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C R E A M
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 1월 12일 목요일 at 오전 2:07:58

Artist: Silver Forest
Title: Sentence
Source: Touhou
Tags: sayuri impossiblexu Suzully
BPM: 176
Filesize: 5213kb
Play Time: 03:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. impossiblexu's Easy (1.96 stars, 184 notes)
  2. Lunatic (5 stars, 617 notes)
  3. Normal (3.66 stars, 232 notes)
  4. Suzully's Hard (4.86 stars, 404 notes)
Download: Silver Forest - Sentence
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My 3rd beatmap.
Vocal arrange of Silver Forest.
Original : "Zun - Fall of Fall"
I am really happy because no mapper in osu! mapped this song before. Therefore, I start to map this!
Lunatic by C R E A M
Suzully's Hard by Suzully
Normal by C R E A M
impossiblexu's Easy by impossiblexu
Waiting for modding.
Thank you.

Last full submission: 2011/09/13
Himekaido Hatate
goodmap! ほしだ!>w<)/★★ほしだ!>w<)/★★ほしだ!>w<)/★★ほしだ!>w<)/★★
namazun
しゅいいいんしゅいいいんしゅいいいんしゅいいいんしゅいいいんしゅいいいん
phonic
Nice Map


Your map wishes Rnked certain.

This map lover ;)
L i a
그냥 박자만
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Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [Normal].osu
Topic Starter
C R E A M
Himekaido Hatate, namazun, Elize, L i a. Thank you for star :D
KogumaX
天皇陛下バンザァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァァイ!
star~ ★
good map&good song~
fight~
Zelos
BPM 176.00 Flat
Offset seems good
Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.
Topic Starter
C R E A M

Zelos wrote:

BPM 176.00 Flat
Offset seems good
Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.
Thx for timing.
Dotsu
Finished XD

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Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [Easy].osu

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Topic Starter
C R E A M

impossiblexu wrote:

Finished XD

Thank you impossiblexu for diff and kudosu star :D
Suzully
*sigh*
Sorry to late :o      
Finally, finished my diff o.o

Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [Suzully's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
C R E A M

Suzully wrote:

*sigh*
Sorry to late :o      
Finally, finished my diff o.o
Thx for diff and kudosu star Suzully >w<
HellDawn
General
Can you use sliderborder ?

And kiai section; 00:58:515 and 02:02:777
Normal
02:15:731- spacing

Lunatic

Overal Difficulty +1

Can't find anything wrong
Good luck :3
haha5957
[General]
죄송합니다 제가보기엔 거의 문제가 되도않는 이상한데서 막 ㅠㅠ..
좋네용 @@@


[impossiblexu's Easy]
00:22:550 (2,3,4) - slider overlaps life gague.
I don't overlapping itself really matters but considering this is easy... kinda confusing i guess.

[Normal]
00:01:072 (1) - 첫 드럼사운드에 맞추신건 알겠는데 왠지 부자연스러운 느낌이에요.. 뒷부분이 가사를 따르고 있는것 같은데..

[Suzully's Hard]
00:50:163 (3) - 1 grid right seems better for me (does not really matter)
02:55:959 (5) -
02:58:686 (5) - (just suggestion) 2 sliders or 1 repeating slider + circle sounds better for me

[Lunatic]
다른 모딩에 보면 00:05:163 (5,1) - 이런거 완벽히 겹쳤으면 좋겠다고 늘 들어오던데...
(Ctrl+r/DS*0/Grid snap off) 라고 설명까지 친절하게 덧붙여주더군요 ㅠㅠ
상관있는지는 모르겠네요 -_-;

01:09:595 (1,2,3) - (2)의 위치를 적ㄱ절하게 조절해서 점프거리가 일정했으면 좋겠어요

01:11:640 (3,4,5,6,7) - 별모양이 살짝 이상하네용!

EDIT : 위에 제네럴에서 문제가 거의 없다고 썼어야됐는데 오타네요 으앙ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 무튼 쿠도스를 받았으니 별을 쏩니다!
Topic Starter
C R E A M
SPOILER

haha5957 wrote:

[General]
죄송합니다 제가보기엔 거의 문제가 되도않는 이상한데서 막 ㅠㅠ..
좋네용 @@@


[impossiblexu's Easy]
00:22:550 (2,3,4) - slider overlaps life gague.
I don't overlapping itself really matters but considering this is easy... kinda confusing i guess.

