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Chata - anesthesia

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Apricot
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Apricot
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年11月4日 at 3:37:35

Artist: Chata
Title: anesthesia
Tags: jiritsu interface zts
BPM: 153
Filesize: 6792kb
Play Time: 04:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.66 stars, 189 notes)
  2. Hard (4.84 stars, 469 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 661 notes)
  4. Normal (2.89 stars, 252 notes)
Download: Chata - anesthesia
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Last edited by Apricot , edited 37 times in total.
Apricot
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Reisyth
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Reisyth
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m i z u k i
418 posts
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m i z u k i

m i z u k i wrote:

SPOILER
いーじーとのーまるが完璧ですめんどくｓかったからやらなかったわけじゃないです
コピペのところも直してくださいでもべつになおさなくてもいいです提案です
ひっとさうんどにかんしてはぬーぶなのでもっど出来ないです

[Hard]
insaneでmodしたすぴんをはーどでも直してみてください
00:25:060 (7) - New combo
00:25:256 (1) - Remove new combo
00:34:668 - のーとひとつほしい
00:38:786 (1) - Remove new combo
00:38:982 (4) - New combo
01:02:315 (1) - Remove new combo
01:02:511 (3) - New combo
01:04:080 (5) - New combo
01:04:668 (1) - Remove new combo
01:05:649 (7) - New combo
01:06:237 (1) - Remove new combo
01:14:864 (1) - Remove new combo
01:15:060 (3) - New combo
01:18:198 - おとほしいです
02:11:335 (1) - Remove new combo
02:11:531 (3) - にゅーｋんぼ
02:49:570 - この辺になにかしら音がほしい
04:07:609 - のーとください

[Insane]
00:39:766 (1) - Remove new combo
00:40:551 (5) - New combo
01:18:198 - ここに一つノート置いてもいいと思います
02:30:256 (1) - ここからすぴんのほうがいいかもしれないです
02:36:531 (1) - ここも上とおなじ
02:42:805 (1) - ここも
02:49:080 (1) - こ
03:31:531 (1) - にゅーこんぼ
03:42:511 - 音ほしいです
03:54:080 - http://gyazo.com/b14e46dfa394e0d6385ccc051acae1e3　この音のとり方どうでしょうか
もしくは03:55:060 - ここからすらいだーにする
03:55:060 - にゅーこんぼ
04:03:492 (1) - Remove new combo
04:07:609 - のーといっこほしい
Last edited by m i z u k i , edited 3 times in total.
S o r d a
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S o r d a
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Joined July 2009
S o r d a
提案ですー
[overall]:
  1. 使わないならosb削除しておいてもいいと思います
[Insane]:
  1. fine.
[Hard]:
  1. 01:04:081 (7) - end 01:04:277 - これに変えたらendにfinish入れてもいいと思います
  2. 01:04:669 (8) - New combo
  3. 01:18:002 (10) - finish
  4. 04:07:413 (10) - ^
[Normal]:
  1. 01:42:905 (4) - 終わりにfinish
  2. 01:49:571 (8) - 初めにfinish
[Easy]:
  1. Easyはあまり重ねない方がいいと思います
  2. 00:38:983 (5) - 終わりにfinish?
ないすまっぷ！
ごーごーranked
rui
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rui
いい譜面でした :) star~
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Apricot
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Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Apricot
Modありがとう（ハート
赤文字以外修正しました

SPOILER

S o r d a wrote:

