Hi~

Normal
00:33:606 (1) - Add finish
00:59:106 (4) - Make this slider point down and center it
01:18:606 (1) - Add finish and the following notes expect for yellow combo (1)
01:35:481 (6) - New combo
01:39:606 (1) - Add finish
02:24:606 (1) - Same like 01:18:606
02:42:606 (X) - Too soft pump UP the volume

Hard
00:06:606 (1) - Remove new combo
01:12:418 (1,3) - They look ugly when overlapping
02:01:356 (2) - Looks too close to (1)

Insane
I-I have no idea how to mod thix. Jumps are fun though.
___________________________________________________--
Star~

Hi. From My modding queue.


[Normal]
02:48:606 (1) - move to 02:48:418 and increase slide note to 02:49:356
03:09:606 - 03:15:418 - note and beat are strange when I look them...
Consider them.
03:18:606 (1) - move to 03:18:418. Remember not only note but also timing bar(Green bar)


[Hard]
02:03:606 (1) - move to 02:03:418. Length is your choice.
02:45:606 (1) - move to 02:45:418. then, you need to change note..t_t


[Insane]

Ahh....max score is little high....
(16,453,554...)

You will want to rank this map, max score is under at least 15 million(15,000,000) -> (My experience)


ehhh.....First decrease max score at least under 15 mil...

Pettern is great.


Good Beatmap!

>merchat7,DragonSparta,Tanmak
thanks mod! fixed,but sometimes no sorry

>merchat7,DragonSparta
thanks KDstar!!

( ノﾟДﾟ)こんにちわ

全て提案です

[General]

●Tags: psp を追加（このショートverについていたので）

[Normal]

●HP+1
●00:37:356 (7) - circle 削除。00:37:543 (1) - このスピナーの開始を00:37:356にする　終わりは00:39:231
●00:57:418 (1) - きれいな形に・・・　

●01:08:856 (6) - 短いです

●01:17:856 (5) - ctrl+Jで向きを変えて　配置してみてください
●02:55:731 (3) - 前の(2)と対称に

[Hard]

●00:08:106 (5) - new combo add
●00:57:231 (8) - 前の(6,7)と対称に
●01:45:606~01:45:699 - KIAIがついてますが　消しますか？
●03:13:356~03:13:543 - slider add

[Insane]

●00:30:606 (6) - new combo add
●00:41:293 (5) - ^
●00:45:793 (4) - ^
●00:59:106 (1) - 始点を00:58:356 (6)に重ねる
●01:14:106 (6) - new combo add
●01:47:106 (7) - ^
●01:53:293 (7) - ^
●02:27:231 (1,2) - 02:26:106 (4) - のまっすぐ上に配置(横にいくつか(4)の真上にくるように移動）
●02:44:293 (7) - new combo add
●03:12:043 (4,5) - 前の(3)の始点に置いた方がいいです


いい譜面でいい曲でした

-Gamu- wrote:

( ノﾟДﾟ)こんにちわ

全て提案です

[General]

●Tags: psp を追加（このショートverについていたので）

[Normal]

●HP+1
●00:37:356 (7) - circle 削除。00:37:543 (1) - このスピナーの開始を00:37:356にする　終わりは00:39:231
●00:57:418 (1) - きれいな形に・・・　

●01:08:856 (6) - 短いです

●01:17:856 (5) - ctrl+Jで向きを変えて　配置してみてください
●02:55:731 (3) - 前の(2)と対称に

[Hard]

●00:08:106 (5) - new combo add
●00:57:231 (8) - 前の(6,7)と対称に
●01:45:606~01:45:699 - KIAIがついてますが　消しますか？
●03:13:356~03:13:543 - slider add

[Insane]

●00:30:606 (6) - new combo add
●00:41:293 (5) - ^
●00:45:793 (4) - ^
●00:59:106 (1) - 始点を00:58:356 (6)に重ねる
●01:14:106 (6) - new combo add
●01:47:106 (7) - ^
●01:53:293 (7) - ^
●02:27:231 (1,2) - 02:26:106 (4) - のまっすぐ上に配置(横にいくつか(4)の真上にくるように移動）
●02:44:293 (7) - new combo add
●03:12:043 (4,5) - 前の(3)の始点に置いた方がいいです


いい譜面でいい曲でした

mod ありがとう！
fixed!
modを参考に他も少し改良しました。

申し訳ない><;今更ですが

↓my mod↓

[General]
ボリュームが100%メインになっているので70か80%メインくらいがいいかと思います。

[Normal]
00:57:231(4,1) - サークル追加＆00:57:418スライダーを00:57:606始まりに(01:11:106(4,5,1)と同じリズムの方がやりやすい気がします）

