-Nitrous wrote:

Poppin'Party! PoPiPa!

General

1. Add these to tags: Toyama Kasumi Hanazono Tae Ushigome Rimi Yamabuki Saaya Ichigaya Arisa Aimi Otsuka Sae Nishimoto Rimi Ohashi Ayaka Itou Ayasa 愛美 大塚紗英 牛込 りみ 山吹 沙綾 市ヶ谷 有咲 Girls Band Party!
2. Disable Widescreen Support
3. Just a note for QATs: The genre is Video Game, Japanese.

Easy

1. 00:02:936 - Add a circle for polarity
2. 00:04:999 (3) - Make this to a 1/1 slider to support the drums in the next downbeat
3. 00:51:499 (1) - being nit picky, its not asymmetrical

Hard

1. 01:18:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd recommend using bell whistle sounds or not use any hitsounds at all here or at least remove the claps since this a vocals-only section.
2. 01:19:999 (1) - Remove Finish

Well done! I like the set already. Just needs some polishing and mods and it will be ready.

JeirYagtama wrote:

Heyo m4m request

General

Turn off widescreen support if you're not gonna add a storyboard on this xd fix

Hard

00:19:811 (5) - hmm ctrl g for better flow fix
00:23:561 (6) - ^fix
01:18:874 (3) - hmmm kinda suggest this placement a bit cos it looks better for me xd fix

01:19:811 (6) - kinda think this should be spaced a ;ittle bit more because of that strong sound fix
01:40:249 (3) - why not make this into a triple instead since its a hard diff fix
00:40:249 (3,5) - dont recommend doing this in a hard diff imo fix
01:14:749 (3) - ctrl g this and 01:15:124 (4) - for better flow fix

Expert

00:19:436 (4) - why is this spaced more than 00:19:624 (5) - when 4 is a weak sound? fix
00:46:624 (5) - ctrl g for better flow ummmmmmmmmmmmmm keep im favorite this flow sry;w;
01:11:374 (2) - ^ fix
00:15:311 (5,1) - personally think these 2 should be spaced more because 1 is a strong sound but spaced a little too close to 5 fix
01:22:624 (4) - this should be spaced more since its a really strong sound fix
can't really find that much mistakes in this map gj xd thanks <3

Gudluk xd

Neutral wrote:

Saw map on #modreqs

00:03:874 Maybe it could be 2 circles instead of a slider here like the hard dif? ok
00:05:749 You should turn this into a stream leading up to the slider @ 00:06:124 to follow the drums
I want to follow the sound of the guitar so I will keep it
00:10:436 Just my preference maybe change the repeater to just a short slider and have a circle @ 00:10:811
Keep
00:16:811 Slider should start with a finish nice
00:55:811 The circle here should have a finish hitsound nice
01:38:936 Same as earlier just a preference thing, but you can maybe change repeater here to short slider and add a circle @ 01:39:311 Keep
01:45:311 Circle here maybe also should get a finish since the cymbals hit twice sure

hope this gets ranked its a nice map

Dashing wrote:

just a light mod

Expert

First 3.97 stars I think this should be called insane!
It does not change because it conforms to the original game difficulty name



01:28:999 (1,2,3,4) - make these sliders closer together.
I personally like my shape, so I would like to keep it
If the same indication enters, change it

01:34:624 (2,3,4,5) - I really think this should 4 note stream should go right off the slider with me flow so theirs no jump from slider to stream.
It is the same reason as above. sorry!
Hope gets ranked

Gaia wrote:

-> Dashing
kept 1st one cuz i think the three snares in a row justifies the jumps, thx for modding!

-> Anyone who's confused about the difficulty naming
since ashemu can't really articulate this well I'll try to clarify; he's trying to follow the difficulty naming from the BanG Dream game itself, which goes from [ Easy -> Normal -> Hard -> Expert ] , where "Expert" in the game is equivalent to osu's "Insane." Since there's no "Extra" diff equivalent in the game, all diffs that are higher than "Hard" are named "Expert," which is what we've done here too.
it's confusing i know :p hopefully they'll release Master diffs sometime in the future w

moe arisa-chan diff

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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TitleUnicode:光るなら
Artist:Poppin'Party
ArtistUnicode:Poppin'Party
Creator:A s h e m u
Version:Gaia's Expert
Source:BanG Dream! ガールズバンドパーティー
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204,16,53749,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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1. What about the gap between lower difficulties? I think normal~hard is kinda big compared to easy~normal
2. btw nice bg :3

1. 00:03:311 (3) - move to x:384, y:64, it seems weird while playing. Also isn't a consistent DS between 00:01:999 (1,2) - and them
2. 00:04:999 (4) - NC here considering it's a pass between section change :p
3. 00:06:499 - I feel this section kinda dense compared to the others one. Maybe you can make a break between some notes or idk :p
4. 00:07:624 (2) - similar comment to the first one; move to 216, 236
5. 00:07:999 (3) - i'm not sure about this but I think reverse sliders aren't the best way on Easy diff
6. 00:12:499 (1) - ^
7. 00:12:124 (4) - same comment about others... 308,84.
   I think it's repeated through the song so I'm gonna skip them because I don't want to tell the same everytime xD
8. 00:15:499 - idk what are you following here D: I think here you have two options: Keep following the trumpet or change to the drum to make the section change. I think you should follow the trumpet by using a large note because it's an Easy diff and drum should be really hard to map
9. 00:29:749 (4) - I think this slider doesn't fill good here. try using a 2/1 slider instead 4/1 then a circle, sounds nice
10. 00:33:499 - Here... this slider sounds strange. You're kind of following the vocal and it's overextended. Try making it shorter .
11. 00:34:999 (2) - according to the comment ahead this little sections seems weird
12. 00:40:999 (3,3) - similar comment about reverse sliders, as I said i'm not sure :c
    well it comes through the whole song too xD
13. 01:16:999 (3) - this slider becomes... strange according that what you're following on kiai
14. http://puu.sh/vSzpH/4c0ef2323a.png 01:21:499 - applies here D:
15. 01:31:999 (1) - hmmm I don't like this slider even it's easy to follow, but it seems a little hard on a first view
16. 01:46:999 (1) - what about making a decrease volume through this spinner? sounds fine

1. I think using CS 3 and AR 5 should be better according to the song, it's more slight imo... just suggesting
2. I keep wondering why your notes are on strange positions... same as Easy D:
3. since you're following guitar I think a note here: 00:03:124 - is kinda neccesary, try this pattern maybe: http://puu.sh/vSzC8/10ba6ef0e0.jpg
4. Also as I said on easy, you got more breaks in this diff than the Easy one... seems strange :/ 00:07:811 - 00:08:561 - for example
5. 00:33:499 - This section feels strange since you're following vocal here and there's a 00:34:999 - long sound imo... well same as Easy
6. 00:56:186 (1) - NC here
7. 01:04:436 (1) - ^ probably since you're not still doing more than 6 notes combo
8. 01:10:436 (3) - ^
9. Also, you should start the spinner here: 01:19:811 - as you did on Easy diff
10. 01:25:249 (4) - this slider doesn't seem... beautiful :c not like other you have did
    well same comment about the spinner as Easy xD
    anyways it's kinda good imo

