really really nice and tidy map... maybe i'm gonna marked this owo
Thank you again raveilleRaveille wrote:
guilty crown more like guilty frown xd
|1|2|3|4|thing00:06:644 - so this portion here with the triple single single patterns, think it should stay as double single single cause a triple seems a bit too heavy for a piano + vocal part. Would consider this part, I think triple fits the piano chord well so I used it
01:32:298 (92298|2,92298|3,92459|1,92459|0,92459|2,92619|3,92619|1,92780|3,92780|2,92780|0,92940|0,92940|1,93100|1,93100|3,93100|2) - I actually don't get the reason behind the double-triple patterning here. Before that, yes, but slow down to 50% and it is the exact same drum beat (except the final triple cause it is a cymbal but it could be all triples too) I'll change them all to triple
for this jumptrill:
02:44:288 - start the 14 23 14 23 jumptrill part here Sure thing I was wondering if this part is overmapped
02:43:621 - here to 2:44, make it just 1 note at a time broken streams
e.g. this Sure thing
02:47:454 - have this be an LN (probably shift it to 2), then have another LN at 02:47:621 - at 3 which extends to 02:47:954 - Yea I kinda get this idea
02:58:621 - obligatory triple at the start of the next part of the chorus with a cymbal (which means, add a triple here) Sure
04:53:288 - again, piano portion, change all triples here to doubles Will consider it later
Solid map, the snaps are pretty accurate too. Good luck
thank you again sya it helps a lotSyadow- wrote:
Marked for mod :3333
mod modKokuhakusolid map, sorry for little mod :'v00:27:978 - maybe add note here for consistency with 00:28:478 (28478|2,28978|2,29478|2) - etc Added
01:57:788 - 01:58:454 - triple for cymbal like this 01:59:788 - Sure
02:42:621 - triple ._. like this 01:30:644 - Added as well
03:09:788 - 03:10:454 - cymbal, triple Ok
03:34:566 (214566|2) - move to 03:34:510 - able to hit *up to wanna acc/reject That's nice adjust!
04:57:871 (297871|1) - same Ok
05:16:621 - i suggest like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8215763 Applied your pattarn
Good Luck >w<
NO Kudos
thank you for the mod and star[B A D] wrote:
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|**** M4M as req ****| LESSU GOSU
| Idk why Im doing this |
|__________________|Guilty crown is totally overatedReally good map <-- Kudo for that00:09:644 (9644|2,9978|1) - Ctrl + G I don't always make them in order
00:27:978 (27978|2) - Add a note here Added in sya's mod
02:18:288 (138288|2) - Make this a double? No it's just a little hit
02:37:954 - I think it should be 3 notes each line This pattern changes with the strenth of sounds, that's a bit weaker so double
04:10:621 - I don't understand why this is a kiai part. It sounds more like a bridge I found this bridge very interesting, kiai will make it more meaningful
04:15:621 (255621|3,255621|0,255621|2) - I think you should keep it as a double, maybe remove 04:15:621 (255621|2) Double for the stronger hit here
04:19:621 (259621|2,259621|1,259621|3) - ^, maybe remove 04:19:621 (259621|3) Same as above
04:30:454 (270454|3,270454|1) - Maybe make this a triple? Yea sure I should noticed this before
04:53:288 - The kiai part should end here, you can add another kiai part here 04:57:954 , although it only lasts for 10 sec but it is not a big
problem Will consider it, since I think this part is a part of chorus
Sry short mod but hope this help and GL for ranking
Thank you!Virtue- wrote:
General
- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : OK!
- Files : OK!