[Hard]
01:12:418(1,2,3) - 2のサークルを消して、1スライダーを終点01:13:731に変更。01;13;356(3)スライダーを終点01:13:731に。01:13:918にサークル追加
00:39:606 - KIAI TIME 削除
01:21:606(2) - 左右対称x:88,y:192に
02:27:606(2) - ^ x:424,y:192
03:05:106(1) - 前との距離が近いような気がします
03:09:606(2) - 左右対称x:88,y:192に

[Insane]
00:15:043(2) - サークル削除？
00:33:606(1,2) - 3,4が左右対称なのでここも直したほうがいいかも？ http://puu.sh/603A　 こういうのはどうでしょうか？

01:48:606(1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1:49:356(1,2,3,4,5,6)と対称に。1:49:356(1,2,3,4,5,6)のほうをコピーしてCtrl+H,J
02:00:606 - KIAI TIME ここから始め？
03:22:918(2) - 左右対称にx:432,y:64

気になったところだけ直してみてください～

ではがんばー

kosiga wrote:

申し訳ない><;今更ですが

↓my mod↓

[General]
ボリュームが100%メインになっているので70か80%メインくらいがいいかと思います。

[Normal]
00:57:231(4,1) - サークル追加＆00:57:418スライダーを00:57:606始まりに(01:11:106(4,5,1)と同じリズムの方がやりやすい気がします）

[Hard]
01:12:418(1,2,3) - 2のサークルを消して、1スライダーを終点01:13:731に変更。01;13;356(3)スライダーを終点01:13:731に。01:13:918にサークル追加
00:39:606 - KIAI TIME 削除
01:21:606(2) - 左右対称x:88,y:192に
02:27:606(2) - ^ x:424,y:192
03:05:106(1) - 前との距離が近いような気がします
03:09:606(2) - 左右対称x:88,y:192に

[Insane]
00:15:043(2) - サークル削除？
00:33:606(1,2) - 3,4が左右対称なのでここも直したほうがいいかも？ http://puu.sh/603A　 こういうのはどうでしょうか？

01:48:606(1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1:49:356(1,2,3,4,5,6)と対称に。1:49:356(1,2,3,4,5,6)のほうをコピーしてCtrl+H,J
02:00:606 - KIAI TIME ここから始め？
03:22:918(2) - 左右対称にx:432,y:64

気になったところだけ直してみてください～

ではがんばー

fixed!
modありがとう！いくつか採用しました

request via modding queue, let's start
[Normal]
you must have diff below or equal 3 star rating, make this diff easier. some suggestions :
00:49:356 (5) - this note doesn't follow anything, delete it
00:56:106 (4) - a little long slider, shorten until 00:56:481 and add note at 00:56:856
00:57:418 (1) - slider seems late, move to 00:57:231, lenghten until 00:57:981
01:06:606 (1,2,3,4) - make these 1 repeating slider
01:09:606 (3) - change finish at the end of slider to whistle, doesn't fit the music
01:41:106 (3) - NC
01:55:356 (2) - this note doesn't follow anything
02:03:231 (6) - make to 1 circle
02:06:231 (6) - ^
02:11:106 (3,4,5,6) - make these 1 repeating slider
02:51:418 (1) - delete, add note 2 ticks ahead
02:52:168 (2) - ^
02:56:856 (5) - delete note
02:57:043 (6) - move to 02:56:856, add 1 repeat
03:02:106 (3,4) - same suggestion as 5&6 above
03:07:262 (2) - delete, add note 2 ticks ahead
03:07:918 (3) - delete note
03:16:918 (4) - stack to end of slider 3

[Hard]
00:33:325 (3) - move 2 grid upper
00:37:356 (1) - spinner seems too fast, change it to slider?
01:12:418 (1) - a little long slider , shorten 1 tick back
01:43:356 (1) - same suggetion as 00:37:356
02:03:418 (1) - better remove whistle at the end of slider and add it at start of slider (2)
02:15:981 (X) - add a note
02:56:106 (4) - a little long slider , shorten 1 tick back