• 
  well this diff seems really good just a little comments that maybe could help

1. 00:41:561 (4,5) - I think the space betweem them is kinda too short according to song increase pitch and compared to 00:41:936 (6,7,8) -. You could try moving 00:41:749 (5) - to x200,y328 and it makes a great jump between them
2. 01:14:936 (5) - this stream doesn't feel good at playing, maybe try spacing the 01:15:124 (1,2,3,4,1) - a little more and isn't consistent with space between them
3. 01:19:905 - what about adding the spinner here? I mean since he used on owner difficulties

xfraczynho wrote:

hi! m4m from modreqs! remember these are all suggestions

[General]

1. What about the gap between lower difficulties? I think normal~hard is kinda big compared to easy~normal
   
   I think that this will probably not be a big problem hehe :3
2. btw nice bg :3
   i think too

[Easy]

1. 00:03:311 (3) - move to x:384, y:64, it seems weird while playing. Also isn't a consistent DS between 00:01:999 (1,2) - and them
   I think that there is no problem because SV is unified with 1.0 Keep
2. 00:04:999 (4) - NC here considering it's a pass between section change :p
   I did not put NC in here so that beginners do not miss the objects in the remote place. keep
3. 00:06:499 - I feel this section kinda dense compared to the others one. Maybe you can make a break between some notes or idk :p
   I think there is no problem. keep
4. 00:07:624 (2) - similar comment to the first one; move to 216, 236
   I will not change it because the blanket will collapse.
5. 00:07:999 (3) - i'm not sure about this but I think reverse sliders aren't the best way on Easy diff
   keep
6. 00:12:499 (1) - ^
   keep
7. 00:12:124 (4) - same comment about others... 308,84.
   I think it's repeated through the song so I'm gonna skip them because I don't want to tell the same everytime xD
   I would like to keep it if possible.
8. 00:15:499 - idk what are you following here D: I think here you have two options: Keep following the trumpet or change to the drum to make the section change. I think you should follow the trumpet by using a large note because it's an Easy diff and drum should be really hard to map
   It fits the piano sound.
9. 00:29:749 (4) - I think this slider doesn't fill good here. try using a 2/1 slider instead 4/1 then a circle, sounds nice
   Adopt 1/1 slider to match the sound of the trumpet. I would like to change if there is the same indication from others.
10. 00:33:499 - Here... this slider sounds strange. You're kind of following the vocal and it's overextended. Try making it shorter .
    I would like to change if there is the same indication from others. keep
11. 00:34:999 (2) - according to the comment ahead this little sections seems weird
    keep
12. 00:40:999 (3,3) - similar comment about reverse sliders, as I said i'm not sure :c
    well it comes through the whole song too xD
    keep XD
13. 01:16:999 (3) - this slider becomes... strange according that what you're following on kiai
    keep
14. http://puu.sh/vSzpH/4c0ef2323a.png 01:21:499 - applies here D:
    I could not understand. We will respond to Japanese questions!
    sry my noob english
15. 01:31:999 (1) - hmmm I don't like this slider even it's easy to follow, but it seems a little hard on a first view
    sir yes sir ! fix
16. 01:46:999 (1) - what about making a decrease volume through this spinner? sounds fine
    I could not understand. We will respond to Japanese questions!

[Normal]

1. I think using CS 3 and AR 5 should be better according to the song, it's more slight imo... just suggesting
   I would like to keep it
2. I keep wondering why your notes are on strange positions... same as Easy D:
3. since you're following guitar I think a note here: 00:03:124 - is kinda neccesary, try this pattern maybe: http://puu.sh/vSzC8/10ba6ef0e0.jpg
   I left this place on purpose :3
4. Also as I said on easy, you got more breaks in this diff than the Easy one... seems strange :/ 00:07:811 - 00:08:561 - for example
   I think there is no problem :3
5. 00:33:499 - This section feels strange since you're following vocal here and there's a 00:34:999 - long sound imo... well same as Easy
   It is 00: 34: 811 because the sound of the vocal is strong, so I will keep it
6. 00:56:186 (1) - NC here
   fix
7. 01:04:436 (1) - ^ probably since you're not still doing more than 6 notes combo
   Keep it
8. 01:10:436 (3) - ^
   ^
9. Also, you should start the spinner here: 01:19:811 - as you did on Easy diff
   01: 19: 811 (5) - I think that it is correct as there is a sound of a vocal
10. 01:25:249 (4) - this slider doesn't seem... beautiful :c not like other you have did
    well same comment about the spinner as Easy xD
    anyways it's kinda good imo
    hmmmm Keep

well that's all for me, sorry for not modding hard and expert :c good luck with it! nice song and map <3~

• [Hard]

1. 00:12:405 - そこまでBPMも早くないしこういう所にも音あっていいと思います
2. 00:18:030 - ^
3. 00:34:811 (1) - ワシなら 00:34:811 (1,2,3) - を３角形になるように配置してるな
4. 00:48:405 - ここも音ありっぽい？
5. 00:49:811 (1) - ここ00:49:624 (4) - との重なりが微妙だからもっと離すか重ねるかはっきりさせたほうがいいと思う 俺は重ねるほうが好き→https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8108907
6. 00:50:374 (2) - Add Clapだと思う
7. 00:51:405 - ^
8. 00:51:499 (1) - ここもAdd Clap感
9. 00:57:124 (4) - ここリバーススライダーで連打音に合わせたほうがいいと思う 三角捨てることになるけど
10. 01:09:499 (1) - 01:10:061 (2) - このスライダーエンドと微妙にくっついてるの少しかっこ悪いかも
11. 01:40:249 (3,4) - ここ曲に合わせてこんな感じかな（謎）→https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8108939
12. 01:46:811 (5) - ここ距離変わってるのわざとならNC付けたほうがいいのかなぁ…少し気になっただけだから無視して（）

• [Expert]

1. なんでInsaneじゃないんやって思ったら元ネタのゲームに従ってるのか
2. 00:03:874 (7,8) - 00:03:874 (7,8) - のスライダーエンドからの距離合わせるべきだと思う →https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8108958
3. 00:06:124 (5) - やっぱり…こう…こうじゃない？
   語彙力のNASA

   
4. 00:20:749 (3,4,5) - 距離合わせたい
5. 00:51:499 (1) - Add clap?
6. 01:06:311 - 気持ちよく叩いてたら音なくなったからびっくりした ワシならこうします→https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8109090
7. 01:19:061 (4,5) - ここ結構静かなところだから音とるのも最小限のほうがいいと思う
   こんな感じ

   
8. 01:22:905 - 音欲しいな
9. 01:28:249 (4,5,1,2) - この流れめっちゃすこ！！
10. 01:43:530 - ここも音ほしい
11. すごくナイス

• [Gaia's Expert]

1. sorry, nothing to say. It's GOD

_kotachi_ wrote:

hi クドス貰いに来ました
クソModですが足しにしてくれたら幸いです
Generalわかりません

• [Hard]

