hai! from my m4m req , remember these are all suggestions so feel free to deny whatever you want :3
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well I think that's all, good luck with this and hope it can be helpful ;;
[General]
- Well i'm not totally sure about this but about english words on real title you could ask someone else if it's right
- kantan-> futsuu around 0,5 sr difference, futsuu-> muzu 0,8. take a look on my kantan comments
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While I was testplaying it I noticed there are so much Finishers through the song... try deleting some of them and use them carefully
Also I felt it a little difficult, remember they're new players here and haven't played so much to get redlines easily. Try to let some 4/1 breaks (also 2/1) through the song
- Try using 1.2 SV since it's almost 200 bpm and it could be fast for new players
- 00:00:650 - try this on first section and leave if you like it
also if you're agreeing with it make it consistent for next 4/1 - 00:07:439 (10) - I think you should delete notes like this and let 4/1 break here
- 00:10:766 - it was hard for me to get the consistency on this section, you're following kind of vocal-drums and changing little suddenly, try to stuck a little on one of them D:
- 00:16:510 (24) - ^
- 00:19:063 (28) - delete this, isn't neccesary and makes it hard to read next note :c
- 00:20:978 - this section is a little bit more readable
- 00:26:722 (37) - ^
- 00:49:063 (72,73,74,75) - about them I'm not sure, I think 00:49:542 (73,74) - should be D (these notes are good at finishers) but probably it's too difficult... not sure tbh (try hearing them at toara's Muzu, he did it)
well Kiai gets almost easier than the beggining D: - 01:01:191 (92,93) - you should give more than a 1/1 space between them, even there's a finisher after this and that makes it more difficult to get
well try to follow my suggestions through the whole song, for example this section 01:12:042 - is really well mapped imo - 01:19:702 (120,121) - same comment about sliders not sure :c
- 01:27:361 (1,2) - please don't ;;
Same comment about finishers, there are a lot :c
- 00:08:386 (16,17,18) - try to avoid 1/2 usage triplets, they're not bad, but here isn't neccesary imo
Futsuu is kinda good imo - 00:32:148 (66) - delete this because this pattern is kinda dense
- 00:40:287 (83) - delete this too
- 00:46:829 (96,98) - you should delete one of these notes, deleting any of them sounds good
kiai is fine too but almost easier than last parts xD - 00:49:542 (197) - same comment as Kantan
- 01:06:936 (147,148,149,150,151,152) - well assuming you're following background drums then do D D D D D K or D D D K K K
- 01:10:127 (155,156,157,158,159,160) - double triplet is kinda hard, try deleting one of them
- 01:14:914 (168) - move to 01:15:074 - and delete 01:15:234 (169) - (or maybe not deleting sounds fine too)
- 01:27:361 (1,2) - same as Kantan but here i'm not sure
- AiMod: 00:24:806 (91) - unsnapped note
- You have the same OD and HP than Oni, try OD 5 and HP 5 probably
- 00:07:597 (26) - what about deleting this one, I mean to not make this overmapped
00:31:829 - this section is fine but you're following vocals and: - 00:31:829 (124,125,126,127,128) - isn't consistent with 00:34:383 (136,137,138,139) - and they're following different things even they sound similar
- 00:34:861 (139) - change to k
- 00:54:489 (213,214) - ctrl+g and do finisher on second note
- 00:59:914 (234,235,236,237,238) - I feel this pattern strange, it doesn't fit so good imo D:
- 01:16:191 (310) - well tbh this note is strange, if you delete it then it's fine because that sound isn't that high to be mapped imo, also if you leave it sound a little weird
not anymore comment it's fine too
well I think that's all, good luck with this and hope it can be helpful ;;