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MAY'S - I LOVE YOU ga Ienakute

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JauiPlaY
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JauiPlaY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年8月22日 at 22:24:06

Artist: MAY'S
Title: I LOVE YOU ga Ienakute
Tags: shinki j-pop
BPM: 82
Filesize: 6779kb
Play Time: 03:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.58 stars, 377 notes)
  2. Shinki's Normal (3 stars, 263 notes)
Download: MAY'S - I LOVE YOU ga Ienakute
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誰のものにもならないで

Whlie playing the song I just think about Kotobuki Nanase from Bungaku Shoujo.

My 9th map.

And thanks for Shinki's guest diff, and those who provided me skin assistances.
Enjoy!
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LKs
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LKs
EDiT: mod

Shinki's Normal

背景音有clap的地方最好别下whistle

[00:56:959] no whistle
第一个kiai整体降低10%音量
[01:01:715] 2: whistle(volume 90%) 3:whistle(wolume 80%) 4: no whistle (这里也可以考虑下S1的clap啊)
[01:12:325] 降低音量15%
第二个kiai整体降低10%音量
[02:06:105] whistle
[02:29:154] 换成finish
[02:37:203] 这里大范围使用whistle在clap上 那就不改了
kiai部分可以用S1的clap吧 背景的还是比较小

Hard

开始部分音效利用的很好
其余部分行云流水

最好用静音sliderslide 在normal难度里sliderslide的声音太大了 hard好点
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Neptunus
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Neptunus
8-) 加长沙发我的
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Nagae-Iku
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Nagae-Iku
Nice song and good luck
I LOVE YOU~
;)
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Shinki
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Shinki
............................................................(字数)
tutuhaha
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tutuhaha
好歌好歌好歌好歌好歌好歌好歌好歌够字数了吧擦
基片鸭加油！~
Cirno
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Cirno
基片鸭胁迫我来送星顺便骗kd

[General]
BPM=164
..结尾map到03:53:300 ?

[卖萌6号Shinki's Normal]
默认whistle有点吵 在这首比较轻柔(?的歌里来用 最好降低一下音量,或者把C2的whistle换成一个整体上更轻一些的sample
spinnerspin有点响...?
02:41:410 (2) - @02:41:227 ?
02:42:691 (x) - 加个note..? 初见被这坑了x.x
others fine o.o

[Hard]
难度逆诈称 change name to [Normal] plz
00:28:151 (3) - 这个我觉得红点前后各加一个控制点 软化一点更合vocal和剩下的map 像这样..?
SPOILER
00:31:349 (4) - 像其他那样 把上一个slider的end完全放在track里..? 不大好看这个...
00:58:971 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 之前的0.75x slider放的不错 但这段的超低spacing实在颇堵,与音乐情感脱节. 如果我map的话 大概会与之前的0.75x对应,放一个高spacing(1x+)的pattern. 如果你这里做出改动的话,01:10:495(3,4,1,2)之类的地方可能也要对应调整一点
01:30:617 (3) - 大概可以在不动(2)的情况下略微上移挡住(1)结尾..? 既然你的整个map是统一性为基调的 不统一的这些地方最好尽量避免...
02:03:361 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同之前 颇堵...
02:40:861 (2,3) - (2)应当在02:41:227结束, 相应的(3)应该在02:41:410开始. 不全用眼睛排的图 其实也可以好看(?
02:43:788 (2,3) - ^
03:23:666 (3,1) - hey boy HP bar....
挑不出啥来...只是有几个linear转的slider看不出意义所在 稍微有点充art map的感觉...
SPOILER
00:32:813 (2) -
00:37:935 (3) -
01:32:813 (3) - 是根据鼓转的?那也应该01:32:995再转啊o.o
01:50:008 (4) -
02:06:471 (4,5) - 不仅看不出意义 而且也不好看啊[stress]
02:23:117 (3) -
03:15:252 (1) -
03:16:715 (4,5) - 不仅看不出意义 而且也不好看啊[stress]x2
03:18:727 (2) -
03:34:276 (5,6) -

送星
Nymph
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Nymph
我也是骗KUDO的 液 8-)

General:
BPM吐槽我就输了

326大萌神's normal:
01:40:313 (1,2,3) - 即使打起来没问题 不过还是觉得后面也用Slider更好?音量有点太高了 这样的话滑条音就格外的明显 而且有的地方也很吵. 下一些绿线控制下音量变化应该会很好听 毕竟下了这么多的HITSOUND.


