果弄出一个重音三连非常难听。还有这个00:23:163 (5,6,7,8) - 二连的位置是错的。还有总体音量减小。其实selee的diff感觉音量也有点大了。

00:42:857 开始finish给我感觉完全是乱加,同样参考selee的DIFF

总而言之这张还是没有成型的map

最后的建议是如果是刚开始作图,节奏尽量从简,不要太花哨。
:cry: 没那么悲剧吧 总之现在音效全部重填了一遍,节奏我想没问题,等等其他人的MOD吧
Finish你这个实在太小声了,我还是先用原来的好了
eldnl
[General]

- Change the audio lead-in to 1000? Edit the .osu file with notepad.
- Use the same kiai time in all difficulties? Follow the selee's difficulty, it's better.

[fanzhen]

- That whistle pattern sounds weird for me, you can lower the volume a bit?
- There are parts where almost inaudible hitsounds, just because the finish sounds bad, please up a little the volume.
00:26:369 (1) Move a bit the 3rd red point, the change is very little and the slider looks bad. http://puu.sh/4sVt
00:44:689 (1) Remove new combo here to be consistent with the next combo.
00:55:682 (1) Remove new combo here to be consistent with the previous combo.
01:19:041 (1) Remove new combo, make no sense for me.
Good job!

[Nymph]

00:22:705 - This part would be much better if you don't stack so many notes. You could add a couple of slider, so the combo would be smaller.
00:30:491 (2,3,4) Change these three notes for a slider. Reduce the combo and looks better.
00:33:468 (9) New combo here and remove in the next note.
00:40:796 (9) ^ Same here, looks better I think, consistent combos.
00:47:438 (3,4,5) These three slider are touching the HP Bar, you should lower them a bit. Or maybe it's better if you change the pattern for something more simple.
00:57:285 (7) New combo here and remove in the next note.

[Hard]

AR6. The current AR don't fit so much at the difficulty and bpm.
00:03:619 (6,7) Little spacing error here, move (7).
00:13:466 (4,5) These two sliders looks bad, move (5) to the left.
00:14:382 (1) That's slider can be confusing because is the same size as a 1/2 slider. I suggest to use 0,75x
00:24:995 (4,5,6,7) That's rhythm not fit with a hard difficulty, also is an imaginary rhythm because don't follow the music and make the map harder, I suggest to change this pattern. Same for the followings patterns.
00:29:117 (1) Change the slider velocity multiplier to 0,75x. You know it.
01:01:178 (8) New combo.
01:01:636 - A stream like this in a hard difficulty is not good. I suggest to remove it.
01:10:109 - This is specially hard, when the "experienced" players make a stream, they usually continue pressing after finishing the stream, the note under the stream can cause miss the combo. You should move this note.
01:15:835 (1) Very big jump for a hard I think. Reduce a little the distance.
01:21:331 (1) Confusing, considering the previous pattern this slider should have a repeat.
01:22:018 (4,5) More confusing, considering the pattern "two 1/4 notes" these two notes shouldn't be stacked, made to press before.
01:23:850 - Two stacked streams? be more creative.
01:25:911 (6,1) This slider is the same size as above, can be confusing, although less so, because after this slider does not come any notes. Change it if you want.
01:26:912 - Please use sliders for this part, the change of the offset and bpm take me many 100s. Also replace the spin for a slider? Like in the other difficulties?

[Selee]

01:08:506 - Please change this pattern, I miss here in the first try.
01:31:537 (1) This slider is hidden by the hit-burst. Please move it. Something like this maybe: http://puu.sh/4t2o
Really good job, fun difficulty.

