[-PinK-] wrote:

Hello~~

Nyanpassu~

00:11:127 (1,2) - i don't think this combination of slider here look so good , but it's only me you can leave this as it is if you want to ( i think this : http://prntscr.com/f2m7pw , looks good ) did something else !
00:24:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - this jumps could look better( http://prntscr.com/f2m5t0 i think this looks cool , idek ) who said i want them to be jumps :> ? its not supposed to be a jump pattern
00:38:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's pretty hard to see circles 5 and 6 , idk if it's just my vision or not owo hmmm well i think its pretty okay for a hard diff
00:45:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this also could look better( i think ;3; ) how :> ?

Gero's Advanced

1º - make the stacking leniency bigger , advanced maps are mostly played by new players , and if normal stacking is hard to them , imagine dis one (even AI mode tells dis: http://prntscr.com/f2m9i2 , owo)
00:14:820 (1,2) - could look better
00:16:666 (1,2) - ^
00:21:281 (4,5) - ^
00:25:204 (3,4,5) - don't let this types of stacking flying on the air with a circle with 1/2 spacing closer to it (this is difficult af for new players)
00:41:589 (3) - it's hard to see this circle and the pattern plays strange
00:43:435 (3) - ^

sorry but i can't mod easy and normal properlly ;3;

Toshino Kyoko wrote:

NM cause you forced me to mod it :

REMAP KDS PLZ :>

Toshino Kyoko wrote:

Here's your real mod Bakatori ~

Genral

1. The timing feels a little off, like the offset is a little too early by ~30ms :thinking: about it, if others complain i'll change it !

Nyanpassu~

1. 00:12:743 (1) - Why NC here ? i dont really know....probably did that by mistake or forgot change it :3....
2. 00:29:358 (6,1) - Blanket feels a little off
3. 00:38:589 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Is the little stacking offset made on purpose here ?yes ! since i find it kinda cool to let the circles slowly move up and i think its a bit easier to read than having them stacked

Gero's Advanced

1. 00:15:281 (2,3) - Blanket is slightly off imo
2. 00:17:128 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:41:358 (2,3,4,5,6) - Kinda sad that stack leniency ruins the pattern
4. 00:46:204 (3) - Rotate by 3° counter clock wise so it look allign, looks slightly off, by very little, yeah nitpick whatever
5. 00:44:358 (1) - Same but clockwise

Normal

1. 00:13:435 (2,3) - move a tiny more to the right, at Y:314
2. 00:30:512 (3,1) - Rip Blanket

Pachiru's Easy

1. 00:18:512 (5,6) - Fix DS slightly
2. 00:22:204 (1,1) - Not sure about the recover time for spinner in easy diff, it might be too small here
3. 00:54:051 (3,4) - Why not allign them, I think it will look better

That's it for the mod,
Anyway have a Nice Day and Good Luck !! >w<

edit : fixed the post that couldn't be quoted and some notice stuff

1. You can add more tags related to track and anime, for example name of original track (as i know NND is generally mashups between track and FXs of anime) and original name of anime (のんのんびより).
2. Video with small resolution and length and big bitrate looks really... eh, weird. You can re-render this video by yourself or with help of other peoples. not an adv: this guy can provide better video and maybe audio
3. Decide something about ending time. Idk why but i agree with GD-ers that 00:54:974 - is last sound, all sounds after is just a fade-out.
4. 00:40:204 - this hitsound is so terrible and reminds me antivirus when it founds trojan.
5. soft-hitwhistle25.wav sounds like it have strange delay.

1. 00:11:128 - this unherit is unused or even unrankable, you can just up volume of timing point and remove green line.
2. 00:18:512 (5) - skipped NC?
3. 00:21:743 (8) - i think, better to stack it with 00:19:897 (6) because: at first, it looks better with flow; at second, you don't have any note after that so diversity of cursor moving isn't really necessary.
4. 00:34:666 (2) - strange spacing... and i know that it's almost invisible. Same with 00:36:974 (1) - 00:44:358 (1) - 00:49:435 (2) ... it's time to turn on Distance Snap icon lol.
5. 00:38:358 (2,3) - don't you think that 3 is so high? For flow better to make something like 00:45:743 (2,3) .
6. 00:54:974 (4) - end of kiai end song - why not to put NC here?

1. AR5 should be better gap between another diffs. Think the same about CS3.5.
2. 00:13:435 (2,3) - this move makes no sense since (so similar words) in beginning of map you have sharp angles.
3. 00:36:512 (8) - as for me this circle should be to the right of 00:36:051 (7) because you make symmetrical triangles before.
4. 00:38:358 (1) - should be more smoother, like this for example. Yep, i turn BSD (no, i say not about UNIX) to 1/6 for find out the place where I should put sliderpoint: 00:38:512 - first, 00:38:666 - second. You can make something like this in 1/4 or 1/8 - it's your right. Don't forget to move 00:39:743 (3) for not get overlap.
5. I can't find your way to putting NCs: why you put it in 00:30:974 (1) but ignore in 00:27:743 (4) ? I think you can find a compromise.