1. 00:12:405 - そこまでBPMも早くないしこういう所にも音あっていいと思います
   Expertとの差異を作りたかったのでKeep
2. 00:18:030 - ^
   Ex(ry
3. 00:34:811 (1) - ワシなら 00:34:811 (1,2,3) - を３角形になるように配置してるな
   今の形好きだから残したい！他の人から変更の指摘があった場合参考にさせてもらいます！
4. 00:48:405 - ここも音ありっぽい？
   E(ry
5. 00:49:811 (1) - ここ00:49:624 (4) - との重なりが微妙だからもっと離すか重ねるかはっきりさせたほうがいいと思う 俺は重ねるほうが好き→https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8108907
   重ねる方向で変更を加えました Fix
6. 00:50:374 (2) - Add Clapだと思う
   サーイエスサー
7. 00:51:405 - ^
   サーイエスサー(音量150)
8. 00:51:499 (1) - ここもAdd Clap感
   サーイエスサー(音量200)
9. 00:57:124 (4) - ここリバーススライダーで連打音に合わせたほうがいいと思う 三角捨てることになるけど
   この形残したいです keep
10. 01:09:499 (1) - 01:10:061 (2) - このスライダーエンドと微妙にくっついてるの少しかっこ悪いかも
    たしかに　Fix
11. 01:40:249 (3,4) - ここ曲に合わせてこんな感じかな（謎）→https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8108939
    fix
12. 01:46:811 (5) - ここ距離変わってるのわざとならNC付けたほうがいいのかなぁ…少し気になっただけだから無視して（）
    とりあえず維持マン

• 
  [Expert]

1. なんでInsaneじゃないんやって思ったら元ネタのゲームに従ってるのか
   そうだよ(便乗)
2. 00:03:874 (7,8) - 00:03:874 (7,8) - のスライダーエンドからの距離合わせるべきだと思う →https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8108958
   わかる fix
3. 00:06:124 (5) - やっぱり…こう…こうじゃない？
   語彙力のNASA

   
   んー！これはこのままで通したい・・・！ 「Unrankableです」って突っぱねられたら変えます Keep
4. 00:20:749 (3,4,5) - 距離合わせたい
   なんで離れてたのか自分でもわからない \o/ Fix
5. 00:51:499 (1) - Add clap?
   Fix
6. 01:06:311 - 気持ちよく叩いてたら音なくなったからびっくりした ワシならこうします→https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8109090
   自分なりに似たような形で変えてみました fix
7. 01:19:061 (4,5) - ここ結構静かなところだから音とるのも最小限のほうがいいと思う
   こんな感じ

   
   素直にFixです。最近のこたちさんには(略
8. 01:22:905 - 音欲しいな
   願わくばこのままでいきたいので一旦keep
9. 01:28:249 (4,5,1,2) - この流れめっちゃすこ！！
   個人的に一番気に入ってる
10. 01:43:530 - ここも音ほしい
    ここ取るならタムロールに合わせてそれ以前からストリームにするとか色々変わっていってしまいそう・・・
    控えめな音取りを意識したいのでKeepさせて下さいお願いします なんでもはしません
11. すごくナイス
    この曲がなかったら今頃ホームレスになってる

(PPくれそうだから）Rank頑張ってください！
GL!

Sakurauchi Riko wrote:

Hello!!

expert
00:16:624 (1,2) - this spacing should be higher than 00:16:061 (1,2) - and before, because 00:16:811 (2) - is much stronger sound so increasing DS here would fit better
I thought that it was right . fix
00:18:311 (4,1) - the same applies here, i think this should be higher spacing because 00:18:499 (1) - is emphasized and its the beginning of a new section
Fix
00:18:030 - missing 1/4 sound here. you did miss some before aswell but there you had a reason to because you emphasized a different sound. for 00:18:030 - however, i dont think you have anything else emphasized that would justify skipping this sound, so you should map it imo
ah okay fix
00:22:999 - i know you want to focus on the vocal here but this is such a strong sound, i think a reverse 1/2 slider (so the reverse arrow covers this sound) would fit better, that way you still have the emphasis on the vocal but you keep mapping the sound at 00:22:999 -
It is a splendid idea, but wants to keep the present form
00:27:686 - from here the music changes (you hear the new sound upcoming) and it gets more intense, i think if you increase the overall spacing here until 00:28:811 - (after this you did increase the spacing which is what i want you to do before aswell) it would fit better the music
Keep
00:56:373 (2,1) - i would make this overlap with the spacing you have in the stream, so it looks a bit cleaner http://puu.sh/vSZTE/b789836d4b.jpg
Nice idea <3 Fix
01:22:999 (1,2,3,4) - this looks a bit unstructured, I think a symmetrical pattern works really well here because all objects represent an equal vocal sound. an example would be http://puu.sh/vT041/9957b4bc61.jpg or if you want to emphasize the bit stronger vocal at 01:23:749 - , http://puu.sh/vT0aq/f0af3f99a0.jpg would work aswell (i'd personally prefer this one :3)
I receive former suggestion . thanks ! fix
01:31:249 (3,4) - can be a little bit farther away from 01:30:499 (1,2) - because the vocal at 3 is slightly stronger (the same thing i mentioned right above)
I want to maintain these four flows

hard
00:19:624 (4,5,6,7) - how about a bit more organised pattern like http://puu.sh/vT0ml/d0c978a44b.jpg ? your current placement has something similar to this so i'd just make it stacking and blanket'ing for the sake of more structure
JUSTICEXD fix
00:39:499 (1) - this itself has no special emphasis that would justify your ds increase imo. think your default DS fits better because you only use increased DS for strong sounds
I have committed what mistake ... I reflect ;w; fix
00:42:499 (1) - i would rather increase the DS here because this has a special sound
fix
00:46:061 (2,4) - the reverse arrow gets much overlapped here which is not good in general
fix
00:54:499 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - these are pretty similar to 00:15:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . i understand that they are stronger but i would just map with your default ds (1.20x) instead of increased ds. the transition would be enough in that way imo. same applies for 01:43:999 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - of course
OK
01:07:811 (5,7) - this unintended overlap is meh >.>
RIP ME fix

really good hard difficulty
wow thanks


normal
00:11:749 (2) - ctrl + g on this would be better for flow
OK
01:16:811 (3,4,5) - why wou suddenly stack this here? you have spacing before and after at for example 00:49:999 (3,4,5) - 01:30:499 (3,4,5) - . i think you should do either one, stack or spacing, consistently to be straightforward
I changed a flow nice!! fix
01:43:436 (5,1) - this is uncomfortable and might be confusing for newer players, you should do these overlaps always in the flow direction of the slider. http://puu.sh/vT1pw/4bb1e2f003.jpg would already fix this issue
Good idea fix

anything else looks really clean
I become more beautiful by your advice <3


easy
00:09:499 (1,3) - im not 100% sure but this might be an issue. An easy difficulty should be very straigthforward and everything that might be confusing should be avoided. this overlap is clean, strucutred and all but its not most straightforward.. I'd rather avoid this but maybe you can get through with this XD
I maintain the present form :3
00:23:749 (3,1) - like this is already questionable but its fine 100%, 00:24:499 (1,3) - however again is not appropriate for Easy....
Because Google translation was stupid, it was not able to be understood. I maintain it. I'm sorry!
00:51:499 (1) - this angle of the slidershape is too harsh for easy, i would do something like http://puu.sh/vT1Ni/0e41e4a46a.jpg so its more straightforward
fix
01:05:749 (3,2) - slight overlap i personally dislike >.>
Sir yes sir XD fix
01:19:811 (1,1) - i think this is an unrankable issue, from what i know in Easy difficulty you must have 1 measure (so 4x 1/1 beats) gap between spinnerend and next object. however, this is way too quick to react for the player, its just a 1 and 1/2 beat gap between end and next object
I deleted the spinner


nothing else to mention here, im just a bit concerned about the huge overlaps...


