1. Gladi's Normal (4,29 stars, 221 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 463 notes)
3. vivere's Easy (1,67 stars, 129 notes)

1. Add Gladi and GladiOol to TAGs
2. Delete .osb file
3. Guest diff. below~

1. Add me in tags
2. Add Preview Point
3. And disables countdown

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

General:

• The cut off in the mp3 at the end sounds ugly (Nothing un-rankable and it also doesn't really make much of a difference. I just thought I should just point that out). Nops, I think It was perfectly cutted.

• I would also add a Hard diff because the difficulty gap between Normal and Insane is huge. I don't think so, the Normal difficulty looks more like a Hard one.

Vivere's Easy:


• 00:28:570 (1,1) - The space between the end of the spinner and the start of the slider feels pretty weird to me. I would add a note on 00:31:383. Done
• 00:39:636 (2) - I would add a new combo to this note to match 00:33:634 (1). Nope!Chuck Testa Vivere uses New Combos on each start of pattern, I think the he used NC here is good..
• 00:41:137 (4,1) - Eh, I think this would be better for an Easy diff if you map it like this because nothing really sounds off on 00:41:887 Done!:

• 00:54:266 (1,6) - I would remove these two notes. They don't really seem to match the music well Yessir~
• 00:57:642 (1,2) - This doesn't really have a good flow to it. I would try using a slider more open. Here is an option: Fixed~

SPOILER

• 01:04:019 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note. Doesn't seem to match the music. Fixeeed.
• 01:59:161 (1,2,3) - This part seems poorly mapped. It barley matches the music and it's pretty boring. Here is something you can do: Fix'd :3

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♦ I found this difficulty strange. It seems as though you try to keep everything symmetrical, but in an attempt to do that, a lot of things don't really match the music very well. For example: Hmm, I don't know.
• 02:22:043 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It doesn't really sound very good nor does it play good.

Gladi's Normal:

• 00:58:956 (1,2,3,4) - These stacks are pretty boring. This part of the music feels pretty powerful and a stack like this does not really fit it. I would do something like this: Fixed~

SPOILER

• 02:03:288 (5) - I would change the slider so that it pointing the other direction. This would enhance the flow: Nah, It's a good flow break imo..

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Insane:

• 00:41:138 (8,9,10) - I don't think it's a great idea to stack these notes seeing as they're not constant beats. Fixed and Fixed copy/paste
• 01:41:156 (8,9,10) - ^ Fixed and fixed copy/paste;
• 01:11:709 (5,6,1) - I think the space between these two notes break the flow. I would do something like this instead: Fixed and copy/paste


Overall:

The map is solid. It has great flow and shows a lot of effort. I only really had some suggestions. Easy needs to be worked on a little more in my opinion.

I see no point in a re-check since BD is going to bubble this. ♪Star~

Katsuri wrote:

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Vivere's Easy:


• 00:28:570 (1,1) - The space between the end of the spinner and the start of the slider feels pretty weird to me. I would add a note on 00:31:383. Done
• 00:39:636 (2) - I would add a new combo to this note to match 00:33:634 (1). Nope!Chuck Testa Vivere uses New Combos on each start of pattern, I think the he used NC here is good.. Done... sorry Katsu ;_;
• 00:41:137 (4,1) - Eh, I think this would be better for an Easy diff if you map it like this because nothing really sounds off on 00:41:887 Done!:

• 00:54:266 (1,6) - I would remove these two notes. They don't really seem to match the music well Yessir~
• 00:57:642 (1,2) - This doesn't really have a good flow to it. I would try using a slider more open. Here is an option: Fixed~

SPOILER

• 01:04:019 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note. Doesn't seem to match the music. Fixeeed.
• 01:59:161 (1,2,3) - This part seems poorly mapped. It barley matches the music and it's pretty boring. Here is something you can do: Fix'd :3 There were some spacing problems between (4) and (5), so I did some changes xD.

SPOILER

♦ I found this difficulty strange. It seems as though you try to keep everything symmetrical, but in an attempt to do that, a lot of things don't really match the music very well. For example: Hmm, I don't know.
• 02:22:043 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It doesn't really sound very good nor does it play good. It has both, sounds good and is playable... imo

1. Disable the letterbox during breaks
2. The mp3 sounds awful in the end,can you re-code this please?

MoodyRPG wrote:

As requested from Kiddo-kun~

General

1. Disable the letterbox during breaks Nops :3
2. The mp3 sounds awful in the end,can you re-code this please? Nops

Vivere
-- AR: +1 Nope face
- 00:57:642 (5) - New combo to follow the voice OK
- 01:16:398 (2) - Unstack this note because is hard to new players IMO Nope, it's not.
- 01:41:530 (4) - Center this slider kk

Gladi
-- Whoops,a little hard is this diff,if you can reduce some things in your diff,would be good Nah, it's a Normal/Hard
- 01:34:403 (2,3,4) - Maybe like this NO!?
- 01:41:155 (4) - Switch new combo Why?

Insane
- 00:28:945 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe like this? Nah
- 01:17:148 (6) - New combo here would be goodk
- 02:17:167 (6) - Same ^ ^

Well i can see a great mapset here so what can i say here? Good Job

Guerra wrote:

Gostei
INSANE:
00:28:945(1,2,3,4,5) - Uma simetria aqui é bom, está estranho quando joga :3. Nah
01:02:143(3,4,5,1)-Alinhar para que fique de forma correta,olha a diferença: Arrumei :3

SPOILER

FORMA ATUAL:


FORMA MELHORADA:

01:25:775(1,2,3 stream) - eles estão muito proximo do numero (4,01:25:558), utiliza o ''distance snap''. Done.
01:27:008 - 01:27:276 - 01:27:464 - fica mais legal 1 circle a cada tempo desse, doque a stream que está no 01:27:276. Done
02:02:162 - já sitei. Done
02:25:794 - já sitei.Done
02:27:107 - já sitei.Done

Maus o meu modd não ter sido legal, é que faiz tempo que eu brinquei de mapper.

1. Uhmm the mp3 ends sudden and sounds kinda ugly, for me not is a problem but well is an comment for esthetic.
2. I think in the first and third kiai time is needless, furthermore to so many kiai time. I prefer put it in the parts with voice.
3. End up the second kiai time here 01:18:461 and put again in 01:19:023, this give an effect if suspense and imo looks good, same in 02:18:479. Also the last kiai time should be end in 02:27:482.

1. 00:18:630 (1) - Combo bug, please add NC here.
2. 00:33:634 (1,2,3) - Sounds strong with this claps, maybe remove somes.
3. 00:39:636 (1,2,3) - Move this pattern a bit above to avoid the overlap, looks a bit ugly because anymore slider/beat it's already like that, you can use some like this http://puu.sh/d0lg
4. 00:42:075 (1) - Remove new combo here and put it in the next note.

1. 00:18:630 (1) - Again the NC bug, stupid bug >__>
2. Nothing more to add, very nice and fun to play~

1. 00:18:630 (1) - Same as Normal and Easy.
2. I will mod this diff later, I have to go >_>