Good map :) Imaginary star for you ~
Topic Starter
Kanon
Thank you very much. I'll reply it tomorrow. ;)
Why too short in my own map. :| orz
wcx19911123
你们一个两个神mapper都应该自重

[General]
没问题

[防震大挂B]
00:00:642 (1,3) - 包围好点嘛,3的末尾都碰到1了
00:19:041 (1) - http://puu.sh/4t5x
00:30:033 (1,2) - 碰到了,太丑了
00:41:025 (1,1,2,1) - ^
01:07:590 (3,1) - 这个包围得实在太丑

[妮姆芙神触]
很偷懒的音效啊喂,这让我学个啥。。
00:04:077 (6) - 这种地方你一般都是加绿线降音的吧
好单调的排列

[3K神挂B]
00:03:390 (5,6,7) - 这里的节奏我强烈建议这样 http://puu.sh/4t6a 更合曲
00:23:506 - 加个note
00:24:995 (4,5,6,7) - 这种歌我觉得下这种节奏非常违和
00:26:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:05:529 (1,2,3) - ^
01:06:560 - 加note
01:06:674 - ^ 这种地方留白显得非常违和

[犀利哥]
00:15:107 - vol=100%?太吵了吧
01:08:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 太confusing,顺带一说,6复制1然后左右翻转不好看么

你们一个两个神mapper都应该自重
Selee
SPOILER

eldnl wrote:

[General]

[Selee]

01:08:506 - Please change this pattern, I miss here in the first try. You loser :twisted:.lol, jk~ fixed
01:31:537 (1) This slider is hidden by the hit-burst. Please move it. Something like this maybe: http://puu.sh/4t2o hmm..good point...fixed
Really good job, fun difficulty. Thanks~ xD

wcx19911123 wrote:

[犀利哥]
00:15:107 - vol=100%?太吵了吧 按后面那段修了下
01:08:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 太confusing,顺带一说,6复制1然后左右翻转不好看么当时考虑流畅性...既然上面那位也说难读那就改下..

外加改了点音效...

恩..还有...lead-in集体改成1500ms吧...1ms似乎有点少

kiai你决定 我的Kiai你随便改

Download: 07th Expansion - Hane (Kanon) [Selee's Insane].osu
fanzhen0019

eldnl wrote:

[fanzhen]

- That whistle pattern sounds weird for me, you can lower the volume a bit? k
- There are parts where almost inaudible hitsounds, just because the finish sounds bad, please up a little the volume. ya okay
00:26:369 (1) Move a bit the 3rd red point, the change is very little and the slider looks bad. http://puu.sh/4sVt yes
00:44:689 (1) Remove new combo here to be consistent with the next combo. k
00:55:682 (1) Remove new combo here to be consistent with the previous combo. x_x k
01:19:041 (1) Remove new combo, make no sense for me. oops fixed...
Good job! Thanks :3
thx for modding :3

wcx19911123 wrote:

[防震大挂B] <---敢自重点吗
00:00:642 (1,3) - 包围好点嘛,3的末尾都碰到1了 好吧fixed
00:19:041 (1) - http://puu.sh/4t5x k
00:30:033 (1,2) - 碰到了,太丑了 这还真是那啥...改了
00:41:025 (1,1,2,1) - ^ ............fixed
01:07:590 (3,1) - 这个包围得实在太丑 嘛..改了

wcx19911123 wrote:

你们一个两个神mapper都应该自重
Download: 07th Expansion - Hane (Kanon) [fanzhen's Easy].osu
Nymph

eldnl wrote:

[Nymph]

00:22:705 - This part would be much better if you don't stack so many notes. You could add a couple of slider, so the combo would be smaller. I think it is OK.
00:30:491 (2,3,4) Change these three notes for a slider. Reduce the combo and looks better...seems no difference.
00:33:468 (9) New combo here and remove in the next note... the next note is on white line,so I nc there on purpose.
00:40:796 (9) ^ Same here, looks better I think, consistent combos.X
00:47:438 (3,4,5) These three slider are touching the HP Bar, you should lower them a bit. Or maybe it's better if you change the pattern for something more simple. Yeah then move down a little.
00:57:285 (7) New combo here and remove in the next note. X
THANKS :P

wcx19911123 wrote:

