1. Disable the letterboxes during breaks since you don't use them

1. Increase the AR a bit, it would be more readable.

1. 00:57:614 (4) - Remove 1 reverse, having 2 reverse is not needed here and it sounds really weird

1. 00:44:491 - It feels like something is missing here because you have suddenly stopped to map the vocal, so you need a note here.

1. Increase the hitsound volume to 90% ? It will be more agreable to play imo.
2. Set all difficulty sttings to 5 (Taiko guidelines)

1. Adjust the audio lead-in of this difficulty to 2000ms via notepad
2. 00:05:826 - Start this break here ? If you don't know how to proceed, you just have to grab the beginning of the break and move it to the spot where you want it to starts, like this :
   
   SPOILER

   

KuraiPettan wrote:

General :

1. Disable the letterboxes during breaks since you don't use them

ok~

Easy :

1. Increase the AR a bit, it would be more readable.

ok~

Normal :

1. 00:57:614 (4) - Remove 1 reverse, having 2 reverse is not needed here and it sounds really weird

huwoo o.o ok~

Hard :

1. 00:44:491 - It feels like something is missing here because you have suddenly stopped to map the vocal, so you need a note here.

ok~

That's all

KuraiPettan wrote:

Muzu :

1. Increase the hitsound volume to 90% ? It will be more agreable to play imo. ok
2. Set all difficulty settings to 5 (Taiko guidelines)ok

1. The video is a little late compared to the music (40ms). So you have to add a video offset. When you open a .osu file, you have something like this :
   

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   Video,0,"Kuroki meisa - wired life (tv size).avi"
   0,0,"BGmaya.jpg"

   
   At the line Video,0,"Kuroki meisa - wired life (tv size).avi", you just have to change 0 by -40, so you should have something like
   
   

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   Video,-40,"Kuroki meisa - wired life (tv size).avi"

   
   Do this in each .osu file !

1. 00:14:262 (7) - This circle isn't correctly snapped on the slider's end. Disable the distance snap and the grid snap and stack it correctly

KuraiPettan wrote:

Recheck ~

General :

1. The video is a little late compared to the music (40ms). So you have to add a video offset. When you open a .osu file, you have something like this :
   

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   Video,0,"Kuroki meisa - wired life (tv size).avi"
   0,0,"BGmaya.jpg"

   
   At the line Video,0,"Kuroki meisa - wired life (tv size).avi", you just have to change 0 by -40, so you should have something like
   
   

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   Video,-40,"Kuroki meisa - wired life (tv size).avi"

   
   Do this in each .osu file !

Normal :

1. 00:14:262 (7) - This circle isn't correctly snapped on the slider's end. Disable the distance snap and the grid snap and stack it correctly

Fix and I will bubble (don't hesit to send me a forum pm when it's done )
(ps: do not kudosu this post)

KuraiPettan wrote:

Enjoy this bubble \:D/

Breeze wrote:

Hey, finally it's bubbled, good job Yasora chan

Yasora-chan wrote:

Breeze wrote:

Hey, finally it's bubbled, good job Yasora chan

Thank you~ Breeze-sensei XD~ I hope this map can be ranked in the near time :'3

athiota33 wrote:

[Maya's Life]

00:31:603 (2) - Touched the HP bar. Look this.

SPOILER

[attachment=0:8bd27]screenshot256.jpg[/attachment:8bd27]

No Kd~(of course)!

1. 00:14:730 (4) - I'm quite disagree if you put a finish sound here. There's no epic sound in this part. So adding a clap will be better than finish.
2. 00:30:197 (1) - If you hear carefully at this point, there's a pushing heavy beat sound that is better if you add a finish at the startpoint here.
3. 00:34:415 (2) - - Why putting a new combo here? This note is still linked with the previous rythim. It would be better if you removed it.
4. 01:04:410 (2) - Finish sound at the endpoint is really awkward imo. There's no epic sound like 'bang' in the background either. Instead of finish, changing it into clap is much better to hear.

1. 00:30:197 (1) - Same reason as Easy, would you like to add finish here at the startpoint?
2. 00:39:570 (4) - What? This slider is not symetry at all. Fix it like this : http://puu.sh/9Z7r (I don't know how to find the slider code for this. sorry if i can't provide this with slider code). It's kinda hard to fix it by using grid level 3, i use grid level 4 to fix this.
3. 00:44:960 - Putting a note here will make flow and rythim much better. If you hear carefully, there's a vocal 'te' and 3 beat rythim in this point. So it will be good if you add a note here.
4. 00:58:786 (1,2) - Why the whistle sound stop at this part? I don't think it's good. Place a whistle at the startpoint slider 1, and whistle too at startpoint and endpoint slider 2.

