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The Black Dahlia Murder - I Will Return

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Zel
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Joined April 2014
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Zel
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, July 28, 2017 at 7:32:57 PM

Artist: The Black Dahlia Murder
Title: I Will Return
Tags: deflorate screaming fast high tempo stamina streams
BPM: 129
Filesize: 9002kb
Play Time: 05:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Reincarnation (6.66 stars, 2194 notes)
Download: The Black Dahlia Murder - I Will Return
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Until the sky is black and the sun it never shows
Til the whipping winds of nuclear winter cruelly blow
The gift of immortality has been bestowed
I will return
I WILL RETURN


for approval!
Last edited by Zel , edited 1 time in total.
Deppyforce
1,961 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce
sorry im late!!

the offset of the whole map sounds little early try to adjust it (some noticeable parts at 00:30:023 -
00:32:725 - cool this one is late but timing is definitely off

add deflorate in tag it sthe album this is from

00:06:302 (1,4) - move slider closer for cleaner blanket
01:17:169 (5) - end it either at01:17:864 - or 01:18:141 - instead fits better tbh cuz sound on those are more noticable
02:02:725 (1,2,3,4) - wanna change these to kickslider cuz the drums havent start here yet
02:55:503 (1) - change this to 2 circles cuz drum here is obviously stronger than the next slider
04:34:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - tbh i think this should be spaced even less than this so the i will return vocal after gets emphasized more, rn it doesnt really stand out dat much imo
04:38:280 (3) - this might make no sense but the star here is made perfectly and it doesnt fit with the sloppy aesthetics of the other parts at all LOL this sounds stupid but ill edit this star a bit to make it off so it fits in with the rest better http://puu.sh/wLPci/3426304036.jpg

not bad actually
Zel
240 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Zel

Deppyforce wrote:

sorry im late!!

the offset of the whole map sounds little early try to adjust it (some noticeable parts at 00:30:023 - fixed, beginning was off
00:32:725 - cool this one is late but timing is definitely off timing isnt off, but the first note is late, idk how to avoid this because the rest is on time. I assume its because its real instruments. I compensated this with the usage of two buzz sliders

add deflorate in tag it sthe album this is from oki

00:06:302 (1,4) - move slider closer for cleaner blanket moved note closer instead
01:17:169 (5) - end it either at01:17:864 - or 01:18:141 - instead fits better tbh cuz sound on those are more noticable ended it at second one because its mapped to vocals and that when they end, good suggestion ty
02:02:725 (1,2,3,4) - wanna change these to kickslider cuz the drums havent start here yet nice
02:55:503 (1) - change this to 2 circles cuz drum here is obviously stronger than the next slider nice
04:34:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - tbh i think this should be spaced even less than this so the i will return vocal after gets emphasized more, rn it doesnt really stand out dat much imo great idea
04:38:280 (3) - this might make no sense but the star here is made perfectly and it doesnt fit with the sloppy aesthetics of the other parts at all LOL this sounds stupid but ill edit this star a bit to make it off so it fits in with the rest better http://puu.sh/wLPci/3426304036.jpg youre right this made no sense lol, most of the aes in this map is made to be clean

not bad actually ty
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