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Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale [OsuMania]

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Syadow-
Beatmap Nominator
1,514 posts
Joined October 2013
Syadow-
Wah dah di submit :v jejak uwu
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14:13 Amiichii: om
14:13 Amiichii: minta modnya om
14:13 Amiichii: wkwk
14:13 Syadow-: :VVV baru jg ol
14:13 Syadow-: akwkakwa
14:14 Syadow-: irc aja nichan >w<
14:14 Amiichii: om mod om
14:14 Amiichii: xD
14:14 Amiichii: ok
14:14 Syadow-: :VVVV
14:14 Syadow-: sek sek lappy lag
14:14 Amiichii: cie
14:14 Amiichii: lag-chan
14:14 Syadow-: :'v
14:14 Syadow-: np in gih
14:15 Syadow-: yg lama ga bisa update ;w;
14:15 *Amiichii is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258994 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale [Story]]
14:15 Amiichii: edit bg lg ah ntar
14:15 Amiichii: biar sama wkwk
14:16 Amiichii: NM = HD
14:16 Syadow-: :v
14:16 Amiichii: EZ = MX
14:16 Amiichii: sem
14:16 Syadow-: wakwkak
14:16 Amiichii: ga pass cropnya
14:16 Amiichii: awkawk
14:16 Syadow-: akwkaka
14:17 Amiichii: sem
14:17 Amiichii: si a-chan diminta yulee
14:17 Syadow-: iya ga pass cropnya wkakwka
14:17 *Syadow- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258994 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale [Story]]
14:18 Amiichii: padahal dah pass harusnya si yule dikasih yg ijo
14:18 Amiichii: wkwk
14:18 Amiichii: ijo = ez
14:18 Amiichii: blue = nm
14:18 Syadow-: wkwkw
14:18 Amiichii: orange = hard
14:18 Syadow-: :v
14:18 Amiichii: pink = insane
14:18 Amiichii: sem
14:18 Amiichii: wkwk
14:18 Syadow-: ganti aja lah :v
14:18 Amiichii: wkwk
14:18 Amiichii: ngalah aku mah
14:18 Amiichii: wkkw
14:19 Syadow-: wkwkw onichan ngalah
14:19 Amiichii: :'<
14:19 Amiichii: wkwk
14:19 Syadow-: k njut 00:04:122 - ini knpa triple :'v
14:19 Amiichii: viano
14:19 Amiichii: wkwk
14:20 Syadow-: double aja lah :'v suara pelan kek
14:20 Amiichii: gpp
14:20 Amiichii: biar gg
14:20 Amiichii: wkwk
14:20 Amiichii: ^not logic reason
14:21 Syadow-: ^ :VV
14:21 Syadow-: 00:14:944 (14944|3) - LN di col 3
14:22 Syadow-: kan makin rendah tp jgn rendah2
14:22 Amiichii: lah
14:22 Amiichii: ntar jack 4x dong
14:22 Amiichii: kasih saran pattern deh
14:22 Amiichii: wkk
14:24 Syadow-: wait wait
14:25 Syadow-: stuck :'VV
14:25 Amiichii: yaudah skip
14:25 Amiichii: kwkwk
14:25 Syadow-: wakwka :'v
14:26 Syadow-: sv nya :' kak
14:26 Amiichii: 'w'
14:26 Amiichii: gmn es penya?
14:26 Amiichii: any saran?
14:27 Syadow-: :'v
14:28 Syadow-: ga dah bagus sayang sadis itu ;w;
14:28 Amiichii: biar mampoz sekalian
14:28 Amiichii: awkakw
14:28 Syadow-: 00:30:189 (30189|0) - col 3 ja biar balance *style sapa neh :'v
14:28 Amiichii: yawlah
14:28 Amiichii: ngikut himouto-chan
14:28 Amiichii: wkwk
14:30 Syadow-: wkwkw wah terpakasa neh >;v
14:30 Amiichii: wkwk
14:30 Syadow-: 00:39:862 (39862|2,40026|1) - ctrl j
14:31 Amiichii: okelah okelah
14:32 Syadow-: 00:49:206 - suara ting2
14:32 Syadow-: susah jelasin nya :'v
14:32 Syadow-: doble
14:32 Amiichii: ignore it
14:32 Amiichii: anggap aja gabung sama LN
14:33 Amiichii: udah diwakilin LN
14:33 Amiichii: normal note itu just for drum, kick and hithat
14:33 Amiichii: wkwk
14:33 Syadow-: yha :'v
14:33 Syadow-: oalah woki
14:33 Amiichii: this is my style 'w')b
14:33 Amiichii: LOL
14:34 Amiichii: 01:00:026 - gg snap
14:34 Amiichii: sama ini jg 01:26:255 - wkwk
14:35 Syadow-: lol :V
14:35 Amiichii: benerin dong
14:35 Amiichii: awkawk
14:35 Amiichii: klo salah
14:35 Syadow-: akwakwka
14:36 Syadow-: 1/6 kok
14:36 Amiichii: 01:00:927 -
14:36 Amiichii: ngeng
14:36 Amiichii: wkwk
14:37 Syadow-: 01:00:968 (60968|0,60968|1) - susah nentuin :'v
14:38 Amiichii: wkwkwk
14:38 Amiichii: gg
14:38 Syadow-: 01:01:050 (61050|2,61050|3) - coba sini 01:01:036 -
14:38 Syadow-: 01:00:968 (60968|0,60968|1) - 01:00:982 -
14:38 Syadow-: 1/12
14:39 Amiichii: dah bener gitu mnurutku
14:39 Amiichii: akwak
14:39 Syadow-: sek tak ss
14:40 Amiichii: wkwk
14:40 Syadow-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7758354 jarak per itu 1 tik
14:40 Amiichii: http://puu.sh/vc8cI/f343c3ca49.jpg
14:40 Amiichii: super snap
14:40 Amiichii: awkwak
14:40 Syadow-: :v
14:43 Amiichii: Mirai e to
14:43 Amiichii: Futari no Wondertale
14:43 Syadow-: malah nyanyi wkakwak
14:43 Amiichii: wkkw
14:44 Syadow-: 01:26:255 - sini skip males dengerin 1/16 apalah itu
14:44 Amiichii: awkawkakw
14:44 Syadow-: akwkaka :v
14:44 Amiichii: gg nap ni map
14:45 Syadow-: wkawkakwa true
14:45 Syadow-: gg hd od hp 7 nm 7,5 nice
14:45 Amiichii: woh
14:46 Amiichii: kebalik to editnya gw
14:46 Amiichii: wakawk
14:46 Syadow-: wakkwak
14:46 *Syadow- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258995 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale [Hard]]
14:46 Syadow-: 00:24:534 - ini rasanya 1/4 :3
14:47 Amiichii: rasah mbayar
14:47 Amiichii: awkawk
14:48 Syadow-: wes dibayari kok wakwkak
14:48 Amiichii: wkwk
14:48 *Amiichii is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258995 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale [Hard]]
14:48 Syadow-: 00:37:730 - ini nadanya naik tp kok di 4 ;w;
14:48 Amiichii: boring =w=
14:48 Amiichii: no idea
14:48 Amiichii: kampret
14:48 Amiichii: mw remap
14:48 Amiichii: awkawk
14:48 Syadow-: 00:37:239 (37239|3,37403|3) - dah jack
14:48 Syadow-: :VVV
14:48 Amiichii: asal map
14:48 Amiichii: wkwk
14:49 Syadow-: wakkwka et mah beda
14:49 Syadow-: 00:37:730 (37730|3,37730|1) - ctrl h
14:49 Syadow-: 00:38:386 (38386|3,38386|2,38550|0,38550|1,38714|0,38714|3,38878|2,38878|1,39042|3,39042|0,39206|2,39206|0,39534|0,39534|1,39862|3,39862|2,40026|0,40026|1,40353|2,40353|0,40353|3) - ctrl h
14:49 Amiichii: udah
14:50 Amiichii: give me idea
14:50 Amiichii: biar di hd seru
14:50 Amiichii: wkwk
14:50 Syadow-: 00:40:681 (40681|0,40845|2,41009|1) - 3 2 3
14:50 Syadow-: kasih sv biar zedap
14:51 Syadow-: 00:41:665 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7758386 biar ga berulang
14:51 Amiichii: dah
14:51 Syadow-: 00:44:780 (44780|1,44780|2,44944|3,44944|0) - why :'v sama lagi
14:52 Amiichii: asal ngemap
14:52 Amiichii: ;w;
14:52 Syadow-: ;w;
14:52 Syadow-: 00:44:780 (44780|2,44944|0,45108|2) - swap col jd 131
14:53 Amiichii: hemeheme
14:54 Syadow-: :v
14:55 Syadow-: 01:00:681 - apaan nih ga pas :v
14:55 Amiichii: violin ja
14:55 Amiichii: wkwk
14:55 Amiichii: ignore drum
14:55 Amiichii: 'w'
14:55 Syadow-: wkwkwk
14:56 Amiichii: fade in violin
14:56 Amiichii: wkwk
14:56 Syadow-: 01:26:255 - ini ena single akhir doble mas ._.
14:57 Amiichii: SS
14:57 Amiichii: wkwk
14:57 Syadow-: dah ah w jg stuck nih :'v
14:59 Amiichii: http://puu.sh/vc8Th/7b6e510172.jpg
14:59 Amiichii: gitu?
14:59 Syadow-: bkan :'v
15:00 Syadow-: sek sek
15:00 Syadow-: kabel baterai mau putus bentar :'v
15:00 Amiichii: wat
15:01 Amiichii: siapa mw putus?
15:01 Syadow-: kabel w sama listrik
15:01 Syadow-: ini mau w bantu balikan
15:01 Syadow-: 01:00:299 (60299|0) - move ke tik biru biar gampang (nm)
15:02 Amiichii: wkwk
15:02 Amiichii: gitu jg ez
15:03 Syadow-: susah :'v
15:03 Amiichii: nah lho
15:03 Syadow-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7758415 < auto reject paleng :v
15:03 Amiichii: kan 4/3 lebih ez
15:03 Amiichii: wkwk
15:04 Amiichii: hem hem
15:04 Amiichii: keep yg tdi w ss ae
15:04 Amiichii: wkwk
15:04 Syadow-: wkwkw serah dah wkwkw :v
15:04 Syadow-: dah cuma seupil mod ;v
15:06 Amiichii: wkwk
15:06 Amiichii: ok makasih
15:07 Syadow-: wkwkw woki nichan ><
15:08 Syadow-: da saran lagu ga mas ?
15:09 Amiichii: hem
15:10 Amiichii: sem
15:10 Amiichii: SRnya
15:10 Amiichii: 3.95
15:10 Amiichii: 2.95
15:10 Amiichii: 1.97
15:10 Amiichii: -w-
15:10 Amiichii: wkwk
15:11 Syadow-: wkwkww nice :v dikit lagi
15:12 Amiichii: lel
15:13 Amiichii: sem
15:13 Amiichii: 1.96
15:13 Amiichii: wkwk
15:16 Syadow-: wkwkw
15:22 Amiichii: post oe
Last edited by Syadow- , edited 1 time in total.
AchsanLovers
987 posts
Joined April 2015
AchsanLovers
weh ada juga yg ngemap ini lagu di mania. .

