1. Black Curse (4.39 stars, 292 notes)
2. Love Curse (1.82 stars, 165 notes)
3. theowest's Death Curse (4.83 stars, 359 notes)

DragonSparta wrote:

theowest's Death Curse
00:46:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Easy on the spacing, man. This is just harsh No, it's insane. 120 BPM is nothing. Doubletimable by me, and I'm not even pro.
01:36:629 (5) - New combo? Oh yeah, that's right.
01:38:629 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - ==" Too harsh No, it's insane.
Map the rest? NO! It ends where it ends!
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That's all~
Star~

DragonSparta wrote:

Hello~

Love Curse
Fine~

Black Curse
01:08:618 (8) - Too near to (7) It's the standard distance0.9x
02:12:619 (8) - ^ same
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That's all~
Star~

xykbear wrote:

[theowest's Death Curse]
00:34:629 (4) - add whistle at the end of slider No, wtf?
00:46:879 (2,3,4,5,6) - average the spacing between these node
00:52:629 (1) - one grid right No.
01:37:629 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - also average the spacing. No, wtf?
01:48:629 (1) - add finish at the start of slider Not necessary but ok.
01:55:629 (7) - new combo True.
02:04:629 (1) - add finish at the start of slider Not necessary but ok.
02:11:129 (1) - new combo hm. ok
02:54:629 (1) - add finish at the start of slider Not necessary but ok.
03:17:629 (7) - new combo ok.
//make the mapset to the end of song NO!! IT'S THE END FFS! Ok, I'll change it since everybody's bitchin about it.

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
countdown in Love Curse is different from other diffs
offset in all diffs are different , make them all the same plz
no custom color in Black Curse and Love Curse
tags add "theowest"

[Love Curse]
03:32:893 (1) - end at 03:35:310 ? (1/3) sound better

[Black Curse]
00:57:619 (3) - red square 1 gird down , 3rd square 1 gird right
03:32:744 (1) - 03:35:286 (1/3)

that's all
good luck

wcx19911123 wrote:

[theowest's Death Curse]
03:01:129 - after fixing timing , plz fix this kiai ending , make kiai time all the same in all diffs Yes, but doesn't have to be same for all diffs.
02:59:629 (4,5) - this spacing is too near.. make it bigger plz wat. no
03:26:129 (8,9) - move it far away.. or newcombo (8) plz. this is confusing now ok
03:32:754 (1) - end at 03:35:295 (1/3) ok

that's all
good luck

1. Tick 2 sounds very well on this song, use it ? :3
2. Why theowest diff hasn't the same combo colors as the other difficulties ?

1. All notes aren't correctly snapped, they are all 1ms too early (even if AImod can't detect them and even if it's only 1ms, you have to fix it for consistency)
2. 00:39:628 (5) - I don't understand why you've made a slider here, its end doesn't fit very well. A circle would be enough, or extand the slider to 00:40:129 ?
3. 01:27:129 - The clap should be here and not at the end of the slider (instead of the clap at the end, a finish would sound well).
4. 03:01:628 (5) - Add a whistle ? :3

1. Here again, notes aren't correctly snapped
2. 01:28:795 (2) - It looks like this slider should be on 1/6 ticks.
3. 02:26:566 - Why do you have an iNiS break which ends on a 1/8 tick, fix this owo
4. 03:21:566 - Same as above
5. 03:29:566 - Same as above

1. 00:34:629 (4) - This slider should end at 00:35:462 (1/6 tick)
2. 01:28:754 (2) - It looks like this slider should be on 1/6 ticks.

1. I don't get why black, death, curse and love are in the tags if they are already included in the difficulties' names. I would like to know if you added them for some particular reason, but I would say that they are unnecessary.
   Also witch seems rather random

1. 01:06:628 (3) - Just a little suggestion here, could you separate the start and end of the slider so that they don't touch? These things look pretty ugly imo :C
2. 01:30:628 (4) - (^)
3. 01:47:128 (5) - (^) Lol so much copy & paste
4. 02:11:628 (5) - (^)
5. 03:16:628 (3) - (^)
6. 03:35:295 (1) - theo ended the spinner here and actually, I think it sounds more appropriate. It's on the 1/3, so use that snap divisor to do this right.
7. The rest looks pretty well