基片鸭's hard:

...HITSOUND是不是太单薄 前面背景音乐有自带CLAP的时候 下SOFTWHISTLE和一下是不是更好 个人感觉不必要下同样的CLAP.
似乎需要更多的WHISTLE和FINISH 和326大萌神走2个极端 这个DIFF实在好安静. 后面的KIAI音量就不要腼腆了 45和50音量的差距 完全无法体现出变化.

节奏和排列没什么挑的 打起来很好.

嗯 那就这些了




结尾送你个礼物

Kotone
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Kotone
先星了
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EnakoRin
EnakoRin
class StarThisMap : public CObject
{
　public :
　void Star()
　{
　　cout<< "StarThisMap" <<endl;
　}
}
spboxer3
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spboxer3
[General]
名稱:MAY'S - I Love You Ga Ienakute ((I Love You不要都大寫 然後G是大寫的>_>
改好記得submit一次~~

[Shinki's Normal]
02:48:910 (1,3) - 讓他對稱:O

[Hard]
00:44:520 (2,3) - 說實話不是很好看 ((讓00:44:886 - ,00:45:069 - ,還有00:45:069 - 這三點排成一樣的距離?
00:54:032 (5,6,7,8) - 這首歌你的SV用不慢 建議不要出現這麼小間距的連打 這樣感覺彆扭((雖然這已經不能叫連打了lol
00:58:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^((其他類似的我就不挑了~~
01:24:032 (1) - 沒必要NC我覺得...
02:40:130 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 我草 這神了~~
02:51:105 (1) - spinner從02:51:837 - 開始 02:51:105 - 還有02:51:471 - 加2個note

star~~
p.s 為什麼我覺得風格越來越有KPY的感覺lol
Snowy Dream
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Snowy Dream
我的图传出42个小时之后一个星也没有

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Cirno
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Cirno

Snowy Dream wrote:

我的图传出42个小时之后一个星也没有
我的图传出一个月之后一个星也没有
[/joke] [/offtopic]
al2e10
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al2e10
- Hard
00:54:032 (5) - New combo and remove 00:54:764 (1)
00:55:861 (3) - New combo
01:06:471 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:07:020 (2)
01:18:178 (1,2,3,4) - Make those distance be the same is better
02:07:935 (1,2,3,4,5) - Those are different distance remove 02:07:935 (1) new combo and 02:08:483 (2) new combo
02:39:398 (4) - New combo

- All
How I thought that so many kiai time =3
And I thought 03:03:544 this section kiai time is enough.

That all. Really lovely.
Good luck STAR !
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
[General]
helped with hitsounds file through irc.
我觉得offset应该要+3~+5

[Shinki's Normal]
00:13:056 (1) - 开始一个好长好长的转盘然后……break了。你感觉如何了呀？我觉得还不如删了
00:38:300 (2,2) - 这两个whstle听起来奇怪（因为vocal在比较低的位置），违和感。
01:04:276 (3) - 头whistle
01:10:861 (5) - 尾的whistle去掉
02:15:255 (4) - whistle?
02:24:035 (1,2) - 拖出来感觉好一点，因为前一组也没叠
03:26:230 (1,2) - 快碰到血条了，考虑拉下来点

[Hard]
00:13:056 (1) - 同Normal，这让人感到蛋碎。。。
00:59:886 (7) - 我个人意见觉得这里不要一气下去而是顿一下（第一折返那个音空出来）比较好
02:04:459 (5) - 和上面同
02:26:959 (1,2,3,4) - 这里既然已经画过一个四方我的思路会是这样

03:48:910 (1,2) - 和上面一样，最后一个1还可以扔正中间什么的

真难为你我mod这歌都快睡着了，以后类似歌不接。
florianu
florianu
Shinki's normal
02:13:056 (1) - here is too much notes for normal, replace it with a repeat slider
HARD
01:53:666 (2) - remove the slider with a note
01:53:666 (2) - put here the new combo
02:51:105 (1) - volume 20%
Kotone
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Joined August 2008
Kotone
算了不等2kd位
Shinki's Normal
00:13:056 (1) - 同意rin叔 要不删spinner要不后面map点什么,马上break感觉很那啥
02:23:666 - 加个circle?没了个音玩的時候感觉別扭
02:51:105 (1) - 我感觉太长
03:05:008 (2) - whistle?
03:36:471 (3) - 去一个reverse加circle?