1. 00:14:262 (7) - This circle is not stacked properly. Fix this by not using grid snap.
2. 00:14:730 (1) - Again, i'm quite disagree with this finish sound. I suggest you remove it and change it into clap.

1. 00:00:670 (3,5) - Why this slider is not symertry? It doesn't looks good to me. I recomend it to symetry it.
2. 00:03:951 (1) - Since in the start point there is a 'bang' sound in the background, it would be nice if you add a finish sound at the startpoint.
3. 00:37:461 (1) - It's obviously need a finish sound at the endpoint. Just hear clearly at the song, it's an opening for the chorus, and there's a heavy beat here.
4. I'm quite disagree at increasing the volume gradualy at chorus until 100%. 100% and 90% is too loud imo. Increased it until 80% is enough.

miya wrote:

Maya's Life

1. 00:00:670 (3,5) - Why this slider is not symertry? It doesn't looks good to me. I recomend it to symetry it. on purpose .-.
2. 00:03:951 (1) - Since in the start point there is a 'bang' sound in the background, it would be nice if you add a finish sound at the startpoint. there's already a finish before it, adding here will be too loud.
3. 00:37:461 (1) - It's obviously need a finish sound at the endpoint. Just hear clearly at the song, it's an opening for the chorus, and there's a heavy beat here. don't wanna ._.;;, even though there's a loud bang (and I think its not that loud, its just as common as the bang after it), finish doesn't suit there.
4. I'm quite disagree at increasing the volume gradualy at chorus until 100%. 100% and 90% is too loud imo. Increased it until 80% is enough. sorry no

Miya wrote:

Easy

1. 00:14:730 (4) - I'm quite disagree if you put a finish sound here. There's no epic sound in this part. So adding a clap will be better than finish. ok
2. 00:30:197 (1) - If you hear carefully at this point, there's a pushing heavy beat sound that is better if you add a finish at the startpoint here. I think the sound is odd ;_;
3. 00:34:415 (2) - - Why putting a new combo here? This note is still linked with the previous rythim. It would be better if you removed it. oh i forgot remove that : P thanks~!
4. 01:04:410 (2) - Finish sound at the endpoint is really awkward imo. There's no epic sound like 'bang' in the background either. Instead of finish, changing it into clap is much better to hear.ok

Normal

1. 00:30:197 (1) - Same reason as Easy, would you like to add finish here at the startpoint? some reason with easy too
2. 00:39:570 (4) - What? This slider is not symetry at all. Fix it like this : http://puu.sh/9Z7r (I don't know how to find the slider code for this. sorry if i can't provide this with slider code). It's kinda hard to fix it by using grid level 3, i use grid level 4 to fix this. yes you right
3. 00:44:960 - Putting a note here will make flow and rythim much better. If you hear carefully, there's a vocal 'te' and 3 beat rythim in this point. So it will be good if you add a note here. ok
4. 00:58:786 (1,2) - Why the whistle sound stop at this part? I don't think it's good. Place a whistle at the startpoint slider 1, and whistle too at startpoint and endpoint slider 2. ok

Hard

1. 00:14:262 (7) - This circle is not stacked properly. Fix this by not using grid snap. ok
2. 00:14:730 (1) - Again, i'm quite disagree with this finish sound. I suggest you remove it and change it into clap. I feel if that change to clap is "silent"

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hey, never hesitate to pop your bubble if you think you can improve your map, I would always be glad to do a recheck

Good luck ~

1. Maya's Life is lacking the tag "blue". You might also want to add "ed" and "Maya" to the tags of all difficulties.

1. 00:07:700 (1) - If you listen closely, the sliderslide changes suddenly because of the timing section. If you want to fix that, add a custom normal-sliderslide in your folder that's actually the sound file for the soft-sliderslide. (that goes for all diffs)
2. 00:27:853 (1) - To stay consistent with your comboing, this shouldn't have a new combo. (see 00:22:698 (1,2,3,4) - )
3. 00:40:976 (1) - This slider breaks the comboing... The new combo should be on its end. I suggest to replace 00:40:976 (1,2) - with circle + slider instead of slider + circle in order to fix that.
4. 00:44:726 (5,1) - Same.