[妮姆芙渣MAPPER]
很偷懒的音效啊喂,这让我学个啥。。 用的最简单的方法
00:04:077 (6) - 这种地方你一般都是加绿线降音的吧 你可以试试加绿线降音的效果如何 如果效果明显 我会下绿线的.
好单调的排列 反正是NORMAL 这才是酱油
EDIT:LEAD IN 3K决定吧 要改集体改. KIAI的话 我不想加KIAI呢 就这样好了

Download: 07th Expansion - Hane (Kanon) [Nymph's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
Kanon
都没看到你们改好了。。我把kiai都去了
另外SELEE TICK RATE0.5 貌似UNRANKABLE 现在我先帮你改成1了
yeahyeahyeahhh
Insane:
Good :|

Hard:
- 01:24:766 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think this is good, i wouldnt stack this under the previous stream.. looks messy and ugly and cluttered uguuu

Normal:
Good x.X

Easy:
Wow, the ticks sounds SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good, such a good job on them man!
GOOD x.x
Breeze
Oh god, these custom sound are...just awesome

Nothing major found, just some query
  1. 00:14:847 - Is this red line really needed?
[Hard]
  1. 00:46:522 (1), 00:50:186 (1), 00:53:850 (1), 00:55:682 (1,2,3,4) - These whistle sounds a bit louder for me, maybe lower volume a bit?
  2. 01:32:966 spinner - 5% soft hitsound is fine enough, custom clap sounds a bit odd
[Selee's Insane]
  1. 00:29:575 (6) - Remove finish seems better
  2. 00:45:720 (10) - This clap wierd, it should be a clap at 00:45:835, left this empty is better than add a odd clap IMO
  3. 00:49:499 (9) - Same^
  4. 00:56:827 (8) - Use custom soft clap2 as previous notes and same volume better, finish didn't fit IMO
  5. 01:08:277 (6) - Use only whistle better IMO
Others are all fine
Great map
2 pink star for you
Topic Starter
Kanon
谢谢Breeze :)
努力修改中, 为了粉星也要努力啊 :D
Natteke
add dai to tags (he's the composer)
NoHitter
General
The title should be HANE - all capitals
Add Feathers to the tags too. It's the translation of HANE I believe.
No kiai?

fanzhen's Easy
Those sliders with the softwhistle placed on the tick get very surprising. I wouldn't recommend this many tick hitsounds. Perhaps clapping to a constant beat is fine, but not overused like in the difficulty. I highly suggest you remove them or at least lessen them.
00:12:550 (2) - Do not place this under the slider track.
00:43:773 (2) - You should make this slider not end under the slider track of another. The current slider's track is being obscured by the previous slider's.

Nymph's Normal
IMO you should tone down the stacks and instead, spread them out.
00:03:848 (x) - This part seems empty. Add a note?
00:06:138 (4) - IMO you should split these into multiple sliders instead. Having sliders with multiple repeats tend to play oddly - one repeat is the ideal number of repeats.
00:12:550 (2) - Same as above.
00:13:466 (3,4) - Given the rhythm you set at 00:06:138 (4), it's very confusing to have the slider just repeat two times then adding a note.
00:20:873 (4) - Same as 00:06:138 (4)
00:33:239 (x) - This part feels empty too.
01:03:010 (4) - Same as 00:06:138 (4)
01:10:338 (4) - Same as above.
01:24:995 (2) - Same as above.

Hard
00:10:718 (1) - Following the music, this should be Remove New Combo'd.
00:11:634 (4) - Related to above, New Combo.
00:12:550 (1,2,1,2) - I don't see the point of spamming two new combos here. Remove the new combos of each of them.
00:14:382 (1) - Remove new combo? It's fine as is, but it's better if you follow the music. The change in spacing isn't that bad to warrant a new combo IMO.
00:22:705 (1) - New combo.
00:23:392 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:758 (5,1) - IMO space these properly. It's readable, but IMO would be better if you did space them.
00:49:728 (3) - Kind of sudden. I didn't expect a spacing shift.