tolong dirank :v nih ambil star ku :v
Adot
742 posts
Joined August 2015
Adot
irc
18:19 Adot: uy
18:19 Adot: mutual kuy
18:19 Amiichii: done
18:19 Amiichii: wkwkwk
18:19 Amiichii: req mod dong
18:19 Amiichii: :'v
18:19 Adot: s u d a h k u d u g a
18:19 Adot: m4m
18:20 Amiichii: yawla
18:20 *Amiichii is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258994 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale]
18:20 Amiichii: mine
18:20 Adot: bisa aja lu 158 bpm jadi icon I
18:20 Adot: mod sora o koeteku 
18:21 *Adot is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1056811 Mami Kawada - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-]
18:21 Amiichii: >,>
18:21 Adot: kasian ya map sebelah user nya rip
18:21 Amiichii: mostly 183bpm itu
18:22 Adot: mod skg apa gimana
18:22 Amiichii: serah sih
18:22 Adot: yauda skg aja
18:22 *Amiichii is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1056811 Mami Kawada - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete- [Insane]] <osu!mania> |4K|
18:22 Amiichii: njajal
18:22 Amiichii: wkwk
18:22 Adot: gak enak itu
18:23 Adot: map jaman kapan
18:23 Adot: blm gw ubah lagi
18:25 Adot: wee
18:25 Amiichii: skill drop
18:25 Amiichii: masih miss miss,an
18:25 Amiichii: awkawk
18:25 Adot: ln nya kudu diimpruv keknya
18:25 Adot: gapapa
18:25 Adot: gw mala skill cupu parah
18:25 Amiichii: hem
18:25 Adot: 3* dpt A skg
18:26 *Adot is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258994 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale]
18:26 Amiichii: gw 3* dpt B
18:26 Amiichii: 'w'
18:28 Adot: salah satu alasan
18:28 Adot: *gabole mencet kenceng2 ama emak
18:28 Amiichii: SVnya cpt bet ye
18:28 Amiichii: wkwk
18:28 Adot: jadi gini
18:28 Amiichii: bah
18:28 Amiichii: beli kb ex makanya
18:28 Amiichii: wkwk
18:28 Adot: ini keyb ex 
18:28 Adot: tp emak masi marah2
18:28 Adot: sa
18:28 Adot: d
18:28 Adot: yauda d
18:28 Amiichii: watdoh
18:28 Adot: ini gw dlu apa lu dlu mod
18:29 Amiichii: serah
18:29 Amiichii: gw si bntar lg mw makan
18:29 Amiichii: awkawk
18:29 Adot: aku juga serah
18:29 Adot: gimana dong
18:29 Adot: yauda aku dlu aja
18:29 Amiichii: gw mod tread aja
18:29 Adot: accept sambil makan
18:29 Adot: gw lagi males thread
18:29 Amiichii: klo ente mw mod skrng ya gpp
18:29 Amiichii: wkwk
18:29 Adot: yaudagh
18:29 Adot: irc
18:29 Amiichii: ok
18:31 Adot: kan
18:31 Adot: ini apaan si
18:31 Adot: anime?
18:31 Amiichii: gg
18:31 Amiichii: oreshura
18:31 Adot: anime / vn 
18:31 Adot: kalo vn.. eng apa g?
18:31 Amiichii: ini dari anime
18:31 Adot: alah
18:31 Amiichii: vnnya jg ada
18:31 Adot: WOI
18:31 Adot: OKE BONS
18:31 Amiichii: ntah
18:31 Amiichii: ga maen gw
18:31 Amiichii: wkwk
18:31 Adot: kalo vn sikat
18:32 Adot: i see imouto imouto
18:32 Amiichii: wkwkk
18:32 *Adot is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258995 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale [Hard]]
18:32 *Amiichii is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258995 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale [Hard]]
18:33 Adot: 00:24:534 - ini sengaja kosong ya? padahal make sense sih. 
18:34 Amiichii: kan cuman ikut drum and hithat
18:34 Adot: itu kan suara hi hat
18:34 Amiichii: ignore ae
18:34 Amiichii: lebih ke piano
18:35 Adot: 00:47:730 - single ini mah
18:35 Adot: sama polanya kek 00:46:911 (46911|2,46911|3,47075|1,47075|0,47239|2) - 
18:36 Amiichii: tp ada drumnya
18:36 Adot: 01:00:189 (60189|2,60189|3,60271|1,60271|0) - ini seharusnya ada di snap 1/6
18:36 Adot: dengerin pake playback 25%
18:37 Amiichii: woke
18:38 Adot: hh3h3h3h
18:39 Adot: next diff d
18:39 Amiichii: woke
18:41 Adot: https://puu.sh/vb8pw/3914ca7278.png anger react only
18:41 *Adot is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258994 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale [Story]]
18:42 Amiichii: owo
18:42 Adot: gak ber vn ini ):
18:43 Amiichii: wkwkkw
18:43 Amiichii: savar
18:43 Adot: lagian si milf bersuara loli ini gaperna setauku ngebikin OP vn
18:43 Adot: pernahnya ngisi
18:44 Adot: 01:00:189 (60189|3,60189|2,60271|1,60271|0) - ini benerin juga
18:44 Amiichii: si milf?
18:44 Amiichii: sopo?
18:44 Amiichii: wkwk
18:45 Adot: tamura yukari
18:45 Amiichii: udah
18:45 Adot: 47 tahun coeg
18:45 Amiichii: awkawk
18:45 Amiichii: mana w tau
18:45 Amiichii: lel
18:45 Adot: btw di hard ini snapnya samain kek di hardest 
18:45 Adot: 01:01:009 (61009|0,61091|1,61173|2) - 
18:45 Adot: buka hard lagi
18:45 Amiichii: udah
18:45 Adot: ah oke
18:45 Amiichii: gausah
18:45 Amiichii: hard ikut synth
18:45 Amiichii: ini ikut drum
18:45 Amiichii: wkwk
18:46 Adot: tidak berpengaruh
18:46 Amiichii: wkwk
18:46 Amiichii: snapnya gg
18:46 Adot: ah
18:46 Amiichii: ada lg?
18:47 Adot: ini emg gw yg lagi males mention 
18:47 Adot: apa emg map nya dah bagus
18:47 Amiichii: >,>
18:47 Amiichii: yaudah apa adanya aja
18:47 Amiichii: asal ++ aja spnya
18:47 Amiichii: wkwk
18:47 Adot: gw shoot lah
18:47 Amiichii: ntar w via thread apa irc?
18:48 Amiichii: tp abis makan
18:48 Amiichii: wkwk
18:48 Adot: terserah kamu sih irc atau ga
18:48 Amiichii: wkwkk
18:48 Adot: yang pasti aku apply mod map lain dlu
18:48 Amiichii: ya liat si kon
18:48 Amiichii: ok
18:48 Adot: kalo irc bisa aku abaikan dlu apply mod
18:48 Adot: udah ini aja
18:48 Amiichii: wkwk
Asherz007
Beatmap Nominator
687 posts
Joined September 2016
Asherz007
Hey! From a mod queue. :)

General
Just about falling into this, but ensure that the mapset has at least one diff <2*.
Don't forget to check AIMod. There's currently some source and tag conflicts that have not been sorted out yet, and there's an unsnapped end at 00:11:502 in the Story diff.

