Shiirn wrote:

general
your bg quality sucks, some people will play without video, try to get a better one? (ah well)ill look

finish hitsounds on last notes? nah
easy
00:45:734 (1) - nix break ok
normal
ok

lepidon
no mistakes as usual

hyper
ok

another
01:31:068 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Since you used a basic pentagon pattern the rest of the map, suddenly changing to a star pattern is confusing. Switch around some of the other patterns? i' used star patterns earlier in the map (00:37:734 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -

1. I didn't notice anything different from the custom slidertick sound, is there any point in it? (and the custom soft section at 01:54:986) o_o Maybe I'm just deaf. Also you don't need it in Hyper.

1. Maybe raise the hitsound volume just a little? It was hearable but a little too quiet for my taste. Just a suggestion.
2. 00:03:734 (6) - Maybe remove the finishes? Just a suggestion.
3. 00:06:734 (3) - Add a whistle?
4. 00:09:068 (6) - Maybe remove the finishes? Just a suggestion.
5. 00:12:068 (3) - Add a whistle?
6. 00:12:401 (4) - Maybe swap to soft finish for this note? That finish is more fitting imo.
7. 00:25:068 (3) - Remove finish from the start. (actually consider removing all the finishes on these 3rd white ticks and some big white ticks, sounds good without them and nothing in the music which would follow them explicitly, with 00:29:068 (3) and 00:29:734 (1) being an exception)
8. 00:34:734 (3) - Add a whistle?
9. 00:37:068 (5) - Maybe remove the finishes? Just a suggestion.
10. 00:40:068 (3) - Add a whistle?
11. 00:42:401 (5,6) - Maybe remove the finishes? Just a suggestion.
12. 00:45:401 (3) - Add a whistle?
13. 00:45:735 (4) - Swap to soft finish for this note?
14. 01:09:735 (9) - ^
15. 01:22:734 (4) - Add a whistle?
16. 01:35:734 (6) - Maybe remove the finishes? Just a suggestion.
17. 01:38:734 (3) - Add a whistle?
18. 01:41:068 (6,7) - 01:35:734 (6) - Maybe remove the finishes? Just a suggestion.
19. 01:43:068 (2) - Finish at the start.
20. 01:49:401 (3) - Add a whistle?

1. Just so I don't write all this again, hitsounds suggestions remain the same just like I wrote for Another (as well as the change to soft finishes obviously). Up to you if you change anything.
2. 00:53:401 (4) - Spacing is a little bigger without no real reason. Look here, using 1x distance snap and it doesn't look awkward at all. Just probably needs small repositioning of the next combo which shouldn't be too hard.
3. 01:03:735 (3,4,5,6) - If this is on purpose, I guess it's fine (it actually follows the music nicely haha), but just check out the spacing to be sure.
4. 01:09:068 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
5. 01:40:568 (4) - Spacing. It's too close to (3) which isn't a big deal at all, but why not correct it since you don't have such spaced notes anywhere else? (even another has ~1.2x spacing on that note before and after) Look here.

1. Also, same hitsound suggestions like in hyper and another.
2. 00:06:734 - Add a note perhaps? (might make a slider out of the previous and this note then) Also put a finish on it.
3. 00:12:068 - ^
4. 00:29:068 - Add a note? (Same thing about the slider, just with the next note instead of previous) Also a finish on it.
5. 00:40:068 - Add a note? (first slider case a couple of lines above)
6. 00:49:068 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe reposition this pattern to make a more pretty diamond? 1,2,3 by 1 grid left, 4 by 1 grid right.
7. 01:12:401 (1) - Remove whistle from the slider itself and add it to the start instead?
8. 01:13:734 (3) - ^
9. 01:17:735 (1) - ^
10. 01:19:068 (3) - Whistle? (at the start, unless you wanna go with your stuff like above)
11. 01:36:401 (1,2) - These 2 slightly look awkward. Maybe fix (2) so it's symmetrical to (1)? (should be about 6-7 grids to the left and 1 grid up, also try to fix spacing of the next note(s) if you do this)
12. 01:44:401 (1,2,3,4) - To make a more pretty diamond move 2 by 1 grid left and 1 grid up, and move 4 by 1 grid left, 1 grid down.
13. 01:49:734 (1,2,3,4) - Just like the above, make it more pretty if you can. To avoid more spacing nazi, move the (3) in the previous combo more to the left as well.

1. Same thing about hitsounds~.
2. 01:01:401 (1) - Maybe to follow the music better (since the spacing is the same), remove this new combo and add it to (2) instead?
3. Just like I suggested in normal for 01:12:401 (1), 01:13:734 (2), 01:17:735 (1), 01:19:068 (2), and similar about the hitsounds. Up to you if you change.
4. 01:52:401 (1) - Finish at the start (and maybe remove finish from the end, up to you).
5. 01:53:401 (2) - ^

lolcubes wrote:

Hey there! Green is some nazi which you may ignore completely if you wish.

[General]:

1. I didn't notice anything different from the custom slidertick sound, is there any point in it? (and the custom soft section at 01:54:986) o_o Maybe I'm just deaf. Also you don't need it in Hyper.