[Insane]
00:04:356 (5) - better add whistle at start of slider
01:01:731 (7) - ^
01:52:356 (5) - add finish at start of slider

that's all

shikyu wrote:

request via modding queue, let's start
[Normal]
you must have diff below or equal 3 star rating, make this diff easier. some suggestions :
00:49:356 (5) - this note doesn't follow anything, delete it
00:56:106 (4) - a little long slider, shorten until 00:56:481 and add note at 00:56:856
00:57:418 (1) - slider seems late, move to 00:57:231, lenghten until 00:57:981
01:06:606 (1,2,3,4) - make these 1 repeating slider
01:09:606 (3) - change finish at the end of slider to whistle, doesn't fit the music
01:41:106 (3) - NC
01:55:356 (2) - this note doesn't follow anything
02:03:231 (6) - make to 1 circle
02:06:231 (6) - ^
02:11:106 (3,4,5,6) - make these 1 repeating slider
02:51:418 (1) - delete, add note 2 ticks ahead
02:52:168 (2) - ^
02:56:856 (5) - delete note
02:57:043 (6) - move to 02:56:856, add 1 repeat
03:02:106 (3,4) - same suggestion as 5&6 above
03:07:262 (2) - delete, add note 2 ticks ahead
03:07:918 (3) - delete note
03:16:918 (4) - stack to end of slider 3

[Hard]
00:33:325 (3) - move 2 grid upper
00:37:356 (1) - spinner seems too fast, change it to slider?
01:12:418 (1) - a little long slider , shorten 1 tick back
01:43:356 (1) - same suggetion as 00:37:356
02:03:418 (1) - better remove whistle at the end of slider and add it at start of slider (2)
02:15:981 (X) - add a note
02:56:106 (4) - a little long slider , shorten 1 tick back

[Insane]
00:04:356 (5) - better add whistle at start of slider
01:01:731 (7) - ^
01:52:356 (5) - add finish at start of slider

that's all

thanks mod!
fixed ,but sometimes no sorry

Here's my mod!:D

[General]

1. You really need to practise with the patterns and with the slider,since this map has got many bad sliders/patterns. For the sliders you should visit this page:http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

[Normal]

1. 00:28:356 (3) - Move the final waypoint 2 grids left to make the shape of the slider better
2. 00:52:356 (1,2,3) - Try to move them like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Also,if you are doing this,make the slider 3 like the slider 1 (select the slider 1 and press CTRL+C,then paste it using CTRL+V where is the slider 3,and go to edit->flip horizontally to do that)
3. 01:09:981 (1) - Spacing (when you have fixed that,remember to fix the spacing of the other notes as well!
4. 01:21:231 (1) - You should remove the new combo here
5. 01:33:231 (4) - 2 grids left and 2 grids down to make the pattern look better
6. 02:06:606 - You should add a note here
7. 02:27:231 (1) - You should remove the new combo here
8. 02:46:731 (2) - Spacing
9. 02:48:606 (1) - Move the final waypoint 1 grid up to make the shape of the slider better
10. 02:50:106 (2) - ^
11. 03:07:168 (2) - Make this slider curvy as the slider 03:07:918 (3) -

[Hard]

1. 00:05:106 (5) - Move the waypoint of the slider 1 grid right
2. 00:14:856 (1) - Move the first waypoint 2 grids right
3. 00:55:356 (2,3) - Try to move them 1 grid up
4. 01:18:606 (1) - Move the third waypoint 1 grid right
5. 02:04:356 (3) - Spacing
6. 02:05:668 (7) - C'mon,this shape it's pretty horrible D: Try to change it
7. 02:15:981 (2) - 1 grid up
8. 02:17:481 (6) - 3 grids up and 1 grid down
9. 02:24:606 (1) - Move the third waypoint 1 grid left
10. 03:06:606 (1) - Move the third waypoint 1 grid right

[Insane]

1. You should check the spacing of all the streams,since there are incorrect spacings
2. 00:38:856 (4,5,6) - Try to do something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:418 (7) - Put this where the note 5 was
4. 01:12:418 (1) - Please,make this shape better D:
5. 02:05:481 (3,4,5) - Try to make them like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:13:731 (7) - Make this slider shorter by 1/4
7. 02:39:981 - The break here is not needed,remove it
8. 03:03:606 (2) - Move this 6 grids right and 2 up

You really should rearrange the patterns and make the sliders better.

