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This is ready for mods while I'm looking for a good-quality video.
I asked Andrea for GD and he prefered to use his old diff, if there's any problem with that I will just remove it eventually.
I asked Andrea for GD and he prefered to use his old diff, if there's any problem with that I will just remove it eventually.
Hey my first mod post! Sorry about my english, came from M4M
sorry if was not helpful! gl with your map
Insane
no kiai? 3:
00:02:592 (4,5) - start the slider on the blue tick
00:04:410 (3,4) - ^
00:06:228 (3,4) - ^
00:08:046 (4,5) - ^
00:09:978 (5) - start a slider on this blue tick
00:11:682 (4,5) - just like the other ones, start a slider on the blue tick
00:15:319 (3,4) - ^
00:24:410 (3,4) - start the slider on the blue tick, like this:
00:28:501 (2) - maybe add a circle here
00:33:728 (3,4,5) - do this
i think it suits the vocal better
00:35:546 (3,4,5) - ^
00:42:819 (6,7,8) - ^
00:44:637 (4,5,6) - ^
01:20:092 (1,2,3) - end the slider on the red tick and add a circle on the blue tick
00:02:592 (4,5) - start the slider on the blue tick
00:04:410 (3,4) - ^
00:06:228 (3,4) - ^
00:08:046 (4,5) - ^
00:09:978 (5) - start a slider on this blue tick
00:11:682 (4,5) - just like the other ones, start a slider on the blue tick
00:15:319 (3,4) - ^
00:24:410 (3,4) - start the slider on the blue tick, like this:
00:28:501 (2) - maybe add a circle here
00:33:728 (3,4,5) - do this
00:35:546 (3,4,5) - ^
00:42:819 (6,7,8) - ^
00:44:637 (4,5,6) - ^
01:20:092 (1,2,3) - end the slider on the red tick and add a circle on the blue tick
Hard
00:00:773 (2,3) - start the slider on the blue tick 
00:02:592 (2,3) - ^
00:04:523 (2,3) - ^
00:08:160 (2,3) - ^
00:09:978 (2,3) - ^
00:11:796 (2,3) - ^
01:09:978 (4) - start a slider on this blue tick
01:11:796 (4) - ^
01:13:614 (5) - ^
00:02:592 (2,3) - ^
00:04:523 (2,3) - ^
00:08:160 (2,3) - ^
00:09:978 (2,3) - ^
00:11:796 (2,3) - ^
01:09:978 (4) - start a slider on this blue tick
01:11:796 (4) - ^
01:13:614 (5) - ^
Normal
no kiai? rip
00:02:137 (5) - add a circle here
00:03:728 (1,2) - end the slider on the red tick and add a circle
00:35:319 (6) - add a circle here
00:02:137 (5) - add a circle here
00:03:728 (1,2) - end the slider on the red tick and add a circle
00:35:319 (6) - add a circle here
sorry if was not helpful! gl with your map
M4M from your queue
No Kiai in all diffs except hard?
GL with the map
Andrea's Easy
00:20:546 (4) - make this a slider to map the both yeahs
00:33:273 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
01:18:273 (3,4) - sounds like slider should begin on 3
01:20:092 (1,2) - same thing
01:25:546 (1,2) - breaks DS
01:27:137 (3) - it's correct but hard for easy
couldn't find any pattern to your 2/1 breaks where you intentionally missed the beat. Is it random?
00:33:273 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
01:18:273 (3,4) - sounds like slider should begin on 3
01:20:092 (1,2) - same thing
01:25:546 (1,2) - breaks DS
01:27:137 (3) - it's correct but hard for easy
couldn't find any pattern to your 2/1 breaks where you intentionally missed the beat. Is it random?
Normal
00:06:910 (6,1) - wrong spacing
00:09:182 (5) - move 1 pixel left
00:10:546 (6,1) - fix blanket
00:17:364 (5) - 1 pixel down
00:17:364 (5,6,1) - inconsistent spacing
these minor inconsistencies are throughout the map, very few are noticable. Idk how they happened since those are copy paste and ctrl H/J patterns. You can fix them if you want
00:52:364 (2,3) - blanket
00:58:273 (1) - could ctrl+J
00:09:182 (5) - move 1 pixel left
00:10:546 (6,1) - fix blanket
00:17:364 (5) - 1 pixel down
00:17:364 (5,6,1) - inconsistent spacing
these minor inconsistencies are throughout the map, very few are noticable. Idk how they happened since those are copy paste and ctrl H/J patterns. You can fix them if you want
00:52:364 (2,3) - blanket
00:58:273 (1) - could ctrl+J
Insane
00:15:997 (6,7) - big jump for no reason except symmetry. especially after 00:15:088 (2,3) -
00:25:540 (1,2,3,4) - wouldn't make 3/4 same distance as 1/2
00:30:085 (1,2) - huge jumps just for symmetry again
00:36:220 (6,1) - deserves a jump like 00:38:038 (8,1) -
00:43:491 (9,1) -
00:45:309 (7,1) - no jumps again but 00:45:990 (2,3) - ?