1. 00:51:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I wouldn't suggest such a stream for your middle difficulty, it might trouble players. Remember that this is also your second easiest difficulty... So it might be a little too much. If I were you, I'd try to change it for something easier to play.
2. 01:07:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (^)
3. 01:39:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Still doesn't convince me. (^) Why don't you use something like this? 01:55:628 (1,2,3) -
4. 02:11:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (^)
5. 02:27:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (^)
6. 02:45:753 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - (^)
7. 03:01:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (^)
8. 03:21:504 - What on Earth, why did you drag the break here? You didn't do it in the other diff, nor did theo. It's pretty pointless. You should make the break normal, as in the other difficulties o.o
9. 03:29:504 - Same here.
10. 03:31:628 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Stream? Another one, really? D:
11. 03:35:295 (1) - Again, the spinner thingy.

1. I was gonna complain about the tick rate but 2 actually looks pretty bad, so you may keep it at 1.
2. What can I say... The difficulty curve doesn't look so smooth... This seems far more difficult than [Black Curse] imo. And that's not good. I'd suggest that you guys get another difficulty between these two, but I don't know for sure if that would work either...
3. 00:34:629 (4) - The end of this slider feels awkward, and that's because of where it is placed. I personally think that it should end at 00:35:629 -, that sounds much better while playing!
4. 01:07:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Lol such a weird shape. It actually feels weird while playing, I'd suggest using something more "open", such as 01:39:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - .
5. Some jumps didn't feel so good (I mean, didn't flow so well), I think. But it isn't anything critical, just a personal opinion, so I can let you go with this.

narakucrimson wrote:

Oh hi there!

[General]

1. I don't get why black, death, curse and love are in the tags if they are already included in the difficulties' names. I would like to know if you added them for some particular reason, but I would say that they are unnecessary.'cus the song is actually a curse! The woman that sings this is cursing her x-lover to not find love again, and to die in the middle of the night..
   Also witch seems rather random nah, that woman is a witch :3

[Love Curse]

1. 01:06:628 (3) - Just a little suggestion here, could you separate the start and end of the slider so that they don't touch? These things look pretty ugly imo :C
2. 01:30:628 (4) - (^)
3. 01:47:128 (5) - (^) Lol so much copy & paste
4. 02:11:628 (5) - (^)
5. 03:16:628 (3) - (^)
6. 03:35:295 (1) - theo ended the spinner here and actually, I think it sounds more appropriate. It's on the 1/3, so use that snap divisor to do this right.
7. The rest looks pretty well

[Black Curse]

1. 00:51:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I wouldn't suggest such a stream for your middle difficulty, it might trouble players. Remember that this is also your second easiest difficulty... So it might be a little too much. If I were you, I'd try to change it for something easier to play.
2. 01:07:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (^)
3. 01:39:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Still doesn't convince me. (^) Why don't you use something like this? 01:55:628 (1,2,3) -
4. 02:11:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (^)
5. 02:27:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (^)
6. 02:45:753 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - (^)
7. 03:01:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (^)
8. 03:21:504 - What on Earth, why did you drag the break here? You didn't do it in the other diff, nor did theo. It's pretty pointless. You should make the break normal, as in the other difficulties o.o
9. 03:29:504 - Same here.
10. 03:31:628 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Stream? Another one, really? D:
11. 03:35:295 (1) - Again, the spinner thingy.

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fixed everything :3
All right! That's all! Let me know what you changed and what you didn't, and call me back later!

narakucrimson wrote:

Oh hi there!

[theowest's Death Curse]

1. What can I say... The difficulty curve doesn't look so smooth... This seems far more difficult than [Black Curse] imo. And that's not good. I'd suggest that you guys get another difficulty between these two, but I don't know for sure if that would work either... well I guess it's okay since the black curse is a hard (even though it's pretty easy)
2. 00:34:629 (4) - The end of this slider feels awkward, and that's because of where it is placed. I personally think that it should end at 00:35:629 -, that sounds much better while playing!
3. 01:07:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Lol such a weird shape. It actually feels weird while playing, I'd suggest using something more "open", such as 01:39:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - .

All right! That's all! Let me know what you changed and what you didn't, and call me back later!