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I didn't mod Normal and Hard because they have too many issues that needs fixing. There's little decent rhythm structure, no use of distance snapping nor do they follow the ranking criteria. I'd suggest remapping, taking a look at other maps with similar bpm or style that you're trying to aim for and reading the ranking criteria for what and what not to do when mapping.
Good Luck!
[Dyl's Queen]
- 00:21:785 (6) - x206 y259 maybe?
- 00:23:169 (1,2) - because there's only a strong sound on 1, I suggest making this a 1/2 slider
- 00:24:092 (4,5,6) - blanket maybe?
- 00:25:477 (7) - shape is kinda weird and breaks flow, consider using this slider 00:25:015 (6) - and ctrl j and ctrl g
- 00:25:015 (6) - nc, 00:25:938 (1) - no nc 00:26:861 (5) - nc
- 00:39:785 (6) - I'd suggest using a 1/2 slider instead
- 00:42:554 (2) - Maybe face in same direction as 00:41:631 (1) -
- 00:52:708 (5,6) - maybe fix end of slider so that they blanket
- 00:55:477 (5) - Maybe adjust it a little
- 00:58:246 (1,2) - This has no flow is is really boring to play. Try doing something like a side to side thing similar to 00:56:400 (1,2) - except vertically with 1 facing down and 2 facing up
- 00:59:169 (3,1,2) - blankets?
- 01:00:785 (2,4) - ^
- 01:02:861 (6,1) - no touchy
- 01:09:323 (3) - maybe seems weird to use the same thing twice, but ctrl g. Having it like this breaks that nice flow
- 01:11:861 (2,3) - blanket
- Strong vocals here 01:13:246 - and here 01:13:708 - but wasn't mapped.
- From here 01:00:092 - to here 01:13:015 - lower the Slider Velocity. It just feels weird to have them move at the same speed in a quieter less intense sention.
- 01:22:015 (4) - x355, y136 maybe?
- 01:22:938 - a clickable circle can be placed here.
- 01:25:708 (6) - remove this. There is a strong vocal on the white tick and it being mapped on a repeat slider doesn't emphasize it enough. Place a circle on the red tick previous to it 01:25:708 - and a new combo 1/2 slider on the white tick 01:25:938 - . This should fix the rhythm.
- 01:28:708 (4,1) - Consider making this a jump pattern. There are strong sounds 01:28:938 - 01:29:169 - 01:29:400 - which the current rhythm you used doesn't support.
- 01:29:400 (1) - A slider or a circle should be place here. Without tarnishing what you have already mapped, I'd suggest replace with a circle.
- 01:31:246 (6,1,2,3) - Should fix these sliders to make it look like a triangle
- 01:33:323 (1,2) - if you're following the vocals, move 01:34:015 (2) - to 01:34:246 - and place a circle 01:34:015 - . This rhythm would work better, in my opinion at least
- 01:35:169 (5) - this is actually fine but as a suggestion, because there are no vocals at this point and there's a sound that supports a triple here 01:35:400 - , Mapping that instead would fit better than a long repeat slider.
- 01:37:477 (2) - A repeat slider just doesn't work because of the vocals. maybe switch to a 1/1 slider and place circles 01:38:169 - 01:38:400 -
- 01:38:631 (3,4) - blanket
- 01:44:400 - Like I said before, for quieter, less intense sections, you should use a lower slider velocity, and you should probably have longer sliders and/or more gaps. For Example. 01:44:400 (1,2,3,1) - this kind of feels overmapped for a section like this. Keep the 1/1 slider 01:44:400 (1) - and have a gap before vocal start again 01:46:708 (2) - .
- 01:47:861 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here, it's just way overmapped. Try something like this
Remove these 01:48:554 (2,3,4,5) - and make 01:47:861 (1) - a 1/1 repeat slider followed by another slider ending on 01:49:708 - with a clickable on the next white tick, followed by a gap until vocals start again. - 01:57:323 (6,7) - follow the vocals, the song doesn't support this.
- 01:59:631 (2) - Remove the repeat and just make it a 1/1 slider and remove these circles 02:00:785 (3,4,7) -
- 02:02:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Pretty much the same suggestion I gave with 01:47:861 - except starts on a white tick.
- 02:15:785 - Should probably end spinner here, or just remove it all together. Your Choice.
I like this diff overall, I just think it needs some improvements before its ready.
I didn't mod Normal and Hard because they have too many issues that needs fixing. There's little decent rhythm structure, no use of distance snapping nor do they follow the ranking criteria. I'd suggest remapping, taking a look at other maps with similar bpm or style that you're trying to aim for and reading the ranking criteria for what and what not to do when mapping.
Good Luck!