biwako ->
Thx Star !
It's so Cool
populus ->
乳神様はスペースの都合で…いえ、何でもないです
Thx Star !!
Thx Star !
It's so Cool
populus ->
乳神様はスペースの都合で…いえ、何でもないです
Thx Star !!
Alex7Kom wrote:
The video has the artifact line on the bottom side. Also you had not done sound removing properly.
Here is my encode of the video: http://www.mediafire.com/?dxtxmyao1uo4k5z
It's half the filesize of your video while has the better quality, and it's free from the artifacts.
Nice map!
Oh, it seems osu! is having trouble handling MP4. Sorry, I didn't know that.ItaOxy wrote:
Thank you for offering the video !!
However, the extension of the video is mp4.
However, I do not understand the usage of this video ...
If it is good, could you teach the usage ?
Thank you !! It is very glad XDAlex7Kom wrote:
Oh, it seems osu! is having trouble handling MP4. Sorry, I didn't know that.
I had changed the format to FLV: http://www.mediafire.com/?c7wgl8dyakdzryi
oh! Thx!! XDzerothefallen wrote:
I LOVE this beatmap, it is amazing!
Though @ 26:500 on the [Insane]
The slider's reverse arrow is barely recognizable, not sure if that's on purpose or what.
Thank you very much truly !!!zerothefallen wrote:
Two more kudosu!
I love this beatmap, must be ranked!
modding本当に感謝です!初めて作った譜面ですのでかなり拙い出来だと自分でも思いますが、見て頂き感謝感謝です。NewRulerNA wrote:
[Insane]
00:01:040 (2) - 問題があるというわけではないのですが、ちょっとEditで見た時美しくないのが気になりました 初めてスライダーを使ったので色々試したのを放置してました、修正しておきました。
00:03:164 (5) - ^ ^
00:04:226 (5) - ^ ^
00:14:843 (6) - 00:14:312 (2,3,4,5) - と被っていてちょっと見にくい感じがしました 1grid下にさげてみました、少し見やすくなったはずです
00:15:905 (5) - 00:15:374 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:16:436 (1,1) - これは初見殺しになり得ます 距離を縮めるorスタックさせたほうがいいかも 距離を縮める方にしました
00:23:205 (4,5,6,7) - DSがここで変わっているのが気になります 4にnewcomboを入れるかDSを統一したほうが見栄え的にいいかも fixed.
00:26:523 (5) - 00:25:992 (1,2,3,4) - と被っていてこれも見にくいです fixed.
00:31:301 (6) - nc(newcombo) fixed.
00:31:831 (10) - DS 修正してみました、恐らく綺麗になったと思います。
00:35:813 (5) - ^ ^
00:37:140 (5) - ^ ^
00:40:325 (5) - ^ ^
00:42:051 (6) - 00:41:387 (3) - と被っているのがちょっと気になりました 左の方にズラしてみました。
00:54:659 (6) - nc fixed.
00:58:906 (5) - nc? ^
00:59:172 (6,8) - それぞれもう少し中央に寄せてもいい気がします ^
01:18:018 (7) - nc ^
01:22:530 (6) - ncを入れるか01:22:530 (6)と距離を開ける ncを入れてみました
01:25:450 (3) - 01:25:317 (2) - までの流れ的に叩くタイミングが分かりにくいです もっと近付けてしまってください 修正を施してみました。
配置やDSなどについての指摘が主です
譜面の調節がんばってください
Thank you star!!zerothefallen wrote:
Two more kudosu!
I love this beatmap, must be ranked!
Thx Modding!!GiNa wrote:
Hi, nice to meet you .My Mod[Genernal]
-Take out “Letterbox during breaks” (Song Setup -> Storyboarding) fixed.
-About your kiai (not your guest’s): ^
00:09:001 – as I mentioned, this line should be at 00:09:004 since this is for a kiai change ^
00:19:621 – (suggestion) end kiai here instead of 00:19:090 ^
01:27:574 – (suggestion) probably end kiai here, so just move 01:28:635 to 01:27:574 ^
01:27:839 – (suggestion) maybe add a green line here and lower the volume to 10% ^
[Easy]
00:06:880 (1,2,3) – I thought you use DS 0.6x in this map >< fixed!
-You should set distance snap to 0.6x to keep everything constant.