提案ですー
[overall]:
  1. 使わないならosb削除しておいてもいいと思います
[Insane]:
  1. fine.
[Hard]:
  1. 01:04:081 (7) - end 01:04:277 - これに変えたらendにfinish入れてもいいと思います
  2. 01:04:669 (8) - New combo
  3. 01:18:002 (10) - finish
  4. 04:07:413 (10) - ^
[Normal]:
  1. 01:42:905 (4) - 終わりにfinish
  2. 01:49:571 (8) - 初めにfinish
[Easy]:
  1. Easyはあまり重ねない方がいいと思います
  2. 00:38:983 (5) - 終わりにfinish?
ないすまっぷ！
ごーごーranked
dNextGen
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Joined May 2010
dNextGen
i like Anastashia
i like anæsthetic
i like Anastasya
i like anesthesia too
merchat7
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Joined December 2010
merchat7
Liking this song, Chata :) but wow long song... my mod
[General]
- Delete .osb since there is no storyboard
- Add something to source & tag? The album or so forth?
- Can you keep start point and end point for all difficulties the same? For example add the spinner in the beginning to all difficulties like in [Normal] or simply remove it.
- Your breaks are inconsistent, can you map something on some of the shorter break and make the longer break the same for all difficulties?
- Maybe higher stack leniency so that your beatmap looks a bit better.
[Easy]
+ 1ar (approach rate) Fits better with the speed of the song and feels less confusing in general.
00:48:787 (3,4,5) Stack this better, turn off grid snap and distant snap and try your best. Right now it's not perfect.
Nothing else grab my attention, pretty good.
[Normal]
- Ths is the only difficulty to use 1.0 tick rate, change to 0.5?
00:52:316 (2) This is not perfectly stack with end of slider (1)
01:11:140 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
01:14:669 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
01:35:257 (1,2) ^ not perfectly stack with each other
03:16:826 (1,2) Spacing, check ai mod to see if fixed.
03:26:434 (4) This is not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
03:38:983 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
03:48:002 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
03:51:532 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
Consider a higher stack leniency, since some look like they aren't stack properly, but are in the editor.
[Hard]
Flows nicely, no complain about anything. I didn't check the stacking like in [Normal] through.
[Insane]
00:17:218 (2) The previous note hit burst hides the end of this slider. Rearrange?
00:39:767 (1,2,3,4) This look like a stream which is confusing, space them out properly.
00:55:061 (8,9) Please don't overlap the slider, confusing and doesn't look good imo.
00:56:434 (3) Would look nicer if you move it up more.
00:57:022 (2) ^
01:48:787 (1,2,3,4) Again, look like a stream, space them out properly.
03:29:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) Don't think a stream fits here. Please change it.
03:31:924 (6) Up more, adjust the slider at 03:32:708 to new position as well
03:32:120 (7) More right
03:32:512 (9) Stack this properly to end of slider (5) at 03:31:532
03:54:767 (3.4.5.6.7,8.9) Again, don't like the stream, please change it.
Seems ok, but definitely need modding by a more experience modder.

So all in all good map, but i see lot of copy and pasting, but they didn't really annoy me. Consider making the stack leniency higher and keeping start, end and break consistence and it should be much better. Jumps need more work on Insane, but all other diffs seems fine so... Starred!
Apricot
565 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Apricot
Thank you for modding! :)
almost fixed!

SPOILER
Red Color: Haven't fixed, i think they're fine? in my opinion.

merchat7 wrote:

Liking this song, Chata :) but wow long song... my mod
[General]
- Delete .osb since there is no storyboard
- Add something to source & tag? The album or so forth?
- Can you keep start point and end point for all difficulties the same? For example add the spinner in the beginning to all difficulties like in [Normal] or simply remove it.
- Your breaks are inconsistent, can you map something on some of the shorter break and make the longer break the same for all difficulties?
- Maybe higher stack leniency so that your beatmap looks a bit better. 7 → 8
[Easy]
+ 1ar (approach rate) Fits better with the speed of the song and feels less confusing in general.
00:48:787 (3,4,5) Stack this better, turn off grid snap and distant snap and try your best. Right now it's not perfect.
Nothing else grab my attention, pretty good.
[Normal]
- Ths is the only difficulty to use 1.0 tick rate, change to 0.5?
00:52:316 (2) This is not perfectly stack with end of slider (1)
01:11:140 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
01:14:669 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
01:35:257 (1,2) ^ not perfectly stack with each other
03:16:826 (1,2) Spacing, check ai mod to see if fixed.
03:26:434 (4) This is not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
03:38:983 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
03:48:002 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
03:51:532 (4) ^ not perfectly stack with end of slider (3)
Consider a higher stack leniency, since some look like they aren't stack properly, but are in the editor.
[Hard]
Flows nicely, no complain about anything. I didn't check the stacking like in [Normal] through.
[Insane]
00:17:218 (2) The previous note hit burst hides the end of this slider. Rearrange?
00:39:767 (1,2,3,4) This look like a stream which is confusing, space them out properly.
00:55:061 (8,9) Please don't overlap the slider, confusing and doesn't look good imo.
00:56:434 (3) Would look nicer if you move it up more.
00:57:022 (2) ^
01:48:787 (1,2,3,4) Again, look like a stream, space them out properly.
03:29:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) Don't think a stream fits here. Please change it.
03:31:924 (6) Up more, adjust the slider at 03:32:708 to new position as well
03:32:120 (7) More right
03:32:512 (9) Stack this properly to end of slider (5) at 03:31:532
03:54:767 (3.4.5.6.7,8.9) Again, don't like the stream, please change it.
Seems ok, but definitely need modding by a more experience modder.

