Nice map.
(Do not call me nazi; these things really get into my eyes. I want all maps to be symmetrical, nice and so on. I only played the map once in regular mode and watched it once in editor.)
[Overall]03:40:728 - you can finish mapping here, at the end of spinner and kiai, to end map nicely. (I do not like if song is mapped to the very last second.)
Nice glowing star/star2 image
.osb is empty, delete it, if you care.
[Normal]00:23:69 (1) - it's ugly, too flat.
00:28:63 (6) - restack under end of (5).
00:36:77 (5) - ugly, make it round.
00:49:61 (1,2,3,4) - bah, tricky 1/3 notes. I suggest not to use them in Normal.
01:58:405~02:21:977 - smaller spacing is probably meant, but IMHO does not feel well. At least make it ~75% of spacing at beginning, not 50% of it.
02:07:29 (1,2,3,4) - ugly and does not play well.
02:14:69 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - does not play well, I suggest to delete it and fix break. Or at least stack (2,3) and (5,6,7).
02:51:72 (1) - weird shape of slider hides it a bit, it's also not stacked exactly. Flip previous slider vertically? Or just unstack.
02:53:20 (5,1) - space manually. Yeah, I know that (1) is closer to (5) because of changed BPM, but it still should be spaced like previous combo.
03:15:51 (1,2,3,4) - move them a bit farther from each other?
03:43:91 (6,7,8) - 1 grid left, to make (7) stack ontop of (4).
[Hard]00:50:35 (4) - make it nice and curved?
01:36:99 (1,2,3) - stack nicer under end of (7).
01:58:405~02:21:977 - like in Normal - smaller spacing is bad, even if the BPM in this section actually is almost 50% slower.
02:06:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these claps are so, so, so fugly. remove them.
02:53:44 (3,1,2) - spacing? Also, like in Normal at this place.
03:23:34 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - uh, I didnt expect that. Also, why there's a small break between these stacks? I suggest to conect them and turn into deathstream.
03:33:87 (1) - ugly. Either make it U-shaped or really nice and round.
03:47:58 (2) - fugly slider.
03:52:23 (5) - ^
Starred.