Selee's Insane
Best difficulty in mapset IMO.
00:55:224 (4) - The sliderball of the previous slider tends to hide the slider track of this slider. It's even less seen if Snaking Sliders is disabled. Maybe reposition it?
Topic Starter
Kanon

NoHItter wrote:

General
The title should be HANE - all capitals
Add Feathers to the tags too. It's the translation of HANE I believe. all fixed
No kiai? hmm, after discuss we decide not to use kial cus the music dont fit it well and bg pic and combo colour plus kiai makes people blind lol
Hard
00:10:718 (1) - Following the music, this should be Remove New Combo'd. k
00:11:634 (4) - Related to above, New Combo. k
00:12:550 (1,2,1,2) - I don't see the point of spamming two new combos here. Remove the new combos of each of them. k
00:14:382 (1) - Remove new combo? It's fine as is, but it's better if you follow the music. The change in spacing isn't that bad to warrant a new combo IMO. SV slow down here , so i think its OK
00:22:705 (1) - New combo. k
00:23:392 (1) - Remove new combo. k
00:35:758 (5,1) - IMO space these properly. It's readable, but IMO would be better if you did space them. k00:49:728 (3) - Kind of sudden. I didn't expect a spacing shift. change to slider
Thank you :)
tutuhaha
0 0我不能确定怎么怎么样哦【咦】
总之建议所有的难度都点一下resnap all notes比较好0 0

Easy
。。。唔其实问题也没多少,但是也是。。有些点点遮的地方排列最好改一下
像是00:15:377 这个1呢它会在消失之前挡住3一点点,这样子玩起来比较不好看
Normal
没什么问题啦大概
但是就我个人来说我比较不喜欢00:42:628 - 00:57:514的这种。。超级弱音。。。
也不怎么喜欢就是那种notes堆在一起的摆放。。。
个人啦个人
Hard
00:15:491 - 不建议加这个circle,去掉
00:17:323 - 这里我建议把这个6去掉然后把7摆在X208Y344也就是开distance snap后把这个放在两个滑条中间
00:20:873 - 这种堆放小心被mat说ugly TAT【血泪史】
00:26:369 - 你确定这段跟着节拍吧?。。对吧
00:35:987 - 这个1不要和4叠,小心真的被找茬TAT【血泪史X2】
01:27:955 - 没重叠好
Insane
。。。这里的distance snap。。。它怎么了。。。。
Topic Starter
Kanon

tutuhaha wrote:

0 0我不能确定怎么怎么样哦【咦】
总之建议所有的难度都点一下resnap all notes比较好0 0 没问题吧,用AIMOD看了一下没error
Hard
00:15:491 - 不建议加这个circle,去掉 这边开始音乐变强了,这里不开始用3连的话 后面用就太突然了

00:17:323 - 这里我建议把这个6去掉然后把7摆在X208Y344也就是开distance snap后把这个放在两个滑条中间 没明白你什么意思,不过这里应该没问题
00:20:873 - 这种堆放小心被mat说ugly TAT【血泪史】哪里丑了。。
00:26:369 - 你确定这段跟着节拍吧?。。对吧 orz
00:35:987 - 这个1不要和4叠,小心真的被找茬TAT【血泪史X2】这里没有叠啊
01:27:955 - 没重叠好 fixed
嘛。。谢了 :o
Charles445
General
normal-hitnormal, normal-sliderslide, and normal-sliderslide2 .wav are all empty files! You should use the 'Silence' sound from the custom hitsound library. viewtopic.php?p=164927
If you don't it will make strange noises on some computers.
Also, remove the useless .osb before you fullsubmit. Not necessary but you might as well.

fanzhen's Easy
Nice Easy. The use of clapticks was very interesting.