-kevincela- wrote:

Here's my mod!:D

[General]

1. You really need to practise with the patterns and with the slider,since this map has got many bad sliders/patterns. For the sliders you should visit this page:http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

[Normal]

1. 00:28:356 (3) - Move the final waypoint 2 grids left to make the shape of the slider better
2. 00:52:356 (1,2,3) - Try to move them like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Also,if you are doing this,make the slider 3 like the slider 1 (select the slider 1 and press CTRL+C,then paste it using CTRL+V where is the slider 3,and go to edit->flip horizontally to do that)
3. 01:09:981 (1) - Spacing (when you have fixed that,remember to fix the spacing of the other notes as well!
4. 01:21:231 (1) - You should remove the new combo here
5. 01:33:231 (4) - 2 grids left and 2 grids down to make the pattern look better
6. 02:06:606 - You should add a note here
7. 02:27:231 (1) - You should remove the new combo here
8. 02:46:731 (2) - Spacing
9. 02:48:606 (1) - Move the final waypoint 1 grid up to make the shape of the slider better
10. 02:50:106 (2) - ^
11. 03:07:168 (2) - Make this slider curvy as the slider 03:07:918 (3) -

[Hard]

1. 00:05:106 (5) - Move the waypoint of the slider 1 grid right
2. 00:14:856 (1) - Move the first waypoint 2 grids right
3. 00:55:356 (2,3) - Try to move them 1 grid up
4. 01:18:606 (1) - Move the third waypoint 1 grid right
5. 02:04:356 (3) - Spacing
6. 02:05:668 (7) - C'mon,this shape it's pretty horrible D: Try to change it
7. 02:15:981 (2) - 1 grid up
8. 02:17:481 (6) - 3 grids up and 1 grid down
9. 02:24:606 (1) - Move the third waypoint 1 grid left
10. 03:06:606 (1) - Move the third waypoint 1 grid right

[Insane]

1. You should check the spacing of all the streams,since there are incorrect spacings
2. 00:38:856 (4,5,6) - Try to do something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:418 (7) - Put this where the note 5 was
4. 01:12:418 (1) - Please,make this shape better D:
5. 02:05:481 (3,4,5) - Try to make them like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:13:731 (7) - Make this slider shorter by 1/4
7. 02:39:981 - The break here is not needed,remove it
8. 03:03:606 (2) - Move this 6 grids right and 2 up

You really should rearrange the patterns and make the sliders better.

thanks mod!
fixed

Konnichiwa!!! Sorry for long delay

General
* Please note that using white combo color are not allowed, because it will hurt someone's eyes during kiai. I suggest you to change it

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Normal
* Make sure all slider has not 2 or more repeating slider (Example : 00:42:606 (1)). If you keep this, newbies will tough to tell when the slider is end. You should fix this by removing 1 or more repeating slider, and make a nice pattern

* Spinner should be longer in Easy/Normal diff. This makes some newbies have a time to spin until the spinner gauge is full. Short spinner (Example : 02:52:918 (1)) should be avoided. You need to make it longer, like 00:37:356 (1)

00:28:356 (3,4) - Make (3) slider is symetric and put (4) on center of slider to make a blanket combo (Just ignore this if you can't fix this due to spacing)
00:47:106 (4,1) - Fill the objects between this object. Like the object between 00:42:231 (6) and 00:45:606 (1)
01:06:606 (1) - Make sure this curve is perfect, like 00:53:106 (2)
01:07:356 (2) - ^
01:41:106 (1) - Remove new combo for following stanza, like 01:32:106 (1)
01:42:606 (3) - New combo for following stanza
01:47:856 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:51:606 (1,1) - Fill the objects between this notes?
01:59:106 (1) - You don't need more spinner, you have a spinner in previous spinner, so this is seems useless for me. Try to remove this spinner and make a good pattern?
02:06:606 (7) - New combo for following stanza
02:06:981 (1) - Remove new combo for following stanza

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Hard
* Use AR 7. If the Approach Rate speed and Slider Velocity speed is different, It'll be break the flow.

00:41:106 (1) - Ummm, remove new combo? For following stanza, like 00:42:606 (1). But, I'm not sure because it has a different pattern. But, it's your choice to remove it or not
01:03:606 (3) - Move the tail slider to previous red tick for following vocal?
01:04:356 (3) - ^
01:12:418 (1) - Repeating slider snap in blue ticks is kinda makes no sense for me. Snap the repeating slider to long white tick (downbeat), and add the note at 01:12:981
01:15:606 (3) - Same issue as 01:03:606 (3)
02:11:106 (4) - New combo for changing pattern
02:11:856 (1) - Remove new combo

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Insane
00:51:981 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
00:57:418 (6) - The spacing is too short. Because the distance is not same as 00:57:231 (4,5) (Nazi)
02:16:543 (6) - New combo for following stanza, like 02:12:606 (1)
02:20:106 (6) - ^
03:12:231 (5) - Not stack perfectly with previous slider, or it'll be having a weird stack during gameplay

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Also, sorry for long mod

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa!!! Sorry for long delay

General
* Please note that using white combo color are not allowed, because it will hurt someone's eyes during kiai. I suggest you to change it