Most in Hard and Story, the difficult section in the last part of the map is pushing SR up a lot. Consider making the rest of the map slightly more difficult to match up to this.

Differentiate OD and HP across the difficulties. Nowadays people would go with something like...
  1. Normal OD 7 HP 7'
  2. Hard OD 7.5 HP 7.5
  3. Story OD 8 HP 8
Obligatory hitsound reminder... Don't forget about them! ;)
I assume you're going to be adding custom hitsounds, given the sets used in the timing points...

0|1|2|3

Normal
Nicely done overall. Just a couple of suggestions here.
  1. 00:18:058 (18058|3) - Could be an LN to 00:19:042.
  2. 01:01:009 (61009|2) - Think about removing this note, as I think the double here is slight overemphasis, given that you're highlighting the middle of a stream.
  3. 01:11:173 (71173|3,71337|1,71501|2,71665|0) - I get what you're trying to do here, but perhaps follow either the strings or the vocals, rather than trying to do both.
  4. 01:16:255 (76255|0,76419|1) - Switch cols? (No LNs in col 1 in this small section)
  5. 01:28:878 (88878|3) - I don't get this LN. It starts when everything is already held. Consider removing it.

Hard
There's not much I can find critically wrong with this map, in all honesty. My main nitpick would be that I reckon 00:10:845 (10845|1,10845|0,11009|1,11009|2,11173|0,11173|2) - should be single-single-double rather than all doubles. (Having a look at the Story diff, you could use double-double-triple there.)
    1. 00:14:616 (14616|1) - Hold to next LN like in Story diff?
    2. 00:21:993 (21993|1) - Double?
    3. 00:24:616 (24616|1) - ^
    4. 00:27:239 (27239|2) - ^
    5. 01:05:763 (65763|1) - Hold LN? (see above)
    6. 01:16:255 (76255|2) - ^
    7. 01:28:878 (88878|3) - delete? (See normal)

Hope this helps and best of luck! :)
Last edited by Asherz007 , edited 1 time in total.
Leonita
488 posts
Joined December 2012
Leonita
udh di shoot ya.
Crumpey
563 posts
Joined October 2013
Crumpey
As Requested in Crumpey's mod Queue

General, Normal, Story
cols = 1|2|3|4

General
00:29:370 - This sv feels really bad the first part is ok then the jump to this note, is very confusing 00:29:534 (29534|0,29534|1) -

Normal
00:55:599 (55599|2) - remove this note

Story
00:10:190 (10190|3) - Snap this note
00:14:780 (14780|1,14780|3) - Make a single note
00:19:370 (19370|2,19370|0,19370|2,19370|3,19698|1,19698|2,20026|2) - your inconsistant with this beat throughout the song, first 3 notes (thats okay its emphasised more) then 2 notes, then 1
00:19:534 (19534|1,19534|3) - Ghost notes
00:20:845 (20845|3,20845|1) - Some more ghost notes
00:21:829 (21829|2,21883|1,21938|0,21993|3,21993|2) - this stream isnt inplace, feels one tick too low (feels the same for all other streams similar to this)
01:26:255 (86255|3,86255|2,86337|1,86337|0,86419|2,86419|3,86501|0,86501|1,86583|3,86583|2,86665|0,86665|1,86747|3,86747|2,86829|0,86829|1,86911|3,86911|2,87075|2,87075|0,87157|1,87157|3,87239|2,87239|0,87321|1,87321|3,87403|0,87403|2,87485|3,87485|1) - i feel that this part isnt in time with the beat to the song


Good luck with this map
Amiichii
719 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Amiichii

Adot wrote:

irc
18:19 Adot: uy
18:19 Adot: mutual kuy
18:19 Amiichii: done
18:19 Amiichii: wkwkwk
18:19 Amiichii: req mod dong
18:19 Amiichii: :'v
18:19 Adot: s u d a h k u d u g a
18:19 Adot: m4m
18:20 Amiichii: yawla
18:20 *Amiichii is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258994 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale]
18:20 Amiichii: mine
18:20 Adot: bisa aja lu 158 bpm jadi icon I
18:20 Adot: mod sora o koeteku 
18:21 *Adot is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1056811 Mami Kawada - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-]
18:21 Amiichii: >,>
18:21 Adot: kasian ya map sebelah user nya rip
18:21 Amiichii: mostly 183bpm itu
18:22 Adot: mod skg apa gimana
18:22 Amiichii: serah sih
18:22 Adot: yauda skg aja
18:22 *Amiichii is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1056811 Mami Kawada - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete- [Insane]] <osu!mania> |4K|
18:22 Amiichii: njajal
18:22 Amiichii: wkwk
18:22 Adot: gak enak itu
18:23 Adot: map jaman kapan
18:23 Adot: blm gw ubah lagi
18:25 Adot: wee
18:25 Amiichii: skill drop
18:25 Amiichii: masih miss miss,an
18:25 Amiichii: awkawk
18:25 Adot: ln nya kudu diimpruv keknya
18:25 Adot: gapapa
18:25 Adot: gw mala skill cupu parah
18:25 Amiichii: hem
18:25 Adot: 3* dpt A skg
18:26 *Adot is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258994 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale]
18:26 Amiichii: gw 3* dpt B
18:26 Amiichii: 'w'
18:28 Adot: salah satu alasan
18:28 Adot: *gabole mencet kenceng2 ama emak
18:28 Amiichii: SVnya cpt bet ye
18:28 Amiichii: wkwk
18:28 Adot: jadi gini
18:28 Amiichii: bah
18:28 Amiichii: beli kb ex makanya
18:28 Amiichii: wkwk
18:28 Adot: ini keyb ex 
18:28 Adot: tp emak masi marah2
18:28 Adot: sa
18:28 Adot: d
18:28 Adot: yauda d
18:28 Amiichii: watdoh
18:28 Adot: ini gw dlu apa lu dlu mod
18:29 Amiichii: serah
18:29 Amiichii: gw si bntar lg mw makan
18:29 Amiichii: awkawk
18:29 Adot: aku juga serah
18:29 Adot: gimana dong
18:29 Adot: yauda aku dlu aja
18:29 Amiichii: gw mod tread aja
18:29 Adot: accept sambil makan
18:29 Adot: gw lagi males thread
18:29 Amiichii: klo ente mw mod skrng ya gpp
18:29 Amiichii: wkwk
18:29 Adot: yaudagh
18:29 Adot: irc
18:29 Amiichii: ok
18:31 Adot: kan
18:31 Adot: ini apaan si
18:31 Adot: anime?
18:31 Amiichii: gg
18:31 Amiichii: oreshura
18:31 Adot: anime / vn 
18:31 Adot: kalo vn.. eng apa g?
18:31 Amiichii: ini dari anime
18:31 Adot: alah
18:31 Amiichii: vnnya jg ada
18:31 Adot: WOI
18:31 Adot: OKE BONS
18:31 Amiichii: ntah
18:31 Amiichii: ga maen gw
18:31 Amiichii: wkwk
18:31 Adot: kalo vn sikat
18:32 Adot: i see imouto imouto
18:32 Amiichii: wkwkk
18:32 *Adot is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258995 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale [Hard]]
18:32 *Amiichii is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258995 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale [Hard]]
18:33 Adot: 00:24:534 - ini sengaja kosong ya? padahal make sense sih. 
18:34 Amiichii: kan cuman ikut drum and hithat
18:34 Adot: itu kan suara hi hat
18:34 Amiichii: ignore ae
18:34 Amiichii: lebih ke piano
18:35 Adot: 00:47:730 - single ini mah
18:35 Adot: sama polanya kek 00:46:911 (46911|2,46911|3,47075|1,47075|0,47239|2) - 
18:36 Amiichii: tp ada drumnya
18:36 Adot: 01:00:189 (60189|2,60189|3,60271|1,60271|0) - ini seharusnya ada di snap 1/6
18:36 Adot: dengerin pake playback 25%
18:37 Amiichii: woke
18:38 Adot: hh3h3h3h
18:39 Adot: next diff d
18:39 Amiichii: woke
18:41 Adot: https://puu.sh/vb8pw/3914ca7278.png anger react only
18:41 *Adot is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258994 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale [Story]]
18:42 Amiichii: owo
18:42 Adot: gak ber vn ini ):
18:43 Amiichii: wkwkkw
18:43 Amiichii: savar
18:43 Adot: lagian si milf bersuara loli ini gaperna setauku ngebikin OP vn
18:43 Adot: pernahnya ngisi
18:44 Adot: 01:00:189 (60189|3,60189|2,60271|1,60271|0) - ini benerin juga
18:44 Amiichii: si milf?
18:44 Amiichii: sopo?
18:44 Amiichii: wkwk
18:45 Adot: tamura yukari
18:45 Amiichii: udah
18:45 Adot: 47 tahun coeg
18:45 Amiichii: awkawk
18:45 Amiichii: mana w tau
18:45 Amiichii: lel
18:45 Adot: btw di hard ini snapnya samain kek di hardest 
18:45 Adot: 01:01:009 (61009|0,61091|1,61173|2) - 
18:45 Adot: buka hard lagi
18:45 Amiichii: udah
18:45 Adot: ah oke
18:45 Amiichii: gausah
18:45 Amiichii: hard ikut synth
18:45 Amiichii: ini ikut drum
18:45 Amiichii: wkwk
18:46 Adot: tidak berpengaruh
18:46 Amiichii: wkwk
18:46 Amiichii: snapnya gg
18:46 Adot: ah
18:46 Amiichii: ada lg?
18:47 Adot: ini emg gw yg lagi males mention 
18:47 Adot: apa emg map nya dah bagus
18:47 Amiichii: >,>
18:47 Amiichii: yaudah apa adanya aja
18:47 Amiichii: asal ++ aja spnya
18:47 Amiichii: wkwk
18:47 Adot: gw shoot lah
18:47 Amiichii: ntar w via thread apa irc?
18:48 Amiichii: tp abis makan
18:48 Amiichii: wkwk
18:48 Adot: terserah kamu sih irc atau ga
18:48 Amiichii: wkwkk
18:48 Adot: yang pasti aku apply mod map lain dlu
18:48 Amiichii: ya liat si kon
18:48 Amiichii: ok
18:48 Adot: kalo irc bisa aku abaikan dlu apply mod
18:48 Adot: udah ini aja
18:48 Amiichii: wkwk
Makasih uwu

