1. Angelic Glaciers (7.5 stars, 2018 notes)

18:52 *Creminite is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1270291 Yooh - Ice Angel]
18:52 Creminite: can u mod?
18:52 Creminite: besides changing cs to 5
18:52 Penguiness: Not rlly but I'll try
18:52 Creminite: ok
18:53 Penguiness: 00:15:769 (8) - 
18:53 Penguiness: This part
18:53 Penguiness: of the stream
18:53 Creminite: ok
18:53 Penguiness: The transition won't go well
18:53 Penguiness: :P
18:53 Creminite: lul
18:54 Penguiness: Also
18:55 Penguiness: 02:50:233 (3) - This circle is out of place
18:55 Creminite: ok
18:56 Penguiness: 03:54:430 (5,1) - This blanket is off
18:57 Penguiness: 04:08:001 (1,2) - ^
18:58 Penguiness: 04:19:966 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Wut?
18:58 Creminite: lul
18:58 Penguiness: 04:28:716 (7,8) - Change these two circles to a 1/4 slider since it's the first of the four notes ahead
18:59 Creminite: ok
19:01 Penguiness: 03:45:412 (9,10) - Add a circle between these since there's a note there
19:05 Penguiness: 03:26:483 (8) - Add a circle after this one
19:06 Creminite: ok
19:07 Creminite: brb
19:07 Penguiness: k
19:11 Creminite: im leaving soon
19:11 Creminite: guitar lessons
19:11 Penguiness: Ok bai

Penguiness wrote:

Here u go onii chan. lul.

18:52 *Creminite is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1270291 Yooh - Ice Angel]
18:52 Creminite: can u mod?
18:52 Creminite: besides changing cs to 5
18:52 Penguiness: Not rlly but I'll try
18:52 Creminite: ok
18:53 Penguiness: 00:15:769 (8) - 
18:53 Penguiness: This part
18:53 Penguiness: of the stream
18:53 Creminite: ok
18:53 Penguiness: The transition won't go well
18:53 Penguiness: :P
18:53 Creminite: lul
18:54 Penguiness: Also
18:55 Penguiness: 02:50:233 (3) - This circle is out of place
18:55 Creminite: ok
18:56 Penguiness: 03:54:430 (5,1) - This blanket is off
18:57 Penguiness: 04:08:001 (1,2) - ^
18:58 Penguiness: 04:19:966 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Wut?
18:58 Creminite: lul
18:58 Penguiness: 04:28:716 (7,8) - Change these two circles to a 1/4 slider since it's the first of the four notes ahead
18:59 Creminite: ok
19:01 Penguiness: 03:45:412 (9,10) - Add a circle between these since there's a note there
19:05 Penguiness: 03:26:483 (8) - Add a circle after this one
19:06 Creminite: ok
19:07 Creminite: brb
19:07 Penguiness: k
19:11 Creminite: im leaving soon
19:11 Creminite: guitar lessons
19:11 Penguiness: Ok bai

Megapcmx wrote:

M4M here

First Check the AiMod and i suggest to use AR9.6 and CS 5

AiMod

00:03:001 (4,5) - Try to put them like this to fix that overlap (feels better)
00:17:644 (13,14,15,16,1,2,3) - Sharp angle, try to separate them a little bit
00:20:858 (1,2,3) - Those Sliders are kinda unnecessary
00:21:662 - 01:00:858 - 01:35:144 - 05:12:287 - what happened here? Keep mapping
00:55:144 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This seems to be undermapped( use short sliders to follow the rhythm)
02:52:287 (6) - Make this a New Combo
03:42:287 (1,2) - The direction of these sliders feels unconfortable after 03:42:108 (7) -
04:20:412 (8,9,10,11,12) - Use x1,4 Distance Snap instead of x1,50
From here maybe decreasing the Spacing a little bit should be fine
but anyway is your decision
Nice map ^_^

lucciachan wrote:

[New Mapper here]

04:14:430 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) i dont know if this circles is comfortable...

well, just that
HA LOL

VGBrotato wrote:

Hello! Here are some mods, disregard if you want to, I'm a new modder.
First of all, all changes in direction on every stream should be on NC, not the notes before. nope