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Normal
* Make sure all slider has not 2 or more repeating slider (Example : 00:42:606 (1)). If you keep this, newbies will tough to tell when the slider is end. You should fix this by removing 1 or more repeating slider, and make a nice pattern

* Spinner should be longer in Easy/Normal diff. This makes some newbies have a time to spin until the spinner gauge is full. Short spinner (Example : 02:52:918 (1)) should be avoided. You need to make it longer, like 00:37:356 (1)

00:28:356 (3,4) - Make (3) slider is symetric and put (4) on center of slider to make a blanket combo (Just ignore this if you can't fix this due to spacing)
00:47:106 (4,1) - Fill the objects between this object. Like the object between 00:42:231 (6) and 00:45:606 (1)
01:06:606 (1) - Make sure this curve is perfect, like 00:53:106 (2)
01:07:356 (2) - ^
01:41:106 (1) - Remove new combo for following stanza, like 01:32:106 (1)
01:42:606 (3) - New combo for following stanza
01:47:856 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:51:606 (1,1) - Fill the objects between this notes?
01:59:106 (1) - You don't need more spinner, you have a spinner in previous spinner, so this is seems useless for me. Try to remove this spinner and make a good pattern?
02:06:606 (7) - New combo for following stanza
02:06:981 (1) - Remove new combo for following stanza

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Hard
* Use AR 7. If the Approach Rate speed and Slider Velocity speed is different, It'll be break the flow.

00:41:106 (1) - Ummm, remove new combo? For following stanza, like 00:42:606 (1). But, I'm not sure because it has a different pattern. But, it's your choice to remove it or not
01:03:606 (3) - Move the tail slider to previous red tick for following vocal?
01:04:356 (3) - ^
01:12:418 (1) - Repeating slider snap in blue ticks is kinda makes no sense for me. Snap the repeating slider to long white tick (downbeat), and add the note at 01:12:981
01:15:606 (3) - Same issue as 01:03:606 (3)
02:11:106 (4) - New combo for changing pattern
02:11:856 (1) - Remove new combo

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Insane
00:51:981 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
00:57:418 (6) - The spacing is too short. Because the distance is not same as 00:57:231 (4,5) (Nazi)
02:16:543 (6) - New combo for following stanza, like 02:12:606 (1)
02:20:106 (6) - ^
03:12:231 (5) - Not stack perfectly with previous slider, or it'll be having a weird stack during gameplay

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Also, sorry for long mod

thx mod
fixed

Insane:
00:53:106 (1) - The endpoint is overlapping with the slider, causing a glitch. Please make it end at another tick, behind the slider.

Edit: sorry if I don't know the proper way to put it D: I don't really know the terminology D:

DivineRage wrote:

Insane:
00:53:106 (1) - The endpoint is overlapping with the slider, causing a glitch. Please make it end at another tick, behind the slider.

Edit: sorry if I don't know the proper way to put it D: I don't really know the terminology D:

thanks advice!!
i over looked the mistake.

fixed

Request from Queue

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

Aoi's Mod (๑•́ ₃ •̀๑)

Insane

1. 00:03:606 (1) - use finish instead of whistle
2. 00:09:606 (1) - finish
3. 00:11:106 (5) - make it more shapely.here's my code
   

   224,288,11106,6,0,B|176:240|216:200|256:144|284:192,1,135,0|2

4. 00:27:606 (1) - finish at start
5. 00:33:606 (1) - ^
6. 00:54:606 (1) - ^
7. 00:50:856 (1) - add break time
8. 01:18:606 (1) - reduce some volume from here will better
9. 01:33:606 (1) - finish
10. 01:39:418 (1) - finish at second circle
11. 02:17:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - put this stream again.they're not in same spacing.
12. 02:20:856 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

Hard

1. 00:03:606 (1) - finsih
2. 00:09:606 (1) - ^
3. 01:33:606 (1) - finish at start
4. 01:44:293 (1) - remove finish
5. 01:45:606 (1) - finish at start
6. 02:42:606 (1) - ^

Normal

1. NOTICE:Keep at least one diff under 3.00star or it won't be ranked
2. 00:03:606 (1) - finish
3. 00:09:606 (1) - finish at start
4. 00:27:606 (1) - finish
5. 00:39:606 (1) - finish at start
6. 01:47:856 (1) - reverse sign of this slider will be overlap by combo fire!it's unrankable
7. 01:51:606 (1) - ^
8. 02:00:606 (1) - finish at start
9. 02:06:606 (1) - finish

thx mod

Red = You NEED to change.
Orange = You should change.
Black = If possible, change.
Blue = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.


