1. Uta (6,71 stars, 3079 notes)

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  Uta
  
  00:33:995 (2,3,4) - do something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7972429 looks better imo
  
  00:36:190 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - bad rythm choice 00:36:190 - add a circle here and start the sliders on white ticks, just like you did here 00:45:117 (4,5,1) -
  
  00:52:142 (5) - make this a kickslider? because there's a gap between the end of the stream and the next triplet, that gap feels akward while playing because you don't expect a triplet to be there, a kickslider on 00:52:142 (5) - should fix it
  
  00:53:312 (7,1,2,3,4) - flow here is bad, uncomfortable because it's wide angle, 00:53:605 (1,2,3,4) - < also these have too much spacing, try making something different
  
  00:54:337 (7,8,9,1) - spacing on these its more proper < so make the rest like this?
  
  00:55:215 (3,4,5,6) - lol what just happened here? I mean this short spacing? song doesnt really change to make such change
  
  00:55:946 (1,2) - same here
  
  00:57:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - flow here its exactly the same as 00:55:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try something different, playing same kind of flow over and over again, or at least, 2 times in a row, it's bored
  
  00:59:166 (8) - ctrl+g for better flow
  
  01:00:117 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - tbh, the shape of this stream its ehh.... terrible, Don't take it bad way I mean.. you know it's not the best stream shape right? the first part is okay, but this 01:00:556 (11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part it's terrible, and its kinda uncomfortable to play.
  
  01:01:946 (2) - should not end this slider on a white tick, 2 circles instead would play better
  
  01:03:849 (9,10,11,12,1) - move the whole stream so the 9 stacks with 01:03:410 (5) - < looks cleaner n better
  
  01:05:312 (1,2) - fix the spacing here lol why so short considering the rest of the map?
  
  01:11:239 (1) - start the spinners on white ticks
  
  01:16:361 (8,1) - what happen to the spacing? is this on porpuse?
  
  01:18:410 (4,5) - ^ :thinking:
  
  01:20:312 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - fix this lol, it's terrible, plays awkwardly
  
  01:20:824 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same here, it looks like you make the streams by hand? use sliders and do ctrl+shift+f
  
  01:21:629 (8,1) - .. No please
  
  01:23:824 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - this plays terrible too, try not making the changes of direction like this
  
  01:28:873 (1,2,3,4,5) - flow here it's almost exactly the same as 01:27:702 (1,2,3,4,5) - and the circles are all in the center of the screen, with some ugly overlaps like 01:27:849 (2,5,1) - 01:27:702 (1,6,5) - you should try to not repeat the flow so much, you have the whole screen to place circles, use the corners idk but try not to repeat the same thing. AND, map cleaner, how? stacking circles, and trying not to make such overlaps like the one's I mentioned
  
  01:31:068 (1,2) - spacing here it's too short, you're using high spacing before.. like this 01:29:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - and then suddenly you used this 2 sliders 01:31:068 (1,2) - with such low spacing, they kill the intensity of the map, they kill the flow and everything, at least try using the same spacing, be consistent
  
  01:32:239 (1,6) - stack 6 with 1
  
  01:35:166 (3,4,5) - low spacing again, well, until here the whole map is very inconsistent, you can easily fix it thi :p
  
  01:36:556 (10,11,3,4) - ugly overlap, try moving the slider+double like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7972765
  
  01:38:239 (2,7) - don't end sliders on white ticks
  
  01:43:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this stream it's 1000% better than the rest, you can make some other good streams shapes like this in the beginning of the map :p
  
  01:47:312 (8) - don't end sliders on white ticks, (never lol, unless you're following a very audible sound that ends on white ticks, but this is not the case so don't do it)
  
  01:49:800 (1) - for example, here you can hear a guitar sound, you can emphasize that sound with a slider instead of using random sliders like 01:47:312 (8,1,2) -
  
  01:50:971 (1) - just like this, you're following the vocals with a slider, well done, try applying the same "concept" to other sounds like the guitar
  
  01:52:581 (2) - and remember not end sliders on white ticks
  
  01:58:873 (4,5) - don't stack these, you havent stacked circles until here so don't do it, also, try to be more consistent in spacing
  
  02:03:702 (5) - this one CAN end on that withe tick because you're following that guitar sounds, this one is okay, I just point it out as an example of.. what kind of sliders you can end on white ticks
  
