Primarily.
Unity of map is lacking.
There are so many Finish. ( 97 notes. I think that this is too noisy )
Bad balance between density of kiai and other densities
I think it is difficult to aim for Ranked at the present moment
[ Oni]
Finish 92 -> 58
itiou all fix ver oite okimasu :3 -> http://puu.sh/vU6Np/4e0fc5fd77.zip
blue line -> pointed out zone.
tukareta...
Unity of map is lacking.
There are so many Finish. ( 97 notes. I think that this is too noisy )
Bad balance between density of kiai and other densities
I think it is difficult to aim for Ranked at the present moment
[ Oni]
- 00:00:650 (1) - ~ 00:10:766 (1) - part.
00:01:123 (2) - 00:02:386 (6) - 00:03:176 (10) - 00:03:650 (14) - 00:06:176 (5) - 00:06:807 (10) - 00:07:439 (15) - Delete finish. very noisy
00:02:702 (7,8) - swap. 00:02:860 (8) - have high sounds.
00:05:465 (27) - delete. ( I think there is sound but should not pick up. this part the beginning of the song. )
00:05:860 (2) - change ddk D -> d ddk
00:07:202 (13,14) - swap follow drum sound better.
00:07:439 (15) - change kat.
00:07:676 - add d here. ( 00:05:465 (27) - I should pick it up this way rather than pick it up here. )
00:08:071 (21) - change d & 00:08:386 (22) - move 00:08:228 (22) - & change K. ( 00:08:228 - There is a sound so far. )
00:08:544 (23) - change d. ( 00:08:702 (24,25,26) - To stand out here. ) - 00:10:766 (1) - ~ 00:31:191 (137) - part.
You should reduce quiet part notes anyway.
If there are a lot of notes here, there is no distinction between kiai and other parts.00:11:324 (4) - delete. not sounds.
00:12:281 (11) - some ^
00:12:202 (10,11) - swap. ( 00:12:202 (10) - follow drum sounds better. )
00:12:521 (12) - delete.
00:13:478 - add d here. ( It is uncomfortable to separate here. I think you're picking up with Vocal. )
00:13:638 (18) - change kat. high pitch
00:13:957 (19) - change d.
00:14:835 (25) - move 00:14:516 (23) - is better. ( 00:14:516 (23) - have a little sound. )
00:14:755 (25,26) - swap.
00:19:143 (57) - change kat. ( 00:19:063 (56) - 00:19:223 (58) - follow this sound. Its different )
00:19:383 (59,60) - swap.
00:11:085 (2) - ~ use this pattern imo. ( 00:20:978 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78) - )
00:23:372 - add k here.
00:24:090 - delete. not sounds.
00:25:207 (90) - move 00:25:047 (89) - & change d ( if you want. )
00:28:478 (113) - change kat. ( if you want. )
00:29:196 (119) - move 00:29:516 (121) - & change d.
00:29:835 (124) - move 00:29:994 (125) - & kat.
00:30:313 (128) - move 00:30:473 (129) - & d
00:30:872 (132) - delete finish.
00:33:026 (146) - move 00:33:186 (147) -
00:33:505 (150) - delete. - 00:36:297 (166) - ~ 00:51:617 (1) - part.
00:37:095 (172) - 00:38:372 (179) - delete finish
00:39:329 (183,184,185) - swap. follow drum & Vocal.
00:40:606 (191,192,193) - swap. ( 00:40:766 (193,194) - same bass sounds.)
00:42:202 (202) - delete finish.
00:45:712 (224) - change d. ( some as 00:44:436 (216) - . & 00:45:712 (224,225) - some vocal pitch. )
00:48:585 (244,245) - swap. ( follow bass. 00:49:063 (246) - I want to make it stand out ) - 00:51:617 (1) - ~ 01:12:042 (119) - kiai.
many finish notes.
00:52:574 (7) - change d & 00:52:734 (8) - delete finish. ( 00:52:734 (8) - I want to make it stand out. but, don't use finish. )
01:00:473 (54) - change kat. ( small sounds 01:00:393 (53,54) - follow 01:00:553 (55) - d )
01:01:111 (59) - move 01:01:590 (64) - & 01:01:670 (65) - change don. ( if you want )
01:02:308 (70) - delete finish.
01:02:468 01:02:547 - add k . ( Maybe overmap lol But I think that I'm to get on the flow )
01:02:787 (75) - change d . ( I want to make it stand out next finish note. )
01:06:936 (96) - ~ 01:09:489 (104) - Nonsense. If I put it 01:06:936 (96) - ~ D---k---k---k-d-k-d-k---k-d-kkd
01:09:569 (110) - move 01:09:728 (111) - & 01:09:808 (112) - change kat. follow drum
01:12:680 (128,129,130) - 01:12:680 (128,129,130) - 01:16:510 (146,147,148) - 01:16:510 (146,147,148) - delete finish - 01:20:978 (1) - ~ last
01:21:457 (3) - 01:22:095 (8) - 01:22:734 (13) - 01:23:372 (18) - 01:24:010 (23) - 01:24:329 (25) - 01:24:648 (27) - delete finish. very noisy.
01:23:531 (19) - add finish. why you don't put this ?
01:23:292 - add d
01:24:569 (28) - swap.
01:24:728 (29) - add d plz ( flow flow )
01:25:127 (32) - change d & 01:25:287 (33) - change K
01:27:202 - 01:27:441 - add d ( if you want. )
Finish 92 -> 58
itiou all fix ver oite okimasu :3 -> http://puu.sh/vU6Np/4e0fc5fd77.zip
blue line -> pointed out zone.
tukareta...