Hard
00:13:056 (1) - 同上
我弱 不会吐槽(偷懒
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
Joined April 2010
SiU_LeAf
小葉純路過~~~
歌不錯聽說>_<
加油

SPOILER
純路過打點感想, no kd
[Normal]
00:13:056 (1) - 小葉覺得normal一開始用spinner不太好, 因為新手難度不可以在spinner後太快放note, 這樣的break time小葉也不太喜歡
00:26:593 (1,3) - 小葉覺得(3)不要放在(1)下面就好了
00:33:544 (1,2) - 小葉覺得slider指著(2)就好了
00:57:325 (1,2) - 其實小葉覺得短slider接note的話比兩個note代替短slider還要難打.
03:13:788 (1,2) - ^
02:25:495 (1,1,2) - 因為是新手難度, 所以小葉建議如果那個位置真的要放spinner, 就把接下來的(1,2)刪掉
03:26:959 - 這樣強大的噴泉效果據說是不行的~ 據小葉所知是只可連續噴兩次, 不過小葉不太清楚, 建議你去請教別人

[Hard]
00:26:044 (2,3) - 這個節奏小葉不清楚有沒有問題, 小葉覺得在00:25:861 add note也不錯
00:28:788 - ^
00:34:642 - ^
00:37:569 - ^
00:40:495 - ^ (這首重覆很大, 接下來不指出了>_<)
01:40:130 - Add note?
02:43:056 (1) - 純小葉主觀問題, 這角度不太好看...
02:51:105 (1) - 感覺spinner很長~~
03:26:776 - kiai同上
~ 完 ~
話說小葉覺得這類的歌, MAP會是Circle Size很小的, 嗯嗯嗯
zsr123
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zsr123
:)
SPOILER
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SamiPale
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SamiPale
[Shinki's Normal]
whistle放得好像挺多的，在这种音量下有点烦，加上sliderslide音也比较大声，平均音量降一点如何?
其实也可以考虑精简whistle不过下的功夫会很大

就这么多，good
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
from my que

[General]
use a silenced sliderslide.wav plz
fine

[Shinki's Normal]
02:25:495 (1,1) - too far
02:57:691 - volume down

[Hard]
02:57:691 - volume down

哦草妈的，图做的这么好你让我们怎么骗kd
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Mod4Mod.

Mostly are suggestion only.you can ignore them if you disagree.

[General]
  1. Try offset: 7937 (+2) ,please check the mod before you fix this,also please resnap all note if you wang to change it.
[Shinki's Normal]
  1. 00:13:056 (x) - Please remove this spinner please!It's really weird if you put it before a break without any mapping,I prefer remove that!
  2. 00:35:739 (1,2) - I prefer you remove (2)- and add 3 reverse on (1)- ,I guess that should be better.
  3. 01:51:105 (2) - Remove this note please,I can't see ant reason that you need to add a note here because here doesn't have any vocal,drum sound etc..
  4. 02:04:276 (1) - this note is adjacence to the HP bar,humm,I recommend you replace this note,avoid this condition appear in the low difficulty diff!
  5. 02:13:056 (1,2,3) - This 1/4 is more difficult then overall in this diff,consider to remove 02:13:239 (2) - ,then it should be better.
  6. 02:28:788 (1) - Please put this in the central!Then newbie can catch it easier!
  7. 03:26:227 (1) - Same as 02:04:276
    0.0
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:056 (x) - Same as Normal
  2. 00:29:886 (2) - Remove the clap please!It doesn't fit the music too much!
  3. 00:32:813 (2) - ^ Same!
  4. 00:32:813 (2) - ^Same(Won't note this again)
  5. 01:24:032 (1) - unnecessary New combo because this note is stack on (4)- so it was reallly weird if you add a new combo here!
  6. 01:53:300 (1) - Consider with a new combo,please unstack it!Then it'll be looks better imo.
  7. 02:25:495 (1,2,3,4) - A suggestion here:you can try this or not!It's totally depends on you.It's really similar to Rin's idea.
    Suggestion
  8. 03:24:032 (1,2,3,4) - ^Same!
  9. 03:27:691 (1) - This jump is really sudden!Although you have already added a New combo there however this 1/4 shouldn't be a huge like this,I prefer increse the spacing a little bit instead of this!
    Like this
  10. 03:29:154 (1) - ^Same!
  11. 03:30:617 (1) - ^Same!
  12. 03:50:374 (1) - Unstack this because this is the end of the map!
Not bad,a star will be deserved!