1|2|3|4[KokuHaku]
- 00:00:978 (978|2) - i think it starts from 00:00:645 - Moved
- from 00:06:644 (6644|0,6644|1) - until 00:25:311 (25311|2,25311|1) - put some noodles pls... or u might wanna to put LNs in 1/1 00:06:644 (6644|0,6978|0,7311|1,7644|0) - and so on I don't want to use noodle for light piano sounds
- 04:05:288 (245288|1) - move to 3? Ok, since notes are too close
- 04:27:954 (267954|1,267954|3,268121|2,268288|1,268288|0,268454|3) - wanna try this? i think it's better http://puu.sh/w6mzM/4f0e849a33.png This pattern is good as well but there are too many notes on left, consider to hand balance I'll keep my pattern
- 04:30:621 (270621|0) - it feels too empty? why don't u try to put some single for those piano? I've considered to add another LN,
would apply it later, piano sounds are too weak so I'm not going to map them- 05:09:454 (309454|3,312121|1,312454|2,312788|0,313121|3,313454|1,313788|3,314121|2,314454|0) - double pls Sure
well, i think that's it... sorry for the delay and this short mod D:
Thanks for the mod and star, also thanks for the BG!Litharrale wrote:
hullo dkingo
1|2|3|4
here's a better res BG. You actually might have to use it cause atm your mapset size is unrankably big Thanks for finding a high quality BG, I'll change it soon. But I disagree with my mapset size, 12MB isn't actually big for a marathon mapmoderino00:47:811 (47811|1,47811|0) - maybe make these two into LNs to show that its a different sound Will consider it,
using LN in that place wasn't part of my plan, but it seems good
00:52:811 (52811|1) - very obviously a chord, add some notes to reflect this
00:55:478 (55478|2) - ^
etc I use single note for all piano sound here
00:58:478 (58478|2) - Ghost note
01:01:478 (61478|1) - ^ There are piano sounds
01:06:144 (66144|3) - another chord note, bunch o these Same as above
01:11:811 - the only sound here is a vocal but I think it's loud enough to warrant a note on 3 It's weird when you map vocal so suddenly in a instrumental map
01:30:478 (90478|0,90478|3,90478|2,90561|1) - I really dont like this, consider changing to a normal jumptrill I can reduse a note
It seems very unlikely that the bpm changes at all for an increment of <10 you might wanna double check this The first bpm change is right i can be sure about it, I'll do a recheck for the second change
01:37:455 (97455|1) - While I'm a big fan of just drum sections like this, I do think it can get a bit boring. Try and spice up the kiai a bit with maybe some vocal emphasis I'm not a vocal fan even I love koeda so much
02:04:454 (124454|0) - ghost note Removed
03:14:454 (194454|3) - imo you should remap this whole section to focus on the piano a lot more cause atm it's very rough. notes like this one are completely mistimed, theres a lot of ghost notes and in general very vague mapping That's true, I don't know anymore what I tried to catch at this part, will remap it sometime
03:34:510 (214510|2,214510|1,214566|3,214566|0,214621|1,214621|2) - This comes out of no where since theres nothing like it till now. I know it makes sense but maybe make it a bit easier? like a stair with a double at the end I'll apply your suggestion, it was kinda weird for me though
04:20:454 (260454|1) - This section shouldnt be kiai'd imo I think it's part of the chorus so I added kiai
04:53:288 (293288|0) - kiai ends here Well ok
cool map! starred
thank you_Gaster wrote:
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Welp... I'm pretty sure I said "No vocals" but, eh, rules are a thing of a past now. I apologize
I mean look at those two ranked 4K NEO TREASONs. Nobody cares about the rules anymore.SPOILER00:06:644 - You forgot something. Maybe I accidently removed them
00:08:644 - to 00:25:311 - A lot of unnecessary hands, hands that should be jumps, and opportunities to place hands but don't have hands in them. I could list them all but this should have been easy for you to figure out in the first place. Adjusted a bit
00:27:978 - You've redeemed yourself here. I like these. I'm not very satisfied with this part...
You need to use some hitsounding too, man... I haven't started doing hitsounds yet, probably this month
00:52:811 - Add one note.
00:55:478 - Same here.
00:58:144 - Here too.
01:00:811 - Same.
01:03:478 - Okay I think you get it at this point. Just keep finding that occasional extra piano sound. Sure
01:11:644 - Add here too. I just want some more difficulty. Lol. The sound isn't so strong, and I don't like overmapping, two should be enough
01:36:038 - Here too. You could make this a kinda like a 123_123_123_123 thing. Well, your call. It's fine either way. I'll keep my pattern
02:09:663 - I think some of the bass gets dropped on a 1/8 snap... You could just resnap one of the notes there, I guess. The bass is too weak to be mapped
Some of the stuff I said above may also apply to the next similar parts of the song.
03:35:163 - Snap one here. I moved a note up to creating stair
04:10:621 - Remove this timing point. Will keep it atm, I should go asking some mappers about it
04:11:204 - I swear I hear a tick here... And the next ones... I'll adjust them
04:30:621 - Remove this timing point. Same as above
That's it. Nice art.
Thank youTheNewBungping wrote:
Hi I'm from TheNewBungping's 4Keys O!Mania GD/Modding Queue [OPEN]
wow this is quite a nice map!