[Another]:

1. Maybe raise the hitsound volume just a little? It was hearable but a little too quiet for my taste. Just a suggestion.
2. 00:03:734 (6) - Maybe remove the finishes? Just a suggestion.
3. 00:06:734 (3) - Add a whistle?
4. 00:09:068 (6) - Maybe remove the finishes? Just a suggestion.
5. 00:12:068 (3) - Add a whistle?
6. 00:12:401 (4) - Maybe swap to soft finish for this note? That finish is more fitting imo.
7. 00:25:068 (3) - Remove finish from the start. (actually consider removing all the finishes on these 3rd white ticks and some big white ticks, sounds good without them and nothing in the music which would follow them explicitly, with 00:29:068 (3) and 00:29:734 (1) being an exception)
8. 00:34:734 (3) - Add a whistle?
9. 00:37:068 (5) - Maybe remove the finishes? Just a suggestion.
10. 00:40:068 (3) - Add a whistle?
11. 00:42:401 (5,6) - Maybe remove the finishes? Just a suggestion.
12. 00:45:401 (3) - Add a whistle?
13. 00:45:735 (4) - Swap to soft finish for this note?
14. 01:09:735 (9) - ^
15. 01:22:734 (4) - Add a whistle?
16. 01:35:734 (6) - Maybe remove the finishes? Just a suggestion.
17. 01:38:734 (3) - Add a whistle?
18. 01:41:068 (6,7) - 01:35:734 (6) - Maybe remove the finishes? Just a suggestion.
19. 01:43:068 (2) - Finish at the start.
20. 01:49:401 (3) - Add a whistle?

[Hyper]:

1. Just so I don't write all this again, hitsounds suggestions remain the same just like I wrote for Another (as well as the change to soft finishes obviously). Up to you if you change anything.
2. 00:53:401 (4) - Spacing is a little bigger without no real reason. Look here, using 1x distance snap and it doesn't look awkward at all. Just probably needs small repositioning of the next combo which shouldn't be too hard.
3. 01:03:735 (3,4,5,6) - If this is on purpose, I guess it's fine (it actually follows the music nicely haha), but just check out the spacing to be sure.
4. 01:09:068 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
5. 01:40:568 (4) - Spacing. It's too close to (3) which isn't a big deal at all, but why not correct it since you don't have such spaced notes anywhere else? (even another has ~1.2x spacing on that note before and after) Look here.

[Normal]:

1. Also, same hitsound suggestions like in hyper and another.
2. 00:06:734 - Add a note perhaps? (might make a slider out of the previous and this note then) Also put a finish on it.
3. 00:12:068 - ^
4. 00:29:068 - Add a note? (Same thing about the slider, just with the next note instead of previous) Also a finish on it.
5. 00:40:068 - Add a note? (first slider case a couple of lines above)
6. 00:49:068 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe reposition this pattern to make a more pretty diamond? 1,2,3 by 1 grid left, 4 by 1 grid right.
7. 01:12:401 (1) - Remove whistle from the slider itself and add it to the start instead?
8. 01:13:734 (3) - ^
9. 01:17:735 (1) - ^
10. 01:19:068 (3) - Whistle? (at the start, unless you wanna go with your stuff like above)
11. 01:36:401 (1,2) - These 2 slightly look awkward. Maybe fix (2) so it's symmetrical to (1)? (should be about 6-7 grids to the left and 1 grid up, also try to fix spacing of the next note(s) if you do this)
12. 01:44:401 (1,2,3,4) - To make a more pretty diamond move 2 by 1 grid left and 1 grid up, and move 4 by 1 grid left, 1 grid down.
13. 01:49:734 (1,2,3,4) - Just like the above, make it more pretty if you can. To avoid more spacing nazi, move the (3) in the previous combo more to the left as well.

[Easy]:

1. Same thing about hitsounds~.
2. 01:01:401 (1) - Maybe to follow the music better (since the spacing is the same), remove this new combo and add it to (2) instead?
3. Just like I suggested in normal for 01:12:401 (1), 01:13:734 (2), 01:17:735 (1), 01:19:068 (2), and similar about the hitsounds. Up to you if you change.
4. 01:52:401 (1) - Finish at the start (and maybe remove finish from the end, up to you).
5. 01:53:401 (2) - ^

That's about it. Good map, very little errors (most of these are just suggestions).
Good luck!~

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Pretty much kept the hitsounds the same, cept for 2 that I forgot to add finish. Delete soft-sliderslide, was a mistake drag

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
I remember if you have sliderb#.png skinned, you should also have a sliderfollow circle. Not sure though. not sure either, ill check
I don't know if your sliderwhistles are used on purpose, if not maybe mute them plz. on purpose

[Beginner]
I'd say it looks no big difference with Normal... if possible i hope you could cut those 1/2 notes. Also i don't think using 0.5x is a good idea. no, dont wanna cut the 1/2 or this shit becomes boring. I wanted to keep this similar melody throughout each diff since its popular among IIDX people. I don't think the 0.5 is that bad.
00:02:401 (2) - still keeps whistle at the beginning would be better, since you're still following this beat.
00:07:734 (2) - ^
00:35:734 (2) - ^ no to all, cause I don't do this on any of the diffs
00:53:068 (8) - make this a 1/1 slider? (volume 40% for the end) no
00:58:401 (5) - finish? no, no finish on any of the other diffs either
01:34:401 (2) - whistle at the beginning
01:39:734 (2) - ^ no to both again

[Normal]
00:29:734 (1,2,3) - i'll suggest make 1 a 1/1 slider, and add a note at 00:30:734 (2's end), this will make the notes in a more clear group, also 00:32:068 (1,2) is a circle-slider so why not just start it from here. nah D:
The diff is similar to easy but have a small gap with Hyper... uhh ok

[Hyper]
00:28:568 - add a note? noty :3
01:12:401 (1) - ...at first i thought this could be a 1/3 part.... uhh what
01:44:068 (3,1) - a little too far? don't think its too far

[Another]
00:12:068 (3,4) - make this a slider? noty
00:29:568 & 00:29:651 - add notes? noty
01:03:735 (5,7) - whistle? noty
01:09:068 (5,7) - ^noty