toara_fict wrote:
Primarily.
Unity of map is lacking.
There are so many Finish. ( 97 notes. I think that this is too noisy )
Bad balance between density of kiai and other densities
> well, i don't think so. of a certainty, this map has many finish.
but not only little-finisher-used map is rankable map but also many-finisher map too.
and each finisher has it's identity and reason, and also song emphasized that part, so i can't easily fix all of it now.
about balance, it's density is little unbalanced without finisher, but there's many finisher you said.
kiai has small note against the other part, but with many finisher, it's difficulty seems same with other part imo.
I think it is difficult to aim for Ranked at the present moment
[ Oni]- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
- 00:00:650 (1) - ~ 00:10:766 (1) - part.
00:01:123 (2) - 00:02:386 (6) - 00:03:176 (10) - 00:03:650 (14) - 00:06:176 (5) - 00:06:807 (10) - 00:07:439 (15) - Delete finish. very noisy
> focusing on vocal, and i put finisher where all sound (contain vocal) is. and music strongly emphasized that part. keep now.
00:02:702 (7,8) - swap. 00:02:860 (8) - have high sounds.
> changed 00:02:860 (8,9,10) - kkk
00:05:465 (27) - delete. ( I think there is sound but should not pick up. this part the beginning of the song. )
> it's right to skip here, but more emphasize next finisher, keep it now.
00:05:860 (2) - change ddk D -> d ddk
>changed 00:07:597 (16,17,18,19) - k dkd so balanced pattern like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8120202
00:07:202 (13,14) - swap follow drum sound better.
00:07:439 (15) - change kat.
>for same reason to avoid ruin that linked pattern, keep now.
00:07:676 - add d here. ( 00:05:465 (27) - I should pick it up this way rather than pick it up here. )
>^
00:08:071 (21) - change d & 00:08:386 (22) - move 00:08:228 (22) - & change K. ( 00:08:228 - There is a sound so far. )
>^
00:08:544 (23) - change d. ( 00:08:702 (24,25,26) - To stand out here. )
>already d ;w;- 00:10:766 (1) - ~ 00:31:191 (137) - part.
You should reduce quiet part notes anyway.
If there are a lot of notes here, there is no distinction between kiai and other parts.
>this part has little more (or similar) density with before part, but have many rest time.
but this suggestion also right. i will fix and reduce some note.00:11:324 (4) - delete. not sounds.
00:12:281 (11) - some ^
00:12:202 (10,11) - swap. ( 00:12:202 (10) - follow drum sounds better. )
00:12:521 (12) - delete.
00:13:478 - add d here. ( It is uncomfortable to separate here. I think you're picking up with Vocal. )
00:13:638 (18) - change kat. high pitch
00:13:957 (19) - change d.
00:14:835 (25) - move 00:14:516 (23) - is better. ( 00:14:516 (23) - have a little sound. )
>fixed
00:14:755 (25,26) - swap.
>fixed
00:19:143 (57) - change kat. ( 00:19:063 (56) - 00:19:223 (58) - follow this sound. Its different )
>here, has any drum sound, so i judge that any note is fine (even delete). both d and k looks fine, so keep now.
00:19:383 (59,60) - swap.
>k K fixed
00:11:085 (2) - ~ use this pattern imo. ( 00:20:978 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78) - )
>definitely different drum playing. keep now
00:23:372 - add k here.
>no sound and any other sound between this circle(1/4). keep now
00:24:090 - delete. not sounds.
>ye not sound but for smooth play, keep now
00:25:207 (90) - move 00:25:047 (89) - & change d ( if you want. )
>same playing style and sound with 00:14:595 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - imo
00:28:478 (113) - change kat. ( if you want. )
>many dkk and kdd is used, so i want to little new like this. keep
00:29:196 (119) - move 00:29:516 (121) - & change d.
00:29:835 (124) - move 00:29:994 (125) - & kat.
00:30:313 (128) - move 00:30:473 (129) - & d
00:30:872 (132) - delete finish.