Nymph's Normal
Seems a bit rectangular but nothing is really wrong with it.

Hard
00:11:176 (8) - Move this to the left 3 times for better spacing.
01:27:955 (1) - Remove new combo

Selee's Insane
00:25:224 - This stream was rather unexpected. It would fit the music more if it was like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137993
01:11:254 (6) - Move this down once, this aligns the endpoint with the 3
Very nice.


This mapset is very, very solid. Good work you four. Now go get a MAT
Topic Starter
Kanon

Charles445 wrote:

General
normal-hitnormal, normal-sliderslide, and normal-sliderslide2 .wav are all empty files! You should use the 'Silence' sound from the custom hitsound library. viewtopic.php?p=164927 nice . fixed
If you don't it will make strange noises on some computers.
Also, remove the useless .osb before you fullsubmit. Not necessary but you might as well. fixed

Hard
00:11:176 (8) - Move this to the left 3 times for better spacing. i made it a bit further by purpose XD. the music have become stonger here
01:27:955 (1) - Remove new combo good point fixed

This mapset is very, very solid. Good work you four. Now go get a MAT Thank you :D
JauiPlaY
hihi~ :)
一些建議:

[General]
tags里面為什麼要加When They Cry?我記得這個指的是寒蟬吧...

[fanzhen's Easy]
這個難度沒有spinner,這樣會導致一堆100%SS擠在排行榜上...為了避免戳泡還是加一個比較好
00:26:598 (T) - 這條綠線有用?
01:13:544 (2,3) - 會不會好一點?

[Nymph's Normal]
這個難度沒有spinner,這樣會導致一堆100%SS擠在排行榜上...為了避免戳泡還是加一個比較好
00:24:308 (6) - nc.
00:31:865 (6) - ^
00:39:193 (5) - ^
00:47:438 (3,4,5) - 太靠上面了,往下移一點...另外(5)加個nc.
說實話這個難度缺乏個性...我期望看到泥姆芙神觸更多的個性

[Hard]
01:24:079 (5) - 應該把01:24:308 (7)的finish扔到這個note上面
01:30:109 (1) - remove nc.
01:31:251 (1) - 結尾還是跟另外幾個難度統一一下?

[Selee's Insane]
00:46:064 (12) - 頭加clap.
00:49:728 (11) - ^

不錯的圖~
Topic Starter
Kanon

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~ :)
一些建議:

[General]
tags里面為什麼要加When They Cry?我記得這個指的是寒蟬吧... 请看HARD BG 左上角小字 :P

[Hard]
01:24:079 (5) - 應該把01:24:308 (7)的finish扔到這個note上面
01:30:109 (1) - remove nc.
01:31:251 (1) - 結尾還是跟另外幾個難度統一一下? 不必了吧?
谢谢~
Breeze
Recheck here, no kds since I've already got 1

[fanzhen's Easy]
  1. 01:08:506 (1) - The slider shape is...lol, the red node make this slider looked a bit werid, why not use white node
  2. 01:22:934 - Silence this slidertick, or use default sound
[Hardl]
  1. 01:24:880 (2,3) - Why not just put them a line?
Topic Starter
Kanon

Breeze wrote:

Recheck here, no kds since I've already got 1

[Hardl]
  1. 01:24:880 (2,3) - Why not just put them a line? ok
still wating for they three to fix their mods orz.
非常感谢清风的recheck and star :)
fanzhen0019
SPOILER

NoHItter wrote:

fanzhen's Easy
Those sliders with the softwhistle placed on the tick get very surprising. I wouldn't recommend this many tick hitsounds. Perhaps clapping to a constant beat is fine, but not overused like in the difficulty. I highly suggest you remove them or at least lessen them. I'll keep'em..I really don't know how to lessen them..Sorry
00:12:550 (2) - Do not place this under the slider track. IMO,It's easy to read for a newbie player
00:43:773 (2) - You should make this slider not end under the slider track of another. The current slider's track is being obscured by the previous slider's. Fixed

