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KBShinya - Dang Ran Shi Xuan Ze Yuan Liang Ta A

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Yugu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年5月19日 at 18:24:40

Artist: KBShinya
Title: Dang Ran Shi Xuan Ze Yuan Liang Ta A
Tags: green hat Lao Wang Old Wang YuanLiang 原谅 forgive Of course choose to forgive her NTR Luo Tianyi
BPM: 192.06
Filesize: 2345kb
Play Time: 02:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Like a grassland (5.67 stars, 593 notes)
Download: KBShinya - Dang Ran Shi Xuan Ze Yuan Liang Ta A
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Raiyn
00:06:008 (2,3,4,5,1) - just a suggestion but i'd think replacing them with 1/2 sliders are better than single hit circles
00:08:508 (10,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:16:005 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:18:192 (4,5,1,2,3) - ^
00:10:070 (5) - didnt notice this was a kick slider try to make it more visible
00:20:066 (5) - ^
00:12:881 (1,2,3) - silder 1 seems to not have a connection with 2&3
00:39:435 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - the stacking of this
01:42:228 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:03:022 (1) - this doesnt look like a slower slider in the first try also the speed of the sliders change dramatically and you seem to only use this once try to make it a bit apparant that it's slower
01:04:428 (1,2,3) - using 1/8th again
01:05:678 (1,2,3) - ^
01:35:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - try to make a smaller triangle first then increase in size as time goes by if you want to also try to reverse the rotation\
01:43:478 (2,3,4) - 3&4 is far away from 2 making it hard to double tap instantly
01:44:571 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - a bit confusing for me (opinionated) try to make into a combo
01:46:133 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:54:568 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:56:130 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^

that's about it but as i said in 00:06:008 (2,3,4,5,1) try to replace some of the hit circles with sliders instead youre wasting a bit of potential also some of the double taps after the silders are far from the actual slider making it a bit hard to quickly double tap. the 1's are a bit confusing too but that's jnust my opinion.

those 1/8 silders can just be replaced by hit circles

but it's your choice if you want to follow through
Topic Starter
Yugu

Zxozmo wrote:

00:06:008 (2,3,4,5,1) - just a suggestion but i'd think replacing them with 1/2 sliders are better than single hit circles nope
00:08:508 (10,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:16:005 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:18:192 (4,5,1,2,3) - ^
00:10:070 (5) - didnt notice this was a kick slider try to make it more visible i think it is okay,cuz you just need to click it ,and by this flow can know this slider is there ,and it is ez to read imo
00:20:066 (5) - ^
00:12:881 (1,2,3) - silder 1 seems to not have a connection with 2&3 i think it s hard to make it beautiful
00:39:435 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - the stacking of this intentionally to make them chaos at first
01:42:228 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:03:022 (1) - this doesnt look like a slower slider in the first try also the speed of the sliders change dramatically and you seem to only use this once try to make it a bit apparant that it's slower the voice is support
01:04:428 (1,2,3) - using 1/8th again
01:05:678 (1,2,3) - ^
01:35:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - try to make a smaller triangle first then increase in size as time goes by if you want to also try to reverse the rotation\ it is increase in size as time goes though very small
01:43:478 (2,3,4) - 3&4 is far away from 2 making it hard to double tap instantly fixed
01:44:571 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - a bit confusing for me (opinionated) try to make into a combo
01:46:133 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:54:568 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:56:130 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^

that's about it but as i said in 00:06:008 (2,3,4,5,1) try to replace some of the hit circles with sliders instead youre wasting a bit of potential also some of the double taps after the silders are far from the actual slider making it a bit hard to quickly double tap. the 1's are a bit confusing too but that's jnust my opinion.

those 1/8 silders can just be replaced by hit circles

but it's your choice if you want to follow through
thanks for mod! :)
Raiyn
https://www.mediafire.com/?dg2xhx57tf1mdwg
done it
Topic Starter
Yugu

Zxozmo wrote:

https://www.mediafire.com/?dg2xhx57tf1mdwg
done it
wow plz PM me .osu! ;)
gary00737
水摸 :) :) :) :)


00:47:870 (1,2,1) - 1/2 跟 1/1 同樣間距好難讀 (? 要不要把1/1的疊起來?
00:49:120 (2,1,2) - 這裡反而分比較開 @@@@@
01:28:014 (5,1,2) - 好難讀 我的媽呀~~
01:33:169 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡來了個出奇不意 :?
01:35:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 太重複 要不要試試每3個轉一下角度? 例如每3個轉13度 利用ctrl+shift+r

01:44:571 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 我個人認為 不要nc 好亂
01:48:789 (9,1) - 我覺得連打到這裡會比較好
01:50:351 (3,1,2) - 試把2移更開一點
01:51:600 (2,1,2) - ^
01:54:568 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - 同樣nc問題
01:58:786 (9,1) - 同樣連打問題
02:10:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 試試也旋轉一下 別讓他在同樣地方 ?


以上是我覺得奇怪的點 ((我還弱 >:(

希望能幫到你
:)
Topic Starter
Yugu

gary00737 wrote:

水摸 :) :) :) :)


00:47:870 (1,2,1) - 1/2 跟 1/1 同樣間距好難讀 (? 要不要把1/1的疊起來? 间距加大
00:49:120 (2,1,2) - 這裡反而分比較開 @@@@@
01:28:014 (5,1,2) - 好難讀 我的媽呀~~ 这和前面的节奏排列的一样,前面能打这边也应该能打imo
01:33:169 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡來了個出奇不意 :? 缩小1/2间距
01:35:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 太重複 要不要試試每3個轉一下角度? 例如每3個轉13度 利用ctrl+shift+r 还不想改

01:44:571 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 我個人認為 不要nc 好亂 fixed
01:48:789 (9,1) - 我覺得連打到這裡會比較好 这里也和前面一样的
01:50:351 (3,1,2) - 試把2移更開一點 1,3,2间距一样的,移不开,移开了柑橘会丑
01:51:600 (2,1,2) - ^
01:54:568 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - 同樣nc問題 fixed
01:58:786 (9,1) - 同樣連打問題
02:10:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 試試也旋轉一下 別讓他在同樣地方 ?


以上是我覺得奇怪的點 ((我還弱 >:(

希望能幫到你
:)
谢谢mod啦! :)
Lobelia
噗噗噗233一道绿光
Shiratori
瞬间二摸
Roger06150
Awesome map *-*
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