really like the song and the map aswell, hope you can make your way to get this ranked
thats it for me, I hope i was helpful :3
maybe next time i can mod in japanese <.<

good luck in further progress!!

1. ｴﾛｽｷﾞ
   

1. ODとHP 2に下げてえええ
2. 00:04:999 (4) - これだけど00:01:999 (1,2,3) - のパターンはそれなりに長かったからNC入れていいかも
3. 00:12:499 (1,2) - DS微妙にｵｶｼｲぞ
4. 00:16:624 (2,3) - シンバルいやなところにあるなあ・・・プレイ的だと00:16:624 (2) - を2/1にした方がいいかも、あと置き方についてだけどもし2/1入れるならこーゆー入れ方してみたらどうかな？00:13:999 (3) - との overlap避けられますよ！ http://puu.sh/vTTJQ/273a458a2f.jpg
5. 00:22:999 (2,3) - クソ細かいけど(2) = 10|338 (3) = 186|343に動かした方がキレイに見えるよ。細かい男はモテないゾ

1. 00:10:999 (1) - NC多分いらない
2. 00:19:249 (2) - 初心者だとケツの所叩いちゃうから方向変えようね☆http://puu.sh/vTUwV/e0a316cee9.jpg
3. Consistencyとかいうヤツで00:46:999 (2) - にNC入れるか00:43:999 (1) - にNC外すか決めといてね～
4. 01:02:749 (5) - 01:14:749 (5) - こちらもまたケツの話題
5. 01:19:999 (1,1) - Unrankable, bpmはやや低めだがアウトだぞ☆短くてもせめて2/1くらい隙間がなきゃいけないとかBNが言ってた

1. 00:20:749 (7,1) - overlapがががががが
2. 01:15:499 (1) - finish付いてるのでspacing広げてもいいかも
3. 01:33:686 (1,2,3) - 1/4入れるんだったら前のパーツにも欲しかったなあ・・・00:30:311 (5,1) - 00:48:311 (7,1) - とか普通に3連打置いてもおかしくないと思うのだが

1. HP7.5こっわｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
2. 00:30:405 (7) - clap
3. 00:41:936 (4) - ここ普通に1/2のジャンプ入れていいかも、ドラムとか強く鳴ってるからおかしくないはず
4. 01:22:999 (1,2,3,4) - DS付けて☆
5. 01:28:905 - 強く鳴ってるし高難易度だから拾ってもいいかも
6. 01:42:499 (1,2) - これだけど00:13:999 (1,2) - のコピペみたいになってるけど2番目は1/2と1/4にも激しい音鳴ってるから変えた方がいいと思います

1. 00:22:811 (6) - maybe removing whistle here sounds better
2. 01:20:842 - remove custom break?
3. 01:46:624 (3,4) - you can boost the spacing here as it has kinda same intensity with 00:18:124 (7,8,1) -

Akitoshi wrote:

淫夢は君の嘘めっちゃ泣けたなあ～
2017年アカデミー賞
General

1. ｴﾛｽｷﾞ
   

これ陰部と勘違いされないか心配してるんすよねぇ(大嘘)
Easy

1. ODとHP 2に下げてえええ
   了解！
2. 00:04:999 (4) - これだけど00:01:999 (1,2,3) - のパターンはそれなりに長かったからNC入れていいかも
   入れました
3. 00:12:499 (1,2) - DS微妙にｵｶｼｲぞ
   新婚だったら確実にストレスで流産してる　Fix
4. 00:16:624 (2,3) - シンバルいやなところにあるなあ・・・プレイ的だと00:16:624 (2) - を2/1にした方がいいかも、あと置き方についてだけどもし2/1入れるならこーゆー入れ方してみたらどうかな？00:13:999 (3) - との overlap避けられますよ！ http://puu.sh/vTTJQ/273a458a2f.jpg
   OK!
5. 00:22:999 (2,3) - クソ細かいけど(2) = 10|338 (3) = 186|343に動かした方がキレイに見えるよ。細かい男はモテないゾ

この細かさはモテますわ～（媚び

文句なしのALL Fixでフィニッシュです \o/
あ、まだいっぱい下にあるやんけ！！

Normal

1. 00:10:999 (1) - NC多分いらない
   イエスサー
2. 00:19:249 (2) - 初心者だとケツの所叩いちゃうから方向変えようね☆http://puu.sh/vTUwV/e0a316cee9.jpg
   たしかにこれは優しくない… 修正しました
3. Consistencyとかいうヤツで00:46:999 (2) - にNC入れるか00:43:999 (1) - にNC外すか決めといてね～
   あぁぁぁシスコンにしかみえないNC増やしました
4. 01:02:749 (5) - 01:14:749 (5) - こちらもまたケツの話題
   イェス　ホモ
5. 01:19:999 (1,1) - Unrankable, bpmはやや低めだがアウトだぞ☆短くてもせめて2/1くらい隙間がなきゃいけないとかBNが言ってた
   fix

Hard

1. 00:20:749 (7,1) - overlapがががががが
   せこい直し方した←
2. 01:15:499 (1) - finish付いてるのでspacing広げてもいいかも
   自分が入れた修正が正しいかわからないけど今後のMODで再び変わりそう　ええいfix!! (ゴリ押し)
3. 01:33:686 (1,2,3) - 1/4入れるんだったら前のパーツにも欲しかったなあ・・・00:30:311 (5,1) - 00:48:311 (7,1) - とか普通に3連打置いてもおかしくないと思うのだが
   やはり3連打あるべきか　OK！