SPOILER

tutuhaha wrote:

Easy
。。。唔其实问题也没多少,但是也是。。有些点点遮的地方排列最好改一下
像是00:15:377 这个1呢它会在消失之前挡住3一点点,这样子玩起来比较不好看 还好吧 0.0

@Charles445 Thank you! :)

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JauiPlaY wrote:

[fanzhen's Easy]
這個難度沒有spinner,這樣會導致一堆100%SS擠在排行榜上...為了避免戳泡還是加一個比較好 Gomo is watching you
00:26:598 (T) - 這條綠線有用? 已删
01:13:544 (2,3) - ATTACH[sgsgef.PNG]會不會好一點? ok

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Breeze wrote:

[fanzhen's Easy]
  1. 01:08:506 (1) - The slider shape is...lol, the red node make this slider looked a bit werid, why not use white node Though werid..I'm lazy.
  2. 01:22:934 - Silence this slidertick, or use default sound Choose default sound

Sorry for big delay..
Thanks to all modders above. :3

Download: 07th Expansion - HANE (Kanon) [fanzhen's Easy].osu
Nymph
fixed spacing and nc, changed some patterns.
Sorry that I am too tired that don't want to answer every post.. :?

Download: 07th Expansion - HANE (Kanon) [Nymph's Normal].osu
Selee
breeze

Breeze wrote:

Oh god, these custom sound are...just awesome

[Selee's Insane]
  1. 00:29:575 (6) - Remove finish seems better 小结喜欢这样用...既然不舒服的话改了下音效 效果应该好点
  2. 00:45:720 (10) - This clap wierd, it should be a clap at 00:45:835, left this empty is better than add a odd clap IMO ...还是改了
  3. 00:49:499 (9) - Same^
  4. 00:56:827 (8) - Use custom soft clap2 as previous notes and same volume better, finish didn't fit IMO 我口味比较重 8-)
  5. 01:08:277 (6) - Use only whistle better IMO 算了 ._.
Charles445

Charles445 wrote:

General

Selee's Insane
00:25:224 - This stream was rather unexpected. It would fit the music more if it was like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137993 I got what you mean..but personally I'd like to keep this..
01:11:254 (6) - Move this down once, this aligns the endpoint with the 3 @_@...what do you mean...

NoHItter

NoHItter wrote:

Selee's Insane
Best difficulty in mapset IMO. Thanks xD
00:55:224 (4) - The sliderball of the previous slider tends to hide the slider track of this slider. It's even less seen if Snaking Sliders is disabled. Maybe reposition it?err...changed for a little

Download: 07th Expansion - Hane (Kanon) [Selee's Insane].osu
eldnl
Very nice ~
I play the map and found a few things that bother me.

Why not add a spin in the easier and harder difficulty? to the difference in scores.
The Approach Rate between Easy and Normal do not feel very different, I suggest to reduce the AP in Easy.

[Hard]

Change the stack leniency to 6, because I can't see the stack here and some other places.
00:10:718 (6,7,8) Inconsistent spacing, use 1,0x distance spacing, that was very weird while playing.
01:26:912 - Please change the position of these sliders, the spacing between (6,1) surprised me. Also you can add a new combo in (2)? That's just to be consistent, but I know that you do it for the red lines, your decision :P

[Selee]

01:31:537 - The position of this slider kills the difficulty imo ~

Not imaginary star ~
Topic Starter
Kanon

eldnl wrote:

Very nice ~
I play the map and found a few things that bother me.

Why not add a spin in the easier and harder difficulty? to the difference in scores. Well, we discuss about it. they think it's OK.
The Approach Rate between Easy and Normal do not feel very different, I suggest to reduce the AP in Easy. since the bpm is low. hmm tried -1 AR but i think AR 4 is better.