So all in all good map, but i see lot of copy and pasting, but they didn't really annoy me. Consider making the stack leniency higher and keeping start, end and break consistence and it should be much better. Jumps need more work on Insane, but all other diffs seems fine so... Starred!
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Sure
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Joined February 2009
Sure
[General]
Offset : 2904 (Based on current offset. But don't forget to resnap all notes. This offset is to fix metronome.)


[Insane]
00:46:826 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
00:52:708 (2) - Put a soft finish to return arrow instead of custom normal clap
01:01:336 (2) - Hard to see rturn arrow. Yea... It seems almost unrankable. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124304
01:11:630 (8) - Try to delete this circle. It will be more fit to music.
02:01:728 (2) - Put a soft finish to return arrow instead of custom normal clap.
02:20:649 (8) - Try to delete this circle. It will be more fit to music.
02:27:022 - Add a note with finish.
03:17:022 (2) - Put a soft finish to return arrow instead of clap.
03:29:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream feels like overmapped.
03:54:767 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^


[Hard]
00:46:826 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
02:27:022 (10) - Add finish
03:11:140 (1) - ^


[Normal]
00:46:826 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
03:11:140 (1) - ^


[Easy]
01:23:885 (1) - Add finish to end of slider
02:40:355 (1) - Make shorter to 02:46:042
02:51:532 (3) - Add finish to end of slider


I smelled 'copy and paste' in many sections. They are not so good idea, because of your mapping style is based on flow.
Be that as it may, it doesn't mean 'copy and paste' is good in symmetry style.
I understand you may be bored easily with making full ver map by 4 times.
Try to make variable pattern in next map, or you're lazy. >w<
Anyway good luck~ ☆ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)
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Apricot
565 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Apricot
Thank you for modding!
almost fixed!
and, added some random patterns.

SPOILER

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
Offset : 2904 (Based on current offset. But don't forget to resnap all notes. This offset is to fix metronome.)


[Insane]
00:46:826 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
00:52:708 (2) - Put a soft finish to return arrow instead of custom normal clap
01:01:336 (2) - Hard to see rturn arrow. Yea... It seems almost unrankable. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124304
01:11:630 (8) - Try to delete this circle. It will be more fit to music.
02:01:728 (2) - Put a soft finish to return arrow instead of custom normal clap.
02:20:649 (8) - Try to delete this circle. It will be more fit to music.
02:27:022 - Add a note with finish.
03:17:022 (2) - Put a soft finish to return arrow instead of clap.
03:29:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream feels like overmapped.
03:54:767 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^


[Hard]
00:46:826 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
02:27:022 (10) - Add finish
03:11:140 (1) - ^


[Normal]
00:46:826 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
03:11:140 (1) - ^


[Easy]
01:23:885 (1) - Add finish to end of slider
02:40:355 (1) - Make shorter to 02:46:042
02:51:532 (3) - Add finish to end of slider


I smelled 'copy and paste' in many sections. They are not so good idea, because of your mapping style is based on flow.
Be that as it may, it doesn't mean 'copy and paste' is good in symmetry style.
I understand you may be bored easily with making full ver map by 4 times.
Try to make variable pattern in next map, or you're lazy. >w<
Anyway good luck~ ☆ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
phonic
Staaaaaaaaaaaaar :)
nicemap!!


Hard

02:30:354 でスピンを 02:33:492　ｵｽｽﾒします

02:36:629 スピンを入れて 02:39:766はどうですか??

応援してます ;)
Apricot
565 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Apricot

Elize wrote:

Staaaaaaaaaaaaar :)
nicemap!!


Hard

02:30:354 でスピンを 02:33:492　ｵｽｽﾒします

02:36:629 スピンを入れて 02:39:766はどうですか??

応援してます ;)
modありがとうございます！
02:30:354~　スピン入れました！
poisonchan
257 posts
Joined January 2010
poisonchan
Apricot-kun :3 Modding your map as your request :D
Hope it helps! <3

[!] = You NEED to change.
[?] = Suggestion.
[.] = If possible, change.

General

- What about those colours as your combos ?:
(To change it, open .osu file, look at [Colours] tab and change for this code, don't forget to change in all difficulties.)