  02:06:629 (3) - not this one, change it
  
  02:10:142 (3) - ^
  
  02:10:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - flow here it's terrible, try not using such linear flow (wide angles)
  
  02:20:093 (8) - change it
  
  02:33:556 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - all these circles are placed in the same part of the screen, and the flow it's basically the same on all of them, this part it's kinda... awkward to play ahh you should try placing circles all around the screen and changing flow when music changes
  
  03:01:800 (9) - start reverse sliders here
  
  03:03:995 (7) - start this reverse on the with tick here 03:04:142 - < because there's when the music changes
  
  03:11:166 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - this part should be 1/3, the guitar it's the most audible sound and it's 1/3
  
  03:36:190 (8) - change it
  
  03:38:532 (1) - this one too, change it, start the stream on that white tick
  
  03:40:215 (2,3) - remember always start this kind of sliders on white ticks
  
  04:17:459 (2,3) - please don't stack these (and don't make stacks like that, because the song doesnt really sound like .. there should be a stop, u get me? ahh I don't know how to explain this properly lol
  
  04:34:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - all this section have TOO MUCH spacing, the music here changes, it's more "quiet" and so the map should change to fit the music
  
  05:10:507 (1) - start this on white tick
  
  05:13:288 (3) - and remember always start streams or sliders on white ticks
  
  05:15:190 (1,2) - ^
  
  05:19:361 (1) - start the stream here, delete this kickslider
  
  05:52:668 (1,2,3,4) - this is not 1/4 o.o
  
  05:55:518 - sliders
  
  06:02:268 (1,2,3,4) - delete this
  
  06:03:018 (6,7,1) - white ticks
  
  07:28:463 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - all this section its 1/3 not 1/4 so fix it
  
  08:04:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this doesn't follow the music, nothing
  
  08:23:120 (2) - never start streams on blue ticks, never
  
  remember to change most of the 1/2 sliders on the map that ends on white ticks and start strams and reverse sliders on white ticks, never on blues

Shishou wrote:

Mod

00:36:190 (1) - move this here 00:36:044 (1) - Fixed
00:38:532 (2,3,4,5) - why not put this sliders in the white ticks I set the sliders on the white tick, it's better like that
00:41:312 (1) - put finish? Yes, although I have not yet really worked at this level
00:45:556 (5) - move this here 00:45:410 (5) - Yes
00:47:898 (5) - move this here 00:47:751 (5) - Yes
00:55:361 (4,5,6) - stack this at the end of the slider of this note 00:54:776 (1) - then put this note 00:55:654 (7) - in x:116 y:298 Okey
00:57:702 (4,5,6) - distance this from the previous note Okey
01:03:776 (9) - your missing a note there
01:15:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - re map this part. just make a "C" shape slider then go to compose and click convert slider to stream Okey remapped
01:27:556 this part should be clickable Okey
01:31:507 (2,1) - stack Stacked
01:51:337 (2) - this note is unnecessary. remove this Yes
01:56:678 (1) - i think the sound is better if you move that here 01:56:824 (1) - Indeed, it's better
02:11:751 (8,1) - stack it properly
02:38:824 (8) - move this note down a bit Yes
03:01:800 (9) - the slider stream should be in this part because of the guitar Yes fixed
03:04:142 (8) - ^
03:40:215 (2,3) - this slider should be in the white tick Fixed
03:47:459 (4) - stream pls Yes stream is better
04:06:044 (5,6,7) - slider should be in the white tick Yess
04:21:995 this part should be clickable just like you did whit this two slider 04:32:532 (1) -
04:23:166 ^
04:35:166 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - lessen the space a bit because it's a quiet part Yeah it's very very better xd
05:12:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use a higher ds on this stream I guess? No I think this DS is good
05:15:190 (1) - you should avoid putting a stream slider in a blue tick Yeah it was very bad, fixed
06:16:463 (7) - should be clickable Clickable
06:30:511 (1) - distance this a bit from the previous note Yes
06:39:585 (4,1) - fix blanket Blanket fixed
06:49:243 (1) - long slider? I will see
06:56:267 (6) - should be clickable Clickable
07:47:778 (1) - change this to a circle? No it's a little better like that because of the voice
08:08:852 (1) - the long slider should be in this part
08:25:242 (7) - should be clickable
Clickable
that's all good luck in ranking it sorry for the short mod I'm not good at modding streamy maps No problem, thanks a lot for the mod !