[Hard]

Change the stack leniency to 6, because I can't see the stack here and some other places. i dont know if only hard diff's stack leniency different from other diff can be accepted. if can, i'll change it.
00:10:718 (6,7,8) Inconsistent spacing, use 1,0x distance spacing, that was very weird while playing. i make it a bit further by purpose XD as it is stress here.
01:26:912 - Please change the position of these sliders, the spacing between (6,1) surprised me. Also you can add a new combo in (2)? That's just to be consistent, but I know that you do it for the red lines, your decision :P i make confusing spacing here is try to draw player's attention to listen to the music bpm change. and new combo dont change cus the bpm dont change :p
Not imaginary star ~
Thank you for your star~ And I'm so happy you can mod this map again :)
Breeze

Kanon wrote:

i dont know if only hard diff's stack leniency different from other diff can be accepted. if can, i'll change it.
It is allowed if you want to use different SL to make notes more easier to tell, if you want to change it, just do it. Or I'm gonna bubble this map, it's fine enough. Let me know when you've made the decision.

EDIT : changed SL of hard to 0.6
Bubbled~ good use of custom hitsound
Topic Starter
Kanon

Breeze wrote:

It is allowed if you want to use different SL to make notes more easier to tell, if you want to change it, just do it. Or I'm gonna bubble this map, it's fine enough. Let me know when you've made the decision.

EDIT : changed SL of hard to 0.6
Bubbled~ good use of custom hitsound

Thank you :)
Nymph
INGAME MOD WITH KANON:

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13:28 <Kanon> : 我去找微风
13:28 <Kanon> : 要自戳了
13:28 <Nymph_> : REMAP了?
13:28 <Kanon> : 。remap不至于。。
13:29 <Kanon> : 修改一点hitsound而已
13:29 <Nymph_> : soga
13:30 <Kanon> : 你还有我那图么?
13:30 <Nymph_> : HANE?
13:31 <Kanon> : 你要不帮我看下修改后的hitsound效果如何?
13:31 <Kanon> : 嗯
13:31 *Kanon is editing (07th Expansion - HANE)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34909]
13:31 <Nymph_> : UPDATE了?
13:31 <Kanon> : 没
13:31 <Kanon> : 我QQ先传给你
13:31 <Nymph_> : 嗯
13:33 <Nymph_> : 我也不记得你以前什么样啊。。
13:33 <Kanon> : 你看完在UPDATE一下就知道了 XD
13:33 <Nymph_> : 。。。来不及了
13:33 <Nymph_> : 我已经盖了。。
13:34 <Kanon> : 主要就是前面
13:35 <Kanon> : 第二段HITSOUND用 回音铃了
13:35 <Nymph_> : 哦
13:35 <Kanon> : 然后最后finish减少了
13:36 <Nymph_> : 00:03:848 (3) -
13:36 <Nymph_> : 尾CLAP铃之前有么?
13:37 <Kanon> : 我看看
13:38 <Kanon> : 这个和finish一起的 感觉效果会好一点
13:38 <Nymph_> : 嗯 不过红线总感觉有点赶
13:38 <Kanon> : 你觉得这里怎么放
13:38 <Nymph_> : 和FINISH一起下在下一个长白线我倒觉得更好
13:39 <Kanon> : 嗯 好吧
13:40 <Nymph_> : 00:35:529 (4,5,1,2) -
13:40 <Kanon> : 怎么了?
13:40 <Nymph_> : 全空着不太好吧 你前面有个一样的5单点 下了3个W
13:41 <Nymph_> : 00:20:873 (1,2,3,4,5) -
13:41 <Nymph_> : 这里蛮充实 后面有点虚
13:42 <Kanon> : 那在5上方一个W怎么样
13:42 <Nymph_> : 那2也来一个吧
13:42 <Kanon> : 好
13:43 <Nymph_> : 哈 有点想插草
13:43 <Kanon> : 这歌听烦了
13:43 <Kanon> : 所以没梗了
13:44 <Kanon> : 我有生之年第一次想做图就做的这个
13:44 <Nymph_> : 00:07:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
13:44 <Nymph_> : 4个回音铃
13:44 <Nymph_> : 第二个和第四个插草降低音量8
13:45 <Kanon> : 降多少?
13:45 <Nymph_> : 10左右 就行
13:45 <Nymph_> : 8上有个绿线 弄到后面长白线去
13:45 <Nymph_> : 那个是音量50
13:46 <Nymph_> : 前面我觉得40 32 40 32很好 回音效果加强 对比反复
13:46 <Kanon> : 整数好了 10吧
13:46 <Nymph_> : 嗯
13:47 <Nymph_> : 哎 不对
13:47 <Nymph_> : 只降第二个吧 第四个40就行 50有点高 降到30就低了
13:47 <Nymph_> : 40 30 40 40 50
13:47 <Nymph_> : 这样我觉得很NICE
13:48 <Kanon> : 看来我需要一个新耳机了
13:48 <Nymph_> : 。。。
13:48 <Kanon> : 电脑的音量好烂
13:48 <Kanon> : 音响
13:48 <Nymph_> : 我这耳塞听的就挺爽的
13:49 <Nymph_> : 就改变了10音量 差距就挺大
13:49 <Nymph_> : 01:08:277 (4) -
13:49 <Nymph_> : whistle?
13:50 <Kanon> : 好
13:50 <Nymph_> : 01:21:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这咋没动静=A=
13:51 <Kanon> : 怎么没动静?
13:52 <Nymph_> : 01:22:018 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
13:52 <Nymph_> : 01:23:850 (3,4,5,6,7) -
13:52 <Nymph_> : whistle感觉少了
13:52 <Kanon> : 你觉得怎么加好?
13:52 <Nymph_> : 我看看
13:53 <Nymph_> : 1尾巴
13:53 <Nymph_> : 2
13:54 <Nymph_> : 7
13:54 <Nymph_> : 紫色
13:54 <Nymph_> : 5 7
13:54 <Kanon> : 5 7 W?
13:55 <Nymph_> : 对
13:55 <Kanon> : 7听起来不好
13:55 <Nymph_> : 那就不7
13:55 <Nymph_> : 你喜欢空着也可以
13:55 <Nymph_> : 5挺必要的
13:55 <Kanon> : 好 那就OK了么?
13:55 <Nymph_> : 嗯 没了
13:55 <Nymph_> : 结尾那点
13:55 <Nymph_> : 4个红线将音量
13:55 <Nymph_> : 降
13:55 <Nymph_> : 起点80有点高
13:56 <Kanon> : 60?
13:56 <Nymph_> : 嗯 同感
13:56 <Kanon> : OK 你发个帖子去领个kudo吧
13:56 <Nymph_> : 。。。
Breeze
[Hard]
  1. 00:46:522 (1), 00:50:186 (3), 00:53:850 (1) - These 3 whistle sounds loud to me, I think use 30%-35% to 00:46:522 (1), 35%-40% to 00:50:186 (3) and 45%-50% to 00:53:850 (1) sounds better
let me know when you have reply

EDIT : Rebubbled
Sakura
Nice and soft melody here, we should have stuff like this ranked too you know sooo, enjoy!
Nymph
cool~
Kawayi Rika
恭喜 KANON 大师~~
神触~膜拜~ :)
excellions
yay! :) nice map and soothing song
Topic Starter
Kanon
Thanks everyone~ :)
btw Nymph你这个神触,马上就把easy的#1拿了 太禽兽了!
JoJo
Grats !! :)
Darksonic
07 th Expansion ♥♥♥

Gratz :D!
[DBF]
awesome insane, yes.
UnderminE
Yay congrats~
Gorlum

Uuu~ Beatrice did... Uuu~
Lustrick
nice map, more umineko please XD
Topic Starter
Kanon
Thank you guys >.<
IkkiMinami
1St
:D
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