01:10:076 (4,5) - symmetry causes jump again
01:12:348 (8,1) - no emhasis
01:17:802 (6,1) - repeating myself
00:25:540 (1,2,3,4) - wouldn't make 3/4 same distance as 1/2
00:30:085 (1,2) - huge jumps just for symmetry again
00:36:220 (6,1) - deserves a jump like 00:38:038 (8,1) -
00:43:491 (9,1) -
00:45:309 (7,1) - no jumps again but 00:45:990 (2,3) - ?
01:10:076 (4,5) - symmetry causes jump again
01:12:348 (8,1) - no emhasis
01:17:802 (6,1) - repeating myself
No Kiai in all diffs except hard?
GL with the map
m4m from your queue
Insane
00:21:910 (1) - would put finish hitsound instead
00:30:092 (1,2) - way too huge
00:32:364 (3,4,5,1) - deserves more emphasis
00:35:092 (2,3,4,5) - spacing too large imo, while 00:34:410 (6,1) - is a bit too little
00:40:319 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wouldnt recommend having triples the same spacing as doubles
00:47:364 (1,2) - needs more emphasis imo
00:49:069 (2) - not necessary imo since you followed vocals on previous pattern..also to keep consistent with 00:50:546 (8,1) -
00:56:001 (7,1) - emphasis
00:57:819 (6,1) - ^
00:59:182 (4,5) - seems large in comparison to 00:59:864 (8,1) -
01:11:569 (4) - remove would be better in following rhythm
01:17:705 (5) - ^
01:25:546 (1) - slider doesnt look symmetrical
good luck!
00:30:092 (1,2) - way too huge
00:32:364 (3,4,5,1) - deserves more emphasis
00:35:092 (2,3,4,5) - spacing too large imo, while 00:34:410 (6,1) - is a bit too little
00:40:319 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wouldnt recommend having triples the same spacing as doubles
00:47:364 (1,2) - needs more emphasis imo
00:49:069 (2) - not necessary imo since you followed vocals on previous pattern..also to keep consistent with 00:50:546 (8,1) -
00:56:001 (7,1) - emphasis
00:57:819 (6,1) - ^
00:59:182 (4,5) - seems large in comparison to 00:59:864 (8,1) -
01:11:569 (4) - remove would be better in following rhythm
01:17:705 (5) - ^
01:25:546 (1) - slider doesnt look symmetrical
good luck!
No changes, Nyu-tan uwuBariton wrote:
Hey my first mod post! Sorry about my english, came from M4MHard00:00:773 (2,3) - start the slider on the blue tick
00:02:592 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:04:523 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:08:160 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:09:978 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:11:796 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:09:978 (4) - start a slider on this blue tick
01:11:796 (4) - ^ ^
01:13:614 (5) - ^ I'll keep, it fits the rest of the map better as it is right now
sorry if was not helpful! gl with your map just saying, they're not bad suggestions at all but they don't fit the kind of map I have here. They would have been more valid if I were to have focused on a more vocal-oriented rhythm. Nevertheless, thanks for the effort c:
Topic Starter
Fixed some stuff in Insane and Normal, just moved spacing issues in Easy since it is more up to Andrea to change stuff from his old diff :c
Updated all~
Updated all~
[Nemesis]
M4M.
General
there are kiai inconsistencies between the diffs!
I'd ask Andrea for a permission before uploading the diff lol
Normal
00:10:537 (6,1) - blanket is a little off
00:25:083 (6,1) - same thing applies
01:01:901 (1,2) - make them separate, it looks a bit weird comparing to the rest of the diff
not much to say, I think it's just a huge copypaste (which I actually like because we didn't get too many maps like these for a long time)
Hard
00:57:810 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - this is really, REALLY hard to read with this AR, I'd personally change this spot, it's uncomfortable and hard to play.
01:23:719 - I don't get the point of leaving it blank, the song is still going, put some slow sliders in maybe?
01:25:537 - I also don't get the point of this spinner as a whole, it doesn't fit the music there at all
Can't say much since I hate modding AND mapping AND playing hards.