[Normal]
00:01:072 (1) - 첫 드럼사운드에 맞추신건 알겠는데 왠지 부자연스러운 느낌이에요.. 뒷부분이 가사를 따르고 있는것 같은데.. //낮은 난이도에서 약간의 부자연스러움은 어쩔 수 없는것이죠. 1/2반복슬라이더 처리를 하려다가 반복이 많아지면 초보자들이 힘들어해서 그만뒀습니다. 어차피 노말 하는 유저들 원줄어드는거 보고 치지 음악듣고 안해요.

[Suzully's Hard]
00:50:163 (3) - 1 grid right seems better for me (does not really matter)
02:55:959 (5) -
02:58:686 (5) - (just suggestion) 2 sliders or 1 repeating slider + circle sounds better for me

[Lunatic]
다른 모딩에 보면 00:05:163 (5,1) - 이런거 완벽히 겹쳤으면 좋겠다고 늘 들어오던데...
(Ctrl+r/DS*0/Grid snap off) 라고 설명까지 친절하게 덧붙여주더군요 ㅠㅠ
상관있는지는 모르겠네요 -_-; // 그리드 끄고 디스탠스스냅 0으로 놓고 겹치라고 모딩 들어오는 경우는 같은 자리에서 겹놋이 나오는 경우에요. 그런경우에는 정확하게 안겹치면 이상하기 때문에 겹치라고 모딩이 들어오는 것이구요. 제 경우는 슬라이더의 끝부분과 노트이기 때문에 딱히 중요하지는 않아요. 그래도 완전히 겹쳐놨습니다. 그게 보기 좋은것 같아서.

01:09:595 (1,2,3) - (2)의 위치를 적ㄱ절하게 조절해서 점프거리가 일정했으면 좋겠어요 // 대칭 맞췄으니 일정할 필요 없습니다. 플레이에 전혀 지장 없더군요.

01:11:640 (3,4,5,6,7) - 별모양이 살짝 이상하네용! // 수정완료

EDIT : 위에 제네럴에서 문제가 거의 없다고 썼어야됐는데 오타네요 으앙ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 무튼 쿠도스를 받았으니 별을 쏩니다!

모딩과 쿠돗별 감사합니다.
Changed kiai time in Normal and Lunatic diff by HellDawn's modding. Thank you for mod and kudosu star.
Waiting for Suzully and impossiblexu's responses for haha5957's modding.

Edit: Thx for kudosu star Dolljoints. I didin't notice you cause you posted nothing on this thread. Sorry for my carelessness.
Phish_old
hi, you requested a mod in our modding queue :3

Suzullys Diff is not in the .osz !!
I think everything else is okay in the Folder...
Custom Hitwistle sounds more like a big Drum ^^ funny
btw, you know how to make the "delicious" Sliders :D

Mapset is rly awesome, found not that much...

[impossiblexu's Easy]
01:36:868 (1) - delete NC
02:53:231 (2) - do it perfectly D:

[Normal]
01:01:925 (3,4,5) - Hard to read for Normal Diff...
01:11:981 (1) - delete Whistle on the end of this slider?
02:48:800 (?) - Add Circle or Slider? (I know you are not following the vocals at this part, anyways...)
03:01:243 (4) - Add Whistle (or should i say drum lol)

[Lunatic]
Partly there are short Combos for a Lunatic Diff...
And i suggest Circle Size 3!
00:45:390 (2) - Reverse Selection
02:11:129 (4,1) - Definitely not readable spacing on first play :/

I will mod Suzullys Diff when i can download it D: (well, i think i wouldn't find something, Suzully is too awesome...)

Really nice Map :3
Topic Starter
C R E A M
SPOILER

Phish wrote:

hi, you requested a mod in our modding queue :3

Suzullys Diff is not in the .osz !!
I think everything else is okay in the Folder...
Custom Hitwistle sounds more like a big Drum ^^ funny
btw, you know how to make the "delicious" Sliders :D

Mapset is rly awesome, found not that much...