Here's your mod very short cuz I can't find much of an errorKokuHaku02:34:648 make this triple notes Sure
02:39:981 ^ It will be too hard
02:37:481 this one should be a double or triple note Will add a note
02:45:481 add a note here, and remove the one on 02:45:537 sure
04:30:652 - 04:31:986 - try add piano here It feels better when there is a empty part in the map
04:58:819 - there's a drum sound here, put a double note since the sound isn't that loud I'll just add a note
Thank you mage, almost all acceptedMage wrote:
You asked about timings, but idk, they are looks good hahKokuHakuGood map! Hope you'll rank it
00:07:644 - i hear only one sound, so why 3 notes lol, remove 2 of them
00:08:644 - 00:10:311 - 00:11:311 - and etc. ^
00:09:311 - 00:11:978 - 00:14:644 - and etc. - 3 notes is ok, but i recommend 2 notes Will adjust them to double
00:48:478 - 3 notes Sure
01:05:811 (65811|0) - there are no sounds, remove Ok
01:57:315 - looks like here should be triple Ok
02:02:981 - you miss note Added
02:07:648 - ^ Added as well
02:39:981 - triple Ok
02:42:481 - 3 notes? but 01:30:478 - this sounds stronger, but here only 2 notes :thinking: I will remove a note
04:00:481 - 04:03:148 - triples Sure fixed
04:30:652 - http://puu.sh/wh1QS/ea5efa9ae3.png - try this or just put simple notes Really nice patter, I'll consider it but I want to let this part be simple so will keep the current pattern
Thank you etsu!!!Etsu wrote:
Hey there my mod supercellmodColumns: 0|1|2|3
[General][KokuHaku]
- Better make kiai in 03:43:981 - to 04:10:663 - in 04:10:663 - no there are not many notes.. here relax section . I'll keep it because it's part of the chorus
- I think is better change audio "soft" and volume 5% in begin imo Will do
- 00:07:644 (7644|0,7644|2) - is better make a note instead two imo.. enough in 00:09:311 (9311|2,9311|1) - I made this sound as double
- 00:27:978 (27978|0,27978|2,28144|0,28144|3) - why HS piano? here is guitar is strange hear with piano xd It's actually guitar HS but I k now it sounds weird -.-
- 00:33:311 - prefer follow a just sound xD As you can hear there are light guitar sounds, feels bad if I don't map them
- 00:35:811 (35811|2,35978|1) - control + g? No because I want to keep that small jack
- 00:36:228 (36228|1,36311|2,36394|0,36478|1,36561|3) - same in point "2" is better follow drums here as break 00:36:644 - so remove in 00:36:894 - 1/4? Will consider this point but I'd prefer keeping those guitar sounds xD
- 00:53:644 (53644|2) - move column 3? time empty column Sure
- 01:06:478 (66478|3) - delete? no sound like 01:05:811 - Ok
- 01:12:144 - idk feel missing note for complete guitar LN is better imo also is better focus guitar like.. with beat pitch is somewhat confusing so delete note 01:12:311 - ? It didn't make me confused, the previous pattern is fine
- 01:14:311 (74311|1) - delete? It's meant to be 4 notes with snare+heavy crash
- 01:12:478 - same reason above Will reject it
- 01:15:311 (75311|0,75311|3) - or delete a note is bit dense imo Maybe I would adjust LNs later but the main point won't change
- 01:30:561 - add note for double? is same in 01:30:478 (90478|3,90478|0) - This part had been discussed a lot, this is the final solution that I think is most comfortable for this difficulty
- 01:57:981 (117981|2) - delete for break? It won't help a lot if I delete it, I will feel lost xD
- 01:58:648 (118648|1) - same i think is better make break in this section after tightening much previous notes imo Same as above
- 03:21:648 - try make this for balance I like this!
- 03:31:981 (211981|3) - a like LN for effect here for variation also move this note 03:30:481 (210481|0) - in column 2? Will reject both,
LN isn't that necessary to be mapped and the second one is still in the previous part so that note will have to stand there for a jack- 03:43:315 - add LN? i hear effect here I think it continues the first LN's sound
- 03:54:481 (234481|3) - delete? This is a part that I will consider, the drum sound isn't that loud but I think double is better than single note
- 04:00:315 - idk i hear drums in 1/8 04:00:273 - i think its a timing problem You are right, that's why I've requested timing check from other modders...
