Hanazawa Kana wrote:

太牛逼了 上传了就有3个fav

Speechless wrote:

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2017-04-19 21:10 Speechless: 7*的话我就觉得很多大跳就有点无脑
2017-04-19 21:10 Rem MajiTenshi: okok
2017-04-19 21:10 Rem MajiTenshi: okok
2017-04-19 21:10 Rem MajiTenshi: okok
2017-04-19 21:11 Speechless: 另外你一定要7*的话
2017-04-19 21:11 Speechless: 这个ar9.4就太慢了
2017-04-19 21:11 Speechless: 最好是9.6往上
2017-04-19 21:12 Speechless: 这个bpm用9.4感觉还是有点慢
2017-04-19 21:12 Speechless: 不过还行
2017-04-19 21:12 Rem MajiTenshi: 嗯
2017-04-19 21:12 Rem MajiTenshi: 这个基本同意
2017-04-19 21:12 Rem MajiTenshi: 你说比较无脑跳的地方我感觉大概是
2017-04-19 21:13 Speechless: 集中在后半部分
2017-04-19 21:13 Rem MajiTenshi: 04:31
2017-04-19 21:13 Rem MajiTenshi: okok
2017-04-19 21:13 Speechless: 00:01:378 (1) - 这个地方
2017-04-19 21:13 Speechless: 或者说这个部分
2017-04-19 21:13 Speechless: 音量太大了
2017-04-19 21:13 Speechless: 音效也放的不够
2017-04-19 21:14 Rem MajiTenshi: 嗯
2017-04-19 21:14 Speechless: 20-30的音量就狗了
2017-04-19 21:14 Speechless: 不要90
2017-04-19 21:14 Rem MajiTenshi: 好
2017-04-19 21:14 Speechless: 滑条静音
2017-04-19 21:14 Speechless: 00:01:378 (1,2) - 换成折返滑条
2017-04-19 21:15 Rem MajiTenshi: okok
2017-04-19 21:16 Rem MajiTenshi: 好的
2017-04-19 21:16 Speechless: 00:20:664 - 这个点的钢琴不要漏掉
2017-04-19 21:16 Speechless: 00:15:949 (3,4) - 这两个间距有点大
2017-04-19 21:17 Speechless: 00:20:449 (1,2) - 你这个地方差了5/4都比这个1/2小
2017-04-19 21:17 Rem MajiTenshi: 的确
2017-04-19 21:17 Speechless: 00:26:878 - 大概这个地方开始
2017-04-19 21:17 Speechless: 多插几个绿线
2017-04-19 21:17 Speechless: 音量慢慢变大
2017-04-19 21:18 Speechless: 大到差不多70就可以了
2017-04-19 21:18 Rem MajiTenshi: 好细致
2017-04-19 21:18 Speechless: 00:29:560 - 这个finish不要
2017-04-19 21:19 Speechless: 换成一个柔一点的
2017-04-19 21:19 Speechless: 钢琴音不太适合这种finish
2017-04-19 21:19 Rem MajiTenshi: 哦哦哦！
2017-04-19 21:19 Rem MajiTenshi: 好的
2017-04-19 21:19 Rem MajiTenshi: 要去找找音效
2017-04-19 21:20 Rem MajiTenshi: 全都用默认的感觉太糙了
2017-04-19 21:20 Rem MajiTenshi: 点
2017-04-19 21:20 Speechless: 00:49:658 - nc应该在这个地方
2017-04-19 21:20 Speechless: 00:49:953 - 这个nc不要
2017-04-19 21:20 Speechless: 00:49:510 - 这个也是
2017-04-19 21:21 Speechless: 00:52:909 (1) - 这个也是
2017-04-19 21:21 Speechless: 00:53:352 - 这个不应该是滑条
2017-04-19 21:21 Speechless: 是两个圈
2017-04-19 21:22 Rem MajiTenshi: ok
2017-04-19 21:22 Rem MajiTenshi: 放到白线应该就可以
2017-04-19 21:22 Speechless: 00:59:264 (3,4,5,3) - overlap
2017-04-19 21:23 Speechless: 01:07:687 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个我感觉应该是越跳越大比较好
2017-04-19 21:24 Speechless: https://puu.sh/vphLe/d4ed071e3c.png
2017-04-19 21:24 Rem MajiTenshi: ..
2017-04-19 21:24 Rem MajiTenshi: 好
2017-04-19 21:24 Speechless: 01:26:012 (1) - nc不要
2017-04-19 21:25 Speechless: 01:55:274 - 这个地方音效太迷
2017-04-19 21:26 Speechless: 不要用drun clap
2017-04-19 21:26 Speechless: 消音就可以了
2017-04-19 21:26 Speechless: 02:00:150 (2,3,4) - 这地方感觉没必要条这么大
2017-04-19 21:27 Rem MajiTenshi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866895
2017-04-19 21:28 Speechless: 02:18:771 (3) - 
2017-04-19 21:28 Speechless: 这个
2017-04-19 21:28 Speechless: 先圈
2017-04-19 21:28 Speechless: 再1/1滑条
2017-04-19 21:28 Speechless: 02:19:953 (1) - 这个一样
2017-04-19 21:29 Speechless: 02:22:466 (4) - 出现两个连续的白线都clap的情况
2017-04-19 21:29 Speechless: 我一般会摆两个1/2
2017-04-19 21:29 Speechless: 02:23:057 - 这种clap不适合用滑条尾
2017-04-19 21:29 Speechless: 用圈或者滑条头
2017-04-19 21:30 Speechless: 02:29:855 (1,1) - nc不要
2017-04-19 21:30 Speechless: 02:33:993 (1) - 这个也不要
2017-04-19 21:31 Rem MajiTenshi: 嗯
2017-04-19 21:31 Speechless: 03:12:416 (1) - 
2017-04-19 21:31 Speechless: 换成1/2滑条和一个圈
2017-04-19 21:31 Speechless: 03:12:712 - 一般来说这种强clap和finihs
2017-04-19 21:31 Speechless: finish
2017-04-19 21:31 Speechless: 都不会有什么人去用滑条尾的
2017-04-19 21:31 Speechless: 否则就没有什么打击感了
2017-04-19 21:32 Rem MajiTenshi: 原来如此 的确
2017-04-19 21:32 Rem MajiTenshi: okok
2017-04-19 21:32 Speechless: 03:43:303 (3) - nc
2017-04-19 21:32 Speechless: 03:48:771 (1) - 这个nc去掉
2017-04-19 21:33 Rem MajiTenshi: 唔 我的nc是用烂了
2017-04-19 21:34 Rem MajiTenshi: 有点多
2017-04-19 21:34 Speechless: 04:32:219 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 这大概是整张图最不长脑子的地方
2017-04-19 21:34 Rem MajiTenshi: 瞎几把跳
2017-04-19 21:34 Rem MajiTenshi: okok
2017-04-19 21:34 Speechless: 这里的vocal不是全曲最强的
2017-04-19 21:34 Speechless: 也没有什么渐变
2017-04-19 21:35 Speechless: 一定要这么放
2017-04-19 21:35 Speechless: 没什么意义
2017-04-19 21:35 Rem MajiTenshi: 标准unrank梗，
2017-04-19 21:35 Speechless: 04:39:483 (1,2) - 
2017-04-19 21:35 Speechless: 一个soft转clap都要跳这么大
2017-04-19 21:35 Speechless: 这图不是quaver
2017-04-19 21:36 Speechless: 没必要这么摆的
2017-04-19 21:36 Speechless: 04:40:074 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
2017-04-19 21:36 Speechless: 不要因为这是几个clap
2017-04-19 21:36 Speechless: 就随便摆上全屏大跳
2017-04-19 21:36 Speechless: 没必要的
2017-04-19 21:37 Rem MajiTenshi: ok
2017-04-19 21:38 Speechless: 05:30:449 - 
2017-04-19 21:38 Speechless: 这地方有个finihs
2017-04-19 21:38 Speechless: 转盘不应该那么早就开始
2017-04-19 21:38 Speechless: 另外这地方要重新测一下timing
2017-04-19 21:38 Speechless: 否则finish就不在白线上
2017-04-19 21:39 Speechless: 最后那个转盘也多插几个绿线
2017-04-19 21:39 Speechless: 慢慢把音量减下去
2017-04-19 21:39 Rem MajiTenshi: 嗯
2017-04-19 21:39 Speechless: 一直减到5%