1. Your style is impossible to miss.
2. 00:15:281 (2) - 00:17:128 (2) - looks almost like overlap, better to move it away (up or down, depends on case). About the same with stacks in 00:41:358 (2,4) - 00:43:204 (2,4) .
3. 00:19:435 (4,5) - strange combo of stacked objects but nonetheless.
4. Good map but really strange for me.
   At first, hitsounds. As i understand, author of this map wanted to convey FXes of this track but you use this strange sound (pig or pterodactyl, don't know) throughout all track when i hear similar sounds only at 00:40:204 - and this hitsound should be only in 00:39:281 (1) .
   At second, sounds like 00:30:974 - 00:38:358 - etc as for me should be clickable. Ren-chon pronounce "nyan" (or "non") just a three times, fourth - is almost another vocal and, respectively, beat.
   At third, small stack leniency. But it's not strange thing of THIS map, it's just like a meme.

1. 00:12:397 - 00:14:243 - etc - highlight of this sounds (like in Gero's diff) should sounds good.
2. 00:38:820 (3,5) - 00:39:051 (4,7) - it's really should be non-stacked?
3. 00:45:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really strange pattern because, at first, usually you make identical DS between notes but not here it makes no sense; at second, you have big jump in 00:46:897 (6,7) after small 00:46:665 (5,6) , as for me 7 should be located in the middle between 5,6.

100bit wrote:

Nico Nico in 2017 okay
Heyo from #modreqs.
[General]

1. You can add more tags related to track and anime, for example name of original track (as i know NND is generally mashups between track and FXs of anime) and original name of anime (のんのんびより). yeah i was actually thinking about adding tags from the original bang bang song
2. Video with small resolution and length and big bitrate looks really... eh, weird. You can re-render this video by yourself or with help of other peoples. not an adv: this guy can provide better video and maybe audio i have a good friend who knows how to use video and music software gonna ask him to do that for me if i catch him online :>
3. Decide something about ending time. Idk why but i agree with GD-ers that 00:54:974 - is last sound, all sounds after is just a fade-out. agree
4. 00:40:204 - this hitsound is so terrible and reminds me antivirus when it founds trojan. some like it, some dont :3
5. soft-hitwhistle25.wav sounds like it have strange delay. gunna let my friend check >.<

[Normal]

1. AR5 should be better gap between another diffs. Think the same about CS3.5.
2. 00:13:435 (2,3) - this move makes no sense since (so similar words) in beginning of map you have sharp angles.
3. 00:36:512 (8) - as for me this circle should be to the right of 00:36:051 (7) because you make symmetrical triangles before.
4. 00:38:358 (1) - should be more smoother, like this for example. Yep, i turn BSD (no, i say not about UNIX) to 1/6 for find out the place where I should put sliderpoint: 00:38:512 - first, 00:38:666 - second. You can make something like this in 1/4 or 1/8 - it's your right. Don't forget to move 00:39:743 (3) for not get overlap.
5. I can't find your way to putting NCs: why you put it in 00:30:974 (1) but ignore in 00:27:743 (4) ? I think you can find a compromise. 00:25:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - well the lets call it chorus is always one whole combo , then then jumps 00:29:589 (1,2,3) - are always one combo and the part after the jumps is also always one combo 00:30:974 (1,2,3) - so yeah either i didnt get what you mean or you said something wrong,
   idk

[Nyanpassu~]

1. 00:12:397 - 00:14:243 - etc - highlight of this sounds (like in Gero's diff) should sounds good.
2. 00:38:820 (3,5) - 00:39:051 (4,7) - it's really should be non-stacked? i actually didnt stack them because i think its easier to read if they are not stacked but oh well~
3. 00:45:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really strange pattern because, at first, usually you make identical DS between notes but not here it makes no sense; at second, you have big jump in 00:46:897 (6,7) after small 00:46:665 (5,6) , as for me 7 should be located in the middle between 5,6. made something alot more sexy ! check it out

[centre]BGs is cute (especially last). :> thought so i actually wish it would use that one as beatmap preview pic
Hitsounds reminds me music in Kazantip.
Hotaru is forever~. hotaru is best~/centre]
Good luck!
{end of the mod}

Mazziv wrote:

ayyy from the m4m deal we had!