  • [Colours]
    Combo1 : 173,148,240
    Combo2 : 250,182,241
    Combo3 : 138,201,232
Easy
[Easy]
00:18:983 (6) - New combo.
00:19:375 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:22:512 (4) - New combo.
00:23:688 - Add a beat here.
00:25:649 (7) - Try making this slider look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125298 .
00:34:277 (4) - Don't stack this note under (3) ! New combo !
00:36:630 (3) - Don't stack this note under (1) !
00:38:983 (5) - New combo.
00:41:336 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:728 (2) - New combo.
00:46:826 (1,2) - Don't stack these notes !
00:48:787 (4,5) - Don't stack these notes !
00:55:061 (3) - Don't stack this note !
00:56:238 (4) - New combo.
01:02:512 (4) - New combo.
01:07:610 (2) - Don't stack this note !
01:15:061 (4) - New combo.
01:18:786 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
01:21:335 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
01:23:688 - Add a beat here. (With new combo starting here, removing from 01:23:885 (1) - )
01:28:003 (6) - New combo.
01:28:395 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:31:532 (4) - New combo.
01:34:668 (8) - Try making this slider look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125297 .
01:48:002 (5) - New combo.
01:50:356 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:50:748 (2) - New combo.
01:55:846 (1,2) - Don't stack these notes !
01:57:807 (4,5) - Don't stack these notes !
02:04:081 (3) - Don't stack this note !
02:05:258 (4) - New combo.
02:11:532 (4) - New combo.
02:16:630 (2) - Don't stack this note !
02:21:336 (1) - Don't stack this note !
02:24:081 (4) - New combo.
02:27:805 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
02:38:198 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
02:52:511 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
03:08:786 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
03:26:826 (4) - New combo.
03:30:551 - Add a beat here. (With new combo starting here, removing from 03:30:748 (1) - )
03:31:924 (2,3) - 2 is touching 3, and 3 is touching 2. Change the spacing a little to improve that ?
03:39:375 (4) - New combo.
03:51:924 (4) - New combo.
03:55:649 - Add a beat here. (With new combo starting here, removing from03:55:846 (1) - )
03:57:022 (2) - 2 is touching 1. Change the spacing to improve that ?
04:04:473 (4) - New combo.

You have unsnapped objects in your map, to fix that: Timing > Resnap all notes.

Normal
[Normal]
00:18:591 (5) - New combo.
00:21:336 (8) - New combo.
00:22:119 - Add a beat here? (If yes, add new combo here and remove from the next note)
00:23:688 - ^ - If don't, remove new combo from 00:24:081 (1) - and fix the spacing !
00:25:256 - Add a beat here?
00:25:649 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:25:649 (1,2,3) - Don't stack 2 on 1, and 3 on 2. Makes the flow odd !
00:31:924 (2) - Don't stack this note !
00:40:551 (7) - New combo.
00:50:355 (6) - New combo.
00:50:748 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:316 (2) - Unstack this note ! New combo.
00:55:846 (4) - New combo.
00:56:238 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:56:630 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
01:05:257 (5) - New combo.
01:08:395 (4) - New combo.
01:08:787 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:179 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
01:18:786 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
01:22:512 (1) - Remove this slider ?
01:21:335 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
01:23:688 - 01:24:080 - Add beats here?
01:27:611 (5) - New combo.
01:30:356 (8) - New combo.
01:31:139 - Add a beat here?
01:33:886 (6,7) - This spacing is wrong, fix it according to the 'Distance Snap' tool, don't stack 7 with (1) !!!!
01:34:669 (1,2,3) - Unstack (1) this with (7), don't stack (2) with (1) and (3) with (2) !!
01:36:630 (4) - Move it a little, so won't touch (1). New combo !
01:39:767 (6) - Fix the spacing.
01:40:944 (2) - Don't stack (2) on (1).
01:49:571 (8) - New combo.
01:59:375 (6) - New combo.
01:59:768 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:01:336 (2) - Unstack this note ! New combo.
02:04:865 (4) - New combo.
02:05:256 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:05:650 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
02:14:277 (5) - New combo.
02:17:414 (4) - New combo.
02:17:807 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:18:199 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
02:27:805 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
02:32:315 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
02:37:021 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
02:43:296 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
03:20:159 (4) - New combo.
03:20:944 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
03:29:571 (5) - New combo.
03:32:708 (4) - New combo.
03:33:492 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
03:42:903 (6) - New combo.
03:43:296 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:45:649 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:46:041 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
03:54:668 (5) - New combo.
03:57:806 (4) - New combo.
03:58:590 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?


You have unsnapped objects in your map, to fix that: Timing > Resnap all notes.


Uguu ;_; I don't have time to mod Hard and Insane today, but I will as soon as possible >3< Sorry! I mod it tomorrow!
Apricot
565 posts
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Topic Starter
Apricot
All of new combo and stacks are fixed!
it helps me very well! Thank you pchan :)

SPOILER

poisonchan wrote:

General

- What about those colours as your combos ?:
(To change it, open .osu file, look at [Colours] tab and change for this code, don't forget to change in all difficulties.)