Edit:I have get a hitsound to you!

Download: Hitsound.rar
Neptunus
463 posts
Joined April 2010
Neptunus
HARD难度，就找到这个
02:39:398 (4) - ，NC？
03:33:910 (4) - 这个地方的“A NA TA” 的TA，是不是比较响？这样的话4的位置稍微偏后，会不会有点迷惑？对比后面的相同节奏下的03:39:764 (4) - ，这里4的位置就比上一个要好

326 DIFF
01:13:422 - 加NOTE？因为对比后面相同节奏的02:06:105 (1) - 这里加note效果萌
02:17:813 - 同上
03:16:349 - 同上


最后的kiai喷射太good 想法了，赞！（前面已经给过star了）
UnderminE
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UnderminE
I think bit rate of the song is low a little bit. What about 192 kbps?

Here is the link for song with 192 kbps bit-rate:
http://www.mediafire.com/?ln84ff8cack5p3e
Selee
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Joined February 2010
Selee
Try offset 7963...

I'll finish my mod tomorrow...

hundandezishubudinga XSK
Pokie
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Pokie
:)

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pieguyn
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pieguyn
General:

-Perhaps add a blank soft-sliderslide.wav?

Shinki's Normal:

02:13:076 (3) - Remove new combo?
02:20:759 (1) - ^
03:12:345 (1) - ^

Hard:

03:26:979 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - nice :3

Wonderful song and map~ :) (ノﾟωﾟ)ノ☆
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
:O

-Shinki's Normal-
00:13:076 (1) - 在00:13:808开始?(要是觉得前面实在要加可以在00:13:076再加个note
01:40:333 (1,2) - 这里跟vocal感觉怪怪的..(只是指出来
02:29:906 (1) - slider开头加whistle?
02:39:418 (2) - 尾巴也加上whistle吧..不然前面1没hitsound听起来有点空
03:14:174 (2) - 尾部去掉whistle 然后03:14:540 (1,2) - 加whistle(just my opinion
03:23:320 (3) - 开头加whistle 和前面照应
03:36:491 (3) - 前面都折返一次这里来个两次会阴到人..去掉一个折返再在03:37:589加note试试?
↑ oops后面连续出现了两折返slider不说什么了x_x
03:46:003 (1) - whistle

-Hard-
00:13:076 (1) - 和Normal观点一样
02:37:223 (1) - 开头漏了whistle
nazi都没得nazi....

Star for nice map&nice song \:D/
NoeL-CIFER
24 posts
Joined October 2010
NoeL-CIFER
做的好好哦，膜拜~~~
唉，我要是也能自己做一张这样的图该多好啊
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
[General]

The left side of the drop shadow in your approach circle has been accidentally cropped. http://puu.sh/4mfA Fix that up?

Only two difficulties is kinda ehh. Makes my modding job easier, but an Insane or an Easy would probably be appreciated by the players. Whatever though.

[Shinki's Normal]

02:07:955 (1,2) - These two are very slightly different, make 2 a copy+paste of 1?
02:40:698 (1) - Really like this part.
03:24:052 (1,2,3) - Make these equal like: http://puu.sh/4mgi ?
03:36:491 (3) - Remove a repeat here? It's a bit hard to predict for a Normal.
03:41:613 (2,3) - Same as before, but you can add a note where the repeat was. Just easier to read and play.

Nice. A bit concerned about the length and number of the spinners for a Normal, so take a look at that if you can.

[Hard]

Probably could delete the first timing section and put the audio things into the red section instead.

02:40:150 (1) - I think this is a good place to move those sliders a bit farther for some mini-jumps, if this'll be the hardest difficulty. The slider design's cool though.
03:26:979 (1) - I don't really like this pattern, because some of the jumps are 1/4 and some of them are only 1/2. Once you realize, it's easy, but at the beginning, not so much. A bit of consistency would be good.