00:16:436 (3) – this doesn’t look good, maybe move to x:260 y:328 (Grid Level 4) ^
00:16:967 (1) – remove whistle and clap, add finish. I guess you follow vocal here, so it shall end at … maybe 00:19:090? ^
00:42:980 (1) – too close to the previous note ^
00:47:227 (1) – remove whistle and clap, add finish ^
00:33:424 (4,5,6) – same as 00:06:880 (1,2,3) ^
00:49:616 – remove this short break ^
00:51:474 (1) – add whistle? ^
00:53:597 (1,2,3) - same as 00:06:880 (1,2,3) ^
00:57:844 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:18:018 (2) – this kind of slider is quite hard to beginner, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/208935 <- use this would be great already Thx Idea!!
01:20:141 (2) – ^ ^
01:25:450 (1) – the finish doesn’t really fit, and this should end at 01:27:839 fixed!
-Your sliders are all quite straight (just like my map xD), maybe try to have some curves.
[Normal]
-You should set distance snap to 0.8x(or 0.6x, depends on you) to keep everything constant in this diff. fixed!
00:11:127 (5) – NC ^
00:16:967 (1) – same as Easy ^
00:49:616 – remove this short break
01:06:339 (3,4) – spacing is wrong, and change them to a slider because they should not exist in normal diff, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/208945, add NC to the one at 01:06:339. Thx Idea!! fixed!
01:18:018 (2) – not sure if this is allow or not, you should ask others for more opinions. Changed Slider!
01:25:450 (1) – same as Easy fixed.
[Insane]
-Use DS too? (except those jumps of course)
-Hitsounds in this diff are quite annoying, especially in the second kiai (Easy and Normal are fine tho)
Here’s some little advices:
2 and 4 are where we usually put the clap or other hitsound (including any custom, depends on the mapper).
1 is where we put the finish or other heavy hitsound.
Of course both of them have exceptions, it really depends on you :3. Thx Advice! Fixed some!
00:18:825 – remove this short break ^
01:25:450 (5) – NC ^
01:26:247 (1) – the finish is too loud and shorten this to 01:27:839 ^
Sorry for long mod.
QAQ.
Thank you Modding!!Philippines wrote:
EASY
- 00:42:980 - Move this note a little away from the previous slider
- 01:06:339 - Add a Spinner? It's still fine though
NORMAL
- 01:24:919 - Stretch the spinner until this portion fixed.
- 00:00:921 - Move this slider close to the next note
- 00:16:834 - The spinner should start on this part fixed.
- 01:06:339 - New Combo
- 01:06:339 - Move this close to the other note
"Easy" and "Normal" has been changed significantly. On hold.
- 01:06:339 - ^
INSANE
- 00:07:942 - Change this combo. Instead, clone the previous combo and adjust them anywhere you want
- 00:16:834 - Start your spinner on this part fixed!
- 00:29:177 - New Combo ^
- 00:48:820 - End your spinner here ^
- 00:56:783 - New Combo ^
- 01:01:030 - ^ ^
- 01:03:153 - ^ ^
- 01:05:808 - Add a note here ^
bossandy wrote:
Normal :
- Hi hi~ my random mod XD
General :SPOILER^
- 00:09:004 ~ 00:19:621 Del this kiai time fixed.
- 01:08:462 kiai Time star here ^
- plz make all diff end the same time!!
Easy :- plz use spacing 0.6 From start to end! Thx spacing is too orderless~ fixed.
- 00:50:412 (X) - add a note ^
- 00:50:943 (X) - ^ ^
- 01:06:339 (1) - add a spinner start here end 01:07:931 ^
SPOILER00:13:781 ~ 00:15:374 make some thing here fixed.00:47:227 (1) - del clap, It's not fits for the music ^00:50:147 (X) - add a note with finish ^01:21:203 (1,3) - del clap ^
Insane :SPOILER00:12:189 (1) - del NC fixed.00:12:720 (7) - add NC ^00:13:251 (1) - del NC ^00:19:621 (1,2,3,4,5) - Strange! and spacing is wrong change it!~ ^00:20:683 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^00:46:696 (3,4,5) - why spacing change to 1.0 ? ^01:07:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the spacing is too large... ^01:20:407 (4,5) - Spacing!!! ^
Good map but the spacing issue need more modification and mod!
good luck :3SPOILERred: unrankable issue. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.