Quick mod:
00:32:577 (1,2,3) - that looks bland to me, maybe change into two sliders of different velocities
00:32:577 (1,2,3) - those jumps are way too difficult, especially since they are very early in the song
00:50:115 (1,2,3) - I don't like the flow here
00:53:499 (1,2) - change the direction of the circular slider, it disrupts the flow
00:55:961 (2) - I'd move that one slightly to the left to improve the flow
00:59:961 (1) - maybe emphasize like in 02:31:038 (1)
01:12:576 (2,3) - The spacing is a little too short, also the 1/4 slider distorts the flow sligthly.
01:29:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - This part is really hard, mostly because it's difficult to read due the clutter with the sliders
01:31:858 (4,1) - I know you want to emphasize this beat, but the spacing is just too damn high.
02:10:115 (1,2,3,4) - The song is relatively quiet, I would space those sliders close together.
02:19:653 (4,5,1,2,1,2) - No.
02:21:089 (6,1) - Spacing too large.
02:21:499 (2,3) - compare to 02:19:653 (4,5)
02:35:345 (1,2,3,1) - likewise, quite bland. Change it if you come up with something more creative.
03:07:961 (5) - I think it would look better if the whole slider would only have curved segments. And I don't like the fact that it goes through itself near the end. At least make it more visible, e.g. by creating a hole.
03:14:320 (2,3) - You're missing the beats on the white ticks.
03:21:807 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Nice attempt at emphasizing the song through spacing.
03:31:961 (1,1,1) - Confusing to read.
03:32:371 (1,1) - A little too large of a spacing imo (can be justified though).
03:32:576 (1,1) - ^
03:34:217 (1,1) - Avoid needing to reverse your cursor by 180deg.
03:35:653 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The middle circle is hard to read.
03:36:268 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing spacing.
03:40:166 (3,1) - Why that large space? Make it shorter or remove altogether to make the stream consistent. But the best solution would probably be to make similar spaces between the notes within the whole stream, i.e. make a segmented stream with triplets.
03:41:499 (1,1,1) - A little hard to read.
03:51:653 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ugly, I'd like a curved one more. And I can't see the justification for the increasing spacing.
03:59:653 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Seems hard to hit, although I did hit these every time. You should probably reverse the sides of the singlets to improve the flow.
04:05:499 (2,3,1,2,1,1) - No.
04:14:217 (5,6,1) - It's hard to combo those, at least move the 6th note closer to the slider.
A map like this, with lots of sliders and low-bpm streams needs flawless flow. You need to improve it. You also need to work on the aesthetiques. The map looks quite dull with those obvious symmetries. Try and experiment with triangular symmetries, for instance.