  • [Colours]
    Combo1 : 173,148,240
    Combo2 : 250,182,241
    Combo3 : 138,201,232
Easy
[Easy]
00:18:983 (6) - New combo.
00:19:375 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:22:512 (4) - New combo.
00:23:688 - Add a beat here.
00:25:649 (7) - Try making this slider look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125298 .
00:34:277 (4) - Don't stack this note under (3) ! New combo !
00:36:630 (3) - Don't stack this note under (1) !
00:38:983 (5) - New combo.
00:41:336 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:728 (2) - New combo.
00:46:826 (1,2) - Don't stack these notes !
00:48:787 (4,5) - Don't stack these notes !
00:55:061 (3) - Don't stack this note !
00:56:238 (4) - New combo.
01:02:512 (4) - New combo.
01:07:610 (2) - Don't stack this note !
01:15:061 (4) - New combo.
01:18:786 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
01:21:335 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
01:23:688 - Add a beat here. (With new combo starting here, removing from 01:23:885 (1) - )
01:28:003 (6) - New combo.
01:28:395 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:31:532 (4) - New combo.
01:34:668 (8) - Try making this slider look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125297 .
01:48:002 (5) - New combo.
01:50:356 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:50:748 (2) - New combo.
01:55:846 (1,2) - Don't stack these notes !
01:57:807 (4,5) - Don't stack these notes !
02:04:081 (3) - Don't stack this note !
02:05:258 (4) - New combo.
02:11:532 (4) - New combo.
02:16:630 (2) - Don't stack this note !
02:21:336 (1) - Don't stack this note !
02:24:081 (4) - New combo.
02:27:805 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
02:38:198 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
02:52:511 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
03:08:786 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
03:26:826 (4) - New combo.
03:30:551 - Add a beat here. (With new combo starting here, removing from 03:30:748 (1) - )
03:31:924 (2,3) - 2 is touching 3, and 3 is touching 2. Change the spacing a little to improve that ?
03:39:375 (4) - New combo.
03:51:924 (4) - New combo.
03:55:649 - Add a beat here. (With new combo starting here, removing from03:55:846 (1) - )
03:57:022 (2) - 2 is touching 1. Change the spacing to improve that ?
04:04:473 (4) - New combo.

You have unsnapped objects in your map, to fix that: Timing > Resnap all notes.

Normal
[Normal]
00:18:591 (5) - New combo.
00:21:336 (8) - New combo.
00:22:119 - Add a beat here? (If yes, add new combo here and remove from the next note)
00:23:688 - ^ - If don't, remove new combo from 00:24:081 (1) - and fix the spacing !
00:25:256 - Add a beat here?
00:25:649 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:25:649 (1,2,3) - Don't stack 2 on 1, and 3 on 2. Makes the flow odd !
00:31:924 (2) - Don't stack this note !
00:40:551 (7) - New combo.
00:50:355 (6) - New combo.
00:50:748 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:316 (2) - Unstack this note ! New combo.
00:55:846 (4) - New combo.
00:56:238 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:56:630 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
01:05:257 (5) - New combo.
01:08:395 (4) - New combo.
01:08:787 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:179 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
01:18:786 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
01:22:512 (1) - Remove this slider ?
01:21:335 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
01:23:688 - 01:24:080 - Add beats here?
01:27:611 (5) - New combo.
01:30:356 (8) - New combo.
01:31:139 - Add a beat here?
01:33:886 (6,7) - This spacing is wrong, fix it according to the 'Distance Snap' tool, don't stack 7 with (1) !!!!
01:34:669 (1,2,3) - Unstack (1) this with (7), don't stack (2) with (1) and (3) with (2) !!
01:36:630 (4) - Move it a little, so won't touch (1). New combo !
01:39:767 (6) - Fix the spacing.
01:40:944 (2) - Don't stack (2) on (1).
01:49:571 (8) - New combo.
01:59:375 (6) - New combo.
01:59:768 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:01:336 (2) - Unstack this note ! New combo.
02:04:865 (4) - New combo.
02:05:256 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:05:650 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
02:14:277 (5) - New combo.
02:17:414 (4) - New combo.
02:17:807 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:18:199 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
02:27:805 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
02:32:315 - Drag the ending of the break here ?
02:37:021 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
02:43:296 - Drag the beginning of the break here ?
03:20:159 (4) - New combo.
03:20:944 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
03:29:571 (5) - New combo.
03:32:708 (4) - New combo.
03:33:492 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
03:42:903 (6) - New combo.
03:43:296 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:45:649 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:46:041 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?
03:54:668 (5) - New combo.
03:57:806 (4) - New combo.
03:58:590 (2) - Try changing the direction of the slider, so it won't be overlapping (4) ?