A BCDe wrote:

Hello! I was just looking around and saw a wonderful map!

Kana's Ex

01:12:712 (5) - ctrl-J the slider, or copy slider 6 and ctrl-HJ, and put it where it were (189, 222).

01:40:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - set new combo to 1, 3, 5, and 7. it is hard to look.

02:27:786 (5) - prefer to ctrl-G or splitting it to two sliders.

02:57:934 - set new timing point, or it won't be nice to hear when the nightcore is on. (that's awesome)

04:03:845 (4,5,6,7) - consider polishing this

Abend

00:25:592 (1) - start from 00:25:164 - ok

01:18:475 (1) - move this (I moved to (244, 268)) or change yellow slider 1 (not preferred, but maybe making symmetric to green slider 2 might be good to look) moved

02:14:781 (5) - give new combo ok

02:24:239 (1) - consider changing to a circle

03:43:303 (3) - give new combo ok

03:44:338 (2) - make the slider length 3/4 or change the distance between the slider and the next circle shorter ok

04:12:416 (2) - give new combo

04:20:544 (4,2,2) - (red, yellow, green long sliders) give them new combos and erase new combos for the next circle

04:25:421 (3) - give some finish to follow the song ok

05:30:375 (1) -

ok

The map is great! I'll be waiting for this to be ranked!

happy ,I'll do my best!

A BCDe wrote:

Hello! I was just looking around and saw a wonderful map!