Volume could be a bit higher during kiai, but it's good.

Nice maps, soothing song too. :)
Shinki
141 posts
Joined May 2010
Shinki
[Shinki's Normal]

02:07:955 (1,2) - These two are very slightly different, make 2 a copy+paste of 1?
fix
02:40:698 (1) - Really like this part.
thx^^
03:24:052 (1,2,3) - Make these equal like: http://puu.sh/4mgi ?
didnt fix(i think mine is not bad too)
- Remove a repeat here? It's a bit hard to predict for a Normal.
03:41:613 (2,3) - Same as before, but you can add a note where the repeat was. Just easier to read and play.
all fix (from 03:36:491 (3) to the end Ive already remaped)
Last edited by Shinki , edited 1 time in total.
JauiPlaY
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Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

The left side of the drop shadow in your approach circle has been accidentally cropped. http://puu.sh/4mfA Fix that up?fixed.

[Hard]

Probably could delete the first timing section and put the audio things into the red section instead.okay.

02:40:150 (1) - I think this is a good place to move those sliders a bit farther for some mini-jumps, if this'll be the hardest difficulty. The slider design's cool though.hmm, i could hardly find any better way to map it here so keep it as before...
03:26:979 (1) - I don't really like this pattern, because some of the jumps are 1/4 and some of them are only 1/2. Once you realize, it's easy, but at the beginning, not so much. A bit of consistency would be good.i've put some other things here but...i'm not sure it's better or not.
and kiai parts have enough hitsounds for now!
thank you for your modding~ :)
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
The sides of the approach circle are still slightly cut off (all 4, now that I look more closely): http://puu.sh/4nYf as well as the top and bottom of the 9: http://puu.sh/4nYr.

[Shinki's Normal]

02:37:223 (1,2,1,2) - How about moving the purple combo down+left a bit so that these are even?

Fix up the skins a bit and I'll bubble. :)
JauiPlaY
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Topic Starter
JauiPlaY

Kytoxid wrote:

The sides of the approach circle are still slightly cut off (all 4, now that I look more closely): http://puu.sh/4nYf as well as the top and bottom of the 9: http://puu.sh/4nYr.

[Shinki's Normal]

02:37:223 (1,2,1,2) - How about moving the purple combo down+left a bit so that these are even?

Fix up the skins a bit and I'll bubble. :)
all fixed for now, thanks a lot! ;)
Kytoxid
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Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
Sorry to be picky, but the bottom of the 9 is still a bit cut off, lol. (http://puu.sh/4qjs) Don't kudosu this post.

EDIT: Bubbled.
JauiPlaY
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JauiPlaY
thank you very much Kytoxid! :D
Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.
spboxer3
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spboxer3
Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon.
^ 這什麼:<\
恭喜啊 發泡了!!
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
Kiai toggles...

Well, everything in this map is pretty nifty, just as I would expect from you. I could pretty much rank it in this moment, but... the only problem is, I disagree with the Kiai toggles at 03:26:979. I'm usually pretty lenient regarding Kiai time, but I think these toggles are overusing it a bit. It hurt my eyes a bit when playing it with shader effects...

If you are flexible to do so then please, otherwise, I won't pop your bubble but instead wait for more opinions on that.

EDIT: Well, that was the only problem I had and it's been fixed, so nothing stopping me from ranking it now. Ranked!
JauiPlaY
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Joined April 2010
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JauiPlaY
Thanks a lot Gens! :)
spboxer3
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spboxer3
恭喜了!!
Shiki
271 posts
Joined April 2010
Shiki
Congratz~ (:
BlazingFX
83 posts
Joined April 2011
BlazingFX
Just broke my arm doing the spinners :P
Hinagiku
103 posts
Joined August 2009
Hinagiku
小七濑，最喜欢的轻小说角色~~唯一买过的日版小说就是文学少女了=w=
ps:插画集4简直就是shit啊
Pokie
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Joined December 2009
Pokie
:) congratulations 基片鴨
Kelly099
Kelly099
I LOVE YOU SAE
Haseo_old
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Haseo_old
I'm gonna upload my replay on Youtube and dedicate it to my best friend, whom I have a crush on. Wish me luck :D
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