Normal
背景がかわいい

1. 00:04:356 (2) - whistle
2. 00:05:106 (3) - 始点終点whistle削除、折り返しwhis追加
3. 00:07:356 (2) - 始点whis削除、終点whis追加
4. 00:08:106 (3) - 00:05:106 と同じ
5. 00:09:231 (4) - finish
6. 00:09:606 (1) - 始点finish削除
7. 00:14:856 (4) - 終点whis削除
8. 01:00:606 (1) - 始点finish
9. 01:05:856 (5) - 終点finish
10. 01:10:731 (3) - finish -> whis
11. 01:21:231 (5) - Clap !
12. 01:38:106 (1) - finish
13. 01:41:106 (3) - 1grid下
14. 01:51:606 (1) - 普通に配置した方がいいです
15. 01:55:356 (2) - finish -> whistle
16. 02:18:606 (1) - 始点finish
17. 02:27:231 (5) - Clap !
18. 02:43:356 (2) - whis
19. 02:44:106 (3) - 終点whis
20. 02:45:606 (1) - 折り返しwhis
21. 02:46:731 (2) - whis
22. 02:48:231 (4) - finish
23. 02:48:606 (1) - 終点whis削除
24. 02:50:106 (2) - ^
25. 02:56:856 (5) - 折り返しfinish
26. 03:06:606 (1) - finish

Hard

1. 00:12:606 (1,2) - (2) を (1) にスタックさせた方がいいです
2. 00:13:356 (1,2) - ^ 後、1からNew Combo削除
3. 00:32:293 (1) - 前のサークルと近すぎです
4. 01:04:168 (1) - RNC
5. 01:16:168 (1) - RNC
6. 01:36:606 (6) - NC
7. 01:38:106 (1) - RNC
8. 02:06:418 (1) - 始点にfinish
9. 02:08:106 (5) - NC
10. 02:10:168 (1) - RNC
11. 02:15:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 出来るだけ正三角形に近い形にする
12. 02:20:856 (6) - スライダーの折り返しと終点にfinish追加
13. 02:22:168 (1) - RNC
14. 03:04:168 (1) - RNC

Insane

1. 00:08:106 (1) - RNC.
2. 00:09:606 (1) - もう少し遠くに置いた方がいいかもしれないです
3. 00:13:168 (6,7) - http://puu.sh/9aVh
4. 00:15:043 (*) - Add a note.
5. 00:15:418 (*) - ^
6. 00:27:043 (5) - NC
7. 00:27:606 (1) - RNC
8. 00:30:606 (1) - RNC
9. 00:36:418 (6,1) - New Combo入れ替え
10. 00:38:293 (1) - RNC
11. 00:38:481 (3) - NC
12. 00:39:043 (5) - whistle
13. 00:43:356 (1) - RNC
14. 00:49:356 (1) - RNC
15. 00:57:043 (3) - ここから3連打を始めた方が音に合います
16. 01:00:043 (5,6) - Add finish. 5,6,1で徐々にhitsoundの音量を上げる
17. 01:05:856 (11) - 折り返しと終点にfinishを追加
18. 01:11:293 (2,3,4) - Add finish. 音量を徐々に上げる
19. 01:12:231 (3) - ↑を修正したならここにfinish
20. 01:15:231 (8) - Add finish
21. 01:21:231 (2) - Clap!
22. 01:33:043 (5) - NC
23. 01:33:606 (1) - RNC
24. 01:36:699 (7) - Remove this note
25. 01:39:043 (5,1) - New Combo入れ替え
26. 01:44:856 (1) - RNC
27. 01:49:356 (1) - ^
28. 01:55:356 (1) - ^
29. 01:56:856 (1) - ^
30. 02:02:106 (1) - 次にある (2) とスタック
31. 02:04:918 (5,1) - NC入れ替え
32. 02:26:106 (4) - NC ? 多分入れた方がいいと思う
33. 02:45:231 (7) - ここを3連打にした方が音に合います
34. 02:55:918 (4) - NC. もしくは、スタックさせない方がいいです
35. 03:08:106 (4) - NC
36. 03:09:231 (1) - RNC
37. 03:09:606 (1) - ^
38. 03:09:981 (2) - NC
39. 03:10:918 (1) - RNC
40. 03:22:543 (1) - スライダーの始点にwhistle
41. 03:22:918 (2) - ^

Apricot wrote:

Red = You NEED to change.
Orange = You should change.
Black = If possible, change.
Blue = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.