[impossiblexu's Easy]
01:36:868 (1) - delete NC
02:53:231 (2) - do it perfectly D:

[Normal]
01:01:925 (3,4,5) - Hard to read for Normal Diff... // Yes bit hard actually. But I perfectly keep spacing so it will be a little practice for newbie players.
01:11:981 (1) - delete Whistle on the end of this slider? // fixed.
02:48:800 (?) - Add Circle or Slider? (I know you are not following the vocals at this part, anyways...) // I'm following piano sound at this part so won't fix.
03:01:243 (4) - Add Whistle (or should i say drum lol) // I can't hear any drum sound at this slider. Actually there is a drum sound on the white tick but the white tick is in the slider :D Since I'm following vocal at this part I can't add whistle(or drum lol).

[Lunatic]
Partly there are short Combos for a Lunatic Diff...
And i suggest Circle Size 3! // I would seriously consider this. I love big circle size :D However, there are many modders and MAT,BATs who don't like Circle Size 3 on Insane diff so hmm.... D:
00:45:390 (2) - Reverse Selection // won't fix. Sorry.
02:11:129 (4,1) - Definitely not readable spacing on first play :/ // I've let many test players to play my diff and no one get confused on that part. Nothing problem.

I will mod Suzullys Diff when i can download it D: (well, i think i wouldn't find something, Suzully is too awesome...)

Really nice Map :3

Thank you for mod. I don't know why Suzully's diff won't uploaded...... so I did full submit this map twice and finally Suzully's diff is downloadable now. >w<
Waiting for impossiblexu's response.
Dotsu

haha5957 wrote:

[impossiblexu's Easy]
00:22:550 (2,3,4) - slider overlaps life gague. Fixed
I don't overlapping itself really matters but considering this is easy... kinda confusing i guess.

Phish wrote:

[impossiblexu's Easy]
01:36:868 (1) - delete NC
02:53:231 (2) - do it perfectly D: Fixed
Thank you very much :D
Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [impossiblexu's Easy].osu
Suzully

haha5957 wrote:

[Suzully's Hard]
00:50:163 (3) - 1 grid right seems better for me (does not really matter) Moved it up by 1 grid.
02:55:959 (5) - I think it fit the music.
02:58:686 (5) - (just suggestion) 2 sliders or 1 repeating slider + circle sounds better for me ^
Thanks for mod, haha5957 :)
Fixed the point of haha's mod for now.

Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [Suzully's Hard].osu
Raging Bull
General:


Impossiblexu:
00:17:095 (1,2) - Maybe unstack these? Don't think stacks are a good idea in lower diff but up to you.
00:22:550 (2,3) - ^
01:38:913 (1,2) - ^
01:45:050 (1) - Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/5RYX
Nothing much. Good easy:3


Normal:
Kinda fast SV for normal but I guess it's okay.
00:01:072 (1) - Slider plays awkward for me. Maybe put the note when you first hear the vocal here 00:01:243 ?
00:58:686 - Kiai sounds a lot better here since it's on the downbeat. Maybe move it here?
02:02:777 - Start kiai here?
02:09:084 (2,3,4,1) - Why did spacing suddenly change here?
02:10:618 (1,2) - This might be confusing. Because the way you put 2 next to 1, beginners might think it's one repeat and might click 2 early. Maybe move 2 somewhere else?

Suzully:
Holy FFFF- I love the flow on this diff.

Lunatic:
I disagree with AR9. I think AR8 would play better. It's not really a fast song.
00:58:686 - Kiai over here instead?
02:01:413 (1,2,3,4) - These seems kinda confusing and it doesn't sound anything like you need a jump in the song. Also remove kiai time. It sounds better placed at 02:02:777 instead.

This map really deserves a star :3
Topic Starter
C R E A M
SPOILER

Raging Bull wrote:

General:


Impossiblexu:
00:17:095 (1,2) - Maybe unstack these? Don't think stacks are a good idea in lower diff but up to you.
00:22:550 (2,3) - ^
01:38:913 (1,2) - ^
01:45:050 (1) - Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/5RYX
Nothing much. Good easy:3


Normal:
Kinda fast SV for normal but I guess it's okay.
00:01:072 (1) - Slider plays awkward for me. Maybe put the note when you first hear the vocal here 00:01:243 ? / hmm... I'll consider if another modder point out this but nothing awkward imo.
00:58:686 - Kiai sounds a lot better here since it's on the downbeat. Maybe move it here? / Fixed.
02:02:777 - Start kiai here? / Fixed.
02:09:084 (2,3,4,1) - Why did spacing suddenly change here? / Because of the symmetry I put a little jump.
02:10:618 (1,2) - This might be confusing. Because the way you put 2 next to 1, beginners might think it's one repeat and might click 2 early. Maybe move 2 somewhere else? / Fixed.