Insane
we back to copypaste again baby
00:17:696 (5,6) - make it a nice straight line please
00:40:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - and 00:42:355 (4,5,6,7,8) - are inconsistent, even though the rhythm is very similar
01:13:492 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - weird triples strike again, make them straight pls, it just plays a lot better, trust me
I really like the old mapping style you used there, ironically it was a pleasant breath of fresh air instead of a typical copypaste map experience (maybe cause this style rarely ever occurs anymore)
gl!
General
there are kiai inconsistencies between the diffs!
I'd ask Andrea for a permission before uploading the diff lol
Normal
00:10:537 (6,1) - blanket is a little off
00:25:083 (6,1) - same thing applies
01:01:901 (1,2) - make them separate, it looks a bit weird comparing to the rest of the diff
not much to say, I think it's just a huge copypaste (which I actually like because we didn't get too many maps like these for a long time)
Hard
00:57:810 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - this is really, REALLY hard to read with this AR, I'd personally change this spot, it's uncomfortable and hard to play.
01:23:719 - I don't get the point of leaving it blank, the song is still going, put some slow sliders in maybe?
01:25:537 - I also don't get the point of this spinner as a whole, it doesn't fit the music there at all
Can't say much since I hate modding AND mapping AND playing hards.
Insane
we back to copypaste again baby
00:17:696 (5,6) - make it a nice straight line please
00:40:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - and 00:42:355 (4,5,6,7,8) - are inconsistent, even though the rhythm is very similar
01:13:492 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - weird triples strike again, make them straight pls, it just plays a lot better, trust me
I really like the old mapping style you used there, ironically it was a pleasant breath of fresh air instead of a typical copypaste map experience (maybe cause this style rarely ever occurs anymore)
gl!
hai (m4m)
general
check distance snap for fix the ds problem
00:09:173 - why you leave it blank? its really weird when the music intensity quite high here but you didnt add circle
00:29:173 (3) - reverse this slider to emphatize the long vocal
00:30:992 (1) - im prefer 3/2 reverse slider here than the current slider for make the rhythm simply and comfortable for newbie
00:42:810 - same as first point
01:18:264 (3,4) - ctrl g for better rhythm (emphatize the piano more correctly)
01:23:719 - hmm the rhythm on this part its really dense imo.so just start 3/2 reverse at 01:23:719 - and then another one at 01:25:537 - for simply
normal
00:10:537 (6) - try to use another shape to fix the pattern (the pattern a bit mess imo).you can try slider shape that you did at 00:02:355 (5)
00:52:355 (2,3) - blanket
01:16:446 - considering to decrease the density of rhythm on this section for make a balance with the song
hard
00:58:264 (1,2,3,4) - this a confusing pattern (idk how to explain it but it just confusing for me).maybe move the slider (2) on slider (5) head (stack it)t and then move slider (3) to 344,264 for better pattern
01:23:719 - considering to map this part for consistency ending between all diff and also the piano and the vocal i think should be emphatized ~
nice
insane
00:30:083 (1,2) - too far imo
hmm nice tho
ok gl ~
sorry for short mod ;w;
general
- the volume in all diff is too loud imo (and then the volume music's itself is lower than the hitsound).considering to decrease the volume *maybe around 50-70 for better
- incosistent kiai between the diffs
check distance snap for fix the ds problem
00:09:173 - why you leave it blank? its really weird when the music intensity quite high here but you didnt add circle
00:29:173 (3) - reverse this slider to emphatize the long vocal
00:30:992 (1) - im prefer 3/2 reverse slider here than the current slider for make the rhythm simply and comfortable for newbie
00:42:810 - same as first point
01:18:264 (3,4) - ctrl g for better rhythm (emphatize the piano more correctly)
01:23:719 - hmm the rhythm on this part its really dense imo.so just start 3/2 reverse at 01:23:719 - and then another one at 01:25:537 - for simply
normal
00:10:537 (6) - try to use another shape to fix the pattern (the pattern a bit mess imo).you can try slider shape that you did at 00:02:355 (5)
00:52:355 (2,3) - blanket
01:16:446 - considering to decrease the density of rhythm on this section for make a balance with the song
hard
00:58:264 (1,2,3,4) - this a confusing pattern (idk how to explain it but it just confusing for me).maybe move the slider (2) on slider (5) head (stack it)t and then move slider (3) to 344,264 for better pattern
01:23:719 - considering to map this part for consistency ending between all diff and also the piano and the vocal i think should be emphatized ~
nice
insane
00:30:083 (1,2) - too far imo
hmm nice tho
ok gl ~
sorry for short mod ;w;
m4m
i can't find any error in other diffs
GL
Insane
- 00:11:787 (5,6) - Ctrl G for rhythm. you can express vocal by this.