- 04:05:648 - add note? the drum is very strong Sure
- 04:26:486 (266486|3) - move in 04:26:569 - ? Will consider it as well, since it would break some patterns
- 05:00:499 (300499|3) - i think remove this is bit hard imo No so hard I think, at least not the hardest one of this map
Thanks for the modPnX wrote:
mod from modding q
KokuHakuOverall is fine~ I quite like it. GL~
- 03:22:148 (202148|1,202315|0) - Merge it? At first, I think both sound are very similar and 03:22:315 - triple here is too dense. So, fix the first one and it will automatically fix another issue too. I think that triple is fine for me, and these bass sounds are worth mapping, it's weird if a single LN follows two different sounds
- 03:30:648 (210648|1) - Should be on the right hand imo, maybe third column. Will move it
- 04:26:486 (266486|1,266486|3,266486|0,266569|2,266652|1,266652|0) - I think this pattern is not quite suit with the sound here. Suggest: Ctrl+J (and other pattern like this too.) It's fine for me as well, your suggestion doesn't match here because there will have more notes on quiter sound
- 04:54:978 (294978|2) - I think i should be on main white line for this note. The snap is very similar to 04:53:666 (293666|2) - . Otherwise, change 04:53:666 (293666|2) - down 1/16 I will have to fix the timing again here :/
- 04:53:645 (293645|2) - I can hear a (little) sound here. Suggest to add a note here? and make it stair like https://puu.sh/won3W/7828468cbc.png I think it better than this one. I don't get this one
- If you do and above suggestion try to add a note on 05:00:249 - too.
Thanks for the mod!Incendent wrote:
Your map is very good! I couldn't really find too much, and honestly only two things caught me. One of which is the fact that the hit sounds are close to non existent in some places. Hit sounds are pretty important I'd have to say, so try upping the volume to 12 or 15? I will turn it louder, it was so quiet bcs for me without hitsounds will be more comfortable at modding and mapping.
04:31:978 Add a note here. Will keep it as triple bcs the crash isn't loud enough
00:06:644 Make one of these a long note
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00:12:311 --- 00:25:311 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ (I think I made my point xD)
04:53:411 Make one of these notes a long note
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Everything on there is just a preference. Those pianos feel like LN's to me. But I saw in other mod posts that you don't want the LN's there. I'd figure I'd point it out anyways since I already put in the work. LN really isn't my favourite thing , I think too many LNs will mess up a clean map, there shouldn't be any LN with those simple piano keysounds (maybe some of them), I like concise map, so that's it
谢谢豆腐的摸和星星Tofu1222 wrote:
Hi dkingo, NM Request from my modding queue in Chinese
[KokuHaku]其他地方都写得很Nice,挺好的,也好听owo,加油呀,希望我的Mods对你有帮助!
- 歌名应该叫做Kokuhaku,注意一下大写,还有难度名可以的话也和歌名大小写一致 歌名已改,难度名由于koku和haku对应两个字,所以我用两个大写觉得更美观
- 00:07:644 (7644|0,7644|2) - 00:08:644 (8644|3,8644|1) - 00:10:311 (10311|2,10311|3) - 00:11:311 (11311|2,11311|0) - 以及之后这些双键是没有必要的,因为这些地方的钢琴音没有重叠,重叠的地方只有00:06:644 (6644|0,6644|1) - 00:09:311 (9311|2,9311|1) - 00:11:978 (11978|3,11978|1) - 00:14:644 (14644|1,14644|0) - 00:17:311 (17311|2,17311|3) - 等等,是两小节一循环的,希望可以注意到 听出来了,已改
- 00:27:978 - 从这开始你的HS的音高是错的= =,我就清掉看你的键位了,HS请自行完善吧,加油 这段hitsounds是瞎搞的,打算正式做HS时就删掉
- 00:46:811 (46811|0,46811|1) - 没有音 这里有底鼓音
- 00:48:311 (48311|1,48311|2,48311|0) - 应该也用双键 小鼓音应该用三键