Suzully:
Holy FFFF- I love the flow on this diff.

Lunatic:
I disagree with AR9. I think AR8 would play better. It's not really a fast song. / Yes. It's not that fast song but not too slow that AR9 seems awkward. At first I made this map with AR8 but after I've ordered many test players who are pro or not, I decided to choose AR9 because some test players are confused with AR8.
00:58:686 - Kiai over here instead? / Fixed.
02:01:413 (1,2,3,4) - These seems kinda confusing and it doesn't sound anything like you need a jump in the song. Also remove kiai time. It sounds better placed at 02:02:777 instead. / Obviously not confusing. No one of my test players confused at this part although some of them are not pro(also with AR8 which is much more confusing). Also, I think this part deserve jump because the drum sound is going up. And kiai either.

This map really deserves a star :3

Thx for mod and kudosu star. >w<
And congratulation for your map ranked. :D
I checked out all and waiting for impossiblexu and Suzully's responses.
Raging Bull
\o/ Thanks! (◎`・ω・´)人(´・ω・`*)

My message is too short.
Suzully

C R E A M wrote:

I checked out all and waiting for impossiblexu and Suzully's responses.
I guess there is no point I have to fix /o/
Topic Starter
C R E A M

Suzully wrote:

C R E A M wrote:

I checked out all and waiting for impossiblexu and Suzully's responses.
I guess there is no point I have to fix /o/
Yes! lol Your map is too awesome. I just copy&paste your ID habitually with impossiblexu's :D
Lidan
Hey :3

[General]
  1. There's a .osb file without any storyboard in it, I guess you can delete that.
[Normal]
  1. 00:59:027 (X) - Add circle?
Couldn't find more.
Awesome map :D
al2e10
Here for you ~ :3

[Lunatic]
00:23:998 (2,3,4,5,6) - 2,4,6 Clap is much beautiful :3
00:51:527 (1-3rd) - Finish
00:58:686 (5) - ^
01:01:413 (6) - Remove it, it is strange for the musical
In the kiai time, use more Finish is much better than just a few.
02:11:129 (4,1) - This simi jump is weird
02:12:834 (1-1st) - Finish
03:02:606 (9) - Change it to spinner is much matter :3
**I think the sound effect can improve, if you need more mod for sound, you can pm me again.

[Hard]
Just rightly use the distance snap :3
Nothing mod
**Noticed that, don't copy and plaste all the time Orz

[All]
That;s a good map.
LUCKY STAR ~~~ good luck:3
Topic Starter
C R E A M
SPOILER

KingsAL2 wrote:

Here for you ~ :3

[Lunatic]
00:23:998 (2,3,4,5,6) - 2,4,6 Clap is much beautiful :3 // fixed.
00:51:527 (1-3rd) - Finish // fixed.
00:58:686 (5) - ^ // fixed.
01:01:413 (6) - Remove it, it is strange for the musical //Removing that one is stranger.....
In the kiai time, use more Finish is much better than just a few. // I used more finish on kiai time! Fixed.
02:11:129 (4,1) - This simi jump is weird // seems bit weird but I think it fit to music and fun.
02:12:834 (1-1st) - Finish // fixed.
03:02:606 (9) - Change it to spinner is much matter :3 // hmm.... I will consider this.
**I think the sound effect can improve, if you need more mod for sound, you can pm me again.