Normal
背景がかわいい

1. 00:04:356 (2) - whistle
2. 00:05:106 (3) - 始点終点whistle削除、折り返しwhis追加
3. 00:07:356 (2) - 始点whis削除、終点whis追加
4. 00:08:106 (3) - 00:05:106 と同じ
5. 00:09:231 (4) - finish
6. 00:09:606 (1) - 始点finish削除
7. 00:14:856 (4) - 終点whis削除
8. 01:00:606 (1) - 始点finish
9. 01:05:856 (5) - 終点finish
10. 01:10:731 (3) - finish -> whis
11. 01:21:231 (5) - Clap !
12. 01:38:106 (1) - finish
13. 01:41:106 (3) - 1grid下
14. 01:51:606 (1) - 普通に配置した方がいいです
15. 01:55:356 (2) - finish -> whistle
16. 02:18:606 (1) - 始点finish
17. 02:27:231 (5) - Clap !
18. 02:43:356 (2) - whis
19. 02:44:106 (3) - 終点whis
20. 02:45:606 (1) - 折り返しwhis
21. 02:46:731 (2) - whis
22. 02:48:231 (4) - finish
23. 02:48:606 (1) - 終点whis削除
24. 02:50:106 (2) - ^
25. 02:56:856 (5) - 折り返しfinish
26. 03:06:606 (1) - finish

Hard

1. 00:12:606 (1,2) - (2) を (1) にスタックさせた方がいいです
2. 00:13:356 (1,2) - ^ 後、1からNew Combo削除
3. 00:32:293 (1) - 前のサークルと近すぎです
4. 01:04:168 (1) - RNC
5. 01:16:168 (1) - RNC
6. 01:36:606 (6) - NC
7. 01:38:106 (1) - RNC
8. 02:06:418 (1) - 始点にfinish
9. 02:08:106 (5) - NC
10. 02:10:168 (1) - RNC
11. 02:15:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 出来るだけ正三角形に近い形にする
12. 02:20:856 (6) - スライダーの折り返しと終点にfinish追加
13. 02:22:168 (1) - RNC
14. 03:04:168 (1) - RNC

Insane

1. 00:08:106 (1) - RNC.
2. 00:09:606 (1) - もう少し遠くに置いた方がいいかもしれないです
3. 00:13:168 (6,7) - http://puu.sh/9aVh
4. 00:15:043 (*) - Add a note.
5. 00:15:418 (*) - ^
6. 00:27:043 (5) - NC
7. 00:27:606 (1) - RNC
8. 00:30:606 (1) - RNC
9. 00:36:418 (6,1) - New Combo入れ替え
10. 00:38:293 (1) - RNC
11. 00:38:481 (3) - NC
12. 00:39:043 (5) - whistle
13. 00:43:356 (1) - RNC
14. 00:49:356 (1) - RNC
15. 00:57:043 (3) - ここから3連打を始めた方が音に合います
16. 01:00:043 (5,6) - Add finish. 5,6,1で徐々にhitsoundの音量を上げる
17. 01:05:856 (11) - 折り返しと終点にfinishを追加
18. 01:11:293 (2,3,4) - Add finish. 音量を徐々に上げる
19. 01:12:231 (3) - ↑を修正したならここにfinish
20. 01:15:231 (8) - Add finish
21. 01:21:231 (2) - Clap!
22. 01:33:043 (5) - NC
23. 01:33:606 (1) - RNC
24. 01:36:699 (7) - Remove this note
25. 01:39:043 (5,1) - New Combo入れ替え
26. 01:44:856 (1) - RNC
27. 01:49:356 (1) - ^
28. 01:55:356 (1) - ^
29. 01:56:856 (1) - ^
30. 02:02:106 (1) - 次にある (2) とスタック
31. 02:04:918 (5,1) - NC入れ替え
32. 02:26:106 (4) - NC ? 多分入れた方がいいと思う
33. 02:45:231 (7) - ここを3連打にした方が音に合います
34. 02:55:918 (4) - NC. もしくは、スタックさせない方がいいです
35. 03:08:106 (4) - NC
36. 03:09:231 (1) - RNC
37. 03:09:606 (1) - ^
38. 03:09:981 (2) - NC
39. 03:10:918 (1) - RNC
40. 03:22:543 (1) - スライダーの始点にwhistle
41. 03:22:918 (2) - ^

modありがとう
almost fixed!