- 00:21:787 (8) - Dislike 00:21:105 (5) - here, here is no sound to put circle. I swear that this is overmapping. how about delete it?
- 00:32:696 (5) - ^
- 00:40:423 (3) - ^, I think 00:40:083 (1,2,3,4,5) - these part has same sound as 00:32:810 (1,2) - here.
- 00:41:787 (2) - ^
- 00:26:787 (2) - Overmapping? In my ear, the drum is in 00:26:673 - here and vocal is in 00:26:844 - here.
- 00:44:742 (5,6) - Hmm, I think there is no strong sound to put clickable sound in 00:44:855 - here. this parts sound like 00:22:583 (3,4) - here. because both sound has same beat and no sound in white tick. how about change these notes like 00:22:583 (3,4) - here?
- 00:59:514 (6) - move it to 00:59:287 - here? of course its not overmapping. but this point has more stronger sound than current point
- 00:29:173 (5,1) - NC swap? you put nc every 4 bits before it. idk why you break this nc cycle
i can't find any error in other diffs
GL
hiya~
for M4M
[Andrea's Easy]
[Normal]
[Maruyu's Kawaii Hard]
[Insane]
In my opinion, I feel like this map could use a lot of work regarding flow and aesthetics, especially considering the mapping meta today. It kinda feels like and old map with it's symmetry and general patterns, so that is just something to consider
Last thing is that Maruyu's Kawaii Hard has a kiai section, but none of the other difficulties do. You should either add kiai to all of them or remove kiai from the hard
Thats all from me, Good Luck
for M4M
[Andrea's Easy]
- Check AIMod for DS issues
- 00:07:810 (2,1) - Why is there nothing in between here? This is a downbeat, and there was a circle on every other part like this
- 01:27:128 (3) - This note might be a little weird to hit for new people, maybe just have the spinned start there
[Normal]
- 00:00:992 (3) - Try not to have sliders overlap like this
- 00:02:810 (6) - Fix this blanket
- 00:10:992 (1) - ^
- 00:15:992 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This rhythm is a little complex for normal, not really because of the rhythm itself but more because of how long you conjoin 1/2s, so try removing a circle in between or something to give a little breather
- 01:00:083 (5) - this slider really doesn't look good, so you should probably change it to a simpler shape
[Maruyu's Kawaii Hard]
- 00:31:673 (1,1) - It would look better if these didnt overlap
- 00:57:810 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - These overlaps could be really confusing, even to a hard player, so I think you should consider changing the pattern
- 01:23:719 (1,1) - This space in between seems really weird, and you should probably put notes in between
- Another thing is that in hards, you can turn off distance snap and have a little more freedom. This isn't necessarily and problem, but the diff just kind of seems mediocre without it.
[Insane]
- 00:03:719 (1,2,3,4,5) - The flow here seems kinda weird, consider changing this pattern
- 00:25:537 (1) - This slider doesn't look to good, maybe have a simpler slider shape here
- 00:37:696 (6,7,8,1) - 2 things about this: It isnt really blanketed correctly, and also this pattern that goes back on itself doesnt really play well. I think a slider on the other side (like 00:39:173 (5) ) would make more sense.
- There seems to be no emphasis on the main part of the song, that seems to be filled with the same patterns used in the rest of the song. I think you should really consider either upping the slider velocity in the main part or making the jumps bigger or something.
- 00:42:810 (6,7,8) - Patterns like this are throughout the map, that kind of ignore lyrics and feel kind of weird considering there are also patterns like 00:33:719 (3,4,5) that do follow the lyrics. I think you should try to pick one or the other in this case.
In my opinion, I feel like this map could use a lot of work regarding flow and aesthetics, especially considering the mapping meta today. It kinda feels like and old map with it's symmetry and general patterns, so that is just something to consider
Last thing is that Maruyu's Kawaii Hard has a kiai section, but none of the other difficulties do. You should either add kiai to all of them or remove kiai from the hard
Thats all from me, Good Luck
Topic Starter
Hey guys, I'm sorry I didn't answer yet, exams' week almost finished x_x
Anyways I will try to care soon about your mods and maps, I will let you know when I update this.
Meanwhile I will poke Maruyu and Andrea as well :3/
Anyways I will try to care soon about your mods and maps, I will let you know when I update this.
Meanwhile I will poke Maruyu and Andrea as well :3/