00:06:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Using the 1/4 sliders (not the repeating ones) is completely different from this 00:11:573 (9,10,11,12), I recommend too just replace them w/ 1/4 repeating sliders. THAT'S MY STYLE OF DOING IT. I DONT WANT TO PULL A KROYTZ XDDD
00:20:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Again here look up
00:50:858 (1,2) - What are these slider shapes? Why are they so bent? xd ikr, i dont know what i did there,
02:55:144 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - If you're going to separate each streams like that, increase the spacing on each stream (not the separation). i just made it a little bigger, including the separation, its not really noticable. but close enough
04:28:001 (17) - NC
04:28:001 (17,1) - Combine the two streams, since the song continues like before. not now, that will take hours, i will have to remake that whole part, im lazy rn, but i might fix it eventually
04:29:430 (1) - Start the stream here. same thing, maybe
04:31:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Missed the opportunity for 1/4 sliders here.
04:39:430 (17) - Increase SV for this part of the kiai mode.
04:51:573 (9,10,11,12) - Spacing here could be better.
05:09:430 (1,1) - These two slider shapes could be better. like what? the 1st one i attempted to make an icicle, but close enough. the 2nd one i was out of ideas
05:40:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Again like this 00:20:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11). nop

Good luck on your map! I wanna GD, but nah.

kricher wrote:

add source and tags
personally i would raise a bit the hp drain up to 4.8-5 but thats you choise
00:14:341 - there is change in the music so change the stream like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8512280 (this is an example dont copy the exact pattern)NICE TIP, I NEVER THOUGH OF THAT XD
00:32:287 (1,2,3,4,5) - getting this pattern above the previous stream like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8512313 i think makes the flow better I PUT IT IN THE MIDDLE FOR A REASON. SO THE VERTICAL ONE WOULD BE CENTERED WITH THE HORIZONTAL
00:41:662 (10) - this is where i think the stream should turn down (the same goes for the previous stream too) IM NOT DONE HITSOUNDING, ILL DO THAT AS I FINISH PUTTING NOTES
01:11:573 - i dont see why there is such a long break hereNOT DONE
02:44:787 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8512335 this is how i think it should be timed ( the note placement has nothing to do with you will put it its just for the timing) MIGHT THINK ABOUT IT
02:47:644 (4) - the same LOOK UP
02:56:573 (5) - this note has more importance the every other note of the stream due to the finishing sound of the music try to emphasize it a bit either with hitsounds or a new combo and bigger distance snap GOOD JOB POINTING THAT OUT, ILL DO IT ONCE I GET HOME. IM AT MY COUSINS FOR THE NIGHT
03:58:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think you should do something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8512363 to emphasize the change in the music ( the same goes for the following streams)
04:05:858 (4,5) - i think this way of mapping https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8512370 fits the song better :thikning:
04:16:841 (2,5) - i dont like this overlap but its ok AS YOU CAN SEE, THE 2 CIRCLES AND THE SLIDER REPRESENTS THE PREVIOUS ONBUT ROTATED.
THE ONLY DIFFERENCE IS THAT ITS LONGER
04:25:144 - i kinda understand why you left this empty but i think you should place something here LIKE WHAT?
04:28:001 (1) - make this a slider NAH, ITS GOOD
04:40:144 (6) - talked about this earlier emphasize the change in the music here NOT DONE MAPPING, HITSOUNDS ARE LATER

you asked for m4m so here is my map t/609674 GONNA DO THAT TOMORROW, ITS LITERALLY 1 IN THE MORNING FOR ME
you dont have to mod my map if my suggestions were not useful

THX FOR MODS

EloBB wrote:

Hitsounds.

Download link: http://www.mediafire.com/file/zfw6w61dp ... sounds.zip (Sorry for use mediafire, It's just that I do not know how to upload files this type to osu, XD )

Small data for the placement of the hitsounds.

- hitnormal1 - 00:03:716 - From here you can use this hitsound - 02:26:573 From here you can use the hitnormal3

- 02:26:573 - use hitnormal3 to here 03:12:287.

- hitnormal1 - 03:12:287 - Use this as far as the map ends.

- The other hitsounds use them wherever you want, it's your choice

I hope these hitsounds will help you create your beatmap.