Asherz007 wrote:

Hey! From a mod queue. :)

General
Just about falling into this, but ensure that the mapset has at least one diff <2*.
Don't forget to check AIMod. There's currently some source and tag conflicts that have not been sorted out yet, and there's an unsnapped end at 00:11:502 in the Story diff.

Most in Hard and Story, the difficult section in the last part of the map is pushing SR up a lot. Consider making the rest of the map slightly more difficult to match up to this.

Differentiate OD and HP across the difficulties. Nowadays people would go with something like...
  1. Normal OD 7 HP 7'
  2. Hard OD 7.5 HP 7.5
  3. Story OD 8 HP 8
Obligatory hitsound reminder... Don't forget about them! ;)
I assume you're going to be adding custom hitsounds, given the sets used in the timing points...

fixed

0|1|2|3

Normal
Nicely done overall. Just a couple of suggestions here.
[*]00:18:058 (18058|3) - Could be an LN to 00:19:042. // no thanks
[*]01:01:009 (61009|2) - Think about removing this note, as I think the double here is slight overemphasis, given that you're highlighting the middle of a stream. // oki
[*]01:11:173 (71173|3,71337|1,71501|2,71665|0) - I get what you're trying to do here, but perhaps follow either the strings or the vocals, rather than trying to do both. // no thanks
[*]01:16:255 (76255|0,76419|1) - Switch cols? (No LNs in col 1 in this small section) // ok
[*]01:28:878 (88878|3) - I don't get this LN. It starts when everything is already held. Consider removing it. // will consider

Hard
There's not much I can find critically wrong with this map, in all honesty. My main nitpick would be that I reckon 00:10:845 (10845|1,10845|0,11009|1,11009|2,11173|0,11173|2) - should be single-single-double rather than all doubles. (Having a look at the Story diff, you could use double-double-triple there.) // keep. There have limit colomn x_x
    1. 00:14:616 (14616|1) - Hold to next LN like in Story diff?
    2. 00:21:993 (21993|1) - Double?
    3. 00:24:616 (24616|1) - ^
    4. 00:27:239 (27239|2) - ^
    5. 01:05:763 (65763|1) - Hold LN? (see above)
    6. 01:16:255 (76255|2) - ^
    7. 01:28:878 (88878|3) - delete? (See normal)
      all fixed

Hope this helps and best of luck! :)
Thanks for mod :')

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

As Requested in Crumpey's mod Queue

General, Normal, Story
cols = 1|2|3|4

General
00:29:370 - This sv feels really bad the first part is ok then the jump to this note, is very confusing 00:29:534 (29534|0,29534|1) - // reduce speed

Normal
00:55:599 (55599|2) - remove this note // no thanks. there have kick

Story
00:10:190 (10190|3) - Snap this note // fixed
00:14:780 (14780|1,14780|3) - Make a single note // no thanks. consistency
00:19:370 (19370|2,19370|0,19370|2,19370|3,19698|1,19698|2,20026|2) - your inconsistant with this beat throughout the song, first 3 notes (thats okay its emphasised more) then 2 notes, then 1 // triple note if for cymbal. double note is for piano and single note if there just have drum or hithat only without piano
00:19:534 (19534|1,19534|3) - Ghost notes // nice catch
00:20:845 (20845|3,20845|1) - Some more ghost notes // no, there have piano sound but heavy
00:21:829 (21829|2,21883|1,21938|0,21993|3,21993|2) - this stream isnt inplace, feels one tick too low (feels the same for all other streams similar to this) // nice catch. fixed
01:26:255 (86255|3,86255|2,86337|1,86337|0,86419|2,86419|3,86501|0,86501|1,86583|3,86583|2,86665|0,86665|1,86747|3,86747|2,86829|0,86829|1,86911|3,86911|2,87075|2,87075|0,87157|1,87157|3,87239|2,87239|0,87321|1,87321|3,87403|0,87403|2,87485|3,87485|1) - i feel that this part isnt in time with the beat to the song // will ask to another mapper later


Good luck with this map
Thanks for mod ;)

AchsanLovers wrote:

weh ada juga yg ngemap ini lagu di mania. .

tolong dirank :v nih ambil star ku :v
makasih kk

Leonita wrote:

udh di shoot ya.
makasih mastah -/\-
Leonita
488 posts
Joined December 2012
Leonita

Amiichii wrote:

makasih mastah -/\-
bct

mod dipaksa :<
[Ijo]
  1. 00:02:698 - sv mulai dari sini mz 00:02:604 -
  2. 00:06:401 - double
  3. 00:19:370 - gtw knp bagian ini kek yg nanggung gitu ka:u tapi aku jg gatau hrs digimanain wkwk
[Oren]
  1. 00:28:468 - keknya di add jg gpp deh buat nyembunyiin tring nya http://puu.sh/vc1jF/1baf01e06c.jpg
  2. 00:33:632 - 00:34:288 - ini udh ganti pitch kakaaaaa, tapi teserah deng uwu
  3. 01:01:009 (61009|0,61091|1,61173|2,61255|3) - jadiin 2|3|2|3 leugha keknya http://puu.sh/vc1so/534f0ec1bd.jpg
[Biru]
  1. 01:05:927 (65927|2) - ini dijadiin ln leugha
  2. lah 01:06:255 (66255|3) - ini gk macam 01:05:763 (65763|3) - piye toh
  3. 01:16:255 (76255|3,76747|3) - ^
ini gd nya owo Leonitale's Easy. makasih udh rebutan begron sama aqu:>
Amiichii
719 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Amiichii

Leonita wrote:

Amiichii wrote:

makasih mastah -/\-
bct

mod dipaksa :< // :'<
[Ijo]
  1. 00:02:698 - sv mulai dari sini mz 00:02:604 - // nice
  2. 00:06:401 - double // single aja.
  3. 00:19:370 - gtw knp bagian ini kek yg nanggung gitu ka:u tapi aku jg gatau hrs digimanain wkwk // sama aku jg bingung. uwu
[Oren]
  1. 00:28:468 - keknya di add jg gpp deh buat nyembunyiin tring nya http://puu.sh/vc1jF/1baf01e06c.jpg // ku pertimbangkan lg nnti
  2. 00:33:632 - 00:34:288 - ini udh ganti pitch kakaaaaa, tapi teserah deng uwu // gitu aja deh dulu. wkwk
  3. 01:01:009 (61009|0,61091|1,61173|2,61255|3) - jadiin 2|3|2|3 leugha keknya http://puu.sh/vc1so/534f0ec1bd.jpg // ngga deh. aku ikut synth itu bkn drum sbnernya. wkkw
[Biru]
  1. 01:05:927 (65927|2) - ini dijadiin ln leugha // pertimbangkan lg
  2. lah 01:06:255 (66255|3) - ini gk macam 01:05:763 (65763|3) - piye toh //yhaaa gitu. soalnya kan emang panjang. sdngkan yg satu ada potongan tp ga keras
  3. 01:16:255 (76255|3,76747|3) - ^
ini gd nya owo Leonitale's Easy. makasih udh rebutan begron sama aqu:>
OK makasih mod sama GDnya :)
Garalulu
933 posts
Joined March 2011
Garalulu
no kudosu

some suggestion
17:39 Amiichii: hii hii lulu 'w')/
17:40 Garalulu: hii hii amii \('w'
17:41 Amiichii: ano.
17:41 Amiichii: can you tes my map?
17:41 Amiichii: D:
17:41 Amiichii: *test
17:41 Garalulu: yah
17:41 Garalulu: what map
17:41 *Amiichii is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1258994 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale]
17:41 Amiichii: milf loli
17:41 Amiichii: xD
17:42 Amiichii: Do you play with pentab?
17:43 Garalulu: penmouse
17:43 Garalulu: :3
17:43 Amiichii: it's same i think lol
17:45 Garalulu: that sv :3
17:45 Amiichii: lol
17:45 Amiichii: 01:00:927 (60927|3,61036|3) - this hard to press?
17:46 Garalulu: that snap too hard
17:46 Amiichii: lol
17:46 Amiichii: random snap
17:46 Amiichii: 01:00:927 (60927|3) - delete this
17:47 Garalulu: good
17:47 Amiichii: and how about this snap? 01:26:255 -
17:47 Amiichii: LOL
17:47 Garalulu: drum pls
17:47 Amiichii: yup
17:47 Amiichii: it's the snap right?
17:48 Amiichii: 1/4s but in 1/16s line
17:48 Amiichii: orz
17:48 Garalulu: I think it's right
17:49 Garalulu: owo
17:49 Amiichii: hmm
17:49 Amiichii: ok
17:49 Amiichii: any suggestion?
17:51 Garalulu: 00:58:605 (58605|2,58659|3,58714|2) -
17:51 Garalulu: reverse it
17:51 Amiichii: oki
17:51 Garalulu: 343 looks awkward tho
17:52 Garalulu: 01:21:009 (81009|3,81009|2,81173|0,81173|1) - you can make this with same col
17:52 Garalulu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7758571
17:52 Garalulu: like this
17:52 Amiichii: oki 'w')b
17:53 Garalulu: other is fine tho
17:53 Garalulu: owo)b
17:53 Amiichii: oki thanks
17:53 Amiichii: can you post this? D:
17:53 Garalulu: oki just post and no kudosu plz haha
17:53 Garalulu: too short

+1 modding count 'w')b
Raveille
787 posts
Joined February 2012
Raveille
From Whitelist


aaaaaaaaaaaaiudhfiuynfuasufiosf

|1|2|3|4|

Easy
00:28:222 (28222|1) - move this to 3 because a 1 2 hold follow to note in an Easy diff is a little harsh
01:02:976 (62976|3) - move this to 2 cause a 3 4 you know...
01:06:911 (66911|0) - this to 4
nothing much tbh

Normal
00:18:058 (18058|3) - move to 3 and make this a hold to 00:19:370 -
01:12:157 (72157|3) - move this to 3 to relax column 4
01:26:276 (86276|3,86276|0,86439|2,86603|1,86767|2) - what the fuck? why are they on 1/16 lines????? don't do that dude, snap them to 1/4

Hard
00:18:058 (18058|2) - move to 2 and make this a hold to 00:19:370 -
01:25:927 (85927|0,86276|3,86276|2,86358|1,86439|0,86439|3,86521|2,86603|0,86603|1,86685|2,86767|0,86767|3,86849|1,86911|3,86911|2) - why do you want to trip people up like this??

Story
00:18:058 (18058|1) - make this a hold to 00:19:370 -
00:43:468 (43468|0) - this can be at 3
00:58:605 (58605|3,58659|2,58714|3) - i'd rather you swap the notes (so it will be 3 4 3)
you know, if you snap them (01:26:276 (86276|3,86276|2,86358|0,86358|1,86439|2,86439|3,86521|1,86521|0,86603|2,86603|3,86685|0,86685|1,86767|2,86767|3,86849|1,86849|0,86911|2,86911|3) - ) to 1/4, it still sounds pretty ok tbh

idk, the odd snapping throws me off. get more mods for that part. good luck 8-) 8-) 8-)
Raediaufar
879 posts
Joined November 2014
Raediaufar
irc
20:35 Raediaufar: sorry lepi lag tadi
20:35 Raediaufar: testplay dulu ya
20:37 Leonita: owo
20:37 Raediaufar: sebelumnya ini gw gk dl yg pake video
20:38 Raediaufar: jadi cek aja dulu siapa tau videonya belom dimasukin ke diffmu
20:38 Raediaufar: karena sering kejadian mapper kelupaan naroh xD
20:38 Leonita: kata ka ami ada 'w'
20:39 Raediaufar: oh ok
20:39 Raediaufar: 00:15:108 (15108|1) - ini mungkin bisa pindah ke 3
20:39 Raediaufar: terus ini 00:15:435 (15435|3) - 2
20:40 Raediaufar: soalnya kan 1/2 beat terus tiba tiba ada LN dan pergantian notenya di tangan yg sama
20:40 Leonita: ok owo
20:40 Raediaufar: ya imo rada bingungin newbie
20:41 Raediaufar: oh kalo apply mungkin bisa digeser juga ini ke 4 00:15:763 (15763|0) -
20:41 Raediaufar: soalnya rada kosong gw liat karena diapply
20:41 Leonita: ok owo
20:42 Raediaufar: 00:28:550 (28550|0) - move ke 3, lebih nyaman :3
20:42 Leonita: ok owo
20:42 Leonita: wkwkwk
20:42 Raediaufar: 00:39:042 (39042|1,39206|0) - ctrl + g, imo lebih enakan 12 daripada 21
20:43 Raediaufar: 00:41:829 - gk add note? ada snare disitu
20:43 Leonita: hmm
20:43 Leonita: bole bole owo
20:44 Leonita: ngikut hithat
20:44 Leonita: kalo ikut snare ntar dempet:|
20:44 Raediaufar: ok ok
20:45 Raediaufar: double 34 disini 00:45:599 - , sama kayak ini 00:40:353 (40353|0,40353|3) -
20:45 Leonita: hoiya kwkw
20:45 Leonita: kelewat 'w'
20:46 Raediaufar: 00:55:435 (55435|2) - mungkin bisa pindah ke 2, soalnya kan sebelumnya jack 2 note 2 note gitu
20:46 Raediaufar: bisa bikin kaget xD
20:46 Raediaufar: kalo tiba tiba yg ini 3 note jack
20:46 Leonita: -w-
20:46 Leonita: okii 'w'
20:47 Raediaufar: 01:10:517 (70517|1,70681|2,70845|3,71173|0,71337|1,71501|2) - saranku sih
20:48 Raediaufar: kalo kek gini rancu kamu ngikut suara apa
20:48 Leonita: dukduktss dukduktss
20:48 Raediaufar: soalnya disini 01:11:009 - juga ada suara synthnya
20:48 Leonita: asalnya teh 01:10:845 (70845|3,71501|2) - ln
20:48 Leonita: cmn katanya kesusahan.-.
20:48 Leonita: ywd 'w'
20:49 Raediaufar: hmm
20:49 Raediaufar: entar
20:49 Raediaufar: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7769251
20:49 Raediaufar: bikin kyk gini aja
20:50 Raediaufar: soalnya kuat juga impactnya disitu jadi pas buat double kok
20:51 Leonita: [http://puu.sh/vdqMt/98a6c514ab.png gini 'w']
20:51 Raediaufar: kalo diapply mungkin bisa dipake juga dipart sini pattern kek tadi 01:21:009 (81009|0,81173|1,81337|3,81665|0,81829|2,81993|3) -
20:51 Raediaufar: soalnya mirip =w=
20:52 Raediaufar: yg itu boleh juga
20:52 Leonita: okii 'w'
20:52 Raediaufar: yg gambar kamu
20:52 Raediaufar: ok itu aja xD
20:52 Leonita: 01:05:927 (65927|1,66091|2,66255|3) - ini arrange ugha ndak?
20:53 Raediaufar: hmm
20:54 Raediaufar: kalo gue mappingnya sih [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7769288 gini]
20:54 Raediaufar: ya menurut gue lebih pas sama ritmenya
20:55 Raediaufar: kalo mau pake ritme itu berarti apply juga disini 01:15:763 -
20:55 Raediaufar: afk dulu ya mau makan
20:57 Leonita: knp yg 1/2 nya di pertama
20:57 Leonita: hoo okii 'w'
21:29 Leonita: ini udahan kan kaa? 'w'
21:29 Raediaufar: oh iya udh xD
21:30 Raediaufar: ntar ku posting hbis main map ini
21:30 Leonita: okii'w'
Leonita
488 posts
Joined December 2012
Leonita