You have unsnapped objects in your map, to fix that: Timing > Resnap all notes.


Uguu ;_; I don't have time to mod Hard and Insane today, but I will as soon as possible >3< Sorry! I mod it tomorrow!
AisamaDX
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Peace_old_1
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:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
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>:(
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Mercurius
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Suzully
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:) :D ;) 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
sirokuro123
sirokuro123
this song & map is nice :)

star!!

Let's hold out mutually ;)
swish
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swish
茶太

:)
nimba_old
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nimba_old
ちゃったちゃった
ちゃったちゃった
ちゃったちゃった
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
[General]
I'm afraid they'll say slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankable now (it's unrankable because it's unrankable rofl), anyway take care of it and ready for a solution. (1 may still fit...well)
Copy&Paste whole patterns is a bad habit = =|||

[Easy]
00:25:649 (4) - try to make it don't have a stack part with other notes~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130228 (meh my slider drawing skill is not that good either)
00:47:609 (3) - finish at the end instead of clap?
01:34:668 (5) - same as 00:25:649 (4)
01:54:276 (4) - change the direction slightly?

02:40:354 (1) - seems like just a spinner in a long break...= = a little strange, also lower the volume if possible because this part is really quiet.
03:20:551 (4) - new combo
03:58:198 (4) - ^

[Normal]
AR+1
00:55:845 (1,2,3) - i'll say better not to use this kind of placements in a Normal diff (or say anything below Hard), would be a little confusing.
01:08:394 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:492 (3,4) - similar here. maybe just remove 4
02:04:864 (1,2,3) - = =|||
02:17:413 (1,2,3) - ^
02:50:354 (1,2,3) - how about?

03:20:551 (2,3) - ~~~= =|||
03:26:433 (4,2) - the reverse arrow is not really hidden, but still may be too confusing to average/newbie players, reconsider it?
03:33:100 (2,3) - ._.
03:37:805 (3,4) - again i think this is not fit.
03:40:158 (2) - slider reverse arrow thing again.
03:45:256 (1,2,3) - o.o
03:51:531 (4,2) - i'll say no...
03:58:198 (2,3) - = =

[Hard]
01:30:354 (9) - miss a clap at the beginning?
01:44:080 (1,2) - make the spacing farther = =
02:36:629 - i suggest you to map this break... it's really a consistent part with 02:27:805 - 02:36:629 imo.

[Insane]
01:11:727 (8,9,1,2,3) - not a fan of placements like this (because "no move" fits really few situations imo...)
03:46:041 (4,1,2,3,1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130240 www

Insane and Hard have a better quality than the easier diffs... = =||| star.

Apricot
565 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Apricot

NatsumeRin wrote:

SPOILER
[General]
I'm afraid they'll say slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankable now (it's unrankable because it's unrankable rofl), anyway take care of it and ready for a solution. (1 may still fit...well)
Copy&Paste whole patterns is a bad habit = =|||

[Easy]
00:25:649 (4) - try to make it don't have a stack part with other notes~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130228 (meh my slider drawing skill is not that good either)
00:47:609 (3) - finish at the end instead of clap?
01:34:668 (5) - same as 00:25:649 (4)
01:54:276 (4) - change the direction slightly?
[attachment=1:594f4]134.png[/attachment:594f4]
02:40:354 (1) - seems like just a spinner in a long break...= = a little strange, also lower the volume if possible because this part is really quiet.
03:20:551 (4) - new combo
03:58:198 (4) - ^

[Normal]
AR+1
00:55:845 (1,2,3) - i'll say better not to use this kind of placements in a Normal diff (or say anything below Hard), would be a little confusing.
01:08:394 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:492 (3,4) - similar here. maybe just remove 4
02:04:864 (1,2,3) - = =|||
02:17:413 (1,2,3) - ^
02:50:354 (1,2,3) - how about?
[attachment=0:594f4]135.png[/attachment:594f4]
03:20:551 (2,3) - ~~~= =|||
03:26:433 (4,2) - the reverse arrow is not really hidden, but still may be too confusing to average/newbie players, reconsider it?
03:33:100 (2,3) - ._.
03:37:805 (3,4) - again i think this is not fit.
03:40:158 (2) - slider reverse arrow thing again.
03:45:256 (1,2,3) - o.o
03:51:531 (4,2) - i'll say no...
03:58:198 (2,3) - = =

[Hard]
01:30:354 (9) - miss a clap at the beginning?
01:44:080 (1,2) - make the spacing farther = =
02:36:629 - i suggest you to map this break... it's really a consistent part with 02:27:805 - 02:36:629 imo.