[Hard]
Just rightly use the distance snap :3
Nothing mod
**Noticed that, don't copy and plaste all the time Orz

[All]
That;s a good map.
LUCKY STAR ~~~ good luck:3

Thx for mod and kudosu star~~ >w<
Your mod was helpful for me and if I have time I will pm you again. I am kinda busy these days T.T
And.... at this time I don't need to call anybody else! YEAH!!
YTYuyu
Yo Modding ur song because of ur request :)

impossiblexu's Easy:
00:01:413(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6zmk
00:04:140(1) - ^ http://puu.sh/6zot if u ignore this try to make it the same look as the 1st slider. i mean the slider points
00:51:868(1) - 1 grid down for the 4th point and 1 grid left for the end point
01:17:436(4) - 1 grid down
01:40:959(4) - x:152 y:184 for the end point. i want it to look even with the start point
02:02:777(1) - x:192: y:140 for the end point. ^
02:08:231(1) - x:460 y:32 ^

Normal:
01:35:945(5) - NC

Suzully's Hard:
00:38:913(3) - 1 grid left for the 2nd point. it should look even
02:20:334(1) - 1 grid down for the end point. ^

Lunatic:
00:26:100(6) - NC

This is the best i can do. Star and GL :D
Suzully

Byakugan249 wrote:

Suzully's Hard:
00:38:913(3) - 1 grid left for the 2nd point. it should look even Fixed.
02:20:334(1) - 1 grid down for the end point. ^ Fixed.
Thanks for mod~ :)

Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [Suzully's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
C R E A M
SPOILER

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo Modding ur song because of ur request :)

impossiblexu's Easy:
00:01:413(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6zmk
00:04:140(1) - ^ http://puu.sh/6zot if u ignore this try to make it the same look as the 1st slider. i mean the slider points
00:51:868(1) - 1 grid down for the 4th point and 1 grid left for the end point
01:17:436(4) - 1 grid down
01:40:959(4) - x:152 y:184 for the end point. i want it to look even with the start point
02:02:777(1) - x:192: y:140 for the end point. ^
02:08:231(1) - x:460 y:32 ^

Normal:
01:35:945(5) - NC //Fixed

Suzully's Hard:
00:38:913(3) - 1 grid left for the 2nd point. it should look even
02:20:334(1) - 1 grid down for the end point. ^

Lunatic:
00:26:100(6) - NC //Fixed

This is the best i can do. Star and GL :D

Thx for mod~~ and really thank you for 2kudosu star!
Waiting for impossiblexu!
Shiki
Hi~ :) from my queue

[Easy]
Fine to me :3

[Normal]
00:14:027 (3) - If you curve it like (2), it'd be awesome!
00:21:186 (6) - Copy (4) and ctrl+j?
01:28:515 (1,2) - The sound of (1)'s tail and (2)'s head is too noisy imo.

[Hard]
00:18:970 (1) - Do you think this one looks better?? http://puu.sh/6ADw
01:39:084 (3,4,1) - I heard drum here. Maybe add note at 01:39:169 and 01:39:339?
02:11:470 (3) - A grid right to the red control point.
02:14:879 (1,2) - Please don't overlap (1)'s body with (2)'s head. It looks bad imo.

[Insane]
I think AR9 is kinda fast for the song, AR8 may suit the song better??
00:40:703 (4) - Add clap?
00:58:686 (1) - New combo here?

That's all I can do :P
Good luck to the map~
Topic Starter
C R E A M
SPOILER

Shiki wrote:

Hi~ :) from my queue

[Easy]
Fine to me :3

[Normal]
00:14:027 (3) - If you curve it like (2), it'd be awesome! // Fixed.
00:21:186 (6) - Copy (4) and ctrl+j? // Fixed.
01:28:515 (1,2) - The sound of (1)'s tail and (2)'s head is too noisy imo. // Fixed.

[Hard]
00:18:970 (1) - Do you think this one looks better?? http://puu.sh/6ADw
01:39:084 (3,4,1) - I heard drum here. Maybe add note at 01:39:169 and 01:39:339?
02:11:470 (3) - A grid right to the red control point.
02:14:879 (1,2) - Please don't overlap (1)'s body with (2)'s head. It looks bad imo.

[Insane]
I think AR9 is kinda fast for the song, AR8 may suit the song better?? // AR8 is disturbs the reading. SV is fast and note density is high :D
00:40:703 (4) - Add clap? // Fixed.
00:58:686 (1) - New combo here? // Fixed.