Expert

1. HP7.5こっわｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
   私は10でも一向に構わん（超池沼） 7に下げました！
   
2. 00:30:405 (7) - clap
   OK
3. 00:41:936 (4) - ここ普通に1/2のジャンプ入れていいかも、ドラムとか強く鳴ってるからおかしくないはず
   それっぽいものいれてみたけど自信がないので後日In Game Chatで再度聞きます
4. 01:22:999 (1,2,3,4) - DS付けて☆
   はぁい☆
5. 01:28:905 - 強く鳴ってるし高難易度だから拾ってもいいかも
   次のスライダーにCirclrスタックさせてみた
6. 01:42:499 (1,2) - これだけど00:13:999 (1,2) - のコピペみたいになってるけど2番目は1/2と1/4にも激しい音鳴ってるから変えた方がいいと思います
   fox

good luck~

1. 00:04:730 - ここからドラムの音が聴こえるので 00:04:543 (5) - これを1/2にして00:04:824 - ここに１つサークル入れても良いかもしれません
2. 00:06:980 (2,3,4,1,2) - 自分だったらこういう音取りにしたいかも
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:13:918 (1,2) - 2を上に流すとちょっと流れが悪く感じたので00:13:543 (4) - これにスタックさせる等はどうでしょう
4. 00:16:355 (2,3) - ちょっと3がくっつきすぎな気がしたのでDS1.8ぐらいで離すと綺麗かも？
5. 00:42:980 (3) - 細かいけどブランケット綺麗にできるかも
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:43:918 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ここも自分だったらこうしたいかなあ～
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:52:918 (1,2,1,2,1) - ここまで綺麗に並べられてるので00:54:230 (2) - これもそれに沿ってx:98 y:379に移動させてみてはどうでしょう
8. 01:21:324 - 結構強めのドラムが聴こえるので01:27:324 (6,1) - ここみたいに01:21:324 - サークル追加しても良いかもしれません
9. 01:38:668 (4) - ドラムの音的にこういうのもありかな？
   SPOILER

   

Settia wrote:

低難易度は全然わからないのと英語ダメダメなのでexpertだけ思ったこと書きます@
やったぁ！日本語MODだ！！！！
[Expert]

1. 00:04:730 - ここからドラムの音が聴こえるので 00:04:543 (5) - これを1/2にして00:04:824 - ここに１つサークル入れても良いかもしれません
   OK
2. 00:06:980 (2,3,4,1,2) - 自分だったらこういう音取りにしたいかも
   SPOILER

   
   00:07:933 (1) - からトランペットの音が伸び直してる感じに聞こえるのでここはKeepさせて下さい
3. 00:13:918 (1,2) - 2を上に流すとちょっと流れが悪く感じたので00:13:543 (4) - これにスタックさせる等はどうでしょう
   変えてみました
4. 00:16:355 (2,3) - ちょっと3がくっつきすぎな気がしたのでDS1.8ぐらいで離すと綺麗かも？
   すごくスッキリしました nice!
5. 00:42:980 (3) - 細かいけどブランケット綺麗にできるかも
   SPOILER

   
   微調整しました
6. 00:43:918 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ここも自分だったらこうしたいかなあ～
   SPOILER

   
   ギターの鳴きに合ってるから現状このまま通したいと思います
7. 00:52:918 (1,2,1,2,1) - ここまで綺麗に並べられてるので00:54:230 (2) - これもそれに沿ってx:98 y:379に移動させてみてはどうでしょう
   OK!
8. 01:21:324 - 結構強めのドラムが聴こえるので01:27:324 (6,1) - ここみたいに01:21:324 - サークル追加しても良いかもしれません
   たしかにこっちだけ拾えてないとヘンですね…OK！
9. 01:38:668 (4) - ドラムの音的にこういうのもありかな？
   SPOILER

   
   もらいます！

オフセットがズレてるような気がしました。+15~20ぐらいが丁度いいかな？
RIP MP3

以上modクソ初心者のmodでした。

wkdalstn29 wrote:

m4m from modreqs.
I'm not good at first, but I'll do my best.
(expert)
00:14:120 - I'd like the position 2 to overlap the next one.
OK
00:18:433 (1) - This slide is positioned too high.
Because I want to maintain a snap, I keep it
01:09:995 (3) - I hope this slide overlaps with circle 2.
I don't want to change the flow , Keep it
01:16:745 (1) - I want this circle to come in front of the slide
OK
I was not good at it for the first time, but thank you for taking a look.

-Yuzuriha wrote:

from pm

General

BGのサイズを確認してください。
osuの基本解像度に合わせると、4:3なので、1920 1080の背景では合いません
4:3の解像度に直すか、新しいBGを探してきてください
他にもいくつか指摘がある場合DQされる恐れがあります
大丈夫らしいです Keep

Easy

00:40:558 (4,1) - 後ろにシンバルが鳴っていて、finishをつけるのはわかるのですが、
ほぼ同じ音量のfinishが２つ並ぶのは、プレイしていて違和感があります。
どちらかを別の種類のfinishにするか、音量を20~30ほどずらして全く同じfinishではないようにしましょう
他にもいくかこういうのが見られたので修正しておきましょう
修正しました \o/

Normal

00:13:370 (5) - 最初と最後の音はかなり強い音なのでスライダーの尾でつぶすのはもったいないです
noteを置いて強い音があるということを強調しましょう
00:13:933 (1) - がより強い音だと思うのでKeepしたいです

Hard

00:12:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - リズムに違和感があります
まず、どこに音があるのかを確認します。noteだけを使って音をとります
するとこのようになります
https://gyazo.com/2cca6387bd99d4e732cc6d9187cb5193
次に、空いた場所をスライダーでカバーします。
するとこのようになります
https://gyazo.com/31dcd92ed9cb57ad062619a177d0f0b0
難しいリズムやわからないところはこういった手順でリズムを作ってゆくとよいでしょう
わかりやすい解説ありがとうございます！直しました :3
00:33:995 (3,1) - 　この１と３の重なり方はもやもやする違和感です
推奨しません。　この場合はきちんとはなしたほうが良いと思いますよ
横に逃しました XD
00:39:245 (5) - 　ここから３連打かな？
トランペットの方がここの周りでは強く主張されていると思ったのでKeepしたいです
が、同じ指摘があった場合には変更しようと思います
00:41:683 (3) - 　00:43:558 (4) - 　このように最後にnoteを置くパターンが多いので、スライダーのほうを調整するべきだと思いました
こんな感じ
https://gyazo.com/bd2cbc147e78b371318ad971b9eb9741
OK!

00:45:058 (3) - 　上すぎてたぶんこれアウトです
別の方向に逃しました :3
00:52:933 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 　finishだけではものたりないので、whistleも追加してみてはどうでしょうか
こっそり追加しました
00:56:495 (3,1) - 　重なりが不自然
Blanketで別のFlowにします！
01:11:870 (4) - 　音が大きい単発歌詞なので、note２つ stackさせてもいいかもしれません
個人的な好みでここはスライダーを維持して次の1/1スライダーをより強いものに見せたいと思います
01:13:183 (3,4,3) - 　いろんなものが不自然に重なってます
01:14:308 (2,3) - を01:13:558 (4) - の終点に…これって解決するんですかね？

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mod は以上です。

イージー　ノーマル　ハードの配置はとても丁寧で、一つのまとが、もう一つまとと互換性があるようで私は結構好きでした。

頑張ればrankedいけると思うのでファイトですー

Gaia wrote:

xfraczynho

xfraczynho wrote:

hi! m4m from modreqs! remember these are all suggestions

[General]

1. What about the gap between lower difficulties? I think normal~hard is kinda big compared to easy~normal
2. btw nice bg :3

