[General]
- You have an unused file: "Technoheart.full.1565365.png"
deleted- You also have quite a big .osz-file. The rank-guidelines say to keep filesizes under 10mb for maps without a storyboard. Your map is currently sitting at 13.6mb. Deleting the unused background will get you down to 11mb. I'd keep it as is after deleting it, but downsize the current background if it's commented on again.
ill compress bg or mp3 if this map is potentially rankable- 04:30:259 (2) - You have an unrankable slider- This is offscreen
did you used ctrl shift a to find this? because mine doesnt say its offscreenI'd disable the countdown and enable widescreen support.
done[11.186]
General: Consistency is key for the same sound. Changes come in the map when there are changes in the song.
00:13:318 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This section becomes more and more intense, but you make the spacing lower. I'd suggest keeping the spacing equal across the board (except for the first note which is stronger)
00:16:141 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Here you do it correctly, but I don't see the reason why these are spaced so differently when it's the same drum-sound. I could see the reasoning if it was bigger because of the increasing intensity. But either you follow the drumsound and keep them the same, or you increase the spacing to signal the increasing intensity. The same goes for the above point.
00:18:965 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
00:21:788 (1,2,1,2,1) - ^
i redid all these00:25:847 (2) - weak sound, can remove it
00:24:612 (1,2,3,4,5) - can do this, you go from big to small spacing, but it needs to be uniform with the parts that are the same eg. --> 00:26:023 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd suggest you just change 00:26:023 (1,2,3,4,5) - to what you already did.
done01:01:141 (2) - missed sound on red tick. alternatively you can just short the slider. this is also done in other places, I won't mention them again.
00:58:494 (1) - I like the 1-2 pattern you have going here. Again consistency is key. with the above change this needs to reflect the 1-2 pattern aswell.
01:02:729 (1) - NC remove - Since you break the 1-2 pattern and follow the other sound, I suggest removing the NC to reflect the sound untill there is a strong beat again.
01:06:259 (1) - ^
Past 3 suggestions kinda confused me, would like clarifications if you can be bothered, if not its alright, im sure it will pop up in future mods01:07:318 (2) - Strong sound, needs to be mapped actively (with clicking). This is also done in other places, I won't mention them again.
01:21:082 (1,2) - this is one sound
01:31:671 (1,2) - These are sooo weak, when I first testplayed the map I thought there weren't any sounds at all. I'd call this overmapping. You can fix this by just deleting them
01:32:023 (1) - I'd give this a ctrl+g to emphasize the next sound.
done01:34:494 (1) - Since you follow the drums in this section you need to map this strong drum sound. You can do this by turning 01:34:847 (2,3) - into a slider aswell. If you don't want to do that alternatively you can map the wub-sound, but that would require a remap of the next notes.
fixed in my own way01:35:553 (1,2,3,4,5) - I like how you drive the flow here with the rotation, but I'd like for these to rotated -90-ish degrees to be emphasized better, this also leads into you next note
remapped02:00:612 (1) - Beautiful streams
<302:10:934 (2,3,1,2) - I like this a lot
<302:14:729 (1,2) - Suggest making these into 1 slider to follow vocals. Unrankable to map a beat which isn't there.
02:24:082 (2,3) - I don't think these two give the sound justice, you can use a slider instead
done02:26:288 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - These seem randomly placed. Try to use some logic. This can be setting them in a grid, stacking them in previous spots, using the same pattern, etc. You do this really well here 03:10:494 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) -
kinda fixed03:25:318 (2,3) - this is one sound - make it into one slider
04:03:082 (6,1,2,3,4) - sweet
ty? doesnt seem like anything special to me :304:18:788 (2,3) - These two are a different sound, I'd disconnect them from the stream. It's okay to have spacing to the stream to emphasize it.
done, i didnt have it disconnected cos i find it hard to play/read04:34:141 (1,2) - blanket
04:35:553 (1,2) - ^
blanket mods smh, kidding, fixedEndnote: A lot of these issues repeat themselves, I'll let you find them yourself so you learn how to identify issues. You can reuse my reasoning when looking through your map.
i do have reasoninng for some of the stuff you pointed out but ive currently got a massive headache...
might update mod later
Sorry for the heavy mod, I hope it helps you! Good luck with your map!