Kana's Ex

01:12:712 (5) - ctrl-J the slider, or copy slider 6 and ctrl-HJ, and put it where it were (189, 222). uhh,just want to keep their shape similarly with each other

01:40:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - set new combo to 1, 3, 5, and 7. it is hard to look. ok

02:27:786 (5) - prefer to ctrl-G or splitting it to two sliders. the ds here is truly a little big,but i cant find another placement of it to make it beautiful

02:57:934 - set new timing point, or it won't be nice to hear when the nightcore is on. (that's awesome) uhh,let RMT handle the timing part

04:03:845 (4,5,6,7) - consider polishing this fixed

The map is great! I'll be waiting for this to be ranked!

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

md
我自己玩了下我的diff
太屎了

Aya TenSai wrote:

这歌真的太好玩啦!

[Kamiya] wrote:

还没下下来 听说神图，过来敬仰敬仰，明天摸~！

Gyro Zeppeli wrote:

我他妈摸爆
[Abend]
00:07:807 (4) - 这样扭好看一些

举个例子

稍微扭了下，倒时候再改

00:31:481 (3) - 你这里隔得太远了，容易当单点 00:35:471 (2,3) - 这里你就是这样分隔的，看起来就是一个单点，节奏也是单点done

00:41:087 (1,2) - 这里也是不宜放这么开done

02:25:569 (1) - 这里一个ctrl+G更好done

03:47:145 (2,3,4) - 你这三连什么鬼嘛怎么打done 这整个一分钟基本重做

03:56:899 (2,3,4) - 这里还是DS摆一下吧done同上 已经重做

04:27:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这段，你根据音乐做了个滑条就很不顺手，可以是在04:28:155 (6,7,8,1) - 间距降低，然后在放开。从这里开始到后面也有重做工程，未完工

04:37:540 (1) - ctrl+Gdone

04:51:344 (1,2) - 1滑条2单点吧，或者去掉04:51:344 (1) - 更好重做列表内，未完工

05:07:690 (4,1,2,3) - 这里有个更舒服的

举个例子

好评，great！

05:11:089 - 这里别空拍啊，加个短滑条在中间这里塞了会不会太难，重做的时候会仔细看这里

05:18:479 - 这里加个单点吧

举个例子

还未开始施工

大概就是这样了

[Kamiya] wrote:

翻页了怕看不到哦，到这页来写

[Abend]
滑条拉的比较随性，而且有的还没拉出形状来00:18:949 (3)done 重塑 - 这个就是一个，00:07:807 (4) 这里暂时没想到怎么拉，先标记- 这个是不好看。
00:22:378 (4)done - 这个滑条的头和尾跟中间的直线不平行。00:31:924 (1) done- 做好点。。直线不对等。
00:34:289 (1) 现在圆润多了 done- 这里做的不圆润。我觉得还是圆润点好看，比如这样的。后面有很多
00:55:274 (2,4) - 像这样的遮挡尽量避免。2333
01:15:076 (2,4) - 这种遮挡^ 2333..done
01:22:170 (1,3) - 这种^ 2333..done
02:28:968 (1,2) - 这^ 2333..done
02:31:333 (1,2) - ^ 2333..done
01:04:288 (1,2) - 不觉得这么摆很蹩手吗。。这一片重新做了 done
01:14:633 (6,2) - 这里的话是想说明，间距最好相等01:08:574 (1,2,3) - 就好比你这里是这么摆。重新摆过 done
03:20:988 (3,4,1) - 还有一种细节就是，3.4滑条跟1滑条间距需要对等。这样美观看着也舒服。改了下，日后可能再改 done
03:31:037 (1) - 咦 换个吧。。换成了很多短滑条 亦可赛艇 done
03:40:347 (4,5,1) - 还有种细节就是连打间距要对等done 这一整片重做了
04:08:278 (1,2,3,4,5) - 还有种美观问题emmmmm....滑条是直的都行。done 这一整片重做了
有些问题只说了一次，但后面还是有，而且很多，虽然都是细节上的。

GL！这图节奏这么牛逼的吗。还是得膜拜一下。

Setnom wrote:

_niz wrote:

Kana's Extra

00:21:784 - Don't break this, make it just like the other notes, and then go to spinner. there's no bells exist,so...i think a break is ok
01:07:613 - Really bad pattern here, definitely suggest a fix.uh,maybe its ok i think
01:26:677 - Another bad pattern. it shows the changes of the song,so...maybe you can tell me how it looks bad
03:34:362 - Overlapping streams.i did it on purpose..

Other than that, you guys did a really good job ;-)

Setnom wrote:

Kana's Extra

00:36:653 (1) - the last two reverse should be a long slider since the string holds a long note there.k
01:21:283 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - keep it the same like you did the other 4 before this one like this https://prnt.sc/illiuc dont think that fits the drums here
04:40:222 (4,5) - this should be similar to 04:39:631 (1,2) -k

Great map!
Keep up the great work, I'll be waiting for it to get ranked/loved!