[Normal]
besides the big spacing please copy 00:11:127 (1,2) - this and mirror it here 00:12:974 (1,2) -
00:14:820 (1,2,3) - i recommend you to change this so the slider is centred in the middle again so it looks nice after fixing the first thingy, did something else here~
00:30:974 (1,2,3) - why have those a barrely audible hitsound? barely audible ? sry but i dont think so
00:33:743 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe try to use some symmetry and copy paste the first pattern to the other side
idk this diff lacks in structure imo it has no noticeable pattern,circles/sliders doesnt compliment each other it looks not well thoughtthrough
like you try to do alot of symmetry and dont then when you should use it,you dont. i dont know if i want to complain bout hitsounds but i think those are chosen differently on purpose Sry but this doesnt help me at all, instead of just saying "hey dude this map lacks structure and your patterns suck" you could give me examples where, why and how so i can understand where something seems to be wrong. Just saying it like that doesnt really help me understand anything

[Insane]
this diff looks fine to me i really like the use of symmetry

good luck with the set !

nyu - wrote:

ich kann nicht modden alles lügen~

Normal

00:13:897 (3) - same shape as 00:12:051 (3) - ? you did the same with 00:15:743 (3,3) -
00:26:820 (3,6) - ik what youre trying to do but.. it looks soooo boring ; w; make the sliders at least a bit different plis i will try to think of something, not easy to make them something different because they are so short >< !
00:33:051 - das fühlt sich ohne nen circle hier total weird an imo - da fehlt einfach was uwu random german~ findest du o: ? finde ich irgendwie gar nicht ;w;
00:33:743 (2,3,4) - https://puu.sh/vIzJ2.png something like this?.. maybe..? owo i love you. i couldnt think of something else >.<
00:49:897 (5) - ncnccnnccnnc but that would destroy the nc patterns i used earlier ;w;
00:54:512 (3) - same shape as 00:53:128 (1) - ? fits and looks better imo

Nyaopasu

00:14:128 - Without a triple here or.. something that cover those sounds this slider feels very weird imo and if you would do same hmmmmm good idea actually, gunna keep this in my head =w=00:17:589 (3) - too it would stay like you planned owo
00:42:512 (7) - nc should be here imo, also another sliderart to empathize new section? it looks kinda weird if i make that slider different ;w; and disagree with NC i really think new section starts here >< 00:42:974 -
00:51:281 (6) - missing whistle on end i am a big baka~
00:52:666 (3) - maybe same shape as 00:51:743 (1) - ? would look better, not necessary~ i really like this 00:52:204 (2,3) - tho ;w;
00:27:743 (7) - nc here? owo new section starts here tho ;w; 00:28:204 (1) - i think
00:30:974 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 1 nc is enough <: i actually thought its easier to read with making them 1-2 but now that i think about it and this is the highest diff, yush~

those hitsounds <333333 how about u hitsound tragedyeternity for me |||| PM ingame and maybe i can~

nice map gl! :3

Kotori-Chan wrote:

Mazziv wrote:

ayyy from the m4m deal we had!


idk this diff lacks in structure imo it has no noticeable pattern,circles/sliders doesnt compliment each other it looks not well thoughtthrough
like you try to do alot of symmetry and dont then when you should use it,you dont. i dont know if i want to complain bout hitsounds but i think those are chosen differently on purpose Sry but this doesnt help me at all, instead of just saying "hey dude this map lacks structure and your patterns suck" you could give me examples where, why and how so i can understand where something seems to be wrong. Just saying it like that doesnt really help me understand anything

Mazziv wrote:

sure it does.basically its a nice way of saying remap
It should make you go into your diff and go through everything and see what i mean with ''no structure/noticeable pattern'' try to look at other easy diffs oor if you want an example press ctrl+a

Xanandra wrote:

[Easy]

00:18:512 (5) - NC?

[Normal]

No comments!

[Gero]

00:39:166 (5) - You have either two options here, either follow the vocals properly and delete 00:39:166 (5) -, or follow the music and add a note here 00:39:512 - (youll have to shorten slider, etc, whatever is needed <3)

[Nyaannnnanananana?????]

00:32:358 (1) - Not necessary, but for sake of keeping all parts of this diff harder than Gero's, end the slider at 00:32:589 - and then add notes at 00:32:704 - and 00:32:820 - . If youre doing this then youll definitely have to add a note at 00:33:051 - as well
00:47:128 (1) - Same as above i dont really know placing circles instead of this 00:32:358 (1) - doesnt really represent that ruuuu~
i think slider is better for that

Good luck with your map!

Kotori-Chan wrote:

Mini Gaunt wrote:

Hello, I decided to look at your map. (Informal M4M)

Clearly a good quality mapset!
The hitsounding is well done too! thank you <3
If you think you are ready, go ask a BN to look at this map! If i would ever get an answer to my pm's ;;

Nyanpassu~

Very minor things
By the way, this is considered a hard because of the star rating, but the slider velocity changes are something not seen a lot in hard difficulties.
I recommend raising the OD a little and increase the spacing of certain sections to make this like an insane but with a little lower than normal star rating. I never really intended to make this an insane or something. Wont increase OD, spacing or something because i just dont want it to be unnecesserily spaced or something. I just want it to be a nice little "hard" to play to enjoy :3

I like the different types of sliders you used! thank you again~

You also don't have to use distance snap in Hard but it is whatever you want to do.

00:31:204 (2,1,2) - This is a spot where you can still represent the music but have these 3 have larger than normal spacing between them. The changes in pitch are the loudest sound here anyway. Already explained above, dont want it to be really hard ;w;

Good luck with the map!

Lazer wrote:

Very nice set, proper for ranking

as always great hitsounding, take my stars~