[Gaia's Expert]

• 
  well this diff seems really good just a little comments that maybe could help
  omg the new mp3 so idk if i'm looking at the right things xD

1. 00:41:561 (4,5) - I think the space betweem them is kinda too short according to song increase pitch and compared to 00:41:936 (6,7,8) -. You could try moving 00:41:749 (5) - to x200,y328 and it makes a great jump between them dont really think this suits a jump
2. 01:14:936 (5) - this stream doesn't feel good at playing, maybe try spacing the 01:15:124 (1,2,3,4,1) - a little more and isn't consistent with space between them
3. 01:19:905 - what about adding the spinner here? I mean since he used on owner difficulties i like the break

well that's all for me, sorry for not modding hard and expert :c good luck with it! nice song and map <3~

Akitoshi

Akitoshi wrote:

re-pointing for gaia due to mp3 changes what a legend

00:21:245 (6) - maybe removing whistle here sounds better
01:45:058 (3,4) - you can boost the spacing here as it has kinda same intensity with 00:16:558 (7,8,1) - kinda wanted an antijump ish feeling to emphasize the ending o/
the break was fixed wW

nokds

thx for mods! no reply are fixed~

✂

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132,152,46839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,152,46933,6,0,P|85:163|28:172,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,40,47308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,240,47495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,112,47683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,148,47870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,48058,2,0,P|392:115|436:125,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,264,48433,5,2,0:0:0:0:
372,216,48620,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,44,48808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,304,48995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,140,49183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,168,49370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,328,49558,2,0,P|412:338|464:344,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,304,49839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,304,49933,5,4,0:0:0:0:
272,272,50120,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,152,50308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,280,50495,2,0,P|192:289|124:300,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,156,50870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,200,51058,2,0,P|361:248|376:320,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,148,51433,5,2,0:0:0:0:
440,164,51620,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,128,51808,2,0,L|204:16,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
204,16,52089,1,8,0:3:0:0:
204,16,52183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,88,52370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,168,52558,2,0,P|36:244|56:272,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,324,52933,5,12,0:0:0:0:
128,76,53120,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,164,53308,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,268,53495,5,8,0:0:0:0:
364,304,53683,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,148,53870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,360,54058,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,60,54245,2,0,P|260:20|352:56,1,148.50000453186,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,56,54620,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,272,54808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,152,54995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,128,55183,1,12,0:0:0:0:
216,260,55370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,264,55464,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,268,55558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,272,55651,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,276,55745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,280,55839,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,284,55933,5,4,0:0:0:0:
152,152,56120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,368,56308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,176,56495,2,0,P|313:116|316:64,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,264,56870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,208,57058,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,152,57245,6,0,B|108:120|32:116|32:116|28:56|96:44,1,215.999993408203,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,244,57808,2,0,L|100:356,1,107.999996704102,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,172,58183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,58370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,136,58558,2,0,P|284:194|272:268,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,40,58933,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,144,59120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,268,59308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,28,59495,2,0,P|390:32|452:40,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,242,59870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,120,60058,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,144,60245,6,0,B|440:208|416:292|416:292|380:272|336:288,1,215.999993408203,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,172,60808,2,0,B|128:108|152:24|152:24|188:44|208:35,1,215.999993408203,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,56,61370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,242,61558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,56,61745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,56,61839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,56,61933,5,4,0:0:0:0:
408,160,62120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,184,62308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,280,62495,2,0,P|412:293|476:304,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,188,62870,2,0,P|74:197|22:210,1,107.999996704102,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,340,63245,6,0,B|208:236|288:236|240:120,1,215.999993408203,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,20,63808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,184,63995,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,56,64183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,124,64370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,40,64558,2,0,L|376:60,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,192,64933,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,168,65120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,40,65308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,264,65495,2,0,B|265:273|188:284|188:284|179:318|156:352,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,144,66058,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,156,66245,6,0,B|388:140|428:180|428:180|476:100|412:52,1,215.999993408203,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,32,66808,1,6,0:0:0:0:
252,228,66995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,180,67183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,112,67370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,48,67558,1,14,0:0:0:0:
240,256,67745,1,10,0:0:0:0:
288,56,67933,5,4,0:0:0:0:
336,192,68120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,128,68308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,288,68495,2,0,P|316:228|436:248,1,215.999993408203,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,72,69058,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,192,69245,6,0,B|184:216|184:216|167:190|140:152,1,215.999993408203,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,28,69808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,240,69995,2,0,P|101:296|108:352,1,107.999996704102,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,124,70370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,124,70558,2,0,P|238:70|251:18,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,100,70933,5,6,0:0:0:0:
296,240,71120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,144,71308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
405,132,71495,2,0,P|413:203|425:264,1,107.999996704102,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,376,71870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,176,72058,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,276,72245,6,0,B|216:316|140:284|140:284|128:236|180:196,1,215.999993408203,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,56,72808,2,0,P|256:52|176:40,1,107.999996704102,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,40,73089,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,40,73183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,168,73370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,164,73464,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,160,73558,5,8,0:3:0:0:
380,152,73651,1,8,0:3:0:0:
388,144,73745,1,8,0:3:0:0:
396,132,73839,1,8,0:3:0:0:
404,124,73933,5,4,0:0:0:0:
268,72,74120,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,276,74308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,156,74495,2,0,P|118:144|52:136,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,288,74870,2,0,P|349:281|402:268,1,107.999996704102,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,184,75151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,184,75245,6,0,P|479:130|492:72,1,107.999996704102,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,164,75620,1,6,0:0:0:0:
468,344,75808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,164,75995,2,0,B|335:96|300:60|300:60|308:0|368:-8,1,215.999993408203,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,168,76558,2,0,P|192:184|152:192,1,53.9999983520508,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,148,76745,5,6,2:2:0:0:
12,152,79933,6,0,P|42:156|84:180,1,58.4999973220826,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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188,192,80495,6,0,P|218:187|268:176,1,58.4999973220826,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,108,80683,2,0,L|284:68,3,36,2|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,196,81058,6,0,P|372:203|404:204,1,58.4999973220826,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,160,81245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,160,81339,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,160,81433,6,0,P|484:221|476:280,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,60,81808,2,0,P|449:41|516:24,1,107.999996704102,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,52,82183,2,0,P|200:44|128:24,1,107.999996704102,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,192,82558,2,0,P|200:245|212:328,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,192,82933,6,0,P|16:128|152:56,1,215.999993408203,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,144,83495,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,176,83683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,24,83870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,168,84058,2,0,P|318:223|312:288,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,352,84433,5,2,0:0:0:0:
188,192,84620,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,352,84808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,280,84995,2,0,B|476:248|476:248|436:224|424:184,1,215.999993408203,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,52,85558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,168,85745,6,0,P|282:163|208:152,1,107.999996704102,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,88,86120,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,48,86308,2,0,P|344:36|412:24,1,107.999996704102,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,52,86589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,52,86683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,184,86870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,32,87058,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,252,87245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,264,87339,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,280,87433,6,0,P|256:288|320:300,1,107.999996704102,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,148,87808,2,0,P|153:138|206:132,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
493,94,88183,2,0,P|461:174|341:182,1,215.999993408203,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,44,88745,6,0,B|276:0|276:0|244:160,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,312,89308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,224,89495,2,0,B|4:184|24:96|24:96|64:120|104:120,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,0,90058,2,0,P|218:10|160:16,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,156,90433,5,12,0:0:0:0:
488,52,90620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,28,90808,1,12,0:0:0:0:
304,284,90995,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,128,91183,1,12,0:0:0:0:
188,188,91370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,228,91558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,72,91745,6,0,P|88:96|92:236,1,215.999993408203,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,276,92214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,276,92308,2,0,P|174:287|200:292,3,53.9999983520508,8|2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,212,92683,2,0,P|295:203|324:200,3,53.9999983520508,10|2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,252,93058,2,0,P|455:266|480:280,1,53.9999983520508,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,152,93245,2,0,P|480:140|520:132,1,53.9999983520508,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,96,93433,5,4,0:0:0:0:
340,296,93620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,93808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,172,93995,2,0,P|168:216|175:260,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,76,94370,2,0,L|196:48,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,292,94745,6,0,P|278:284|136:276,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,188,95308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,200,95495,2,0,P|361:187|400:164,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,32,95870,2,0,P|206:70|216:148,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,292,96245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,368,96433,6,0,P|97:280|104:176,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,96995,2,0,P|368:217|412:224,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,88,97370,2,0,P|78:92|12:116,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,256,97745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,112,97933,6,0,B|308:40|272:-8|272:-8|216:48,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,167,98495,2,0,P|138:218|154:275,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,280,98776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,280,98870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,312,99058,2,0,P|394:268|401:223,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,88,99433,6,0,P|412:95|472:104,1,90,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,200,99808,2,0,P|260:193|305:187,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,52,100183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,176,100370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,44,100558,2,0,P|207:48|264:60,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,196,100933,5,4,0:0:0:0:
184,136,101120,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,280,101308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,280,101401,1,8,0:3:0:0:
280,280,101495,1,8,0:3:0:0:
360,88,101683,2,0,P|404:80|452:76,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,101964,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,96,102058,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,212,102245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,44,102433,5,12,0:0:0:0:
284,320,102620,1,12,0:0:0:0:
392,196,102808,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,216,102995,5,12,0:0:0:0:
292,32,103183,1,12,0:0:0:0:
376,212,103370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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376,212,103558,5,12,0:0:0:0:
48,348,103745,1,12,0:0:0:0:
104,184,103933,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,340,104120,5,12,0:0:0:0:
212,56,104308,1,12,0:0:0:0:
192,236,104495,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,236,104589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,236,104683,5,8,0:0:0:0:
296,132,104870,1,8,0:3:0:0:
112,92,105058,1,6,0:0:0:0:
188,200,105245,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105339,12,0,111433,0:0:0:0:

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General

1. 同じタイミングにおいてVolumeが違う線が２本以上あるのはunrankableです。全diffそうなってるので確認してみてください。
   また、赤線の上に緑線を重ねることができるのはSVが1.00以外の時にしか認められてないので、ENHは緑線自体を消したほうがいいでしょう
   

ENHの該当する緑線を削除しました Expertにおいては音量を統一しました \o/

Hitsound

Hitsound

1. Expertのdiffでhitsoundをみてます、もし参考になったならほかの難易度にも調整してみてください。
2. 00:03:995 - 00:04:745 - 00:04:839 - 00:05:870 - 00:07:183 - add whistle fix
3. 00:10:745 (5,6) - add whistle or clap? clapにしました
4. 00:12:995 - remove whistle? fix
5. 00:13:370 (3) - 00:16:183 - 00:16:558 - 00:16:745 - 個人的にはwhistleよりサンプルセットドラムfinishのほうが好きです fix
6. 00:13:933 - 00:14:120 - 00:14:495 - 00:14:683 - add whistle? fix
7. 00:15:245 - 00:15:058 - 1/2でfinishが鳴るのは少しnoisyなので実際になっている00:15:245 - だけでどうでしょう。それに00:15:058 - add whistle fix
8. 00:16:464 - add clap? 00:16:558 - はwhistleのほうがあってるかもしれないです fix
9. 00:39:808 - 00:40:558 - add finish? fix
10. 00:40:183 - add whistle? fix
11. 00:40:370 - 00:40:558 - add clap? fix
12. 00:40:745 - add whistle or clap? whistle fix
13. 00:43:370 - 個人的にはサンプルセットドラムclapです fix
14. 00:43:745 - add whistle? fix
15. 00:44:308 - 00:44:683 - 個人的にはサンプルセットドラムwhistleです fix
16. 00:45:995 - add finish? fix
17. 00:46:745 (5) - と合わせるなら00:46:839 - にadd clapです。fix
18. 00:47:870 - 00:49:370 - add whistle? fix
19. 00:50:308 - clap fix
20. 00:50:870 - whistle? fix
21. 00:51:995 - 00:52:370 - add sample set drum finish? fix ここすごく気に入りました
22. 00:52:933 - 00:53:120 - 00:53:495 - 00:53:683 - 00:54:058 - 00:54:245 - add whistle fix
23. 00:53:495 - と00:53:683 - のfinishは入れ替えたほうがいいでしょう。シンバルはなってないので個人的には入れないですが、シンバルならすことでボーカルを強調させたいなら00:53:683 - に入れたほうが自然です fix 入れ替えました\o/
24. 00:54:058 - 00:54:808 - remove Finish?さすがにシンバルが続いてて少しnoisyに感じます fix
25. 00:54:808 - 00:54:995 - add whistle? fix
26. 01:00:245 - add finish?ボーカル強調したいなら入れてもいいかもしれません 強くなりました fix
27. 01:01:839 - add clap? fix
28. 01:04:183 - 01:04:370 - add whistle? fix
29. 01:06:808 - up beatなのでwhistleではなくclap？これは業の深いミスですね… fix
30. 01:07:558 - add clap? fix
31. 01:07:745 - whistle? fix
32. 01:10:933 - 01:11:495 - 01:12:245 - 01:15:995 - add finish? ほかのと比べると少し弱めのシンバルですがボーカルは強く出てるのでおいても不自然ではないかもしれません 強くなりました fix
33. 01:13:933 - 01:14:495 - swap finish?曲だと01:14:495 - のほうがシンバルはなっています。fix
34. 01:13:183 - 01:13:183 - clapではなくwhistle? fix
35. 01:13:089 - 01:13:464 - clap? fix
36. 01:13:464 - 01:13:089 - clap or whistle? fix
37. 01:14:120 - whistle? fix
38. 01:16:183 - remove whistle? 神 fix
39. 01:16:558 - clapではなく個人的にはサンプルセットドラムfinishです fix
40. 01:19:933 - add clap? finishは個人的には入れないかもしれません finish外しました fix
41. 01:21:245 - add clap? 01:21:339 - clap or whistle? clapにしました fix
42. 01:27:245 - 01:27:339 - add clap? fix
43. 01:29:120 - 01:29:120 - 01:29:495 - add whistle? fix
44. 01:30:808 - 01:31:745 - 01:33:058 - add finish? 感動しました fix
45. 01:32:120 - ~ 01:33:339 - まで一様な音になってるので青線含めて全部clapでもいいかもしれません fix
46. 01:37:183 - 01:38:683 - 01:40:933 - whistle? fix
47. 01:41:120 - clap? fix
48. 01:41:683 - clapよりwhistle? fix
49. 01:42:058 - whistle? or add sample set drum finish imo Drum finish fix
50. 01:42:245 - whistle? fix
51. 01:42:433 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - add whistle? finishのつけ方は前同じパターンと揃えたほうがいいでしょう fix
52. 01:44:120 - 01:44:308 - clap? fix
53. 01:44:870 - add sample set drum finish? fix
54. 01:45:058 - finishよりsample set drum whistle? fix
    