[Insane]
01:11:727 (8,9,1,2,3) - not a fan of placements like this (because "no move" fits really few situations imo...)
03:46:041 (4,1,2,3,1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130240 www

Insane and Hard have a better quality than the easier diffs... = =||| star.

thank you NatsumeRin. <3
ALL Fixed!
m i z u k i
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m i z u k i
:oops: :lol: :shock: :? :x :evil: :idea: :idea: :evil: :evil: :) :( :evil: :!: :| :idea: :idea:
Apricot
565 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Apricot
modありでつ

m i z u k i wrote:

SPOILER
いーじーとのーまるが完璧ですめんどくｓかったからやらなかったわけじゃないです
コピペのところも直してくださいでもべつになおさなくてもいいです提案です
ひっとさうんどにかんしてはぬーぶなのでもっど出来ないです

[Hard]
insaneでmodしたすぴんをはーどでも直してみてください
00:25:060 (7) - New combo
00:25:256 (1) - Remove new combo
00:34:668 - のーとひとつほしい
00:38:786 (1) - Remove new combo No.
00:38:982 (4) - New combo No.
01:02:315 (1) - Remove new combo
01:02:511 (3) - New combo
01:04:080 (5) - New combo
01:04:668 (1) - Remove new combo
01:05:649 (7) - New combo
01:06:237 (1) - Remove new combo
01:14:864 (1) - Remove new combo
01:15:060 (3) - New combo
01:18:198 - おとほしいです
02:11:335 (1) - Remove new combo
02:11:531 (3) - にゅーｋんぼ
02:49:570 - この辺になにかしら音がほしい
04:07:609 - のーとください

[Insane]
00:39:766 (1) - Remove new combo No.
00:40:551 (5) - New combo No.
01:18:198 - ここに一つノート置いてもいいと思います
02:30:256 (1) - ここからすぴんのほうがいいかもしれないです
02:36:531 (1) - ここも上とおなじ
02:42:805 (1) - ここも
02:49:080 (1) - こ
03:31:531 (1) - にゅーこんぼ
03:42:511 - 音ほしいです
03:54:080 - http://gyazo.com/b14e46dfa394e0d6385ccc051acae1e3　この音のとり方どうでしょうか
もしくは03:55:060 - ここからすらいだーにする
03:55:060 - にゅーこんぼ No.
04:03:492 (1) - Remove new combo No.
04:07:609 - のーといっこほしい
kioukiou
774 posts
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kioukiou
Nothing major problem i can find.
Btw,I love this song . @@
Apricot
565 posts
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Topic Starter
Apricot
some new combo mod by kioukiou~~
thank you! ヾ(o･ω･)ﾉﾟ
Peace_old_1
83 posts
Joined May 2011
Peace_old_1
[Insane]
00:38:786 (1) - RNC
00:39:766 (1) - NC
02:24:080 (5) - DS(＾＾)

[Hard]
00:35:060 (1) - 形が綺麗ではないかも？

[Normal]
fine!

[Easy]
fine!
Astom
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Joined October 2008
Astom
o/