1. This is a bit too hard for a Normal, especially in the beginning, due to the large amounts of 1/2, not all of them even fitting the song. I'll give you a few tips to make it easier - you're free to apply them or not.
2. 00:08:872 (3) - This one could easily be removed for instance.
3. 00:12:621 (4,5) - I find that to be rather confusing, especially for the beginning of a Normal. I suggest to use a simpler rhythm here - something like circle + 1/1 slider. Something like this, with a whistle on the first beat of (5).
4. 00:14:730 (1) - Despite the new combo, the anti-jump might confuse new players.
5. 00:24:573 (3) - Add a new combo here for more consistency ?
6. 00:28:322 (2) - Same ?
7. 00:31:837 (1) - I don't think there should be a new combo here. The sentence in the vocals still goes on - and the new combo feels a bit weird to me.
8. 00:39:570 (4) - The clap on the first beat of the slider sounds out of place (it's on a big white tick).
9. 01:05:816 (1,3) - Make these symmetrical ?
10. 01:20:814 - Please either delete this section either raise its volume. The beats are unhearable for now, and there's no reason why they should be so low.

1. 00:31:134 (3) - it's a bit nazi of me, but make it symmetrical ?
2. 00:41:445 (3) - Missing clap on first beat ? Or 00:39:570 (6,8) - these claps (first beat of (6) and (8) aren't supposed to be there ? Considering the rest of the diff, I think you should remove the claps on 00:39:570 (6,8) - (only the one on (6)'s first beat)
3. 00:52:225 (1) - Missing clap on first beat ?
4. 01:15:190 (1) - Make it symmetrical ?
5. 01:20:814 - Please either delete this section either raise its volume. The beats are unhearable for now, and there's no reason why they should be so low.

1. It's weird for this diff to have a custom name when all the other diffs have standard names. Rename it Maya's Insane ?
2. Disable "letterbox during breaks" like in the other diffs.
3. Why doesn't this start at the same time as the other diffs ?
4. 00:48:475 - This section is really loud. Mind reducing the volume ?
5. 01:20:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - The difficulty here (due to the spacing) is a bit high compared to the rest of the diff. I'd recommend to lower the spacing and not to use sliders inside of the stream.

1. 01:26:438 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - The diff was very good until this. This is way too hard for a muzukashii. 16 notes long streams are too difficult for muzukashii diffs - replace it with a slider.

Odaril wrote:

Easy

1. 00:07:700 (1) - If you listen closely, the sliderslide changes suddenly because of the timing section. If you want to fix that, add a custom normal-sliderslide in your folder that's actually the sound file for the soft-sliderslide. (that goes for all diffs) not change because I just add finish [normal] sound in the beginning slider T-T"" and I think that ok.. sorry
2. 00:27:853 (1) - To stay consistent with your comboing, this shouldn't have a new combo. (see 00:22:698 (1,2,3,4) - ) ok
3. 00:40:976 (1) - This slider breaks the comboing... The new combo should be on its end. I suggest to replace 00:40:976 (1,2) - with circle + slider instead of slider + circle in order to fix that. ok
4. 00:44:726 (5,1) - Same.ok

Normal

1. This is a bit too hard for a Normal, especially in the beginning, due to the large amounts of 1/2, not all of them even fitting the song. I'll give you a few tips to make it easier - you're free to apply them or not.
2. 00:08:872 (3) - This one could easily be removed for instance.ok
3. 00:12:621 (4,5) - I find that to be rather confusing, especially for the beginning of a Normal. I suggest to use a simpler rhythm here - something like circle + 1/1 slider. Something like this, with a whistle on the first beat of (5). ok but first beat in the 5, I add clap because drum sound
4. 00:14:730 (1) - Despite the new combo, the anti-jump might confuse new players. now, I added jump in here
5. 00:24:573 (3) - Add a new combo here for more consistency ? ok
6. 00:28:322 (2) - Same ? no because that still connected with before note (1)
7. 00:31:837 (1) - I don't think there should be a new combo here. The sentence in the vocals still goes on - and the new combo feels a bit weird to me. fixed
8. 00:39:570 (4) - The clap on the first beat of the slider sounds out of place (it's on a big white tick). ok
9. 01:05:816 (1,3) - Make these symmetrical ? ok
10. 01:20:814 - Please either delete this section either raise its volume. The beats are unhearable for now, and there's no reason why they should be so low. ok

Hard

1. 00:31:134 (3) - it's a bit nazi of me, but make it symmetrical ? ok o.o
2. 00:41:445 (3) - Missing clap on first beat ? Or 00:39:570 (6,8) - these claps (first beat of (6) and (8) aren't supposed to be there ? Considering the rest of the diff, I think you should remove the claps on 00:39:570 (6,8) - (only the one on (6)'s first beat) ok
3. 00:52:225 (1) - Missing clap on first beat ? fixed
4. 01:15:190 (1) - Make it symmetrical ? fixed
5. 01:20:814 - Please either delete this section either raise its volume. The beats are unhearable for now, and there's no reason why they should be so low. fixed