    あほみたいに書いてますが、自分が賛成できるものだけ取り入れるようにしたほうがいいかもしれません！

賛同できるものしかありませんでした！！本当にありがとうございます！！ \o/

Easy

1. 00:51:808 - ここの音を拾わないのは不自然に感じます。シンバルなってるのもありますし、ボーカルがここで終わってます。00:51:058 - の音を拾うよりもそのほうがいいと思います。なのでリバーススライダーではなく00:51:808 - まで１つのロングスライダーはどうでしょうか。
   今にも死にそうなミミズができました スライダー博士に相談できそうなネタができたのでひとまずfix！
2. 01:15:433 (3) - ここにfinishはいらない気がします。前後でそれらしい音もないので、入れなくていいかもしれません。fix
3. 01:15:433 (3) - スライダーの終点をドラム01:16:745 - に合わせたほうが個人的に好きです。normalはドラムに合わせています。fix

Normal

1. 00:13:558 - drumベースで拾っているので、それならここを拾ったほうがいいかもしれないです？
   トランペットに合わせたのと次の1/2x3回と区別を付けたかったのでこの形を維持したいです
2. 01:00:433 (4) - Easyの場合は初心者のことを考えてplayableになるよう音取りしてるのだろうと思ったんですが、Normalなら素直に01:00:245 - 拾ってもいいと思います。1/1スライダーを赤線に持ってきて後ろの白線をサークル置いてみてはどうでしょうか。
   この難易度を維持したいのでKeepで
3. 01:06:245 - 上と同じです。メロディーよりもこっちのほうがclickableにしてみてはどうでしょうか　01:12:433 (4) - same
   ^
4. 01:31:558 (3,6) - このoverlapは避けたほうが無難かもしれません
   fix
5. 01:32:120 (4,5,6) - 音取りに違和感を感じます。以下の音取りを試してみてはどうでしょう？
   
   SPOILER

   
   別のリズムパターンにしました thanks!!
   []
   Normalにしてはすこし密度が低いようにかんじました、kiaiタイムにおいてもう少しオブジェクトを詰めてもいいかもしれません。
   そうすればSDが上がるはずなので、diff spreadが少し滑らかになるかもしれません
   あまり上手く上昇させる手段が思いつかなかったので維持となりましたが次回からの糧にしようと思います(._.)!

ごめんなさい、時間が無くなっちゃったのでここまでにします。
もしほかの難易度のmod希望されるなら一言くだされば後日続きを書きたいと思います。
全難易度みましたが配置がとてもきれいだと思いました、いい曲だと思うので頑張ってください！
Good Luck!!!

Asuka_- wrote:

m4m kuso modです！！

Easy

1. 00:13:933 (1) - 2/1sliderでもいいと思います。
   たしかに00:14:495 - に音あるんですが00:14:683 - にも同じくらい大きい音あるので 2/1の方が初心者にはわかりやすいかなと思いました。
   fix
2. 00:36:433 (3,4,1) - bitnaziです。　すこし配置が気になりました。
   こんなのはどうでしょうか maybe https://i.gyazo.com/ec33db2f1e7515bab3e ... 7bd160.png
   きっと大丈夫だと思いたい… Keepします
3. 個人的に 00:54:433 - より00:54:245 - を拾いたいです。
   00:54:433 - に大きい音があまりない気がします。　代わりに大きい音があってなおかつvocalもある00:54:245 - を拾うのはどうでしょう？
   なるべく単純にしておきたいので keepします

Normal

1. nothing (ごめんなさい！！　Normal modできないの！！！)

Hard

1. 01:24:433 (1) - と01:25:558 (3,4) - の音取りを統一した方が良いかな...??
   ボーカルの強さの違いを表したいです Keep
2. 01:38:683 (3) - ここだけ1/4のリバースなので、少し違和感がありました。　イントロの同じ場所とは音取りが違っています。
   差異のあるドラムパターンなので問題無いと思います Keep
3. 01:44:120 (1,2) - remove stack?
   01:42:433 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - のパターンに従うと　おそらくstackしない方が楽しいと思います。
   OK

Expert

1. 00:21:433 - ここは拾った方が良いと思います。
   同じ音の00:18:433 - が拾われているから少し違和感があります。
   加えてAメロ内で00:21:245 (1) - だけ00:21:433 - を無視してのvocal followになっているので違和感があります。
   ボーカルフォローに問題はないと思いました Keep
2. 00:36:808 (2) - bitnaziです。　すこし形が気になりました。　
   00:36:058 (5,1) - のように少し曲げませんか？
   fix
3. 01:04:558 (4) - ここ配置ctrl+gの方が流れると思います。
   maybe https://i.gyazo.com/e630a35e0a628f19250 ... 8fd89a.png
   OK
4. 01:15:151 - ここに大きい音あるので、ここを連打にした方が良いと思います。
   ボーカルメインで抑えてるのでKeep
5. 01:25:558 (1,2) - ここ1/1リバースに変えませんか？
   Hardと同じ理由です keep
   AR8.7のbpm160譜面なのでDTプレイヤーがいるとおもうので、　DTプレイヤーのために01:24:433 (1,1,2) - を統一してみたほうが楽しいような気がします。
6. 01:26:589 - ここ抜けてますが　意図的でしょうか？
   ドラムの音に合わせてないです Keep

がるぱ～　rankたのしみ～　がんばって～！ gl!!

scanter wrote:

すげー

yShadowXOP_ wrote:

arrange the offset, the circles are all without rhythm

A s h e m u wrote:

yShadowXOP_ wrote:

arrange the offset, the circles are all without rhythm

THANKS FOR M4M

( i can't give you Kudosu by these contents . sry )

yShadowXOP_ wrote:

please put the offset in 2001 (i not do the modding but i tested your map , it is excellent in my opinion it has nothing to change)

nice to meet you new mr monstrata

Dinocrit wrote:

Mod

Hard
01:42:433 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think these jumps are too complex for hard. Players of this level won't be able to miss.Reduce the spacing.
In many places, in my opinion missing a note. On the red strokes


In General, the difficulties
expert disturbed flow. The maps look interesting.
Good luck