[General]
  1. Finish kiai time here 02:27:021 in all diff.
  2. Timing points are 1ms unsnaped, so resnap them (yea I know it's silly but anyway someone will point it to you later so fix it now).
[Easy]
Suggestions:
  1. 00:38:982 (1) sounds out of place, I suggest delete it and add a circle in 00:38:982, then a slider from 00:39:374 to 00:39:766 with one repetition and finally a slider from 00:40:551 to 00:41:335, like this
    SPOILER
  2. 01:34:276 (1) - delete this spinner, don't fits really well the song, so change it for a circle in 01:34:276, a slider from 01:34:668 to 01:35:453, then add another slider from 01:35:845 to 01:36:433 with one repetition (delete circle in 01:37:021) like this
    SPOILER
  3. 02:26:433 (3) - delete a repeat in this slider and finish it in 02:27:021 (add finish at end) like this:
    SPOILER
Next are hitsounds suggestions, just do them if you like them
  1. 01:23:884 (1) - finish at the end of this slider.
  2. 01:24:864 (2) - add clap
  3. 01:26:433 (4) - -^
  4. 01:28:002 (1) - -^
  5. 01:25:256 (3) - remove clap at beginning of this slider
  6. 01:26:825 (5) - -^
  7. 01:28:394 (2) - remove clap at beginning of this slider and add it at end of it.
  8. 01:29:178 (3) - -^
  9. 01:29:962 (4) - change clap for whistle.
  10. 01:55:845 (1) - add whistle
  11. 03:11:139 (1) - finish at beginning of this slider.
  12. 03:17:021 (1) - clap at beginning of this slider.
[Normal]
Suggestions:
  1. 02:26:433 (4) - make it a little more longe and finish it in 02:27:021, remove finish at beggining and add it at end, like this:
    SPOILER
[Hard]
Hitsounds suggestions, just do them if you like them
  1. Move this timing point 02:27:707 to 02:27:609, and lower volume to 50%
  2. 02:28:394 (2) - add clap at beginning of this slider.
  3. 02:29:178 (4) - add clap.
  4. 02:29:962 (6) - -^
  5. 03:11:139 (1) - add finish.
  6. 03:14:668 (2) - clap instead of finish, too much finish together don't sound pretty well.
[Thoughts/Opinions]
  1. You swap your claps placement from |x|o|x|o|x| to |o|x|o|x|o| in easy, sometimes sounds good and other times you can clearly heard drum sounding like |x|o|x|o|x| (circles are claps) so sounds a little strange, but I don't think than someone is going to miss for that, just to point it, other diff are fine because have more circles so is less noticeable.
  2. Totally luv your insane diff. was pretty fun.
Nice map, I totally love chata's songs and your map is pretty good.
Good luck.
ET sc2
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Joined August 2010
ET sc2
:) quite nice map!
http://hiphotos.baidu.com/etsc2/pic/item/605f2eb036c4b38730add1db.jpg

Although I lost many combo at the first time~



Breeze
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Breeze

Easy

  1. 02:52:315 - 03:10:943 - I feel this break is kinda long, try map this part? Since there is already a break at 02:27:413 - 02:40:158, just 12s ago
  2. Notes are all fine, just some finish sound I feel move 1/2 beat backward seems better
    1. 01:05:256 (3)
    2. 02:14:276 (3)
    3. 03:42:119 (3)
  3. 02:38:198 - I found you used 60% volume in other diff. at this part, use 60% to make hitsound accordance?

Normal

  1. 01:22:904 - Drag break to here?
  2. 03:12:315 (2), 03:13:100 (3), 03:13:884 (4) - Add clap?

Hard

  1. 02:10:551 (6) - This spacing looked a bit far, it's playable, just spacing far more than other tiny jumps

Insane

  1. 01:49:570 (5) - Finish instead of clap seems better?
  2. 02:01:923 (2) - Remove finish here, add finish to 02:02:119 (2)
  3. 02:06:237 (3) - I think this slider doesn't fit this song here
  4. 03:29:962 (5) - Add finish, remove finish of 03:30:354 (1)

nice map in all
let me know when you have any reply
Apricot
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Topic Starter
Apricot

Breeze wrote:

Easy

  1. 02:52:315 - 03:10:943 - I feel this break is kinda long, try map this part? Since there is already a break at 02:27:413 - 02:40:158, just 12s ago fixed!
  2. Notes are all fine, just some finish sound I feel move 1/2 beat backward seems better fixed!
    1. 01:05:256 (3)
    2. 02:14:276 (3)
    3. 03:42:119 (3)
  3. 02:38:198 - I found you used 60% volume in other diff. at this part, use 60% to make hitsound accordance? fixed!

Normal

  1. 01:22:904 - Drag break to here? fixed!
  2. 03:12:315 (2), 03:13:100 (3), 03:13:884 (4) - Add clap? fixed!

Hard

  1. 02:10:551 (6) - This spacing looked a bit far, it's playable, just spacing far more than other tiny jumps fixed!

Insane

  1. 01:49:570 (5) - Finish instead of clap seems better? fixed!
  2. 02:01:923 (2) - Remove finish here, add finish to 02:02:119 (2) It's fine imo. I'll keep it.
  3. 02:06:237 (3) - I think this slider doesn't fit this song here fixed!
  4. 03:29:962 (5) - Add finish, remove finish of 03:30:354 (1) fixed!
thank you for mod!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Breeze
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Breeze
OK, bubbled
whymeman
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whymeman
This song makes me wish I had a cheery blossom tree in my backyard..... anyways, ranked. Good job.
Amule
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Amule
yey~
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