- 01:12:978 (73311|1,73311|3,73644|1,73644|3,73644|0,74644|2,74644|0,74644|1,74978|3,74978|2,75311|2,75311|0,75311|3) - 举个例子,你有些地方是三押,有些地方是双押,这样会显得很没有规律,我知道你是先铺的双键再加的面条,但是面条的键也应当考虑进去,我的建议是每个时间轴上只放两个键(除非有多余的Crash)(这是我的一贯做法,你可以拒绝)这个就是个人习惯了,我一般不把面条看做一个键的,但是你说的有点道理,就先放这儿,以后有人提到再考虑
- 01:31:644 (91644|0,91644|1) - 这个也放双键吧 已经是双键了
- 01:34:498 (94498|1,94984|3,95471|2) - 没有在线上 已改
- 01:35:982 - 从这一段,虽然说很整洁,但是玩起来却有些无聊,我建议在每句歌词末尾一个延长音放上滑条,比如01:35:982 - 01:39:815 - 01:41:315 - 等等(如果接受了,后面的KIAI也要一起改哦)留着再考虑... 假期懒癌发作了 -.-
- 03:38:481 (218481|2) - 改为双键,单键显得格格不入 没鼓音,双键有点过
- 03:36:481 - 加一个键,这里鼓点有变化,像03:39:815 (219815|0,219815|2,219815|1) - 好的
- 03:41:148 (221148|1) - 可以删掉 已删
- 04:00:273 (240273|2,240273|0,240273|1) - 抓在这里我总觉得怪怪的,但我又找不到问题orz,你看看offset有没有问题 鼓点本身不规则吧...后面我就加了很多红线,这首歌不太好抓音说实话
- 04:10:685 - 讲真的,我不觉得这一段算kiai。。可以考虑删掉kiai的标识 好吧
- 04:54:311 (294311|2,294311|1,295311|3,295311|1,295978|3,295978|2,296978|0,296978|1) - 感觉没什么必要啊,改成单键吧 这段和开头差不多,已改
- 05:00:769 (300769|0,300769|1,300894|3,300894|2,300977|1,300977|0) - 声音没有这么大,改成单键 已改
- 05:01:311 - 到05:02:644 - 所有音建议都改为双键 已改
- 05:06:123 (306123|0) - 没在线上吧 已改
- 05:15:144 - 加个双键 加个单键就行了
送你一颗星星'w')/
Thank you for the modgenkicho wrote:
NM From my mod que
col 1 2 3 4dis00:00:645 (645|2,3145|3) - idk if this a problem or not, but i suggest dont put note behind the bpm line Not a problem
00:07:978 (7978|0,8311|2,8644|3) - those 3 are same, repeated piano sound like 00:06:978 (6978|1,7311|2,7644|3) - so i suggest put them at same column repeatedly and change pattern every doublenote If you listen to them carefully, the pitch is repeated every time, I want to make my pattern more variously not like repeat it
00:22:644 (22644|3,22978|3) - avoid(?) Nope
00:25:311 (25311|2,25311|1,25311|3) - i think double is enough Double goes with piano and that LN goes with that background sounds
00:52:644 (52644|1,52811|3,52811|1,52978|3) - i suggest avoid 2 minijacks (1/2snap) like this, the other one 00:55:311 (55311|2,55311|1,55478|0,55478|3,55644|1,55644|3) - only have 1 minijack (1/2snap) Adjsuted a bit
01:57:311 imo hard notes dont fit this part, i suggest map it like [urlhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8432364]this[/url] - this Will keep the current one, I feel lost with just LNs
01:59:981 (119981|2,120148|3,120481|2,120648|0,120981|3,121148|2,121481|3,121648|0,121981|0,122148|3) - theyre all 2 repeated sounds, why all different columns.. It's very very bored if just repeat the same pattern
01:59:981 (119981|1) - if this longnotes is vocal, it's too long, >.> Background sound
02:37:648 (157648|0,157648|3,157648|1) - i think adding triples is a bad idea.. I prefer triple here, but double is fine as well, let's see
02:44:231 (164231|0) - move to 3, Not gonna make that jack
02:44:315 then this part start with 14 then 23, ends it like dis Reject this one, sounds good but I want to keep the incoming guitar pattern
03:10:648 (190648|1) - no beat (?) Ok will remove this
04:17:329 (257329|1) - whats dis
04:19:663 (259663|2) - whats dis
04:19:996 (259996|3) - whats dis Bass sounds
04:31:978 (271978|2,272144|2) - if you gonna 1/2jack it just make it 04:31:978 (271978|3,271978|1,271978|2) - quad >.> No, I feel it's overmap
05:04:644 this part with the LN feels overmapped >.> I think it's ok
SV
ok actually i should do this in nm, but i think just 1 mod i ok >.>
01:22:644 - hav no SV but 02:34:648 (154648|3) - has SV, theyre similar >.> btw the SV seems unnecessary I added this SV from a modder's suggestion, feel unnecessary by myself as well, may remove it later
ok thats all im bad at vocal + marathon >.>