That's all I can do :P
Good luck to the map~

Thx for mod and kudosu star! Waiting for Suzully's response.
Teru21
hi! from teruteru modding & guest diff queue
here we go xD

[impossiblexu's Easy]
b(O.<)d

[Normal]
00:57:322 (2) - this slider is closed by (1) it make it a bit messy. http://puu.sh/6zNR
02:17:606 (4) - http://puu.sh/6zPV

[Suzully's Hard]
00:14:879 (1,2) - grid : 2 times to the right (more tidy)
00:19:481 (2) - grid : 2 times to the left
00:20:845 (2) - grid : 4 times down (if dont want to change this, its okay.)
00:24:936 (2) - grid : 6 to the left ,
4 times down
01:44:879 (1) - grid : 2 times down
02:20:845 (2) - a bit ugly. try this http://puu.sh/6Cq9

[Lunatic]
b(>.O)d

thats all.. Good luck :P :)
Dotsu

Byakugan249 wrote:

impossiblexu's Easy:
00:01:413(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6zmk
00:04:140(1) - ^ http://puu.sh/6zot if u ignore this try to make it the same look as the 1st slider. i mean the slider points
00:51:868(1) - 1 grid down for the 4th point and 1 grid left for the end point
01:17:436(4) - 1 grid down
01:40:959(4) - x:152 y:184 for the end point. i want it to look even with the start point
02:02:777(1) - x:192: y:140 for the end point. ^
02:08:231(1) - x:460 y:32 ^
Fixed some and thanks a lot :D

Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [impossiblexu's Easy].osu
Suzully

Teru21 wrote:

[Suzully's Hard]
00:14:879 (1,2) - grid : 2 times to the right (more tidy) Nah.
00:19:481 (2) - grid : 2 times to the left Nah but changed (1)'s shape.
00:20:845 (2) - grid : 4 times down (if dont want to change this, its okay.) Nah.
00:24:936 (2) - grid : 6 to the left ,
4 times down Nah.
01:44:879 (1) - grid : 2 times down Nah.
02:20:845 (2) - a bit ugly. try this http://puu.sh/6Cq9 Nah.
Thanks anyway.

EDIT:Oops, I forgot to check Shiki's mod. I'll fix it later~

Download: Silver Forest - Sentence (C R E A M) [Suzully's Hard].osu
artpiggo
Lunatic
00:06:186 (3,4,5,6,7) - just make stream leads to next slider.

00:23:998 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same reason

00:44:709 (9) - try move to (156,152). It should flow not stay waiting.
01:00:050 (5) - try adding and move to (372,104)
01:04:140 (1) - move to (128,128)
01:38:572 (3) - move to (300,300)
02:01:584 (2) - (156,176)
02:01:754 (3) - (228,308)
02:01:925 (4) - (316,180)
02:03:629 (1) - just think that the distance from previous should not be only 1.0 cuz the rhythm goes purely tense here. so move it to left to make about 1.4x distance. Also move 02:04:481 (2) near to (1), too.
02:11:470 (1) - also in this. maybe try this.

02:16:413 (1) - (72,192)

Suzully
very fine with it.

Normal, impossiblexu
fine too.

9/10 This is apparently a good map. Try your best. Wish this map ranked. ^^
Topic Starter
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artpiggo wrote:

Lunatic
00:06:186 (3,4,5,6,7) - just make stream leads to next slider. // Fixed.

00:23:998 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same reason // This change disturbs flow with slider 1.

00:44:709 (9) - try move to (156,152). It should flow not stay waiting. // Fixed.
01:00:050 (5) - try adding and move to (372,104) // There is no beat here.
01:04:140 (1) - move to (128,128) // Nah.
01:38:572 (3) - move to (300,300) // ^
02:01:584 (2) - (156,176) // I think back and forth of the rythm is important at this part.
02:01:754 (3) - (228,308) // ^
02:01:925 (4) - (316,180) // ^
02:03:629 (1) - just think that the distance from previous should not be only 1.0 cuz the rhythm goes purely tense here. so move it to left to make about 1.4x distance. Also move 02:04:481 (2) near to (1), too. // Nothing problem with current spacing. and this is stacked with note 10.
02:11:470 (1) - also in this. maybe try this. // Will consider seriously.

02:16:413 (1) - (72,192) // Nah.

Suzully
very fine with it.

Normal, impossiblexu
fine too.

9/10 This is apparently a good map. Try your best. Wish this map ranked. ^^

Thank you for your kind modding. It was very helpful. I'll consider your suggestions more. Also, really thx for kudosu stars.
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