Mod Request as Modding Queue . Sorry for Delay

Normal:
00:12:043 (5): Whistle in Reverse Arrow
00:26:106 (Spin): This spinner is too short, specially in Normal. You have to make another think.
00:28:356 (3): You have to make more symetric this slider
00:30:231 (4): A New Combo plays well with vocal
00:35:856 (4): ^
00:48:981 (5): For consistency with last part, add a New Combo here
01:38:106 (Spin): The same in 00:26:106
01:44:106 (Spin): ^
02:07:731 (3): Flow better if you move (3) to x:96 y:192

03:09:231 (x): Add a Note with Hitfinish, sounds well

Hard:
00:29:856 (4): New Combo plays well with vocal
00:38:293 (Spin): This spinner is too short. Try to change it.
00:50:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner, since the autoplay can't make 3000 points
00:51:793: This break is really short and unnecesary. Remove it please
01:39:231 (4): New Combo plays well with vocal
01:44:293 (Spin): The same in 00:38:293
01:51:606 (1): If you follow the vocal, I think that it's better if you Remove New Combo here, and add a New Combo in 01:52:168
01:56:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner (The same in 00:50:856)
01:57:793: This break is too short and unnecesary. Remove it Please
02:03:043 (4): Whistle in Reverse Arrow
02:38:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner
02:29:793: This break is really short and unnecesary. Remove it please

Insane:
01:57:793: This break is too short and unnecesary. Remove it Please
02:38:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner
Maybe some antijump doesn't play well, but it's ok.

Nice map in General
That's all. Good Luck with your map

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Mod Request as Modding Queue . Sorry for Delay

Normal:
00:12:043 (5): Whistle in Reverse Arrow ok
00:26:106 (Spin): This spinner is too short, specially in Normal. You have to make another think. hum,sorry no
00:28:356 (3): You have to make more symetric this slider !? oh,i thought it's symetic.ok,try
00:30:231 (4): A New Combo plays well with vocal ok
00:35:856 (4): ^ ^
00:48:981 (5): For consistency with last part, add a New Combo here huuuum.......ok
01:38:106 (Spin): The same in 00:26:106 sorry,no
01:44:106 (Spin): ^ ^
02:07:731 (3): Flow better if you move (3) to x:96 y:192 fixed

SPOILER

03:09:231 (x): Add a Note with Hitfinish, sounds well done

Hard:
00:29:856 (4): New Combo plays well with vocal fixed
00:38:293 (Spin): This spinner is too short. Try to change it. fixed
00:50:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner, since the autoplay can't make 3000 points fixed
00:51:793: This break is really short and unnecesary. Remove it please fixed
01:39:231 (4): New Combo plays well with vocal fixed
01:44:293 (Spin): The same in 00:38:293 fixed
01:51:606 (1): If you follow the vocal, I think that it's better if you Remove New Combo here, and add a New Combo in 01:52:168 hum,no change
01:56:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner (The same in 00:50:856) fixed
01:57:793: This break is too short and unnecesary. Remove it Please fixed
02:03:043 (4): Whistle in Reverse Arrow ok
02:38:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner fixed
02:29:793: This break is really short and unnecesary. Remove it please fixed

Insane:
01:57:793: This break is too short and unnecesary. Remove it Please fixed
02:38:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner fixed
Maybe some antijump doesn't play well,but it's ok.

Nice map in General
That's all. Good Luck with your map

thank you modding

Sorry for a 4-month delay!!

Blue: Suggestions

Overall
No big problems~ Nice mapset

Normal

1. 00:31:356 (3) - Put it like this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227974
2. 02:15:606 (1) - I prefer a slider like this to prevent overlapping with the next note -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227976

Hard

1. 00:13:168 (2) - Put it to the actual center of the playfield, since it is a little bit hard to jump to the next note if stacked with the slider. (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227968)
2. 00:50:856 (1) - Remove New Combo and Make this nearer to the previous note
3. 00:51:231 (2) - New Combo
4. 00:51:606 (4) - Add Finish (Better be Normal hitsound with 50% volume)
5. 01:56:856 (1) - Remove New Combo and Make this nearer to the previous note
6. 01:57:231 (2) - New Combo
7. 01:57:606 (4) - Add Finish (Better be Normal hitsound with 50% volume)
8. 02:01:356 (2) - Better move this further from the previous slider or add a note between (1) and (2)
9. 02:20:856 (6) - Stack the slider head to (2)'s slider head
10. 02:38:856 (1) - Remove New Combo
11. 02:39:231 (6) - New Combo
12. 02:39:606 (8) - Add Finish (Better be Normal hitsound with 50% volume)

Insane

1. 00:43:356 (6) - New combo
2. 00:49:356 (7) - ^
3. 01:50:856 (3) - Remove Whistle
4. 01:56:668 (2) - Remove this and reverse (1) one more time instead?
5. 02:21:793 (4) - Ctrl+R
6. 03:12:418 (1) - Too close to the previous note

Good luck!

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