Raveille wrote:

From Whitelist


aaaaaaaaaaaaiudhfiuynfuasufiosf

|1|2|3|4|

Easy
00:28:222 (28222|1) - move this to 3 because a 1 2 hold follow to note in an Easy diff is a little harsh
arranged owo
01:02:976 (62976|3) - move this to 2 cause a 3 4 you know...
seems okii for me.-.
01:06:911 (66911|0) - this to 4
this too
nothing much tbh

idk, the odd snapping throws me off. get more mods for that part. good luck 8-) 8-) 8-)
thanks real evil owo

Raediaufar wrote:

irc
20:35 Raediaufar: sorry lepi lag tadi
20:35 Raediaufar: testplay dulu ya
20:37 Leonita: owo
20:37 Raediaufar: sebelumnya ini gw gk dl yg pake video
20:38 Raediaufar: jadi cek aja dulu siapa tau videonya belom dimasukin ke diffmu
20:38 Raediaufar: karena sering kejadian mapper kelupaan naroh xD
20:38 Leonita: kata ka ami ada 'w'
20:39 Raediaufar: oh ok
20:39 Raediaufar: 00:15:108 (15108|1) - ini mungkin bisa pindah ke 3
20:39 Raediaufar: terus ini 00:15:435 (15435|3) - 2
20:40 Raediaufar: soalnya kan 1/2 beat terus tiba tiba ada LN dan pergantian notenya di tangan yg sama
20:40 Leonita: ok owo
20:40 Raediaufar: ya imo rada bingungin newbie
20:41 Raediaufar: oh kalo apply mungkin bisa digeser juga ini ke 4 00:15:763 (15763|0) -
20:41 Raediaufar: soalnya rada kosong gw liat karena diapply
20:41 Leonita: ok owo
20:42 Raediaufar: 00:28:550 (28550|0) - move ke 3, lebih nyaman :3
20:42 Leonita: ok owo
20:42 Leonita: wkwkwk
20:42 Raediaufar: 00:39:042 (39042|1,39206|0) - ctrl + g, imo lebih enakan 12 daripada 21
20:43 Raediaufar: 00:41:829 - gk add note? ada snare disitu
20:43 Leonita: hmm
20:43 Leonita: bole bole owo
20:44 Leonita: ngikut hithat
20:44 Leonita: kalo ikut snare ntar dempet:|
20:44 Raediaufar: ok ok
20:45 Raediaufar: double 34 disini 00:45:599 - , sama kayak ini 00:40:353 (40353|0,40353|3) -
20:45 Leonita: hoiya kwkw
20:45 Leonita: kelewat 'w'
20:46 Raediaufar: 00:55:435 (55435|2) - mungkin bisa pindah ke 2, soalnya kan sebelumnya jack 2 note 2 note gitu
20:46 Raediaufar: bisa bikin kaget xD
20:46 Raediaufar: kalo tiba tiba yg ini 3 note jack
20:46 Leonita: -w-
20:46 Leonita: okii 'w'
20:47 Raediaufar: 01:10:517 (70517|1,70681|2,70845|3,71173|0,71337|1,71501|2) - saranku sih
20:48 Raediaufar: kalo kek gini rancu kamu ngikut suara apa
20:48 Leonita: dukduktss dukduktss
20:48 Raediaufar: soalnya disini 01:11:009 - juga ada suara synthnya
20:48 Leonita: asalnya teh 01:10:845 (70845|3,71501|2) - ln
20:48 Leonita: cmn katanya kesusahan.-.
20:48 Leonita: ywd 'w'
20:49 Raediaufar: hmm
20:49 Raediaufar: entar
20:49 Raediaufar: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7769251
20:49 Raediaufar: bikin kyk gini aja
20:50 Raediaufar: soalnya kuat juga impactnya disitu jadi pas buat double kok
20:51 Leonita: [http://puu.sh/vdqMt/98a6c514ab.png gini 'w']
20:51 Raediaufar: kalo diapply mungkin bisa dipake juga dipart sini pattern kek tadi 01:21:009 (81009|0,81173|1,81337|3,81665|0,81829|2,81993|3) -
20:51 Raediaufar: soalnya mirip =w=
20:52 Raediaufar: yg itu boleh juga
20:52 Leonita: okii 'w'
20:52 Raediaufar: yg gambar kamu
20:52 Raediaufar: ok itu aja xD
20:52 Leonita: 01:05:927 (65927|1,66091|2,66255|3) - ini arrange ugha ndak?
20:53 Raediaufar: hmm
20:54 Raediaufar: kalo gue mappingnya sih [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7769288 gini]
20:54 Raediaufar: ya menurut gue lebih pas sama ritmenya
20:55 Raediaufar: kalo mau pake ritme itu berarti apply juga disini 01:15:763 -
20:55 Raediaufar: afk dulu ya mau makan
20:57 Leonita: knp yg 1/2 nya di pertama
20:57 Leonita: hoo okii 'w'
21:29 Leonita: ini udahan kan kaa? 'w'
21:29 Raediaufar: oh iya udh xD
21:30 Raediaufar: ntar ku posting hbis main map ini
21:30 Leonita: okii'w'
thanks ka raedi owo

update 'w'
Amiichii
719 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Amiichii

Raveille wrote:

From Whitelist


aaaaaaaaaaaaiudhfiuynfuasufiosf

|1|2|3|4|

Easy
00:28:222 (28222|1) - move this to 3 because a 1 2 hold follow to note in an Easy diff is a little harsh
01:02:976 (62976|3) - move this to 2 cause a 3 4 you know...
01:06:911 (66911|0) - this to 4
nothing much tbh

Normal
00:18:058 (18058|3) - move to 3 and make this a hold to 00:19:370 - // no. keep
01:12:157 (72157|3) - move this to 3 to relax column 4 // already in colomn 4 btw. LOL
01:26:276 (86276|3,86276|0,86439|2,86603|1,86767|2) - what the fuck? why are they on 1/16 lines????? don't do that dude, snap them to 1/4 // look down

Hard
00:18:058 (18058|2) - move to 2 and make this a hold to 00:19:370 -
01:25:927 (85927|0,86276|3,86276|2,86358|1,86439|0,86439|3,86521|2,86603|0,86603|1,86685|2,86767|0,86767|3,86849|1,86911|3,86911|2) - why do you want to trip people up like this?? // what do u ask? to pattern or to snapping? if to the pattern since 1/2s have double drum and 1/4s for roll drum. If about snapping since i think this correct snap uwu

Story
00:18:058 (18058|1) - make this a hold to 00:19:370 - // no. since there have sv
00:43:468 (43468|0) - this can be at 3 // ok
00:58:605 (58605|3,58659|2,58714|3) - i'd rather you swap the notes (so it will be 3 4 3) // lulu said better 434 uwu
you know, if you snap them (01:26:276 (86276|3,86276|2,86358|0,86358|1,86439|2,86439|3,86521|1,86521|0,86603|2,86603|3,86685|0,86685|1,86767|2,86767|3,86849|1,86849|0,86911|2,86911|3) - ) to 1/4, it still sounds pretty ok tbh // this is 1/4s btw. But in 1/16s line. LOL. weird snapping. But i think this correct snap. and i already ask to cs about this snap. and he confirm it's correct. uwu

idk, the odd snapping throws me off. get more mods for that part. good luck 8-) 8-) 8-) // hahaha, rip the snapping
Thanks for mod Rave-kun :)
Kim_GodSSI
Former osu!mania 7K Champion: 2018
358 posts
Joined December 2012
Kim_GodSSI
Modding From:

Kim_GodSSI's Mania Modding Queue

Hello ! I think this song getting not much my modding :A
Modding
[Story]
  1. 00:05:547 (5547|2,5594|1,5641|2) - I think it's little bit weird can you change it ?
  2. 00:08:679 - Add a note it's loud
  3. 00:10:108 - Add a note 1 If you think that's hard just keep it
  4. 00:11:665 (11665|2) - I think it have to same 00:10:353 - this part
    00:12:976 (12976|1) - ^
  5. 00:11:829 - Why this section 2 notes? 00:10:517 - This section is 3 notes, that's same sound so it have to same notes
    00:13:140 - ^
  6. 00:14:780 - you think it is loud then 00:15:108 - This section ? is that same notes
  7. 00:18:058 (18058|3) - Delete and 00:17:403 (17403|0) - This LN End time move to 00:17:403 (17403|0) -
  8. 00:21:829 (21829|3,21870|2,21911|0,21952|1) - This pattern is weird when I played
    hmm I think 1/6 is better
    Like


    When you change it you have to change all used 1/8 part
  9. 00:53:632 -

    How about this pattern ?
  10. 00:55:271 (55271|1) - Move to 4 I think It's better
  11. 01:01:282 (61282|1) - Ghost note
  12. 01:01:337 - Add a note 2 it's loud
  13. 01:06:419 (66419|0) - Delete and 01:06:583 - Add a note 1
  14. 01:27:075 (87075|2,87075|0,87157|3,87157|1,87239|2,87239|0,87321|1,87321|3,87403|0,87403|2,87485|1,87485|3,87567|0) - Can you change this pattern It's badly good pattern..
  15. 01:28:550 (88550|1,88714|3) - It's not correct follow the piano sound
    01:28:550 (88550|1) - It's 1/8 start to 01:28:550 (88550|1) - this
    01:28:714 (88714|3) - It's 1/8 Start to 01:28:714 (88714|3) - this
  16. 01:28:878 (88878|0) - Ghost note

Good luck :D
Amiichii
719 posts
Joined November 2016
Topic Starter
Amiichii

Kim_GodSSI wrote:

Modding From:

Kim_GodSSI's Mania Modding Queue

Hello ! I think this song getting not much my modding :A
Modding
[Story]
  1. 00:05:547 (5547|2,5594|1,5641|2) - I think it's little bit weird can you change it ? // re-arrangedd
  2. 00:08:679 - Add a note it's loud // no thanks
  3. 00:10:108 - Add a note 1 If you think that's hard just keep it
  4. 00:11:665 (11665|2) - I think it have to same 00:10:353 - this part // i dont think so lol. so keep
    00:12:976 (12976|1) - ^
  5. 00:11:829 - Why this section 2 notes? 00:10:517 - This section is 3 notes, that's same sound so it have to same notes // since here 00:10:517 - have cymbal sound then here 00:11:829 - only have clap sound
    00:13:140 - ^
  6. 00:14:780 - you think it is loud then 00:15:108 - This section ? is that same notes // ^
  7. 00:18:058 (18058|3) - Delete and 00:17:403 (17403|0) - This LN End time move to 00:17:403 (17403|0) - // lol, wrong timing. But i think i know what do you mean. So keep since there have SV
  8. 00:21:829 (21829|3,21870|2,21911|0,21952|1) - This pattern is weird when I played
    hmm I think 1/6 is better // hem. Yea i think same with you. but, i just follow the sound snap. so keep for a while
    Like


    When you change it you have to change all used 1/8 part
  9. 00:53:632 -

    How about this pattern ? // oki
  10. 00:55:271 (55271|1) - Move to 4 I think It's better // ok
  11. 01:01:282 (61282|1) - Ghost note // keep. synth sound
  12. 01:01:337 - Add a note 2 it's loud
  13. 01:06:419 (66419|0) - Delete and 01:06:583 - Add a note 1 // no thanks
  14. 01:27:075 (87075|2,87075|0,87157|3,87157|1,87239|2,87239|0,87321|1,87321|3,87403|0,87403|2,87485|1,87485|3,87567|0) - Can you change this pattern It's badly good pattern.. // no idea orz
  15. 01:28:550 (88550|1,88714|3) - It's not correct follow the piano sound
    01:28:550 (88550|1) - It's 1/8 start to 01:28:550 (88550|1) - this
    01:28:714 (88714|3) - It's 1/8 Start to 01:28:714 (88714|3) - this // wrong timing lol. But fixed
  16. 01:28:878 (88878|0) - Ghost note // deleted

Good luck :D
Thanks for mod Kim God :D
dkingo
550 posts
Joined June 2016
dkingo
Hai a rough mod~

mod
[Story]
  1. 00:28:222 - Add a note for the cymbal
  2. 00:43:304 - Add a note
  3. 00:43:960 - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:401 - Add a note
Good luck :)
Litharrale
705 posts
Joined August 2013
Litharrale
nm from my queue
1|2|3|4
half your BGs aren't 16:9, none are HD

Story
00:04:122 (4122|2,4502|1,4882|1) - no where near strong enough to be triples
00:10:190 (10190|3) - This red tick doesn't serve a purpose other than to relocate the downbeat
00:10:845 (10845|1,10845|2) - There's literally no sound here except a very faint hi hat and you've got it doubled?
00:11:009 (11009|0,11009|2) - Why is this a double? it's so much weaker than the snare here 00:11:173 (11173|1,11173|0) -
The above two issues are extremely prevalent in this difficulty. So much so that I really don't want to mod it anymore because it's everywhere

no kds
AchsanLovers
987 posts
Joined April 2015
AchsanLovers
alo (lagi) bang adi ._.
mod request via PM

[General][list]
le dari segi pendapat sendiri, BG yg dikasih gak sesuai dgn lagunya, serius ._. ini lagu kesan nya kek ada tiap chara dari anime tsb dan ada angin yg nerbagin
bunga sakura atau semacamnya ._. menurut pendapat sendiri sih :3

no hitsound? atau saya yg masih blum re-dl ?

hmm, ini nama animunya apa ya? chara nya kawaii smua :v apa lagi BG yg di diff easy nya > <

Column : 1>4

[Leonitale's Easy][list]
anu mba, ga perlu kasih "tale" diakhir akhir nama diffnya, kalau emang iya, seharusnya diff lain juga gitu, kek "Normal Tale" "Hard Tale" saran ku mending hapus aja ._.

00:07:160 (7160|3) - move to col 1 aja kak, ini udah berat sebelah karena 00:04:882 (4882|1,5262|2,5641|3) -

00:19:370 - add note for crash?

00:29:862 - yg ini juga

00:46:911 (46911|1) - move to col 1 ?

00:55:763 (55763|0) - lah knp col 1 ? pitch nya kan blum berubah sama sekali dari yg sebelemnya, jadi pindahin ke col 2

[Normal]
01:01:009 (61009|0) - ini mulainya dari 01:00:845 - aja, toh bunyi ramenya mulai dari sana ._.

le ini map udah perfect sangat :3

diff hard nya ku skip saja, capek :3

[Story][list]
00:02:604 - disini mungkin letak SV 1.7 (153+183/2) tapi entahlah w kurang ilmu juga soal SV ._.

00:09:535 - 1.0x

00:19:370 - lah, knp fokus ke piano ? padahal kicknya lebih berasa dripada pitch pianonya

01:28:755 (88755|1,88755|0) - hapus salah satu mungkin?
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ok thats should be all, sorry for short mod, udah lama gk ngemod skill modding pun ilang ._. dan juga ini numpang wifi dirumah sepupu jdi mlz lama lama, segan juga sama org yg punya wifi ._.

good luck ~!
DustMoon
430 posts
Joined June 2016
DustMoon
Hi~Amiichii from CanPoint modding queue
1|2|3|4|
Story
00:02:509 (2509|1) - 00:05:547 (5547|0) - delete ,soft piano sound
00:14:288 - plz add single note to 1
00:21:829 (21829|3,21870|2,21911|0,21952|1) - change pattern to (4,3,2,1）
00:28:427 - add ,catch piano sound
00:55:681 (55681|1,55763|0,55763|2,55763|3) - ^
01:26:993 - add two notes
Hard
00:14:124 (14124|3,14288|0,14452|2,14452|3,14616|0,14780|1,14780|3,14944|2,14944|3,15108|0,15108|1,15271|3) - ^
00:24:452 (24452|2,24534|1,24616|2) - change pattern to (3,2,1)
00:45:435 (45435|3,45599|1,45599|2,45599|0) - 00:50:681 (50681|0,50845|3,50845|2,50845|1) - ENOUGH plz delete one note
01:00:189 - add
Good luck! :)
John Doe
181 posts
Joined March 2014
John Doe
From my modding queue

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 0/1/2/3, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (0 = most left key, 3 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

Story
00:03:743 - Missed a note here
00:04:122 - Wouldn't use tripples for that sound, would place doubles as you did later on
00:04:597 - ^^
00:04:882 - ^^
00:36:747 - I'd stick with doubles here and just use a tripple at 00:38:714 - for the finish
00:59:042 - Again double
00:59:698 - ^^

Wow, good map, couldn't find much. Good luck!
Leonita
488 posts
Joined December 2012
Leonita

AchsanLovers wrote:

alo (lagi) bang adi ._.
mod request via PM

[General]
le dari segi pendapat sendiri, BG yg dikasih gak sesuai dgn lagunya, serius ._. ini lagu kesan nya kek ada tiap chara dari anime tsb dan ada angin yg nerbagin
bunga sakura atau semacamnya ._. menurut pendapat sendiri sih :3

no hitsound? atau saya yg masih blum re-dl ?

hmm, ini nama animunya apa ya? chara nya kawaii smua :v apa lagi BG yg di diff easy nya > <
sesuai ama yg gd sih yaa -w-

Column : 1>4

[Leonitale's Easy]
anu mba, ga perlu kasih "tale" diakhir akhir nama diffnya, kalau emang iya, seharusnya diff lain juga gitu, kek "Normal Tale" "Hard Tale" saran ku mending hapus aja ._.
ini kan gd owo kalo normal tale hard tale berarti leoni's easy tale dumz wkwk. makanya ada 's jg kan itu bisa di custom

00:07:160 (7160|3) - move to col 1 aja kak, ini udah berat sebelah karena 00:04:882 (4882|1,5262|2,5641|3) -
pitch shay

00:19:370 - add note for crash?