>remaked this part with your advice.
00:33:026 (146) - move 00:33:186 (147) -
00:33:505 (150) - delete.
>both keep now- 00:36:297 (166) - ~ 00:51:617 (1) - part.
00:37:095 (172) - 00:38:372 (179) - delete finish
>focusing on vocal, and i put finisher where all sound (contain vocal) is. and music strongly emphasized that part. keep now. (same at firstly said)
00:39:329 (183,184,185) - swap. follow drum & Vocal.
>fixed ddd
00:40:606 (191,192,193) - swap. ( 00:40:766 (193,194) - same bass sounds.)
>fixed dkd
00:42:202 (202) - delete finish.
>same reason 00:37:095
00:45:712 (224) - change d. ( some as 00:44:436 (216) - . & 00:45:712 (224,225) - some vocal pitch. )
>ye that's right but i put k to avoid perfectly same with 00:44:436 (222) - . vocal up than 00:45:553 (229) - and before is not, so use.
00:48:585 (244,245) - swap. ( follow bass. 00:49:063 (246) - I want to make it stand out )
>any no sound around here, just here 2 circle. and drum clearly play bass-snare, so keep- 00:51:617 (1) - ~ 01:12:042 (119) - kiai.
many finish notes.
>same reason above i said, skip some finish advice ;w; (just written ">" is it)
00:52:574 (7) - change d & 00:52:734 (8) - delete finish. ( 00:52:734 (8) - I want to make it stand out. but, don't use finish. )
>
01:00:473 (54) - change kat. ( small sounds 01:00:393 (53,54) - follow 01:00:553 (55) - d )
>prevent same kkd with 00:59:755 (48,49,50) , keep
01:01:111 (59) - move 01:01:590 (64) - & 01:01:670 (65) - change don. ( if you want )
>wanna emphasize 01:01:510 (64,65) - here's clear k k , so keep
01:02:308 (70) - delete finish.
>
01:02:468 01:02:547 - add k . ( Maybe overmap lol But I think that I'm to get on the flow )
> here has sound, but really overmap lol keep now for finisher.
01:02:787 (75) - change d . ( I want to make it stand out next finish note. )
>we can emphasize k K if 2/1. like 00:52:414 (6,7,8) -
01:06:936 (96) - ~ 01:09:489 (104) - Nonsense. If I put it 01:06:936 (96) - ~ D---k---k---k-d-k-d-k---k-d-kkd
>really good idea fsdjghfdiughdriugio~!@!@~@!#@$%
01:09:569 (110) - move 01:09:728 (111) - & 01:09:808 (112) - change kat. follow drum
> drum play just d k ddk so followed some vocal. keep now.
01:12:680 (128,129,130) - 01:12:680 (128,129,130) - 01:16:510 (146,147,148) - 01:16:510 (146,147,148) - delete finish
>- 01:20:978 (1) - ~ last
01:21:457 (3) - 01:22:095 (8) - 01:22:734 (13) - 01:23:372 (18) - 01:24:010 (23) - 01:24:329 (25) - 01:24:648 (27) - delete finish. very noisy.
>
01:23:531 (19) - add finish. why you don't put this ?
> mistake xp
01:23:292 - add d
> fixed~
01:24:569 (28) - swap.
>no notes in here >A<
01:24:728 (29) - add d plz ( flow flow )
>ranked criteria (not use finisher at 1/4 stream of end) keep ;w;
01:25:127 (32) - change d & 01:25:287 (33) - change K
> want to against 01:23:691 (23,24,25) - , kkk. and 01:25:287 (35,36,37) - want to D K K so keep.
01:27:202 - 01:27:441 - add d ( if you want. )
>fine circle! fixed~
Finish 92 -> 58
itiou all fix ver oite okimasu :3 -> http://puu.sh/vU6Np/4e0fc5fd77.zip
blue line -> pointed out zone.
tukareta...
>hontouni otsukaresamadeshita!!!!!
honto arigato gojaimasu xD
really really reeeeeeally thanks toara xDDDDDD