Odaril wrote:

Maya's Life

1. It's weird for this diff to have a custom name when all the other diffs have standard names. Rename it Maya's Insane ? actually, I prefer my custom name, but if its really weird,fixed.
2. Disable "letterbox during breaks" like in the other diffs. fixed.
3. Why doesn't this start at the same time as the other diffs ? since its an insane diff, I'd like to map this earlier ><
4. 00:48:475 - This section is really loud. Mind reducing the volume ? fixed.
5. 01:20:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - The difficulty here (due to the spacing) is a bit high compared to the rest of the diff. I'd recommend to lower the spacing and not to use sliders inside of the stream. fixed.

Miya wrote:

Hi Yasora, i've just tried new AIbat to your map. Please clarify this problem and fix it immediately if it really there.

AIBat Warnings

tl;dr

Odaril wrote:

Rei_Fan's Muzu

1. 01:26:438 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - The diff was very good until this. This is way too hard for a muzukashii. 16 notes long streams are too difficult for muzukashii diffs - replace it with a slider. wew.. the deathstream in final should be removed, ok~ replacing

Miya wrote:

Hi Yasora, i've just tried new AIbat to your map. Please clarify this problem and fix it immediately if it really there.

AIBat Warnings

These warnings were generated by AIBat.

[General]
Custom Hitsounds:
spinnerbonus.wav is only 4 bytes large. Please use the blank.wav which is 44 bytes large. o.o


[Storyboard]
Unused Image Files:
rinokumura.jpg where?


[All .osu Files]
General and Metadata:

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 0
- [Hard] : 0
- [Maya's Life] : 2000 of course only this diff is need it. because that start early
- [Normal] : 0
- [Rei_Fan's Muzu] : 0
- [SaigyoujIrfan! - Taiko Muzukashii] : 0

Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
- [Easy] : 0
- [Hard] : 0
- [Maya's Life] : 1 fixed by mod from odaril
- [Normal] : 0
- [Rei_Fan's Muzu] : 0
- [SaigyoujIrfan! - Taiko Muzukashii] : 0

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Easy] : blue aoex ending Maya-kira Rei_fan49
- [Hard] : blue aoex ending Maya-kira Rei_fan49
- [Maya's Life] : aoex ending Maya-kira Rei_fan49 fixed by mod from odaril
- [Normal] : blue aoex ending Maya-kira Rei_fan49
- [Rei_Fan's Muzu] : blue aoex ending Maya-kira Rei_fan49

Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 0,255,255
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 117,210,255

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 0,255,255
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 117,210,255

- [Maya's Life] :
Combo1 : 0,255,255
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 117,210,255

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 0,255,255
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 117,210,255

- [Rei_Fan's Muzu] :
Combo1 : 0,255,255
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 0,0,128


[Difficulty: Easy]
No problems found.

[Difficulty: Hard]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:07:691 really?


[Difficulty: Maya's Life]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:03:842
00:05:014
00:05:482
00:07:592
00:07:826
00:10:404
00:10:638
00:14:154
00:14:388
00:18:372
00:26:340
00:26:574
fixed some

[Difficulty: Normal]
No problems found.

[Difficulty: Rei_Fan's Muzu]
No problems found.

[Difficulty: SaigyoujIrfan! - Taiko Muzukashii] I change the diff name right? D:
Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:37:461, ends on 00:52:693

That's all xD

Miya wrote:

Then you should make all the audio lead-in in other diff to 2000 yasora.
Oh yes, don't forget to give someone kudosu if someone has help you improving the map. It seem you forgot about me >.<

Miya wrote:

It's not really unrankable, but i recommend to make it consistent, before other MAT or BAT mention that

Yasora-chan wrote:

Miya wrote:

Then you should make all the audio lead-in in other diff to 2000 yasora.
Oh yes, don't forget to give someone kudosu if someone has help you improving the map. It seem you forgot about me >.<

but, but, only maya's diff is start early ;_; other diff is not orz
oh. here your kudosu

Maya-kira wrote:

kalau semuanya lead in 2000, yang main easy, normal, hard jadi lumutan dong .-.?

Odaril wrote:

Well, the map is fine for me now. Because the elapsed time between my first recheck and this I'd rather just rebubble this for now.

EDIT: Miya, it's fine for only one diff to have an audio lead-in, because it's the only one that starts early enough to need it.