00:29:862 - yg ini juga

00:46:911 (46911|1) - move to col 1 ?
rearrange

00:55:763 (55763|0) - lah knp col 1 ? pitch nya kan blum berubah sama sekali dari yg sebelemnya, jadi pindahin ke col 2
udh beda suara trek, lagian disitu ndak ikut pitch, tapi ikut kick owo
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ok thats should be all, sorry for short mod, udah lama gk ngemod skill modding pun ilang ._. dan juga ini numpang wifi dirumah sepupu jdi mlz lama lama, segan juga sama org yg punya wifi ._.

good luck ~!
thankssss

ka ami php
Moku_Hazushi
76 posts
Joined August 2015
Moku_Hazushi
(From my modding queue)

Hey there, sorry for the waiting but your map seems in a good way so i guess its not too late ahah.

So yeah not a short mod, not a long one either (i dont even know what i could say more in fact) so hopfully you will find some interesting material. Of course keep a critique eye and adjust things only when you 120% agree :p

Good luck for ranking owo)/

Legend is 0|1|2|3

Leonitale's Easy


00:14:944 (14944|0) - Would move it at (3) for the jack going well with the battery

00:29:370 (29370|3,29534|0) - Maybe CTRL+H these, so you have a left->right movement contrasting with the following right->left marking the transition

00:55:763 - What about a double here ?

Okay nothing much to say here except its a really enjoyable easy difficulty. I really appreciated the kiai time and the part just before with the jacks at 00:50:845. Yup really good work but dont forget to add the hitsounds later ;3

Normal


Ok maybe a double at 00:06:401 is too much for a normal but i think you can add a double at 00:07:160

00:19:534 - I think you should add a note here if you want to map the piano

01:00:189 (60189|3) - A bit early i think you should move it at 01:00:230
And 01:00:299 (60299|0) can be scale with the timing at 01:00:312

01:05:763 (65763|0) + 01:16:255 (76255|0) - Its a bit frustrating to have those LNs so short

01:13:140 (73140|3) - At (0) you had many note on the (3) column before


Clean difficulty overall, i didnt expect the piano mapping at 00:19:370 but it works so why not ahah. Same dont forget the hitsounding ;3

Hard


Please see the insane difficulty about the kiai SVs

00:20:517 - Why a double here ? its on a weak time and no battery justify it :x (ok the piano is doing a chord but you dont seems to map the piano here)
00:23:140 (23140|2,23140|3) + 00:25:763 (25763|0,25763|1) - Same remark, so okay maybe you tried to make a compromise between the core of the battery and the key parts of the piano, so what i would suggest is trying to add more piano parts to make it less akward by using Lns, for example at 00:19:862 ; 00:21:173 ; 00:22:485 ;00:23:796 etc
I tried with the first 3, honestly its not super-awsome but at least it gives the player an awareness for the next double. I dont know, you're the mapper so yeah do whatever you want xD

00:49:534 - I think you should make it a single here

01:00:244 (60244|2,60244|3,60299|1,60299|0) - Same thing than the normal diff, i think the correct timing is
01:00:244 (60244|3,60244|2) - At 01:00:230
01:00:299 (60299|0,60299|1) - At 01:00:312

01:24:288 (84288|1,84288|2,84452|0,84452|3) - Too bad, i think we would like a connecting jack between those 2 double like you did during the whole kiai so mayeb 01:24:288 (84288|1) at (0)

01:25:599 (85599|2,85599|0,85763|1,85763|3) - Same


Again very clean difficulty, nice overall difficulty and the mapping alterns well with slow and more rythmic parts, nice :3 (missing the hitsounds anyway)

Story


About the SVs

The first ones at 00:18:058 and 00:28:550 are not good, the following notes stay way too long close to the hitbar, here what i suggest for the timing section :
[TimingPoints]
2604,379.746835443038,4,2,1,30,1,0
9535,327.868852459016,4,2,1,30,1,0
10190,327.868852459016,4,2,1,30,1,0
18058,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
19042,-500,4,2,1,30,0,0
19370,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
28550,-50,4,2,1,30,0,0
29206,-400,4,2,1,30,0,0
29370,-76.9230769230769,4,2,1,30,0,0

The next ones at 00:39:042 are good nothing to say, it was a good surprise

The one during the kiai time are really disturbing in my opinion, the music does not really suggest it and there are so short its just messing up the accuracy of the player, you should remove them i think.

00:19:370 - Would add a finish here since the battery does one

00:21:665 (21665|1) - Forgot a whistle here ? :3
00:21:993 (21993|3) - and here too

00:22:157 (22157|3) - Maybe at (2) just for that small jack on 2nd column that i think could emphasize the battery, but its already fine like you did, its up to you

00:24:780 (24780|0) - At (1) for the same reason

00:36:501 - Maybe a note at (2) like with 00:34:944 (34944|1,35026|3,35108|1) with have the piano going well with those 3 so why not doing the same here

00:43:304 - Maybe a note at (3) here for the battery

01:06:091 (66091|0,66255|3,66419|0,76583|0,76747|3,76911|0) - Ok i was thinking about removing those LNs (and therefore add one or two note at the empty spaces) just to contrast with that huge LN pattern you are using for the kiai and mark the transition, what do you think ?

Really nice difficulty, i had fun playing it, the hitsounding is great and the SVs where a good surprise (but i still think you should adjust them, and except those during the kiai xD) so yeah good luck for ranking it, it has the potential owo)b
[MTF] Wolfette
[MTF] Wolfette
General:

Easy/Normal diff contains too many speed changes.
OD rate for maps with few sliders is suggested to be at least 7.
This mapset needs at least 1 Easy/Normal diff.
The difficulty spread from easy to normal feels weird

Easy:

I'm pretty sure you can't have notes during LN's on EZ diffs

00:15:108 (15108|2,15435|1,15763|3,16091|2,16255|1,16419|0,16747|1,17075|2,17403|3,17567|2,17730|1) - This is a bit too overmapped for easy
00:51:501 (51501|0,51829|0,52157|3,52485|3,52812|1,53140|1,53468|3,53796|3,54124|0,54452|0) - jacks aren't allowed in EZ diffs ( I know this from modding on one of my maps)

Hard:

Double taps should only be used when beats of a song are louder than others, putting them in just anywhere feels a bit weird to play (unless it's a vibro map).
00:02:604 (2604|3) - Remove
00:09:534 (9534|3,9616|2,9698|0,9780|1,9862|3,9944|2,10026|0,10108|1) - I think a stair pattern would be better than jumptrills
00:14:780 (14780|3,14944|3) - Make this an LN
00:14:780 (14780|1) - Remove
This hold note is less than 10ms long! 01:11:173
This hold note is less than 10ms long! 01:11:337

Story:

00:18:058 - 00:19:370 - put LN here
00:39:370 - put note here
genkicho
449 posts
Joined May 2013
genkicho
NM From My Mod Que


Col 1 2 3 4

Story
i think map already good,,, my mod will be crappy

00:36:419 why suddenly no LN
00:55:927 (55927|1,56009|2) - i think you dont need this, no beat :/
01:26:911 (86911|3,86911|2,87075|0,87075|1) - missing note between these 2 doubles

Hard
01:00:681 (60681|0,60681|2,60763|1,60845|2,60927|3,61009|0,61091|1,61173|2,61255|3) - here you use 1/4, but in Story diff 01:00:955 (60955|1) - you use 1/12,,, something wrong?

thats all.. idk this is why i dont like modding vocal, cuz the song repetitive and hard to make unique patterns
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